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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Theos. View Post


    With the Purple part being out:

    - Chakra Balance Technique - (Chakra Amari Jutsu)

    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra points: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The Monkey handseal as he charges his ears with chakra , and with concentration he charge it into his inner ear making him able to control his balance by controlling the liquid hidden in the inner ear which controll his balance, this technique would make him completely able to controll himself if any changes happens to the Terrain making him normally imbalanced but while using this jutsu it wont, and specially works with taijutsus.


    Balance won't make reactions faster



    Rain style: Scavenging high pressured Rain (Ame No Justu: Kansou Oshi Takai Ame)

    Rank: S
    Range: long "the whole area"
    Type: Supplementary/Deffense
    Chakra cost: 40 (+15 chakra points for each turn its in use)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After preforming three handseals, the user makes the sky strongly rain down over the whole terrain, this rains contents dust and earth projectails, and make them all fall along on the ground without any harm, and can also stops up to B rank sand jutsus by the same method.
    ~Can only stay for five turns.
    ~Can not be used more than once per battle.
    ~Must have mastered the Rain element to be able to use this jutsu.


    Declined... i seriously don't get the need for this. dust and earth projectiles that do no damage? only stops up to b rank sand? where's the point? and it's a rain jutsu... why would their be dust and earth projectiles in it?
    Scavenging is one of the things that rain does in nature, when the rain falls it absorb small solid objects while falling to the ground, this technique uses this ability with very strong rain so that it would be able to fully absorb down all the small solid objects like dust "not the element of dust" and sand making its justus very weak by turn the sand into mud and by taking down the sand with it, so why is it that impossible?

    I re-edit it:

    - Chakra Balance Technique - (Chakra Amari Jutsu)

    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra points: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The Monkey handseal as he charges his ears with chakra , and with concentration he charge it into his inner ear making him able to control his balance by controlling the liquid hidden in the inner ear which controll his balance, this technique would make him completely able to controll himself if any changes happens to the Terrain making him normally imbalanced but while using this jutsu it wont, this technique maximize the user's concentration, and specially works with taijutsus.

    ~can only be used once per battle and its affect lasts for 5 turns.

    Thinking about it, actually controlling the liquid would make you less balanced, as the liquid is only there to give indication of your upright position etc... it only indicates balance not control it, therefore any "control" of it, rather than an increased awareness of it would infact work against your own sense of balance.


    Team Art: Comrade Chakra bond - buntai no Jutsu: Doushi Chakra shouken -

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra points: 30 [from each user and +15 for each turn its in use and for each user you are connected to]
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: When two or three people are fighting together, this technique is used by preforming a handseal together, like when Anko made a handseal along with Orochimaru. creating a strong chakra bond between them, this chakra bond is used to communicate with their thoughts together in battles, making them able to do combos together together and power up their team work, also help each other by notifying them about incoming attacks. if one of the user's were a spy, he/she will be able to spy upon all of their moves and that is one of the main disadvantages of using this technique, user's can also know if anyone of them is being under a genjutsu or a mental attack since there mind is connected and make them able to react instantly to that, the only way to stop this jutsu is to stop sending chakra to the user[s] you want to disconnect with, however, jutsus like chakra absorbing technique also works.

    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Lasts for 5 turns maximum.
    ~It counts as a jutsu for all the users in the turn it has been used in.

    Rain Release: hell rain |Ame no Jutsu: Makaikouu|

    Rank: S
    Range: The whole terrian
    Type: Supplementary/attack
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 40
    Description: the user makes two handseals in a second then channels a huge amount of rain chakra into the clouds heating them up as it rain very hot rain, the water of this rain's temperature is at 60 siliceous and keeps rising until it reaches near 90. as it rain the whole terrain get covered with hot streams then soon turn into mist, and gather hot clouds that would create a great thunderstorm, the mist can be used as the hidden mist jutsu, and the cloud become ready to be used in jutsus such as Kirin, however, this jutsu doesn't do massive damages, it reduce anyone under it burns if it touches their skin. after this jutsu is done, and the temperature heat lowers, all the earth based techniques for up to B rank that was used meanwhile or before this jutsu will be destroy, but this effect only happens after this jutsu with time, because of the high temperature change.

    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~the mist stays for two turns and cover the whole terrian and its air.
    ~the user would also be damaged with this technique.
    ~Ice would melt while this jutsu is in use, and Ice/plants based jutsus damages would lower to half of what it does in normal, and disappear in one turn after being used.
    ~Can only stay for two turns.

    let me explain something here... rain being very hot won't work like that... heat would stop clouds condensing and falling as rain =/, (however i would accept it if you pressurised the water to high levels as even metals which should be molten can be compressed to solids while still at the same extreme temperatures.)

    after all this you would still need to severely restrict it, rmove some additional effects as there are too many aswell. (oh and explain better, with grammar too.)


    Vulture Summoning technique: Kirasura, The Air heater |Hagetaka Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Teikanetsu Kirasura|

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a huge vulture. This creature is one of the Vulture's monks. It has 6 wings and each have three birdclaw "fingers" in the middle of the wing, which are used as front legs. This is done by laying the wings on the ground and use these "fingers" to stand. It's useful for him to go faster on the ground. However in aerial fights this summon is very untrustworthy since it hates to be summoned so much, but ridable. He will punish the user by absorbing 30 chakra points out of him after 4 turns he has been summoned and he will reverse summon itself. If he was somehow defeated before that time, he will take that chakra and disappears. The vulture's speed and power are magnificent, it's only equalled by the highest among all the summoning ninja animals. He can fly at the height of the Ruppell's vultures too and is able to use fire jutsus, he has the ability of creating an flame tornado which equals S rank jutsus around himself and any nearby person as a flame shield of any incoming wind attack and damaging the enemy if he was in short range of him, and his ability of using fire jutsus helps him to heat up the air while flying making him even faster in air.

    ~ Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ~ His ability is only usable for once and counted as one of the user's moves, which means that the user can only use two other jutsus in that turn and the 40 chakra points used to form that tornado is taken from him as well.
    ~ Can only last for 4 turns
    ~ He takes 30 chakra points when it leaves whenever that is.
    ~ Can only use up to S-rank fire jutsu's which the owner knows.
    ~ Must have signed the summoning contract.
    ~He only have 200 chakra points to use in each battle

    Explain better, and flame shields with no limit? (you only mention the tornado as limitted to 1)


    Vulture Art: Air Dash |Hagetaka no Jutsu:Teibakushin|


    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (-20 for the user)
    Description: After summoning a vulture, the user charges the vulture he is riding with a huge amount of chakra, then the vulture release this chakra through his wings as it swings them, making itself and any person riding it dash up into the air in a speed that can only be equaled with the third gate's, this technique can be used to dodge incoming attacks and to reach mid range of thier previous location.

    ~Can only be used once
    ~Imbalance the user for a short time after its used and cause him 20 damage points.
    ~clones can not use this technique because of the damages it creates.
    ~The user must have the vulture contract and already have summoned a vulture to use this technique.


    Declined, no gates speed. i see little use for this jutsu in the whole other than potential abuse of it's gates speed.



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    Last edited by Kawagiri; 11-15-2010 at 09:00 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ragerok View Post
    Inuzuka Tsuin Soshi Yari | Inuzuka Twin Element Spear
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
    Damage: 80
    Description: The "Inuzuka Twin Element Spear" is a retractable and extendable spear that is made of an indestructible yet light metal. The spear can retract and extend at the users will, making it easier to carry. It is an Inuzuka heirloom past down through the generations. The spear's handle is engraved with the name of his/hers Dog Companion (as they share a special bond), thus allowing the user to summon his "Dog Companion" whenever he wants (this doesn't count as a move). He can also use the spear to summon his Ninja Dog/ Dog summons by wiping blood on the spear and slamming the end into the earth (but this counts as a move). The user can also channel Wind or Lightning chakra into the spear, increasing its penetration powers when charged with Wind chakra, and increasing its throwing speed when charged with Lightning chakra. By doing three handseals the user can summon the spear in it's retracted form to the users belt (there's a seal on it)

    • Indestrucible, but cannot cut through everything.
    • Can only be wielded by Ragerok, if someone else tries to wield the spear (and i'm not touching it) it will teleport and return to the users belt in its retracted form.
    • It costs 20 chakra per turn when infused with either element
    • Can only summon the users Dog Companion three times per battle.
    • Can only summon the spear back manually twice per battle



    Ignore the Knife and such, thats what the spear looks like retracted.


