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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

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    Kefa: okay I'll do what you say and I'll use you as a taret cause I wanna see how you'll evade! :zonder:

    Strong points

    • - the technique shocks which mean it can paralyze the users opponent -
    • - this attack can be used immediately after an attack, the first attack will be to block the opponents view followed up by this attack immediately -


    Weak points

    • -this technique makes the user focus chakra on their hand, before slamming it on the ground the opponent might see this a summoning and counter and even if its not a summoning the opponent will counter once he sees the user raising his hand to slam on the ground -
    • -the lightning is seen and the opponent will think of a way to dodge it -


    Combinations-strategies
    As always with water, with water this technique will travel faster not only increasing its damage but also its speed, as earlier its good as a secondary attack. With earthn if there's a hole created by hidng like a mole technique the user can make the lightning pass through. Hitting his opponent, but you still have to be close range

    Ways to counter this technique
    When in battle the oopponent might have made clones before the attack and when the user atacks the opponent will simplay say it was a clone, the opponent might not have clones when this attack hits the opponent can then use substitution jutsu, the opponent can see this attack cause the lightning is at the surface all he has 2 do is jump back to mid range

    *kefa moves closer to mathias sensei, kefa then focuses his lightning chakra in his right hand placing it on the ground he releases the chakra into the ground, lightning is formed still releasing more chakra he sends the now made lightning through the surface of the ground destrying the earth in its part, heading for mathias sensei's, on impact mathias sensei gets shocked*

    Kefa: did I do better

    OOC: sorry I was in a rush to do something outside the nb walls. It won't repeat itself.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    Reposting

    Kefa: okay I'll do what you say and I'll use you as a taret cause I wanna see how you'll evade! :zonder:

    Strong points

    • - the technique shocks which mean it can paralyze the users opponent -
    • - this attack can be used immediately after an attack, the first attack will be to block the opponents view followed up by this attack immediately -


    Weak points

    • -this technique makes the user focus chakra on their hand, before slamming it on the ground the opponent might see this a summoning and counter and even if its not a summoning the opponent will counter once he sees the user raising his hand to slam on the ground -
    • -the lightning is seen and the opponent will think of a way to dodge it -


    Combinations-strategies
    As always with water, with water this technique will travel faster not only increasing its damage but also its speed, as earlier its good as a secondary attack. With earthn if there's a hole created by hidng like a mole technique the user can make the lightning pass through. Hitting his opponent, but you still have to be close range

    Ways to counter this technique
    When in battle the oopponent might have made clones before the attack and when the user atacks the opponent will simplay say it was a clone, the opponent might not have clones when this attack hits the opponent can then use substitution jutsu, the opponent can see this attack cause the lightning is at the surface all he has 2 do is jump back to mid range

    *kefa moves closer to mathias sensei, kefa then focuses his lightning chakra in his right hand placing it on the ground he releases the chakra into the ground, lightning is formed still releasing more chakra he sends the now made lightning through the surface of the ground destrying the earth in its part, heading for mathias sensei's, on impact mathias sensei gets shocked*

    Kefa: did I do better

    OOC: sorry I was in a rush to do something outside the nb walls. It won't repeat itself.
    all he has 2 do is jump back to mid range
    As I said before, please make sure you utilize some type of technique to jump backwards. In our RP we need another technique to counter a technique.

    (Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.
    I want you to focus your lightning chakra throughout your body and create an electric field by shape manipulating it. Once that's done I want you to pump out more chakra in the frontal part and create a shield of pure electrical energy to be used as an offensive measure.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Okay sensei

    *kefa focuses on his lightning chakra making it flow through his whole body and on the outside (on his skin) there are sparks of lightning, kefa releases more chakra to make the sparks into an intense electricity which covers his whole body then kefa manipulates the electricity into an electric field(it still covers his whole body), focusing and releasing more chakra into it an electric shield is formed on the front part of kefa*

    [ B ] Strong points [/ B ]
    • - this jutsu can block d-ranked earth attacks since its a shield -
    • - a taijutsu attack on the user of this technique while the shield is on will result in a repulsion/shock( the offensive side with play its part) -
    • - increases strength in taijutsu attacks -

    [ B ] Weak points [/ B ]
    • - if the user is attacked with a water technique the user will be shocked and left paralysed -
    • - since its a shield that covers the body and also offensive all attacks will be at short-range(hence the user should know some taijutsu) -

