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    Need help with chorus

    so i'm making a new song and this chorus is tripping me out. Any advice. how is it?

    And I know, that you're beautiful
    And I know, that the sun always shine on you
    And I know, that you'll always be my girl
    But one thing you'll always know...

    Is how much I love yooouuuu, yeeaaahhh
    How much I love yoooouuuu, oooohhhhh
    how much I LOVE YOOOOUUUUUU, girl
    theres one thing you'll always know
    is how much I love yoooouuuu
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    Sounds finished whats the problem?
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    Quote Originally Posted by Senju clan24 View Post
    Sounds finished whats the problem?
    like is it too repetitive or how is it?
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    sounds pretty good to me :DD
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    What kind of song is it, insturmental etc...
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    Quote Originally Posted by -Severus Snape- View Post
    What kind of song is it, insturmental etc...
    folk or r&b
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    sorry, I'm not really familiar with those music styles

    But for some reason, the lyrics sound more pop then folk to me...
     
         

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    Re: Need help with chorus

    What do you not like about it?

    It looks good to me but if you feel its needs something else, then we can begin spitballing
     
         

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