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    Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)



    Ganzo Uzumaki




    Basic Information
    Name: Ganzo Uzumakii
    Nickname: The Jester
    Gender: Male
    Age: 15
    Clan: Uzumakii clan

    Looks: Ganzo is a tall man around about 5ft9 with blood red spiky hair. His most admirable feature would be his pointy looking green eyes and tattoo on left arm saying “Peace” . He always seems to wear a long black coat with black ninja sandals. Ganzo also carries a rather well sized sword on back wrapped with thick blue bandage although the sword itself never actually had any hidden ability

    Personality: Ganzo is a cheerful guy who is also a bit clumsy at the worst of times however he has proven to be very resilient and persistent. A man like Ganzo could never leave a fallen comrade behind. He tends to get quick tempered against suspicious people or people who are well known for criminal acts. Ganzo is also weird funny and loves to quote famous ninja like jiraiya and Mike guy his idols

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Hidden Mist
    Village of Alliance: Hidden Leaf

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Genin
    Specialty: Ninjutsu,Kenjutsu
    Elements: Water and fire

    Your ninjutsu:

    ( Ryu Kaen Bakufuu ) - Dragon Flame Blitz
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user shoots balls of fire at the opponent.

    ( Kaen Shuriken Ranbu ) - Blazing Shuriken Dance
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user will throw several shuriken at the enemy and then inflames them with fire to cause extra damage.

    ( Katon: Komakai Kaki ) - Fire Release: Small Fire
    Rank: D
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user spews a small fireball.

    ( Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

    ( Katon no Jutsu ) - Fire Release Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user will release a small but powerful flame of fire at their opponent.

    Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
    Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

    (Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
    Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.

    (Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
    Note: Doesn't require a water source.

    (Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death
    Rank:E
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and explosives separately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
    Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and force able punches it into the enemy's behind.
    (Gangeki) - Rock Attack
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry
    Rank: D
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:10
    Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponents face.
    Damage points: 10
    Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest


    Background Info.
    History: As a baby, Ganzos parents were killed in battle by the Hidden cloud due to a mission the raikage had given them, because of these events Ganzo was left as a orphan and was taken in by a hidden leaf female Named Hiyori Naara at the age of 1 years of age, before Ganzos parents had died his parents wrapped him in a adult sized coat and the special mark of the Uzumaki clan tattooed on his tummy. Hiyori took him in and raised him into the fine man he is today, they both forged a sword together with the words “Uzumaki” engraved on it, this sword was special since it was made from materials him and Hiyori had picked out to make it. He considered Hiyori his step mother and treasured her company. He currently lives with his adopted mother whoowns a weapons shop in the hidden leaf.

    Other
    Weapons:
    .long sword,
    .10 shuriken
    .7 kunai
    2 paper bomb tags

    Picture[s]:









    Theme Song and Background Music:


    Battle Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPpyd...eature=related

    Battles

    Won:0
    Lost:0
     
         
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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Creative bio, could use a bit more touch up here and there. ^_^ History is a bit short, but I'm glad your character has found something to treasure.
    Nice pictures and the soundtrack is a bonus! Final Fantasy soundtracks are always amazing.
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Very Nice Bio
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    As a Genin, you can only have 1 element and also you cant have any specialties as of yet

    also replace the techniques you put in you ninjutsu section with the following

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
    _____
    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
    _____
    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Good for a first bio.
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Not bad Keep it up.
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Thanks guys :3 let me just do some tweeks to it like some of ya suggested
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    i like it!
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Quote Originally Posted by Genryūsai View Post
    As a Genin, you can only have 1 element and also you cant have any specialties as of yet

    also replace the techniques you put in you ninjutsu section with the following

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
    _____
    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
    _____
    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
    _____

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
    _____

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
    Alongside the jutsu ur suggesting can i have a few water e rank ones too??
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    I dont believe so as you have not been trained in that element yet
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    nice bio but pt in some spoilers in there
     
         

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    Re: Ganzo Uzumaki (BIO REQUEST!!)

    Quote Originally Posted by Genryūsai View Post
    I dont believe so as you have not been trained in that element yet
    ok then thanks
     
         

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    nice bio but pt in some spoilers in there
    and what kinda spoilers ??
     
         

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