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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kage Tsume) - Shadow Claws
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms shadows on there finger tips making talons on each hand, talons can be then used to slice and dice anything in the users way.
    (May only be used once per battle.)
    (only last 2 turns)
    (Only Huzuki is able to use this.)




    (Kage no Kabe) - Wall of Shadows
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user's shadow rises up as a large wall to guard against an attack.
    (Only Huzuki is able to use this.)
    (blocks mid-long range attacks only)




    (Kage Kasui) - Shadows Spikes

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user Sends there shadow out and expands there shadow, shadow spikes that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.
    (Only Huzuki is able to use this.)
    (user must stay focus and not move during the jutsu)




    no solid shadows.
     
         
    Last edited by ~Reaper~; 11-27-2010 at 12:19 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ragnarok) Ragnarok
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 when blade is reforming. 40 to make the blade start vibrating. 50 when forming wings. Amount of chakra of the jutsu for Absorption.
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: He is a long, pitch-black, medieval-like broadsword with a with a single white line along the length of the blade. His guard is composed of a spiky band with three bands coming up the base of the blade in a zig-zagging pattern. Just above those bands, there is a large, red-lipped mouth. He has a long, two-handed, handle, but he can be wielded with one hand. Ragnarok is a living sword. No physical attack can break Ragnarok but, if ever broken, Ragnarok will turn into a black liquid and reform over the course of one turn. When Ragnarok is being used in battle, he can use the wielder's chakra to make himself vibrate, giving him buzzsaw-like cutting abilities. The strength of Ragnarok's vibration is significantly stronger than any Raiton-induced vibration. After he starts vibrating, he never stops with the exception of him breaking. Once per battle Ragnarok can use the wielder's chakra to form black wings on the wielder's back, giving them the ability to fly at great speeds for 4 turns. He can also absorb up to A rank techniques 3 times per battle by sucking them into the mouth on the side of the blade.
    Note: Can only be used by Demosthenes.
    Note: Wings can be formed once per battle and last 4 turns. The forming of the wings counts as one of the 3 moves that can be done per turn.
    Note: 3 techniques up to A rank can be absorbed per battle.
    Looks:

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    Ragnarok is a being that was mentioned in ancient myths. In these myths it is said that Ragnarok was a being that was created from the insecurities and fears of the people of the world. He began to grow stronger as more and more insecurities and fears were felt and he was soon deity-like. He began to destroy villages and entire countries, causing more fear, making him ever stronger. As Ragnarok continued to go on this rampage, he caught the attention of a very power Shinigami, who then went to the mortal realm to face him. After a great clash between the two, Ragnarok was defeated and stripped of his powers. He was then turned into a blade that the Shinigami himself used to deal with later problems. It is not known if this is true.


    Ragnarok is a sentient blade that speaks and uses the wielders chakra.

    Ragnarok does not need to be summoned because the wielder carries the blade on his/her back, holding it there with chakra control similar to that which is used to walk on water or on a wall.


    If I need to make CJ templates for all of the abilities of Ragnarok, I shall.

    If an ability has to be removed, I will remove it.

    ~Declined OP, do not resubmit~
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 11-29-2010 at 05:44 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Gankyū no Hitei) – Marmot Arts: Eyeball Negation
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All (see notes)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After making the four required hand seals. Fire element chakra builds in approximately 1/2 of a second, to a pinpoint in the palm of the hand to create a grand flash. The flash from the jutsu itself only lasts for about a second and a half. This jutsu is used to temporarily blind the target. At various ranges the effect of the jutsu differ. If the opponent has sharingan, byakugan active or rinnegan, the jutsu can actually scorch the retinas causing permanent damage to their eyes if they see it at close enough range. The effect while having a dōjutsu active would be that of staring into the sun with a telescope from a very close distance because of the enhanced perception of both chakra and actual elements/objects. Direct line of sight is required to be subject to the effects. Because of the intensity of the light this jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed.
    Note: This jutsu can easily be rendered useless by simply turning away before it is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu, however byakugan must be disabled due to its ability to see through solids and has around 360° field of view.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Range/Effects:
    • This jutsu effects all ranges, however from long range it causes only severely blurred vision for 1 turn, unless a dōjutsu is active then it's loss of dōjutsu for 1 turn, but can still see.
    • Mid range causes blindness 1 turn, for active dōjutsu loss of ability for match and blurred vision for 1 turn.
    • Short range causes blindness 2 turns, for active dōjutsu permanent loss of vision.

