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    [ARCHIVE] ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~* Custom Jutsu Submission *~

    After reading the http://www.narutobase.net/forums/nar...ml#post1362064, please come here to submit your custom jutsus.

    All information will be looked at carefully and all the jutsus submitted here will be checked in a matter of 4 days, but remember something may be denied if we believe it is not good enough.

    The Rules:

    1. Step One: Pick the Name and Japanese Translation
    http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html ; English to Japanese.

    2. Step Two: Rank The Jutsu According to Power.
    E-S depending on the attack and effects.

    3. Step Three: Range the Jutsu.
    Short Range, Mid Range, or Long Range.

    4. Step Four: Chakra and Damage Points
    Double the Chakra to make damage; 10 chakra, 20 damage.

    5. Step Five: Describe the Jutsu.
    Make a brief description of your jutsu and its effects.

    6. Step Six: Post and Wait for Approval!

    When creating a jutsu please use proper grammar as we have to actually read it and understand what was written in order to get it approved.


    Sample custom jutsu:
    (Suiton:Mizu Hana)-Water Flower
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User creates some small sharping water flowers which travel in high speed into the battlefield. When they touch the opponent they create small cuts to vital organs of his body.


    Ranking and Damage/Chakra :
    Attacks:
    E Rank: 05 Chakra / 10 Damage
    D Rank: 10 Chakra / 20 Damage
    C Rank: 20 Chakra / 30 Damage
    B Rank: 25 Chakra / 40 Damage
    A Rank: 30 Chakra / 60 Damage
    S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage
    Forbidden: 50 Chakra / 90 Damage

    Defense:
    E Rank: 05 Chakra
    D Rank: 10 Chakra
    C Rank: 20 Chakra
    B Rank: 25 Chakra
    A Rank: 30 Chakra
    S Rank: 40 chakra
    Forbidden: 50 Chakra

    Supplementary:
    E Rank: 05 Chakra
    D Rank: 10 Chakra
    C Rank: 20 Chakra
    B Rank: 25 Chakra
    A Rank: 30 Chakra
    S Rank: 40 Chakra
    Forbidden: 50 Chakra

    You can submit custom jutsus no matter your rank, but you are limited in their strength which goes like this:

    Code:
    CUSTOM JUTSUS: Genin -> up to E and D rank jutsu of the selected element Chunin -> up to D and C rank jutsu of the known element (s) Special Jounin -> up to C and B rank jutsu of the known elements Jounin -> up to B and A rank jutsu of the known elements S-Class Ninja -> up to A and S rank jutsu of the known elements Sannin -> up to S and Forbidden rank of the known elements Kage -> no limitations & Custom Elements Jutsus Sage -> no limitations & Custom Elements Jutsus

    You can submit up to 35 custom jutsus from now on. They have to be realistic and if they have special affects like "Detects the position of the enemy" you have to explain how it detects the position etc. Powerful jutsus must also have side effects or they will be counted as overpowered.



    Disclaimer:


    NB's moderators have every right to deny any move we wish without true explanation, because some techniques submitted do not reach a certain criteria that we feel should be accepted. Please do not complain, please do not argue, just take it as it is and please move on by creating something else. Most Jutsus however will state a reason why a technique or custom will not be accepted.

    This thread is to be kept clean, with no spamming and no chatting.



    NOTES:

    ~A member can submit only 3 jutsus per week, this is added in order to give us more time to look more into all jutsus, and not just fly through hundreds every single day.

    ~~"Markers", or empty posts (with no actual custom jutsu being submitted) created for the sole purpose of being edited later on, are strictly forbidden and shall be considered as nothing more than spam.

    ~From now on, no one is allowed to edit his/her post after a moderator has already edited it. Make a new post.
    If anyone chooses to ignore this rule he/she will be banned from the submission thread for a week.


    ~Every member need to create a personal thread to keep track of his approved custom jutsus. It's the member's responsibility to constantly update this thread as his customs are approved. It is forbidden to use one of your custom jutsu in a battle if it wasn't posted in your personal thread beforehand. You thread need to be created in the Custom Jutsu Users section found here: [X]

    based on BiBi's rules
    Cheers, Rei
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 12-08-2011 at 11:06 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Before you start asking me in vms, NO you are not starting over, NO you don't have to resubmit.
    I was instructed to close the previous thread, since it had too many posts of members who aren't here now, for obvious reasons of safety as many would try to copy them.
    The group will be restored after Nexus is done checking it.

    ~Thanks.
     
         

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    Here is one:

    (Raiton:Ikazuchi Hibana Bakudan)-Lightning Style: Lightning Spark Bomb
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around him/her and then releases tiny sparks and after 2 turns, they are fully attached to the opponent and at anytime,The user can form tiger seal and make the sparks expload, the opponent would need to get out of range before this could happen or just use a jutsu that could burn away the sparks, if the opponent can't do that then the user could kill the opponent.
    Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Three Times A Battle
    Note: Can only be used by SinRival or any people taught this jutsu by her.