    [ B ] Combinations - strategies [/ B ] the user of this attack will increase damage when combined with taijutsu(vice versa).
    [ B ] Ways to counter this technique [/ B ] the opponent should use a water attack this will leave the user of the technique shocked if not paralysed, the opponent can use a wind style technique since its an elemental advantage.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    Okay sensei

    *kefa focuses on his lightning chakra making it flow through his whole body and on the outside (on his skin) there are sparks of lightning, kefa releases more chakra to make the sparks into an intense electricity which covers his whole body then kefa manipulates the electricity into an electric field(it still covers his whole body), focusing and releasing more chakra into it an electric shield is formed on the front part of kefa*

    [ B ] Strong points [/ B ]
    • - this jutsu can block d-ranked earth attacks since its a shield -
    • - a taijutsu attack on the user of this technique while the shield is on will result in a repulsion/shock( the offensive side with play its part) -
    • - increases strength in taijutsu attacks -

    [ B ] Weak points [/ B ]
    • - if the user is attacked with a water technique the user will be shocked and left paralysed -
    • - since its a shield that covers the body and also offensive all attacks will be at short-range(hence the user should know some taijutsu) -

    [ B ] Combinations - strategies [/ B ] the user of this attack will increase damage when combined with taijutsu(vice versa).
    [ B ] Ways to counter this technique [/ B ] the opponent should use a water attack this will leave the user of the technique shocked if not paralysed, the opponent can use a wind style technique since its an elemental advantage.
    Very good ^_^ btw your Bbcoding messed up a bit

    (Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.
    This technique is very similar to the one you just learned xD

    I want you to focus your lighting chakra around your body. You will then release it into an electric field type shield that will explode upon contact with the enemy causing him to get blown back.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Kefa: okay sensei
    *kefa focuses on his lightning chakra and creates the lightning field on his skin, then manipulates it into a shield which covers his whole body, kefa runs towards mathias clone to punch it as he punches the clone he releases a blast of chakra which causes the hit(punch) to explode making your clone go poof*

    Strong points
    • - this jutsu can be used as a surprise, when an opponent has seen the previous jutsu, he or she will not expect an explosion on impact -
    • - the user can direct this jutsu towards the ground to create a diversion(because of the explosion on impact) -

    Weak points
    • - this jutsu cannot be useless if the opponent is at long-range -
    • - since its an explosion it should have some effects, like minor injuries to the user(because of the explosion) -

    Combinations - strategies
    this jutsu goes well with taijutsu, for it to be really effective the user should know some taijutsu

    Ways to counter this technique
    water prison; not only to immobilize the user of this technique but since its water and the user is covered by the electric field the user might be shocked, and water prison becaue this jutsu is best used at close range and water prison is at close range. A wind jutsu is also good, it can be used to blow back the user of this jutsu or blow out the electricity on the user of this jutsu because wind neutralizes electricity.
     
         

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    Kefa: okay sensei
    *kefa focuses on his lightning chakra and creates the lightning field on his skin, then manipulates it into a shield which covers his whole body, kefa runs towards mathias clone to punch it as he punches the clone he releases a blast of chakra which causes the hit(punch) to explode making your clone go poof*

    Strong points
    • - this jutsu can be used as a surprise, when an opponent has seen the previous jutsu, he or she will not expect an explosion on impact -
    • - the user can direct this jutsu towards the ground to create a diversion(because of the explosion on impact) -

    Weak points
    • - this jutsu cannot be useless if the opponent is at long-range -
    • - since its an explosion it should have some effects, like minor injuries to the user(because of the explosion) -

    Combinations - strategies
    this jutsu goes well with taijutsu, for it to be really effective the user should know some taijutsu

    Ways to counter this technique
    water prison; not only to immobilize the user of this technique but since its water and the user is covered by the electric field the user might be shocked, and water prison becaue this jutsu is best used at close range and water prison is at close range. A wind jutsu is also good, it can be used to blow back the user of this jutsu or blow out the electricity on the user of this jutsu because wind neutralizes electricity.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    Kefa: okay sensei
    *kefa focuses on his lightning chakra and creates the lightning field on his skin, then manipulates it into a shield which covers his whole body, kefa runs towards mathias clone to punch it as he punches the clone he releases a blast of chakra which causes the hit(punch) to explode making your clone go poof*

    Strong points
    • - this jutsu can be used as a surprise, when an opponent has seen the previous jutsu, he or she will not expect an explosion on impact -
    • - the user can direct this jutsu towards the ground to create a diversion(because of the explosion on impact) -