    Both sides can retract and extend, the handle is the one from the first picture.




    ~ Change the purple part ~

    Dropping my Haikaito Kami Custom Weapon
    Resubmitting

    Inuzuka Tsuin Soshi Yari | Inuzuka Twin Element Spear
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
    Damage: 80
    Description: The "Inuzuka Twin Element Spear" is a retractable and extendable spear that is made of an indestructible yet light metal. The spear can retract and extend at the users will, making it easier to carry. It is an Inuzuka heirloom past down through the generations. He can use the spear to summon his Ninja Dog/ Dog summons by wiping blood on the spear and slamming the end into the earth (but this counts as a move), also after wiping his blood on the spear he can choose throw it, and by doing an extra five handseals can summon a Ninja Dog/Dog summoning at the location of the spear.(counts as a move) The user can also channel Wind or Lightning chakra into the spear, increasing its penetration powers when charged with Wind chakra, and increasing its throwing speed when charged with Lightning chakra. By doing three handseals the user can summon the spear in it's retracted form to the users belt (there's a seal on it)

    • Indestrucible, but cannot cut through everything.
    • Can only be wielded by Ragerok, if someone else tries to wield the spear (and i'm not touching it) it will teleport and return to the users belt in its retracted form.
    • It costs 20 chakra per turn when infused with either element
    • Can only summon the spear back manually twice per battle
    • This spear can only summon Ninja Dogs/ Dogs.



    Ignore the Knife and such, thats what the spear looks like retracted.


    Both sides can retract and extend, the handle is the one from the first picture.




    Took out the purple part.
    Added that by being able to summon a Ninja dog summoning at the location of the spear (after doing added handseals)
    ~Approved~

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    Naruyari-ryu : Amatsukaze Ooi | Thundering Spear Style : Heavenly Wind Shroud
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
    Damage: 80
    Description: Normally a Spearman can only use their spears to stab their opponent, this technique allows the spearman to "Slash" and "Slice" their enemies. The user channels Wind chakra into their spear/s and covers most of their spear in a sharp wind "shroud"(apart from where the users hands are holding the spear), which can cut through normal rock. This technique can be used almost instantly (takes a second to cover the spear).

    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -Twice per battle
    -The user cannot use any S-rank or higher wind jutsu for 1 turn after it is deactivated.
    -Can only be taught by Ragerok.
    ~Approved~


    Naruyari-ryu : Toku Tatsumaki | Thundering Spear Style : Tornado Shield
    Type: Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user places his spear in front of him and rapidly spins it in a circle. Then he channels Wind chakra into the spear and forces it outwards forming a wind shield the size of the spears circular diameter. This shield can block up to A rank jutsu and up to B-Rank Fire jutsu. This can also be used to deflect any incoming normal projectiles (eg Shuriken, Kunai, etc) and normal weapon strikes.

    -Lasts for a turn, but can be stopped before the turn is done.
    -Two times per battle
    -Must be taught by Ragerok
    -No A rank or over wind jutsu for 2 turns.


    This is the size of the shield

    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu exists


    Naruyari-ryu : Seiteki Chibou | Thundering Spear Style : Static Earthing Rod
    Type: Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user charges a metal spear with Static electricity and throws the spear anywhere in short range. All (this includes the users) B-rank and under Lightning jutsu are redirected to the spear and grounded into the earth.

    -Can only be used twice
    -The spear goes back to normal, once it grounds two jutsu
    -Must be taught by Ragerok
    -This only affects Lightning jutsu that are in Short to Mid range.
    ~Approved~ Changed the rank to the correct ranking.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Eisei Fuuinjutsu: Seichikimi ) ɸ Medical Sealing Art: Subtle Flesh
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30 ( +10 per turn )
    Damage Points: N/A

    A complicated sealing technique, its usefulness cannot be overstated to a medical ninja on the field of battle.
    The ninja holds out his palms, and silver seals flash temporarily on them, shining with a blinding light, before disappearing.
    What this does is that it gives the air on the battlefield, to the medical ninja's contact-requiring techniques alone, the consistency and properties of a human body. Though this may seem rather simple, its use is extremely important. It allows the medical ninja to use any of his techniques that require contact as a "beam" instead, shot forward from his palms. Secondly, since the medical ninja can change the way his chakra moves inside a patient's body, he can also change the angle or direction of the beam, once shot.
    This allows him to attack offensively or heal allies from a distance, instead of having to go near the target.

    The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • The technique can be summoned only once per battle.
    • Though the seal gives the air the consistency of a human body, it only applies to making sure that techniques requiring contact can be shot off as a beam instead ( roughly with the speed of a wind jutsu ) with the same effects as the technique if it hits. The opponent, user or any allies will still feel the atmosphere as a normal one other than for this. They can still breathe, use wind techniques, run, etc. normally.
    • No Fuuinjutsu next turn.
    • The beam travels as fast as a wind jutsu, and can be dodged by a quick enough technique. This does not ensure a hit.


    how long can it last in play? i'm unsure about this... is it only medical jutsu requiring touch that can be performed via this?
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 11-17-2010 at 08:27 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Jakkaru) Summoning Technique: Jackal
    Summoning Animal: Jackal
    Scroll Owner: Itachi4life
    Other Users who have signed contract:None now
    Summoning Boss if existing:None now
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A


    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Takahiro) Summoning Technique: Takahiro
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After preforming the needed hand signs the user wll summon Takahiro. Takahiro is a very fast very agile Jackal. Takahiro is large enough for the user to ride apon. He can use both Wind and Fire Jutsu, being able to use up to S-Rank wind and B-Rank Fire. He is very devoted to his summoner and will do all that is necessary to protect him. He can move at great speeds and has incredible strength. His sense of smell and hearing allows him to locate the enemy even in complete darkness.
    *Must Have Signed The Jackal Contract To Summon Takahiro*
    *Takahiro Can only Be Summoned For 4 Turns At A Time*
    *Must Wait 4 Turns Before Being Able To Summon Again*


    ~ I believe the contract exists ~
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    (Fuuton: Ko Kaze Kachuu)Wind Style: Great Wind Vortex
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90
    Description: The User makes a single handsign and summons a powerful tornado that comes from the users hands. The power of the jutsu is great as it is strong enough to seperate flesh from bone. The tornado moves fast but cannot turn in any direction. Once it is used the user can break the jutsu into multiple smaller tornados that can go into any direction. When broken up the smaller tornados have less power than the original one does but moves at a faster speed. These smaller tornados can move in any direction but moves slower while turning. At any time the user can make the tiger handsign and the tornados will explode releasing a great amount of Wind hurting the enemy or the user if close enough.
    *Can only be taught by itachi4life*
    *Can only be used once per Battle*
    *The user cannot use any Wind jutsu for the next three turns*


    ~ Similar techniques exist ~

    (Katon: Yuuen Kaji Finaru)Fire Style: Grand Fire Finale
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80 (15 to User)
    Description: The User summons a large portion of their fire chakra and creates it into a sphere of fire around the theirselves. Then the user sends the fire outwards in all directions around and above him. The fire moves at an incredible speed and is hot enough to melt steel. The user can also use it as a sheild of fire that protects them from all A-Rank jutsu and Below. The shield protects from the bottom meaning that it can even protect from earth jutsu from below. Since the user is at the center of the such a fiery jutsu he is also harmed by the jutsu.
    *When used as a shield it only lasts for one turn*
    *Can only be used twice per battle*
    *The user cannot use fire jutsu for two turns after this jutsu is used*
    *Can only be taught by Itachi4life*


    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-18-2010 at 01:16 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custum Snake re-submission

    Explain a bit more in detail in the description, and the notes

    Jörmungandr
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on the snake contract tattoo and summons Jörmungandr a gigantic serpent that is 2 times the size of Manda. Due to the fact that this snake is strongly based in water, this snake is immune to fire and water jutsu u to b rank. Above B rank does minimal damage. Also, due to its incredibly strong hide it can withstand up to 2 S rank direct lightning, wind, or earth jutsu. Can spew out a very large amount of water sufficient for any water jutsu at the users discretion. This snake also has the ability to divide itself multiple times into less powerful, smaller versions of itself.

