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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Howaido Kurohyou) Summoning Technique: White Panther
    Summoning Animal: White Panther
    Scroll Owner: Itachi4life
    Other Users who have signed contract:None now
    Summoning Boss if existing:None now
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Howaido Kurohyou: Shuban) Summoning Technique: White Panther: Shuban
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After preforming the needed hand signs the user will Summon Shuban a White Panther. Shuban is 10ft. long is able to carry it's summoner on it's back. Shuban is able to use up to B-Rank Wind/lightning jutsu.
    *Can only be summoned if signed the White Panther contract*
    *Shuban can only be summoned for 4 turns*
    *The user must wait 4 turns before Shuban can be summoned again*


    ... leaving for emp, could have sworn someone else had one that could use panthers...
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 10-31-2010 at 07:32 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Earth Release: 4 Pillars of Mud (Doton: 4 Chuuseki Deido)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Middle-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After the user performs a single hand seal he summons Four Giant Pillars made of rock surrounding the target. Then the user performs another hand seal, as a result 4 very sharp mud spears come out from the pillars and go towards the enemy really fast. Then the user can perform another hand seal, that way the 4 pillars will destroy themselves and as the pillars devide on hundreds of rocks, they possible do some damage to the opponent.
    Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness


    declined - bad description and contradictary use of english.


    Sharp Objects (Surudoi Mono)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chackra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After the user performs a single hand seal, he can use the surrounding objects near him to change their sharpness and send them against the enemy. As the objects are realy fast they could be used almost at the same time as the previous jutsu.
    Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness



    Declined - no restrictions on what objects can be manipulated or how


    Genjutsu: 5 elements (Illusion Technique: 5 Soshi)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A Genjutsu technique that makes the opponent see all 5 element releases coming towards him. (Fire Water, Wind, Earth, Lighting)
    Note: can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
    Note: can only be used 2 times per battle



    Declined - this will cause arguments along the lines of...

    "how would you know to use that jutsu?"
    "it was just random luck, 1 in 5 chance "
    "stfu noob i win by default"
    "no i'd have done that jutsu anyway" and so on
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 10-31-2010 at 07:42 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Pengin Kuchiyose: Skipper za Bozu ) ɸ Penguin Summoning: Skipper the Boss
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 for physical blows, 30 for whistle

    After biting his thumb and performing the required handseals, the user slams his palm down on the ground, summoning the boss summon of the penguin contract, Skipper. Skipper is a massive...three and a half feet tall, and weighs in at 100 pounds. But though his size is extremely small, he possesses the same strength as any other boss summon. Getting hit by a physical blow of Skipper will possess the same effects as getting hit by a physical blow of a large-sized boss summon.
    Skipper combines his strength with the maneuverability afforded him by his small size as well as speed equal to a sailfish's maximum, to become one of the most Taijutsu-proficient summonings in existence.
    He is capable of using any and all Taijutsu his summoner knows, but his most favoured weapons are a pair of bronzed three-foot salmon he carries with him. He uses these salmon in close quarters and smacks the opponent with them to break his bones, or to block any weapons used on him.
    His next ability is what he calls his "smile and wave", a Genjutsu-related ability he shares with all the penguin summons. Skipper stops in one place, grins broadly and begins waving his flipper at the opponent, activating a Genjutsu that makes the opponent think nothing is out of place in that area, rendering him practically invisible, and even if an opponent possesses the capability to sense him, unless it is a bloodline, the opponent does not "want" to sense him, so he is still fooled.
    Skipper also carries around a bobblehead doll with him, on his back. The doll is an object of dear affection for him, and he will go into a berserker rage if it is destroyed or damaged. The bobblehead doll can also be used as a distraction, since it possesses a foghorn-level whistle built into it, and whenever Skipper "kisses" the doll, the whistle blasts out blaring-ly to disorient an opponent and cause bleeding from his ears.

    The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • Skipper can be summoned only once per battle.
    • Skipper can only fight using Taijutsu, his one "smile and wave" Genjutsu, and his bobblehead-doll whistle.
    • Skipper's "smile and wave" Genjutsu is only effective if he is either standing still, or moving at the speed equivalent of a normal walk. Any faster than that, and the Genjutsu is broken.
    • Two-tomoe Sharingan and above, the Byakugan and the Rin'negan automatically break the Genjutsu.
    • The bobblehead-whistle, can be directed in a particular direction to avoid the sound from reaching the user, but this is only if the user knows the Sound element. If he doesn't, then the whistle sound reaches him too, and he has to shut his ears before the whistle is blown, or he will begin bleeding from ears too.
    • Taijutsu used by Skipper count as one of the user's three jutsu per turn; the "smile and wave" Genjutsu activation does not.


    ( Pengin Kuchiyose: Rico za Kyojin ) ɸ Penguin Summoning: Rico the Psychopath
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage Points: 40 for physical blows, 70 for weapons damage

    After biting his thumb and performing the required handseals, the user slams his palm down on the ground, summoning the most destructive summon of the penguin contract, Rico. Rico is four feet tall, and weighs in at 120 pounds. Though his size is extremely small, he possesses the same strength as any other secondary non-boss summon such as Gamaken.
    Rico is much, much faster than Skipper, and can move at thrice his speed. However, he is not as proficient at Taijutsu as Skipper.
    He is however an expert at Kenjutsu using a pair of sushi knives, or a chainsaw, and has been known to slice through a large tower in one strike or turn bowling pins into sawdust within a few seconds. He uses his deceptive strength and great speed to outdo any human he fights in a sword-on-sword battle.
    His next ability is what he calls his "smile and wave", a Genjutsu-related ability he shares with all the penguin summons. Rico stops in one place, grins broadly and begins waving his flipper at the opponent, activating a Genjutsu that makes the opponent think nothing is out of place in that area, rendering him practically invisible, and even if an opponent possesses the capability to sense him, unless it is a bloodline, the opponent does not "want" to sense him, so he is still fooled.
    Rico's last ability is called "The Regurgitator". Rico possesses a storage seal on the inside of his throat, which holds numerous weapons, explosive notes, weird objects such as flowerpots and bicycles, etc. Rico can unseal one of them and instantly regurgitate it out of his mouth ready for use.