    Weak points
    • - this jutsu cannot be useless if the opponent is at long-range -
    • - since its an explosion it should have some effects, like minor injuries to the user(because of the explosion) -

    Combinations - strategies
    this jutsu goes well with taijutsu, for it to be really effective the user should know some taijutsu

    Ways to counter this technique
    water prison; not only to immobilize the user of this technique but since its water and the user is covered by the electric field the user might be shocked, and water prison becaue this jutsu is best used at close range and water prison is at close range. A wind jutsu is also good, it can be used to blow back the user of this jutsu or blow out the electricity on the user of this jutsu because wind neutralizes electricity.
    Good, now this will be our last D rank. Apologies for taking so long. Starting Monday, I will be more active in our training sessions ^_^

    (Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
    Fairly simple technique. I want you to focus your lightning chakra throughout your hands. You will the release it outwards and using shape manipulation, you will form that lightning chakra into several bolts of lightning that are directed towards your desired target, tightly together in the form of a "wave".
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    OOC:
    Apologies for taking so long. Starting Monday, I will be more active in our training sessions ^_^
    -i cant complain, i was annoying once so you can take as much time as you need ^_^

    kefa:sensei i'm going to use you as a target. its no beef i just like using you as target practice.

    *kefa starts to build up his lightning chakra followed by focusing it to his hands, the chakra now at his hands kefa releases it making lightning on his hands, kefa utilizes shape manipulation to shapen the lightning into a wave of lightning, puttingmy hands upwards and facing you, i send several waves of lightning bolts towards you*

    Strong points
    • - it can be used a diversion, since its several bolts being shot -
    • - since its several bolts i think the user of this tech can use it to attack more than one opponent at one release -

    Weak points
    • - this technique can be ended with a d-rank wind -

    Strategy / Combinations
    the user can use this as a diversion due to the several blast and then when an opening is created, the user can use a fatal attack. Forming a water tornado where the opponent is and as the opponent is sucked in, the user of this technique can then shoot several bolts into the water tornado.
    Ways to counter:
    the opponent can use water shockwave infront of him so that the bolts would enter the shockwave. The opponent can use either a wind defense to defend himself(battled someone who used a 360 rotation wind defense), a wind attack will neutralize the lightning attack and still go for the user of the lightning
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    OOC: -i cant complain, i was annoying once so you can take as much time as you need ^_^

    kefa:sensei i'm going to use you as a target. its no beef i just like using you as target practice.

    *kefa starts to build up his lightning chakra followed by focusing it to his hands, the chakra now at his hands kefa releases it making lightning on his hands, kefa utilizes shape manipulation to shapen the lightning into a wave of lightning, puttingmy hands upwards and facing you, i send several waves of lightning bolts towards you*

    Strong points
    • - it can be used a diversion, since its several bolts being shot -
    • - since its several bolts i think the user of this tech can use it to attack more than one opponent at one release -

    Weak points
    • - this technique can be ended with a d-rank wind -

    Strategy / Combinations
    the user can use this as a diversion due to the several blast and then when an opening is created, the user can use a fatal attack. Forming a water tornado where the opponent is and as the opponent is sucked in, the user of this technique can then shoot several bolts into the water tornado.
    Ways to counter:
    the opponent can use water shockwave infront of him so that the bolts would enter the shockwave. The opponent can use either a wind defense to defend himself(battled someone who used a 360 rotation wind defense), a wind attack will neutralize the lightning attack and still go for the user of the lightning
    *Doges with the lightning with magic* Attacking me? That's not very respectful, now is it?

    The template seems pretty good, I'd just like to ask you to please include just a tad bit more information, I need to know you understand and can come up with various ideas if I am to take away the template later on in our training ^_^

    Okay so now, before we proceed to some higher level techniques I'd like you to do one thing; I want you to perform a three jutsu combination that has to include at least two of the lightning techniques you've learned so far. You can add free-form taijutsu, kunai throwing, anything you can think of in the combination as long as its legitimate under our Battle Arena rules.

