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    Death Note: The New world

    Chapter 2

    Misa enters her sons room with the large brown envelope.
    "Son I have something important to tell you."
    Her son looks up from his desk and turns around with a smirk,
    "Are you going to finally tell me why I don't have a name, or a birth certificate, or any form of identification?"
    He says with a smart allicky tone.
    "Well, not directly, but this will answer your questions I'm sure."
    Says Misa.
    She walks over to his bed and has a seat and puts the envelope on the bed next to her. She begins to explain.
    "Well for starters, I'm not crazy, I am not talking to myself, your father is truly with me."
    "Here we go again..mom.."
    Starts the boy.
    Misa interrupts
    "No listen...do not speak.."
    She says with a stern voice.
    "Your father is truly with me, he is in this room now matter of fact, and he wants me to give you a message."
    The boy leans back in his chair folds his arms and rolls his eyes.
    "I'm listening.."
    He says.
    "Good, well he has a message for you, he would like me to give you this envelope but you are ordered not to open it until he says so."
    She hands the boy the envelope, then stands up and starts out of the room. Once she exits the boy sits up straight and looks at the item he was just given. He shrugs his shoulders and tosses it to the other side of his room, it lands near his closet.
    "Are you sure this is a good time?"
    Says Misa
    A familiar voice then responds.
    "This is the perfect time..just watch."

    A few days pass, and the boy has been thinking about this envelope ever day since he recieved it.
    "I bet this is another one of moms, crazy wack job ideas."
    The boy says to himself.
    "Either way, maybe I should open it anyway, what's the worse that could happen?"
    He walks home from school, alone, he isn't very popular.
    He makes it home, once he opens the front door to his luxurious 9 bedroom 3 story home to find his mother, Misa sitting on the couch as if she was waiting for him. She has the envelope on her lap.
    "Its time to open your gift."
    She says.
    "Okay I guess"
    He sits on the couch opposite of his mother. She hands him his "gift" and directs him to open it.
    He breaks the seal..
    End of chapter 2.
     
         

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    Re: Death Note: The New world

    death note is so assom
     
         

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    Re: Death Note: The New world

    Is this Death Note fanfiction? Lame. Sequels would be bad because the Death Note ending was pretty conclusive.

    Good work though.

    P.S. It was hinted that Misa commit suicide in the end when Light died. So yeah, lol.
     
         

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    Re: Death Note: The New world

    Thank you for sharing your opinion hopefully as it continues it won't be so 'lame' and maybe you enjoy it but its just my own version so try not to be so critical on how the original ended. Yet again I thank you for reading :-)
     
         

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    Re: Death Note: The New world

    Quote Originally Posted by Forget Me Not View Post
    Is this Death Note fanfiction? Lame. Sequels would be bad because the Death Note ending was pretty conclusive.

    Good work though.

    P.S. It was hinted that Misa commit suicide in the end when Light died. So yeah, lol.
    She commited suicide 2 or 3 years after his death by flunging herself off a bridge. Stupid *****.
    But yeah Death Note was awesome.
     
         

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    Re: Death Note: The New world

    I know but, just giving it my own little twist, everything will play out.
     
         

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