first bio: Saikokotsu Kaguya

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This is my first bio for character so don't make fun of me too much because I don't know what I'm doing exactly. I just hope this is okay or cool. And this is not the final and finished piece.

Basic Information
Name: Saikokotsu Kaguya
Nickname: the black blur of Amekagure
Gender: male
Age: 16
Clan: Kaguya

Looks: blue and red hair with some braids. Thin and pasty white skin. Small black vest and white mask covering eyes. He is decently tall and really lengthy

Personality: crazy/insane/psychotic, witty, patient, and somewhat intellectually deep. He is super protective of The ones who he calls father and mother. For who ever talks down upon God and Angel of the village would suffer. Overall he is very respectful to his higher ups and leaders and is the most loyal in the whole village.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Mist
Village of Alliance: Rain

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Specialty: bones
Elements: unknown as of right now
Your ninjutsu: unknown


Background Info.
History: a baby conceived from his dead mother after the Kaguya massacre. Raised in the rain village he was trained only by the best ninja in the village. Saikokotsu was trained to be the next in line to be the God of Amekagure after Pain would die. Sadly he was unable to keep the role as Pains predecessor because he was mentally unstable, and unpredictable. Since Saikokotsu was The rain villages most loyal, and trusted ninja He was made Pains #1 hidden prodigy. Saikokotsu Was to do all of Pains dirty work so his image wouldn't be tarnished so the people of the village could keep their god's (Pain) perfect image. He mastered in torturing, manipulation, stealth, and reconnaissance. Saikokotsu saw Nagato/pain as his father, and thinks that he is the legitimate son of the God and Angel of Amekagure. After the death of the two who he called mom and dad he Has to find his purpose within the village.
Other

Picture[s]:

Theme Song and Background Music: http://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=r...&v=0i3Aa9NlxCk

Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0

[Merita]

You need images, I think.

[rikerslade]

You need to expand on this bio a bit.

[★Kuroh]

Too short bro. You also need more pics.

[Ryuzetsu]

Too short bro. You also need more pics.

This.

[xjimbox]

Too short bro. You also need more pics.

Alright gotcha

[Songbird.]

Basically what the others are saying Needs more substance, text, pictures, color.

[★Kuroh]

Alright gotcha

You should work on the history and make it longer.

Edit: on you're ninja rank put Jounin.

[-Avenger-]

The bio is short.
Btw you need 3000 posts to make Kaguya bio+ mastery of Taijutsu up to A rank which you don't have.

[★Juha]

Here is some info on requirements for this clan

http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=74380