    Ready...set.... GO!
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Kefa:Sensei i want to learn the magic wease:. Sorry about using you as a target :ghehe: but i learn more by using you, so prepare yourself for my 3 combination attack :zonder:......ikiyo(here i come)

    *kefa smiles at Mathias sensei, then kefa immediately throws 3 kunai's tagged with paper bombs towards the air, kefa threw them in a projectile towards mathias sensei(meaning that on their way down(the kunais) they'll hit you). As Mathias sensei looks up 2 watch the kunai's, kefa immediately form Rat → Dog → Ox hand seals and then releases his water chakra with his right hand to form a water whip which he cast towards you, the water whip wraps arround Mathias sensei's neck. Kefa follows this up by focusing his lightning chakra to his right hand(the same hand he is using to hold the water whip) and then kefa releases alot of his chakra to create intense lightning, the water whip conducts the lightning to Mathias sensei who gets shocked on impact due to the lightnign being intense mathias gets paralyzed, as Mathias is being shocked, kefa pulls the whip therefore pulling Mathias sensei closer, kefa focuses the lightning chakra around his body to create a lightning shield and then he focuses another wave of chakra to his left hand which he clenches, as Mathias sensei gets closer to kefa, kefa punches Mathias sensei with his left hand, as he does he releases a blast of his lightning chakra causing the punch into and explosive one. Mathias gets thrown back due to the explosion*

    (Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

    (Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning ReleaseTechnique
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

    (Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.


    kefa: how did i do math....?? Kage bunshin?

    * the mathias the got thrown back was a clone and it went poof *
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    Kefa:Sensei i want to learn the magic wease:. Sorry about using you as a target :ghehe: but i learn more by using you, so prepare yourself for my 3 combination attack :zonder:......ikiyo(here i come)

    *kefa smiles at Mathias sensei, then kefa immediately throws 3 kunai's tagged with paper bombs towards the air, kefa threw them in a projectile towards mathias sensei(meaning that on their way down(the kunais) they'll hit you). As Mathias sensei looks up 2 watch the kunai's, kefa immediately form Rat → Dog → Ox hand seals and then releases his water chakra with his right hand to form a water whip which he cast towards you, the water whip wraps arround Mathias sensei's neck. Kefa follows this up by focusing his lightning chakra to his right hand(the same hand he is using to hold the water whip) and then kefa releases alot of his chakra to create intense lightning, the water whip conducts the lightning to Mathias sensei who gets shocked on impact due to the lightnign being intense mathias gets paralyzed, as Mathias is being shocked, kefa pulls the whip therefore pulling Mathias sensei closer, kefa focuses the lightning chakra around his body to create a lightning shield and then he focuses another wave of chakra to his left hand which he clenches, as Mathias sensei gets closer to kefa, kefa punches Mathias sensei with his left hand, as he does he releases a blast of his lightning chakra causing the punch into and explosive one. Mathias gets thrown back due to the explosion*

    (Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

    (Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning ReleaseTechnique
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

    (Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.


    kefa: how did i do math....?? Kage bunshin?

    * the mathias the got thrown back was a clone and it went poof *
    A combination very well executed, I'm very pleased ^_^

    There is a minor thing that I'd like to point out, and its simply to try and place the techniques you use in the order in which you use them. Once I looked at the spoiler I was a bit confused but then realized you used the water first, then lightning, then shield.


    (Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
    This technique you'll be learning now is pretty nice for the combination you just attempted. I want you to focus your lightning chakra throughout your hands and release outwards, creating a wave of electricity that's not shape manipulated like a bolt of lightning would be.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Kefa: Okay sensei...thanks 4 the encouragement!

    *kefa starts to build up his lightning chakra, kefa then focuses the built up chakra to his right hand and releases a wave of the chakra which makes lightning in hand, kefa doesnt try to shapen the lightning and because of its intensity caused by the wave of chakra he release its haywire but rests in his hand*

    earlier you said something about dropping the template should i still use it?
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

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    Kefa: Okay sensei...thanks 4 the encouragement!

    *kefa starts to build up his lightning chakra, kefa then focuses the built up chakra to his right hand and releases a wave of the chakra which makes lightning in hand, kefa doesnt try to shapen the lightning and because of its intensity caused by the wave of chakra he release its haywire but rests in his hand*

    earlier you said something about dropping the template should i still use it?
    Yeah please use it, I will let you know when we are ready to drop it.^^
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    I'm sorry 4 not using it

    reposting
    Kefa: Okay sensei...thanks 4 the encouragement!

