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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon: Igneel No Ken
    Type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (10 After summoning in each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will bite his thumb and write ''Ryu'' on his rigth hand to summon a sword. It's name comes from an ancient Dragon capable of spiting intense flames, since this sword is made of the dragon's fang, it can absorb and control fire at the users will (natural fire or the user own fire). As well the sword can release a powerfull blast of fire in the shape of a wave or a dragon by focusing a large amount of fire chakra into the tip of the sword.Since this sword is a fire weapon is naturally weak againts water, if this sword or the user is hit by a A or S-rank water jutsu the sword cannot be used for the rest of the battle and the user will take 10 more damage points for water jutsus.


    Specify what you mean by the purple part.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Suiton: Mizuridairekushon [Water Style: Water Redirection]
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: +10( + whatever the damage of the opponent’s taijutsu is)
    Description:The user will use the water in the air to surround there whole body (leaving small opending around the mouth, ear, etc..) creating and ultra slick force for other objects to move over. When an opponent starts throwing punches, the user can move the water up and down there body, arms, legs etc..) at the points at which the opponent is attacking so that the attacks glance right off and will keep going,clumsily throwing the opponent off, also using the opponent speed of there attack to speed up the motion of the water to add damage to the user taijutsu.
    *Co-creators Anbu Itachi*
    *This jutsu can only be used 2 time per match*
    *Only last 3 turns*

    ~ Nice concept, but the purple part I underlined in the jutsu is pretty much nonsense. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    ( Tetsu no ishi ) - Iron Will
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Chakra Cost: 99% of chakra you have remaining
    Damage points: N/A ( + 1 when you take killing strike )
    Description: Iron Will is technique that's used when user's near death situation. This technique is last resort technique that's used when fighting against Taijutsu/Kenjutsu/Weapon user and it'll cause hospital trip instead of user dying. It works in a way where user covers his body with chakra and clears mind from feelings. After that any damage done to user by Taijutsu/Kenjutsu/Weapons will be suffered and user's Will Power and empty mind allows him to survive from the pain head on and after this technique is used user remains stationary, unable to use anything and the match will end there.
    Note:
    - This jutsu ends match with you losing it
    - Nothing can be used afterwards
    - Results user being unable to die and must visit hospital to recover from wounds.
    - User remains stationary after used in same place after damage has been suffered.


    ~ WTF Declined, do not resubmit ~
    ( Katon: Honoo Pisuton ) - Fire release: Flame piston
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 25 ( X 2 if used with two limbs )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User focuses chakra into some of their limbs and starts releasing the fire chakra from some part of that limb. Once that is done user creates big flames from the part of that limb and the flames will work like a piston and shoot you forward with faster speed than what you could run.
    Note:
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - No water jutsus at the same turn
    - Cannot be used if user's wet.


    ~ Declined, similar jutsu exists ~

    ( Kuchiyose: Puredetāgēto ) - Summoning jutsu: Predator Gate
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 30 per turn )
    Damage points: 80 if a taijutsu hit is taken from Crocodile ( - 20 to user )
    Description: User completes full handseals for summoning jutsu while focusing chakra on their Crocodile tattoo. Once that is done user completes summoning jutsu, creating wide gate in air that opens and reveals gigantic crocodile that's bigger than gamabunta. Due to its large size the crocodile cannot move out of the gate but it will either stick its head outside of the gate or simply stick out its one limb. The Crocodile itself is able of using Earth and Fire element on user's level but the chakra cost to do jutsus with crocodile is 1.5 times higher than normal.
    Note:
    - Can only be used once
    - Crocodile can only stay for 4 turns on the field
    - Changing the gate's place will count as jutsu - meaning that gate can be replaced around the field. Crocodile cannot be out while doing so
    - No Genjutsu, Summonings or Offensive basic ninjutsu can be used on next two turns.


    ~ I love the idea, actually, but the purple parts I underlined need to be fixed. If the crocodile can stick out only a limb or its mouth, how can it use all Earth and Fire jutsus ? It can use only those which do not require handseals. Obviously it cannot use custom jutsu and its moves count as one of your three per turn. The moving gate around thing is pure rubbish, and has to be removed completely. Also I need more restrictions. Even for partially summoning a crocodile bigger than Bunta, it will adversely affect your performance in some way, not just "for two turns", it will be permanent. 4 turns is also too much, 3 would do. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Earth Style: Earth Tank!
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Type: supplementary
    Description: This jutsu creates an earth shaped tank around the user, it has the abillity to shoot its rock cannon (Shoots a rock at S-rank power) its got a total of 6 shots and can be used in attack or defense the only problem is this tank cannot move very fast, but is equiped with a hatch on the top so you or a clone can stick your head out of.

    ~ Really ? Why not a B-25 Superfortress or a MiG-16 ? O_o Declined, do not resubmit this or anything that creates modern army weapons. Besides I've noticed you aren't filling in the Japanese names, so from now on I want you to do that otherwise all jutsus will be declined automatically. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi Kuruma)- Lightning Release: Thunder Wheel
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses lightning chakra around their palms, forming a human size lightning shaped wheel. He/she then sends the wheels towards his target at high speeds cutting and demolishing anything in its way. The wheels can also shift left and right while traveling however they cannot change direction(meaning if the wheel heads north, it can't turn east).
    ~ Can be used four times per battle.

