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    [Rain test]- Rairen

    Hola :3~
    I'll be conducting your rain test rairen.

    • Rei's R&R
    • You may only use Water, Wind, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Genjutsu.
    • I will be using all 5 elements
    • Terrain; We'll say a barren wasteland with no water source - There are a lot of clouds rolling through, and it's pretty humid.
    • We'll begin in mid range.
    • Breaking any of the above rules will result in failure of the test.

    Spam will not be tolerated.

    I'll be using an orochimaru Biography for this test against you.

    Post bio and i will begin.
     
         
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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Hola Señor! Thanks for doing this. ^^

    For the record you missed 2 dots on my name ~_~
    Allowed by The Pervy Sage to use my bio's water speciality of perform Water techniques with 1 handseal if its required.

    Izaya Orihara
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    I start off by running towards you at full speeds. As i run towards you i preform the Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand-seals biting my tumb and wiping it across the summoning tattoo on my left arm , preforming the summoning technique summoning a giant snake. Were engulfed in smoke and the snake's tail quickly emerges from the clouds and wrap's around your body and restricts your movements. Me, being on the top of the snake head watches everything your doing once the smoke clears.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
    Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.
    Kyodaija
    Are giant snakes, often summoned by Orochimaru during battle. There are many different kinds of Kyodaija. For instance, the Kyodaija that was summoned during the invasion of Konoha had marks on its skin similar to the Cursed Seal of Heaven, while the ones summoned by Orochimaru in the Forest of Death had no such marks. Anko Mitarashi also summoned a blue-colored snake of similar size.


    I then immediately without hesitation proceed to summon several replicas of the Sword of Kusanagi which attacks you from every direction.

    (Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Happōha) - Grass Cutting Sword: Blades from Eight Directions
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Orochimaru summons several replicas of his Sword of Kusanagi which attacks the enemy from every direction.


    Everything i just did is :26
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaara View Post
    I start off by running towards you at full speeds. As i run towards you i preform the Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand-seals biting my tumb and wiping it across the summoning tattoo on my left arm , preforming the summoning technique summoning a giant snake. Were engulfed in smoke and the snake's tail quickly emerges from the clouds and wrap's around your body and restricts your movements. Me, being on the top of the snake head watches everything your doing once the smoke clears.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
    Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.



    I then immediately without hesitation proceed to summon several replicas of the Sword of Kusanagi which attacks you from every direction.

    (Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Happōha) - Grass Cutting Sword: Blades from Eight Directions
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: Orochimaru summons several replicas of his Sword of Kusanagi which attacks the enemy from every direction.


    Everything i just did is :26
    *As i see you running towards me i take an offensive possition and when you suddenly create white smoke not wanting to be blocked from my vision i perform 3 handseals and release a tornado infront of me and jump backwards, the tornado drags inwards the snake that came out of the smoke along with you, and makes it disperse aswell as blowing away the smoke clrearing my vision, as your struggling with the tornado i then perform 1 handseal and release a water vortex wich blows you backwards with inmense strength as the tornado aggresively lets go of you.*

    (Futon: Kibishii Shippuu Kabe) - Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.

    (Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
    Note: No water source required
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Quote Originally Posted by Rairen.. View Post
    *As i see you running towards me i take an offensive possition and when you suddenly create white smoke not wanting to be blocked from my vision i perform 3 handseals and release a tornado infront of me and jump backwards, the tornado drags inwards the snake that came out of the smoke along with you, and makes it disperse aswell as blowing away the smoke clrearing my vision, as your struggling with the tornado i then perform 1 handseal and release a water vortex wich blows you backwards with inmense strength as the tornado aggresively lets go of you.*

    (Futon: Kibishii Shippuu Kabe) - Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.

    (Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
    Note: No water source required
    Ahh yes, this is why i hate fighting you, you keep interrupting me which is annoying as hell -_-
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    As the wind is manifested and blows the clouds around me, i open my mouth while bringing my head dowb, releasing the blade of kusangi from my mouth that extends up to 10 meters and cuts the vortex in half and causes it to reform and be sent back at you, it would easily cancel out the spiraling water column and cause it to rain down all over the battlefield.

    (Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return
    Rank: B
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40 (+5 if attack is send back)
    Description: This technique is used to counter a Wind attack launched against the user. Originally used by Kujaku in conjunction with her sword, the user will need to perform a series of handseals to amplify chakra and then he will split the incoming Wind attack and take control of the whirling vortex thrown at him, in order to re direct it towards the opponent.
    Note: It can block only up to B rank wind jutsu.


    Soonly afterwards, i retract the blade back into my throat and close my mouth. I then afterwards open my mouth and i extend my tongue from my mouth and have it wrap around your throat and begin suffocating you. As i do i suck your chakra out of your body. Note: Im still on top of the snake as it wasn't dispersed

    (Nan Kaizou) - Soften Modification
    Rank: C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Nan Kaizou is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to make their body very malleable. It was originally developed for spying activities. This technique can be done after surgery and actual body modification. When used, the ninja can stretch and twist their body at any angle, allowing them to surprise their opponent.


    (Chakura Kyūin no Jutsu) - Chakra Absorption Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: (-15 per turn remaining in contact with target)
    Description: The user can absorb the opponents chakra by direct contact with them and replenishing their own. while simultaneously exhausting the opponent's physical energy and limiting the techniques that they can perform. (No S rank in the same turn)
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaara View Post
    Ahh yes, this is why i hate fighting you, you keep interrupting me which is annoying as hell -_-
    __________________________________________________ ___________________________
    As the wind is manifested and blows the clouds around me, i open my mouth while bringing my head dowb, releasing the blade of kusangi from my mouth that extends up to 10 meters and cuts the vortex in half and causes it to reform and be sent back at you, it would easily cancel out the spiraling water column and cause it to rain down all over the battlefield.