    Note: Can only be on the field for 5 of the users turns
    Note: Division math. Division into 3 = 2 snakes the size of Manda. Division into 50 = 50 snakes the size of a large kyodajai, division into 100 = 100 snakes the size of the snakes used in hidden shadow snake hands
    Note: Can only be taught to be summoned by Scarface
    Note: Once divided, Jörmungandr cannot return to full size
    Note: Can only divide 2 times per battle
    Note: Damage explained:
    fire and water under b rank = immune

    fire and water above b = 5 attacks to kill Jörmungandr

    Lightning, Earth, and Wind above S rank = 2 attacks to kill Jörmungandr

    Lightning, Earth, and Wind below S rank = 4 attacks to kill Jörmungandr

    These attacks must be directed at the snake entirely to cause damage.


    ~ Japanese name ? ~

    Custom Weapon re-submit

    I removed the one part, and restricted the arms indestructibility in the notes.



    Za Debiru Umidasu | The Devil Bringer
    Rank: S
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30 for each ability used
    Damage: 50 for Buster
    Description:
    The Devil Bringer becomes the users right arm, and the physical manifestation of his incredible chakra. The arm possesses superhuman strength, which manifests itself through a larger, spectral arm controlled by chakra. The arm itself is completely impenetrable and indestructible, enabling the user to defend using his arm as a melee weapon. It is composed of an unknown material from the depths of hell.

    Effects:


    1. Taijutsu attacks involving the right arm do double damage.

    2. If the user is caught in genjutsu, the arm automatically heats up to cause superficial pain to the user to snap them out of the genjutsu.

    Abilities:

    1. Snatch - Send forth the spectral arm of the Devil Bringer and grasp a distant enemy within its clutches. The enemy can then be pushed or pulled at the users discretion. The user can also snatch other things, such as nearby trees or boulders to pull to safety. Dealing no damage. Can only be used at mid - short range. And travels almost instantly.

    2. Buster - After grabbing an enemy with the Devil Bringer, the user will slam the enemy on the ground repeatedly, slamming them on the ground will disorient them, and break there bones disabling their skill making them slower and take longer to form hand seals. Close range.

    3. Hold - After snatching, the user holds and binds the enemy in place. Dealing no damage. Mid to short range.

    Notes:

    1. Buster can only be used one time.

    2. The Devil Bringer is always on the user, but must be declared at the start of battle to be valid.

    3. The arm is only indestructible up to just above the elbow. Meaning, only where the devil bringer covers is indestructible. Your arm can still be hacked off at the elbow.


    ~ The purple bit has to be removed and replaced with some max amount of damage, the red bit has to be removed entirely, something like the green bit exists already, the orange bit is OP, and the blue bit has to be explained better. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Armadillo
    Scroll Owner: Gaara of the Funk
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none
    -------------------------------------------------------------

    ~ Contract Approved. ~

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Arumajiro: Kikousando) Summoning Jutsu: Armadillo: Kikousando
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Kikousando is an armadillo that is 10 feet tall and 20 feet long. He can't run fast at all, but he can roll up into a ball and roll very fast, a lot like the Akimichi's human boulder. He can use any sand jutsu that the user knows. Any sand jutsu that Kikousando uses is twice as fast as the user can use it. Kikousando is blind but all of his other senses have been greatly increased.
    *Must sign the armadillo contract to summon
    *He can only be summoned for 4 turns at a time
    *Must wait 4 turns before summoning again


    ~ The purple part, why ? And the red bit, explain to what extent. Plus add a number of times summoned restriction. ~

    (Doton: Ishikasui Misairu) Earth style: Stone Spike Missile
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 (+10 if jutsu is held for a longer period of time)
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user does 2 handseals (Tiger then Ox) and uses a 10 foot radius of earth and makes the earth shoot out sharp spikes of rock, stone, and/or mud that can pierce through skin. The ground can keep shooting out the spikes if the user holds the ox handseal. When the spikes are shot out they go about 25 miles per hour (40 kilometers per hour). The earth radius can be created anywhere the user wants as long as it is in short-mid range. The spikes can only fly straight, they cannot turn.
    *can only be taught by Gaara of the Funk
    *when used you can't use any Earth jutsu A-rank and above the next turn.


    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Luiz View Post
    Samurai Arts: Heavenly Gate (Bushijutsu: Rashoumon)

    Rank: D-S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10-40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By channelling chakra through their swords and then release it, the users of this technique are able to cut through solid and thick materials. The rank of the technique is proportional to the thickness of the material that can be cut. Up to C rank, the user is only able to cut through Earth (Exception being Jutsus that use the strongest crystals, etc). B rank allows the user to cut through metal, in it's weakest form (Low Ranked jutsus, normal weapons, etc). The S rank version of this technique allows the user to cut through almost any metal and crystal (Up to A Rank of normal Metals and Crystals, and up to C rank of Diamond and Titanium)
    S Rank versions of this technique can only be used 2 times.
    A Rank versions of this technique can only be used 3 times.
    B Rank versions of this technique can only be used 5 times.

    ~ Need a rank limit on the C-Rank version; up to what rank Earth can it cut ? ~
    Samurai Arts: Heavenly Gate (Bushijutsu: Rashoumon)

    Rank: D-S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10-40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By channelling chakra through their swords and then release it, the users of this technique are able to cut through solid and thick materials. The rank of the technique is proportional to the thickness of the material that can be cut. Up to C rank, the user is only able to cut through Earth (Exception being Jutsus that use the strongest crystals, etc. Overall, up to A rank). B rank allows the user to cut through metal, in it's weakest form (Low Ranked jutsus, normal weapons, etc). The S rank version of this technique allows the user to cut through almost any metal and crystal (Up to A Rank of normal Metals and Crystals, and up to C rank of Diamond and Titanium)
    S Rank versions of this technique can only be used 2 times.
    A Rank versions of this technique can only be used 3 times.
    B Rank versions of this technique can only be used 5 times.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Tonkuusho) - Point Blank
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary ~ Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40(+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Tonkuusho is a type of Taijutsu which allows the user to fight with the opponent from any position, even by not looking at him. The user begins charging chakra around him in high amounts, creating a sort of invisible cloak of chakra which the user can feel around him(1.3 meter radius), thusforth, whenever the opponent strikes inside that chakra cloak the user can feel exactly where. This is nothing like the Byakugan's abilities however, as the user does not have a 360 degree view of everything around him. Tonkuusho is recommended to be used only for Taijutsu, as the radius around which the chakra cloak floats around is very small.

    - The cloak can be held as much as the user wants to, however it costs him 10 chakra per turn.
    - After it's been deactivated the user cannot activate it again for the rest of the battle.
    - Must be taught by Shigure.


    ~ Approved ~

    (Raiton/Suiton: Kiri Denka) - Lightning/Water Release: Electrified Mist
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user uses his water chakra to send water vapors close to the opponent, forming a small but thick mist around the opponent. Immediately as the mist forms the user charges it with lightning. As it is formed from water vapors, and it is thick, it will conduct the lightning well, and hence the opponent is in the middle of it, it will send him right in a vegetative state, if not killing him.

    - May be used twice per battle.
    - Must be taught by Shigure.


