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    Naruto Lost Chapters Chapter Three- Kyuubi Rampage

    Tobi: -Arrives in kohona at the trainning field- -Looks at Rin's grave- Your death will not go in vain~ - Pulls out a scroll- (Thinks - Kakashi i'm sorry i put such a difficult task in your hands) -Summons the kyuubi-

    Kyuubi (Roars) - (His roar creates a shockwave around the village)

    Iruka: Do you guys sense that? Such devastating chakra.

    fodder ninjas: Yeah. very sinster at that.

    Tobi: (Appears on top of the kyuubi and ,Heads towards the village)

    -Minato heading to the village as fast as he can-

    Tobi -Comes to a barrier- -Puts his hand on the barrier and phases through it with the Kyuubi-

    Danzo -Senses the 9 tails chakra- This is bad!

    Kohona Elders: I know I hope the village can take care of this problem on its own.

    -Kushina laying down, resting in the forest of death-

    Kushina: Minato becareful! -She smiles a bit-

    Tobi -Uses the kyuubi to attack villagers/fodder ninjas that get in his way- -Smack- Get Out Of My Way.

    -Villagers getting hit by the kyuubi-

    Kakashi- In the hospital- Whats going on outthere?

    Medical Ninja: It's nothing the others can handle it. You need to rest.

    Kakashi: Alright.

    Might Guy: -Looks at the masked man and the kyuubi- I'm going to stop you -Zooms towards the masked man-

    Tobi -Arms folded- -the kyuubi swats might guy into a building-

    -A group of ninja's surround tobi and the kyuubi and begin to make hand signs-

    Tobi - Looks Around-

    -The ninjas would tr and form a barrier around Tobi and The Kyuubi-

    Tobi: Think that'll stop me? The kyuubi roars and shatters the barrier and knocks the other ninja back- (Fire Style -Fire Ball Justu)

    (combines it with the roar of the kyuubi and it spreads across part of the village , setting buildings on fire ad killing some of the villagers) Burn filty village Burn for the sins that you commited. (Thinks- I should find kakashi and kill him. I cant allow him to live for he failed me. And failures must be punished) -heads off to find kakashi while still on the kyuubi-

    -Minato almost to the leaf village-

    Minato: -Sees a big cloud of smoke- Looks Like I'm a bit too late. -(pulls out a kunai) time for my Flying Thunder God techinque

    (End of Chapter Three)
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters Chapter Three- Kyuubi Rampage

    Awesome Dude I liked it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters Chapter Three- Kyuubi Rampage

    cool story bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters Chapter Three- Kyuubi Rampage

    wow sorry to say but this was really bad...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto Lost Chapters Chapter Three- Kyuubi Rampage

    Wat to say.,, make it more realistic. How abt some pics.
     
         

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