    ~ Approved ~

    (Raiton: Ikazuchi Fuma Shuriken)- Lightning Release: Thunder Windmill
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid(-Long if attached with hidden wires)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After throwing a windmill shuriken, the user channels his lightning chakra to it, accelerating the windmill's spin, speed, sharpness enabling it to cut through anything on its path.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ichi-Ken Chakra Houmen: Bakufuu!) - One-Sword Chakra Release: Blast! -

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user holds a sword in front of him, with his arm stretched and the sword in a horizontal position. In this position, the user starts gathering chakra in the sword from all parts of his body.
    After five seconds, the chakra spreads in a horizontal line, out of the sword, on both sides of the sword - on the end and on the hilt, which is seen to the opponent as a horizontal line of chakra extending five meters on either side. Then the user releases all the chakra gathered, and shoots out a powerfull blast of chakra.
    This is a defensive and in the same time offensive sword technique, which is used in battles, enabling to the user to fight ninjutsu with mere Kenjutsu.
    This blast of chakra can block up to A-Rank techniques, or can be used as an attack to harm the enemy.
    *Note: Can only be used twice.*
    *Note: Can only be used after Ken Ki has been entered.*
    *Note: Because of the amount of the chakra gathered, this is the only technique that can be used in the same turn.



    ~ Approved ~

    (Hyouton: Reitouki ♦ Heineken) - Ice Release: Freezer ♦ Heineken -

    Rank: Forbbiden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: After a row of handseals, the user will slam their hand to the ground, and instantly, 4 walls of ice will shoot out of the ground. As they reach a certain height (10m), a ceiling of ice will be created, and will fill the top, thus creating almost an Ice Prison, covering a wide range, which almost resembles a freezer. As it's created, the temperature is instantly lowered to -15�C, and each turn, the temperature is lowered by 5�C, down to -35�C. From the second it's created, the battle takes place in it, as it cannot be escaped without time/space techniques.
    After 4 turns, the enemy is already covered in Ice, and in the fifth turn, the Ice around him turns to a shape of a beer, with Heineken written across the middle.
    During the time the Freezer is active, no fire and water moves can be used, unless Forbidden. Every earth move is lowered for one rank, and no source of heat can be created.
    The result of this technique is, that either the opponent turns into an ice cube, or he dies out of cold. But the opponent will only turn into ice if the user will manage to keep him in place.
    If not, the user has 6 turns to live before he dies because of the low temperature.
    *Note: Must be used on an Ice surface.*
    *Note: During the time, the user cannot use anything but Taijutsu and Genjutsu, as his hands must be held together for the temperature to keep lowering.*
    *Note: Cannot be used if a Forbidden technique has been already used in battle.*


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    ( Katon: Honoo Pisuton ) - Fire release: Flame piston
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 25 ( X 2 if used with two limbs )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User focuses chakra into some of their limbs and starts releasing the fire chakra from some part of that limb. Once that is done user creates big flames from the part of that limb and the flames will work like a piston and shoot you forward with faster speed than what you could run.
    Note:
    - Can only be used twice per battle
    - No water jutsus at the same turn
    - Cannot be used if user's wet.


    ~ Declined, similar jutsu exists ~

    ( Kuchiyose: Puredetāgēto ) - Summoning jutsu: Predator Gate
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 30 per turn )
    Damage points: 80 if a taijutsu hit is taken from Crocodile ( - 20 to user )
    Description: User completes full handseals for summoning jutsu while focusing chakra on their Crocodile tattoo. Once that is done user completes summoning jutsu, creating wide gate in air that opens and reveals gigantic crocodile that's bigger than gamabunta. Due to its large size the crocodile cannot move out of the gate but it will either stick its head outside of the gate or simply stick out its one limb. The Crocodile itself is able of using Earth and Fire element on user's level but the chakra cost to do jutsus with crocodile is 1.5 times higher than normal.
    Note:
    - Can only be used once
    - Crocodile can only stay for 4 turns on the field
    - Changing the gate's place will count as jutsu - meaning that gate can be replaced around the field. Crocodile cannot be out while doing so
    - No Genjutsu, Summonings or Offensive basic ninjutsu can be used on next two turns.


    ~ I love the idea, actually, but the purple parts I underlined need to be fixed. If the crocodile can stick out only a limb or its mouth, how can it use all Earth and Fire jutsus ? It can use only those which do not require handseals. Obviously it cannot use custom jutsu and its moves count as one of your three per turn. The moving gate around thing is pure rubbish, and has to be removed completely. Also I need more restrictions. Even for partially summoning a crocodile bigger than Bunta, it will adversely affect your performance in some way, not just "for two turns", it will be permanent. 4 turns is also too much, 3 would do. ~
    ( Kuchiyose: Puredetāgēto ) - Summoning jutsu: Predator Gate
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 30 per turn )
    Damage points: 80 if a taijutsu hit is taken from Crocodile ( - 20 to user )
    Description: User completes full handseals for summoning jutsu while focusing chakra on their Crocodile tattoo. Once that is done user completes summoning jutsu, creating wide gate in air that opens and reveals gigantic crocodile that's bigger than gamabunta. Due to its large size the crocodile cannot move out of the gate but it will either stick its head outside of the gate or simply stick out its one limb. Crocodile is able of using canon Earth or Fire element ( The ones without handseals ) on user's level but the chakra cost to do jutsus with crocodile is 2 times higher than normal.
    Note:
    - Can only be used once
    - Crocodile can only stay for 3 turns on the field
    - No Genjutsu, Summonings or Offensive basic ninjutsu can be used on next three turns.
    - Having Crocodile summoned results user unable to move and unable to use handsealed jutsu that require more than two handseals in any element as long as the crocodile stays on field.
    - Only three elements can be used while crocodile is in play
    - Each jutsu crocodile makes counts one jutsu taken from your amount of jutsus per turn.


