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    [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    *Was at school while making those deals. Is at home now.*

    So... CJ's eh? Who's going first?
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Genjutsu: Jaaku Shinkan| Illusionary Arts: Wicked Silence
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is a simple genjutsu technique, where the user injects their chakra in to their opponent, and then cause the opponent to feel as if their tongue is being rolled inside their mouth and being pulled in to their throat and feel as if they are choking on their tongue.
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Cookie..


    Okay. You ready?
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    (Doton: Daibingu Hebi) Earth Style: Diving Serpent
    Type: Offence, Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses doton chakra into the ground beneath them, and creates a large snake out of the earth. Then snake then "leaps" out of the earth in an arc, causing a large ruckus, landing back into the earth, and fusing back into it (as if it were never there). However, sensors are still able to see the snake-shaped chakra signature moving under the ground. The snake can leap out of the ground as often as the user likes, and can be used to defend up to A-rank jutsu (B-rank lightning). If the snake lands on an object which is not a part of the earth (ie. a tree or an opponent), the earth snake will crush it in it's path back into the earth.
    Note: ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Lasts three turns each time it's used (or until destroyed)
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    Jah.
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Quote Originally Posted by Cookie.. View Post
    Genjutsu: Jaaku Shinkan| Illusionary Arts: Wicked Silence
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is a simple genjutsu technique, where the user injects their chakra in to their opponent, and then cause the opponent to feel as if their tongue is being rolled inside their mouth and being pulled in to their throat and feel as if they are choking on their tongue.
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Cookie..
    Step one..., I'm going to perform it on you (So you can understand it's effects first hand).

    As you stand in front of me, I inject my chakra inside you. I then cause you to feel as if your tongue is being pulled down your throat/ trachea, causing you to feel as if you "swallowed your tongue" causing you to severely choke on your tongue as I cancel the technique.

    So how did it feel?
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Mystogan stands indifferently as the jutsu is used, and then looks to his right where Gildarts is on the ground, holding his throat.
    Whimp.

    Ga-hk... Kha...gah!

    It feels as though I'm suffocating, loosing the ability to breathe. This causes panic to arise, which takes over the reasoning center of the brain (of course douchbags are going to say they can focus fine under the influence of this gen. <.<). It essentially causes panic and makes it so the opponent is distracted to create an opening.
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Quote Originally Posted by Sharingdork View Post
    Mystogan stands indifferently as the jutsu is used, and then looks to his right where Gildarts is on the ground, holding his throat.
    Whimp.

    Ga-hk... Kha...gah!

    It feels as though I'm suffocating, loosing the ability to breathe. This causes panic to arise, which takes over the reasoning center of the brain (of course douchbags are going to say they can focus fine under the influence of this gen. <.<). It essentially causes panic and makes it so the opponent is distracted to create an opening.
    PERFECT! Exactly the answer I was looking for. When someone chokes on something they are eating, they normally drop everything and their attention is turned immediately to the throat, the eyes begin to water, chest starts paining, and so on.

    So a perfect time to use this, is to interrupt people's techniques. And of course, to create an easy opening. As it's actually really tricky to see it as a genjutsu. But of course, douchbags are going to somehow discover it ~_~*

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    So now, PERFORM THE TECHNIQUE ON MY CLOOOONE!!!! *Creates Clone*



    FINISH HIM
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    *Concentrating on my chakra, I clap my hands together dramatically, as I often do when a jutsu has no handseals as it feels wierd to do nothing. As I clap my hands, I release the chakra from my body, and out towards your clone. As my chakra reaches your clone's body, it immediately latches onto your clone's brain, searching for the part of the mind which controls the sense of feeling. As my chakra latches to the section of the brain, I use my tuned genjutsu expertise (yes, expertise. I am an NB Gen student...) to manipulate how your clone feels, causing the sensation of his tongue sliding back in his throat. As my chakra remains in his mind, he feels his tongue slide further and further down hiw throat, causing him to believe he is choking. As the genjutsu continues, he naturally feels panic, though this panic is created on his own, and not manufactured by my chakra like the choking sensation. As he takes the genjutsu, I sit back and wait for further instruction.*
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    I had to lol at the dramatically clapping your hands part


    Quote Originally Posted by Sharingdork View Post
    *Concentrating on my chakra, I clap my hands together dramatically, as I often do when a jutsu has no handseals as it feels wierd to do nothing. As I clap my hands, I release the chakra from my body, and out towards your clone. As my chakra reaches your clone's body, it immediately latches onto your clone's brain, searching for the part of the mind which controls the sense of feeling. As my chakra latches to the section of the brain, I use my tuned genjutsu expertise (yes, expertise. I am an NB Gen student...) to manipulate how your clone feels, causing the sensation of his tongue sliding back in his throat. As my chakra remains in his mind, he feels his tongue slide further and further down hiw throat, causing him to believe he is choking. As the genjutsu continues, he naturally feels panic, though this panic is created on his own, and not manufactured by my chakra like the choking sensation. As he takes the genjutsu, I sit back and wait for further instruction.*
    Perfect!

