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    1. #1
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      Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

      Chapter opens up to Kakashi, Obito and Naruto.

      Naruto: Let's finish this Kakashi-sensei

      Obito: Naruto. You're full of it. Like always. DIE!

      Obito performs multiple handseals and unleashes Kamui. He unleashes a mokuton jutsu that causes a spiraling storm of branches to impale both Kakashi and Naruto.

      Kakashi: !!

      Naruto: Out of the Way!!

      Naruto: Knocks Kakashi out of the way and his Kage bunshin is impaled by the branches.

      Obito: You lived long enough Uzumaki.

      - Scene switches to Madara -

      Madara: That technique wasn't ninjutsu. What an expert fighter.

      Guy: There's more where that came from!

      Madara: Don't get too full of yourself.

      Guy unleashes another Noon Tiger as Madara powers up his Susanoo to deflect it.

      Madara: Heh!

      Guy: *Pant* *pant*

      -Scene switches to Gyuuki's mind-

      Gyuuki: Bee we must stop Madara somehow.

      Bee: The only way to deal with him is to seal him.

      Gyuuki: He has another weakness.

      Bee: ?!

      Gyuuki: Remember when Naruto asked us about the Third Raikage and how he got that scar?

      Bee: Yo' yeah!

      Gyuuki: The question that remains is how Madara died..

      -Scene switches to Madara-

      Madara: This battlefield is getting to emotional and flashy. It's time for you ALL to fear the true power of the Uchiha!

      Naruto: This bastard is annoying!!!

      - Scene switches -

      Gyuuki: Kurama how did Madara die?

      Kurama: Hell if I know! I heard that the First Hokage impaled him in his right abdomen.

      Gyuuki: That's it! Naruto! Aim for that spot!

      Naruto: I have to get close to him!

      - Scene switches to Obito -

      Obito looks towards Gedo Mezo

      It's almost ready.

      Gedo Mezo takes an obsidian hue striking fear into our heroes hearts.

      Madara: OBITO! LET'S FINISH THIS ALREADY!

      Obito: Makes an ominous facial expression.

      Kakashi: Since you won't tell me. I'll have to use this technique to stop you!

      Kakashi begins to power up with Chakra

      Obito: !!

      Naruto: !!!

      Madara: ...

      - Next time - Kakashi's Technique // Climax of the Battle is the next chapter
       
           

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      Uchiha Madara IS THE BEST Klubargutan's Avatar
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      Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

      This was quite intresting,im not kidding, but i think that there are too many scene skips. As for the story line, Really good!!!
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

      Madara would never call Gai an expert fighter. Madara can only call himself such.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

      Way too many transitions.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

      Interesting story. ^__^
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 609 - Golden Nugget

      I really like it! Good job.
       
           

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