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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Rinkusu) summoning Technique: Lynx
    Summoning Animal: Lynx
    Scroll Owner: Itachi4life
    Other Users who have signed contract:None now
    Summoning Boss if existing:None now
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Rinkusu: Dunbar) Summoning technique: Lynx: Dunbar
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After preforming the needed hand signs the user wll summon Dunbar. Dunbar is an 8ft. Lynx that is very obedient to his summoner. He specialzies in Wind jutsu and is able to use Wind jutsu up to A-Rank. his sense of smelling and hearing are very strong so he can spot out the enemy even in complete darkness. His strength and speed are incredible making it easy for him to help his summoner if in need.
    *Can only be summoned if signed the Lynx contract
    *Dunbar can only be summoned for 4 turns*
    *The user must wait 3 turns before Dunbar can be summoned again*
    ~Contract and Jutsu Declined~ Ragnaroc holds the Lynx contract
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 11-13-2010 at 02:44 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chibi Bunshin No Jutsu)-Little Clone Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The Chibi Bunshin No Jutsu is a technique that allows the user to create clones of his self but in a doll-like version (chibi) but because of their size this clones loose a great amount of strenght but their speed incresess to a level that surpasses the user's normal speed. This clones like many others can perform any jutsu the user nows, however every jutsu performed by this clone will be reduced to a suitable size for the clone and will loose 10 Damage Points but the speed of the jutsu will increase but this doesn't mean the use of handseals will be reduced or will be done in a faster rate.
    Note: Can only create a maximum 4 clones per usage.
    Note: Can only be used 3 time per battle.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

    ~Approved~ Note that Shadow clones or any other type of clone can be active while this jutsu is in effect.


    (Katon:Roze Ga-den)-Fire Style:Rose Garden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: By performing the neccesary handseals (6) then slaming the hands in the ground the user will chanell fire chakra through the ground once done the user can create a circle of fire roses around him that are connected to the ground by a ''root'' of fire chakra that keeps extending through the ground while the circle of roses extends until it resembles a garden of fire with 20 meters in diameter with the user in the middle of it. This fire garden can be used to attacked the opponent when he's in mid air, by shooting all the roses from the garden to the air with hand gestures wich will make an almost implossible to avoid barrage of fire roses, this technique could also be used to stop underground travel since the roses are connected to the ground by the ''root'' the ground will heat up and damage the opponent's skin however since the user is still standing in the ground, he will get burn too if he keeps standing there.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji

    ~Approved~ Reduced usage


    (Katon:Juu Yari)-Fire Style:10 Spears
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will cupped his hand and draw them to the side and concentrate a huge amount of fire chakra in them but mostly in each finger, then by thrusting the hands forward the user will shoot from each finger a small fire spear, the spears will grow bigger as they feed from oxygen and it continues towards the opponent. This spears have enough force to injured a summoning as big as Gamabunta.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be taigth by Ryuji

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu exists


    (Seki Tama)-Repulse Ball
    Type: Supplementary.
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will create a little ball of compressed chakra near any part of his body to defend against the opponents punch or kick based Taijutsu moves from C-rank and below but moves from B-rank and up will go through the ball with ease and with no harm. Once the opponent hits the ball this one will explode and release a small shockwave with not enough power to harm the user or the opponent but with enough to repel and blow away any kind of strike.
    Note: Can only be use 3 time per battle.
    Note: No Taijutsu and normal Ninjutsu (not elemental) in the same turn this jutsu is used.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji

    ~Approved~



    On the next jutsu Emp or who ever checks this, is just a kind of jutsu I want to be te creator of this arts like Shigure is the creator of the ''Samurai Arts'' and Mugen is the creator of the ''Cooking Arts'' so sorry if this kind of arts already has a creator but if not I would like to be the creator, and I don't now if you have to submit this kind of arts as a jutsu like the way Sage mode works so let me now if I have to submit the arts first then the jutsus. Or if you don't seem this kind of arts suit to be a kind of jutsus I'll stop submiting them.

    (Seiza Gijutsu:Kyansa)-Constellations Arts: Cancer
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: When fighting in the middle of the nigh the user will look to the sky and focus water and lightning chakra in the ground the user will create a ''Y'' that emanates a beatiful light and creates an illusion around the user that resambles a crab. When the crab is created the user has the power to spit from the mouth of the crab a wall of bubles that can be used to reflect the light the ''Y'' emanates and blind the opponent for a brief moment. The user can also use the illusion of the crab to intimidate the opponent and attack him with the crab's claws, but of course being an illusion the claw won't hurt the opponent so this ability can be use to just scare the opponent or keep his sigth in the claws to launch a surprise attack however this illusion doesn't work on opponents with any kind of Doujutsu. When this jutsu is used the user can't use any other elemental jutsu in the same turn except for water jutsus and other Constellation Arts

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu exists o_o
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 11-13-2010 at 02:51 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Old One:
    Summoning: Sykes, The Giant Ox
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/a
    Chakra Cost: 40-120 ( Depending on range wanting to be summoned )
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description:
    Sykes is a giant Ox made of pure muscle, Due to that he is very strong just by stomping can make huge craters on the ground. Sykes's attitude is usually not so kind towards people he has a very short temper and loves to take his rage out on people but when not in his fits of rage he makes cruel jokes even towards his summoner.The only person he seems to kinda get along with is his owner (Myself) even then he still has his attitude that he can do whatever he wants but in mind still listens, Sykes is a Very loyal, Crazy Ox. Sykes can also walk on his back legs like a human and usually does when summoned standing with his arm folded across his chest in a tough guy pose. He is the size of gambunta.
    Note:Sykes can use B-rank Doton Jutsu's and below (Can only use jutsu's once per battle)
    Note: Sykes can also use his strength to smash through B-rank and down Doton jutsu's ( Counting towards the move count )
    Note: Sykes can only be out in battle for 4 turns per battle.
    Note: Must have signed the summoning contract owned by Drizzy

    New One:
    Summoning: Sykes, The Giant Ox
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/a
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Sykes is a giant Ox made of pure muscle, Due to that he is very strong just by stomping he can shake the ground causing a foe to be off balance when on the ground. Sykes's attitude is usually not so kind towards people he has a very short temper and loves to take his rage out on people but when not in his fits of rage he makes cruel jokes even towards his summoner.The only person he seems to kinda get along with is his owner (Myself) even then he still has his attitude that he can do whatever he wants but in mind still listens, Sykes is a Very loyal, Crazy Ox. Sykes can also walk on his back legs like a human and usually does when summoned standing with his arm folded across his chest in a tough guy pose. He is the size of gambunta.
    Note: Sykes can use Doton, and Katon Jutsu.
    Note: Sykes can also use his strength to smash through A-rank and down Doton jutsu's ( Counting towards the move count )
    Note: Sykes can only be out in battle for 4 turns per battle.
    Note: Must have signed the summoning contract owned by Drizzy
    Note: Sykes can only disrupt everything touching the grounds' balance 3 times per battle.

