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    Pacinichi Marx

    Name: Pacinichi Marx
    Nickname: Pac
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16
    Clan: none

    Looks:
    He looks exactly like all members of the Kouba. His eyes are a solid green color. His skin is half white and half black down the middle. His teeth are pointed, and his fingernails are also green. His green hair is roughly around 2.5 inches long and is kind of shaggy. He is tall and relatively skinny, but he does not look lanky or gangly or awkward. He seems to have a muscular build, but like almost all members of his clan, he has a very frail body. His Venus fly trap protects his body and is normally not very open, because he is slightly paranoid about being surprise attacked and having his body damaged.

    He wears a gray shirt with sleeves that reach halfway up his forearm. It is not known if he has more clothes on other than that, due to his fly trap covering most of his body. His skin is a pale white color and easily makes him stand out in a crowd. Despite his strange appearance, he was never teased a child. It is not known if the other children felt threatened by him, or if they were used to seeing members of the Kouba clan, or why they chose not to make fun of him, but they did not.

    Despite seeming to enjoy his life, sometimes he seems drawn back and out of it. People often debate about asking him if he is okay, but they know that it will be to no avail. It seems as if he has a darker side to him. Vaguely disguised behind the friendly disposition he sometimes gives off. People who have known him for a long time describe him as always being that way. Friendly to people he has known for a while, but hostile towards most newcomers. It seems to take a while to earn his trust, too.

    Even though he begins to trust people he is known for a while and even in some cases has become almost friendly with them, he still rarely ever opens up to anyone. People have described him as having a ‘loner’ kind of look to him. At first glance, he seems almost shy, but after careful observation, it is revealed that he just does not enjoy the company of other people, as most people of the Kouba clan.

    He did not just get colder in the way he was acting after his friend’s death. He physically changed. He seemed darker and angrier. Just generally depressed. People began to get weird vibes from him and began avoiding him. Not only that, but he also began distancing himself from others. Almost as if he didn’t want to make another bond only to have it crushed. Despite what happened, he holds no grudges to the village whose ninja murdered his friend in cold blood.


    Personality:
    He has the stereotypical dissociative identity disorder (formerly known has multiple personality disorder) that comes with being a Kouba. His black side is a more violent serious side, whereas the white side is more of a childish part of him. The white side tends to play with his kills instead of being swift and brutal like the black side. He has betrayed team mates before, but only when they talk back to him or insult him or his past. When he does make a bond with a team mate although, it seems as if it is unbreakable.

    As a child, his personality often got him into trouble. When playing with the other children he would often be too aggressive. When games would often involve hitting each other for some reason or another, he would fracture other children’s bones. (The other children were also Kouba, so it is not as much of a strength feat as more of a mental thing. Even as a child he was capable of seriously harming other people and not feeling remorse because they were ‘playing a game’.

    He does not normally show mercy. He listens to orders and follows them to a T. He isn't manipulated easily and becomes irritated quickly. He does not enjoy being teamed with people who he deems are weaker than him. He enjoys trying to impress and surpass his elders. For the most part, during battle he keeps a calm head. He has been training since a young age with other members of his clan. He enjoys being solitary like the other members of his clan.

    His standards for training and missions are very high. He will keep doing something over and over as many times as necessary to be able to achieve perfection. He strives to be the best of anyone in his clan. Some people believe he has the potential to do so, too. When on missions he believes that being alone will help his concentration. When planning a mission, he will appear briefly to tell the others what he will do to help in the mission and lets the others form their plans around him, instead of staying with them and planning together.

    When faced with the death of his beloved friend and teammate, he became a lot colder than he ever was before. Everyone had expected this, but what they didn’t expect was that he would stay like that. As time went by, he didn’t change back to the way he was and it was clear that the death of his friend had affected him in a way that would never be understood by anyone else. He would never be the same Pacinichi that everyone had come to know around the village.


    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: Iwagakure
    Village of Alliance: Iwagakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Genin
    Specialty: None yet
    Elements: Earth (Needs training)
    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Background Info.
    History:
    He was born into a member of the Kouba clan. He was never very close to his parents as they disappeared when he was still a child. Had his first taste of human flesh at a young age and still craves for it often. Because of this, it leads to him getting into many fights. He has lost a few fights, but prides himself in winning many more than he has lost. Because of his pride he will keep sparring with teammates and peers over and over until he can overcome them.

    He is always trying to learn and practice new techniques which will ensure him victory in his next mission, battle, or sparing match. He was never raised by any kind of father or mother figure, so he lacks the relationships that most people had growing up. He doesn’t know how to interact with his elders, so he just strives to please them, by achieving perfection.

    It is not known what happened to his family. When asked about them, he becomes very cold. Some people have speculated that maybe he was responsible for their disappearance, but it is not known for sure what exactly happened to them. Most of his life remains a mystery to other people, even most of his superiors. For some reason whatever happened to his parents has been kept a secret in the village. It is not known if he knows what was behind the disappearance of his parents.

    As he got older, and went on more missions, he became very close with another boy his age. As they grew up together, Pac strived to be as good as his friend. He always tried his hardest to surpass him, even with the smallest things, like who would arrive at the academy earlier, or eat their lunches faster. Everything was a competition for them.

    They became the inseparable duo around the village. You could never see one without the other. Pac had finally gotten the brother he never had. More than that, he finally had family. Nothing could come between them. Through thick or thin they would always be together. No matter what life would throw at them, they would never separate. Or so they thought.

    On one mission, it was pitch black dark. Everything was going according to plan. Because one member got sick, their forces were spread thin. Despite that, they managed to spread out and individually cover all of the area that they needed to secure. It seemed as if the enemies just weren’t coming to their location. After crouching high in the dense forest canopy, Pac decided it’d be a good time to head back and meet up with his friend, since there were no sounds of battle or a struggle anywhere nearby.

    As he dashed through the trees, he saw his friend sitting down on the ground against the base of a tree. As he got close he called down to double check everything was okay. He got no response. He dropped down from the tree branches and walked over to his friend and asked if everything went okay. At this moment Pac began to worry and crouched down next to his friend and called for help.

    Upon closer examination, his friend had been murdered. It was determined that he was caught in high-level genjutsu before having his throat slit from behind him. They used a silent type of assassination technique and that’s why nobody was able to hear a scuffle. As he walked away, he couldn’t help but shed tears over the loss of his beloved friend and teammate. After that, nothing would ever be the same. He would keep striving to overcome his friend, whether he was there or not.


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    Lost: N/A
     
         

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    Re: Pacinichi Marx

    Nice job
     
         

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    Re: Pacinichi Marx

    Quote Originally Posted by Excalibur' View Post
    Nice job
    Thank Yaa c:
     
         

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    Re: Pacinichi Marx

    I see you are getting used to BBCodes now, maybe?

    Nice ^^
     
         

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    Re: Pacinichi Marx

    Hahaha, maybe.
     
         

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    Re: Pacinichi Marx

    Rewrite completely. There is no Kouba clan and you just tried to rip off Zetsu.
     
         

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