    ~ If it forms it near the opponent AND instantly electrifies it, it's too OP. He needs a chance of getting out of it. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahamut View Post
    Ichigeki Hissatsu | One Hit Certain Death
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15 per turn
    Damage: Varied
    Description: Ichigeki Hissatsu is a legendary weapon and its said that nobody has survived a single strike from its blades. The exact origins of this weapon remain unknown. Its past is shrouded in mystery though some speculate its birth was in the Land of Iron due to the material's responsiveness to chakra. The basic form of the Ichigeki Hissatsu is a long metallic staff with intricate art work along its black and silver body. There appears to be no top or bottom end, but rather two heads. An open slit lies vertical along both heads but on opposing sides from one another. This basic form is just one of many that this weapon can take. At the middle of the staff is a section where the staff can be split in half turning it into two club like weapons. The deadliest feature of the Ichigeki Hissatsu is that when chakra is channeled into its metal, two long scythe blades form out of the slits located on the two heads. This allows for the weapon to become a twin or single scythe when connected, or two sickle like weapons when separated. This versatility gives the weapon a total of five forms (staff, clubs, single scythe, twin scyth or sickles). The chakra used when creating the scythes is incredibly sharp and capable of slicing through steel. The chakra blades are equivalent to rank A and can be used for a maximum or three turns at a time and require a waiting period of two turns before being usable again. These blades can be released and fired towards a target four times per battle (twice per blade) counting as a move in the user's three turn move set.
    • Chakra blades last three turns per use.
    • Requires 15 chakra per turn to maintain the blades.
    • Two times per end, the blade can be fired at a target.
    • Must wait two turns before recreating the chakra blades.
    • Can only be wielded by Bahamut.
    • The staff portion is indestructible though the blades can be shattered if hit with a stronger attack.
    • Basic Image (ignore guy on left):


    ~ Don't make it one big para, split it into many so its easier to read ~

    Ichigeki Hissatsu | One Hit Certain Death
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15 per turn
    Damage: Varied
    Description: Ichigeki Hissatsu is a legendary weapon and its said that nobody has survived a single strike from its blades. The exact origins of this weapon remain unknown. Its past is shrouded in mystery though some speculate its birth was in the Land of Iron due to the material's responsiveness to chakra.

    The basic form of the Ichigeki Hissatsu is a long metallic staff with intricate art work along its black and silver body. There appears to be no top or bottom end, but rather two heads. An open slit lies vertical along both heads but on opposing sides from one another. This basic form is just one of many that this weapon can take. At the middle of the staff is a section where the staff can be split in half turning it into two club like weapons.

    The deadliest feature of the Ichigeki Hissatsu is that when chakra is channeled into its metal, two long scythe blades form out of the slits located on the two heads. This allows for the weapon to become a twin or single scythe when connected, or two sickle like weapons when separated. This versatility gives the weapon a total of five forms (staff, clubs, single scythe, twin scyth or sickles).

    The chakra used when creating the scythes is incredibly sharp and capable of slicing through steel. The chakra blades are equivalent to rank A and can be used for a maximum or three turns at a time and require a waiting period of two turns before being usable again. These blades can be released and fired towards a target four times per battle (twice per blade) counting as a move in the user's three turn move set.
    • Chakra blades last three turns per use.
    • Requires 15 chakra per turn to maintain the blades.
    • Two times per end, the blade can be fired at a target.
    • Must wait two turns before recreating the chakra blades.
    • Can only be wielded by Bahamut.
    • The staff portion is indestructible though the blades can be shattered if hit with a stronger attack.
    • Basic Image (ignore guy on left):


    ~ Ugh. Weapons makers, come up with something other than your own versions of slicing blades with your weapons. Too similar to like 1000 other weapons going around. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen-sama View Post
    Yes I do know fuuin and was taught it a while ago now

    Pheonix Flare (phoeniksu kasai)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/supplemantary
    Range: self/mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80(projectiles)
    Description: This jutsu is only for those specialized in fire and have fire affinity(stated in bio) enables the user to unleash a big amount of fire from their back,legs and arms.The user will use their manipulation to form a thick,compressed fire wings that allows them to go into the sky and fly,while the legs unleash fire from below to help keep him in the air.However the arms allow the user to shoot big fire blast in shape of fists(to do this the user must know Fire fist jutsu that mugen-sama possesses).
    *May only stay in the air for 3 turns
    *Can only shoot up to 2 fire fists(can be shot at the same time) per turn and count as 1 jutsu.
    *Can only be activated once.And lasts for 3 turns


    ~ Similar technique exists ~

    Well sorry,I just liked it more that way Oh come on dont be stubborn, agree it looked cool that way But rules are rules O_<

    Note: All the cj below will be linked so read all of them before declining and stuff and please tell me what I did wrong so I dont have to guess whats wrong ^^
    Summoning: Elder Kyu (Kchuysei: Kyu-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Kyu.Kyu has the the ability to heal.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner,he merges with the users left arm with only eyes visible, for the rest of the battle. Once merged the user has the ability to heal himself fully 1 time per battle.Also staring jutsus have no effect on him.
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    ~ He has the ability to heal ? No frigging way. ~

    Summoning: Elder Uky (Kchuysei: Uky-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Uky.Uky has the the ability to absorb anything.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner, he merges with the users chest with hands sticking out of it, for the rest of he battle. Once merged Uky can absorb 2 incoming jutsus(2 A rank or 1 forbidden or 1 S rank and no more)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Summoning: Elder Oku (Kchuysei: Oku-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Oku.Oku has the the ability of super human strength.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner, he merges with the users right hand with only eyes visible on the arm, for the rest of he battle. Once merged Oku gives the users right hand super human strength (+10 to tai/ken with right hand)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Chimpanzee ultimate elder form (chimpu kyuukyoku senpai ninmenjuushin)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user has has summoned and merged with all 3 elders- Kyu-Uky-Oku (which forms the name) the user will enter the chimpanzees ultimate ancient form that increases the users chakra flow and enhances it.The users hair will instantly grow long,spiky,solid and turn silver.While in this form the user will gain the speed of lee without weights and tremendous strength (+15 to tai/ken).Though if the user didnt used the elders abilities before activating this than he loses them because you can not use the abilities in this form as the elders are focused on enhancement of the users chakra.
    *mUst be a chimpanzee user and taught ONLY by mugen
    *Must be merged with all 3 elders that are summoned individually at a individual cost of chakra.(in all to preform this it will be 40+40+40+50=170 chakra) + each elder must be summoned on a individual turn making a total of 4 turns to activate this.(3 turns to summon and 1 to activate,unless delayed even more)
    *May only be activated once and last for 4 turns.If the user does not win on the 4rth turn,then the battle will end automatically with the user drained out of energy.


    ~ Wait till all 3 elders are approved ~
    Summoning: Elder Kyu (Kchuysei: Kyu-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Kyu.Kyu has the the ability of advanced speed.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner,he merges with the users legs, for the rest of the battle. Once merged the user has the ability to have speed of lee without weights.(although he gets a -2 damage each turn)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    ~ How fast are we talking here ? ~

    I thought it wouldn't be approved cause I aint a med nin but meh doesnt hurt to try Anyway I changed from med to speed.
    Summoning: Elder Uky (Kchuysei: Uky-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Uky.Uky has the the ability to absorb anything.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner, he merges with the users chest with hands sticking out of it, for the rest of he battle. Once merged Uky can absorb 2 incoming jutsus(2 A rank or 1 forbidden or 1 S rank and no more)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Summoning: Elder Oku (Kchuysei: Oku-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Oku.Oku has the the ability of super human strength.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner, he merges with the users hands with only eyes visible on the arms, for the rest of he battle. Once merged Oku gives the users hands super human strength (+10 to tai/ken with hands)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Chimpanzee ultimate elder form (chimpu kyuukyoku senpai ninmenjuushin)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user has has summoned and merged with all 3 elders- Kyu-Uky-Oku (which forms the name) the user will enter the chimpanzees ultimate ancient form that increases the users chakra flow and enhances it.The users hair will instantly grow long,spiky,solid and turn silver.While in this form the user will gain the speed faster of lee without weights and tremendous strength (+15 to tai/ken).Though if the user didnt used the elders abilities before activating this than he loses them because you can not use the abilities in this form as the elders are focused on enhancement of the users chakra.
    *mUst be a chimpanzee user and taught ONLY by mugen
    *Must be merged with all 3 elders that are summoned individually at a individual cost of chakra.(in all to preform this it will be 40+40+40+50=170 chakra) + each elder must be summoned on a individual turn making a total of 4 turns to activate this.(3 turns to summon and 1 to activate,unless delayed even more)
    *May only be activated once and last for 4 turns.If the user does not win on the 4rth turn,then the battle will end automatically with the user drained out of energy.