    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 11-29-2010 at 05:46 PM. Reason: changed things...

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by DOD_bld View Post
    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Gankyū no hitei) – Marmot Arts: Eyeball Negation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All (see notes)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After making the four required hand seals; sheep, horse, snake, and tiger. Focused fire element chakra builds at an exponential rate, taking approximately 1/2 of a second, to a pinpoint at the tip of a finger, thumb or palm of the hand. This concentration of chakra does not produce any significant heat; almost all of its energy is focused on particle conversion (the reaction in fire that converts energy to visible light as opposed to heat) which is used to blind the target. At various ranges the effect of the jutsu is different. If the opponent has sharingan, byakugan active or rinnegan, the jutsu can actually scorch the retinas causing permanent damage to their eyes if they see it at close enough range. The effect while having a dōjutsu active would be that of looking into the sun with a telescope from a distance of only a few meters because of the enhanced perception of both chakra and actual elements/objects. Direct line of sight is required to be subject to the effects. Because of the intensity of the light this jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed.
    Note: This jutsu can easily be rendered useless by simply turning away before it is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu, however byakugan must be disabled due to its ability to see through solids and has around 360° field of view.
    Note: Because of the jutsu’s nature is the same as that of the stars, Void based jutsus have minimal affect against it.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Range/Effects:
    • This jutsu effects all ranges, however from long range it causes only severely blurred vision for 1 turns, unless a dōjutsu is active then it's loss of dōjutsu for 1 turns, but can still see.
    • Mid range causes blindness 1 turns, for active dōjutsu loss of ability for match and blurred vision for 1 turn.
    • Short range causes blindness 2 turns, for active dōjutsu permanent loss of vision.

    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.
    WTF? Rag said " do not resubmit" all you did was change the name of the jutsu
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ragerok View Post
    WTF? Rag said " do not resubmit" all you did was change the name of the jutsu
    Actually it is a different jutsu, just because it still has the same basic effect that the other one did, doesn't make it the same jutsu. I think there are only 4 or 5 things that are similar with the previous. Besides Emp pretty much gave me the go ahead with that one before he went on hiatus.

    So stop spamming this thread, and mind your business. If you've something to say use PM, or VM...
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Naibun Raikou: Hachi bijou Souken) Secret Lightning style: Eight tails Creation
    Type:Offensive, Defensive
    Rank:S
    Range:All Range
    Chakra Cost:40(-15 per turn)
    Damage Points:80(-20 to user per turn) (+10 to all Lightning moves)
    Description: The user surrounds themselve with electricity creating a lightning field that takes the appearance of the eight tailed ox demon. (smiler to Susanoo only lightning and it looks like the demon.) It Makes all lightning jutsu stronger by +10. The User can control the tails to do there biding. It also protects you like a shield.

    Note: Only lasts for 4 turns
    Note: an only be tough by me RokuNB

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Genjutsu : Shujouteki Shingai | Illusionary Technique : Emotional Impairment
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user uses this Genjutsu on himself. The user sends chakra into his/her brain and blocks off the Amygdala (the part of the brain in control of emotional reactions). This causes the user to have no recollection of fear (as the amygdala holds all memories regarding fear), this also means the user doesn't fear death, turning the user into a relentless and remorseless "killing machine". Also the user loses the ability to tense (in regards to instinctual tensing) this means taijutsu attacks have less effect as the user is always relaxed (it's been shown that people can survive falling off six foot buildings and tornados by going unconscious and relaxing).

    • The chakra blocking the Amygdala lasts for 2 turns, as anymore would cause Brain damage.
    • Only once per battle
    • The mental strain from this jutsu means the user cannot use other Genjutsu during the duration of this jutsu and for the rest of the match.
    • Can only be taught by Hammy120290
    • Enemy Taijutsu attacks that land lose 10 damage points.