    ________
    ~Approved~

    Re-approved

    (Raiton:Sutatikku)-Lightning Style: Static Robots
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The User creates huge lightning robots that can shock anything it touches. They can be destroyed by getting hit by a s-rank wind attack, If they touch a living being, they will automatically paralyze or even kill if combined with another attack. After 5 turns they will turn back into sparks that can be used with other attacks.
    Note: Can Only Be Used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by SinRival and people taught by her
    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Lightning Robots? Re work the jutsu. And remove that kill part^^ Robot-o is the jap word.



    No Japanese Word For Robots

    (Taijutsu:Hakabakashii Sochi)-Taijutsu Style: Rapid Step
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: When then user activates byakugan and uses this jutsu, the user will recieve double the accuracy and speed and so the user then appears behind the opponent and do multipal hits, then suddenly dissapear and quickly appear at the side and do multipal hits, then keeps on going and when using other attacks they'll be harder to dodge and be in a same match up to sharingan.
    Note: This lasts 2 turns
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Remove the sharingan part. Resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 12-06-2009 at 02:02 PM.

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    (Nendo Tama)-Clay Bullets
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user Shoots small clay bullets.The bullets are set off by a handsign.
    Note:this justu can be used to cover the enemy in explosive clay by shooting it at the opponent.
    *this justu can only be used by Minato1*
    ____________
    ~Approved~

    Re-approved

    (Katon:Naraku)-Fire Style:Hell's Fire
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of Flame that spreads across the ground all over the terrain.Engulfing almost everything in flames.If this just hits the opponent,It will cause severe burning slowly leading to death.
    Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.
    Note:this move can only be block by space/time justu
    note:this justu can't be put out by water beacuse its hell's fire its everlasting.
    *this justu can only be used by Minato1*

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Oped and fire can be beaten by a strong enough water jutsu.
    Make hell fire a custom element then we can talk.^^

    (Doton: Doro Sawa)-Earth Style: Mud Valley
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:User creates a valley of Mud.
    Note: This justu can be made as a combo with Earth Style: Double Suicide Decapitation and Earth Style: Underground Fish Protection
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used once Per battle*
    ______
    ~Approved~

    Re-approved

    (Raiton:Seishou Oonami)-Lightning Style:Energy Surge
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User Sends a Surge of electric Currents Through the ground Shocking there opponent.This justu can also be used to break the earth around to user to escape a trap dealing with earth.
    Note: This justu Doesn't need hand signs to be activated.
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used 3 times per battle*
    ______
    ~Declined~
    Exist already


    (Fuuton:Shinshoku Jikoku)-Wind Style: Erosion Time
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This Wind is So power full it can erode A Plateau.This justu is pefect to go against earth justu.
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used Twice Per battle*
    ______
    ~Pending~
    Give more detail how it can erode the plateau


    Declined in this form
     
         
    Last edited by ★ Rei ★; 12-06-2009 at 02:03 PM.

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    Avatar Mode
    Rank; Forbidden
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Self
    Chakra Cost; 10-100% of users own chakra
    Damage points; N/A
    Description; The inate mastery of all elements and the very top form of all elemental maniplation mode's. The mode allows the user use all 5 basics elements to their thier fullest extents without needing to perform any hand seals, While in the mode the user can maniplate all basic elements, the skill continuesly drains the users chakra in order to keep up the form. The mode can be kept up for about 10 turns in the cost of giving all your chakra but can be skipped before saving chakra effeciently.
    Note;The user must give 10 % of his own chakra to maintain the form for 1 turn 20% for 2 and so on, Only Kage rank and above can perfrom this technique since they only poccess chakra strong enough.
    ---
    At kage rank the user has more chakra means 10% will probably drain more, this will only make it fair for an ability like this the japanese name is the same

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Overpowered.

    Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
    Rank; S
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Self
    Chakra Cost; 40
    Damage; N/A
    Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
    Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
    -------
    YouTube - Naruto Ultimate Ninja 3 Naruto vs Sasuke
    skill is shown, as green chakra surrounding naruto while the fight, read description aswell

    ____________
    ~Pending~
    I'm familiar with the jutsu, but i dont understand how it will work with this form battling. Message me.


    Also i would appreciate all your jutsu in one thread.^^

    Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
    Rank; B
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Entire Feild
    Chakra cost; 25
    Damage points; N/A
    Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
    Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.

