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    Bi-Han

    Basic Info..


    Name:Bi-Han (璧漢)
    Nickname:Saibot Of Konaha
    Gender:Male
    Age:60
    Clan:N/A
    Looks:

    Personality:Reincarnated in the darkest of all Villages.Noob Saibot is the very incarnation of evil.Doesn't Talk Much.

    Village Info..

    Village Of Birth:Konaha
    Village of Alliance: Akastuki

    Rank//Chakra Info..

    Ninja Rank: Gennin
    Specialty: N/A
    Elements: Lighting(Needs Training)
    Your ninjutsu:Basics

    Background Info..

    History:
    The 3rd Ninja World War Arc
    Bi-Han was born to Lee And Mei during the 2nd Ninja World War.He was a talented ninja.As his rival tobirama was.during the 3rd War his parent got killed by kumogakure ninjas.he wanted to bring peace to world.when he was 18
    he went to the war and he met the third raikage(when he was not the raikage).
    Third Raikage: So you are the Saibot Of Konaha!.Rumors Say that you are the one of the most talented ninja
    Bi-Han:[/CENTER]Hmm.and you are the black lighting sage of kumogakure right
    Third Raikage:Hmm!Waate of time get ready to die.
    Bi-Han:Not so fast summoning tech:Black Snake
    Third Raikage:Black lightning release:Black panther
    Six paths of Six Pains:Shinra tensei
    Bi-HanHuh?
    Third Raikage:Eh?
    After the attack of six paths of six pain Bi-Han escaped,and he thanked six paths of six pains:
    Six paths of Six Pains:So you want to bring peace to world then join me together we will find peace
    Bi-Han:Hmm
    Six paths of Six Pains:From Today on we have to bring peace to the world.so the akastuki is now formed.and akatsuki's goal is to get peace by collecting the 9 bijju's
    Bi-Han:So which one we should get first?
    Six paths of Six Pains:Three Tailed Beast.
    -To Be Continued-

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    Theme Song and Background Music:N/A

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    Won::shrug:
    Lost::shrug:
     
         

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    Re: Bi-Han

    Less colours, make it more neat.
    Also more background info and personality would be nice..
     
         

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    Re: Bi-Han

    Nice for first bio.
    Maybe more pics
     
         

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    Re: Bi-Han

    It's six paths of pain ( btw nagato was a child then ( or he wasn't born )
     
         

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    Re: Bi-Han

    It's okay for a girst bio.
     
         

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    Re: Bi-Han

    Sorry, but I'm not going to accept the history as it is. Tobirama being your rival, battling the Third Raikage, and joining up with Pain and getting into the Akatsuki is simply too much altering of the cannon storyline. I'll accept a battle with the Third Raikage or a short meeting with Pain and apparently being with him when he formed Akatsuki? All while being a genin without any training? Whatever you do with the history, it cannot conflict with the manga storyline that majorly, nor can you add in techniques like the black snake thing that you mentioned in your history unless it's a cannon technique or approved custom.
     
         

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