    ~i guess Approved~

    Name
    Katana: Kaze ha | Wind Blade
    Knife: Hiraishin naifu | Lightning Rod Knife
    Type
    Katana & knife
    Rank
    A
    Range
    Katana: Short & Mid(If used with Wind)
    Knife: Short & Mid(If used with Lightning)
    Chakra Cost
    20 per turn when used with Wind or Lightning.
    Damage
    40 - if used normally +10 when an element is added.
    Katana Description
    The sword itself has a seal on it as does the bottom of the holster where the katana usually lies so it can be summoned back at any time into this holder with a single handseal.
    It can be infused with Wind and power up Fire Jutsus up to A rank. It can also Split Earth structures up to B rank. The sword can also be used by spinning it behind the users back to increase speed creating a proppeler similar to a hovercraft.
    If the sword is infused with Wind the user can create a razor sharp slash of wind that extends to Mid range.
    The sword is indestrucible unless melted with a Forbidden Rank Fire.
    Knife Description
    The Knife has special properties and can absorb any lightning jutsu up to C rank. If the Lightning is going through the ground the user just stabs the Knife into the ground and all the Lightning is drawn to the knife. The knife disperses lightning Jutsus by releasing the Raiton its absorbed gradually thus not harming the user. The user can choose to Fire the absorbed Raiton back at the opponent but only through stabbing the ground and releasing the Raiton chakra all at once. The Lightning cannot be directed but it will go directly forward in numerous paths and crack the Earth around the opponent.
    If an Earth Jutsu(up to B rank) is towards the area of the opponent the Raiton Chakra will destroy the structures e.g. Earth Rampart. If the Knife is used with the Raiton Chakra charging the blade it can be used to cut through Earth Jutsu's as well up to B rank.
    Katana Restrictions
    • Can only be wielded by Hammy120290 (unless permission is given)
    • It costs 20 chakra per turn when infused with Wind
    • Can only summon the sword back 3x during battle


    Knife Restrictions
    • Can only be wielded by Hammy120290 (unless permission is given)
    • Absorbing Lightning can only be used 6 times in Battle
    • Dispersing the Lightning in a form of attack can only be used 2 times.
    • To destroy Earth Jutsus the user must have absorbed the Raiton chakra the same turn he uses it to attack otherwise the Raiton will have dispersed.
    • To destroy Earth Jutsu's up to B rank the Raiton Chakra absorbed must be from a C rank jutsu and so on.
    • Can only summon the Knife back 3x during battle


    ~submitting two separate weapons as one ? ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by PowerOfDarkness View Post
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Garanchou) Summoning Technique: Pelican
    Summoning Animal: Pelican
    Scroll Owner: PowerOfDarkness
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/a (for now)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: I will make when the contract gets approved.

    ~Approved~
    the contract is approved...

    (GaranchouKuchyose no Jutsu: Baku)-Wolverine Summoning Jutsu:Baku
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Baku is the Boss of the Pelican Contract, he is very wise and strong pelican however he lacks manners when talking to someone who isn't his master. Baku wears a white vest with the fire kanji in black on it's neck.He posses a huge mouth and he is the same size as Katsuyo. He has huge wings that let him fly realy fast and attack from above. He can also swim well with his short, strong legs, much faster than the ordinary human. Baku has 2 affinities - Wind and Water that lets him used wind and water jutsu up to S rank. However he can only use 5 jutsus while he is summoned. His main weakness is Ice as the Pelicans can't stand cold.
    Note: Baku will disappear after 4 turns.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Must posses the Pelican contract taugth by PowerOfDarkness.

    ~Declined a summon may only posses one element~

    .................................................. .................................................. Resubmiting:

    Fire/Wind Combo: Fire Bomb (Koton/Fuiton Konbo: Ho Bakudan)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short - Middle
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers his wind chakra into his mouth and then as he breaths out he releases the Fuiton chakra he has gathered, thus creating an invisible layer of wind that approaches the enemy rapidly. Then the user uses a Koton Jutsu in order to ignite the fire, thus creating a huge explosion that destroys everything in 8m radius.
    Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per Battle.