    ~ What does the purple bit mean ? ~
    To be honest, I don't even know I just had it on my previous one but I edited.
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    (Doton/Fuuton:Chishi chūsha | Earth/Wind Combination :Lethal Injection)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user will perform a set of handseals then focus his chakra into the ground
    erupting several spikes in front of him which can be picked up and thrown or shot as projectiles when still in the ground. These are no ordinariy spikes, they can be up to a foot long per spike and infused with wind chakra to not only make them get to the foe faster, But upon piercing the opponent it will release the wind chakra into the enemy and burst.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
    Note: Must be taught by Drizzy
    Note: When shot as projetiles there will be 5-10 spikes shot per time

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Kansas Bred; 11-14-2010 at 03:39 PM. Reason: Explaining to emperor.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kaze Yaiba Slash)- Wind Sword Slash
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:50
    Description: The user focuses wind chakra into the air around their arms, increasing the speed of their sword slashes, while at the same time increasing the speed of their blocks. The slashes and blocks double the speed of normal slashes/blocks.

    Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle.
    Note: User has to wait 1 round before using again.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can teach this jutsu.

    ~ Declined ~

    Summoning Animal: Boars
    Scroll Owner: Orange-Hokage
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~ Contract Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-14-2010 at 09:09 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton:Kasai misairu de)-Wood releasen fire missiles-
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This is a useful mokuton jutsu in which the user starts to spin on his heels simultaneously releasing fire from his mouth forming a tornado of fire around him and then from every part of the users body mokuton spears emerge,the spears are pointed at both ends and are about 2 feet long,these spears then catch the fire and rush at high velocities towards the opponent piercing him and causing burns and inflicting a large amount of damage,as the attack covers a full 360 degrees it also covers all the blind spots making it a jutsu of choice for the user.

    ~can be used thrice per battle
    ~no mokuton jutsus next turn due to overuse of mokuton chakra
    ~can only be taught/used by Jinbei
    ~no handseals required


    ~ And then burn yourself to death while doing the jutsu -.- ~

    (Mokuton:Hikari no ki tsubasa)-Wood release:Light wood wings-
    Rank: A
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short (the spikes from the wood can travel long range)
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage:5 for each spike hit
    Description:In this jutsu the user forms one handseal and wings of the lightest wood i.e the balsa wood appear on the users back.This wood is special as it is lighter than the hollow wing bones of a bird and is used in making gliders due to its lightweight.With these wings the user can fly in the air unrestricted upto 30 meters without any problems.Also the user can form wooden senbons from their wings at an additional cost of 20 chakra.These senbons are your average senbons,they are just made of wood instead of metal.

    ~can be used thrice per a battle
    ~can be used/taught by Jinbei
    ~the wings can be shed at any times by forming a single ram seal


    ~ Number of times senbon can be shot ? Number of turns lasting per use ? Reduce down to two uses. ~

    Sources

    Balsa wood is one of the lightest varieties of wood available, but not the absolute lightest. Pound for pound, however, it is remarkably strong for its weight. Originally, the US military sought out balsa wood as a substitute for cork during WWI, but it soon proved more useful as a lightweight construction material for gliders and shipping containers. Hobbyists also began to work with balsa wood because it could be carved easily with standard woodworking tools and bent into a number of shapes without sacrificing strength.
    Source:http://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-balsa-wood.htm




    (Mokuton:Mokusei āmu)-Wood release:Wooden arms-
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30(+5 to taijutsu)
    Damage:N/A
    Description: In this jutsu the user manipulates wood to grow two arms made from the heartwood of the snakeood tree which can be used along with the users normal arms to perform two jutsus simultaneously and also helps in taijutsu as the heartwood of the snakewood tree is one of the strongest wood in the world with a specific gravity of around 1.2,hence increasing the strength of the user.
    ~can be used twice per battle
    ~the hands can be dropped at any time with a single Bird seal
    ~no handseals required
    ~can be used/taught by jinbei


    ~ No, extra arms cannot perform jutsu. ~

    http://www.exoticwood.biz/snakewood.htm



    (Fuuton:Kaze no ningen no barūn)-Wind style:Wind human balloon-
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This is a very difficult jutsu to employ and requires uttermost concentration of the user.In this jutsu the user has too make physical contact with the opponent and when he has achieved that the user streams his fuuton chakra into the user and in a matter of a second the blood vessels of the user is filled with air or air bubbles to be precise. which then causes extreme internal injuries due to the fact that air bubbles can cause major impact too the heart and other internal organs,damaging the opponent internally leaving him unable too battle.

    ~can be used twice per battle
    ~no A rank and above fuuton jutsu the next turn due to severe exhaustion and concentration
    ~cab be used/taught by Jinbei



    ~ OP ~

    Source
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-14-2010 at 09:11 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Fuuton : Erai Kaze No | Wind Release : Great Wind Field]
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short/Long
    Chakra Cost : 50
    Damage Points : N/A
    The user infuses his chakra into the wind in the battlefield, takes control of it and begins manipulating it so it would form many wind currents blowing throughout the entire battlefield, with such strength, that any lightning technique or lightning based chakra that has been released will be immediately blown away. Due to the great winds, however, it's basically impossible to keep a good body balance, and also Taijutsu is nearly impossible to use.
    [Lasts for 4 turns]
    [No one can perform any Raiton techniques]
    [User takes -15 damage]
    [Once per battle]

    ~ Approved ~

    [Fuuton : Netsu Reibou | Wind Release : Temperature Cooling]
    Rank : S
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short/Long
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : N/A
    The user will release wind chakra and fuse it into the water molecules in the air, cooling them down, making the entire battlefield drop down to a much cooler temperature.
    [Once per battle]
    [User takes -10 damage]