    Congratz you learned:


    Genjutsu: Jaaku Shinkan| Illusionary Arts: Wicked Silence
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is a simple genjutsu technique, where the user injects their chakra in to their opponent, and then cause the opponent to feel as if their tongue is being rolled inside their mouth and being pulled in to their throat and feel as if they are choking on their tongue.
    -Can only be used 3 times
    -Can only be taught by Cookie..



    Teach me teach me *Jumping around excitedly :overjoy:
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Alright, so now it's time for you to learn my Diving Serpent technique. First, theory. taking the description:
    The user focuses doton chakra into the ground beneath them, and creates a large snake out of the earth. Then snake then "leaps" out of the earth in an arc, causing a large ruckus, landing back into the earth, and fusing back into it (as if it were never there). However, sensors are still able to see the snake-shaped chakra signature moving under the ground. The snake can leap out of the ground as often as the user likes, and can be used to defend up to A-rank jutsu (B-rank lightning). If the snake lands on an object which is not a part of the earth (ie. a tree or an opponent), the earth snake will crush it in it's path back into the earth.
    I want you to tell me everything you think this jutsu is capable of, weather stated directly in the description, or something you can come up with on your own. Describe how'd you use it, it's strengths and weaknesses, and how exactly it works. Don't worry if you miss anything, I'm just trying to see how creative you are; I'll fill you in on all the important stuff on my next post. Bonus points if you can guess what part of the description Scorps added when he approved it. :D
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Quote Originally Posted by Sharingdork View Post
    Alright, so now it's time for you to learn my Diving Serpent technique. First, theory. taking the description:

    I want you to tell me everything you think this jutsu is capable of, weather stated directly in the description, or something you can come up with on your own. Describe how'd you use it, it's strengths and weaknesses, and how exactly it works. Don't worry if you miss anything, I'm just trying to see how creative you are; I'll fill you in on all the important stuff on my next post. Bonus points if you can guess what part of the description Scorps added when he approved it. :D
    mm *Puts on monocle*

    The user focuses doton chakra into the ground beneath them, and creates a large snake out of the earth. Then snake then "leaps" out of the earth in an arc, causing a large ruckus, landing back into the earth, and fusing back into it (as if it were never there). However, sensors are still able to see the snake-shaped chakra signature moving under the ground., and can be used to defend up to A-rank jutsu (B-rank lightning). If the snake lands on an object which is not a part of the earth (ie. a tree or an opponent), the earth snake will crush it in it's path back into the earth.


    "and fusing back into it (as if it were never there)" - Stealthily can attack prey :zonder:

    " The snake can leap out of the ground as often as the user likes" - Pretty decent resource. Deposit it in the earth, when opponent distracted, you strike!

    "and can be used to defend up to A-rank jutsu (B-rank lightning)" - Since the jutsu already formed, easy counter material

    "the earth snake will crush it in it's path back into the earth." - Simple destructive attack.

    I say Scorps added this part: "However, sensors are still able to see the snake-shaped chakra signature moving under the ground"
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    That was good, except for what Scorps added; that was my own part that I added on my own (this jutsu was approved in its original form. ) to prove that the chakra is still there and has to "swim" through the earth to erupt somewhere else. Scorps added: "causing a large ruckus,".

    So, with its fusing into the earth, think of it as a water technique going into water. Exactly. The. Same. Thing. It's also great for, say, making a wall yourself, and then having your snake jump out of the wall to attack. :D The curshing part, that actually the whole point of the tech. As the snake nears an opponent, it will fall on him like a giant stone snake. However, its earthen jaws will fuse into the ground around the opponent, letting the snake fall down further, until your opponent is litterally crushed within a snake-like pillar of earth (think about it. As the snake fuses more, it will continue into the ground no matter what's in its way. So eventually there will be a snake-shaped pillar and your opponent will be in an area where there is litterally no gap between snake and ground. ).

    So now that you understand the basics of this technique, I want you to perform it. Describe anything you think you need in order to describe how you use it correctly. I want the snake to jump around three times and then kill my clone (in the method I described above). *Makes a clone with the Shadow Clone technique I recently learned. *.
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    I channel my earth chakra in to the ground. I manipulate my chakra and mold it to form a snake under the earth. I then manipulate and control the snake to shoot out of the ground and dive back in again, getting nearer to your clone. It then does the same thing as it stalks your clone, causing a large ruckus, as the snake then dives again. With the snake near your clone and under the ground, it rockets out of the ground again and this time, goes crashing in to your clone. When the snake reaches your clone, its jaws snatch on to the clone as it heads towards the earth below your clone. The snake continues to crush your clone, stuck in its jaws...
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Excellent job! :D Now, as with all of my students, I have one final portion to the training. What are some of the pros of this technique, and what are some of the cons. After that, you may freely use it. :D
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Pros: Can travel underneath. Easy to manipulate. Can do a lot through manipulation. Powerful if makes contact. Can use defend strong attacks.

    Cons: Causes a large ruckus. Sensors can see it.
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Good enough. Congratulations, you have learned Diving Serpent.

    Now, any final questions before I unsibscribe to this thread?
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

    Wind training@! *Unsubscridnfkdsjanfjidsna fi*
     
         

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    Re: [CJ Lesson] ~ Cookie.. + Sharingdork

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