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      After the Obito Flashback,

      Its a bit long. So dont need to post about that haha. Enjoy Reading!



      Obito: So that is what happened to me after you saw me die.. Sensei Madara, and good friend zetsu gave me a second chance,to bring true peace. I dont need any feelings of the humanety. Ill just let them life in my peace. Where everything is perfect. No fights, no unfaithfull deads, and no leaders. Only one believe. Their saviour

      Madara: Obito..
      Madara: ;;; Obito is now right the person i believed he would become. ;;;
      Madara: You've grown up Obito.

      Obito: No, I havent. I never had a change of mind in al those years..

      Kakashi: Obito..

      Obito: ...? You have something to say kakashi...? "of.... my sharingan!"

      Kakashi: I still cant believe it. That you are standing here right in front of me.. Alive..
      Kakashi: And im sorry.

      Obito: Sorry.. Sorry? Those words mean nothing.

      Kakashi: Im sorry you had to witness the incident where i ended Rin from her life.

      Obito: ..... You think i did this plan because of Rin died? No.. Its because The way she died!
      Kakashi: ....? You knew..? How..
      Obito: I knew she had a decease. Her lungs were about to give up absorbing fresh air.

      Kakashi, makes a sad expression.

      Obito: A person who is that sick of a decease, should never be at a place like where she has died. She should be home, with their family. This is just one of the endless wrong angles of the humanety.

      Kakashi: Obito did you think i wanted to kill Rin? That I was the one who made the decision to end Rin her life???
      Obito: It doesnt matter why you killed her in the first place. Its about the because.

      Kakashi: She wanted me to kill her. Right at that spot....
      Obito: What do you mean?

      Kakashi: She wanted to die by my hands, and not by the enemy. She knew she was going to die in a few hours or more.. She also didnt wanted to die by choking in her own lungs.

      Obito: .... And why did they wanted her body so badly?

      Kakashi: Because she had the third tailed beast in her.
      And she didnt want the third tailes to run loose in Konoha.

      Naruto: The third tailed beast? You mean Isobu right? What happened after that?

      Obiito: So thats why you killed her.. And that was the reason that beast appeared suddenly..
      I teleported the beast to a huge lake with my new power i also discovered at the scene, the one you posess to..
      Kakashi: ((teleported the third tailed beast, in the first time with kamui.. true sharingan users are so powerful..)

      Madara: You Uzumaki.. How do you know that name? Even i didnt knew that one. None of them. Only of that temporary fox in your belly stored named Kurama.

      Kyuubi: That bastard madara.. He shouldn't mock with my name.

      Naruto: Well Madara, then you should know i know all the names of my friends.
      Madara: ..?! All of them.

      Naruto: Yeah.. And some more. BADDOOEEEEMMMMFFFP!

      Kakashi and everyone there: Woow.. what is this power arround us. Is it a god?

      (Smoke cleares up)

      Madara: ...?? No way....
      Obito: What is this boy..

      Madara: Its..It is the Rikkudou Sage!
      Obito: ??!


      Naruto: No im not that person. Im Uzumaki Naruto of the Hidden leaf, and I will become the Hokage of Konoha!!

      Madara: The hokage huh..
      Madara: I remember that name.
      Naruto: Yeah you should, cause your an uchiha.
      Madara: Hehe young boy. I think you still have to learn some dancing.
      Naruto: No i dont, dont do me wack , cause I rap!

      Killerbee: Oee wieee Naruto is increddeblyy kill thats son of a bieeetsh and smoke some weeeeaaad!


      Obito: Its time to end this little game Naruto.
      Naruto: Yeah your right.. Obito.

      Obito Release jutsu! Uchiha Kaenjin.
      Madara:....

      The Juubi Ten tailes appeares.

      A huge power burst accurs.

      Naruto: ... So thats how you look like..

      Juubi: RRRRROEOEOEAAAAAA
      Obito: SHHARRINGAN

      Naruto:....

      The Juubi stopped moving.

      Madara: So what are you gonna do now huh Obito? Need some help?

      Obito: No sir, i will end this Uzumaki With the ten tailes power, and make it stronger with his power inside that boy and I will cast the genjutsu.

      Naruto: That wont never happen Uchiha Obito.
      Obito: There is no possible way you can defeat me you little boy.

      Naruto: we will see about that..

      END

      NEXT: Sasuke's plan with Orochimaru and gang continues with the revealing of the person he wants to meet.

      EH
       
           
      Last edited by Erikhog; 10-13-2012 at 12:58 AM.

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      Re: After the Obito Flashback,

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      I doubt it >.<
       
           

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      lol..interesting...i like it
       
           

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      fighting
       
           

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      not likely but it was good read nonetheless *****
       
           

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      Re: After the Obito Flashback,

      Quote Originally Posted by Erikhog View Post
      Its a bit long. So dont need to post about that haha. Enjoy Reading!