    ______
    ~Declined~
    How? and post all your jutsu into the same post.


    Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
    Rank; A
    Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range; Short-mid
    Chakra cost; 30
    Damage; -5 per turn
    Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the easo****us of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
    Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu
    ______
    ~Declined~
    Remove that sealing business.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-22-2009 at 08:00 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kumo Nenkin) - Sticky Gold
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:20
    Damage: 40
    Description:This technique allows Kidomaru to release a form of golden liquid from his mouth and sweat glands. When this liquid hits the air it can harden to be as strong as steel depending on how much chakra he adds to it. Kidomaru can use this technique to form deadly spikes, powerful arrows,armor, kunai, or other projectile weapons.

    -approved-

    (Kumo Shippou Asaito) Spider Silver Thread
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After combining Silver elemental chakra with his sweat or spit, Kidomaru can create a even stronger version of sticky gold thread. This silver thread has the properties of silver, and is resistant to most elemental jutsu and gentle fist taijutsu. The thread can be in two forms solid or molten liquid form, similar to sticky gold projectile weapons and armor can be made from this thread.

    -approved-

    (Fuuton: Hayai Boutou Touza)- Wind Style: Sonic Boom Current
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (+ 10 when fire charka is added)
    Description:Using four of his six hands, kidomaru charges them with a large amount of slicing wind chakra he then slams all four hands together creating a massive sonic boom. The pressurized wind erupts from the users hands as a crescent and can cut almost anything in half.
    Note
    Can only be used 3 times per battle.

    -approved-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton:seiteki hiru)-Lightning Style:Static Leech
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user sends two lines of lighting from his/her palms wich attaches to any part of the users body paralyzing them and draing all of their chakra until released or they have escaped.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note:Can only be cut by a infused chakra sword or a type of wind cutting jutsu.

    ____________
    ~Pending~
    Remove the draining all of their chakra part, and resubmit.

    (Doton:yochi kyouran) Earth Style:Earth Frenzy
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Rank:B
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user does the needed hand seals and thrusts his/her palms on the floor adding his/her chakra to the earth being able to manipulate it.The Earth rises taking on a form of claws from the ground and is able to defend by covering the user or attack by grabbing the opponent and sufforcating or taking out a limb by limb.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note:lasts only 2 turns
    Note can be brought down by a Rank B or higher lightning jutsu

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    A similar jutsu already exist.


    (Katon:nenshou nami) Fire Style:Burning Wave
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user breathes in a bunch of air and while inside mixes it with their fire chakra exahaling a burning wave of fire that when in contact burns the skin.
    Note:Ca only be taught/used by Sharingan09
    Note:Burning Sensasion lasts for 2 turns
    Note Can be removed by dipping into water or add water to the necessary part of the body were it was burned.

    ____________
    ~Pending~
    Explain the wave bit, cause it sounds like Ash Accumulation jutsu
     
         
    Last edited by Decipher; 08-22-2009 at 11:17 PM.

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    (Futatsu Kashira Doragon Higyou) two head Dragon Strike
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack/Defense(can use both)
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: a 2 head dragons that can be controlled by the person who did it the dragons can shoot ice bullet and water from there mouth. they each have explosive tags throughout their bodies, which activate when the dragons are destroyed. This causes thier bodies to shatter and ice shards to be sent flying in all directions.

    *can use x2 in mach
    *this move can stay on the mach for 2 ture
    *cant use back to back
    *can be use by riku.. and kiba
    *need to know water and ice
    *when u use ice bullet or water bullet it count as a move
    ____________
    ~Pending~
    Need to speak to the others about this.



    (Aisu Waza) ice technique
    Rank D
    Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range:Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description Creates small wall of ice,Small ice bolts,finger bullet that u can throw or block Shuriken,explosive kunai etc.
    ____________
    ~Approved~

    (Tentei Gogyou Kiru)-God Water kill
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:this use all Chakra
    Damage Points:90 Damage
    Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of water that make all the water form ever where come to this one spot and make a big water ball that can kill in one touch
    Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.

    *this is one hit k.o
    *cant be block
    ____________
    ~Declined~
    No one hit K.O.'s


    Sution: Gekiha Teikiatsu (Water Style: Water Crushing Cyclone)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user inserts their hands into the water after performing the seals, and then they make water rise up, and make a cyclone horizontally go towards the opponent. Can only be used in a deep source of water. If this technique makes contact with the opponent, the force will be enough to drag them down, like an undertow.

    Note: Must be used on a water source.
    Note: Can only be used twice in a battle, must wait a turn before the next use.

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Similar Jutsu Exist
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-22-2009 at 07:58 PM. Reason: cleaning up...

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by alimujtaba786 View Post
    Hell fire is basically MY IDEA :mad: Remove it
    Calm down Ali lol.