    The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • Rico can be summoned only once per battle.
    • Rico can only fight using his sushi knives and chainsaw, his one "smile and wave" Genjutsu, and anything he might regurgitate.
    • Rico's "smile and wave" Genjutsu is only effective if he is either standing still, or moving at the speed equivalent of a crawl. Any faster than that, and the Genjutsu is broken.
    • Two-tomoe Sharingan and above, the Byakugan and the Rin'negan automatically break the Genjutsu.
    • If Rico is regurgitating a large object, such as a bicycle or an anvil, his throat becomes sore and he is unable to regurgitate anything more until the next turn.
    • Neither Rico's regurgitation nor his Genjutsu are counted as one of the three moves per turn of the user.



    change needed - my only problem with both of these is even if they walk slowly, if you can't see them, sense them, or know you're in genjutsu, then they'll just hit you and it's game over... oh... and the chainsaw i don't like, just keep the sushi knives.
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 10-31-2010 at 07:46 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Rank:S rank
    Type:Attack/defence/supplementary
    Range:Short(though the rock arms can be ejected upto long range)
    Chakra:40
    Damage:20 per limb and 80 if the armour itself is blasted,+5 to taijutsu attacks
    Description:In this jutsu the user concentrates a large amount of doton and raiton chakra and then chains four handseals and an armour of earth forms around the user.The armour is not in direct contact with the user and due to the presence of air the user is not severely harmed due to the electricity.In this armour the user is invunerable to taijutsu attack(not Eig hyuuga and Kaito's) and the attacks of the user gain a boost due to the rock armour charged with electricity which numbs the part of the opponent hit.In this armour the user is highly vunerable to water style jutsus and cant use suiton jutsu while he is in the armour.If the user is hit by a suiton jutsu he is electrocuted and unable to battle.The armour can be shed at any moment the user wants via making a single seal(doesn't counts as a move).Also the user can eject the arms of the armour by using their fuuton chakra.The user can also form weapons made out of stone from the armour,the weapons are lightning charged and also numbs the opponent
    *can be used twice per battle
    *no suiton jutsu while in the armour
    *both arms can also be ejected at the same time with a single seal
    *the armour lasts 4 turns and after it the user is unable to perform doton jutsius of above B rank for the next 3 turns if the armour is not shed
    *can be used/taught by so6p




    Declined- if you ran electricity through earth armour you'd be crumbling it yourself.


    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description:In this Jutsu the user gathers a huge amount of raiton chakra and then performs three handseals and then releases a huge wall of electricity 10 meters tall and 12 meters wide that travels towards the opponent fast, destroying the ground below as it passes and causes burns,paralysis and numbing when comes in contact with the opponent.
    *can be used thrice in battle
    *can only be taught/used by so6p




    approved


    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:60
    Description:In this jutsu the user focusses his doton chakra into the ground below the opponent and then chains two handseals forming a thick rope of earth (4 cm is the radius of the cylindrical rope) covered with spikes the rope pops out and coils around the opponents legs and arms, binding both legs and hands causing damage to the legs and arms as they are pierced by solid rock spikes.The spikes cannot pierce substance denser than solid rock.
    *can only be performed thrice in a battle
    *can only be used/taught by s06p




    approved- but i'll keep an eye on this to make sure it's not abused in any way.
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 10-31-2010 at 07:50 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Saegi Mizu Supaiku) Water Release: Water barrier spikes

    Rank:A
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Range:Short(but the spikes of water can travel upto mid range)
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:5 for every projectile hit
    Description:In this jutsu the user gathers his suiton chakra and then forms two handseals after which he releases a barrier(wall) of water in front of him(their is no contact of the user with the water after the wall has been made) which is 6 metres in height and about 2 foot in thickness hence blocking the view of the opponent and the user.This barrier can protect the user from katon jutsus and also can be manipulated to form 6 high pressure water projectiles (the trajectory of the projectiles is controlled by the user)which the user can form by making a single tiger handseal.After the projectiles are formed from the barrier ,the wall of water collapses.
    *can only be performed thrice per battle
    *doesnt require a water source
    *can only be used/taught by Hammy120290

    no, sorry but creating a defence to also attack is turning 3 moves per turn into 4 in essence.


    (Genjutsu: Howaito sekai) Illusion technique: White world

    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user of the jutsu first chains three handseals and then releases his chakra into the opponent effecting the optical nerve changing the frequency of light recieved by the rod and cone cells to white.Because of this the vision of the opponent is effected and everything including himself appears white in colour to the opponent
    *can only be used twice per battle and lasts 3 turns or untill it is broken
    *this genjutsu can be broken by causing severe pain and biting the lip/tongue is not sufficient
    *can be broken by a three tomoe sharingan with ease
    *can only be used/taught by Hammy120290


    sorry but i already own colour as a CE, any genjutsu about seeing colour on my watch will be declined for plagiarism of my CE... also this is just reverse to infinite darkness...
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 10-31-2010 at 07:58 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The Fallen Shakujō of Demons Technique: Activation Process |Aki shakujō Akuma no Jutsu: Akutibe-Shon katei|

    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 for each turn its in use)
    Damage points: N\A (-10 for the user for each turn he uses it)
    Description: After releasing a normal weapon seal, The user summons a weird shaped Tin Staff, Its created from highly developed materials, its very light and harder than a normal sword. it looks a meter and a half long staff with a ring at surounding its upper edge that ends with an gray orb, the ring has four smalller rings and a scythe-like-blade on its left side of the outer side of the main ring, and a sword on the other edge. this technique must be used to activate this weapon's abilities and without it the weapon can be equaled with large shurikens easily, and to make it work the user must have a special tatto over his arms that allows him to transfer his chakra into the weapon which turn that chakra into a dark chakra [not dark release chakra, just chakra's like sasuke's when activate the curse mark] creating a layer of black chakra around it and chakra chains with a chakra knife-like appear out of the small rings, these chakra chains can extend for long range and can not be used as rods for any kind of chakra other than the user's because of the tatto's effect, these chakra chains are just like the chains kushina was able to pull of her body to restrain targets, this chains takes the same charactrizes as Kushina's except for being coming out of the weapon, this chains have multi uses like holding over the user's arm to make him able to send the staff into longer ranges, or restrain the enemy or attack him by pierce through their bodies, they are also able to move through hard mediums like the ground if was charged with lightening chakra by the user. it has on other ability which is contained it the orb it held, That orb can be used to use jutsus that require an arm usage like rasengen and chidori by simply using it to contain them and release them from it, however it does not effect the number of handseals or the jutsu's power at all, just maximize the range. this weapon because part of the user's chakra system when activated and that is one of its disadvantages, moreover, it turns the user's chakra to become more and more of dark chakra, this is another advantage since sensory ninjas can know exactly where is their enemy and to be able to know his location even if he was in the middle of hundreds, this weapon has extra fuuinjutsus features but it can not be used by someone who already learned fuuinjutus.

    ~Only needed to be used once to activate the weapon for as long as the user wants.
    ~-10 damages to the user for each turn this weapon is activated.
    ~This weapons abilities can only be used after this technique was used, and can only be used by -Theos. .
    ~the user can release up to 5 chains to start with and they can only be stopped by chakra forms and chakra weapons.


