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    Naruto Lost Chapters The Real Beginning (prelude)

    (I'm testing this out here, I hope you enjoy it) (If you do i'll make more chapters here, If not then I'll create a new story)



    -it all started the day tobi came to the leaf village and summoned the kyuubi-. noone knew what was going to happen except for minato who was prepared for the day as he was for warned in a dream.

    the day would pass by slowly until night time when a man in a mask appeared in his room- the man quickly dashed for kushina but minato stopped him before he could grab her- -tobi jumped back and then said to minato-

    Tobi: I see your quite fast. I've come here to kill your wife and take the 9 tails power to create the perfect world.

    Minato: The world is already perfect, the way it is.

    Tobi: Thats what you think. It's corrupted. thiers wars going on , hatred, and death . You really think the world is perfect? then you are very foolish and foolish people must die.

    Minato: Hmm. Well i know one thing i'm no fool and im not going to die , not by you .

    Tobi: We shall see.. at midnight i'll attack be ready.. -uses kamui to vanish-

    Kushina: That was creepy..

    Baby Naruto: -sleeping-

    Minato : I know. i better prepare for tonight. whoever that was. he's coming after you and i'll be ready .

    Tobi: -sitting in a field- pretty soon i will kill them all and take the 9 tails. after that collecting the other tail beast won;t be a problem.

    -meanwhile while all of this was happening-

    Itachi: I could of sworn.. i read that correctly -at the eye doctor-

    eye doctor: no its a f x v l you said a f g h o n your blind.

    Itachi: oh really -sharingan- -uses tsukiyomi on the doctor- -eyes turn normal- who's blind now? biatch.

    -the eye doctor passes out - i dont need any glasses, i'm perfectly fine.

    -later on- -midnight strikes-

    Tobi: It's time ..

    (End of chapter 1)


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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters The Real Beginning (prelude)

    Continue... Nice chapteer
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters The Real Beginning (prelude)

    Alright I'mma post chapter 2 in a minute i have like 10 chapters made so far.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters The Real Beginning (prelude)

    Wow! I like it very much! D
    Next chapter, next chapter!! :overjoy:
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters The Real Beginning (prelude)

    Alright imma post it in a sec
     
         

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