    ~ Wait till all elders are approved ~
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    Ultrasonic Sword Style: Ultrasonic draw (Hiten-Mitsurugi-ryu: hiten azukari)
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/attack
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate chakra to his arm and sword while in a drawing position,then by increasing his chakra flow in the arm he drastically increases his arm speed thus making his arm draw the sword at the speed of sound also leaving a afterimage which confuses the enemy.Only a 3 tomoe sharingan user can see the actual attack
    *can only be used once per battle and causes the users arm muscles to tense up to the point where he cant use any taijutsu/kenjutsu moves for 3 turns and receives a -30 damage.Also the users handseal speed will drop to very slow.

    made for this bio however can be taught to other but they will receive a -40 damage when used
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=56755


    ~ Well, first off, Hiten-Mitsurugi Ryu doesn't translate to Ultrasonic sword style. It's Flying Heaven Honourable Sword Style. Second, someone already uses that name, so you have to change it before this is even checked. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Creftos ) - Earth style: Clefts
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A (+80 if they crash onto you)
    Description: The user, after making the snake handseal, will infuse doton chakra into the ground and lift up to 4 sections of rock which are big (a meter higher than an avarage human), wide and spiked on the top. At the user's signal, he can send them at greats speeds to crash onto the opponent with such strength they actually blow up on impact.
    Notes: May one be done twice per battle, on the second time only two clefts may be done.
    Notes: The clefts are made of very hard minerals, capable of resisting impacts (provided that they are not raiton) of its same rank and below.

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~

    (Fuuinjutsu: Chi no fuuin kai) - Sealing technique: Blood Seal Release
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Onself
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will release a sealing jutsu placed within the carotid artery. The seal will release, steadily but not lethaly, extra blood sealed during years. Therefore, the user's blood will be able to carry further oxygen, resulting in the user's speed and reaction time augmented.
    Notes: Only once per battle.
    Notes: Lasts for 4 turns.
    Notes: Once it's effects are finished, the user is left exhausted and winded out.

    ~ Nice idea But no. Do not resubmit. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Hoshi No Shitsumei) – Marmot Arts: Star Sight Loss
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Utilizing four hand seals; sheep, horse, snake, and tiger. Focused fire element chakra builds at an exponential rate (taking less than 1/1000th of a second) to a pinpoint at the tip of a finger, thumb or palm of the hand. This concentration of chakra does not produce any significant heat; almost all of its energy is focused on particle conversion (the reaction in fire that converts energy to visible light as opposed to heat.) Used to blind the target; much like Raigen Raikōchū only not a ginjutsu. At any range the effect of the jutsu causes temporary blindness. If the opponent has sharingan or byuakugan active, the jutsu will cause permanent damage to their retinas if they see it. The effect is that of looking into the sun with a telescope from a distance of only a few meters.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: This jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed because of the intensity of the light.
    Note: The effects of this jutsu last for 2 turns (except where otherwise stated due to dōjutsu.)
    Note: Turning away before the jutsu is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu is enough to avoid it’s effects.
    Note: Because of the jutsu’s nature is the same as that of the stars, Void based jutsus have minimal affect against it.
    Note: If this jutsu is active (in the palm of the hand) while the user grabs the face of the opponent then permanent loss of vision and use of the eyes may occur due to proximity.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.


    ~ Impossible. It takes 1/4th of a second to even respond to a situation, do you honestly think that would be approved ? ~

    (Kuchiyose No Justu: Habburu – Hikari No Māmatto) – Summoning: Habburu – Marmot of Light
    Rank: B
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: ≤60
    Description: After a series of hand signs and releasing some blood from my finger I place my hand on the ground and summon a marmot. Habburu is 6’2”(188cm) tall, with a reach of 8’8”(265cm) and weighing in at an impressive 377lbs(171kg)and is covered with dark grey/blue hair. Habburu is one of Lord Hōkingu’s grandsons. Habburu has a natural affinity to fire element jutsus, and can use them at the same level as the summoner. Habburu’s specialty is (Māmatto Gijutsu: Hoshi No Shitsumei) a technique that temporarily blinds the opponent by creating an intense flash. He can use this jutsu by simply snapping his fingers. Habburu has great strength such as all Marmots, however his odor is not foul, but that of a burning hickory tree. Habburu is adept in all taijutsu (that don't have special training requirements ie: EIG or Kaito Jutsus) up to rank C, and all canon fire based jutsu up to the rank of the summoner.
    Note: Habburu may only stay in battle for 4 turns.
    Note: Habburu may only be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: Habburu can only use his Hoshi No Shitsumei 2 times in battle.
    Note: Habburu can only be summoned by DOD_bld or those that have signed the Marmot contract.
    Note: All Marmot summons require having signed their contract, which is held by DOD_bld.


    ~ Get the Genjutsu approved first ~

    ~Pending~ Leaving for Emperor
    Resubmitting with adjustment to time frame/activation speed.
    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Hoshi No Shitsumei) – Marmot Arts: Star Sight Loss
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Utilizing four hand seals; sheep, horse, snake, and tiger. Focused fire element chakra builds at an exponential rate (taking less than 1/2 of a second) to a pinpoint at the tip of a finger, thumb or palm of the hand. This concentration of chakra does not produce any significant heat; almost all of its energy is focused on particle conversion (the reaction in fire that converts energy to visible light as opposed to heat.) Used to blind the target; much like Raigen Raikōchū only not a ginjutsu. At any range the effect of the jutsu causes temporary blindness. If the opponent has sharingan or byuakugan active, the jutsu will cause permanent damage to their retinas if they see it. The effect is that of looking into the sun with a telescope from a distance of only a few meters.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: This jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed because of the intensity of the light.
    Note: The effects of this jutsu last for 2 turns (except where otherwise stated due to dōjutsu.)
    Note: Turning away before the jutsu is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu is enough to avoid it’s effects.
    Note: Because of the jutsu’s nature is the same as that of the stars, Void based jutsus have minimal affect against it.
    Note: If this jutsu is active (in the palm of the hand) while the user grabs the face of the opponent then permanent loss of vision and use of the eyes may occur due to proximity.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.


    ~ The purple part is ridiculous. It basically gives you an auto-kill against any Doujutsu. And if it's so bright that it's like looking into the sun with a telescope from a few meters away, it basically will blind you too, regardless of whether you shut your eyes. ~

    Resubmitting with the hopes that the jutsu above will be approved now.
    (Kuchiyose No Justu: Habburu – Hikari No Māmatto) – Summoning: Habburu – Marmot of Light
    Rank: B
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: ≤60
    Description: After a series of hand signs and releasing some blood from my finger I place my hand on the ground and summon a marmot. Habburu is 6’2”(188cm) tall, with a reach of 8’8”(265cm) and weighing in at an impressive 377lbs(171kg)and is covered with dark grey/blue hair. Habburu is one of Lord Hōkingu’s grandsons. Habburu has a natural affinity to fire element jutsus, and can use them at the same level as the summoner. Habburu’s specialty is (Māmatto Gijutsu: Hoshi No Shitsumei, which is similar to Raigen Raikōchū only not a ginjutsu) a technique that temporarily blinds the opponent by creating an intense flash. He can use this jutsu by simply snapping his fingers. Habburu has great strength such as all Marmots, however his odor is not foul, but that of a burning hickory tree. Habburu is adept in all ninjutsu, taijutsu (that don't have special training requirements ie: EIG or Kaito Jutsus) up to rank C, and all canon fire based jutsu up to the rank of the summoner.
    Note: Habburu may only stay in battle for 4 turns.
    Note: Habburu may only be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: Habburu can only use his Hoshi No Shitsumei 2 times in battle.
    Note: Habburu can only be summoned by DOD_bld or those that have signed the Marmot contract.
    Note: All Marmot summons require having signed their contract, which is held by DOD_bld.