    ~ o_O What ? Wind chakra cools water ? What ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-14-2010 at 09:12 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton|Chenji Za Fyūchā ( Lightning Release| Change The Future)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: While using the Raikage Assault Armor the user charges the enemy but stops right in front of them with his hand over their face. Then, he sends a raiton shockwave and fires it against the opponent, inflicting a huge amount of damage.
    (Usable 2 times)

    ~ Approved, changed Range to Short ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-14-2010 at 09:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kirabi View Post
    Biggu Ban| (Big Bang)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 90
    Description: The puts both of his hands in front of him, palms open and hands turned up at a 90 degree angle. Then, he fuses together a huge mass of pure chakra into a large whitish-blue sphere with medium excess energy in the form of small waves radiating off of it. From this energy sphere emits an extremely powerful, shockwave-like beam that damages the target severely, if not killing them outright.
    (Usable Once)
    (No Chakra Control for 5 turns after technique is complete)

    ~ The above jutsu, and almost the same as my Pure Chakra Energy Blast.


    (Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage Point:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to the user understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of the palms. Finally, aimed towards the user target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. However the rays are visible to everyone. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra should it strike the opponent at a tenketsu.
    -Can only be used 1 times per battle.
    -Harms the user solar plexus, thus the additional damage. -10 to user
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by eddy-kun View Post

    ~ The above jutsu, and almost the same as my Pure Chakra Energy Blast.


    (Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage Point:90 (-10 to user)
    Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to the user understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of the palms. Finally, aimed towards the user target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. However the rays are visible to everyone. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra should it strike the opponent at a tenketsu.
    -Can only be used 1 times per battle.
    -Harms the user solar plexus, thus the additional damage. -10 to user
    -The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
    ok thanks for letting me know. ill delete it..
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Icemyster View Post
    Ninjutsu:Chakra Field (Chakra nohara)
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Mid/SHort
    Rank:S
    Chakra:40
    Damage:0
    Description:
    The user Begins emitting Water chakra from his/here body,creating a light blue aura around the area of the user*visible by everyone with eyes*. Inside this field projectiles are slowed as if they are moving through water, protecting the user from thrown objects, an if the opponent is caught in this field, they are slowed as if they are moving through water, giving the user a speed advantage. The user of the jutsu is seperated by a small air pocket inside that moves to the shape of the user, preventing the field from slowing himself down. The Field is approximately ten feet from the user in all directions
    *Lasts three turns
    *can only be used twice per battle

    ~ How do you not drown in the water ? ~
    Emp, you wont drown because your inside of a small air pocket. Human beings dont need to breathe massive amounts of air to survive, if fact, within the three turn period,(which realistically is only seven to 15 seconds) you would only need to breathe once or twice. So yes, the air is sufficient to survive while the jutsu is in play.

    Genjutsu:shindou (Genjutsu: Vibration)
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive
    Range:All (as long as eye contact can be made)
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    After making eye contact with the opponent, the opponent begins to feel as if they are vibrating intensely, making it hard to complete seals and focus, preventing the opponent from using jutsu that require major focus and precision(s-forbidden rank jutsu) The effects of the jutsu last two turns.
    *Can only be used twice

    ~ Good idea. Approved. ~

    *resubmitted to better explain the jutsu
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-14-2010 at 09:13 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Shakunetsu no Kobushi)- Fire Release: Scorching Fists
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms 3 handseals and creates large pillar of fire at his side in the shape of a boxing glove with a forearm. It moves with the user and is controlled with the user's own arm. By throwing a punch, the user can fire it strait at the opponent. It can be left to not mimic the user's movements as he performs other jutsu.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -No other fire jutsu as long as the fist lasts.
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    ~ Approved ~

    (Arashi no Gijutsu: Kaminari Burēku)- Storm Tech: Lightning Break
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of raiton into his Twin Storm Blades. When they make impact with the opponent, they release a destructive electrical explosion that knocks him far back.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Must have Twin Storm Blades

    ~ Doesn't deserve S-Rank ~

    (Kage Dan)- Shadow Bullet
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user forms the rat seal and accumulates shadow chakra in his shadow for 5 seconds. He then extends his shadow at double the speed a ninja can run towards the opponent to combine with his shadow and trap him. This jutsu has the same capabilities and limits as Shadow Imitation but the shadow is 3 inches wide or less, it moves in strait lines and can change direction once unless it goes through another shadow letting it change direction again.
    -Can be used once per battle
    -Must be a Nara clan member to use this
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    ~ Explain better ~

    (Arashi no Gijutsu: Sutōmushīrudo)- Storm Tech: Storm Shield
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user spins his Twin Storm Blades while they are in spear form in front of him while channeling extra raiton into them to create a 180 degree forcefield that can defend against most S-rank attacks but leaves the user unable to move for 5 seconds after. The amount of seconds decreases by 2 for each rank attack defended against below A.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Must have Twin Storm Blades

    ~ Declined ~

    (Raiton: Kaminari Yari)-Lightning Release: Lightning Spear
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user generates a long raiton wire with a spear head that can be used to wrap around an opponent and then continuously electricute him or to get out of a pit by sticking it in the side and retracting the held raiton whip to bring him up.
    -Usable 3 time per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-14-2010 at 09:15 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sora Tobikomi) Sky Jump
    Rank: E
    Range: Self
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 5
    Damage: 0
    Description: Based off of how Shinobi walk on water by emitting a constant stream of chakra in ever changing amounts to create a stable surface to stand upon, the user of this jutsu will focus a large amount of chakra (by comparison to the Water Walking Method, which has negligible chakra loss), allowing the user to create a small area of surface tension beneath their feet by having the chakra gather the air beneath them so that it becomes just dense enough so that by discharging the gathered chakra, the user can jump in any direction – effectively, this jutsu just allows the user to do what is commonly referred to as “Double-jumping”, allowing them to move out of harms way.


