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      Welcome Shin Chan



      Basic Information
      Name: Shinnosuke sarutobi
      Nickname: fearless warrior
      Gender: Male
      Age: 5 years old
      Clan: sarutobi

      Looks:
      Shinnosuke sarutobi is a small boy. he has black hair and black eyes. he likes to wear his favorite shirt almost everyday. he is also not the tallest shinobi there is.




      Personality: He is 5 years old and loves chocolate biscuits, especially "Chocobi" and a TV superhero named "Action Kamen Rider", but he absolutely hates green peppers. He is attracted to older girls and women, despite his young age, and pays no attention to girls of his own age. He brazenly pursues any girl who catches his eye.Some of his strange activities include dressing up (often as an animal), mooning and drawing an elephant's face on his skin, using his penis as the trunk which he calls him "Mr. Elephant". He also makes trouble for others and then criticizes their efforts in covering for him. In general, he is brutally honest, highly curious, and has no shame whatsoever, which includes getting rid of his clothes at the earliest opportunity.On rare occasions, he displays bouts of selfless kindness.There are also times when he displays a level of maturity beyond his usual self in his concern for others, and in a few rare instances he shows that deep down he really does care for his family, despite his constant disrespect towards them.

      Village Info.
      Village of Birth: konoha
      Village of Alliance: Sunagukare

      Rank//Chakra Info.
      Ninja Rank: S-class
      Specialty: /
      Elements: Fire - needs training
      Your ninjutsu:

      (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
      Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

      (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

      (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

      (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:N/A
      Damage Points:N/A
      The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

      (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

      (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

      (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
      Rank:E
      Type:Supplementary
      Range:Short
      Chakra Cost:5
      Damage Points:N/A
      Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


      Background Info.
      when it comes to the shinobi life he can be pretty serious.Even tho he has not been in battle he takes care of his body and tries to train everyday of the week. he loves women but that wont stop him from becoming the best shinobi there is. everyday he wakes up ready for battle.His friends also call him the fearless warrior.He is a proud member of the sarutobi clan. one of his goals is also to surpass the third hokage and to be known as the leader of the clan.

      he became one of the most known kids in the village. he grew up with lot of people hating him because of his skills and because he made fun of others.as he grew he started to see that the most important thing in his life is the clan and the village.The more time he spent with his clan memebers and the villagers the more he loved them.His father says that the day he becomes a man he will be known in the whole world.At the age of two e said his first two words and they were greatest shinobi. At 5 years old his consired a genius and has recived comparison to itachi uchiha as one of the youngest shinobis to become a genin.

      He also has a lot of hubbies and those are to train, chase women, mess with people, eating ramen,meditate, and also seeking knowledge about life.His first mission was consider a success and it was one of the most impressive things a genin had accomplished as such a young age.He also recived an award for saving one of the elders and was praised by the villagers.Even tho he knows his not perfect he still tries to win over the rest of the villagers but still messes up when he makes fun of them or destroys something of theirs.



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      Theme Song and Background Music:




      Battles

      Won: None
      Lost: None

      ~Approved~ edited stuff, I love that lil' bugger, too bad his creator died a few years ago.
       
           
      Last edited by Caliburn; 12-04-2012 at 06:26 PM.

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      Re: Welcome Shin Chan

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      nice bio
       
           

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      i know it's not perfect and sorry about that this is my first try
       
           

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      i cant believe youre actually using shin chan... havent seen that show for ages
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by kuramauzumaki07 View Post
      i cant believe youre actually using shin chan... havent seen that show for ages
      yes i wanted to try something different and i hope this works
       
           

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      Oh my god, this is the best Bio on the base, i gotta admit it, you are a genus!! Damn this is funny
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by megaamine View Post
      Oh my god, this is the best Bio on the base, i gotta admit it, you are a genus!! Damn this is funny
      lol i really dont agree that is the best but i did try lol. im glad you like it:D
       
           

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      It's quite incomplete and you need to determine which type of existing jutsu would fit the character best.
      The background history is sub par and has little to no explanation to him as a shinobi.
      You need to add a description of what he looks like.
      Determine clan and fill in the history based on it.
       
           

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      Re: Welcome Shin Chan

      Quote Originally Posted by -The Light- View Post
      i know it's not perfect and sorry about that this is my first try
      Oh i'm not critisizing i'm shocked that you picked this character
       
           

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      Re: Welcome Shin Chan

      Quote Originally Posted by Hipster Madara View Post
      It's quite incomplete and you need to determine which type of existing jutsu would fit the character best.
      The background history is sub par and has little to no explanation to him as a shinobi.
      You need to add a description of what he looks like.
      Determine clan and fill in the history based on it.
      . What she said and nice creativity. :D

      What show is that character from?
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by Ldude View Post
      . What she said and nice creativity. :D

      What show is that character from?
      shin chan
       
           

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      The whole jutsu area still needs revising.
      The history isn't really history, just what he's like in battle.
      Can't be born in Sunagakure and be Sarutobi...
       
           

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      Shin Chan is awesome. This pretty good man.
       
           

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      This is pretty cool this was an every now and then show for me but I like the bio
       
           

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      I loled so hard. I dont know if hed make a good shinobi though. He looks to flimsy…>_>
       
           

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      i like the super outfit make me think of Action Bastard
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by Cursed Prince View Post
      I loled so hard. I dont know if hed make a good shinobi though. He looks to flimsy…>_>
      i think he would be ok. trust me he has some serious skills
       
           

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      The Awesome Caliburn (guy who accepts/declines bio's) said this to me:

      Quote Originally Posted by caliburn
      that bio that had its own version of the canon history.

      It has to fit in the Narutoverse. The only persons who can write Naruto history that doesn't really follow the Naruto plot are people who have been RPing for a while and have enough NB RP experience to write complete custom histories of their own adventures. However when they do that they can't mix it up with contradictory canon history. What you did was editing the canon history to things that aren't even possible or are illogical following the manga.

      Canon bio's always follow the canon history. Custom bio's or make custom histories that can fit the canon history or make a complete NB custom history (though still within the Naruto context) that have no direct relations with the canon history.

      For some who is new a simple canon character bio like Azuma or Zabuza are good starters. Another option is a very simplistic custom bio. I don't advice an Uchiha bio as your first, but if you really want to you or take a very simplistic custom Uchiha bio or make a Sasuke/Itachi/Kakashi bio (without MS). You don't need to overly customize your bio, if you just copy the template and fill it in correctly, it's enough to get it approved.
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by PuppyDogGeneral View Post
      The Awesome Caliburn (guy who accepts/declines bio's) said this to me:
      so this means im ****ed then
       
           

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      The background is like a personality, the specialty is supposed to be what what u specialize in battle. Otherwise pretty good I guess.
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by PresidentBush View Post
      The background is like a personality, the specialty is supposed to be what what u specialize in battle. Otherwise pretty good I guess.
      thanks
       
           

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      Awesome... nice bio bro
       
           

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      very nice job for a first time though its missing some things
       
           

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      Whoa. I have not seen that cartoon guy in a long, long time.
      Nice bio mate, could work a bit on the history though.
       
           

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      Dammit it >_< I was gonna make him.

      Awesome character choice
       
           

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