    ~ Get the Genjutsu approved first. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raition:ikazuchi jouten seibatsu:(Lightning Realease: Thunder God Subjugation)
    Type: Defensive/ Supplimentary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn)
    Description: The user summons up vast reserves of lightning chakra, forming an aura around them in the form of a mighty warrior, as long as this technique is active, the user is immune to lightning and earth damage below S - rank, though will take + 10 additional damage from any water attack used by the enemy and cannot use water or wind techniques while using this technique, though gains +5 to taijutsu and + 10 to lightning techniques.
    The user can choose to expand the form, causing an electrical shockwave that reaches mid range, but once used the technique is immediately dispelled (can onlybe used in the first two turns of activating the technique)
    Note: can only be used once per battle and lasts 4 turns
    Note: this jutsu is incredibly tough on the body and therefore for two turns after this jutsu is used you cannot use any raiton techniques, and all other elemental techniques are limited to B - rank
    Note: Can only be taught by HereticSaint


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Dragonflies
    Scroll Owner: Katonpwnz
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Xemnas (To be created)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Xions (To be created)

    ~ Contract exists ~

    Other submissions:

    (Arashi no Gijutsu: Kaminari Burēku)- Storm Tech: Lightning Break
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of raiton into his Twin Storm Blades and slashes the ground towards the opponent releasing an electrical shockwave that travels through and shatters the ground under the opponent before exploding upwards leaving a 10 ft deep fissure.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Must have Twin Storm Blades

    ~Approved~

    (Bokusā no Kobushi: Chō no yō ni Furōto)-Boxer's Fist: Float Like a Butterfly
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: As the opponent's attack arrives, the user focuses chakra into his legs and lower back for faster movement and bends his legs quickly and simultaneously shifts his body to the side and moves back to an upright position. This can be repeated numerous times to avoid multiple projectile attacks aimed at the torso or higher. It can be done up to 2.5 times per second.
    -Cannot avoid attacks any bigger than 2 ft in width
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    ~Declined~

    (Bōseki Burēdo Doroppu)- Spinning Blade Drop
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user tosses his sword in the air and jumps up to grab it and begins an aerial somersault with the sword in front while infusing it with chakra to perform a powerful downward slash from above. (Works best with a large sword)
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    ~Approved~



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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Fuhenteki Doukasayou)- Earth Release: Universal Assimilation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (+10 per previously-used earth jutsu)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After making a single handseal, the user distributes their earth chakra throughout the ground of the entire battlefield. The chakra spreads through the ground extremely quickly, as if exploding outwards from the user. This jutsu does not prevent the opponent from using any earth jutsu, nor does it hasten the user's usage of earth jutsus. If the opponent uses an earth jutsu, then the user's earth chakra is simply expelled from the earth in a harmless way. This jutsu just spreads the user's earth chakra throughout the entire battlefield. The chakra remains in the ground unless the opponent uses an earth jutsu on a designated amount of earth. In that case, the earth directly used in the opponent's earth jutsu no longer contains the user's earth chakra, although the rest of the ground does. This jutsu does not prevent the opponent from merging with the ground or using "Underground Fish Projection".

    NOTE: Usable twice per match
    NOTE: Not usable more than once per two turns

    ~ What exactly does this do, then, aside from filling the entire ground with your chakra ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Kuchiyose: Achilles| Summoning: Achilles

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user uses his summoning tattoos to summon the greatest fighter of Ligers, Achilles. Able to communicate via telekinetic communication like all Ligers and named after the Myrmidon warrior from Greek Mythology, Achilles is able to hold his on against enemies of strengths of the 2nd gate and lower. Achilles is the taijutsu expert of the Ligers. Achilles stands at the height of a bear that is on all fours. One attribute to Achilles is that he wears armor fashioned after that of the Ancient Greeks, and the armor is capable of taking direct hits of up to C-rank before starting to break and Achilles himself can take a taijutsu hit of B-rank with little injury but if he is hit with a direct hit from jutsus any higher than B-rank will cause him to "poof" away. Achilles can stand on his hind legs in the same fashion as a human and can use any taijutsu techniques the user can use (excluding those of Forbidden rank, EIG-related [or any that increase the user's speed on a scale of the EIG], or any that add a element chakra into the attack). On his hind legs, his height is around 7-8 feet tall. Due to the him being a Liger, the power behind any of Achilles' taijutsu attacks is +10. Achilles is also able to be summoned as the armor for the user to wear and if on the user, the armor becomes reinforced by the power of the user resonating throughout it and can within stand attacks of up to B rank and/or the strength of the 1st Gate and lower. The armor comes with arm guards and shin guards, in other words complete Greek battle attire to wear.

    *Can only fight using taijutsu.*
    *Taijutsu used by Achilles counts towards one of the user's three jutsus*
    *Armor last entire fight if user wears it or if it becomes destroyed*
    *Last on field for at the most four turns*
    *Can only be summoned Twice*


    ~ Change the purple part and what rank attacks could destroy the armour ? ~

    Strength decreased for the armor and likewise, edited restrictions on it.


    Kuchiyose: Hercules|Summoning: Heracles

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user touches his tattoo summoning symbols on his wrists and summons Heracles. Heracles is unlike most ligers in the sense that he stands upon his hind legs and is actually bipedal. Heracles has a scar across his left eye that runs down to his chin, though it doesn't effect his eyesight. He wields a Katana that is unbreakable and can break through earth defenses of up to B-rank with the exclusion of jutsus that a sword obviously can't break through (i.e. shields of diamond and likewise materials). He also stands at the height of a full-grown man, though that is not to say is restrained to human strengths. He is extremely strong and has attack power rivaling that of Lee without the Gates open. He is also capable of walking on all fours as well, with greatly increases his speed (to speeds of the 2nd Gate). Heracles also has the ability to use Earth jutsus up to B-rank that the summoner knows but only when he is standing bipedally. He can also use any Kenjutsu that the user knows.

    *Can only be summoned once per battle, lasts for four turns*
    *Can only use at the most 3 Earth jutsus and each time he uses one, it counts as a jutsu of the user*
    *Can only fight with Earth jutsus and sword*
    *Any sword use by Heracles (excluding those in jutsu form) do not count towards a jutsu of the user*
    *Kenjutsu techniques in jutsu format count as a jutsu of the user*


    ~ Approved ~

    Edited to include a specific strength that it can't break through.

    Kuchiyose: Odysseus|Summoning: Odysseus
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Attack Points: 80 (for Special Genjutsu)
    Description: The smartest of all Ligers, Odysseus stands at the height of a bear standing on his his hind legs and is often called the Liger of the Mist, due to one of his 3 abilities that he can use: Odysseus is able to spit out a thick mist ( twice per battle ) that covers a short-long range, that the user can use to create mist -related jutsus with, that the user nor the opponent can see through. However, this works in well with Odysseus second ability: Odysseus can sense the whereabouts of anything within the mist due to it being his chakra within the air. He then uses his telekinetic communication with his summoner to divulge the location of the opponent. Odysseus can also use any Water jutsu that the user knows up to A-rank, which count obviously to the user's jutsu counts per turn.

    *Can only be summoned once, lasts for four turns*
    *Can only use three water jutsusand three Genjutsus during the entire fight*
    *Odysseus can only Water Jutsus and Genjutsus and use of one counts as a jutsu of the user*


    ~ Approved ~

    Took out the Genjutsu-related abilities and will make another Liger that can use that or will submit an altered version that I can use.
    Edited purple part and edited to include what rank can destroy armor

    Kuchiyose: Achilles| Summoning: Achilles[/B]
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Attack Points: N/A
    Description: The user uses his summoning tattoos to summon the greatest fighter of Ligers, Achilles. Able to communicate via telekinetic communication like all Ligers and named after the Myrmidon warrior from Greek Mythology, Achilles is able to hold his on against enemies of strengths of the 2nd gate and lower. Achilles is the taijutsu expert of the Ligers. Achilles stands at the height of a bear that is on all fours. One attribute to Achilles is that he wears armor fashioned after that of the Ancient Greeks, and the armor is capable of taking direct hits of up to C-rank before starting to break and Achilles himself can take a taijutsu hit of B-rank with little injury but if he is hit with a direct hit from jutsus any higher than B-rank will cause him to "poof" away. Achilles can stand on his hind legs in the same fashion as a human and can use any taijutsu techniques the user can use (excluding those of Forbidden rank, EIG-related [or any that increase the user's speed on a scale of the EIG], or any that add a element chakra into the attack). On his hind legs, his height is around 7-8 feet tall. Due to the him being a Liger, the power behind any of Achilles' taijutsu attacks is +10. Achilles is also able to be summoned as the armor for the user to wear and if on the user, the armor becomes reinforced by the power of the user resonating throughout it and can within stand attacks of up to B rank and/or the strength of the 1st Gate and lower. The armor comes with arm guards and shin guards, in other words complete Greek battle attire to wear.