    ~Declined Similar technique exists~

    (Koton: Ho Fenikkusu) - Fire Release: Fire Phoenix
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user molds his Koton chakra to his dominant hand and then release it making it a Phoenix shaped stream of fire which stays attached to the users hand through little streams of fire. The Phoenix can be manipulated trough the little steams of fire and send at the wanted direction. When the Phoenix reach the enemy the user performs a single handseal and the Phoenix explodes. The explosion destroys everything in 8m radius
    Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per Battle.
    Note: No S rank Fire techniques for the next turn.

    ~Declined Similar technique exists~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (raiton: raikou odori) lightning dance
    RANK: B
    range: mid range
    chakra cost: 25
    damage points: 40
    description: the user builds up chakra in his/her hands, then into his/her fingertips, he/she releases small threads out of his fingertips, then it forms into a man shape thing, but not a full body shape, it's only the linings & some part of the man that was made. the user uses it to be a shield

    ~Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Orangutan
    Scroll Owner: Hammy120290
    Other Users who have signed contract:
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: (Magma Release · Volcano Eruption)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: -20 if burn by the lava -10 if burn by the steam
    Description:The user gathers a great deal of lava chakra within their body as they surge it all throughout the ground. Several points in the ground then build up a great deal of steam and lava as it flies through the ground. Surrounding the whole area in a veil of steam and lava.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.

    ~Declined Add japanese and its lava release now since it been officially released from the manga~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    (junsei ryoku) Pure Power
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Medium
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user does three handseals and must concentrate on the element chakra.Then after performing the required handsels while holding his hands together, the user creates a small ball of the element and directs it towards the opponent and when it reaches him and the user puts his hands down the ball expand creating a blast from all the concentrated elemental chakra directly upon the opponent.
    *Note:Can be used only once per battle
    *Note:After this jutsu is performed the user cannot use the element he has used for 3 battles
    *Note:The elements'spowers can be only from the 5 basic elements
    *Note:The power of the blast depends on how much elemental chakra the user has meaning if he knows only C ranked jutsus the blast won't be so powerful but the effects are the same
    *Note:Can be used/taught only by totalblind


    ~Declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Arumajiro Kokuou: Aruteishu | Summoning Technique: Armadillo King: Aruteishu
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Aruteishu is about 5 meters tall and 10 meters long. His skin is covered in a thick layer of iron for protection. There are spikes right above each of his legs and spikes going down his back. Each spike is 1/2 meter long. He can't run very fast but he can roll up into a ball and roll around at around 50 km per hour. He can only use earth type jutsu that do not require handseals. He has sharp claws that he uses for digging underground and coming back up. He also has a ball at the end of his tail with small studs all over it that he can swing around and whack people with.
    *Must have signed Armadillo contract to summon
    *Can only be summoned twice per battle
    *Must wait 4 turns before summoning again


    ~Approved i have edited a bit highlighted in bold~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Kyojin Yougu)-Fire Style:Giant Tools
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After performing 2 handseals fire will burst fire from the user's hand and levitate in front of the him, then by trowing a tool into it the fire will take the form of that tool but in a bigger scale much like an average human. Then my making hand gestures the user can launch the fire tool at the selected target and manipulate it's course.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    Note: No fire jutsus in the same turn this jutsu is used.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji


    ~Approved~

    (Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu:Haru)-Wolverine Summoning Jutsu:Haru
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Haru is a Wolverine with a height of an averange tree and posses incredible strength and endurance enough to take a hit for his master, but after being hit he will pof away to his home. Haru has a dark blue fur and wears the Konoha headband in his neck. He is very protective with his master(s) so he has developed an ability focus chakra on his roar and blow out a thin spinning sphere of chakra that surrounds his master and can whitstand a C-rank jutsu that has an intangible form (Katon or Raiton) but this ability can only be used once per battle. Haru also has a lightning affinity wich lets him used 2 lightning jutsus from C-rank and below when he's summoned.
    Note: Haru will disappear after 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Must posses the Wolverine contract taugth by Ryuji.


