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    [Rain Test] - Better

    Greetings, Better

    I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

    -Rei's R&R
    -You may only use water, wind, nin, tai and gen
    -You may use custom jutsu only if they are related to the above techs.
    -Breaking the rules will result in the failure of the test.
    -I will be using all 5 elements

    Please do not spam this fight. Only Myself, the participant, Admins, Mods, and Senseis (upon request) may post here.

    I'll be using my Misaki Yata Kiyoshi (left dot in sig) biography
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    State your biography and I will begin.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Gin bio in sig

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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Misaki starts off by releasing his chakra into the earth below you, causing the ground to begin to spiral inwards on itself, creating a circular antlion that begins to suck your surroundings into the depths of the earth. The antlion created has a radius of about 4 meters, with you being dead center. While doing this; just after having performed the Ram handseal for the techniques initiation, Misake continues on to launch three explosive tagged projectiles towards you. One Kunai aimed to rain down from above in a parabolic arc, while the other two are shurikens that are thrown in parabolic arcs to approach from your left and right respectively.


    (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.


    Misaki then finishes off by creating a Tornado of wind above you, the Tornado is created slightly behind you and thus descends from the sky at a slight angle being aimed directly at you.


    (Fūton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto) - Wind Style: Severing Pressure
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the environment stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Scaze View Post
    Misaki starts off by releasing his chakra into the earth below you, causing the ground to begin to spiral inwards on itself, creating a circular antlion that begins to suck your surroundings into the depths of the earth. The antlion created has a radius of about 4 meters, with you being dead center. While doing this; just after having performed the Ram handseal for the techniques initiation, Misake continues on to launch three explosive tagged projectiles towards you. One Kunai aimed to rain down from above in a parabolic arc, while the other two are shurikens that are thrown in parabolic arcs to approach from your left and right respectively.


    (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.


    Misaki then finishes off by creating a Tornado of wind above you, the Tornado is created slightly behind you and thus descends from the sky at a slight angle being aimed directly at you.


    (Fūton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto) - Wind Style: Severing Pressure
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the environment stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.
    As i feel the the ground shake, i know i'm in trouble so get on my tippy toes in a running stance ,take out my shinso (CW but in this fight its a regular wazishiki) and turn inside the right side my body while making fist and punching downward towards the ground release a wind in an angle that hits the ground and that launchs me forward towards you, (if there is any incoming shuriken, i deflect it with my sword). I then while going towards you, swing my sword toward you launching a wind attack.

    (Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
    Rank: B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

    (Fūton: Senmōfū) - Wind Release: Rotating Ferocious Wind
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user concentrates wind chakra into their sword/s and releases the chakra by slashing down infront of them to create a large gust of wind.

    following my wind, i take my left hand and release a water wave that heads towards my wind combining with it.

    (Suiton: Suihachi) – Water Release: Hand of waves
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: the user will produce a fairly powerful jet of water from the user's hand.
     
         
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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    As i feel the the ground shake, i know i'm in trouble so get on my tippy toes in a running stance ,take out my shinso (CW but in this fight its a regular wazishiki) and turn inside the right side my body while making fist and punching downward towards the ground release a wind in an angle that hits the ground and that launchs me forward towards you, (if there is any incoming shuriken, i deflect it with my sword). I then while going towards you, swing my sword toward you launching a wind attack.

    (Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
    Rank: B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

    (Fūton: Senmōfū) - Wind Release: Rotating Ferocious Wind
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user concentrates wind chakra into their sword/s and releases the chakra by slashing down infront of them to create a large gust of wind.

    following my wind, i take my left hand and release a water wave that heads towards my wind combining with it.

    (Suiton: Suihachi) – Water Release: Hand of waves
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: the user will produce a fairly powerful jet of water from the user's hand.