    *Can only fight using taijutsu.*
    *Taijutsu used by Achilles counts towards one of the user's three jutsus*
    *Armor last four turns if user wears it or if it becomes destroyed by jutsus of A rank and above*
    *Last on field for at the most four turns*
    *Can only be summoned Twice*


    ~ Approved ~

    Genjutsu: Naraku-Ryouken de Akunochimata|Genjutsu: Hellhounds of the Underworld
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Attack Points: 80
    Description: The user will bite his hand and form five handseals and slam his hand on the ground, causing the opponent to believe he is performing a Summoning of some sort. In all actuality, it is a Genjutsu. By slamming his hand onto the earth, the user activates the Genjutsu. Upon activating, the opponent starts to hallucinate and thinks he has seen the user summon creatures from deep within the Underworld called Hellhounds. The user then makes the Hellhounds rush at the enemy, seizing each of their limbs, negating movement. What really happens is the oppoenent's movements are restricted and the enemy cannot move. Each of the hellhounds then rip with extreme force, pulling each limb of the enemy off. What actually happens is the user throws four several sharp wind boomerangs at each of the limbs, cutting them off.
    *Can only be used once a fight*
    *After using, the user cannot use Genjutsu for the rest of the fight*
    *Since the opponent will think it is a summoning, he might be tempter to throw kunai and other objects as the hellhounds. If this happens, the kunai will just "hit" the hellhounds and they will keep going*

    ~ I don;t mind the Genjutsu, in fact I think it's pretty clever and one of the better ones I've seen, but if you want to cause actual damage, do it as a separate technique and not within the Genjutsu itself. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mizu Shiroppu Bunshin no Jutsu) - Water Syrup Clone Jutsu
    Type:Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates Water Clones out of the viscous fluid created in the (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Syrup Capture Field technique. The clone is used as a normal Water Clone, but upon being killed, the clone turns into the viscous fluid and flies in all directions in short range. The clone can also be voluntarily dispersed into the fluid. If the fluid gets on the opponent ,i.e. the opponent's hands, the the next thing they touched with them would become stuck to them. If he/she were to try to make hand-signs, his/her hands would become stuck to one another. If the fluid gets into a person's mouth or nostrils, they will be choked and or suffocated.

    (Can only be used/taught by Demosthenes.)

    ~ Hm, nice idea ^^ What jutsus, if any, can the clones do ? Also specify the max number of clones that can be created per use. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ± Kenjutsu ± | ± Mekura Ittou - Chakra no Nagare ± ~ ± Sword Arts ± | ± Blind Man's Blade - Chakra Stream ±
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user places his hand on his sword and infuses chakra into it's blade. Once the opponent releases a chakra-based technique, the user slashes into thin air with his sword and sends a sharp stream of chakra into the air, which, when it comes in contact with any other sort of chakra(elemental or non-elemental) it slices it in half, disabling any attacks under and including A-Rank.

    - May be used four times per battle.
    - This technique does not affect Genjutsu.
    - The stream of chakra cannot pierce through S-Ranks.
    - Must be taught by Shigure.


    ~ NOOOOOOOOOOOO ! Not you too, Shiggy ? Everyone's been submitting stuff like this. -.- You;d think people could come up with sword jutsus other than blades blades blades blades blades etc. ~

    ~To be clear it's declined as similar techniques exist~

    (Tsunagari-Ken) - Linked Blades
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15(+5 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user links two(or more swords) to eachother similarly to how a puppeteer holds his puppets, through chakra threads. In order to keep them linked the user must continously infuse chakra into the threads.

    - Must be taught by Shigure.


    ~ Approved. I'm very interested to see what jutsu you make to use with this. It seems a nice idea. ~

    ± Kenjutsu ± | ± Mekura Ittou - Kirichirasu Repurika ± ~ ± Sword Arts ± | ± Blind Man's Blade - Promiscuous Slashing Replica ±
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user infuses chakra above his two arms which hold the sword, and over the blade and sheath to a point where it forms a replica of the user, made of chakra. The replica is 3 meters tall and twice as wide as the user, it's sword is twice longer and sharper than the user's and it will repeat the first two movements of the user. [i.e. The user slashes horizontally, the replica will do the same], after the second movement, it disperses.

    - May be used twice per battle.
    - The replica cannot perform any jutsu, it will copy only slashes and stabs, nothing more, nothing less.
    - Must be taught by Shigure.


    ~ Promiscuous wtf, but approved anyway. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Nendou Ame) - Clay Rain
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description:After creating clay bird for flight, Deidara then creates a big ball of clay still connected from his hands, droplets then shoot like bullets from the clay ball towards the enemy and explode by contact.
    ~only Deidara can use this jutsu.
    ~bullets can only go straight and it's trajectory can't be manipulated.

    ~ The clay bird counts as a separate jutsu ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    raiton: seiteki dansu ( static dance )

    type: attack
    rank: B
    range: short range
    chakra cost: 25
    damage points: 40
    description: the user focus his chakra on his feet, making an electrical field in his feet, when he moves a field of electricity is following him. shocking the enemy when he/ she get close to the user.

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~

    raiton: dendou rensa ( electric chain )

    type: attack
    rank: B
    range: mid range
    chakra cost: 25
    damage points: 40
    description: the user focuses his/her chakra on his/her fingertips. making little electric threads, then he combine them all, to make a big thread that looks like a chain.

    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton:Hageshii kaze no misairu)-Wood release:Fierce wind missiles-
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This is a useful mokuton jutsu in which the user starts to spin on his heels simultaneously releasing, from every part of the users body mokuton spears.The spears are pointed at both ends and are about 1 and a half feet long feet long,these are infused with fuuton chakra of the user and travel and very high velocities towards the opponent piercing him all the way through and inflicting a large amount of damage,as the attack covers a full 360 degrees it also covers all the blind spots making it a jutsu of choice for the user.

    ~can be used thrice per battle
    ~no mokuton jutsus next turn due to overuse of mokuton chakra
    ~can only be taught/used by Jinbei
    ~no handseals required


    ~ I don't think it's viable to release wood from anywhere other than your hands. ~

    (Mokuton:Hikari no ki tsubasa)-Wood release:Light wood wings-
    Rank: A
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short (the spikes from the wood can travel long range)
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage:5 for each spike hit
    Description:In this jutsu the user forms one handseal and wings of the lightest wood i.e the balsa wood appear on the users back.This wood is special as it is lighter than the hollow wing bones of a bird and is used in making gliders due to its lightweight.With these wings the user can fly in the air unrestricted upto 30 meters without any problems.Also the user can form wooden senbons from their wings at an additional cost of 20 chakra.These senbons are your average senbons,they are just made of wood instead of metal.