    (Hyouten: Hando of Jakki Shimo) Ice Style: Hand of Jack Frost
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40 (+10 for every additional time used)
    Damage:80
    Description:The user will place their hand on any object on the battle field and a blue, frozen hand of ice will appear anywhere throughout that object (Example: If the user places their hand on a tree then they can make the hand appear anywhere throughout the tree, on a branch, the top of the tree, anywhere). The hand has three, unique abilities. It can grab the opponent and make spikes all over its hand stabbing the opponent. It can also morph into either a giant ice sword to stab the opponent. And finally it can shoot an extremely cold blast from its hand freezing the opponent or the ground under and around the opponent. The user can also run their chakra through the something, and make it continue running to somewhere else. (Example: The user runs their chakra through the ground, and then runs it into a tree which is attached to the ground.) If a hand is destroyed, it shatters, leaving the enemy to deal with ice senbon that rain down upon them if they are within short-range.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    Note: Once this jutsu is used the user must wait 2 more turns to use it again.
    Note: If this is used more than once then it takes up 5 more chakra than the last time.
    Only useable by Riku..
    ____________
    ~Approved~
    But make it 3 times per battle.


    (Hyouten: Kyojin of Sono Tougen) Ice Style: Giants of the Tundra
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long (depends on the attack that they're using)
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:40 (drains 5 more chakra per turn, per giant)
    Damage:80
    Description:The user creates massive giant(s) made of ice. The giants basically are humongous, crystalized creatures that have some human features, such as hands and feet, but the features of their face are more gruesome than a normal humans. The giant is about as big as a two trees stacked atop each other. The user can make up to two giants. The giants are able to do simple attacks of course, swinging arms, kicking, etc. A hit by any of the ice giants attacks freezes the opponent as well as touching the giant (this doesnt apply to the user). The giants are also able to make giant spears/javelins to throw at the enemy. An attack would be mid-range while a throw would be long range. When a giant is destroyed, he freezes a short range area around him.
    Note: The giants get slightly smaller after each turn and after 6 turns they melt into ice due to the user supporting two things at once.
    Note: If two giants are made then this time limit is cut in half and they melt in 3 turns due to the user needing to support 3 things at once: themselves, and the two giants.
    Note: Only useable 3 times in battle.
    Useable only by Riku..

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Make forbidden, and limit to once per battle. Resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-22-2009 at 06:31 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu)- Flying Heaven Honorable Sword Style
    Type-Supplementary
    Rank-N/A
    Range-N/A
    Chakra cost-N/A
    Damage-N/A
    Description-This is a taijutsu sword style that focuses on predicting enemy movements by the slightest body movements for defense and using extreme speed for offense.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja’s Aoshi bio can use this style and/or teach it
    *Can predict enemy taijutsu and weapon attacks the same as someone with a level two Sharingan
    *Speed equal to that of Rock Lee without his weights
    *Must have two Kodachi (short swords) and one Katana (full-length sword) to use this style (certain attacks need a specific weapon)
    *Must post this along with your bio at the beginning of a battle
    *Can only use two Hiten Mitsurugi style ATTACKS per turn.


    (Ryusui no Ugoki)- Flowing-Water Movement
    Type- Supplementary
    Rank- C
    Range-N/A
    Chakra cost-N/A
    Damage-N/A
    Description- This is a moving technique in which the user uses his speed to move around silently, rapidly alternating between fast and slow movements to confuse the oppenent due to the fluid motion and continuously changing speed.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must know Hiten Mitsurugi style to use this jutsu
    *Movements can only be tracked by a level two or higher Sharingan user.


    (Jissen Kenbu)- Battle Sword Dance
    Type- Attack
    Rank- B (A-rank if instantly combined with Kaiten Kenbu) (S-rank if combined with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren)
    Range- Short-Mid
    Chakra cost- N/A
    Damage- 40 (60 if instantly combined with Kaiten Kenbu) (80 if with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren)
    Description- After using Ryusui no Ugoki to flow around the enemy, confusing them with a constant change in speed, the user strikes from various points using one Kodachi (two Kodachi if combined with Kaiten Kenbu)
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must know Hiten Mitsurugi style to use this jutsu
    *Must have at least one Kodachi (short sword) to use this attack
    *Must know and use Ryusui no Ugoki before using this attack
    *Can be instantly combined with Kaiten Kenbu or Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren only counting as one full move
    *If combined with either Kaiten Kenbu or Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren, no other Hiten Mitsurugi style jutsu this turn
    *If combined with Kaiten Kenbu, no B-rank or higher taijutsu next turn
    *If combined with Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren, no C-rank or higher taijutsu next turn


    (Kaiten Kenbu)- Spiral Sword Dance
    Type- Attack
    Rank- B
    Range- Short
    Chakra cost- N/A
    Damage- 40
    Description- The user rapidly spins around three times, while holding a Kodachi backhand, to slash the opponent thrice in an instant.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must know Hiten Mitsurugi style to use this jutsu
    *Must have at least one Kodachi to use this jutsu