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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fuuton: Rasen Harike-n (Spiral Hurricane Technique)
    Rank:S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:User concentrates on wind nature manipulation by creating a hurricane-like rasengan hurling towards the enemy

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton: kyuusaisha handou ryokou-Lightning release: savior reflex travel
    Type: Defence/attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:30
    Description: Depending on the gap between the user and a clone made by the user, the user can take use of a kunai which throws at the location where the clone stands and with the handseal; tiger, turn into mass of lightning and travel with the kunai in order to pop out from the kunai when he/she arrive to the clone in order to make a strong, protective ball of lightning that surround and defend the clone and user from incoming attacks.
    -Protects the user from jutsus up to A-rank while S-rank will break through and also hit the user with his/her own defence
    ~Only last for 1 turn~
    ~May only be used thrice in a battle~
    ~The user get's dicharged and wont be able to use lightning jutsus 3 turns after that~
    ~Can only be taught by Hoshigaki Kisame Akatsuki~

    ~ Wtf ? Declined. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Liliana View Post
    It is a B rank...
    Yeah, that's another thing I wanted fixed. Change the rank.


    ( Suiton: Hazumo Ibo no Kerokero) Water Release: Bouncy Frog Warts

    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After 3 handseals, the user spits out up to 5 spheres of water (The water has sticky properties, similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field), in a quick succession and at great speeds. Utilizing her Water Chakra, the user drastically increased the cohesion of the water molecules and decreased the adhesion of the water molecules, thus creating thick beads of water that will bounce off any object. The user can redirect the beads of water by stomping on the ground, thus erupting (up to 10) small pillars of earth (Counts towards the jutsu count) , until either she decides to pop them (using one handseal) or the beads collide with a sharp object, thus breaching the spheres and blasting the sticky substance inside onto the target. the user can infuse Fire or Lightning into the balls (For Boiling Beads or Electrified Bead, isntead of Sticky Beads), without changing the Adhesion and Cohesion levels. Wind jutsus might burst the ball aswell.
    *Can only be used 3 times per battle. Can only be used once every 2 turns*
    ( Suiton: Hazumo Ibo no Kerokero) Water Release: Bouncy Frog Warts

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After 3 handseals, the user spits out up to 5 spheres of water (The water has sticky properties, similair to Water Style: Syrup Capture Field), in a quick succession and at great speeds. Utilizing her Water Chakra, the user drastically increased the cohesion of the water molecules and decreased the adhesion of the water molecules, thus creating thick beads of water that will bounce off any object. The user can redirect the beads of water by stomping on the ground, thus erupting (up to 10) small pillars of earth (Counts towards the jutsu count) , until either she decides to pop them (using one handseal) or the beads collide with a sharp object, thus breaching the spheres and blasting the sticky substance inside onto the target. the user can infuse Fire or Lightning into the balls (For Boiling Beads or Electrified Bead, isntead of Sticky Beads), without changing the Adhesion and Cohesion levels. Wind jutsus might burst the ball aswell.
    *Can only be used 3 times per battle. Can only be used once every 2 turns*

    ~ Approved. Nice idea. ~

    Quote Originally Posted by Liliana View Post
    (Genjutsu: Bushou no Kamikorosu) Mind Arts: Yawn of the Sloth

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user charges chakra on her lungs and releases a deep low burst of sound, an amplified yawn, capable of dispersing near intagible elements (Such as Fire, Water and Wind Releases) up to A rank (Secondary effect, irrelevant to the purpose of the jutsu). This yawn is meant to insert the user's chakra on the opponent's brain (It's a sound induced Genjutsu). The foreign chakra will disrupt the host's chakra, and will cause him a tremendous desire to yawn. The person's chakra will gather on his/her lungs, and soon that pressure will be released in yet another deep low burst of sound. This contagious yawn will be passed on to anyone in range of either the user of this technique, or the ones affected, despite being the initial opponent or not. Each yawn lasts 2 minutes, and until anyone on range is affected by the wave of yawns. The fight will be on hiatus during that time, as no one, not even the user, will be able to charge chakra or preform jutsus, given the chakra pressure being gathered and released.
    After that first row of yawns, in the next 3 turns, the user can, by preforming one handseal, recreate the 2 minutes long yawn, only once per battle, which will affect everyone previously hit by the initial yawn and replicas. The second row of yawns is not contagious, and does not affect the user (Will affect allies, clones, summons). The user can take that time to attack.

    *This jutsu can only be used once per battle. Cannot be used by summons or clones*
    *The opponent can try to resist the yawn, but the pressure of chakra will heavily injure the person's body, brain, lungs and heart, and can even burst some arteries. Users immune to that, are immune to this genjutsu to some extend*
    *This is not a visual genjutsu, so I don't see why Sharingan, Byakugan or Rinnegan users are immune to it*
    *The yawn itself, given human nature, is "contagious", so even the last yawns, even though they don't project chakra like the initial ones, are contagious to some extend to the user aswell, but the resistence the these reflexes are significantly less harmful to the user*
    *The user will not be able to use genjutsus anymore during that battle*
    *The user won't be able to use Forbidden techniques during that battle, nor S ranked summons*


    ~ This is basically a Sound jutsu ( the dispersing ability ) and you do not know Sound.
    Also for a Sensei you seem to know little about the Dojutsu. They break Genjutsu not because they act visually but because they can recognize it instantly once it is cast, thus allowing the person to break it. They can see the break in their own chakra flow and realize there is a Genjutsu regardless of how it is activated. ~
    I seem to know little about Doujutsu?
    There's a difference between realizing there is a Genjutsu and releasing from a Genjutsu, despite the words "Realizing" and "Releasing" being similar. Just because you know something's wrong, doesn't mean you're immune to it. Doujutsu allow you to break through Genjutsus because they pierce through visual illusions, that's been clearly shown during the Chunnin Exam, when Sasuke used his sharingan to distinguish illusionary copies and the original person. The technique you described is also known as Kai. Being such an efficient Moderator, you obviously know that, given the current RP Rules, Kai can only release Genjutsus up to B rank. This is a S Rank. Doujutsu are able to realize they're in a genjutsu, but not release from it (At least not the way you described)

    (Genjutsu: Bushou no Kamikorosu) Mind Arts: Yawn of the Sloth

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user charges chakra on her lungs and releases a deep low burst of sound, an amplified yawn, capable of dispersing near intagible elements (Such as Fire, Water and Wind Releases) up to A rank (Secondary effect, irrelevant to the purpose of the jutsu). This yawn is meant to insert the user's chakra on the opponent's brain (It's a sound induced Genjutsu). The foreign chakra will disrupt the host's chakra, and will cause him a tremendous desire to yawn. The person's chakra will gather on his/her lungs, and soon that pressure will be released in yet another deep low burst of sound. This contagious yawn will be passed on to anyone in range of either the user of this technique, or the ones affected, despite being the initial opponent or not. Each yawn lasts 2 minutes, and until anyone on range is affected by the wave of yawns. The fight will be on hiatus during that time, as no one, not even the user, will be able to charge chakra or preform jutsus, given the chakra pressure being gathered and released.
    After that first row of yawns, in the next 3 turns, the user can, by preforming one handseal, recreate the 2 minutes long yawn, only once per battle, which will affect everyone previously hit by the initial yawn and replicas. The second row of yawns is not contagious, and does not affect the user (Will affect allies, clones, summons). The user can take that time to attack.