    ~_~ Senpuken
    ~~~~

    Misaki seeing you release a hurricane from your fist so as to launch yourself towards him, simply responds by quickly slamming his palms on the earth causing a thin wall of earth to rise roughly two meters infront of your original position. The wall of earth would rise at an angle seeing as it erupts from one of the Antlion's sides. The wall of earth ascends to be roughly 5 meters tall and is only three inches thick while spanning to be roughly 2 meters long. Seeing as you'd be flying by propulsion of a hurricane, and seeing as an Antlion is raging beneath you, you wouldn't feel or see the vibrations, or at least you'd be hard pressed to do so. The wall would rise moments before you reach its spot, giving you only a few moments of reaction time. The Shuriken that were thrown towards you would find themselves embedded in the opposite side of the wall, and thus wouldn't make it towards you. Due to the wall being relatively thin you'd most likely cause it to crack when you crash into it, that coupled with the Antlion dragging everything towards its center and the explosion of the shurikens would probably result in the wall collapsing on you, pushing you towards the ground and thus the antlion. Resulting in you being swept away in a small tide of rubble downwards towards the Antlions center.


    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


    After having caused the wall to rise, Misaki continues by multiplying the Kunai that he threw in a parabolic arc into the sky. Causing it to duplicate into a thousand Kunai that all rain down from above on the Antlion's vicinity. Of course all of the Kunai like the original are set to explode upon reaching the ground.


    (Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a thousand shadow clones from one shuriken after performing Ram → Rat → Bird → Boar → Tiger, striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal.
     
         
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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Scaze View Post

    ~_~ Senpuken
    ~~~~

    Misaki seeing you release a hurricane from your fist so as to launch yourself towards him, simply responds by quickly slamming his palms on the earth causing a thin wall of earth to rise roughly two meters infront of your original position. The wall of earth would rise at an angle seeing as it erupts from one of the Antlion's sides. The wall of earth ascends to be roughly 5 meters tall and is only three inches thick while spanning to be roughly 2 meters long. Seeing as you'd be flying by propulsion of a hurricane, and seeing as an Antlion is raging beneath you, you wouldn't feel or see the vibrations, or at least you'd be hard pressed to do so. The wall would rise moments before you reach its spot, giving you only a few moments of reaction time. The Shuriken that were thrown towards you would find themselves embedded in the opposite side of the wall, and thus wouldn't make it towards you. Due to the wall being relatively thin you'd most likely cause it to crack when you crash into it, that coupled with the Antlion dragging everything towards its center and the explosion of the shurikens would probably result in the wall collapsing on you, pushing you towards the ground and thus the antlion. Resulting in you being swept away in a small tide of rubble downwards towards the Antlions center.


    (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.


    After having caused the wall to rise, Misaki continues by multiplying the Kunai that he threw in a parabolic arc into the sky. Causing it to duplicate into a thousand Kunai that all rain down from above on the Antlion's vicinity. Of course all of the Kunai like the original are set to explode upon reaching the ground.


    (Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a thousand shadow clones from one shuriken after performing Ram → Rat → Bird → Boar → Tiger, striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal.
    After i used hurricane fist, i know that at the moment i'm free from your antlion so, i look forward, i see the wall rise up in front of me so i put my sword in my left hand while simultaneously turning my head to the right and blow out wind that sends me to the left avoiding the wall and the kunais that rain down from above, also leaving the antlion behind.

    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

    While i blow myself out the way, as soon as i come into view of you, i swipe my right hand in a manner that creates a wind blade and as i travels to you, I land on the ground and slam my hand on the ground and summon water 10 feet above you, afterward, i start running towards you while keeping my eye on you, i throw 2 kunai infused with wind towards your location, aimed for your knees.

    (Fūton: Kaze No Yaiba) - Wind Style: Wind Blade
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.

    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

    Trying to end me right off the bat? tsk tsk
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Quote Originally Posted by Better View Post
    After i used hurricane fist, i know that at the moment i'm free from your antlion so, i look forward, i see the wall rise up in front of me so i put my sword in my left hand while simultaneously turning my head to the right and blow out wind that sends me to the left avoiding the wall and the kunais that rain down from above, also leaving the antlion behind.