    ~ Approved ~

    The crocodile can use if sticks out head a fire blast like Zukkoku and if earth's used it can stick out a limb and touch the ground, raising a shield like terra shield etc. Removed moving gate and the crocodile can now use either fire or earth which is defined by user when he/she summons it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Doton: Tsuchi Renda (Earth Style: Earth Barrage)

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This technique allows the user to attack the opponent with a barrage of earth needles sent from the ground. In order for this technique to activate the user must stomp on the ground. Can also be used to attack from every angle if opponent is within range

    ~ O_o Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by The Seven-Scaled boy View Post
    (Kuchiyose waza: Ushiro no Ko Kemushi) Summoning art: Back of the great caterpillar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (80 for up to mid range, 120 for long range)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user will smear blood on his summoning tatoo and slam both of his hands onto the ground. By doing that, he'll summon the back of a great caterpillar with poisonus spikes all around it, forming what it would be similar like a red forest, full of red poisonus barbs on the ground and the "trees"(it's to say bigger barbs).
    The poison effects are not lethal, but very painful causing a tingling(better said burning) sensation during the duration of the jutsu, afterwards the poison will lose it's effects. This bruning sensation means the opponent needs to focus harder on the target in order to do jutsu(meaning like stop running in order to do jutsu) and will slow them down.
    Notes: May only be done once per battle.
    Notes: It may last up to 4 turns.
    Notes: No Forbidden-rank the turn used and one turn after.
    Notes: No summoning for the same and next 3 turns(no matter if you do it at the begining or at the end of your turn).
    Notes: The user may use 30 chakra to help the back of the caterpillar regrow it's barbs( adding one more turn to the previous restriction) but not to make it last longer.
    Notes: Only people who signed the contract and were taught this jutsu, by The Seven-Scaled boy are able to use it.
    Notes: Signer's of the caterpillar contract are immune to this poison.
    Notes: Once this jutsu has ended, the user may not poison the oppenent for the next 2 turns.
    Notes: the barbs will cause little pain but no considerable wounds, they wil just inject the poison.
    Notes: May only poison up to five people, afterwards, the barbs will only cause pain but no more poison. The five people are the first 5 non-signers to touch any barb.

    Changed bolded parts, please tell me if there's any trouble for you. Added one last note, it which it may not overexceed the quantity of poisoned people. If that's what you meant by too liberally used.

    ~ This is fine, however I also want you to reduce the amount of barbs and poison in the area because the way it is now if you just use it once, there's a sure shot of getting the opponent poisoned ~
    (Kuchiyose waza: Ushiro no Ko Kemushi) Summoning art: Back of the great caterpillar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (80 for up to mid range, 120 for long range)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user will smear blood on his summoning tatoo and slam both of his hands onto the ground. By doing that, he'll summon the back of a great caterpillar with poisonus spikes all around it, forming what it would be similar like a red forest, full of red poisonus barbs in shape of "bushes"(small groups of barbs) and "trees"(it's to say bigger barbs) scattered around; the ground, however, is free of poisonus barbs.
    The poison effects are not lethal, but very painful causing a tingling(better said burning) sensation during the duration of the jutsu, afterwards the poison will lose it's effects. This bruning sensation means the opponent needs to focus harder on the target in order to do jutsu(meaning like stop running in order to do jutsu) and will slow them down.
    Notes: May only be done once per battle.
    Notes: It may last up to 4 turns.
    Notes: No Forbidden-rank the turn used and one turn after.
    Notes: No summoning for the same and next 3 turns(no matter if you do it at the begining or at the end of your turn).
    Notes: The user may use 30 chakra to help the back of the caterpillar regrow it's barbs( adding one more turn to the previous restriction) but not to make it last longer. Only two jutsu that turn.
    Notes: Only people who signed the contract and were taught this jutsu, by The Seven-Scaled boy are able to use it.
    Notes: Signer's of the caterpillar contract are somewhat immune to this poison. If they touch it, they can run and do jutsu, but not speeds of 1st Gate and above.
    Notes: Once this jutsu has ended, the user may not poison the oppenent for the next 2 turns.
    Notes: the barbs will cause little pain but no considerable wounds, they wil just inject the poison.
    Notes: May only poison up to five people, afterwards, the barbs will only cause pain but no more poison. The five people are the first 5 people to touch any barb.

    ~ Approved ~

    ^I hope it is better, please do tell me what else I shall change. I thought, too, creating a "patch" free of barbs around the opponet but out of it there would be spikes on the ground and bushes etc. (i.e. this jutsu there's no spikes on the ground simply there are bushes and trees)

    (Kuchiyose: Caterpu)-Summoning: Caterpu
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will smear blood in his summoning tatoo and summon Caterpu, a katsuyu-size caterpillar whose colours green and with black stripes and orange dots. It's special ability is to split into thousands of normal-sized copies and reform at will.
    Notes: May only be summoned once per battle and will last up to 4 turns.
    Notes: As with most creatures bound to the contract, it may shoot silk in an offensive or defensive way and it can eat B-rank (or below) mokuton jutsus(in it split form it can't eat mokuton but it may still shoot thinner slik).
    Notes: While on the field no other caterpillar may be summonned.
    Notesnly people who signed the contract of caterpillars owned by The Seven-Scaled boy, may use it.
    Notes: it may resist, in it's non-split form, up to 2 S-rank attacks.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    ^It's just like the custom of the leaf caterpillar, but this time, it is destinguishable by anyone and modified the turn number it may be active.