    (Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return
    Rank: B
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40 (+5 if attack is send back)
    Description: This technique is used to counter a Wind attack launched against the user. Originally used by Kujaku in conjunction with her sword, the user will need to perform a series of handseals to amplify chakra and then he will split the incoming Wind attack and take control of the whirling vortex thrown at him, in order to re direct it towards the opponent.
    Note: It can block only up to B rank wind jutsu.


    Soonly afterwards, i retract the blade back into my throat and close my mouth. I then afterwards open my mouth and i extend my tongue from my mouth and have it wrap around your throat and begin suffocating you. As i do i suck your chakra out of your body. Note: Im still on top of the snake as it wasn't dispersed

    (Nan Kaizou) - Soften Modification
    Rank: C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Nan Kaizou is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to make their body very malleable. It was originally developed for spying activities. This technique can be done after surgery and actual body modification. When used, the ninja can stretch and twist their body at any angle, allowing them to surprise their opponent.


    (Chakura Kyūin no Jutsu) - Chakra Absorption Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: (-15 per turn remaining in contact with target)
    Description: The user can absorb the opponents chakra by direct contact with them and replenishing their own. while simultaneously exhausting the opponent's physical energy and limiting the techniques that they can perform. (No S rank in the same turn)
    You know you like it. D
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    *As the techniques clash and our vision is blocked for a short period i notice what seems to be a very long tongue (-_-) when our vision is regained, so i quickly create a fairly big surge of wind wich blows backwards towards oro his tongue and at the same time deals several slices through the tongue leaving it bleeding from multiple angles, without waiting i then perform a single handseal and stomp my left foot to the ground releasing a fast jet of water towards you that travels on the ground, and afterwards i change chakra natures and release a wave of slashing wind towards your upper body, with this you should be defending both your upper and lower body.*

    (Fūton: Boufuu oonami no Jutsu ) - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will create a large surge of wind that is capable of pushing a target back and dealing some small cuts to them. The wind technique is also strong enough to push back a large summoning creature.

    (Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

    (Fūton: Kaze Shingai) - Wind Release: Wind Terror
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes a wave of wind that slashes at the opponent.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Quote Originally Posted by Rairen.. View Post
    You know you like it. D
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    *As the techniques clash and our vision is blocked for a short period i notice what seems to be a very long tongue (-_-) when our vision is regained, so i quickly create a fairly big surge of wind wich blows backwards towards oro his tongue and at the same time deals several slices through the tongue leaving it bleeding from multiple angles, without waiting i then perform a single handseal and stomp my left foot to the ground releasing a fast jet of water towards you that travels on the ground, and afterwards i change chakra natures and release a wave of slashing wind towards your upper body, with this you should be defending both your upper and lower body.*

    (Fūton: Boufuu oonami no Jutsu ) - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will create a large surge of wind that is capable of pushing a target back and dealing some small cuts to them. The wind technique is also strong enough to push back a large summoning creature.

    (Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Cutter
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After waving the Tiger hand seal the user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

    (Fūton: Kaze Shingai) - Wind Release: Wind Terror
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes a wave of wind that slashes at the opponent.

    As the wind wave and water jet come from the ground, while still on the snake head I open my mouth and cause the hilt of Kusangi blade appears in my mouth. I quickly grab it by the hilt with my right hand and swing it in a linear direction, releasing a massive blast of wind from my blade that clashes with both techniques and cancels out.

    (Fūton: Boufuu oonami no Jutsu ) - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will create a large surge of wind that is capable of pushing a target back and dealing some small cuts to them. The wind technique is also strong enough to push back a large summoning creature.


    The snake then slithers towards your position and tries to devour you. When it comes within 2m meters of you, I cast and illusion on you in which snakes come from the ground under you and completely bind you in a dome shape. The snake then swallows you whole and I disperse it back to the snake cave(forgot the name)

    ( Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire ) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction

    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Nothing special here....

    Too many mistakes if you ask me...

    Test failed.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Please point them out, i would really really like to know where are my mistakes and try to improve.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    sigh, if you want me to waste my time on that, then try it yourself first.

    Quote all your moves then point out your own mistakes. You can't always expect people to find them for you, and if you ever want to be a sensei, you will need to be able to spot them.

    Also i'm tired and don't have much time
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    -Sigh- sure, let's call it "a waste of time", i was actually expecting to fail when i knew you where gonna judge it.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Here we go....
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Rain is an ability almost any bio can have (custom wise) and it's pretty strong and alot of people have just been given it over time without much of an actual test, which i regret, if i graded my own test from all that time back i probably would have failed myself. But if you don't agree, i still think rain is as cool as, if not better than sound. I mean, you can hit them in the head with rain that is a bullet from above and they have to find a way to notice it and counter?

    If you want to get better, find your own mistakes, that's what my old friend and mentor told me.

    I say it's a waste of my time as you can easily recheck and find your own mistakes. You just admitted you expected to fail when i judged it, why is that? I have nothing against you do i? I have nothing to gain from you failing, nor do i have any reason for wanting you to fail. I said it's a waste of my time as it's one thing i'm short of with working 2 jobs and having alot of RL issues and moving to canada next sunday. Grade your moves yourself then i'll explain everything i saw that i thought was wrong.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain test]- Rairen

    Sure, thanks for your time.
     
         

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