    Declined: seems OP and worst descriptions ever... can use fuuinjutsu but not by someone that already learnt it? wth


    (Kuchyose No Jutsu: Kewsura Buntai) - Vulture summoning Technique: Kewsura Squad-


    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40(+20 for each lightening jutsu they use)
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to each lightening jutsu used)
    Description: The user wipes his giant fan with blood and charges it with a large amount of chakra. He then swings the fan, releasing all the chakra and summons 3 large vultures called the Kewsura's squad. This vultures is the vulture Emperor's Knights. they have four large wings and two tails on their backs with two strong claws which they uses to stand on. They are very fast in the air, and they are similar to the Emperor and have claws out over thier upper two wings. they also has the ability to using lightening jutsus together to expand its range, but when they do that they will take 20 chakra points from the user for each time they do so making a rod to the lightening using formations and chakra.
    ~ Can only be summoned once
    ~ Takes 15 chakra points for each turn they stays on the battle field
    ~ Must have signed the vulture summoning contract
    ~ Can not use more than one jutsu at time, and it would be spreaded through them as long as they are in short range between each other
    ~ Can only use up to S rank lightening jutsus from what the user's know as long as its not a special ability "Example: Lightening Armor" and the user can not use any lightening jutsu in the turn where they use lightening jutsus too in the same rank or higher.


    how exactly are they spread among the group... do all 3 need to perform the jutsu as one? or do they all do it to amplify power... 1 more time i need to ask for clarification and it'll just get declined for good :/


    With the Purple part being out:

    - Chakra Balance Technique - (Chakra Amari Jutsu)

    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra points: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The Monkey handseal as he charges his ears with chakra , and with concentration he charge it into his inner ear making him able to control his balance by controlling the liquid hidden in the inner ear which controll his balance, this technique would make him completely able to controll himself if any changes happens to the Terrain making him normally imbalanced but while using this jutsu it wont, and make his reactions faster than normal human, this specially works with taijutsus.


    Balance won't make reactions faster



    Rain style: Scavenging high pressured Rain (Ame No Justu: Kansou Oshi Takai Ame)

    Rank: S
    Range: long "the whole area"
    Type: Supplementary/Deffense
    Chakra cost: 40 (+15 chakra points for each turn its in use)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After preforming three handseals, the user makes the sky strongly rain down over the whole terrain, this rains contents dust and earth projectails, and make them all fall along on the ground without any harm, and can also stops up to B rank sand jutsus by the same method.
    ~Can only stay for five turns.
    ~Can not be used more than once per battle.
    ~Must have mastered the Rain element to be able to use this jutsu.


    Declined... i seriously don't get the need for this. dust and earth projectiles that do no damage? only stops up to b rank sand? where's the point? and it's a rain jutsu... why would their be dust and earth projectiles in it?
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 10-31-2010 at 08:09 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen-sama View Post
    Fire seal (kasai no fuuin )
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage: +30 to fire
    Description: The user will focus chakra to his stomach and a kanji "Fire" will appear there.The user with this seal will increase the chakra flow speed fore his fire type chakra.(like how the EIG increase the spped and power of the user)While with this state the user can't use wind or water at all, and his body will recieve a -5 damage because of the overwhelming fire in his body.
    *Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns turn


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    1 sword style: blazing rage (shotoryu: kaen gekido )
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost:40(-20 each turn)
    Damage: 80(if hit)
    Description: The user will focus fire chakra to his sword and make it extend into a huge blazing fire sword that it long range big (the weight is the same, because fire doesn't weigh).Than the user can swing it in any direction and anything it touches it put on fire.
    *can only be used once and lasts 3 turns


    ~ Doesn't deserve S-rank ~
    1 sword style: blazing rage (shotoryu: kaen gekido )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost:30(-10 each turn)
    Damage: 60(if hit)
    Description: The user will focus fire chakra to his sword and make it extend into a huge blazing fire sword that it long range big (the weight is the same, because fire doesn't weigh).Than the user can swing it in any direction and anything it touches it put on fire.
    *can only be used once and lasts 3 turns


    ~ Approved ~

    leaving for emp if he was the one who checked last time
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Seven Paths Of Pain View Post
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Remi) Summoning Technique: Remi

    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40 (-10 Per turn on battlefield)
    Damage Points:N/A

    Description: After the user has done the required handseal and using a small amount of blood, Seven Paths Of Pain will wipe his blood upon his katana and thrust it into the ground summoning Remi the King of the Pumpard relm.

    Remi is the size of Gamabunta, has silky white/black polka dotted fur, wears armor similar to that of samurai and carries a katana (fit for his size). Remis upper body is similar to that of a male human so he is able to perform handseals. With his sword sheathed Remi has amazing speed & agility, but with his sword out he is very sluggish and can be careless at times. He has a natural affinity for lightning chakra but can also use water jutsu.



    -Can be only summon twice per battle
    -Capable of using up to B rank lightning/water jutsu
    -Summons can only be taught by Seven Paths Of Pain

    ~ Number of turns on the battlefield per time summoned ? ~

    *I just completely removed that part about licking fur etc lol*
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Remi) Summoning Technique: Remi

    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40 (-10 Per turn on battlefield)
    Damage Points:N/A

    Description: After the user has done the required handseal and using a small amount of blood, Seven Paths Of Pain will wipe his blood upon his katana and thrust it into the ground summoning Remi the King of the Pumpard relm.

    Remi is the size of Gamabunta, has silky white/black polka dotted fur, wears armor similar to that of samurai and carries a katana (fit for his size). Remis upper body is similar to that of a male human so he is able to perform handseals. With his sword sheathed Remi has amazing speed & agility, but with his sword out he is very sluggish and can be careless at times. He has a natural affinity for lightning chakra but can also use water jutsu.



    -Can be only summon twice per battle
    -Can only be summoned to the battlefield for 3 turns.
    -Capable of using up to B rank lightning/water jutsu
    -Summons can only be taught by Seven Paths Of Pain


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Lemurs!
    Scroll Owner: ~Hasashi~
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: King Julian
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Maurice(The biggest lemur excluding the giant lemur), Mort(The small and annoying lemur), The giant lemur, and many more!