    *This jutsu can only be used once per battle. Cannot be used by summons or clones*
    *The opponent can try to resist the yawn, but the pressure of chakra will heavily injure the person's body, brain, lungs and heart, and can even burst some arteries. Users immune to that, are immune to this genjutsu to some extend*
    *This is not a visual genjutsu, so I don't see why Sharingan, Byakugan or Rinnegan users are immune to it*
    *The yawn itself, given human nature, is "contagious", so even the last yawns, even though they don't project chakra like the initial ones, are contagious to some extend to the user aswell, but the resistence the these reflexes are significantly less harmful to the user*
    *The user will not be able to use genjutsus anymore during that battle*
    *The user won't be able to use Forbidden techniques during that battle, nor S ranked summons*
    *The initial deep low burst of sound only has dispersing abilities if the user knows Sound Arts. Otherwise, it's only ability is to introduce the chakra on the targets*

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen-sama View Post
    Consuming seal (consumo no fuuin )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A more advanced seal of the fire/water/wind/lightning/earth seal. The user will focus chakra into his palm and create a kanji writing "consume".He will then put it in front of him and release a sort of force field around him.Anything that touches the force field/shield will be destroyed,thus blocking anything.
    *Can only block 1 jutsu with a attack(like kunais) per turn
    *Can only be used up to 4 times


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. -.- On a side note, do you even know Fuuinjutsu ? ~

    Pheonix Flare (フェニックス閃光)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/supplemantary
    Range: self/mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80(projectiles)
    Description: This jutsu is only for those specialized in fire and have fire affinity(stated in bio) enables the user to unleash a big amount of fire from their back,legs and arms.The user will use their manipulation to form a thick,compressed fire wings that allows them to go into the sky and fly,while the legs unleash fire from below to help keep him in the air.However the arms allow the user to shoot big fire blast in shape of fists(to do this the user must know Fire fist jutsu that mugen-sama possesses).
    *May only stay in the air for 3 turns
    *Can only shoot up to 2 fire fists(can be shot at the same time) per turn and count as 1 jutsu.
    *Can only be activated once.And lasts for 3 turns


    ~ What the- Is that how you put the Japanese name ? o_O ~

    Kaguya arts: rage of the fire flower (Kaguya bijutsu: gekido no kasai hana)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: 90(projectiles)
    Description: This jutsu makes the user unleash half of his body bones many times,each on top each other and regenerate them at high speed.After seconds the user creates a giant bone clone with him in the head.The clones is as big as a very tall tree.The user than uses this to attack the opponent,while in this form the user can shoot out spikes from his arms.(+5 to all kaguya skills will in that form)
    *Can only be activated once.And lasts for 3 turns
    *must be a kaguya


    ~ Ugh, OP ~

    chimpanzee arts: silver forest summon (chimpanzee bijutsu: silvaru hayashi kchuysei)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is more of a terrain summon.The user gets out a scroll,bites his thumbs and slams both hands on the open scroll.This makes the whole terrain turn into the Holy forest of the chimp summons back on mountain Silver.Along with the forest it also summons swarms (about 50) of chimpanzees with swords that will attack the opponent.
    *Can only be activated once.And lasts for 3 turns
    *No summons for 5 turns


    ~ You can't summon terrain. ~

    Chimp soul-(chimpo kihaku)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:self
    Chakra cost: 50 (-5 per turn)
    Damage:
    Description:The user becomes one with the chimps,to the point of his soul fusing with them.This produces a super boost of power in the user.The users taijutsu's power is much more powerful also the user will gain more chimp-like attributes,like fur,increase in size and physical power.He will have black fur with silver pointy hair,will increase to 3 meters in size and will get a +10 bonus in tai.The users chakra speed increases giving him a small +2 bonus to elements.(can only boost one element per turn)
    *Can only be activated once and lasts for 4 turns
    *Must be taught by Mugen or the current contract holder


    ~ Wtf, DBZ soul-fusion ? Declined, do not resubmit. ~
    Yes I do know fuuin and was taught it a while ago now

    Pheonix Flare (phoeniksu kasai)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/supplemantary
    Range: self/mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80(projectiles)
    Description: This jutsu is only for those specialized in fire and have fire affinity(stated in bio) enables the user to unleash a big amount of fire from their back,legs and arms.The user will use their manipulation to form a thick,compressed fire wings that allows them to go into the sky and fly,while the legs unleash fire from below to help keep him in the air.However the arms allow the user to shoot big fire blast in shape of fists(to do this the user must know Fire fist jutsu that mugen-sama possesses).
    *May only stay in the air for 3 turns
    *Can only shoot up to 2 fire fists(can be shot at the same time) per turn and count as 1 jutsu.
    *Can only be activated once.And lasts for 3 turns


    ~ Similar technique exists ~

    Well sorry,I just liked it more that way Oh come on dont be stubborn, agree it looked cool that way But rules are rules O_<

    Note: All the cj below will be linked so read all of them before declining and stuff and please tell me what I did wrong so I dont have to guess whats wrong ^^
    Summoning: Elder Kyu (Kchuysei: Kyu-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Kyu.Kyu has the the ability to heal.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner,he merges with the users left arm with only eyes visible, for the rest of the battle. Once merged the user has the ability to heal himself fully 1 time per battle.Also staring jutsus have no effect on him.
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    ~ He has the ability to heal ? No frigging way. ~

