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      Kageyama Nara

      Basic Information

      Name:Kageyama/Koga/Nara
      Nickname:Shadow
      Gender:male
      Age:23
      Clan:Nara

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      Personality: not much can be told about Kageyama but a few words ruthless cunning and a danger to all and a a**hol*

      Village info


      village of birth Hidden Sun village
      Village of alliance:the hidden cloude

      Rank//Chakra Info
      Ninja rank:Jounin
      specialty: /none
      Elements:

      Your ninjutsu:

      (kakuremino No jutsu) - Magic cloak of invisibility technique
      Rank:E
      Type: Supplementary
      Range:short
      Chakra cost:5
      Damage points:N/A
      Description: the user will pull out a cloak that is pre-deseigned for their use. Then by usimg ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background


      (gokan sakusou) - 5 senses confusion disorder
      Rank:E
      Type:supplementary
      Range:short
      Chakra cost:N/A
      Damage points:N/A
      Description:The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or or countered it. this effect lasts 2 turns.


      (kawarimi no jutsu) - change of body stance technique
      Rank:E
      Type:supplementary
      Range:short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage points:N/A
      Description: kawarimi no jutsu is a basic ninjutsu technique. when in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object this can be a block of wood or even another person. this allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.


      (nawanuke no jutsu) - escape skill
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Chakra cost:5
      Damage: N/A
      Description: using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes


      (Bunshin No Jutsu)- clone technique
      Rank:E
      Type:supplementary
      Chakra cost:5
      Damage:N/A
      Description:A clone made of the user it can move but(cannot use any jutsu) This clone is merelyan illusonary projection of th user.
      Note: the clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-rank jutsu under its own(mizu/water Tsuchi/earth sumi/ink)


      (henge No jutsu) - Transformation technique
      Rank:E
      Type:supplementary
      Range:short
      Chakra cost:5
      Damage:N/A
      Description: Henge No Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the ninja academy. Henge allows the user to transform into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or trick their opponents. Background info he is a master at the the art of quick esapes

      Kage Mane Shuriken) - Shadow Imitation Shuriken
      Rank: D
      Type: Supplementary
      Range: Short-Mid
      Chakra cost: 10
      Damage Points: N/A
      Description: Traps the enemy buy throwing and hitting there shadow special blades infused with shadow chakra.

      (Kage Kubi Shibari) - Shadow Neck Bind
      Rank: C
      Type: Supplementary/Attack
      Range: Short-Mid
      Chakra cost: 15
      Damage Points: 30
      Description: Traps the enemy buy combining shadows and then strangles the enemy with a shadow hand.

      (Kagegijin) - Shadow Impersonation
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary/Attack
      Range: Short-Mid
      Chakra cost: 20
      Damage Points: 40
      Description: Shadow forms to replicas of the user that pound the opponent and squeezes them to finish them off.

      (Kageasshou) - Shadow Giant Hand Crush
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary/Attack
      Range: Short-Mid
      Chakra cost: 20
      Damage Points: 40
      Description: Using Flash bombs to extend your shadow your form it into a giant hand that crushes the opponent.

      (Kage Enmaku) - Shadow Smoke Screen
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary/Attack
      Range: Short-Mid
      Chakra cost: 20
      Damage Points: 40
      Description: You first throw a smoke bomb at the opponent and then your shadow covers the smoke compressing it and trapping the opponent in a body suit shadow with the high pressure smoke crushing them form with in.

      Kage Nui) - Shadow Sewing
      Rank: B
      Type: Supplementary/Attack
      Range: Short-Mid
      Chakra cost: 20(+5 if used with exploding tags)
      Damage Points: 40(+10 if used with exploding tags)
      Description: Shadow needles that can move the opponent or impale them and can be used with exploding tags.