    Summoning: King Julian XIII (Kuchiyose)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The boss of all lemurs around the world, mad genius, super amazing singer, KING JULIAN! King Julian standing at 14 inches tall, razor sharp claws, razor sharp teeth, the fastest and strongest lemur in existence. Don't be fooled by King Julians small form, for he is just as strong as any other boss summoning. All the strength boiled up in say gamabunta, who can easily level a house with his strength is boiled up in him as well. King Julian shares he trait all lemurs have, speed. However King Julian's speed is like no other lemur, he is so fast and agile that even the 2 tomo sharingan has trouble catching him. They say no human or animal has ever caught King Julian, lucky for them that is. King Julian also has a very special genjutsu only he can preform. The genjutsu itself is 2 parts, and can only be activated when the opponent can clearly see King Julians entire body. King Julian will scream out on the top of his lungs, "I like to move it move it" Once this happens the genjutsu is activated. The opponent sees thousands of lemurs pop out of the ground and dance along to King Julians singing, the opponent is so enticed by the singing that he is completely unaware of the fact that he is in a genjutsu and cannot sense(unless with a KG sensory ability. Not something granted by a weapon, say samehada.) any incoming jutsu. The second part of the genjutsu is activated once King Julian stops singing. All the lemurs instantly attack the opponent scratching, clawing and biting. The opponent tries to attack the lemurs but fails, the song that King Julian sings is stuck in his head, stoping him from getting off any jutsu without immense concentration, and with all the lemurs on him he cannot concentrate enough to preform a jutsu. In reality King Julian has run up into the opponents claws and he has been biting, scratching and hitting the opponents body dealing great amounts of damage. King Julian carries with him two pom-pom's made of grass. The Pom-Poms are his weapons, by focusing chakra into the grass King Julian can make the blades of grass razor sharp and shoot them at the opponent. Or he can make them harder than steal and use them as clubs. King Julian is also a great master of the taijutsu arts, he claims when he was younger he was called "Kung Fu Julian" his skills in taijutsu can be equaled to an EIG master. Julian can also use his tail as an offensive weapon.


    ~Only once per battle and King Julian only remains on the field 4 turns
    ~King Julian's genjutsu does not count as one of the three moves the user can use. However any taijutsu(utilizing the jutsu on the jutsu list) do count.
    ~King Julians genjutsu can only be activated once and King Julian runs out of chakra the following turn
    ~Kai is not powerful enough to stop king Julians genjutsu
    ~because king Julian is constantly attacking the opponent obviously pain isn't enough to break the genjutsu. Furtermore since king Julian is on the body of the opponent and close enough to continuously focus chakra into the opponent to keep the genjutsu going, in order to break the jutsu by focusing chakra into the victim by a friend or clone they must first remove king Julian from re victims body
    ~can only trap a maximum of 3 people
    ~King Julian can only preform and genjutsu techniques
    ~King Julian is very small and agile, combined with his natural sense of danger(that all animals have) he can avoid incoming jutsu by just leaping to the side.
    ~King Julian can run on 2 feet or 4 feet. He prefers 2 feet and that is the speed that two sharingan have trouble keeping up with. However if he chooses to run on 4 feet his speed and agility are doubled.
    ~King Julian, although very smart can sometimes be an idiot. So when he is summoned it takes him a few seconds to realize what happened.
    ~sharingan of 3 Tomo or higher can see through king julains genjutsu




    OP as it is, even though i don't mind you copying emp's madagascar theme so much as it's a different animal.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton|Bouhatei Tekishutsu)- Lightning Release|Mole Extraction
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user focuses a large amount of lightning chakra into their palms. they then slam their hands on the ground sending a shock wave of lightning through the ground. This charges the ground with an electrical charge. Anything that is underground will be paralyzed for one turn.
    (Can only be used twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    Approved


    (Raiton|Dassui Nami)- Lightning Release|Evaporation Wave
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:100
    Damage Points:90
    Description: the user focuses lightning chakra into all parts of their body. They compress it. He/She then releases a wave of lightning from their body. The outgoing lightning wave causes water particles in the air and in body of water to vibrate rapidly causing friction. The heat produced from this move evaporates all near water sources. if the opponent is hit with this jutsu the particles on their skin will vibrate rapidly against each other causing friction. This new obtained source of massive heat can cause severe burns on the opponents body
    (Can only be used once per battle)
    (no A-rank and above Lightning jutsu next turn)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    Declined - evaporation techniques exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Suiton: Hazumo Ibo no Kerokero) Water Release: Bouncy Frog Warts

    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After 3 handseals, the user spits out up to 5 spheres of water (The water has sticky properties, similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field), in a quick succession and at great speeds. Utilizing her Water Chakra, the user drastically increased the cohesion of the water molecules and decreased the adhesion of the water molecules, thus creating thick beads of water that will bounce off any object. The user can redirect the beads of water by stomping on the ground, thus erupting small pillars of earth ( This jutsu preforms (Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique, without cost), until either she pops a spiked pillar or the beads collide with a sharp object, thus breaching the spheres and blasting the sticky substance inside onto the target. the user can infuse Fire or Lightning into the balls (For Boiling Beads or Electrified Bead, isntead of Sticky Beads), without changing the Adhesion and Cohesion levels. Wind jutsus might burst the ball aswell.

    Declined - mainly because if the opponent went to destroy the ball you could redirect it with pillars free of cost.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting, and yes, i know that the names with sorrow in them, might get a little too emo, but i like it :D

    Water release: Tears of Sorrows = Suiton: No namida wa, kanashimi
    Type: Defensive/offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Self/Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user focuses water chakra in his/her hands, then the user places the hands in front of his/her face, like if he/she was crying. The user will emit a lot of water, from their mouth and emit tears from their eyes. The water will begin to take form, and will quickly grow, into a three meter tall, faceless, human looking, clump of water, with very big arms. The water will place it’s arms in front of the user, thereby shielding the user from harm, but it can also be used offensively, if an opponent comes too close, the user can make the water lash out after the opponent.

    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used three times per battle.
    • This jutsu can last for 2 turns.

    sorry but multi use of a beast that can attack and defend without costing a turn after being brought to the field to attack is too much imo



    Fuuton: Kanashimi no hōkō = Wind release: Roar of sorrow.
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user forms a single handseal, and focuses chakra in his/her neck, the user then screams all he/she is able, and releases the chakra at the same time. This, results in a very high scream, which will interrupt anyone who hears it, in doing handseals, thereby interrupting the jutsu they are doing in that moment.

    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Does not work on jutsus, that require no handseals.
    • Can only be used two times per battle.

    declined - you could instantly interrupt someone's counter therefore creating an instant win scenario.


    Illusion Technique: Deadly tears of sorrow = Genjutsu: Kanashimi no deddorī no namida
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This genjutsu requires eye contact with the target, but only when activating it, after activating this genjutsu, eye contact is not necessary. The user cast an illusion, where the target will see about twenty rotten arms, appearing from the ground, these arms will wrap around the targets arms, legs, chest, and neck. (This happens extremely quick) Then, a giant molested face, will appear floating in mid air above the target, and begin to cry down on him, the target will feel like he’s being drowned, because of the water.

    Notes:
    • Can only be used two times per battle.
    • Lasts for one turn.
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.

    Declined - lmao molested face
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by DOD_bld View Post
    Resubmitting with corrections.
    I have adjusted it down to +10, and you were right, I did my math wrong, that number was way to low, so I fixed that too. It now amounts to about 1.5 time more force than a pro-baseball player bat force.