    Summoning: Elder Uky (Kchuysei: Uky-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Uky.Uky has the the ability to absorb anything.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner, he merges with the users chest with hands sticking out of it, for the rest of he battle. Once merged Uky can absorb 2 incoming jutsus(2 A rank or 1 forbidden or 1 S rank and no more)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Summoning: Elder Oku (Kchuysei: Oku-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Oku.Oku has the the ability of super human strength.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner, he merges with the users right hand with only eyes visible on the arm, for the rest of he battle. Once merged Oku gives the users right hand super human strength (+10 to tai/ken with right hand)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Chimpanzee ultimate elder form (chimpu kyuukyoku senpai ninmenjuushin)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user has has summoned and merged with all 3 elders- Kyu-Uky-Oku (which forms the name) the user will enter the chimpanzees ultimate ancient form that increases the users chakra flow and enhances it.The users hair will instantly grow long,spiky,solid and turn silver.While in this form the user will gain the speed of lee without weights and tremendous strength (+15 to tai/ken).Though if the user didnt used the elders abilities before activating this than he loses them because you can not use the abilities in this form as the elders are focused on enhancement of the users chakra.
    *mUst be a chimpanzee user and taught ONLY by mugen
    *Must be merged with all 3 elders that are summoned individually at a individual cost of chakra.(in all to preform this it will be 40+40+40+50=170 chakra) + each elder must be summoned on a individual turn making a total of 4 turns to activate this.(3 turns to summon and 1 to activate,unless delayed even more)
    *May only be activated once and last for 4 turns.If the user does not win on the 4rth turn,then the battle will end automatically with the user drained out of energy.


    ~ Wait till all 3 elders are approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugiwara View Post

    (Honeton: Kakuheki)- Bone release: Barrier Wall
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user puts his hands on the ground, sending bone chakra underground and creating a circle of bones around the opponent. The circle of bones are like a giant wall 360 degree wall around him, and it is 10 meters in diameter. The user can chose if its open at the top or not, to trap the opponent in it. The bones are very dense, average kaguya bones, which are harder than steel. This circled wall around the opponent have various uses, for example the user can use it as the opponent uses a technique to attack the user, it can serve as defense, and can have other supplementary uses. As mentioned, the bones are very dense and can endure high amount of damage done to them. The bones burst out the same speed as on Dance of the Young ferns.
    • Can only be used once per battle
    • The bones are like all other Kaguya bones, harder than steel.
    • No bone techniques the next round.


    ~ How long does it take to form ? ~
    (Honeton: Kakuheki)- Bone release: Barrier Wall
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user puts his hands on the ground, sending bone chakra underground and creating a circle of bones around the opponent. The circle of bones are like a giant wall 360 degree wall around him, and it is 10 meters in diameter. The user can chose if its open at the top or not, to trap the opponent in it. The bones are very dense, average kaguya bones, which are harder than steel. This circled wall around the opponent have various uses, for example the user can use it as the opponent uses a technique to attack the user, it can serve as defense, and can have other supplementary uses. As mentioned, the bones are very dense and can endure high amount of damage done to them. The bones burst out the same speed as on Dance of the Young ferns.
    • Can only be used once per battle
    • The bones are like all other Kaguya bones, harder than steel.
    • No bone techniques the next round.


    ~ Approved ~

    Emp told me to resubmit ^^^^^
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ichi Chakra Ken Kata:Butou Ken Gengetsu)-One Chakra Sword Style: Dancing Blades of the Crescent Moon
    Type:attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user takes out his blade(s) and focuses chakra into it. The chakra put into the sword increases the reach and damage of the sword. He/She then dashes towards the opponent and delivers a 8 slash strike to the opponents torso going right through their chest.
    (Only Daemon can use this technique)
    (can only be used twice per battle)

    ~ o_O Approved ~

    (Ichi Chakra Ken Kata: Butou Ken Hitaiyou)- One Chakra Sword Style: Dancing Blades of the Blazing Sun
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user focuses a massive amount of chakra into the users blade(s). Then the user swings their blade(s) releasing a burst of chakra from their sword capable of slicing through 3 bolders with ease
    (Can only be used three times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

    (Thrusting Fist of Hades)- Tsuppari Genkotsu Yomi
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user focuses chakra into their fist then punch the opponent in their chest making them cough up blood
    (Can only be used twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ um...what ? o_O ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Jörmungandr
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on the snake contract tattoo and summons Jörmungandr a gigantic serpent that is 2 times the size of Manda. This snake is immune to fire and water jutsu u to b rank. Above B rank does minimal damage. And can withstand up to 2 S rank direct lightning, wind, or earth jutsu. Can spew out a very large amount of water sufficient for any water jutsu at the users discretion. This snake also has the ability to divide itself multiple times into just as powerful, yet smaller versions of itself.

    Note: Can only be on the field for 5 of the users turns
    Note: Division math. Division into 3 = 2 snakes the size of Manda. Division into 50 = 50 snakes the size of a large kyodajai, division into 100 = 100 snakes the size of the snakes used in hidden shadow snake hands
    Note: Can only be taught to be summoned by Scarface
    Note: Once divided, Jörmungandr cannot return to full size
    Note: Can only divide 2 times per battle

    Size reduced.
    Damage from above b rank stated
    Division restricted


    surely after splitting because there are more of them, they should take less killing, as there are more to kill, however i do understand you're thinking about jutsu which can do widespread attacks too.
    Jörmungandr
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on the snake contract tattoo and summons Jörmungandr a gigantic serpent that is 2 times the size of Manda. This snake is immune to fire and water jutsu u to b rank. Above B rank does minimal damage. And can withstand up to 2 S rank direct lightning, wind, or earth jutsu. Can spew out a very large amount of water sufficient for any water jutsu at the users discretion. This snake also has the ability to divide itself multiple times into less powerful, smaller versions of itself.

    Note: Can only be on the field for 5 of the users turns
    Note: Division math. Division into 3 = 2 snakes the size of Manda. Division into 50 = 50 snakes the size of a large kyodajai, division into 100 = 100 snakes the size of the snakes used in hidden shadow snake hands
    Note: Can only be taught to be summoned by Scarface
    Note: Once divided, Jörmungandr cannot return to full size
    Note: Can only divide 2 times per battle


    Edited to make them weaker

    ~ Does minimal damage ? o_O So it can die after wind, lightning or earth, but withstands the other two elements for no conceivable reason ~
    _____

    Custom Weapon



    Za Debiru Umidasu | The Devil Bringer
    Rank: S
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30 for each ability used
    Damage: 50 for Buster
    Description:
    The Devil Bringer becomes the users right arm, and the physical manifestation of his demonic power. The arm possesses superhuman strength, which manifests itself through a larger, spectral arm controlled by chakra. The arm itself is completely impenetrable and indestructible, enabling the user to defend using his arm as a melee weapon. It is composed of an unknown material from the depths of hell.

