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    My first manga coloring!!

    this is my first manga coloring
    Cnc appreciated, but if ur gonna give cnc, please try to give me tips to improve instead of just telling me the flaws


    BTW...it was a request, so its not directly from the manga(i rendered, and combined two different panels)
    the manga pages i used were these
    http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/na...ke_Susanoo.jpg
    http://94.23.34.161/manga/mangas/Nar...%20Far/09a.png

    i combined the sasuke in the second manga page with the susano in the first page
    then i rendered it, and added text


     
         
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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    I like it bro... great job
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Wow, amazing job
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Very nice job
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    its nice can be better tho :P
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Good job. Looks like alot of effort was put in it.
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha GodxObito15 View Post
    I like it bro... great job
    thanks bro
    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuzetsu View Post
    Wow, amazing job
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    Quote Originally Posted by straightup View Post
    Good job. Looks like alot of effort was put in it.
    thanx
    and not really ...i did started it last night and did the finishing touches after school
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    Very nice job
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    Quote Originally Posted by the truth View Post
    its nice can be better tho :P
    thank you...but like i said..if ur gonna give cnc please tell me tips on how i can improve instead of just telling me the flaws
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    awesome work bro...
    if u didnt say 1st manga coloring ppl will think ur pro
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Quote Originally Posted by -Frost Knight- View Post
    awesome work bro...
    if u didnt say 1st manga coloring ppl will think ur pro
    ...thnx man
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Good job! ^-^
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Codawg View Post
    Good job! ^-^
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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    you do realize that the two links are the same pictures right? :lmao:
    but you did an awesome job bro, i think your a pro already, am so jealous
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    pretty neat dude! guhjob
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    impresseive job
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    ...../claps
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Quote Originally Posted by PowerGodLeader View Post
    you do realize that the two links are the same pictures right? :lmao:
    but you did an awesome job bro, i think your a pro already, am so jealous
    lol thnx i dint notice fixed it
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    pretty neat dude! guhjob
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    impresseive job
    i think so to
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    ...../claps
    O_o.../bows
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Nice job carnage
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

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    Nice job carnage
    thnx
     
         

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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    I like it. I have 3 criticisms (the suggestions are implied in the criticism):

    Criticism 1: The color of the Susano'o has, for me, too much purple. Or perhaps the purple is too strong. This is more of a subjective criticism.

    Criticism 2: It seems like Susano'o and Sasuke have different color styles. Have you ever played pokemoncard game? You'll know that different artists have different styles. That's what I mean: The Susano'o seems more like a manga, whereas Sasuke looks like an anime.

    Criticism 3: It looks like Sasuke is outside of the Susano'o. Do you see the first image? Notice how the lines on the body of Susano'o end around Sasuke? This gives the impression that Sasuke is enveloped by it. The lines in your image, however, actually continue and go behind Sasuke, which obviously gives the impression that Sasuke is outside and in front of Susano'o.

    Edit:

    Suggestion 1: I would take the SFX of the Chidori instead of the bubble from the first image. The "letters" look better from the SFX and besides, Sasuke isn't even speaking in your manga coloring image.

    Suggestion 2: Personally, I would change the font of the message "The power of the real Uchiha Clan" and the color as well. Actually, the fact that it's purple I think adds to the purpleness that was part of my criticism #1. Have some variety in color.

    Suggestion 3: Take out he "real" from the message. "The power of the Uchiha clan" is less verbose and more to the point. I know what you're getting at though: people like Kakashi and Danzo will never amount to the prowess of the Uchiha. I feel like it communicates the same thing without real. With "real" it's just more emphatic. This is just my perspective.
     
         
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    Re: My first manga coloring!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Guilty as Sin View Post
    I like it. I have 3 criticisms (the suggestions are implied in the criticism):

    Criticism 1: The color of the Susano'o has, more me, too much purple. Or perhaps the purple is too strong. This is more of a subjective criticism.

    Criticism 2: It seems like Susano'o and Sasuke have different color styles. Have you ever played pokemoncard game? You'll know that different artists have different styles. That's what I mean: The Susano'o seems more like a manga, whereas Sasuke looks like an anime.

    Criticism 3:It looks like Sasuke is outside of the Susano'o. Do you see he first image. Notice how the lines on the body of Susano'o end around Sasuke? This gives the impression that Sasuke is enveloped by it. The lines in your image, however, actually continue and go behind Sasuke, which obviously gives the impression that Sasuke is outside and in front of Susano'o.
    thanks great advice, u deserve rep

    ok that makes sense ...

    lol no i never played the card game and yep, it was easier to color sasuke so i guess i made it look too much like an anime

    it was actually part of the request to put sasuke in front of susano
    Edit:

    Suggestion 1: I would take the SFX of the Chidori instead of the bubble from the first image. The "letters" look better from the SFX and besides, Sasuke isn't even speaking in your manga coloring image.

    Suggestion 2: Personally, I would change the font of the message "The power of the real Uchiha Clan" and the color as well. Actually, the fact that it's purple I think adds to the purpleness that was part of my criticism #1. Have some variety in color.

    Suggestion 3: Take out he "real" from the message. "The power of the Uchiha clan" is less verbose and more to the point. I know what you're getting at though: people like Kakashi and Danzo will never amount to the prowess of the Uchiha. I feel like it communicates the same thing without real. With "real" it's just more emphatic. This is just my perspective.
    suggestion 1:i dont know how to edit the bubble

    suggestion 2: yeah..now that i look at it more...ur right, its waaay too much purple, what color would u suggest?

    suggestion 3:the text is the name of a group on NB its called "the real uchiha clan"
     
         
    Last edited by -Carnage-; 11-13-2012 at 11:56 PM.

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