    (Sensō Meisu: Kakan) – The War Mace: Kakan

    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to Earth element techniques)
    Description: This weapon is a 3½ft(106cm) long "club" of the war mace family of weapons. Kakan is wrapped with bands of dense metal that absorb and channel chakra. The handle is made from a stone azure in color and reacts offensively towards the welder if they are a stranger (Blade style chopping off of fingers, and Law Abiding Citizen style paralyzing with a strong neuro-toxin.) The composition of the mace being made from such a dense material makes it near indestructible and much heavier that it looks, topping the scales at around 100lbs(50kg.) This dense composition combined with the influence of earth element allows for great damage dealing potential as well; somewhere in the realm of ≈15000lb/f²(≈6803kg/f²) of force. This is enough force to severely damage internal organs if a direct hit is landed.
    Note: Kakan may only be used once every other turn to deal an attack using earth elemental chakra at a cost of 15.
    Note: Once per match Kakan is able to absorb an opponents earth based attack of A rank or below.
    Please don't knock the pic, I made it ages ago :o

    In the movie Blade his sword has blades that chop off fingers of people other than Blade himself.
    Blades would pop out of these slits in the handle.
    And in the movie Law Abiding Citizen, the protagonist has a gun he rigged with a neuro-toxin, so when the trigger is pulled needles from inside the grip inject the wielder.


    ~ It can't absorb the opponent's chakra, specify that ~

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kīrā - Jikan No Māmotto) – Summoning: Kīrā – Marmot of Time
    Rank: C
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: ≤50
    Description: After a series of hand signs and releasing some blood from my finger I place my hand on the ground and summon a Marmot. Kīrā is 4”(122cm) tall, with a reach of 6’8”(203cm) and weighing in at a stout 181lbs(82kg) and is covered with white hair having an slight blue hue. Kīrā is one of the many Grandchildren of the Marmot Lord Hōkingu. Kīrā has the ability to distort the opponent’s view of time making it appear as if he is actually moving much faster than he is (second gate opened speed). He is however only making this happen through the use of genjutsu, which is activated as soon as he is called to the field. Like all Marmots, Kīrā has great physical strength, and if you are not used to it, a VERY foul odor. Making taijutsu and submission holds staples in Kīrā’s arsenal. Kīrā is adept in all taijutsu (that don't have special training requirements ie: EIG or Kaito Jutsus) up to rank B.
    Note: Kīrā may only stay in battle for 3 turns.
    Note: Kīrā may only be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: Kīrā can only be summoned by Nindo Seiryuu or those that have signed the Marmot contract.
    Note: All Marmot summons require having signed their contract, which is held by Nindo Seiryuu.


    ~ What is his normal speed ? Specify also the requirements to break the Genjutsu. ~
    Resubmitting both with corrections per Emperor.

    (Sensō Meisu: Kakan) – The War Mace: Kakan

    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to Earth element techniques)
    Description: This weapon is a 3½ft(106cm) long "club" of the war mace family of weapons. Kakan is wrapped with bands of dense metal that absorb and channel chakra. (of the user only, except where stated below) The handle is made from a stone azure in color and reacts offensively towards the welder if they are a stranger (Blade style chopping off of fingers, and Law Abiding Citizen style paralyzing with a strong neuro-toxin.) The composition of the mace being made from such a dense material makes it near indestructible and much heavier that it looks, topping the scales at around 100lbs(50kg.) This dense composition combined with the influence of earth element allows for great damage dealing potential as well; somewhere in the realm of ≈15000lb/f²(≈6803kg/f²) of force. This is enough force to severely damage internal organs if a direct hit is landed.
    Note: Kakan may only be used once every other turn to deal an attack using earth elemental chakra at a cost of 15.
    Note: Once per match Kakan is able to absorb an opponents earth based attack of A rank or below.
    Please don't knock the pic, I made it ages ago :o

    In the movie Blade his sword has blades that chop off fingers of people other than Blade himself.
    Blades would pop out of these slits in the handle.
    And in the movie Law Abiding Citizen, the protagonist has a gun he rigged with a neuro-toxin, so when the trigger is pulled needles from inside the grip inject the wielder.


    ~ Explain the purple part better ~

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kīrā - Jikan No Māmotto) – Summoning: Kīrā – Marmot of Time
    Rank: C
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: ≤50
    Description: After a series of hand signs and releasing some blood from my finger I place my hand on the ground and summon a Marmot. Kīrā is 4”(122cm) tall, with a reach of 6’8”(203cm) and weighing in at a stout 181lbs(82kg) and is covered with white hair having an slight blue hue. Kīrā is one of the many Grandchildren of the Marmot Lord Hōkingu. Kīrā has the ability to distort the opponent’s view of time making it appear as if he is moving at second gate opened speed (he actually only moves as fast as jounin - no gates.) He is however only making this happen through the use of genjutsu, which is activated as soon as he is called to the field. Like all Marmots, Kīrā has great physical strength, and if you are not used to it, a VERY foul odor which slows the opponents reaction times. Making taijutsu and submission holds staples in Kīrā’s arsenal. Kīrā is adept in all taijutsu (that don't have special training requirements ie: EIG or Kaito Jutsus) up to rank B.
    Note: Kīrā's genjutsu only effects the opponent when he is moving, and does not effect sharingan users when sharingan is active, or rinnegan. Non sharingan users need just close their eyes to avoid this genjutsu, though their sense of smell will be effected greater by his odor, slowing their reactions further.
    Note: Kīrā may only stay in battle for 3 turns.
    Note: Kīrā may only be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: Kīrā can only be summoned by Nindo Seiryuu or those that have signed the Marmot contract.
    Note: All Marmot summons require having signed their contract, which is held by Nindo Seiryuu.


    ~ Approved. I like the idea, very inventive and one of the few new ideas I'm seeing in this thread as of late. Don't go ruin it now by putting the same idea into all your marmots ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Ichi Motte Etai | One With Nature]
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short
    Chakra Cost : 50
    Damage Points : N/A
    Zetsu will utilize his plant - like abilities and enter a mode, where he will become one with nature, He will lose the ability to perform any ninjutsu except plant (only Zetsu) related techniques. At the great cost of no ninjutsu, each of his plant used technique will gain a damage boost, and will remove any damage due to chakra loss, and chakra loss to upkeep plant related techniques. Being one with nature, Zetsu will sense anything that comes near to a plant. However entering this mode will require Zetsu to stay in a meditative state for 10 seconds, leaving him open for his opponent's attacks.
    [Once per battle]
    [Requires 10 seconds before entering mode]
    [Advanced Zetsu techniques do not deal damage for using them]
    [Zetsu techniques do not absorb the user's chakra each turn]
    [Zetsu cannot use any non plant techniques during he is within this state, excluding Taijutsu]

    ~ This seems to similar to a useless plant-based Sage Mode. o-O ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Doton: Tsuchi no Tenrai Yari| Earth Release: Divine Spear of Earth
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A rather simple but stealthy technique, the user will release his chakra on the ground and will form a spear which can freely move underground (following the concept of the Underground Fish Projection Technique). This spear is similar to a homing missile. It can sense a source of chakra and the user can let the spear go directly at that source or he can opt by choosing the route the spear takes, because the spear sends back multiple pulses of chakra back to the user, warning him of the source of chakra's position.
    __________
    *Usable three times per battle.