    (Kuchiyose:Kyousei kemushi seijin, Absolem )-Summoning: Great caterpillar sage, Absolem
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will smear blood on it's summonning tatoo and summon one of the oldest and wisest caterpillars, Absolem who is deep blue and the size of gamakichi. Too bad his addiction to hooka affected his capacity to move and to munch mokuton jutsus away. It has the capacity to exhale a huge amount of blue smoke(ideal for escaping or hiding situations) which causes numbness(inablity to feel pain, as soon as the smokescreen is formed) and ,if inhaled enough(breathes it for a turn), a genjutsu of A-rank qualities in which the opponent loses all intresest in fight and just wants to chill out.
    Notes: May only be summoenned once per battle lasting 3 turns.
    Notes: It may still shoot silk as most of the creatures bounded to the contract.
    Notesnly people who signed the contract of caterpillars owned by The Seven-Scaled boy, may use it.
    Notes: The blue mist which Absolem exhales may only be shot 2 times per battle, covering up to long range if desired.
    Notes: Signers of the contract are unaffected by the blue smoke barrage.



    ~ Approved ~

    (Kuchiyose: Kemushi senman )-Summoning: Caterpillar Myriad
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will make this time all the handseals for summoning jutsu, smear blod on his summoning tatoo and draw his hands together. As both palms touch each other the summoning formula will appear on the ground around the user, and a wave made out of caterpillars will poof into battle crash onto the floor setting free thousands of caterpillars. The caterpillars can't poison nor eat mokuton jutsus or shoot affecting quantities of silk; the simply appear in a wave in fornt of the user.
    Notes: They may occupy a large area around the opponent for 3 turns.
    Notes: May only be used by Signers of the contract owned by The Seven-Scaled boy.
    Notes: May only be done twice per battle.
    Notes: No summoning jutsus for 2 turns.
    Notes: The wave of caterpillars my block and incoming attack of it's same rank and below.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Ice Release: Freezing Needles (hyouton: Hysanban)

    Rank:S
    Type:Attack/Offensive
    Range:Close-Long
    Chakra cost:50
    Damage points:80
    Description: As the User holds 5 needles in his hands, he charges them with a huge amount of ice chakra , Then maximize the wind chakra inside it as he throw them at the target, making them much faster and able to cut through objects in the way if possible, and their nearness makes them stronger as a wind cutter,then, as they reaches the enemy they automatically scatter stabbing him from deferent directions and release there ice chakra through the needles which works as rods the the ice chakra, freezing the enemy from inside creating inner damages that would make him unable to move, also the enemy loses his sense because of the great amount of ice chakra that was placed inside him.

    ~Can only be used twice per battle *changeable by mods*
    ~It can't be countered by fire because the wind is only their container
    ~ causes damages to the users hand due to the high amount of ice and wind chakra inside it.
    ~This jutsu is not two element combo attack because the wind element is originally one of the basic elements of the Ice element.
    ~Can also be used with a water jutsu creating an avalanche of ice, or even freezes the enemy if he was sucked inside water, however if it was used in this method, the user wont charge it with extra wind chakra.
    ~Causes -10 damages to the user because of the freezing it causes to the user's hand before throwing it.


    Ice Illusion Technique: false reflections Mirror (Hyouton: Mira-Hekikaisou )

    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary/Defense
    Range:Close-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points:80
    Description: The user charges a huge amount of ice chakra in front of him, creating an invisible ice mirror in the same size of the user that reflect the the user and his background perfectly, this technique is used to show the enemy false movements of the user meanwhile the user is doing something else and also seeing the enemy like if the mirrors doesn't even exist, Also, if the opponent moves the mirrors will automatically moves the same as him and also with the same speed making it impossible to find out about it, and the same goes if the user moves, also, its able to reflect the enemy whenever the user wants reflecting any genjutsu that requires watching a movement, It also can stop elemental jutsus for up to B rank if possible.

    ~This jutsu is a new virsion of the Ice style: Mirror Shields (hyuuton: miratokou), It is only one mirror making the power of reflecting in the power of the three together.

    This is the Mirror Shields's details, Its already approved and its not one of the jutsus I am submit:
    rank: S
    range: Short-Long
    type: supplementary/defense
    chakra: 40
    damage: N/A
    description: The user creates up to 3 thick ice mirrors that fly around him by focusing a huge amount of ice chakra into them. These mirrors are able to reflect genjutsu by reflecting the enemy like a mirror, moreover, the user can see through them while the enemy cannot. It can also protect the user from some attacks [ up to B rank of elements ] if possible.
    ~the 3 mirrors are movable around the user
    ~they can't reflect S rank or above genjutsu
    ~can only be used once per battle
    ~can't stay more than 3 turns
    ~Each time the mirrors are used to defend, their time on the battlefield reduces by one turn.
    ~the user can't attack through them unlike Haku's ice mirrors attack

    ~can't reflect Forbidden Genjutsus
    ~can only be used once per battle
    ~stays for 3 turns and 5 if it was used while the ancient frost mode is in use
    ~Each time the mirror is used to defend, its time on the battlefield reduces by one turn, and doesn't reduce if the user is also using the ancient frost mode at the same time.

