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    Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

    Chapter opens up to Kakashi, Obito and Naruto.

    Naruto: Let's finish this Kakashi-sensei

    Obito: Naruto. You're full of it. Like always. DIE!

    Obito performs multiple handseals and unleashes Kamui. He unleashes a mokuton jutsu that causes a spiraling storm of branches to impale both Kakashi and Naruto.

    Kakashi: !!

    Naruto: Out of the Way!!

    Naruto: Knocks Kakashi out of the way and his Kage bunshin is impaled by the branches.

    Obito: You lived long enough Uzumaki.

    - Scene switches to Madara -

    Madara: That technique wasn't ninjutsu. What an expert fighter.

    Guy: There's more where that came from!

    Madara: Don't get too full of yourself.

    Guy unleashes another Noon Tiger as Madara powers up his Susanoo to deflect it.

    Madara: Heh!

    Guy: *Pant* *pant*

    -Scene switches to Gyuuki's mind-

    Gyuuki: Bee we must stop Madara somehow.

    Bee: The only way to deal with him is to seal him.

    Gyuuki: He has another weakness.

    Bee: ?!

    Gyuuki: Remember when Naruto asked us about the Third Raikage and how he got that scar?

    Bee: Yo' yeah!

    Gyuuki: The question that remains is how Madara died..

    -Scene switches to Madara-

    Madara: This battlefield is getting to emotional and flashy. It's time for you ALL to fear the true power of the Uchiha!

    Naruto: This bastard is annoying!!!

    - Scene switches -

    Gyuuki: Kurama how did Madara die?

    Kurama: Hell if I know! I heard that the First Hokage impaled him in his right abdomen.

    Gyuuki: That's it! Naruto! Aim for that spot!

    Naruto: I have to get close to him!

    - Scene switches to Obito -

    Obito looks towards Gedo Mezo

    It's almost ready.

    Gedo Mezo takes an obsidian hue striking fear into our heroes hearts.

    Madara: OBITO! LET'S FINISH THIS ALREADY!

    Obito: Makes an ominous facial expression.

    Kakashi: Since you won't tell me. I'll have to use this technique to stop you!

    Kakashi begins to power up with Chakra

    Obito: !!

    Naruto: !!!

    Madara: ...

    - Next time - Kakashi's Technique // Climax of the Battle is the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

    This was quite intresting,im not kidding, but i think that there are too many scene skips. As for the story line, Really good!!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

    Madara would never call Gai an expert fighter. Madara can only call himself such.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

    Way too many transitions.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

    Interesting story. ^__^
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

    I really like it! Good job.
     
         

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