    Effects:


    1. Taijutsu attacks involving the right arm do double damage.

    2. If the user is caught in genjutsu, the arm automatically heats up to cause superficial pain to the user to snap them out of the genjutsu.

    Abilities:

    1. Snatch - Send forth the spectral arm of the Devil Bringer and grasp a distant enemy within its clutches. The enemy can then be pushed or pulled at the users discretion. The user can also snatch other things, such as nearby trees or boulders to pull to safety. Dealing no damage. Can only be used at mid - short range. And travels almost instantly.

    2. Buster - After grabbing an enemy with the Devil Bringer, the user will slam the enemy on the ground repeatedly, slamming them on the ground will disorient them, and break there bones disabling their skill. Close range.

    3. Hold - After snatching, the user holds and binds the enemy in place. Dealing no damage. Mid to short range.

    Notes:

    1. Buster can only be used one time.

    2. The Devil Bringer is always on the user, but must be declared at the start of battle to be valid.

    "disabling their skill" if it completely immobilizes/stops jutsu permenantly it seems a bit OP
    Custom Weapon



    Za Debiru Umidasu | The Devil Bringer
    Rank: S
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30 for each ability used
    Damage: 50 for Buster
    Description:
    The Devil Bringer becomes the users right arm, and the physical manifestation of his demonic power. The arm possesses superhuman strength, which manifests itself through a larger, spectral arm controlled by chakra. The arm itself is completely impenetrable and indestructible, enabling the user to defend using his arm as a melee weapon. It is composed of an unknown material from the depths of hell.

    Effects:


    1. Taijutsu attacks involving the right arm do double damage.

    2. If the user is caught in genjutsu, the arm automatically heats up to cause superficial pain to the user to snap them out of the genjutsu.

    Abilities:

    1. Snatch - Send forth the spectral arm of the Devil Bringer and grasp a distant enemy within its clutches. The enemy can then be pushed or pulled at the users discretion. The user can also snatch other things, such as nearby trees or boulders to pull to safety. Dealing no damage. Can only be used at mid - short range. And travels almost instantly.

    2. Buster - After grabbing an enemy with the Devil Bringer, the user will slam the enemy on the ground repeatedly, slamming them on the ground will disorient them, and break there bones disabling their skill making them slower and take longer to form hand seals. Close range.

    3. Hold - After snatching, the user holds and binds the enemy in place. Dealing no damage. Mid to short range.

    Notes:

    1. Buster can only be used one time.

    2. The Devil Bringer is always on the user, but must be declared at the start of battle to be valid.


    ~ The entire purple part has to be totally removed/restricted before I can even begin checking its abilities ~

    Specified that the damage done merely slows them down and makes it harder to form hand seals

    (Taijutsu: Stomp Em In Za Nattsu) - Stomp Em' In The Nuts

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 + 10 for each additional stomp
    Damage points: 50 + 10 for each additional stomp
    Description: The user quickly crouches down and swiftly sweeps his left leg into his opponents legs to kick the enemy's legs out from under him, while charging chakra into his right leg. Then while the opponent is on the ground, the user repeatedly stomps on the enemy's scrotum, causing severe abdominal pain that forces the opponent into the fetal possition.

    Note: Maximum of 5 stomps
    Note: Can only be used once

    Also, this is not an asinine jutsu, Kaito has one that hits the balls then the forehead >_>

    not got a real problem with the jutsu so much however it does up to 90 damage for s-rank... would like someone else to check.
    True, if someone else OK's the S rank version thats cool, but just in case, here is the forbidden rank

    (Taijutsu: Stomp Em In Za Nattsu) - Stomp Em' In The Nuts

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50 + 10 for each additional stomp
    Damage points: 50 + 10 for each additional stomp
    Description: The user quickly crouches down and swiftly sweeps his left leg into his opponents legs to kick the enemy's legs out from under him, while charging chakra into his right leg. Then while the opponent is on the ground, the user repeatedly stomps on the enemy's scrotum, causing severe abdominal pain that forces the opponent into the fetal possition.

    Note: Maximum of 5 stomps
    Note: Can only be used once


    ~ o_O Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Suna Tokage) Summoning Jutsu: Sand Lizard
    Summoning Animal: Sand Lizard
    Scroll Owner: Gaara of the Funk
    Other Users who have signed contract:None
    Summoning Boss if existing:None
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None
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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Suna Tokage: Sandojin) Summoning Jutsu: Sand Lizard: Sandojin
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: Depends on what jutsu he uses
    Description: Sandojin is a 7 foot tall, 20 feet long lizard that has a thick layer of sand armor that is a lot like Gaara's, which gives it the nickname "Sand Lizard". The sand armor is made of sand that is so dense it is stronger than iron. He can only use sand jutsu, no other element. He can use any sand jutsu the user has learned. Any sand jutsu he uses is twice as fast as the user can use it. He runs somewhat slow but he can seperate any of his 4 legs and his tail and send it in any direction at a fast speed. After he seperates a body part it cannot be re-attached, until he is summoned the second time.
    *Can only be summoned for four turns
    *Sandojin can be summoned 2 times in a battle but the user has to wait 3 turns before summoning him again
    *Must have signed the sand lizard contract to summon