    Ice Secret Release: Freezing Touch (Hyouton Hijutsu: Hyouketsu tezawari)

    rank: S
    range: Short-Long
    type: supplementary/defense
    chakra: 45
    damage: 90
    description: While being in the Ancient Frost mode, The user will charge a huge amount of Ice chakra in his palm, then direct it at a target sending a huge amount of ice chakra into air creating a weak snow spiral that comes at the opponent in a very high speed, this spiral is able to freeze anything that it touches, freezing it enough to make it crack off, this spiral grows to be as huge as a large summoning such as Gamabunta shortly after being released, also, it freezes any water source it touches within the range.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Causes major damages to the user's palm because of the freezing this jutsu causes -20.
    ~Can only be usable by an Ancient Frost mode user, and if didn't he will be also caught inside it.


    Wind Style: Shattering Wind Beam (Fuuton: Shou buro-kaze)

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defense
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 45
    Damage: 80
    Description:As the user charges his fist with a huge amount of wind chakra, he release it while he punching it toward his target releasing a huge amount of wind destructive power into a long range in a large beam, blasting a very high speed which makes it unavoidable, that is used to shatter anything in its path like clouds and mist and attacking through difficulties such as water waves and rock walls if possible, If this jutsu were used to attack the opponent, then it will causes major damages to him, cuts and blow him back in range, meaning that it will sends him from short to mid, or mid to long, and may even cause him unconsciousness.

    ~ damages the user hand by +15 points and causes bleeding.
    ~can only be used twice per battle.
    ~This jutsu us owned by -Thoes.


    ~All Declined~ Please have someone proof read them, its hard to understand fully what you are trying to do. I don't want to see harsh, I just want to make sure that not only Mods, but your opponents and yourself can understand the jutsu
    (Hyouton Hijutsu: Hyouketsu Tezawari) - Ice Secret Release: Freezing Touch -

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: supplementary/defense
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While being in the Ancient Frost mode, the user will charge a huge amount of Ice chakra in his palm and aims it at a target, sending a huge amount of ice chakra into air creating a weak snow spiral that comes at the opponent at a very high speed. This spiral is able to freeze anything that it touches, freezing it enough to make it crack off. This spiral keeps growing to the size of a summoning like Gamabunta shortly after being released. It also freezes any water source it touches within its range.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Causes major damage to the user's palm -20 because of the freezing.
    ~Can only be used by an Ancient Frost mode user, and if not he also will be caught inside it.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    (Fuuton: Shou Buro-kaze) - Wind Style: Shattering Wind Beam -

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (-15)
    Description: The user charges his fist with a large amount of wind chakra. He punches towards the target and releases it as a huge amount of destructive wind compressed into a large beam, blasting it away at a very high speed which makes it tough to block. It is used to punch a hole anything in its path like clouds, mist and, if possible, water waves and rock walls. When this jutsu is used to attack the opponent, it will cause major damage to him like large cuts and it blows him backwards, meaning that it will send him from short to mid, or from mid to long, and may even knock him out cold.

    ~ damages the user hand by -15 points and causes bleeding.
    ~can only be used twice per battle.
    ~This jutsu is owned by -Thoes.


    ~ Hmm..Approved ~

    (Hyouton: Hysanban) - Ice Release: Freezing Needles -

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (-10)
    Description: The user holds 5 needles in his hands and starts charging them with a huge amount of ice chakra, while doing this he lays an emhpasis as much as possible on the wind chakra inside the ice chakra. He then throws the needles at the target, making them go much faster and able to cut through objects (due to the extra wind chakra) that stand in the way. When they reach the enemy they automatically scatter and stab the target from different directions. Instantly after they hit the target, they release their ice chakra into the target, freezing him from inside causing internal damage that makes him unable to move. Also the enemy loses his sense because of the great amount of ice chakra that was placed inside him.

    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~It can't be countered by fire because the wind is only their container
    ~It causes damage to the users hand due to the high amount of ice and wind chakra used
    ~This jutsu is not a two element combo attack as the wind element is originally one of the basic elements of the Ice element.
    ~Can also be used with a water jutsu creating an avalanche of ice, or even freezes the enemy if he gets sucked into the water, however if it was used in this method, the user wont charge it with extra wind chakra.
    ~Causes -10 damages to the user because of the freezing it causes to the user's hand before throwing it.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    (Hyouton: Mira-Hekikaisou) - Ice Illusion Technique: False Reflection Mirror -

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Close-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges a huge amount of ice chakra in front of him, creating an invisible ice mirror that has the same size as the user and that reflects the user and his background perfectly. This technique is used to show the enemy false movements of the user while he is doing something else and he sees the enemy like if the mirrors don't even exist. When the opponent moves, the mirrors will automatically move the same as him with the same speed making it impossible to find out about it. The same goes for when the user moves. It's also able to reflect the enemy whenever the user wants, reflecting any genjutsu that requires watching a movement. It can stop elemental jutsus up to B rank if possible.

    ~This jutsu is a new version of the Ice style: Mirror Shields (hyuuton: miratokou), It is only one mirror making the power of 3 mirrors focused into one.

