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    1. #1
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      Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      Dust is swirling around the Juubi who is crouched, seemingly ready to spring into action. It's ten-tails are whipping around, causing the smoke to flush over the distressed heroes.

      Naruto: !

      Kakashi: We were too late?

      Gai (bloodied): Damn ...

      Bee: I thought we stopped it!

      Elsewhere in the woods ...

      Orochimaru: (Face blurs) This chakra ... ! It can't be.

      Sasuke: (Turning slightly) What is it?

      Suigetsu: (Sheepishly) Probably gonna try and take your body now ...

      Juugo: (Kabuto is on his back) . . . .

      Orochimaru: (Smiling) We must hurry. The end of the world is nigh.

      [The panel split's into a triangle showing Taka's faces, confused.]

      Sasuke: (Demanding) What are you talking about?!

      Orochimaru: (Turns and his tongue rolls out) Can't you feel it, Sasuke-kun?

      Sasuke: What?

      [He closes his eyes and focuses before opening them, revealing his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. A giant hand belonging to the Juubi crashes towards him, a malicious voice booming, "DIE!"]

      Meanwhile ...

      Naruto: (Grabs Kakashi) Move!

      [He jumps aside, nearly being flattened by the Juubi's palm.]

      Obito: (Phases through it)

      [The Earth sinks in, fissures tearing throughout the ground as it capsizes. It quickly locates Naruto's position, willing it's tails upward only to have them crash back down while he barely dodges, Kakashi flailing on his back.]

      Naruto: (Sweating and sorrounded by tails) It's Sharingan must have predicted my movements, but still, my speed kept us alive!

      Bee: (Shooting a bijuu-dama) Die Motha****a, die!!!

      [The black sphere races towards the Juubi and it bellows, the sound wave dispersing the energy ball and slamming into the eight-tails chest, sending him backward through forest and causing Gai to fall off of him.]

      Bee: Gyaah!

      [The Juubi's tails begin to pull, yanking the rock they were dug into out, the product, a ball the size of a mountain. Naruto forms tails out of the cloak and slams them into the mound to keep his balance. It flings the mountain towards Bee's and it slams on top of him, blood gushing out of his mouth.]

      Naruto: Woah!

      Kakashi: Kamui!

      [The two teleport away appearing next to Gai whom they also absorb up. The Juubi begins to charge it's own bijuu-dama which blots out the moon, cascading the area in darkness. It shoots it to the Hachibi who has reverted back too Bee.]

      Bee: !

      The explosion is similar to a nuclear bomb detonation complete with a mushroom cloud and radius. A giant hole is left in the Earth where the strike hit and nothing is left except the lava welling up over the edges.

      Madara: That's enough ... make it stop. Since your Rinnegan is directly tied to the beast, you can exert control over it.

      Obito: (Show's his Rinnegan) The creature falls back into a crouch, waiting.

      [A portal appears in the middle of the destruction. Four individuals appear, all who are badly injured and heavily damaged, including Bee whom they managed to save just before the attack hit]

      Naka Shrine ...

      Sasuke: Why are we here?

      Orochimaru: Patience. Juugo, take Kabuto to the orphanage we passed by outside the city gates and Suigetsu ... watch guard.

      Juugo: (Jumps away)

      Suigetsu: What? No way! I'm not leaving Sasuke alone with you, creeper!

      Sasuke: Just do it. (Turns) Let's go.

      [Inside, Orochimaru activates the trick to make the Stone Tablet appear.]

      Orochimaru: The better your Sharingan becomes, the more you can read ... I wonder what you'll see Sasuke-kun.

      Sasuke: (EMS) This is ... the Rinnegan, eh.
       
           
      Last edited by NamikazeNagato; 11-18-2012 at 02:00 PM.

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      Re: Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      That's actually really close to Kishi's writing style. Nice.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      Shit, this is the best thread for 610 that I have read. Good job
       
           

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      Re: Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      lol gai shirtless? kakashi without his mask?
       
           

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      Re: Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      Pretty accurate in terms of writing style.
       
           

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      Re Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      Naruto 610 Prediction
      A Chance For Change

