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    610 and 611 predictions

    610 The Ones not Coming Home

    Orochimaru and Sasuke stand outside the remains of the Naka Shrine. Sasuke remarks in his mind that he never promised Naruto about not defending himself. Flash back to the K11 running towards Naruto's location. The elder's stand in Sasuke's path. Sasuke's eyes focus and he begins using a technique

    The sky darkens

    Hinata: Tsunade-sama's chakra...
    Sai (shocked): No way.
    Rock Lee: ?!

    Sakura, Tenten and Ino and Choji all rush towards Tsunade and the Kages. Shikamaru, Sai, Rock Lee, Kiba, Hinata and Akamaru continue to pursue Naruto.
    Sasuke: So, this is it...

    Orochimaru: Are you sure you want to know the truth? Once you enter, there's no turning back.

    Sasuke: Do it, or I'll put you back in Kabuto.

    Orochimaru smiles with his tongue out and enters
    Suigetsu: Here's the scroll, Sasuke! I still don't get why we have to travel with this creep.
    Jugo: ...

    The burning corpses of both elders are shown nearby. Orochimaru looks like he's having fun in a creepy way. Orochimaru and Sasuke enter the building and retrieve the tablet.

    Flash back to Kage's

    Tsunade: It should be enough...

    The other 4 Kage's seem like they're not dying, but not really able to move well or speak.

    Sakura: Sensei, what happened here?! (she looks like she's about to start crying)
    Tsunade: Sakura, come here..
    Ino is crying and Tenten appears to be consoling her.

    Tsunade takes Sakura's hand
    Tsunade: Don't cry, I've lived a long life. Madara is planning to destroy the entire shinobi as revenge against the 1st. You have to carry on the Will of Fire, for the future generations. Protect Narut-

    The slug summon lowers its head and Sakura starts sobbing uncontrollably after punching the ground and blowing a sizable amount of it away. Tsunade's hand loosens and she appears to be dead. The sky continues to darken.

    Flash to Kiba and Shikamaru's group jumping through the terrain quickly

    Shikamaru (looking unsettled): This is not good.
    Kiba:The smell of the Kyuubi is weakening quickly...
    Lee: We need to hurry and get to where Naruto is!
    Hinata: Naruto...

    They arrive in the clearing to see Naruto face up and unconscious on the ground, with the Nine tails just having finished being extracted from him. Killer Bee is visibly dead. Kakashi is unconscious and is picked up by Sai. Hinata runs to Naruto's side. Rock Lee rushes to Guy-sensei, who appears near death and surrounded by the Mokuton.

    Madara stands atop the refuse, arms extended and looking down with a falsely pleasant smile at the new arrivals. The moon stands closer to the Earth and casts an eerie shadow down over Naruto's body. The 10 tails roars to life behind Madara.

    611: Redemption

    Flashback to Obito and Madara (Kishi explaining how Obito went down and what happened)

    Naruto, Bee, Kakashi and Gai are not not able to be seen. Some time has gone by

    Obito: You... lunatic. You killed her, you killed Rin!
    Madara: What's that you said, trash should stay put right? Thanks for doing your part. (Madara makes a crooked smile)

    Obito (in thought panels): Don't worry, Kakashi. This time I'll protect them. I'll protect everyone. Image of Rin and Kakashi from Gaiden chapter and of child Obito admonishing Kakashi "those who don't protect their friends are worse than scum"

    Obito attacks Madara and a brief exchange of techniques takes place with Madara canceling most of them with the Preta path to block Obito's jutsu and Deva path to block the Mokuton. The fight ends abruptly when Madara uses Preta to cancel Obito's Kamui warp and avoid being absorbed and simultaneously using Shinra Tensei to violently impale Obito through the heart on his gunbai. Obito starts hacking up blood and has a single man tear rolling down from his remaining eye.

    Madara: Done already? Oh well, it will all end soon.
    Obito (thoughts) Sensei, I'm sorry... Kakashi... Rin.. Obito's face is panged with regret as he falls to the ground over 3 frames. I'm so sorry I couldn't protect them. He turns his face towards the now visually restrained-by-Mokuton Naruto. Bee's head is hanging and it seems the 8 tails has already been extracted.

    Obito (an ironic smile on his face): Save your friend...

    Obito falls to the ground, lifeless and dead, dropping first on his knees.

    Naruto struggles in futility as the Mokuton suppresses the Kyuubi chakra. The 9 tails mode at last breaks and Naruto begins to prepare sage energy while inert. Madara easily knocks Kakashi unconscious and restrains Guy.

    Later I plan to write what I'd like to see in 612, as a Sasuke/Oro chapter.
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    i like first part.
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    Nne can happen and the first prediction i dn't like.
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    unlikely to happen
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    Wow worst prediction i have read sorry dude. This is so anti naruto lol. You really think this will happen? atleast have a realistic power, we all know that naruto will not be defeated, or else the whole ninja world will go down.
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    i believe he will lose he has to so madara plans can be fulfilled and then naruto will beat a truly unbeatable enemy
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    anything is possible now right
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    Naruto can't beat the 10 tails. He had enough trouble fighting Obito alone. He has zero chance against Madara, in 9 tails mode he was barely faster than Raikage. Right now they either have the choice to run and regroup or get destroyed. I remain convinced that Kurama is going to get extracted and Naruto will have to discover his own strength without it and beat the 10 tails and Madara.

    Having the good guys always win and nobody die isn't this manga's style. At very least someone out of Guy, Kakashi, Naruto and Bee has to die in this battle.
     
         

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    Re: 610 and 611 predictions

    madara wouldnt be that OP that he would beat obito just like that. and kiling off two people?
     
         

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