    *kefa starts to build up his lightning chakra, kefa then focuses the built up chakra to his right hand and releases a wave of the chakra which makes lightning in hand, kefa doesnt try to shapen the lightning and because of its intensity caused by the wave of chakra he release its haywire but rests in his hand*

    strong points:
    * - as stated it can cut through solid rock-
    * - if its strong enough to cut/pierce through solid rock it can shock an opponent till paralyses -
    * - it turns to long rang/mid range attack when combined with water -
    weak points:
    * - the user should know taijutsu for more effectiveness -
    * - it doesnt shoot blasts or surges or waves of lightning so without combination with water i see no use -
    * - the user should be left with minor injuries due to the intensity of the lightning(as seen with sasuke)-
    combinations and strategies
    as stated in the description of the jutsu its goes well with water jutsu's, example the water whip the way i used it, water shockwave, having a clone sacrifice itself by getting shocked through locking the opponent is a water prison and then use this jutsu, also this jutsu goes well wth taijutsu.
    ways to counter this tech
    if this jutsu is used in a combination with water technique i suggest countering it with a wind technique but also if this jutsu is used with a water technique, the oppoinent can control the water(the water fused with lightning) to his own will, if used with taijutsu i highly advice the opponent should keep his distance
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

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    I'm sorry 4 not using it

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    Kefa: Okay sensei...thanks 4 the encouragement!

    *kefa starts to build up his lightning chakra, kefa then focuses the built up chakra to his right hand and releases a wave of the chakra which makes lightning in hand, kefa doesnt try to shapen the lightning and because of its intensity caused by the wave of chakra he release its haywire but rests in his hand*

    strong points:
    * - as stated it can cut through solid rock-
    * - if its strong enough to cut/pierce through solid rock it can shock an opponent till paralyses -
    * - it turns to long rang/mid range attack when combined with water -
    weak points:
    * - the user should know taijutsu for more effectiveness -
    * - it doesnt shoot blasts or surges or waves of lightning so without combination with water i see no use -
    * - the user should be left with minor injuries due to the intensity of the lightning(as seen with sasuke)-
    combinations and strategies
    as stated in the description of the jutsu its goes well with water jutsu's, example the water whip the way i used it, water shockwave, having a clone sacrifice itself by getting shocked through locking the opponent is a water prison and then use this jutsu, also this jutsu goes well wth taijutsu.
    ways to counter this tech
    if this jutsu is used in a combination with water technique i suggest countering it with a wind technique but also if this jutsu is used with a water technique, the oppoinent can control the water(the water fused with lightning) to his own will, if used with taijutsu i highly advice the opponent should keep his distance
    Okay there are just a few things I'd like to point out.^^

    - as stated it can cut through solid rock-
    - if its strong enough to cut/pierce through solid rock it can shock an opponent till paralyses -
    - it turns to long rang/mid range attack when combined with water -
    I'm not sure if you didn't notice or not but you repeated the same strength ;p Also remember that because this technique is only short ranged a water technique would only allow it to travel as far as medium range. If the lightning technique was up to medium range, water would allow it to travel up to long range.

    - the user should know taijutsu for more effectiveness -
    - it doesnt shoot blasts or surges or waves of lightning so without combination with water i see no use -
    - the user should be left with minor injuries due to the intensity of the lightning(as seen with sasuke)-
    Would do you believe having to know taijutsu is a weakness of the overall technique? Please explain these things because at it stands, it sounds a tad bit silly ;p

    If you read the technique once again you'll be able to see that a wave of electricity is released whilst utilizing this technique so there are quite a few other ways to use it, aside from water ^_^

    Unless the technique states it hurts or performs any draw backs, it usually does not.

    Any questions? ^_^
     
         

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    I feel stupid, thats all i'l try to do better from now on! No questions Mathias sensei, you answered all if i had 2 ask with your last post
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by neilson View Post
    I feel stupid, thats all i'l try to do better from now on! No questions Mathias sensei, you answered all if i had 2 ask with your last post
    OOC: You shouldn't, that is why we are here in the first place. To learn and improve (:

    (Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
    Fairly simple technique; I want you to focus and then release lightning chakra throughout your hands. I then want you to shape manipulate that chakra into a ball of electrical energy that is either held by both your hands or your preferred one. You will then simply release it from your hand as if you were throwing a baseball, towards your desired location.
     