      Obito - Yes
      Madara - Lets Begin
      Naruto - No Where To Late
      Gai - Aaag Can't Move
      Kakashi - The Chakra Is To Much
      Obito - We Can Create The Dream World
      Madara - Whats The We Thing
      Obito - What
      Naruto Clone - Wow It's Chakra Is So Peaceful
      Bee - Naruto Lets Run
      Naruto Clone - No Wait
      Madara - Jubi I Resurrect I Will Control You
      Obito - Wait This Isn't Part Of The Plan
      Madara - You Usefulness Has Come To A End
      Madara Cuts Obito's Hashirama Arm Off With His Susanoo Sword
      Obito - Aaagh!!!
      Kakashi - Obito!!!!
      Jubi - You The One With Rinnegan
      Madara - What You Pet
      Jubi Makes 7 Bijuu Dama's And Fires Them At Madara And A Massive Explosion
      Naruto Clone - Jubi
      Jubi - What Little One
      Jubi Has A Shocked Look
      Jubi - Rikudō Sennin You Live In This Boy
      Gyūki - Bee Run
      Kurama - Naruto Lets Go
      Naruto / Bee - No
      Naruto's Clone Pops
      Naruto - Jubi What Are You Going To Do
      Jubi - I Want To Leave There No More Need For The Bijuu So I'm Take Gyūki And
      Kurama
      Naruto - But Me Kurama Just Became Friends
      Madara - Your Not Going Anywhere Jubi Your Mine For The Taking
      Obito - Kakashi Get Away From Me
      Kakashi - No Let Us Help You
      Obito - I Said Stay Back You ****ing Trash
      Madara Turn On His Perfect Susanoo And Runs At The Jubi
      Jubi - Amaterasu Shinra Tensei
      Naruto - No Way
      Jubi Punch Madara's Perfect Susanoo And Completely Destroy It
      Jubi - Human Path
      Madara - Nooo!!!
      The Jubi Pulls Out Madara's Soul And Crushs It In Her Hand
      Jubi - Ok You
      Naruto - Me
      Jubi - Yes Come With Me
      Jubi Teleports Herself And Naruto To Her Own World
      Jubi - My Name Is Shinda
      Naruto - Nice To Meet You Shinda
      Shinda - Thank You Your Just Like Rikudō Sennin
      Naruto - How Did Grandpa Rikudō Sennin Become A Jinchūriki
      Shinda - Well He Stop The Other Human From Destroing My Temple But They Hurt Him Very Badly
      Naruto - How Didn't He Have Rinnegan
      Shinda - No
      Naruto - Why
      Shinda - Let Me Finish
      Naruto - Sorry
      Shinda - The Only Way To Save Was To Turn Him Into A Jinchūriki

      The End Next Week
      The Final Power Up
       
           
      Last edited by Syareoo; 11-20-2012 at 01:36 AM.

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      Re: Re Naruto: 610 --- Apocalypse

      Naruto 611 Prediction
      The Final Power Up

      Naruto - Sealed Your Self Inside Of Him To Save His Life
      Shinda - Yes
      Switch Over To Sasuke
      Sasuke - What Was That
      Orochimaru - God Damn It Tobi
      Jugo - It's A Giant Mass Of Chakra
      Suigetsu - Let Go Get It For Areself
      Orochimaru - Are You Stupid
      Sasuke - What Is It
      Orochimaru - A True God The Jubi
      Sasuke / Suigetsu / Jugo Have A Shocked Look
      Sasuke - Jubi How Is That
      Orochimaru - It's All 9 Bijuu Fused Together
      Switch Over To The Kages
      A - Hokage Why
      Tsunade - I Couldn't Let You All Die
      Gaara - ....
      Mei - Madara Was To Much
      Ōnoki - We Have To Stop Madara
      Tsunade - Tell Naruto He's The 6th Hokage
      Switch Over Killer Bee Gai Kakashi And Obito
      Kiler Bee - Ok Obito Give It Up
      Kakashi - Please Obito
      Explosion Happen Behind Them And Madara Jumps Out
      Madara - Damn The Jubi
      Obito - How Are You Alive
      Madara - The Jubi Attack A Wood Clone
      Then Killer Bee Gets Warped Away
      Madara - What
      Switch Over To Shinda And Naruto
      Killer Bee - Aaagh Jubi How Dare You
      Naruto - Calm Down Uncle Bee
      Shinda - Both Of You Relax
      Shinda Pull Gyūki And Kurama From Bee And Naruto Without Killing Them
      Kurama - Whats Happening
      Shinda Release The Other Bijuus And Absorb Gyūki And Kurama Chakra
      Shinda - Shukaku , Matatabi , Isobu , Son Gokū , Kokuō , Saiken , Chōmei , Gyūki , Kurama
      All Bijuu - What Jubi
      Shinda - For Starters My Name Is Shinda
      Shukaku - I Feel So Weak
      Shinda - Don't Get Worked Up All Of Your Chakra's Will Return Sooner Or Later
      Shinda - Naruto
      Naruto - What
      Shinda Fist Bumbs Naruto And Give Him Some Of Her Chakra
      Naruto - Why
      Shinda - So You Can End This War And If You Need More Chakra Or To Summon Me Feel Free To
      Shinda - Bee Hear
      Killer Bee - What
      Shinda - Some Of Gyūki Chakra
      Matatabi - So Only Naruto Can Summon Us
      Shinda - Yes
      Naruto - Here We Go
      Naruto Powers Up
      Son Goku - Wow His Chakra Bigger Then Before
      Shinda - Behold The Shairinnegan
      Naruto - Shairinnegan
      Shinda - It's Like All Shairgan And Rinnegan Power Fused Together
      Kurama - Good Bye Naruto
      Naruto - Not For Long Kurama I'll Come And Visit You Guys Bye Let Go Uncle Bee
      Naruto And Bee Appear In Front Of Madara And Obito
      Naruto - Lets Finish This Madara
      Madara - You Bastard You Absorb The Jubi
      Naruto - No I Didn't
      Killer Bee - I'll Let You Fight For Now
      Naruto - That Was A Wood Clone Shinda Killed
      Naruto - Shinra Tensei

      The End Next Week

      Rinnegan Vs Shairinnegan
       
           
      Last edited by Syareoo; 11-20-2012 at 01:40 AM.

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