    ~ Lizard contract exists ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ichigeki Hissatsu | One Hit Certain Death
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15 per turn
    Damage: Varied
    Description: Ichigeki Hissatsu is a legendary weapon and its said that nobody has survived a single strike from its blades. The exact origins of this weapon remain unknown. Its past is shrouded in mystery though some speculate its birth was in the Land of Iron due to the material's responsiveness to chakra. The basic form of the Ichigeki Hissatsu is a long metallic staff with intricate art work along its black and silver body. There appears to be no top or bottom end, but rather two heads. An open slit lies vertical along both heads but on opposing sides from one another. This basic form is just one of many that this weapon can take. At the middle of the staff is a section where the staff can be split in half turning it into two club like weapons. The deadliest feature of the Ichigeki Hissatsu is that when chakra is channeled into its metal, two long scythe blades form out of the slits located on the two heads. This allows for the weapon to become a twin or single scythe when connected, or two sickle like weapons when separated. This versatility gives the weapon a total of five forms (staff, clubs, single scythe, twin scyth or sickles). The chakra used when creating the scythes is incredibly sharp and capable of slicing through steel. The chakra blades are equivalent to rank A and can be used for a maximum or three turns at a time and require a waiting period of two turns before being usable again. These blades can be released and fired towards a target four times per battle (twice per blade) counting as a move in the user's three turn move set.
    • Chakra blades last three turns per use.
    • Requires 15 chakra per turn to maintain the blades.
    • Two times per end, the blade can be fired at a target.
    • Must wait two turns before recreating the chakra blades.
    • Can only be wielded by Bahamut.
    • The staff portion is indestructible though the blades can be shattered if hit with a stronger attack.
    • Basic Image (ignore guy on left):


    ~ Don't make it one big para, split it into many so its easier to read ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Inuzuka Tsuin Soshi Yari | Inuzuka Twin Element Spear
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
    Damage: 80
    Description: The "Inuzuka Twin Element Spear" is a retractable and extendable spear that is made of an indestructible yet light metal. The spear can retract and extend at the users will, making it easier to carry. It is an Inuzuka heirloom past down through the generations. The spear's handle is engraved with the name of his/hers Dog Companion (as they share a special bond), thus allowing the user to summon his "Dog Companion" whenever he wants (this doesn't count as a move). He can also use the spear to summon his Ninja Dog/ Dog summons by wiping blood on the spear and slamming the end into the earth (but this counts as a move). The user can also channel Wind or Lightning chakra into the spear, increasing its penetration powers when charged with Wind chakra, and increasing its throwing speed when charged with Lightning chakra. By doing three handseals the user can summon the spear in it's retracted form to the users belt (there's a seal on it)

    • Indestrucible, but cannot cut through everything.
    • Can only be wielded by Ragerok, if someone else tries to wield the spear (and i'm not touching it) it will teleport and return to the users belt in its retracted form.
    • It costs 20 chakra per turn when infused with either element
    • Can only summon the users Dog Companion three times per battle.
    • Can only summon the spear back manually twice per battle



    Ignore the Knife and such, thats what the spear looks like retracted.


    Both sides can retract and extend, the handle is the one from the first picture.




    ~ Change the purple part ~

    Dropping my Haikaito Kami Custom Weapon
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Chakra strongbox = Chakra kinko.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self/Short
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By releasing a great amount of chakra into the sky, the user makes a 3x3x3 meter box made of chakra fall from the sky, this happens really fast, the user is able to decide where the box will land, but it can only be in short range of him/her, and it cannot be aimed for an opponent. The box looks like it’s made of glass, and can be seen through, everything can get into the box but it cannot get out, the box is almost unbreakable, and will only be broken by forbidden-rank jutsus or higher.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used two times per battle.
    • The box has a floor so digging won’t work.
    • Stays on the field until destroyed.

    ~ Wtf ? o_O Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    Lovers call = Koibito o yobidasu.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By modifying his/her voice with chakra, this jutsu allows the user to reassemble the loving call of any animal, if used on a summon, this will result in confusion, and it can be used to interrupt a summons attack, if used on a human, this will result in looking very stupid.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra
    • Can only be used two times per battle

    ~ Um..no, this would require Sound training ~

    Fire/Lightning combo: 1000 firebirds = Katon/Raiton 1000 Faiābāzu.
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user focuses an intense amount of fire chakra in his hand, and then channels lightning chakra into the fire, to make a big fireball with a Chidori core. The combo will sound like a thousand birds chipping, and because of the electric outbursts in the Chidori, the fireball will frequently change its shape a little bit, like a thousand birds trying to break out of a rubber ball. The combo can be used as a close combat attack, like the original Chidori, but the user can also throw the combo at his opponent.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used three times per battle.

    ~ NO RASENGAN OR CHIDORI VARIATIONS ! ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ZeroGarra View Post
    Injury movement = Shōgai no ugoki.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses his chakra on a place he’s been wounded, and uses the chakra to transport the dead cells to another place in his/her body, then the user takes the cells from that place, and moves them to the injured spot, healing it very fast, this enables the user to choose where his injuries are, but the damage have to be similar, examples, an eye for a nose, a leg for an arm, if the user is killed almost instantly by a wound, like a stab into the heart, this jutsu doesn’t work.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.



    Chakra strongbox = Chakra kinko.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self/Short
    Chakra cost: 70
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By releasing a great amount of chakra into the sky, the user makes a 3x3x3 meter box made of chakra fall from the sky, this happens really fast, the user is able to decide where the box will land, but it can only be in short range of him/her, and it cannot be aimed for an opponent. The box looks like it’s made of glass, and can be seen through, everything can get into the box but it cannot get out, the box is almost unbreakable, and will only be broken by forbidden-rank jutsus or higher.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used two times per battle.
    • The box has a floor so digging won’t work.
    • Stays on the field until destroyed.


    Lovers call = Koibito o yobidasu.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By modifying his/her voice with chakra, this jutsu allows the user to reassemble the loving call of any animal, if used on a summon, this will result in confusion, and it can be used to interrupt a summons attack, if used on a human, this will result in looking very stupid.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra
    • Can only be used two times per battle


    Fire/Lightning combo: 1000 firebirds = Katon/Raiton 1000 Faiābāzu.
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user focuses an intense amount of fire chakra in his hand, and then channels lightning chakra into the fire, to make a big fireball with a Chidori core. The combo will sound like a thousand birds chipping, and because of the electric outbursts in the Chidori, the fireball will frequently change its shape a little bit, like a thousand birds trying to break out of a rubber ball. The combo can be used as a close combat attack, like the original Chidori, but the user can also throw the combo at his opponent.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used three times per battle.
    Bolded requires medical training which I doubt you have.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Shigure~ View Post
    Bolded requires medical training which I doubt you have.
    Sorry i'll remove it, but the idea is good, (i think) how do you get medical training BTW...
     
         

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