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    ,,For Ionia,,
    Basic Information
    Name:Kennen
    Nickname:Heart of the Tempest
    Gender:Male
    Age:21
    Clan:N/A

    Looks:A short man,with blue eyes and a purple suit.He has purple gloves and a yellow collar.

    Personality:He is a calm and laid back man,hyperactive when he has sweets.He can be serious at times when needed and wouldn't abandon a comrade.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth:Konoha
    Village of Alliance:Konoha

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank:Genin
    Specialty: /
    Elements: - needs training
    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




    Background Info.
    History:There exists an ancient order originating in the Ionian Isles dedicated to the preservation of balance. Order, chaos, light, darkness -- all things must exist in perfect harmony for such is the way of the universe. This order is known as the Kinkou and it employs a triumvirate of shadow warriors to uphold its causes in the world. Kennen is one of these shadow warriors, entrusted with the sacred duty of Coursing the Sun - tirelessly conveying the justice of the Kinkou.

    Kennen was born in Konoha and it is said that in his first living moments he bolted first from the womb and second from the midwife who delivered him. His parents had thought that he would outgrow his boundless energy, but as he matured, his energy found no limits. Despite his astonishing gifts, he remained unnoticed (or at least uncaught, as he was quite the prankster) until, on a dare, he ran straight up the great outer wall of the Placidium. When word of this feat reached Kinkou ears, Kennen was quickly and quietly brought for an audience. He found that the role of the Heart of the Tempest suited him, frenetically delivering both the word and the punishments of the Kinkou across the realm. He now works with his fellows Akali and Shen to enforce the balance of Valoran. This hallowed pursuit has unsurprisingly led the triumvirate to becoming a shinobi.

    "The Heart of the Tempest beats eternal... and those beaten remember eternally."

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    Battles

    Won: 0
    Lost: 0

    ~Approved~ edited stuff, have fun RPing.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 12-04-2012 at 08:46 PM.

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    Re: Nolexion

    This is my first attempt at making a bio,I searched for the rules but they didn't help me at all so please help :D
     
         

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    Re: Nolexion

    Eh... seems fine to me. You could work on the format a little more but thats just me. Although have you trained in Raiton and learned all those jutsu?
     
         
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    Re: Nolexion

    I also didn't learn any of these jutsus,I just placed them there :D
     
         

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    Re: Nolexion

    Quote Originally Posted by Nolexion View Post
    I also didn't learn any of these jutsus,I just placed them there :D
    Ok thats enough -_- I was about to say your good but you have to train with a Sensei to learn those jutsu and element. You can either learn them or take them off. I also doubt this will be approved now since you lied -_-
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nolexion View Post
    This is my first attempt at making a bio,I searched for the rules but they didn't help me at all so please help :D
    Talk to me tomorrow. Bios take like one week to get approved so by then i'll make sure your bio meets the standard for approval.
     
         

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    Re: Nolexion

    nice bio for first
     
         

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    Re: Nolexion

    Well I'll remove the jutsus then.And it isn't a lie if I confess :D
     
         

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    Re: Nolexion

    Question how is her nickname longer than her name? how is her name a short Kennen and she has some nick name"heart of the tempest?lol
     
         

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    Re: Nolexion

    it's a he btw
     
         

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    "Give it back," you
    lament. "I've had
    enough," you wail. You
    think I care? That is fate!
    This terrible, brittle, puny
    story is the real thing!
     



    Re: Nolexion

    Quote Originally Posted by Bearzz View Post
    Question how is her nickname longer than her name? how is her name a short Kennen and she has some nick name"heart of the tempest?lol
    Nickname can also be a title thing. "Pervy Sage" isn't shorter than Jiraiya's name but it's still considered a nickname.

    As for the bio, you just need to make sure the history ties in with the Narutoverse, so you can't mention how he made his way from Bandle City and got into Summoner's Rift. It doesn't have to be much, just make it tie into the Narutoverse.
     
         

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