View Poll Results: How do you think I did for my first time?

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    Byakuren Akira

    Basic Information
    Name: Uzumaki Akira
    Nickname: Alchemist of Shinobi
    Gender: Male
    Age: 23
    Clan: Uzumaki

    Looks: Long white hair framing angular black features.Wears Kung-fu style outfit with a Katana sheathed on his waist. And a spiral birth mark on his forehead. Also dons a similar head piece that was once worn by Tobirama Senju whom he idolizes and a long white cloak with the spiral emblem of the Uzumaki clam emblazoned on the back above a white lotus flower, with the words Alchemist written in Japanese characters underneath.

    Personality: Though considered a genius by some, he is quite humble and empathetic toward others while showing disdain for the cruel and arrogant as well as the ignorant. Though when angered his eyes glimmer with a cold fury.

    Village Info.

    Village of Birth: Konohagakure no Sato; Literally meaning "Village Hidden Among Tree Leaves"; also known as "Village Hidden in the Leaves" or "Hidden Leaf Village"
    Village of Alliance: Sunagakure no Sato; Literally meaning "Village Hidden in the Sand"

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank:Chuunin
    Specialty: /
    Elements: Wind - needs training
    Your ninjutsu:

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Background Info.
    History: Was born seven years before the attack on Konohagakure by Kurama, towards the end of the Third Great Shinobi War. His parents being born in the Land of Whirlpools, thought to take him to the Land of Rivers to stay close by the water as was their custom and to keep their only child sheilded from the atrocities of war. Yet when hints of an unknown threat became too great to ignore, they began the dangerous trek to Konohagakure at the behest of Sandaime Hokage and his wife, Akira's great great aunt. On the road they were accosted by a band of missing-nin who had fled from the war and the wrath of their villages. His mother and father were both killed in the struggle to protect him, yet shinobi from Konohagakure rescued him from certain death when they came across him, one of these Shinobi was Namikaze Minato, soon to become the fourth Hokage. Now he lives in Konohagakure, fiercely loyal to the village and the Senju clan.

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    Battles

    Won: 0
    Lost: 0

    ~Approved~ edited stuff, you don't have any specialties. Have fun RPing.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 12-04-2012 at 11:30 AM.

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    Re: Byakuren Akira

    Read the rules and bio templates.
     
         

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    Re: Byakuren Akira

    Uzimaki?
    The correct clan name is Uzumaki.

    And I agree with the guy above, read the Bio rules and template.
     
         

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    Re: Byakuren Akira

    Crap, I broke like five rules, LOL! I'm editing right now.
    And I'm pretty sure it's spelled Uzimaki dude but I could be wrong ( but I'm not ).
     
         

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    Re: Byakuren Akira

    Quote Originally Posted by Uzimaki Akira View Post
    Crap, I broke like five rules, LOL! I'm editing right now.
    And I'm pretty sure it's spelled Uzimaki dude but I could be wrong ( but I'm not ).
    He's actually right, it's uzumaki. Also follow the tmeplate, and you haven't mastered anything
     
         

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    Re: Byakuren Akira

    Yes I see that now. First time doing this so a little confused but I got the hang of it now.
     
         

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