Hello everyone! And bah God the voting is close I'm actually doing well and this is my first contest. I just don't know who to vote for I may have to give it to micheal The Cobra loves his story.
Alright, Cobra...I have left my critique on your chapter one. It's a general critique because there's some stuff to refine before I start picking things apart one piece at a time.
Originally Posted by serenaandrosie
yes it is a close one
Thank you for your vote
@ S.Train did not reply to my post
I'm sorry! I didn't mean to ignore you, I read your post...I just didn't respond to it...sowwy...
Alright, Cobra...I have left my critique on your chapter one. It's a general critique because there's some stuff to refine before I start picking things apart one piece at a time.
I'm sorry! I didn't mean to ignore you, I read your post...I just didn't respond to it...sowwy...
Yes! However I understand....The Cobra can't wait for you to tear it apart lol
Alright, Cobra...I have left my critique on your chapter one. It's a general critique because there's some stuff to refine before I start picking things apart one piece at a time.
I'm sorry! I didn't mean to ignore you, I read your post...I just didn't respond to it...sowwy...
thats ok so how have you been S.Train did you like the transformation clips
Yes! However I understand....The Cobra can't wait for you to tear it apart lol
Well, you want to tear it apart first before I do...I don't think you're ready for that just yet, it will get rather gory. Also, work on that character description...I have no idea what anyone looks like.
Originally Posted by serenaandrosie
thats ok so how have you been S.Train did you like the transformation clips
Of course I liked them. ^_^ I'm doing good...wish I could start writing again though... and you?