    This is the Mirror Shields's details, Its already approved and its not one of the jutsus I am submit:
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: supplementary/defense
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates up to 3 thick ice mirrors that fly around him by focusing a huge amount of ice chakra into them. These mirrors are able to reflect genjutsu by reflecting the enemy like a mirror, moreover, the user can see through them while the enemy cannot. It can also protect the user from some attacks [ up to B rank of elements ] if possible.
    ~the 3 mirrors are movable around the user
    ~they can't reflect S rank or above genjutsu
    ~can only be used once per battle
    ~can't stay more than 3 turns
    ~Each time the mirrors are used to defend, their time on the battlefield reduces by one turn.
    ~the user can't attack through them unlike Haku's ice mirrors attack

    ~It can't reflect Forbidden Genjutsu's
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~Stays for 3 turns and 5 if it was used while the ancient frost mode is in use
    ~Each time the mirror is used to defend, its time on the battlefield reduces by one turn and doesn't reduce if the user is also using the ancient frost mode at the same time.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    edited by the great Caliburn :D thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuji View Post
    Custom Weapon: Igneel No Ken
    Type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (10 After summoning in each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will bite his thumb and write ''Ryu'' on his rigth hand to summon a sword. It's name comes from an ancient Dragon capable of spiting intense flames, since this sword is made of the dragon's fang, it can absorb and control fire at the users will (natural fire or the user own fire). As well the sword can release a powerfull blast of fire in the shape of a wave or a dragon by focusing a large amount of fire chakra into the tip of the sword.Since this sword is a fire weapon is naturally weak againts water, if this sword or the user is hit by a A or S-rank water jutsu the sword cannot be used for the rest of the battle and the user will take 10 more damage points for water jutsus.


    Specify what you mean by the purple part.
    Custom Weapon: Igneel No Ken
    Type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (10 After summoning in each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will bite his thumb and write ''Ryu'' on his rigth hand to summon a sword. It's name comes from an ancient Dragon capable of spiting intense flames, since this sword is made of the dragon's fang. The sword can absorb and control fire at the users will (natural fire or the user own fire) discarding the neccesary use of handseals for fire jutsus by gathering fire inside the sword. As well the sword can release a powerfull blast of fire in the shape of a wave or a dragon by focusing a large amount of fire chakra into the tip of the sword.Since this sword is a fire weapon is naturally weak againts water, if this sword or the user is hit by a A or S-rank water jutsu the sword cannot be used for the rest of the battle and the user will take 10 more damage points for water jutsus.
    Note:The user cannot use water jutsus while using the sword.


    ~ Purple part to be removed completely. Restrict the number of times the wave or dragon can be launched ~

    (Katon:Urufu no Pakku)-Fire Style:Wolf Pack
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing several handseals the user will create flames in front of him that take the form of a large wolf pack to charge at the opponent. The wolfs can spread around the area to attack from different directions.

    ~ Declined, similar technique exists ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuji View Post
    (Katon:Urufu no Pakku)-Fire Style:Wolf Pack
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After performing several handseals the user will create flames in front of him that take the form of a large wolf pack to charge at the opponent. The wolfs can spread around the area to attack from different directions.
    ^ I think this jutsu was already Created by Sinny, whose username now is Sonic-
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Magellan View Post
    Doton: Jige Supaiku - Earth Release: Underground Spikes
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Attack points: N/A
    Description: After quick succession of hand seals, the user will slap both his hands on the ground, creating dozens of earth spike. However, these spike will not be created above the ground, but under it. Due to their greater density, anyone traveling underground and being mid-range from the user will be impaled by those spikes (unless being at least 10 meters under ground).
    -Can only be used twice per match
    -No A-rank and above earth jutsu the following turn

    Co-creator: Izuna Uchiha and Magellan
    ~Declined~ Unrealistic since for spikes to form there would need to be open space


    Changing the element and modifying the description.



    Raiton: Jige boruto shouheki - Lightning: Underground bolt barrier
    Rank: B
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Attack Points: 40
    After quick succession of hand seals, the user will slap both hands on the ground converting their chakra into lightning.
    The user sends an enormous bolt of electricity that surrounds within the vicinity in a circular formation. The bolt will
    directly swoop down to the ground forming into a cylinder-triangular shape. Due to their greater density, anyone traveling
    underground and being mid-range from the user will be electrocuted.
    (unless being at least 10 meters under ground).

    ~ Um.. Is there a reason why you randomly made lines end in the middle ? Resubmit with a restriction ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    ( Kuchiyose: Puredetāgēto ) - Summoning jutsu: Predator Gate
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( - 30 per turn )
    Damage points: 80 if a taijutsu hit is taken from Crocodile ( - 20 to user )
    Description: User completes full handseals for summoning jutsu while focusing chakra on their Crocodile tattoo. Once that is done user completes summoning jutsu, creating wide gate in air that opens and reveals gigantic crocodile that's bigger than gamabunta. Due to its large size the crocodile cannot move out of the gate but it will either stick its head outside of the gate or simply stick out its one limb. Crocodile is able of using canon Earth or Fire element ( The ones without handseals ) on user's level but the chakra cost to do jutsus with crocodile is 2 times higher than normal.
    Note:
    - Can only be used once
    - Crocodile can only stay for 3 turns on the field
    - No Genjutsu, Summonings or Offensive basic ninjutsu can be used on next three turns.
    - Having Crocodile summoned results user unable to move and unable to use handsealed jutsu that require more than two handseals in any element as long as the crocodile stays on field.
    - Only three elements can be used while crocodile is in play
    - Each jutsu crocodile makes counts one jutsu taken from your amount of jutsus per turn.