    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

    While i blow myself out the way, as soon as i come into view of you, i swipe my right hand in a manner that creates a wind blade and as i travels to you, I land on the ground and slam my hand on the ground and summon water 10 feet above you, afterward, i start running towards you while keeping my eye on you, i throw 2 kunai infused with wind towards your location, aimed for your knees.

    (Fūton: Kaze No Yaiba) - Wind Style: Wind Blade
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangibility.

    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

    Trying to end me right off the bat? tsk tsk
    ~_~ Kaze Ogawa
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    Misaki finds it peculiar that the wall doesn't collapse as he initially planned. So rather than multiplying his Kunai, he simply decides to create a clone directly in-front of him who he initially plans to use for reconnaissance so as to survey your situation and check if you're dead or alive and if alive to check for your whereabouts.


    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    However, heartbeats later he begins to make out a shadow on the far right of the wall, and before long he begins to make out the edges of a cloak or some sort of clothing emerging from behind the wall. As such he quickly manipulates his chakra while performing a single handseal so as to make himself invisible. During which time, as expected he sees you sailing out from behind the wall and away from the Antlion onto safe ground, propelled by a small stream of wind. You'd have to keep your head facing to the left to propel yourself to the right (ling's view) and of course Ling's clone would be standing directly in-front of him.


    (Meisaigakure no Jutsu) - Hiding with Camouflage Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user after performing the Tiger hand seal to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. However, the usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills. The Second Tsuchikage, Mū's mastery of this technique helped earn him the moniker "Non-Person" seemingly having neither form nor chakra while the technique was active. Thus, he could not be sensed through traditional means.
    Note: Technique lasts a total of 3 turns


    By the time that you create and launch your wind blade, Misaki would've been long gone from his clone's position. Instead he'd be stealthily approaching in a wide arc at a exceedingly fast pace so as to flank you from your right. Meanwhile his clone would begin to charge directly towards your wind blade, throwing a barrage of wind infused explosive tagged Kunai's and Shurikens with full force, aimed towards the ground a meter to your left in such a way that they'd simply circumvent your wind blade. The Kunai are aimed to fall from the sky in a parabolic arc, while the shurikens are all launched in a parabolic arc to swing in to position from the left. As I near you I begin to channel wind chakra towards my leg, coating it in wind as I perform a counter-clockwise flying spin kick with my right leg towards the right side of your rib cage and your right arm. You'd be completely caught off guard as you'd be smugly thinking that you've successfully crushed me under your water while being on complete unawares to my actual position. My leg would slice deep into your arm and torso, sending you rocketing towards the left, which is where all the Kunai and Shuriken would be heading towards to detonate. The detonation would be timed perfectly. So that as you fly towards the designated projectile spot the explosion would occur sending you hurtling back to the right, which would be towards me. At which point I would've already landed and launched myself backwards nimbly with my left foot, spinning my body clockwise so as to deliver a spinning back kick with my right leg to the same side of your body, motioning the whole of my body to the right as I do so, slicing even deeper this time and hitting you with such force that you'd be launched towards the Antlion; your grave.


    (Futon: Kōha Senkaigiri) - Wind Release: Hardliner Revolving Cut
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user covers their leg with wind chakra and strikes a powerful kick to the opponent. This kick was powerful enough to slice through a mechanical puppet.


    You're like a bug, you just won't stay down and you just keep flying around.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    Alright, I'm submitting this for grading. I can see a couple of mistakes myself, and there's several things I'm dubious about. However hopefully it's just minor, I wish you the best of luck and I hope you pass, I had a good time. ^.^
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] - Better

    -Test Passed-

    Minor mistakes here and there, nothing major really, no wrong usage of wind and water with a moderate overall RP knowledge, i kind of disagree on your usage of the Thousand Feeding Sharks out of the Exploding Water Colliding Wave technique after you've blown half of it in that water vortex, but it makes a really big water source, so some of the sharks will be formed while others wouldn't, be sure you use a really big water source to generate a technique like that in the future.

    And note to Scaze, hell of a job on the test man, *salutes*
     
         

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