    ~ How does a spear of earth sense chakra ? o_O Isn't it like just a big pointy stick of earth, it's not even a special weapon, where does the chakra-sensing come from ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kenjutsu: Kisoku-Jisan Higyou) - Sword Art: Breathtaking Strike -

    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:30
    Description: With this technique, the user is able to inflict damage to the enemy, without drawing the sword, therefore without spilling any blood.
    There are two ways of performing this technique:
    1. The first way, is an attack, after having parried the attack of your enemy. As the enemy tries to slash or stab the user, the user deflects the enemies sword with his own, sending it to the side (to the opposite side from where the sword came from), leaving the enemy open for an attack. In one swift movement, the user directs the hilt towards the enemies throat - upon contact, the user stabs the end of the hilt (the "pommel") deep into the enemies Thyroid Cartilage, commonly know as Adam's apple.
    2. The second is the same as the first one, just that now, the user does not use the parrying motion - this version is only a direct attack, when parrying is not needed.

    The strike causes a medium amount of damage, but the enemy runs suddenly out of breath, and is given the impression of being choked - commonly know, when somebody is getting choked, he panics (it is a natural reaction, that cannot be avoided), and usually stops doing what he does abruptly, releasing everything he has been holding in his arms, and brings his hands to his throat, where he tries to un-choke himself. Of course, in about 3 to 4 seconds, the Adam's apple goes back to normal, and does not cause any further choking.


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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Liliana View Post
    ( Suiton: Hazumo Ibo no Kerokero) Water Release: Bouncy Frog Warts

    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After 3 handseals, the user spits out up to 5 spheres of water (The water has sticky properties, similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field), in a quick succession and at great speeds. Utilizing her Water Chakra, the user drastically increased the cohesion of the water molecules and decreased the adhesion of the water molecules, thus creating thick beads of water that will bounce off any object. The user can redirect the beads of water by stomping on the ground, thus erupting small pillars of earth ( This jutsu preforms (Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique, without cost), until either she pops a spiked pillar or the beads collide with a sharp object, thus breaching the spheres and blasting the sticky substance inside onto the target. the user can infuse Fire or Lightning into the balls (For Boiling Beads or Electrified Bead, isntead of Sticky Beads), without changing the Adhesion and Cohesion levels. Wind jutsus might burst the ball aswell.


    Declined - mainly because if the opponent went to destroy the ball you could redirect it with pillars free of cost.
    Kinda the point of the jutsu, don't you think?

    ( Suiton: Hazumo Ibo no Kerokero) Water Release: Bouncy Frog Warts

    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After 3 handseals, the user spits out up to 5 spheres of water (The water has sticky properties, similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field), in a quick succession and at great speeds. Utilizing her Water Chakra, the user drastically increased the cohesion of the water molecules and decreased the adhesion of the water molecules, thus creating thick beads of water that will bounce off any object. The user can redirect the beads of water by stomping on the ground, thus erupting (up to 10) small pillars of earth (Counts towards the jutsu count) , until either she decides to pop them (using one handseal) or the beads collide with a sharp object, thus breaching the spheres and blasting the sticky substance inside onto the target. the user can infuse Fire or Lightning into the balls (For Boiling Beads or Electrified Bead, isntead of Sticky Beads), without changing the Adhesion and Cohesion levels. Wind jutsus might burst the ball aswell.

    ~ No restrictions ? ~

    Edited the no cost part
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen-sama View Post
    1 sword style: blazing rage (shotoryu: kaen gekido )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost:30(-10 each turn)
    Damage: 60(if hit)
    Description: The user will focus fire chakra to his sword and make it extend into a huge blazing fire sword that it long range big (the weight is the same, because fire doesn't weigh).Than the user can swing it in any direction and anything it touches it put on fire.
    *can only be used once and lasts 3 turns


    leaving for emp if he was the one who checked last time
    check the one above please too ^^

    Redirect seal (ridairekuto fuuin )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: (depends on jutsu)
    Description: The user will focus chakra in both palms.Then on his right palm a kanji "in" and on his left will appear "out".Once a jutsu comes at the user he will put his right arm forward to absorb the attack and than his left palm for the jutsu to come out and head for the opponent.
    *can only be used twice per battle


    Declined: Do Not Resubmit
     
         
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    (Houka Enban)- Flame Disc
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid - long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User focuses fire chakra into their hand and begins to mold it into a spinning, flat disc. The user can throw the disc for many ranges (given enough chakra) the disc cannot be used at short range. After the disc is thrown and the disc makes contact with the ground, or the opponent it explodes into a large fire. The disc can be enlarged or shrunken to cause more damage. The disk is capable of hiding shurken of many sizes with in it.

    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    Note: Only Orange- Hokage can teach this jutsu.
    Note: Can only be use every 2 rounds



    ~ Similar techniques exist ~


    (Mizu Koumaru)- Water Sphere
    Type: Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a sphere of water around their body. the sphere is howled out, with a thickness of 2 meters of water circulating around the users body (360 degrees of pertection).

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: Con only block A-rank and down, Fire and Wind jutsus.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can teach this jutsu.



    ~ Similar techniques exist ~


    (Daichi Sheru)- Earth Shell
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user focues earth chakra into the ground around them in a 2 meter radius then molds the ground into a shell around the users upper body, the user then molds the earth again to thin out and create spikes on the exterier of the users back (the spikes are only a meter in length).

    Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can teach this jutsu.



    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Hasashi~ View Post
    Summoning Animal: Lemurs!
    Scroll Owner: ~Hasashi~
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: King Julian
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Maurice(The biggest lemur excluding the giant lemur), Mort(The small and annoying lemur), The giant lemur, and many more!