    (Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren)- Spiral Sword Dance Six Successions
    Type- Attack
    Rank- A
    Range- Short
    Chakra cost- N/A
    Damage- 60
    Description- The user spins around rapidly, while holding two Kodachi backhand, to slash the opponent six times instantly. It relies on confusing the the opponent on the direction from which each strike is going to come.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must know Hiten Mitsurugi style to use this jutsu
    *Must have two Kodachi to use this jutsu


    If you know the anime these are from, please do not make any of the other moves from it. I plan on making more, but can only submit 5 at a time, and I've had these in mind and made up for a long time. If you do decide to make jutsus from the same anime then I can't stop you, I just wish anyone who reads this would respect my request.

    ____________
    ~All Pending~
    Need to speak to you and the others about these
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton: mokuzai seibutsu) Wood Style: Wood golems
    Type: Supplimentary/Defense/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long (explosion- Short)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (+15 if explode)
    Description: The user focuses the chakra then does hand signs to create wooden golems to come out of the ground or water(Wood is two elements Earth and Water) The golems follow every order that the user gives them they have legs, feet, arms, and hands that they can use to attack with.
    Note:The golems turn back in to trees when this turn ends.
    ______
    ~Declined~
    Needs Limits.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Goro Kaguya View Post
    No Spamming!

    Keep stuff like this to the VM.



    this goes for everyone.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Here are some of my customs:

    (Hyouton:Enkei Sekisho) - Ice Style: Circle Barrier
    Type: Defence
    Rank:A
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Description:A circle-like barrier of ice appears around the user.It can't be melted by low rank fire techniques.
    *Note: The user can use this jutsu only on a ice surrounding.*
    *Note: Can only be used by Yugito Nadare bio's.*
    *Note:Can only be used 3 times per battle.*
    ______
    ~Approved~

    (Futon:Kaze Se) - Wind Style: Wind Torrents
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:35
    Description:Suddenlly wind starts blowing softlly all around.A weak wind storm covers a whole area.It lowers the enemy visibilty and senses.If the user moves quickly enough, to the enemy will sem like you are moving throught the air freely.
    *Note:It can only be used once per battle, and it lasts 9 turns.*
    ______
    ~Declined~
    Edit the 9 turns to 4. Resubmit


    (Futon:Fuuryuudan) - Wind Style: Wind Dragon Projectiles
    Type: Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage:20+30(Bullets+Dragon)
    Description:Like with other elements, a dragon, made of wind appears in the air, and starts shooting wind bullets from it's mouth.The dragon then approaches the enemy as 1 big bullet to cause severe damege to the enemy.
    *Note:It can be only used once per battle.*
    *Note:It can be used only after performing Wind Torrents.*
    ______
    ~Declined~
    Jutsu Exist already
     
         
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    Custom Jutsu Submission

    (Katon : Kaen enban)- Fire style: Flame Disk

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Desription: the user creates a spinning flame disk where they hold their hands appart and breath fire chakra inbetween and mold the chakra into a spinning disk.

    *Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
    ______
    ~Approved~

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    (Doujutsu: boushi kokudo) - Eye Technique: spinning realm

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Boushi kokudo is and advanced sharingun technique in which the user creates the illusion of the enemy spinning around and then prevents them from molding chakra and unable to create a move.

    *Note: the enemy cant create the maximum amount of moves in a turn
    *Note: lasts 1 turn

    ______
    ~Declined~
    How does spinning around prevent the opponent from molding chakra?


    (Ninpo: Shinku Kiji Ryuu)- Ninja art: Scarlet cloth dragon

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damaga cost: N/A (+10 for explosive tags)
    Description: the user opens a scroll and performs the following seals: tiger dog horse. mutliple cloths with spiked tastles on the ends traps the enermy by wrapping round the legs shoulders and arms and then ankers itself to the ground using the spiked tastles.

    Note: This jutsu can be used in conjunction with explosive tags to cause damage.
    Note: can only be taught by uchiha Kaito

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Explain this a bit more.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Wind Release: Spiraling Wind Sword (Fuuton: Rasen Kaze Yaiba)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Descriptions: The user exhales a near invisible blade of wind from their mouth. The blade immediately encircles the user to slice through anything that surrounds them.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ______
    ~Pending~
    Remove that cuts anything, and resubmit


    Wind Release: Deafening Wind (no Japanese name for "deafening" or "deaf")
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user sends off a great amount of chakra into the air within the battlefield. They will make their wind chakra spin in different directions at extreme speeds. Doing this creates a noisy screeching sound that makes it impossible for the user or opponent to hear anything except the wind. It also makes it difficult for the user and opponent to move freely.
    ~Lasts three turns
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ______
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    1. (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kisaki Neko Kuchiyose: Rinsei) Summoning Jutsu: Queen Cat Summon: Rinsei