    ~ Approved ~

    The crocodile can use if sticks out head a fire blast like Zukkoku and if earth's used it can stick out a limb and touch the ground, raising a shield like terra shield etc. Removed moving gate and the crocodile can now use either fire or earth which is defined by user when he/she summons it.
    ( Hyouton: Shimotōki ) - Ice release: Frost Winter
    Type: Supplementary - Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 50 ( - 20 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A ( Ends battle if jutsu has been more than six turns )
    Description: User makes Boar - Rooster - Dog - Snake handseals and releases both Wind and Water chakra in air, causing temperature to drop rapidly beneath -30. The idea of this attack is that user turns the air and atmosphere so cold that it'll stop the fight if the opponent(s) stay there more than six turns. The user itself is able of staying inside of this cold weather for seven turns before freezing due Hyouton KG. The jutsu works in way that first opponent feels cold, then after one turn the cold feeling turns into warmth and heat ( Like it does in real life when you've gotten too cold. The coming warmth prevents the opponent(s) from getting suspicious and they wont do anything about this. Once then atmosphere has gotten colder every Wind attack that's used creates cold gust and time from the Six turns drops by half turn. This is double edged blade and it renders both user and opponent(s) unable to fight if they've been on the field too long.
    Note:
    - Can only be used once
    - No Ice and Water can be used for whole battle
    - Can only be avoided with time or space ninjutsu
    - User cannot use Water or Fire along with opponent while the atmosphere's cold
    - User and Opponent(s) suffer same damage from this jutsu.


    I made this according the idea of Winter and how everything's cold in it. I live in Finland - Winter country so there has been many times over - 20 degrees cold and how many drunk people die during winters when they sleep outside. This is not really OPed jutsu when both user and opponent suffer the same damage and Ice + Water cannot be used in the battle afterwards.

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by The Seven-Scaled boy View Post
    ^ I think this jutsu was already Created by Sinny, whose username now is Sonic-
    It was made by Chiryoku with name Honoo Urufu
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kyuubi customs comin' up. Go easy on me, Emp, I'm new at this.

    Nine Tailed Fox Stomp (Kyuubi Suteppu)
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The Kyuubi stomps on the ground below with a force great enough to send shock waves through the earth, creating a "ripple effect" in it. The earth then crumples and compresses, which could lead to severe damage to anything within it. At the end of the technique, however, the Kyuubi is inside a five meter deep sinkhole from the ground it is standing on collapsing from the technique.
    Note: If the technique is used in partial transformation, the ripple extends upto short-range. If used in full transformation, the ripple extends to mid-range.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle in partial transformation or twice in full transformation.

    ~ Approved ~

    Nine Tailed Fox Punch (Kyuubi Panchi)
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The Kyuubi punches the ground below in order to uplift the earth in the area to greatly change the terrain. Small plateaus/hills and deep fissures/valleys can form as a result of this incredibly powerful downward punch. ( one plateau/hill or fissure/valley can be formed per use )
    Note: Only partial transformation required.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.

    ~ Approved ~

    Impenetrable Defense of the Nine Tailed Fox (Impenetrable Defensu no Kyuubi)
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The Kyuubi releases a burst of chakra from every pore of its body, capable of dispersing powerful incoming jutsus. Due to the strength and potency of its chakra, the surrounding air will become hot enough to cause second degree burns, and the ground below will be reduced to a molten lava-like substance.
    Note: Only partial transformation required.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~ I don't think this is required, since the Kyuubi already has a blanket defense against all techniques below A rank when in full transformation. Such a technique can only be performed in full transformation. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Frostmourn Gigei : Amatsu Torune-dos | Frostmourn Arts : Heavenly Tornadoes]
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive/Deffensive
    Range : Short
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : 80
    The user will infuse chakra into the Frostmourn and stab it into a water source, once done, multiple small tornadoes of water will rise up from the water source around the user and then will maintain the same position around him no matter where the user runs, as long as he stays in the water source, the tornadoes can be sent off in multiple ways. A direct hit from one of the small tornadoes can severely injure the person that was hit.
    - 5 tornadoes form
    - Technique can be activated twice per battle
    - The tornadoes last 3 turns
    - When the tornadoes are made, the user can use only 2 jutsu per battle.


    ~ Approved ~

    [Hyouton : Shikkyaku Oberisuku No Aisu | Ice Release : Falling Obelisk Of Ice]
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Offensive/Deffensive
    Range : Mid/Long (Can be used in short range, but will crush the user once it falls.)
    Chakra Cost : 50
    Damage Points : 100
    The user makes a row of 5 handseals and then focuses one point in the sky above and condenses it to a great obelisk of ice that's pillar is pointing downwards. The obelisk falls down with great force, and the pillar once hit the ground will stick into the earth with it's full lenght, and leave the platform to crush anything that was in a 20 metres radius of the pillar. Once the obelisk fully lands, the user can make the dragon handsign and the pillar which is underground will begin sending a freeze ray to it's sides and below, freezing everything that is underground in the battlefield.
    [Once per battle]
    [Once this jutsu is done, no ice release techniques for 3 turns.]
    [If the user freezes the underground with this technique, no more earth release techniques can be used that require contact with the earth, or include going underground]
    [User takes -10 damage]
    [No water or wind techniques for the next turn this jutsu is used]


    ~ Remove the purple part, reduce size and resubmit ~

    [Hyouton : Aisu Kassha | Ice Release : Ice Block]
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Supplementary
    Chakra Cost : 50
    Damage Points : 100
    The user forms a row of eight hand seals and puts his hand on a water source, sending ice release chakra throughout the water, the water will instantly freeze, only a 1 metre radius arround the user will remain unfrozen. If the opponent is in the water source when it freezes, his legs will freeze to the ice, and a block of ice will start to cover him, after 10 seconds the block will be complete and the opponent will be completely frozen within the block, if he gets frozen - he will be frozen in time until the block is melted.
    [Once per battle]
    [Must be on used on a water source]
    [No hyouton techniques for 5 turns once this jutsu is used]
    [No water or wind techniques for the next turn this jutsu is used]
    [User takes -20 damage]