    Summoning: King Julian XIII (Kuchiyose)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The boss of all lemurs around the world, mad genius, super amazing singer, KING JULIAN! King Julian standing at 14 inches tall, razor sharp claws, razor sharp teeth, the fastest and strongest lemur in existence. Don't be fooled by King Julians small form, for he is just as strong as any other boss summoning. All the strength boiled up in say gamabunta, who can easily level a house with his strength is boiled up in him as well. King Julian shares he trait all lemurs have, speed. However King Julian's speed is like no other lemur, he is so fast and agile that even the 2 tomo sharingan has trouble catching him. They say no human or animal has ever caught King Julian, lucky for them that is. King Julian also has a very special genjutsu only he can preform. The genjutsu itself is 2 parts, and can only be activated when the opponent can clearly see King Julians entire body. King Julian will scream out on the top of his lungs, "I like to move it move it" Once this happens the genjutsu is activated. The opponent sees thousands of lemurs pop out of the ground and dance along to King Julians singing, the opponent is so enticed by the singing that he is completely unaware of the fact that he is in a genjutsu and cannot sense(unless with a KG sensory ability. Not something granted by a weapon, say samehada.) any incoming jutsu. The second part of the genjutsu is activated once King Julian stops singing. All the lemurs instantly attack the opponent scratching, clawing and biting. The opponent tries to attack the lemurs but fails, the song that King Julian sings is stuck in his head, stoping him from getting off any jutsu without immense concentration, and with all the lemurs on him he cannot concentrate enough to preform a jutsu. In reality King Julian has run up into the opponents claws and he has been biting, scratching and hitting the opponents body dealing great amounts of damage. King Julian carries with him two pom-pom's made of grass. The Pom-Poms are his weapons, by focusing chakra into the grass King Julian can make the blades of grass razor sharp and shoot them at the opponent. Or he can make them harder than steal and use them as clubs. King Julian is also a great master of the taijutsu arts, he claims when he was younger he was called "Kung Fu Julian" his skills in taijutsu can be equaled to an EIG master. Julian can also use his tail as an offensive weapon.

    ~King Julian's genjutsu does not count as one of the three moves the user can use. However any taijutsu(utilizing the jutsu on the jutsu list) do count.
    ~Only once per battle and King Julian only remains on the field 4 turns

    ~King Julians genjutsu can only be activated once and King Julian runs out of chakra the following turn
    ~Kai is not powerful enough to stop king Julians genjutsu
    ~because king Julian is constantly attacking the opponent obviously pain isn't enough to break the genjutsu. Furtermore since king Julian is on the body of the opponent and close enough to continuously focus chakra into the opponent to keep the genjutsu going, in order to break the jutsu by focusing chakra into the victim by a friend or clone they must first remove king Julian from re victims body
    ~can only trap a maximum of 3 people
    ~King Julian can only preform taijutsu and genjutsu techniques
    ~King Julian is very small and agile, combined with his natural sense of danger(that all animals have) he can avoid incoming jutsu by just leaping to the side.As long as they aren't to big
    ~King Julian can run on 2 feet or 4 feet. He prefers 2 feet and that is the speed that two sharingan have trouble keeping up with. However if he chooses to run on 4 feet his speed and agility are doubled.

    ~King Julian, although very smart can sometimes be an idiot. So when he is summoned it takes him a few seconds to realize what happened.
    ~sharingan of 3 Tomo or higher can see through king julains genjutsu


    OP as it is, even though i don't mind you copying emp's madagascar theme so much as it's a different animal.
    Scroll Owner: ~Hasashi~
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: King Julian
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Maurice(The biggest lemur excluding the giant lemur), Mort(The small and annoying lemur), The giant lemur, and many more!

    Summoning: King Julian XIII (Kuchiyose)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The boss of all lemurs around the world, mad genius, super amazing singer, KING JULIAN! King Julian standing at 14 inches tall, razor sharp claws, razor sharp teeth, the fastest and strongest lemur in existence. Don't be fooled by King Julians small form, for he is just as strong as any other boss summoning. All the strength boiled up in say gamabunta, who can easily level a house with his strength is boiled up in him as well. King Julian shares he trait all lemurs have, speed. However King Julian's speed is like no other lemur, he is so fast and agile that even the 2 tomo sharingan has trouble catching him. They say no human or animal has ever caught King Julian, lucky for them that is. King Julian also has a very special genjutsu only he can preform. The genjutsu itself is 2 parts, and can only be activated when the opponent can clearly see King Julians entire body. King Julian will scream out on the top of his lungs, "I like to move it move it" Once this happens the genjutsu is activated. The opponent sees thousands of lemurs pop out of the ground and dance along to King Julians singing, the opponent is so enticed by the singing that he is completely unaware of the fact that he is in a genjutsu and cannot sense(unless with a KG sensory ability. Not something granted by a weapon, say samehada.) any incoming jutsu. The second part of the genjutsu is activated once King Julian stops singing. All the lemurs instantly attack the opponent scratching, clawing and biting. The opponent tries to attack the lemurs but fails, the song that King Julian sings is stuck in his head, stoping him from getting off any jutsu without immense concentration, and with all the lemurs on him he cannot concentrate enough to preform a jutsu. In reality King Julian has run up into the opponents claws and he has been biting, scratching and hitting the opponents body dealing great amounts of damage. King Julian carries with him two pom-pom's made of grass. The Pom-Poms are his weapons, by focusing chakra into the grass King Julian can make the blades of grass razor sharp and shoot them at the opponent. Or he can make them harder than steal and use them as clubs. King Julian is also a great master of the taijutsu arts, he claims when he was younger he was called "Kung Fu Julian" his skills in taijutsu can be equaled to an EIG master. Julian can also use his tail as an offensive weapon.


    ~Only once per battle and King Julian only remains on the field 4 turns
    ~King Julian's genjutsu does count as one of the three moves the user can use.
    ~King Julians genjutsu can only be activated once and King Julian runs out of chakra the following turn
    ~Kai is not powerful enough to stop king Julians genjutsu
    ~because king Julian is constantly attacking the opponent obviously pain isn't enough to break the genjutsu. Furthermore since king Julian is on the body of the opponent and close enough to continuously focus chakra into the opponent, to keep the genjutsu going, in order to break the jutsu by focusing chakra into the victim by a friend or clone they must first remove king Julian from re victims body
    ~can only trap a maximum of 3 people
    ~King Julian can only preform taijutsu and genjutsu techniques
    ~King Julian is very small and agile, combined with his natural sense of danger(that all animals have) he can avoid incoming jutsu by just leaping to the side, as long as they aren't to big.
    ~King Julian, although very smart can sometimes be an idiot. So when he is summoned it takes him a few seconds to realize what happened.
    ~sharingan of 3 Tomo or higher can see through king julains genjutsu

    ~ That idea's copied from MY summoning. You can't ripoff parts of people's new ideas like that. ~

    Anything bolded in the quote has been removed, anything bolded in the current were edited(Or something like that ).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    |Kenjutsu : Hitoshirenu Tsurugi Suraisu - Sword Style : Unseen Sword Slice|
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: User Will Start Charging Chakra Into Their Hand Making Them To Hit Stronger , After It User Will Blow A Smoke Bomb , And It Will Distract The Enemy , After It User Fastly Slips Behind Enemys Back And Slices It With His / Her Sword .
    - Notes -
    - Only Dage Can Use This Jutsu .
    - Usable 3 Time Per Battle .


