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      Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Overwhelming

      * * = action
      ( ) = thinking

      *Darui, Mifune, Kitsuchi and Shizune step forward in line with Naruto*

      Darui: Naruto you've done well now excuse me while I show them the power of Kumogakure!

      *He makes hand signs and black lightning sparks wildly from his body*

      Darui: The power behind this technique is that this lightning can travel along any surface! Black Lightning: Hunter wave

      *the ground in front of him is shrouded in black sparks that travel at blinding speed towards the Juubi, crackling at its
      underbelly causing paralysis in its arms and legs(if it has legs)*

      Killer Bee: Yeah fool ya fool! When Darui's lightning strikes it's over for you!

      Kitsuchi: Where is the tsuchikage, Naruto?

      *Naruto looks angry and points to Madara*

      Naruto: The one with the girly long hair defeated him and the rest of the Kages

      Sakura: Tsunade...

      Kitsuchi: Very well. Kurotsuchi?

      Kurotsuchi: Lets do it dad

      *she smirks and makes hand signs*

      Both: Earth Release: Opening Earth Rising Excavation!!!

      *The mountain spews lava underneath the Juubi it roars in distress*

      Madara: I'll deal with this begins to make hand signs, Wood release: Grand-

      *A sword slices right though him he is completely shocked a figure lands behind them*

      Mifune: Don't underestimate the power of the samurai!

      Obito: Tsk, you was careless Madara.

      *another figure flash steps behind Mifune*

      Lee: I managed to keep up with you in the 5th gate Mr. Samurai sir!

      *The Juubi's tail attempts to whip them away but they are too fast, meanwhile back on the ground*

      Naruto: Kakashi! Stay with Hinata so she can tell you when to use Kamui on Lee!

      Kakashi: Naruto... the truth is, if I use that juts again, even with Sakura's healing it will be the end of me.

      Naruto: I understand it must be some toll on you using it so much.

      Hinata: Naruto! Something's coming!

      *Madara's rinnegan is glowing and his hands have formed wood and melded with the ground, Mifune and Lee are lying on their backs unconscious next to Obito*

      Madara: How dare you challenge my authority, this is how Hashirama defeated my full power Susano'o:
      Wood style: Grand Obelisk Hell Bringer!

      End

      I put lots of effort in so some constructive criticism would be nice! Thank you!
      Madara: How dare you challenge my authority! K
       
           
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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Girly long hair
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Quote Originally Posted by Silent Zetsu View Post
      Overwhelming

      * * = action
      ( ) = thinking

      *Darui, Mifune, Kitsuchi and Shizune step forward in line with Naruto*

      Darui: Naruto you've done well now excuse me while I show them the power of Kumogakure!

      *He makes hand signs and black lightning sparks wildly from his body*

      Darui: The power behind this technique is that this lightning can travel along any surface! Black Lightning: Hunter wave

      *the ground in front of him is shrouded in black sparks that travel at blinding speed towards the Juubi, crackling at its
      underbelly causing paralysis in its arms and legs(if it has legs)*

      Killer Bee: Yeah fool ya fool! When Darui's lightning strikes it's over for you!

      Kitsuchi: Where is the tsuchikage, Naruto?

      *Naruto looks angry and points to Naruto*

      Naruto: The one with the girly long hair defeated him and the rest of the Kages

      Sakura: Tsunade...

      Kitsuchi: Very well. Kurotsuchi?

      Kurotsuchi: Lets do it dad

      *she smirks and makes hand signs*

      Both: Earth Release: Opening Earth Rising Excavation!!!

      *The mountain spews lava underneath the Juubi it roars in distress*

      Madara: I'll deal with this begins to make hand signs, Wood release: Grand-

      *A sword slices right though him he is completely shocked a figure lands behind them*

      Mifune: Don't underestimate the power of the samurai!

      Obito: Tsk, you was careless Madara.

      *another figure flash steps behind Mifune*

      Lee: I managed to keep up with you in the 5th gate Mr. Samurai sir!

      *The Juubi's tail attempts to whip them away but they are too fast, meanwhile back on the ground*

      Naruto: Kakashi! Stay with Hinata so she can tell you when to use Kamui on Lee!

      Kakashi: Naruto... the truth is, if I use that juts again, even with Sakura's healing it will be the end of me.

      Naruto: I understand it must be some toll on you using it so much.

      Hinata: Naruto! Something's coming!

      *Madara's rinnegan is glowing and his hands have formed wood and melded with the ground, Mifune and Lee are lying on their backs unconscious next to Obito*

      Madara: How dare you challenge my authority, this is how Hashirama defeated my full power Susano'o:
      Wood style: Grand Obelisk Hell Bringer!

      End

      I put lots of effort in so some constructive criticism would be nice! Thank you!
      Madara: How dare you challenge my authority! K
      look at bold, do you mean point at madara? :shrugs:
      nice though :D
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Quote Originally Posted by Merita View Post
      Girly long hair
      Haha something Naruto would say I guess
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      am not a bad prediction, but darui shitty black lightning not gonna harm the juubi, also aint no way mifune shitty sword trick will work on a ninja like madara, mifune sword trick on work noob and fodder ninjas, and i consider hanzo a fodder ninja cause he did not display the strength he used to beat the sanin when fighting mifune
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Quote Originally Posted by PowerGodLeader View Post
      look at bold, do you mean point at madara? :shrugs:
      nice though :D
      Haha I didn't even notice yeah I mean't Madara lol
       
           

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      The slug already knows about the Hokage
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      hahahaha - girly hair dude ahahaha

      it was a excellent read, almost thought i was reading the actuall chapter aha :D
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Usman View Post
      hahahaha - girly hair dude ahahaha

      it was a excellent read, almost thought i was reading the actuall chapter aha :D
      Thank you!
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Sakura would never refer to Tsunade like you did...
      she would say something like :Master, sensei.... or "Tsunade-sama"
      Also, Naruto would never be so cold minded at this point, he's gonna rage even more.
      Another mistake is that they still don't know the Kages were defeated. They can infer it by what Madara said but they haven't talked about that yet. Anyways, Naruto would never say that Madara defeated Tsunade just in that cold, humorous tone you suggested. Naruto would either stay silence or rage like crazy about his Granny being defeated.


      some mistakes that degrade the credibility.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      yeah sakura would say tsunade shisou and naruto would talk to her more directly, calling her sakura chan
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      this is a good prediction.some predictions i see,i almost always say nahhhh,but your prediction looks like it`s from kishi himself
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Pretty good I would say even though its a little short. The personalities that were added in each character are great! Really would sound just like them and Naruto's part was funny lol girl long hair xD
       
           

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      Girly hair haha.
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      Now this is a good prediction :D
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 612 PREDICTION

      i give it a 7 / 10...
       
           

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      Nice prediction. The girly long hair caught my attention
       
           

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