      (Kage Asshō no Jutsu) - Shadow Demon Stripe Technique
      Rank: B
      Type: Offensive
      Range: Long
      Chakra cost: 20
      Damage points: 40
      Description: The user will throw flash bombs behind themselves to not only blind the enemy but to also extend the range of his shadow indefinitely. The user can put any part of their body infront of the light and it will appear as an enormous shadow. Once the shadow is ready, he can constrict any enemy easily just by closing his hands.
      Note: Must be a member of the Nara clan


      Background Information

      History:Kageyama is a ninja young ninja from the hidden sun village when he was 14 years old his mother told him where she is from she said to him im from the land of fire the hidden leaf village where the nara clan is the clan is where my jutju comes from i was only 11 when my mother and father was cut down on the rode the man who killed them cane afther me and took me away he sold me into slaveary i was sold to place called dark world thay traind me tought me how to fight when i was 23 i was put on a misshion to bring back a ninja by the name of koga D.o.A i tracked him down at a tea house in the land of tea whin i saw him i fell in love and ran with him to his village but now there back and thay come for u thay cut down your father and now i got to save u as she fineshed talking a clay pot came crashing thru the window with a papper tag on it in that moment he felt hans pushing him out the other window jest as the blast happen he yeled mom but no ancer he started to cry but he ran from the house on the hill next to the village he ran&ran till he couldent run no more he came across a hut and the sun was going down so he slept in the hut when the moring came he started to walk back to the hut but he then he said i need to become strong he then put his hands in his pockets and in his left pocket he pulled out a bag of money and a note ho opend the note and read my son we are gon but u are alive you now need to take cair of your slef your a koga and a nara pe proud of that become stronger then us travle to the hidden leaf village then. then then what he said with a mad face well what do i do now years have past by his at the age of 19 he made it to the hidden leaf stayed with the nara clan for 4 years th is now reddy to find the man that took his parents away from him so he left the village in serch of the man with the skull mark on his forhead ive need to find teachers to teach me jutsu before im reddy to take on that ninja he said to himslef as he walked by a tea house he stoped and went in and sat down at a table a person walks over to him and said you new around thes parts Kageyama looked at the man then the wader came and ask him like somethin to drink or eat Kageyama said ill have a large lemon tea and 4egg rools 6 orders of fried noodles and some rice then he looks back at the man and sed no im from no where at all the water came back and gave kageyama his food he then said well it was nice talking to you but go away now im about to eat the man went back to the other side of the tea house kageyama ate all the food and was siting there siping the hot tea when the man cam back and asked your last name it isent koga right he looked at the man and thrue the hot tea in his eyes and ran out hte tea house the man ran after kageyama he was fast jest a little down the road the man cought up to him and said i found you reddy to die kageyama asked who r u the man said your doom as he rushed twords kageyama with sword in hand kageyama pulld out his sword the man had no hed ban but armor so he knew he was samurai strike after strike the battle was fears but it all ended when the man inpeld kageyama and he fell to the ground the man said nothen agence u jest bizness then vanshed into the the trees a nother man that jest happen to be waching the fight in a near by tree comes over and looks at him ooo your not dead yet but dieing well lets get u fixed up then he swithly picked kagyama up and made his wat to his place along toe way kageyama blacked out when he awoke the man said that was no true samurai if it was me&u would not be having this conversation where am i kageyama asked my place he then asked why r u helping me because i know your father and u im narku a friend to the hidden sun i was told to wach over u for awile by your mother and thay are still alive u must save thim but u will need to learn how to fight go to the Oasis south from heair you will meat a man named Oasis Nara he will teach u all ull need to know to save your mom&dad

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      Theme song and background music linkin park Faint

      Battles:

      Won:0
      Lost:0

      ~Approved~ if you can't write very well in English, then or make a canon bio or keep your history short, but this is barely understandable. On top of that you used absolutely no punctuation whatsoever. Next time you do that, I'm not even going to bother reading it and decline it straight away. This is like a suicide mission for grammar nazi's.
       
           
      Last edited by Caliburn; 10-30-2012 at 11:30 AM.

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      nice bio
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      You need to be taught the Nara clan Shadow techs so take them out
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      i got a teacher and ive learnd those jutsu so i can put them in my new bio
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      dose aneyone have aney ideals on how to improve my bio
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      Cool bio. Maybe organize it a bit more.
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      Descent bio.
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      i made it better thin it was i think someone give me some feed back
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      Nice bio, you should put your jutsu in spoilers, and add more color. Try making the history longer.
       
           

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      how do i put my jutsu in spoilers
       
           

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      Re: Kageyama Nara

      im trying to make a grate bio would some one give me some ideals
       
           

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