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    NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]


    ( ) = Narration
    { } = Thinking

    MANGA 605 & 606: WHAT HAPPENED THAT DAY.....

    (Kakashi pierces chidori into Rin)
    Rin : ....Kakashi...
    (Kakashi looks at Rin with his left eye)
    (Obito looks at the scene with his right eye)
    Obito : {Rin!!!}.....
    Rin : (coughs blood)...Ka...kashi....?
    Obito : Hmmm...?
    Rin : What was....I (coughs blood) (blood spills on Kakashi's face)...What was I to you?
    Obito : ?!!!
    (Kakashi takes his hand out of Rin's chest)
    Kakashi : What was I to you?.....(The blood flows down due to water) You were my friend!! But you are not my friend!!
    (Rin falls on the ground)
    (Kakashi looks around watching the dead mist ninjas including Rin's body, picks up a scroll from a mist ninja and leaves the battlefield)
    Rin : Kakas...shi!! (closes her eyes)
    (Obito remains stunned at Kakashi's behaviour)
    Obito : ?!!! Not a friend?!!! Wha.... what is he talking about? Why did he killed Rin? Why?!!
    (Rin makes a slight movement)
    Obito : Hmmm?!!!
    (Obito gets down near to Rin and holds her in his arms)
    Obito : Rin?!!! Rin?!!! Rin?!!! Get up!!! Talk to me Rin!!! Rin!!!! (tears rolls down from his eyes)
    (Rin opens her eyes slowly and watches Obito's blur image)
    Rin : ?!!! Obi....to?!!


    Obito : Yes, Rin talk to me!!!
    Rin : Obito.....Is this afterlife?
    Obito : No....(tears falls on Rin's face) I'm alive Rin!! I'm alive!! I won't let you die!!!
    Rin : Obito..... I'm glad... you're ali......(dies)
    Obito : ?!!! Rin!! Rin!! (screams) Rin!!!!!
    (Obito remains at his place holding Rin till sun hides behind the mountains)
    ???? : They must be here!!! search them!!!
    Spiral Zetsu(SZ) : ?!!! Obito!!! Obito!!! we must leave now! We are surrounded by mist ninjas!!
    Obito : ........
    SZ : Obito!!! Get up!! Hurry!!! We will bring her back alive!!
    Obito : Alive?!!!
    SZ : We will bring her back from the afterlife with Madara's Moon's Eye Plan!
    Obito : .....(holds Rin's corpse on his left shoulder) Lets go!!!
    ???? : Look he is there!!! Attack him!!!
    (Obito runs through the forest)


    Obito : {Rin... I'll bring you back. You just wait and watch} (Remembers Kakashi thrusting chidori in Rin's chest) {Kakashi, you killed Rin!! I'll never forgive you!! You'll pay for this!!} (Remembers Minato) {Minato Sensei, you were never there for us when we were in danger. During my time and not even during Rin's} Ze...
    (While jumping from a tree suddenly an explosive kunai hits the tree and explodes)
    Obito : Arghh!!!
    (Obito's left hand gets a hit and Rin falls on the ground)
    Obito : (after getting hit Obito holds his left shoulder with right hand) Rin!!!!! (moves forward towards Rin) ?!!!
    (SZ stops Obito)
    SZ : We can't save her. Our left arm is destroyed and now I'm also weak.
    Obito : But....
    SZ : We can't let ourselves get caught!!
    (SZ controls over Obito's body and vanishes in deep forest)
    (Obito's tears falls back while moving ahead)
    Obito : (takes hard breathe)........
    SZ : We arrived here again!!!
    (lands at the graveyard from where Obito rushed to save Rin and Kakashi)
    (jumps down and enters the hideout)


    Madara : You are back!!!
    (looks at Obito's left arm)
    Madara : You injured your real body. What happened to your friends?
    Obito : .......
    Madara : They died?
    (SZ's body uncovers Obito's face)
    SZ : He failed to save her.
    Madara : .......
    Obito : ......She was killed by the one whom she loved most.
    Madara : Now you yourself witnessed the truth of this hell. What will you do now? You can still accept my proposal.
    Obito : I accept your proposal but not for you. I will make this ninja world pay for their sins..... including Konoha.
    Madara : As your wish.
    (SZ separates out from Obito's body and Obito falls on the ground)
    Madara : Zetsu put him on the bed and do the preparations.
    (SZ & WZ connects one of the tube from the Gedo Mazo to Obito's right side of the body)
    Madara : Now you take your time to heal yourself. Our destiny is far away.


