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      Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      Kakashi: ....shit!

      Rin: Kakashi....

      Rin's body collapses lifelessly onto the damp soil. The tears streaming down from Kakashi's face...

      Obito: Kakashi! You bastard!

      Spiral Zetsu: Wait. That isn't Kakashi. This is some kind of Suiton Technique that mirrors Kakashi.

      Obito: Rin! I'm coming Rin!...

      Kakashi: Another one?

      Kakashi begins to melt into a puddle of water..

      Obito: !!!

      Spiral Guy: Behind you!

      Obito's armor suddenly protrudes a barrage of spikes to impale the attacking Mist Shinobi from behind.

      Mist: Guh! *coughs up blood* This guy... isn't human at all.

      The Mist Ninja drops lifelessly onto the damp soil.

      The spikes retreats into the armor and Obito goes over towards Rin.

      Obito: Rin! What happened?!!!

      Rin: your voicee....is that you obit..?

      Obito: yes! Where is Kakashi?!!!

      Rin: We were seperated by the Hidden Mist technique. There are about 20 jounin along with the Mizukage. We were sent on an B-ranked mission to retrieve a stolen scroll with secrets. However, we were sent in a team of 3. Me, Kakashi and a Hyuuga guy...

      Obito: A stupid scroll? Why?

      Rin: It contains secret juts *cough* *cough*.. the third wanted it back...

      Obito: Where is Minato sensei?

      Rin: Minato went to push back the Cloud..

      Obito: Rin. I always wanted to tell you.. that. I

      Rin smiling

      Rin: what?..

      Obito: I love you.

      Rin: I loved...you.too.Obito.. Rescue Kakashi....

      -Scene switches to Kakashi-

      Kakashi *summoning jutsu* Pakkun!
      Kakashi: We need to find Rin.

      Pakkun: Someone is approaching..

      Hozuki Jounin: The Sharingan is ours....

      Kakashi thinking. Obito promised me to save Rin. I'm not turning back..

      - Scene switches to Obito -

      Obito: Who the hell ARE YOU!

      Mizukage: I am the kage of the hidden mist village. I am going to put an end to this war. That girl there fell victim to my jutsu.

      Obito becomes enraged....

      Spiral: Your body isn't ready yet.

      Obito: I will kill you!

      *Obito awakens the third tomoe*

      -Scene switches-

      *Kakashi awakens the third tomoe*

      Kakashi: I can't break this promise!!

      - Next time: Obito vs Mizukage!


      *note* I haven't done this in like 2 years. I'm a bit rusty.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      only three postS? cool...
       
           

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      I like this! *****
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      not bad
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      Seems Logical !!
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      not bad buddy
       
           

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      Nice best theory I've ever read.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      very good effort :D

      i give it 4/5
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      Its a no no!!!. during the era of Kakashi, Rin and Minato, Minato is already the 4th Hokage. How could you say that they are commanded by the third to retrieve the stolen scroll??? but 3/5 for me
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      Love this!!
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      wanna be my buddy?

      but firist liswten to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      it could happen
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      Your prediction is a disgrace to this forum.

      How can you say that the mission commanded to kakashi-rin is B-ranked Mission???

      B Ranked Mission, but they are chased by Mist ninja with their "MIZUKAGE" I thinks thats an S Mission or A Mission.

      you $!@$#^&*!
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 605 - Broken Promise

      Quote Originally Posted by macbebcoy View Post
      Your prediction is a disgrace to this forum.

      How can you say that the mission commanded to kakashi-rin is B-ranked Mission???

      B Ranked Mission, but they are chased by Mist ninja with their "MIZUKAGE" I thinks thats an S Mission or A Mission.

      you $!@$#^&*!
      Go back and read the Zabuza ARC you will see that B Rank mission actually turned into an A ranked mission in the middle of it.. Ninja Missions are unpredictable. Nice try troll.
       
           

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