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (Depends on the jutsu she performs)
    Description: Rinsei is the Queen of the Neko family (like Manda is the king of snakes). She is one of the most powerful of the Neko Family. Like the 3 tailed Demon she has 3 tails, this allows her to use her 3 Katanas. Her fur is soft like clouds and she has the Ying and Yang symbol printed on her forehead (the place where the summoner stands, if she allows it). She has the ability to manipulate all 5 elements to A-rank. Like all of the Neko family she is able to use a large amount of chakra, if needed. Her personality is that of a protective mother, if anything comes to hurt her young, or summoner, she will go all out against the person responsible. She is about 20 meters bigger than Gamabunta.
    Jutsu she can use are (some cases she might need help from her summoner):
    Katon – Up to A-Rank
    Suiton - Up to A-Rank
    Fuuton - Up to A-Rank
    Doton - Up to A-Rank
    Raiton - Up to A-Rank
    Rinsei is very touchy when it comes to a summoner, she will only let a summoner stand on her forehead when they have done something to prove themselves to her. In order for a summoner to attempt to stand on her forehead the summoner must undergo a variety of tasks, which vary depending on her mood. The only exception is Kusari Uchiha (Hazure), who holds the Contract of the Neko Family.
    *Stays in battle for 5 turns.
    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *Must have signed the Contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)


    ______
    ~Declined~
    Overpowered. 2 elements max.^^
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Thanks Rei for opening the thread :D

    Here's my first in a long time ...

    Kenjutsu no Kaito : Medusa ( Sword Style of the Emperor : Medusa )
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage points: None
    Description: To perform this technique, the user sends a sudden burst of Lightning Chakra through their sword ( a normal sword will suffice ; the user can theoretically do this in any electricity conducting object though a sword is preferred ) which causes a sudden, intense burst of light to be produced, temporarily blinding the opponent for approximately two seconds and causing hazy vision after that for a short while. The effect increases with proximity. Also, people with doujutsus trained on the sword will be affected more than normal people since their eyes are sharper. This move, however, does no damage in of itself.



    ( I named it Kenjutsu since that is the traditional name for Samurai's sword moves and this is done with a sword :D and the Emperor part is pretty self explanatory )

    ______
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sumi Youshiki: Chuusen Bakuyaku)- Ink Style: Drawing Explosive
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra Cost:20-50 (depending on the size of the drawing)
    Damage Points:30-50(depending on size of the drawing)
    Description: The user can draw either small animals such as beatles or giant animals such as lions to match the explosive powers. these images must be drawn on some sort of canvas whether it be a scroll or a tag or even a fan. after giving the appropriate hand signs the animal will be summoned and at that point the user must perform one last handsign to make the animal explode. the user may control where the animal goes but depending on the size of the image he must put more chakra.
    NOTE: Can only be used by Ink Users.
    NOTE: Can only be used by Sai.
    NOTE: Must be drawn with chakra infused ink such as the kind that Sai uses.

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Stick to the template. For the damage given this should be forbidden rank.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Message to All Posters.

    Keep all your jutsu in one post. Thanks it would be great!

    I'll open the thread in a bit.^^

    Open.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Naruto Uzumaki- View Post
    Wind Release: Spiraling Wind Sword (Fuuton: Rasen Kaze Yaiba)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Descriptions: The user exhales a near invisible blade of wind from their mouth. The blade immediately encircles the user to slice through anything that surrounds them.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ______
    ~Pending~
    Remove that cuts anything, and resubmit


    Wind Release: Deafening Wind (no Japanese name for "deafening" or "deaf")
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user sends off a great amount of chakra into the air within the battlefield. They will make their wind chakra spin in different directions at extreme speeds. Doing this creates a noisy screeching sound that makes it impossible for the user or opponent to hear anything except the wind. It also makes it difficult for the user and opponent to move freely.
    ~Lasts three turns
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ______
    ~Approved~
    Wind Release: Spiraling Wind Sword (Fuuton: Rasen Kaze Yaiba)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Descriptions: The user exhales a near invisible blade of wind from their mouth. The blade immediately encircles the user to slice through nearly anything that surrounds them.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    _____
    |Approved|

    Wind Release: Great Wind Return (Fuuton: Kyousei Kaze Saihatsu)
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user generates a vicious current of wind which forcibly moves the opponent in any direction they want. Although no damage is done by this jutsu, it will catch the opponent off guard, and move them with great speed and force.
    ~Can only be used four times per battle
    (I doubt I'd ever use it that many times in one fight though )

    Note: Great Wind Return is an already approved custom. I'm just lowering the rank (and changed the name and restriction a bit)
    _________
    |Declined|
    Make A rank. And that is good cause you'll be limiting it to 3 times per battle anyway. resubmit.