    ~ What ? o_O ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    summoning jutsu secretary bird : yuki the goddess of wind
    Rank:Forbidden
    type: Summoning.
    Range:Short-Long(she can be summoned anywhere on the field.)
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description:Yuki is also known as the queen of wind due to her affinity towards wind.Her chakra control towards wind is incredible and she can utilise wind jutsus upto A rank using minimal chakra.She can also send a frobidden ranked blast of wind once per battle.The blasts she sends can be decided by her if its concentrated chakra or if its a blast of wind which can blow away the opponent. She can also mould wind infront of her to make her flight faster.She is the fastest secretary bird and can cover distances from short range to long range in a matter of 3 seconds however she can release wind chakra from behind her due to which she can travel from short range to long range in a matter of half second.She is the fastest secretary bird alive.
    Pros & Cons:
    -Can only be summoned by Ragerok and s06p-
    -Can be summoned once per battle and lasts 5 turns-
    -Wind attacks are useless against her as she absorbs the wind jutsus but she is weak against
    fire jutsus-
    -The blast of wind can only be used twice per battle.-
    -She can be the only summon on the battle field.-
    -Wind jutsu can only be used 5 times per battle.-

    ~ Purple part is a definite no ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Okay, this is my first Custom Weapon, so If something is incorrect, I will surely fix it. Oh, and do I have to update my bio after I get this? Thanks a million!

    (Shinku Kumo-Crimson Cloud)
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:A blade that is said to be made from the very clouds themselves, mixed together with the blood of its forger to make a surprisingly resistant material. This blade has a deep red color to the blade and is around 3.5 feet long, with a 1.5 foot long hilt ornately decorated with red, gilded flowers . (It is housed in a sheath with the same decorations.) Because of its strange composition, it is resistant to many low rank jutsus (Up to C Rank).and can conduct electricity well. It is also known as being quite a bit lighter than normal katanas and can be swung with a high rate of speed.

    ~ Similar weapons exist ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Technique: Kaijin (Grand Cotta Summoning)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across the tattoo on Oraan's left arm, Oraan summons Grand Cotta. Grand Cotta is the largest Hyena of them all. He is the same size as Gamabunta. He is the only Hyena capable of using Jutsu other then GenJutsu, consisting primarily of Fire and Lightning. Because Grand Cotta has a very thick hide it takes S Ranked or above Lightning attacks to kill him. Grand Cotta has a helmet made of Manganin, which is a metal that is very resistant to lightning. The helmet, and the hide, are why it is so hard to kill Grand Cotta with Lightning abilities.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for a Maximum of 4 turns.
    Note: Can use all Lightning Techniques that the User knows.
    Note: Can use all Fire Techniques that the User knows up to S Rank
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.


    ~ Why only lightning ? ~

    Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User is coated in an armor of thick Hyena hide, belonging to Grand Cotta. The User gains a helmet made of Manganin, the same metal used as Grand Cotta's protective headgear. The Transformation into Kaijin (Hyena Mod) happens instanteously. While this is active, Hyena mode has these effects.
    *Decrease all Lightning Jutsu damage by 20.
    *Lightning jutsu that hit the user does not cause Paralyzation due to the hide of the Hyena.
    *User's Peripheral vision is impaired due to Helmet.
    *User cannot use Kage Bunshin while in this mode.
    *Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.

    *Lasts for 7 turns


    ~ Reduce the number of turns and add a number of times usage restriction. ~

    Summoning Technique: Kami no Hidari-te Akuma no Migi-te (God's Left Hand, Devil's Right Hand)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User, while in Kaijin (Hyena Mode), summons what appears to be two clones of the user. The only difference between the three is that one has A yellow Manganin helmet, while the other has a red Manganin helmet, and the user's helmet is brown. The God's left hand(Kami) has all Lightning Abilities and is capable of using all the Lightning Techs that the user knows. The Devil's Right Hand(Akuma) has all Fire Abilities, and is capable of using all the Fire Techs that the user knows.
    Note: Usable only in Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Vision impairment still applies for Each Summoned "clone".
    *Each Summoned "Clone" is immune to attacks of their element S Rank and Below.
    *User cannot use any Lightning or Fire Techs while each respective Summoning Clone is on the field and for 1 turn after they are destroyed.


    (Kami/Akuma: Kurama Bushuugi)- God's Left Hand/Devil's Right Hand: Wheel of Misfortune
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 80
    Damage Points: 120
    Desription: A combination of Kami's and Akuma's natural elements. They stand back to back and shoot a fireball and lightning ring, which combine and travel toward the opponent, gaining speed as it goes.
    Note: Can only be used 1x per battle
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    Note: Can only be used in Kaijin (Hyena Mode.
    ~ Get Hyena Mode approved first ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Illusion Technique: Deadly tears of sorrow = Genjutsu: Kanashimi no deddorī no namida
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This genjutsu requires eye contact with the target, but only when activating it, after activating this genjutsu, eye contact is not necessary. The user cast an illusion, where the target will see about twenty rotten arms, appearing from the ground, these arms will wrap around the targets arms, legs, chest, and neck. (This happens extremely quick) Then, a giant skeleton face, will appear floating in mid air above the target, and begin to cry down on him, the target will feel like he’s being drowned, because of the water. Because of the energy the jutsu costs, the user won’t be able to use advanced jutsus, in the next turn.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used two times per battle.
    • Lasts for one turn.
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • No A-rank or higher jutsus in the next turn.

    ~ Approved ~

    Wind release: Breeze of the sorrowing dead = Fuuton: Kanashimi no kaze shinde.
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage points: 70
    Description: The user inhales an incredible amount of air, from the area around him, the user will still be able to survive, and uphold consciousness, since this is done very fast, doing so the user almost empties the area, in short range of him, of air. This causes fire jutsus below B-rank, that’s in short range of the user, to die out because of the lack of oxygen. After inhaling the air, the user mixes it with his chakra, and then exhales it. When the air is exhaled, it will be formed as a deformed wall, of unclear human looking creatures, which will be stretching their arms out, like if they wanted to grab the target.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra
    • Can only be used three times per battle

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    Water release: Tears of Sorrows = Suiton: No namida wa, kanashimi
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self/Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user focuses water chakra in his/her hands, then the user places the hands in front of his/her face, like if he/she was crying. The user will emit a lot of water, from their mouth and water chakra that just appears to be tears from their eyes. The water will begin to take form, and will quickly grow, into a three meter tall, faceless, human looking, clump of water, with very big arms. The water will place it’s arms in front of the user, thereby shielding the user from harm. This is all done in one fluid motion.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used three times per battle.
    • This jutsu lasts for 1 turn.

    ~ Approved ~

    Fire release: second summoning fire dragon T'shin the sorrowing = Katon: Dai ni hi ryū T’shin kanashimi shōkan
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user gathers an incredible amount of fire chakra in his gut, then the user performs the handseals, and exhales a giant stream of fire, through a ring made by the thumb and index finger. The stream will take the form of a giant dragonhead, this dragon head will race at the target with incredible speed. The user is able to make the dragonhead spew a B-ranked fireball, by doing a single handseal, this fireball can only be spewed straight forward.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used once per battle.
    • This is not a summon, it’s just a fancy name.

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-03-2010 at 01:07 PM.

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