         

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    Okay sensei, you know who my target is right?(u ofcourse)

    *kefs starts to build up his lightning chakra, he then focuses it to his raised right hand pointing towards Mathias sensei and then releases it which creates lightning that is formed on his hand but haywire, kefa then shapens it making it to take shape of a ball, using another wave of raw chakra as a push to shoot the fire ball towards Mathias sensei*

    strong points
    * - the user of this tech can shoot more than one lightning balls towards the opponent making the opponent have a harder time at evading -
    * - many lightning balls can be used a diversion(although even one)
    * - due to the mid range it can turn into a long range by aiming at a field of water where the opponene would be -
    weak points
    * - it can be dodged if it only one lightning ball thrown(like you said about throwing a base ball, i'm saying this cause just like when a ball is thrown it takes time before its caught)
    * - it can be stopped by a tagged kunai knife with a paper bomb(the explosion can stop the ball due to ball isnt really big being arround palm size) -
    combinations and strategies
    the user of this tech can use it as a diversion(shooting multiple fire balls to make the opponent focus on it and then the user can attack), the user can first shoot a water bullet followed by a lightning ball(the first atack to cause damage and wet him while the second is to do a fatal damage).
    ways to counter
    as stated earlier i think a kunai knife tagged with a paper ball can counter this technique due to its size, a higher rank fire ball should cancel it out, obviously wind attack can(c and above rank).
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

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    Okay sensei, you know who my target is right?(u ofcourse)

    *kefs starts to build up his lightning chakra, he then focuses it to his raised right hand pointing towards Mathias sensei and then releases it which creates lightning that is formed on his hand but haywire, kefa then shapens it making it to take shape of a ball, using another wave of raw chakra as a push to shoot the fire ball towards Mathias sensei*

    strong points
    * - the user of this tech can shoot more than one lightning balls towards the opponent making the opponent have a harder time at evading -
    * - many lightning balls can be used a diversion(although even one)
    * - due to the mid range it can turn into a long range by aiming at a field of water where the opponene would be -
    weak points
    * - it can be dodged if it only one lightning ball thrown(like you said about throwing a base ball, i'm saying this cause just like when a ball is thrown it takes time before its caught)
    * - it can be stopped by a tagged kunai knife with a paper bomb(the explosion can stop the ball due to ball isnt really big being arround palm size) -
    combinations and strategies
    the user of this tech can use it as a diversion(shooting multiple fire balls to make the opponent focus on it and then the user can attack), the user can first shoot a water bullet followed by a lightning ball(the first atack to cause damage and wet him while the second is to do a fatal damage).
    ways to counter
    as stated earlier i think a kunai knife tagged with a paper ball can counter this technique due to its size, a higher rank fire ball should cancel it out, obviously wind attack can(c and above rank).
    OOC: Good, just keep in mind that you need to use a jutsu to stop another jutsu, so its not advice-able to do that tagged kunai combo. Also, stop attacking me!

    (Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
    I want you to focus on your lightning chakra and then release it, spreading it across your body. You will then spread it beyond your body and using shape manipulation to create a field around you that protects you and electrocutes anyone that touches it.
     
         

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    Re: [Lightning training]-Neilson

    Kefa:sensei this jutsu is similar to one we've done before right?..lemme try it

    *kefa starts building up his lightning chakra focusing on it to flow freely at all parts of his body, kefa then releases it, making it form lightning around his his body, kefa focuses more chakra through every part of his body making the lightning that surrounds him to become more intense, using shape manipulation it turns into a lightning field which surrounds his body as a shield*

    strong points
    * - an obvious one, its a defense against some elements and taijutsu and some ninjutsu(removing water and wind attacks and lower ranked fire attacks) -
    * - its not only good for defense but also for attacking(with or without the knowledge of taijutsu)
    * - when used as an attack, due to the intensity of the lightning it can paralyse the opponent.
    weak points
    * - cannot be used as a defense again water and wind(water will turn the lightning armor into a lightning attack due to the user being wet, wind will either blow out the armor and cause damage like small cuts to the user or just blow out the armor and bush the user back-
    * - lasts for only one attack so the user has to know his next defensive or attacking move -
    combinations and strategies
    if the user knows taijutsu it causes more damage(damage from the lightning armor and damage from the taijutsu). Being inside water and using this armor will conduct this eletricity to mid range(the user doesnt get shocked cause he wasnt attacked by water(kakashi has used raikiri under water during three tails attack). Using an earth pillar to push/throw the user of this tech towards the opponent and while in the air getting close to the opponent the user can activate this jutsu.
    ways to counter
    the obvious one: a water attack like water fang bullet which has a pointing head which will pass through the armor and wet the user then causing the user to get shocked, a wind attack removing the armor and leaving small cuts on the user(small cuts cause wind is thin and sharp). Since this jutsu last for one attack the opponent can use hidding like a mole tech to dodge the attack.
     
         

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