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    Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    This will be a two-part battle. Lordlloyd7 requested this dream battle and I'm sure am glad he did. Hashirama vs Hiruzen always make for an intense debate, although I believe that Hashirama easily beats Hiruzen. If you wish to request a battle, post here.


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    A 14-year-old Hiruzen walks the streets of Konoha by himself, heading for the Hokage Mansion. As he roams the village, he thinks back to when his deceased father, Sasuke Sarutobi, told him that he has more great potential to one day achieve the title of Hokage.

    Hiruzen: (Dad, did you really believe that I have what it takes to become Hokage?)

    Hiruzen looks up to at the Hokage Monument, staring into the single, giant stone face of the Hokage, Hashirama Senju.

    Hiruzen: (Hashirama-sama, I will surpass you and become a fine Hokage. Not for myself, but for my father and the entire village! No doubt about it!)

    The promising prodigy arrives at the mansion. Two Akimichi shinobi guard the entrance, but lets Hiruzen right through, being that Hiruzen regurlarly visits the first Hokage.

    Hiruzen enters the Hokage's office and is disappointed to see Hashirama analyzing and signing scrolls, which is part of his duty as the leader of Konoha.

    Hashirama: Greetings, young Sarutobi. How's your morning been so far?

    Hiruzen: ....Fine, I guess.

    The legendary wood release user studies Hiruzen's face.

    Hashirama: Your face gives the expression that you are not fine.

    Hashirama puts down his writing brush and scroll to give Hiruzen his full attention.

    Hashirama: Now, tell me, what is it that is bothering you?

    Hiruzen: There's no fooling you, Hashirama-sama. Well, I was thinking earlier how I much stronger I can be. Tobirama-sensei has been to busy with his jutsu experiments to train me recently. Danzo, Kagami, and the others are soon to pass me up. How can I achieve becoming Hokage one day if I can't even achieve to be the best my peers?

    Hashirama: I see. Hiruzen boy, you have more potential than you can fathom. Strength is not what you are required to possess to become a Hokage. The only thing that is necessary is an overwhelming Will of Fire. Though, if the only way I can get you to begin believing in yourself is to train your shinobi abilities, then so be it.

    Hashirama rises from his seat.

    Hashirama: Follow me.

    Hiruzen: Really!? You're the best, Hashirama-sama! Please don't tell Tobirama-sensei I told you that.

    Hashirama chuckles.

    The living legend leads Hiruzen to a large open field in the Fire Country. The surrounding forest was created by Hashirama, every single tree.

    Hashirama leaps to the northern edge of the field, leaving Hiruzen at the southern edge. Then, Hashirama turns around to face Hiruzen.


    Hashirama: Prepare yourself, young one. I will not hold back much. Being the extraordinary Sarutobi that he was, your father reached his prime at around your age and stayed there until his death at age 36. So, I have no doubt that you are at your prime or near it at this very moment. You have your Sarutobi blood to thank for that, but your sheer determination is even more responsible for your amazing abilities.

    Hiruzen: I've never been more ready in my life, Hashirama-sama. Here I come!

    Hiruzen charges Hashirama.



    To be continued...
     
         
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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Best Fan Fic writer on this site, if you wrote a novel I would definitely be hooked up on it good job man-Good job.
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Quote Originally Posted by James Harrsion View Post
    Best Fan Fic writer on this site, if you wrote a novel I would definitely be hooked up on it good job man-Good job.
    Thank you so much, dude. You don;t know how much that means to me. My dream is actually to write a successful, epic series of novels. I hate to admit it, but I have low self-esteem. But, feedback like yours are such confidence-boosters! God bless you, man.
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    eh...starts kinda slow...
    ill read the next chapter since ur pretty good at making action in FF's
    make it SO awesome that it makes me think prodigies reborn is nothing compared to this FF
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Quote Originally Posted by -Carnage- View Post
    eh...starts kinda slow...
    ill read the next chapter since ur pretty good at making action in FF's
    make it SO awesome that it makes me think prodigies reborn is nothing compared to this FF
    Will do, man.
    Damn, some people are harsh. Well, f*ck them. LOL.
    I was just in the moment, but I'll get over my *****ing soon enough.
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    ItachiLeeHatake one of the reasons your FF are so readable and enjoyable is that you're about to catch the essence of the character themselves it honestly feels like i'm reading manga without the pictures without the imagery but pure imagination - keep up the good work Kishimoto
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Quote Originally Posted by Ultimate uzumaki form View Post
    ItachiLeeHatake one of the reasons your FF are so readable and enjoyable is that you're about to catch the essence of the character themselves it honestly feels like i'm reading manga without the pictures without the imagery but pure imagination - keep up the good work Kishimoto
    :y
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Quote Originally Posted by Ultimate uzumaki form View Post
    ItachiLeeHatake one of the reasons your FF are so readable and enjoyable is that you're about to catch the essence of the character themselves it honestly feels like i'm reading manga without the pictures without the imagery but pure imagination - keep up the good work Kishimoto
    Thanks, dude! I try my best to percieve the characters' personalities correctly. Another great compliment that is greatly appreciated.
    Me on Kishi's level? That's too much. Give me another 10 years or so to become as great a writer as he is. I am using his series to write my FFs afterall.
    I will keep up the good work, for you beast, dedicated fans.:D
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Cobra approves!!! Keep up the great work man.
     
         

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    Re: Dream Battle #1: Hashirama vs Hiruzen

    Thanks for doing this man! Its awesome so far! Cant wait for part 2!
     
         

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