    ~can be used twice per battle
    ~can be used/taught by Jinbei
    ~the wings can be shed at any times by forming a single ram seal by the user
    ~the senbons can be used thrice
    ~the wings last for 4 turns


    ~ Approved ~

    (Mokuton:Mokusei āmu)-Wood release:Wooden arms-
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30(+5 to taijutsu)
    Damage:N/A
    Description: In this jutsu the user manipulates wood to grow two arms made from the heartwood of the snakeood tree which can be used along with the users helping the user in taijutsu as the heartwood of the snakewood tree is one of the strongest wood in the world with a specific gravity of around 1.2,hence increasing the strength of the user.And providing the user with an advantage over the opponent.the hands cannot use jutsus but are able to throw kunais,tags and other weaponry.
    ~can be used twice per battle
    ~the hands can be dropped at any time with a single Bird seal by the user
    ~no handseals required
    ~can be used/taught by Jinbei


    ~ Arms of that weight would slow you down ~

    (Fuuton:Kaze no ningen no barūn)-Wind style:Wind human balloon-
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This is a very difficult jutsu to employ and requires uttermost concentration of the user.In this jutsu the user has too make physical contact with the opponent and when he has achieved that the user streams his fuuton chakra into the user and in a matter of 2 seconds the blood vessels of the user is filled with air or air bubbles to be precise. which then causes extreme internal injuries due to the fact that air bubbles can cause major impact too the heart and other internal organs,damaging the opponent internally leaving him unable too battle.

    ~can be used once per battle
    ~no B rank and above fuuton jutsu the next turn due to severe exhaustion and concentration
    ~can be used/taught by Jinbei


    ~ Similar techniques exist ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Freestyle art the sad tiger = Furīāto kanashii tora
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 25
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user goes down on all four and sprints towards the opponent, when in range, the user moves his/her balance over to his hands, and spins in a 180 degrees angle so his/her legs are in front of him/her, and then does an upwards kick with both legs.


    Freestyle art the worried wolf = Furīāto shinpai ōkami
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user bends himself/herself forward, and sprints towards the opponent, when in range the user lets himself/herself fall backwards, while stretching one of his/her legs upwards, kicking the opponent in either the head or crutch.


    Freestyle art the spinning monkey = Furīāto kaiten saru
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user lets himself/herself fall backwards landing on his/her hands, while he/she stretches his/her legs towards the targets head, then he/she sets of with his/her hands and warps his/her legs around the targets neck, and uses his/her body to break the targets neck, or damaging it severely.


    Freestyle art circular sweeping = Furīāto wa bappon-tekina enkei
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 10 (+5 if the user is wearing sharp or hard footwear.)
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, and swings his/her legs in a sweeping circular kick.


    Freestyle art leg drop bomb = Furīāto ashi doroppu bakudan
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, jumps up and smashes both his/her legs unto the opponents head.


    ~ All approved, but can I tell you, as an experienced RPer, that most if not all of this stuff is pretty useless in a regular battle. ~


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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kiba Buta Joutei)- Summoning: Tusk Boar Lord
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User bites there finger drawing blood then preforms a row of 15 handseals then slams their hand to the ground summoning the Boars Tusk Lord from where ever he maybe. The Tusk Boar Lord is a huge boar standing 10'4"ft (just over 3.4 meters i think) from huff to arch in his back. the Tusk Boar Lord is a master of Genjutsu and Earth jutsu's he can preform up to S-Rank and down Genjutsu with little effort. Tusk Boar can only use Earth jutsu A-Rank and down more effort than his Genjutsu. The Tusk Boars Lord has a thick hide capable of blocking C-Rank and down elemantal jutsus, along with having a strong mind due to extensive training with Genjutsu capable of blocking Genjutsu B-Rank and down.
    Note: Tusk Boar Lords Genjutsu counts as a move.
    Note: Tusk Boar Lords Earth jutsu's count as a move.
    Note: Tusk Boar Lord summon only lasts 3 rounds.
    Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle.
    Note: No other summon can be done in the same battle.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can summon/teach Tusk Boar Lord.

    (Looks like this)





    ~ Too much ~


    (Kage Kobushi Sentou)- Shadow Fist Punch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (if holding kunai +5)
    Description: The user will focus chakra into there shadow, their shadow then exteneds from their feet then molds it into 10 fists which then begin to pumel the opponent. The fists can also hold kunai and throw shuriken, if the fists hold kunai then they begin to slash ths opponent countless times.
    Note: Must have finished Shadow training.
    Note: Must be a member of the Nara clan to use this jutsu or had Nara clan training.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can teach this jutsu.



    ~ No actual restrictions ? ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 11-20-2010 at 02:03 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu:Migi ushiro)Illusion technique:Right behind you
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-long
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This jutsu is one of the most advanced non-sharingan illusion technique.The genjutsu is activated only if and when the user can see the opponent's body.Then the illusion is cast and the opponent views the user vanish from sight,apparently nothing appears to be amiss but then the user feels a kunai on his neck(part of the illusion)and feels the hand and presence of the user behind him,the said 'apparition' is tangible to the opponent and he doesnt realise that he is in a genjutsu.The opponent is then in shock by the sudden disappearence and appearence of the user and also in fear of his life due to the kunai on his neck.

    The fear and shock is aggravated by subtle manipulation of the opponents brain which leaves the opponent in shock and dismay and they loose hope and their will wavers seeing the might of their opponent.They are unable too use S rank and above techs for the following two turns.While the whole time the user is invisible to the opponent and can prepare for another attack.

    Restrictions
    *can be performed twice per battle
    *given the nature of this genjutsu it is very difficult for non doujutsu users too realise they are in an illusion and is hence difficult or impossible to break
    *a 3 tomoe sharingan and higher can break the genjutsu
    *the genjutsu lasts for 2 turn only
    *if the user attacks the opponent while he is caught in the Genjutsu, the resulting pain will knock the opponent out of the illusion
    *can be used and taught only by Gaara of konoha


    (Genjutsu:Tōku hanarete) Illusion technique:Far away
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This genjutsu is a basic yet a very effective non-sharingan illusion.This genjutsu is activated by pointing a finger towards the opponent hence it requires the user to know the location of the user.So basically this genjutsu effects the sense of distance of the opponent. What happens is the user sense of distance is disturbed and everything seems to be 'far away' to the user (long range). So everytime he attacks the user the opponent believes the user and his attacks are coming from long range even when the user is in short or mid range too the opponent.

    This genjutsu hence effectively illusions the opponent in believng that the user is in long range and thus preventing him from using any short or short mid range attacks,but since the actual location of the user can be mid or short it doesnt bars the user from using jutsus of long and mid range.

    Restrictions

    *can be used twice per battle
    *lasts four turns
    *due to the nature of the genjutsu opponents with no dojutsu cannot realise that they are in a genjutsu which makes it difficult or impossible to break the genjutsu
    *if the user attacks the opponent while he is caught in the Genjutsu, the resulting pain will knock the opponent out of the illusion

    *a 3 tomoe sharingan and above can break through the genjutsu
    *can be used and taught only by Gaara of konoha


    ~ OP ~

    (Suiton/Fuuton:Suichū hikō)Water/Wind style:Underwater flight
    Rank:S
    Range:Short(self effecting)
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This is the most effective way too travel underwater and makes the user invincible when he is in water.So basically in this jutsu the user when enters a water source,the user immediately starts too release dense fuuton chakra(matching the density of water too prevent the rise of air bubble) from every pore of his body creating a massive air bubble(lens shaped due to buoyancy) around him.Due too the massive release of fuuton chakra the bubble forms around the user so that he can travel unrestricted in water (supply of oxygen and protection from raiton techniques).

    But due to buoyant forces the user is unable too delve deep down underwater and hence can only travel at high speeds up to a depth of 10 metres underwater and too counterbalance the buoyant force the user uses suiton chakra too increase the viscosity to a high level of the water around the air bubble,too counteract the buoyant forces(as the rise of water bubble is slower in a highly viscous fluid) and hence is able too travel underwater at a depth of 10-15 metres unrestricted with speeds upto 30 km/hr or 8.3 m/s.


    Restrictions

    *the user is unable to use katon and raiton techniques
    *lasts for three turns or untill the user releases the jutsu with a single monkey seal
    *can be performed twice per battle
    *gives immunity from electrocution in water and also provides a source of oxygen
    *a single handseal is required to start the jutsu
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha

    Explanation:

    So basically since river and sea water is not pure and distilled hence the bubble motion is surfactant Contaminated Bubble type and hence it further reduces the drag and buoyancy preventing the bubble from rising too the surface.

    Movement and action of force on a surfactant Contaminated Bubble:


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    Last edited by Emperor; 11-20-2010 at 02:04 PM.

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