so i'm making a new song and this chorus is tripping me out. Any advice. how is it?
And I know, that you're beautiful
And I know, that the sun always shine on you
And I know, that you'll always be my girl
But one thing you'll always know...
Is how much I love yooouuuu, yeeaaahhh
How much I love yoooouuuu, oooohhhhh
how much I LOVE YOOOOUUUUUU, girl
theres one thing you'll always know
is how much I love yoooouuuu
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10-02-2012, 02:47 PM #1Only Awesome Describes Me
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Re: Need help with chorus
Sounds finished whats the problem?
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Re: Need help with chorus
like is it too repetitive or how is it?
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10-02-2012, 02:53 PM #4
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Re: Need help with chorus
sounds pretty good to me :DD
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Re: Need help with chorus
What kind of song is it, insturmental etc...
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Re: Need help with chorus
folk or r&b Originally Posted by -Severus Snape-
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Re: Need help with chorus
sorry, I'm not really familiar with those music styles
But for some reason, the lyrics sound more pop then folk to me...
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Re: Need help with chorus
What do you not like about it?
It looks good to me but if you feel its needs something else, then we can begin spitballing