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    [Hyouton : Ame No Oujou | Ice Release : Rain Of Death]
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Offensive/Deffensive
    Chakra Cost : 50
    Damage Points : 100
    The user rises a large pillar (3 metre wide, 5 long) of ice that can be used as a shield. Once the pillar is raised, it can stay in it's place until the end of the battle. Whenever the user wants, he can form the dragon handsign and the pillar will desperse into ice senbon that will hover in the air, then the user will make the rat handsign and the needles will strike down in a 1 metre radius around the user, piercing any lower than S Rank shield. The user can aswell make the ox handsign and the senbon return to a pure water state.
    [Once per battle]
    [No hyouton techniques two turns after the needles are formed]
    [No water or wind techniques for the next turn after this jutsu is used]
    [User takes -20 damage]


    ~ Approved ~

    [Kuchyose No Jutsu: Fuka - Megalodon | Summoning Technique: Shark - Megalodon]
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary - Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost : 50 ( - 20 per turn )
    Damage Points : 80 if taijutsu hit is taken ( - 15 when summoned )
    The user spills blood on his shark scroll/tattoo and opens up a dimensional portal in the battlefield that summons out Megalodon. Megalodon is gigantic shark that was common many decades ago but nowadays there aren't really any left. Megalodon is over 40 meters long and each one of his/her teeth is 17 CM long. The shark is summoned through dimensional portal. Megalodon is capable of creating portals anywhere in the battlefield and closing them as if it'd be diving and jumping out from liquid but this time it's solid, however each created portal is counted as a jutsu.
    [Once per battle]
    [User takes -15 damage when shark is summoned]
    [User can use only two elements during the time the shark's on field]
    [Co - created by Nnoitra]


    ~ O_o A mixture of a prehistoric creature, and Noba from Bleach ? ~
     
         
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    Hakke, Seishouken - 8 trigrams Spirit blade
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu creates a blade of pure chakra appearing as an intense yet focused undulating blue ghostly energy, almost flame like. It extends out from the user upper arm, engulfing the user hand and extending out roughly 3 feet past the user fingertips, though the user could temporarily (for a few seconds) extend it out up to 6 feet in length. Usually the user hand, from wrist to finger tips, needs to be kept in straight alignment lest the blade become deformed and unstable. The blade takes a moment of focus to create but requires no hand signs.

    The blade has the particular capabilities of being able to cut through anything made of chakra including elemental chakra, but once the blade have cut through chakra the blades are destroy alone with the user arm. (Only if the jutsu out rank the blades or equal) When used against a living target, The user does so by targeting their inner Chakra coils and inner organs (this cannot target Tenketsus), the sword will not cut through their flesh. Where ever the sword passes through the chakra network will result in the network being overwhelmed and disrupted for up to several hours, so for example cutting through the arm would disrupt chakra flow to that arm rendering it useless and paralyzed for several hours ( 1 turn ) without actually cutting it. When stabbed into a target as for as long as it remains within them, their chakra network will go haywire leaving them unable to mold chakra or focus it until the blade is removed, More than this, a stab or cut into vital organs such as the brain, heart or lungs will prove fatal, overwhelming chakra flow to those organs and thus causing them great damage and maybe death.
    This technique doesn’t require much chakra, instead relying on how well focused it is, and this is in part why it will not cut through solid matter, but then it has intentionally been designed that way. It is however extremely difficult to perform and would be impossible to do without a Hyuuga’s blood.
    Note:
    • Can only be used once
    • No Elemental chakra or Genjutsu on same turn the user active the blades but can on the next.
    • Causes - 15 damage to user
    • After blades wear off, or been destroy the user will be unable to use pure chakra jutsu for 1 turns.
    • Only Anbu Itachi can teach this.
    • All pure chakra and Hyuuga jutsu are strengthened (gain 10 damage) if use while blades is active.
    • Only two blades max can be created.
    • Justu only last for 3 turns max

    ~ Fix grammar and resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Kasai Karuto) Fire Style Fire Cards
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:30
    Description:User takes out some cards (If have some on bio)and focus on it and its in flames.

    Note:You could only use 14 cards.
    Notenly ~Uchiha-Sasuke-Kun~ can teach this Jutsu.
    Note:If any mistakes please correct it.

    ~ Umm... Approved ? O_o ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-29-2010 at 07:36 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Shishi Odoshi ‡ Chimaki) - Earth style: Menacing Lion ‡ Ground Winding -

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Medium/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user focuses an enormous amount of doton chakra into the ground in a large, circular area under the opponent. The ground starts to lower under the opponent and gets shaped into a medium-sized bowl with the opponent in the middle. The earth moves from the centre, making the bowl deeper, to the edge of the bowl where it is collected (making the edge rise high above the bowl). Also earth from outside of the bowl is drawn to the edge, so that a large amount of earth appears at the edge of the bowl. This earth gets shaped into large lionheads, which form a ring. This is a continuous proces: the earth goes from the centre to the edge + from outside to the edge and forms the heads, this happens while the heads move to the centre and this cycle repeats itself.
    Eventually the heads will reach the centre, make a biting movement diagonally downwards on the opponent, crushing, burying and shredding him. But this is not the end. All the massive earth that got collected just clashed in one spot. After that happens the earth shoots upwards from the centre in a massive spiraling column of earth that rapidly condenses into a gigantic helix that is incredibly solid which crushes any substance in it. The landscape is now back to how it was, outside the tower.



    *Can only be used twice per battle*
    *No doton jutsu's can be used in the next turn*
    *No forbidden-rank jutsu's can be used in this turn*
    *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
    *Can destroy up to S-rank jutsu's*


    ~ I love it ! Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 07-29-2010 at 07:37 AM.

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