    (During the period of several years, Obito trains harder with Zetsu using Madara's tools)
    (Now, Obito is shown with his Mangekyo Sharingan and about 16-17 years of age)
    Madara : Where are you going Obito?
    (Obito prepares for the Battle)
    Obito : The first step of my plan, as you said, Destruction of Leaf!!! With the help of Nine-Tails!!!
    Madara : ?!!! Will you able to handle the Nine-Tails? The Nine-Tails is in possession of the Fourth Hokage's wife.
    Obito : {Minato Sensei!!!}..... No one can stop me!! Not even the Fourth Hokage!!
    (Obito goes to Konoha and the whole incident happens the way we saw in the Manga during Minato vs Tobi)
    (After getting hit with the Rasengan and the contract with the Nine-Tails broke)
    Obito : You deserve the title of Fourth Hokage... Managing to wound me and wrest the fox from my control in one move. But some day it will be mine again. The fox and this whole world, will bow at my will. Many doors are still left open to me.
    Minato : .......
    (Obito teleports)
    (During Nine-Tails sealing into baby Naruto Obito teleports to the nearby tree)
    Obito : {Even the Fourth Hokage couldn't completely stopped the Nine-Tails. The Nine-Tails got a new jinchuuriki. I must get the Nine-Tails.}
    Third Hokage : (Before Minato's death and after sealing the Nine-Tails into Naruto) .....I promise you Minato, Kushina. I'll protect Naruto.
    Obito : ?!!!! I must go now. I am not in a condition to fight the Third Hokage now.
    (Teleports to hideout)
    Madara : What happened? You succeed?
    Obito : Not yet... but one of the strong obstacle is being removed from the path..... The Fourth Hokage!!
    Madara : You can now go and rest.
    Obito : The Fourth recognised me as Uchiha Madara.
    Madara : Uchiha Madara!! That's quite a name to hide your identity and maintain the fear in my name until my revival.


    -----Back to Present------
    Kakashi : Obito!!! I want to ask you one question before our fight.
    Obito : ?!!!
    Gai : .....
    Kakashi : How did you knew about Rin's death?
    Obito : (smirks) Hmm!!! How did I knew?
    Kakashi : .....
    Gai : .....
    Obito : Because I saw you when you pierced your chidori into Rin's chest.
    Kakashi : ?!!! (Remembers the day of Rin's Funeral) What do you mean?
    Gai : ?!!! But Rin ....
    Obito : Yes, Rin was killed by this man to whom I entrusted her safety.
    Kakashi : That can't be possible.
    Obito : You don't even remember that day when you killed your comrade. The day when you fought with the Mist Ninjas.
    Kakashi : That day!!! (Remembers thrusting his chidori into Rin's chest) She was not Rin....
    Obito : ?!!!
    Kakashi : Because she died a week ago before that mission, due to her incurable illness.
    Obito : What?!!!! Its a lie!!!
    Kakashi : .....That is why I couldn't protect Rin. That is why I couldn't keep your promise. I always regret myself for not saving my precious comrades Obito and Rin.
    Obito : Then what happened that day?!!!
    ( What did Madara planned that day.....?)
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    This is great! The best prediction I have seen to date. +rep
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Epic.+rep
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    i will be honest that was an awesome prediction i have read a few before and thought the writing was awful but i must say that was really good!
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    [quote=repulse]This is great! The best prediction I have seen to date. +rep [quote]

    [quote=Nolexion] Epic.+rep [quote]

    thanx
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyuubibomb
    i will be honest that was an awesome prediction i have read a few before and thought the writing was awful but i must say that was really good!
    thanx
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Sory this is not good..........
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    A little long, but I can see it going in a simplistic manner like this ^.^ good work! But I would imagine Rin was killed in a mission when she wasn't working with Kakashi and that's why he couldn't protect her
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Great!!!Keep it up!!! +rep
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Nice :D
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    this is better than amans
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Edo Izuna View Post
    this is better than amans
    You dont say.. lol

    Not bad, but I doubt it will run as smoothly as this. But I have a feeling that Obito was manipulated and fooled, and he will realise that he has been fooled and...
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    DOPE off the SPOON!! ring dying from a illness, very very logical.. you should give some tutoring classes to aman.. lmfao
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Beautiful Prediction as always + reps , it was awesome :D
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    I the motive you explain of Obito's hatred against konoha is too much. Maybe for Kakashi yes, but killing of rin doesnt necessarily makes obito angry with Konoha.

    3/5 for me
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    I liked it alot very good you have good predictions
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Aman Shahur
    Sory this is not good..........
    then try to make your prediction good kid
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by macbeboy
    I the motive you explain of Obito's hatred against konoha is too much. Maybe for Kakashi yes, but killing of rin doesnt necessarily makes obito angry with Konoha.

    3/5 for me
    Obito's feelings gets hurt because of Kakashi(killed Rin), Minato(Not present for any help) and the Uchiha elites(thinks Obito a coward). That's why Obito is angry against Konoha. Afterall he is also a kid like Sasuke, taken away by mere words.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Usman
    Beautiful Prediction as always + reps , it was awesome
    thanx
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by siege View Post
    I liked it alot very good you have good predictions
    thanx
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by siege View Post
    I liked it alot very good you have good predictions
    thanx
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by EmergNOnEm View Post
    DOPE off the SPOON!! ring dying from a illness, very very logical.. you should give some tutoring classes to aman.. lmfao
    giving tutoring classes to that dumb would make me go mad. I don't want to lose how much English I know.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Edo Izuna View Post
    this is better than amans
    dude don't ever compare predictions of either mine or anyone else (excluding amans) with amans predictions. You must know that his predictions are incomparable with others.
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Quote Originally Posted by Ninja Way View Post
    Nice :D
    thanx
     
         

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    Re: NARUTO MANGA 605-606 PREDICTIONS [by ahhimane]

    Seems Legit, +rep.
     
         

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