      Obito: So that is what happened to me after you saw me die.. Sensei Madara, and good friend zetsu gave me a second chance,to bring true peace. I dont need any feelings of the humanety. Ill just let them life in my peace. Where everything is perfect. No fights, no unfaithfull deads, and no leaders. Only one believe. Their saviour

      Madara: Obito..
      Madara: ;;; Obito is now right the person i believed he would become. ;;;
      Madara: You've grown up Obito.

      Obito: No, I havent. I never had a change of mind in al those years..

      Kakashi: Obito..

      Obito: ...? You have something to say kakashi...? "of.... my sharingan!"

      Kakashi: I still cant believe it. That you are standing here right in front of me.. Alive..
      Kakashi: And im sorry.

      Obito: Sorry.. Sorry? Those words mean nothing.

      Kakashi: Im sorry you had to witness the incident where i ended Rin from her life.

      Obito: ..... You think i did this plan because of Rin died? No.. Its because The way she died!
      Kakashi: ....? You knew..? How..
      Obito: I knew she had a decease. Her lungs were about to give up absorbing fresh air.

      Kakashi, makes a sad expression.

      Obito: A person who is that sick of a decease, should never be at a place like where she has died. She should be home, with their family. This is just one of the endless wrong angles of the humanety.

      Kakashi: Obito did you think i wanted to kill Rin? That I was the one who made the decision to end Rin her life???
      Obito: It doesnt matter why you killed her in the first place. Its about the because.

      Kakashi: She wanted me to kill her. Right at that spot....
      Obito: What do you mean?

      Kakashi: She wanted to die by my hands, and not by the enemy. She knew she was going to die in a few hours or more.. She also didnt wanted to die by choking in her own lungs.

      Obito: .... And why did they wanted her body so badly?

      Kakashi: Because she had the third tailed beast in her.
      And she didnt want the third tailes to run loose in Konoha.

      Naruto: The third tailed beast? You mean Isobu right? What happened after that?

      Obiito: So thats why you killed her.. And that was the reason that beast appeared suddenly..
      I teleported the beast to a huge lake with my new power i also discovered at the scene, the one you posess to..
      Kakashi: ((teleported the third tailed beast, in the first time with kamui.. true sharingan users are so powerful..)

      Madara: You Uzumaki.. How do you know that name? Even i didnt knew that one. None of them. Only of that temporary fox in your belly stored named Kurama.

      Kyuubi: That bastard madara.. He shouldn't mock with my name.

      Naruto: Well Madara, then you should know i know all the names of my friends.
      Madara: ..?! All of them.

      Naruto: Yeah.. And some more. BADDOOEEEEMMMMFFFP!

      Kakashi and everyone there: Woow.. what is this power arround us. Is it a god?

      (Smoke cleares up)

      Madara: ...?? No way....
      Obito: What is this boy..

      Madara: Its..It is the Rikkudou Sage!
      Obito: ??!


      Naruto: No im not that person. Im Uzumaki Naruto of the Hidden leaf, and I will become the Hokage of Konoha!!

      Madara: The hokage huh..
      Madara: I remember that name.
      Naruto: Yeah you should, cause your an uchiha.
      Madara: Hehe young boy. I think you still have to learn some dancing.
      Naruto: No i dont, dont do me wack , cause I rap!

      Killerbee: Oee wieee Naruto is increddeblyy kill thats son of a bieeetsh and smoke some weeeeaaad!


      Obito: Its time to end this little game Naruto.
      Naruto: Yeah your right.. Obito.

      Obito Release jutsu! Uchiha Kaenjin.
      Madara:....

      The Juubi Ten tailes appeares.

      A huge power burst accurs.

      Naruto: ... So thats how you look like..

      Juubi: RRRRROEOEOEAAAAAA
      Obito: SHHARRINGAN

      Naruto:....

      The Juubi stopped moving.

      Madara: So what are you gonna do now huh Obito? Need some help?

      Obito: No sir, i will end this Uzumaki With the ten tailes power, and make it stronger with his power inside that boy and I will cast the genjutsu.

      Naruto: That wont never happen Uchiha Obito.
      Obito: There is no possible way you can defeat me you little boy.

      Naruto: we will see about that..

      END

      NEXT: Sasuke's plan with Orochimaru and gang continues with the revealing of the person he wants to meet.

      EH
      BIGGEST FLAW Naruto doesn't have all tailed beast power he still misses shukaku the one that was in gaara so he wont reach SO6P level until then
       
           

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      Bs ass reason for rin dying
       
           

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      Forgot my fireproof jacket..!
      And thanks
       
           

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      Re: After the Obito Flashback,

      there is still missing...but it's a good story though.

       
           

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      Re: After the Obito Flashback,

      There is one HUGE whole in the story that EVERYONE seem to forget, naruto clone was killed and the real naruto is most likely inside obitos dimension, so naruto aint on the battlefield anymore...
       
           

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      Re: After the Obito Flashback,

      Quote Originally Posted by vollan360 View Post
      There is one HUGE whole in the story that EVERYONE seem to forget, naruto clone was killed and the real naruto is most likely inside obitos dimension, so naruto aint on the battlefield anymore...
      Re-read manga carefully sir. you are wrong
       
           

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      Did, madara asks where the real one is and kill the clone
       
           

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