    Wind Release: Last Breath (Fuuton: Rasuto Kisoku)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will focus a great amount of wind chakra into the air around the opponent. By extending their arm out and clenching their fist, the user can make the air surrounding their opponent compress and crush their entire body.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Can only be avoided if the opponent can see or sense the user's chakra around them (giving them more time to react to the jutsu)

    Note: Last Breath is also a previously approved custom. (just lowering the rank)
    ___________
    |Declined! Should of kept it forbidden|

    Lightning Release: Strike of the Heavens (Raiton: Sutoraiku no Sono Tentou)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (10 to user)
    Description: The user will focus an immense amount of chakra into the palms of their hands to the point where electricity surrounds them. After focusing the chakra into their hands, a large concentrated mass of lightning will emit from their palms. The mass of lightning spirals as it is shot toward the opponent at a quick pace.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Cannot use any lightning jutsus the following turn.
    ~User receives 10 damage

    Note: Also a previously approved custom, just rewording it. :P
    ___________
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Minato1 View Post
    (Nendo Tama)-Clay Bullets
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user Shoots small clay bullets.The bullets are set off by a handsign.
    Note:this justu can be used to cover the enemy in explosive clay by shooting it at the opponent.
    *this justu can only be used by Minato1*
    ____________
    ~Approved~

    (Katon:Naraku)-Fire Style:Hell's Fire
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of Flame that spreads across the ground all over the terrain.Engulfing almost everything in flames.If this just hits the opponent,It will cause severe burning slowly leading to death.
    Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.
    Note:this move can only be block by space/time justu
    note:this justu can't be put out by water beacuse its hell's fire its everlasting.
    *this justu can only be used by Minato1*

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Oped and fire can be beaten by a strong enough water jutsu.
    Make hell fire a custom element then we can talk.^^

    (Doton: Doro Sawa)-Earth Style: Mud Valley
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:User creates a valley of Mud.
    Note: This justu can be made as a combo with Earth Style: Double Suicide Decapitation and Earth Style: Underground Fish Protection
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used once Per battle*
    ______
    ~Approved~

    (Raiton:Seishou Oonami)-Lightning Style:Energy Surge
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User Sends a Surge of electric Currents Through the ground Shocking there opponent.This justu can also be used to break the earth around to user to escape a trap dealing with earth.
    Note: This justu Doesn't need hand signs to be activated.
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used 3 times per battle*
    ______
    ~Declined~
    Exist already


    (Fuuton:Shinshoku Jikoku)-Wind Style: Erosion Time
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This Wind is So power full it can erode A Plateau.This justu is pefect to go against earth justu.
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used Twice Per battle*
    ______
    ~Pending~
    Give more detail how it can erode the plateau
    (Fuuton:Shinshoku Jikoku)-Wind Style: Erosion Time
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:This justu is pefect to go against earth justu. the user sends a strong justu of wind that is strong enough to erode a plateau into dust.this justu can also be used to break down the defense of an earth user because they are most likely to have an earth defense to guard against their enemies attack.
    *This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
    *This justu can only be used Twice Per battle

    |You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton: mokuzai seibutsu) Wood Style: Wood golems
    Type: Supplimentary/Defense/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long (explosion- Short)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (+15 if explode)
    Description: The user focuses the chakra then does hand signs to create wooden golems to come out of the ground or water(Wood is two elements Earth and Water) The golems follow every order that the user gives them they have legs, feet, arms, and hands that they can use to attack with.
    Note:The golems turn back in to trees when this turn ends.
    Can only be used 3 times per battle.

    |Approved|
    Limit to 2 golems per use. 3times per battle is fine.


    (Doton: Doton wa-mu) Earth style: Earth worm
    Type: Attack/Supplimentary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (+15 if user goes down with it)
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses his chakra to his foot then stomps his foot instantly creating a large worm under ground (while its under ground the user has a choice to go under ground with him if wanted) with a drill shaped head that can move underground and attack when the user commands it.
    Notes:
    This worm can only last 2 turns
    This worm can only be used once per battle

    |Approved|
    But remove that instantly part
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Updating a bit of my old customs

    Previous Version
    (Kuchiyose: Joutei Shikon)- Summoning: Lord Fang
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons the Lord of the dogs on Mount Fang, Meiunha, a large dog slightly larger than Gamabunta, that can shoot spheres of wind at the opponent that do 15 damage (coming to a total of 75 damage if he uses them all five turns without fail). Meiunha can also attack normally, (bite, scratch) and fend off attacks for the user. Meiunha can sustain damage from 1 S-rank jutsu before he disperses. This summon lasts only 5 turns and can only be used once per battle.


