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    Talon Noxus

    Basic Information
    Name:Talon Du'Coteau
    Nickname: Dragon blade talon
    Gender:Male
    Age:18
    Clan: /

    Looks:Talon is a tall slight build man who always covers his face with either a mask or a hood. He wears blue body armour and dark blue pants with a cape that has been cut 6 times and had blades attached to the ends. Talon weilds a blade that is attached to his arm and is his main weapon of choice. Talon also uses shuriken which is part of his main fighting style. The cape is also used to fight opponents and is used to his abilities.

    Personality:Talon is a cold heart assassin with no respect for human life what so ever. He does not hesitate to kill a an enemy with brutal force or silent killing them. When with superiors he is extremely polite but he is also very much feared by superiors who do not want to get on his bad side. He preferes to be by himself normally found on roof tops or towers prefereing the heights to anything else.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Small village in the Fire Country
    Village of Alliance: Konaha

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank:s-jounin
    Specialty: /
    Elements: Fire - needs training
    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Background Info.
    History: At a young age talons village was attacked by ninja from the village hidden in the mist. Upon witnessing his parents deaths talon went into a solitude of darkness hating and resenting everyone and everything he came into contact with. He wandered into a small town and was taken in by an elderly man who used to be an assassin. The blades and knives in the mans house intrigued talon and he wanted to learn to become a master assassin. After three years of training talon felt that the old man had nothing left to teach him and left the village, age 11. Now trained in the art of assassination talon set out to find the men who killed his parents. After entering the village hidden in the mist he walked into a small town on the off skirts of town into a bar. After ordering a drink he over heard three men bragging about there kills and feats and upon glancing over he noticed two of the men to be the ones who killed his parents. In and instant and with a flurry of blades talon attacked the men and assassinated everyone in the bar in a matter of seconds. After archieving his goal talon left the village hidden in the mist and set off to find the village hidden in the leaves. At age 13 talon joined the village hidden in the leaves and was promoted into the anbu black ops assassination squad for 5 years. Now 18 talon is known and feared world wide as a famous assassin who always gets his target.

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    Theme Song and Background Music: /

    Battles

    Won:0
    Lost:0

    (second bio worked hard on this one took me ages to write looks personality and bio =))

    ~Approved~ there is no Noxian clan, have fun RPing.
     
         
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    Re: Talon Noxus

     
         

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    "Give it back," you
    lament. "I've had
    enough," you wail. You
    think I care? That is fate!
    This terrible, brittle, puny
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    Re: Talon Noxus

    1. Noxian isn't an official clan, so you might want to remove it.

    2. You automatically start with the basic Academy rank ninjutsu, so you can either just say "E-Rank Ninjutsu" or add these:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    But it's a nice bio. I think he became relentless after the attack on his parents, but it's nice to see how the Bloody Mist has rubbed off on him. :3

    Also I thought he was Talon Du'Coteau. Not a big thing, but I think Du'Coteau sounds better than Noxus.
     
         

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    Re: Talon Noxus

    Quote Originally Posted by Alternative View Post
    1. Noxian isn't an official clan, so you might want to remove it.

    2. You automatically start with the basic Academy rank ninjutsu, so you can either just say "E-Rank Ninjutsu" or add these:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


    But it's a nice bio. I think he became relentless after the attack on his parents, but it's nice to see how the Bloody Mist has rubbed off on him. :3

    Also I thought he was Talon Du'Coteau. Not a big thing, but I think Du'Coteau sounds better than Noxus.
    where all the jutsu are you have it hiden how do i do that? and why can i have an unknown village of birth i just though making up a tiny village would be better then unknown

    i kinda lika noxus sounds more assassiny hehe and du coteau is katarinas last name and he joined the family but he isnt part of the family ya know
     
         

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    Re: Talon Noxus

    You can do it better.
     
         

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    "Give it back," you
    lament. "I've had
    enough," you wail. You
    think I care? That is fate!
    This terrible, brittle, puny
    story is the real thing!
     



    Re: Talon Noxus

    That's using spoiler tags.
    "[spoiler]this is hidden[/spoiler]" will give:
    this is hidden


    If you really want to make it so it looks pretty, it's not that hard. Just experiment with the BBcodes the reply section gives you.

    Quote Originally Posted by Thoth View Post
    You can do it better.
    You're really going to go there? It seems like he's new to vBulletin forums in general and isn't familiar with all the codes, so you go criticize what it looks like. Your bio probably looked similar to this when you first made it, so you can't exactly judge.
     
         
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    Re: Talon Noxus

    nice bio it doesn't need to look fantastic
     
         

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    Re: Talon Noxus

    needs more
     
         

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    Re: Talon Noxus

    how do i know if this will be approved and how long does it take =/
     
         

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