    (That "1 S-rank" got him killed everytime I summoned him >_>)

    (Kuchiyose: Joutei Shikon)- Summoning: Lord Fang
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user summons the Lord of the dogs and wolves on Mount Fang, Meiunha, a large white wolf-dog slightly larger than Gamabunta, that can shoot spheres of wind at the opponent that do 15 damage (coming to a total of 75 damage if he uses them all five turns without fail). He is a master at Wind jutsu. Meiunha can also attack normally, (bite, scratch) and fend off attacks for the user. As a giant wolf, Meiunha is capable of sustaining fatal amounts of damage from several powerful (A-S-rank) jutsus before dispersing, and a great deal of trust is required for the user to even be able to summon him. This summon lasts only 5 turns and can only be used once per battle.
    |Approved|
    But make it 2 powerful S ranked jutsu or 3 powerful a ranked (several is too much)

    Edit: Editted Description and added sustainability of damage

    (Suiton: Ippai Bodi Mizu no Jutsu)- Water style: Full Body Water
    Rank: A
    type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-3 each round active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user uses their chakra to become water itself. The user is able to avoid physical attacks and shoot small to large-sized water projectiles (depending on their size). They are also able to absorb large amounts of water (half the size of Gamabunta) to merge with themselves when in water state.

    Edit: Added more to the description and increased chakra

    |Pending| Make it S rank and some limits.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Sharingan09 View Post
    Raiton:seiteki hiru)-Lightning Style:Static Leech
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user sends two lines of lighting from his/her palms wich attaches to any part of the users body paralyzing them and draing all of their chakra until released or they have escaped.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note:Can only be cut by a infused chakra sword or a type of wind cutting jutsu.

    ____________
    ~Pending~
    Remove the draining all of their chakra part, and resubmit.

    (Doton:yochi kyouran) Earth Style:Earth Frenzy
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Rank:B
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user does the needed hand seals and thrusts his/her palms on the floor adding his/her chakra to the earth being able to manipulate it.The Earth rises taking on a form of claws from the ground and is able to defend by covering the user or attack by grabbing the opponent and sufforcating or taking out a limb by limb.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note:lasts only 2 turns
    Note can be brought down by a Rank B or higher lightning jutsu

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    A similar jutsu already exist.


    (Katon:nenshou nami) Fire Style:Burning Wave
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user breathes in a bunch of air and while inside mixes it with their fire chakra exahaling a burning wave of fire that when in contact burns the skin.
    Note:Ca only be taught/used by Sharingan09
    Note:Burning Sensasion lasts for 2 turns
    Note Can be removed by dipping into water or add water to the necessary part of the body were it was burned.

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    ~Pending~
    Explain the wave bit, cause it sounds like Ash Accumulation jutsu

    Raiton:seiteki hiru)-Lightning Style:Static Leech
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The user sends two lines of lighting from his/her palms wich attaches to any part of the users body paralyzing them and until released or they have escaped.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note:Can only be cut by a infused chakra sword or a type of wind cutting jutsu.

    |Approved|

    (Katon:nenshou nami) Fire Style:Burning Wave
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user breathes in a bunch of air and while inside mixes it with their fire chakra exahaling a heat wave much like when a nuclear bomb is explodes emits nuclear/heatwaves of fire that when in contact burns the skin.
    Note:Ca only be taught/used by Sharingan09
    Note:Burning Sensasion lasts for 2 turns
    Note Can be removed by dipping into water or add water to the necessary part of the body were it was burned.

    |Declined|
    Nuclear Heatwaves? Sounds like a custom element to me


    Doton:doro itsuryuu)Earth Style:Mud Spill
    Type:Supplemantary
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short-long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:30
    Description:The user focuses Earth chakra in his/her mouth and emits a gewy like substance that can be spit in the user face to blind them.Can also be used on oneself to stick to walls or objects.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note can be romoved by a rank C or higher lightning move

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    Fire Style:Cumbustion Pellets
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:40
    Description:The user shoots out fire pellets from the tips of their fingers.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09

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    Earth Style:Death Coffin
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:70
    Description:The user does the needed hand seals and thrusts his/her hands to the ground and a coffin appears underneath the opponent and rapidly shuts.The user will then manipulate the coffin to emit 5 sharp spears from inside and stab the opponent in the both thighs,chest,one hand,and the last one in the heart.
    Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
    Note:Can be immediatly disspurssed by a full body chidori or any lightning because once it is broken from the inside it is useless.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    People Listen Carefully.
    In order to keep this thread as clean as possible keep your post(each week) in one thread and Keep Count of your own submission.

    Only Five Post per week.

    Yes this includes resubmission. Anything more than 5(per week) is declined.

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