    ~Approved~

    (Magen:Matenrōu)-Demonic Illusion:Skyscraper
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This jutsu needs Sharingan activated.
    By poiting at the opponent then poiting at the sky, the user will create an illusion that the enemy is propelled several hundred meters into the air. The enemy is then tied up with four belts and a frog-like, dragonic demon breaks through the sky, reaching to attack the enemy. This jutsu is used to break down the mind of the enemy or distract them long enough to prepare another attack like Kirin. After using this jutsu the user must deactivate the Sharingan for 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji


    ~Declined no Doujutsu techniques allowed~

    (Fuuton:Tei Engai Meiun)-Wind Style: Air Dome Of Doom
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbbiden
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will inhale a large amount of air and store in in his lungs and mix it with wind chakra then by blowing it out the user will lock the opponent in a dome that lowers the oxygen inside it which makes the enemys suffocate and hurts their ears due to the pressure change if they cannot get out of it. However this will damage the user lungs and troath so much the the user can't use anymore jutsus that are blown/spit/exhale from the mouth for 3 turns and he will have trouble breathing so it will be wise to have a clone or a partner to protect the user.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: The user takes 20 Damage Points.
    Note: Can only be taught my Ryuji


    ~Declined ~

    (Katon:Aka-outo)-Fire Style:Red-Out
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will channel fire chakra in his dominate hand, then by making a diagonal slash motion that releases from the user's hand flames that spin around the user and blocks the opponent's vision of the him and take that chance to hide or retreat. If the opponent is too close to the flames this ones can set the opponent of fire
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji


    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Yoton : Dai Funka | Lava Release : Great Eruption
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user materializes earth around one forearm and fist (both on the same arm) and changes the outside of the earth into lava while keeping the earth underneath to stop the lava from burning their arm. The user can then use the lava fist for Taijutsu. These arms can be "ejected" by charging beneath the normal earth (and around their arm) with wind chakra. Then by doing two handseals (with one hand) the lava fist is ejected in the direction the arm is pointing and the wind chakra fires out the end of the projectile, increasing it's speed and distance.

    -Can only use thrice per battle
    -Jutsu lasts for two turns, any longer and the lava melts the normal earth and the user loses that forearm and fist.
    -By doing one handseal the lava changes back to normal earth and the earth on the arm turns to dust (does not count as a move).


    Yōton : Meigo | Lava Release : Dark Dog
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user materializes earth around one of their fists and changes the outside of the earth into lava, and lashes out at the opponent with a claw-thrust. This technique is powerful enough to tear off half of someones face with a glancing blow.

    -Lasts one turn, then the lava changes back to earth and crumbles to dust.
    -Can use thrice per battle.

    ~Both Declined the earth would not be sufficient to protect the user from the lava it would make it molten and cause yourself harm ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Polecat SuMmons (Kuchioyse: sukanku)
    Scroll Owner:Iseris..
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
    Summoning Boss if existing:King: Gammy
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: sir enamatio

    Ousama: Gammy (King: Gammy)
    Type: Summon
    Range: N/A
    Rank: S
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user bites down on their thumb and wipes the blood across a a summoing tattoo on the users forearm. Gammy is the Polecat king, feared for killing cites at a time with secretions so horrible they burn through the nostils and dry out the skin causing bacterial infections over long
    periods of time. gammy is about 5 feet tall at the shoulder. gammy is a noble leader who is feared on the battle but revered by his subjects.
    Note: can only use any kind of secretion 5 times
    Note: can not use suiton type ninjutsu


    Kan Taicho: Dono Enamatio (Lead Summon: Sir Enamatio)
    Type: Summon
    Range: N/A
    Rank: S
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user bites down on their thumb and wipes blood across a tattoo located on the users forearm. roughly the same size as gammy (5feet) sir enamatio is unlike most other polecats in his clan because he is capable of secreting foul stenches from the pores of his skin instead of just his secretion glands. and his secretions are light and evaporate slowly creating misty clouds of stench that float around him and can be sprayed a few feet in any direction around him
    Note: can only use any kind of secretion 5 times per battle
    Note: can not use fuuton type ninjutsu


    Contract for the polecat will be approved but the summons declined due to the secretions and bacterial effects
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Lónglóng zāihài | Earth Style: Rumbling Disaster)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-30 damage to user)
    Description: The user will perform a string of handseals and clasp their hands together forming a handseal, As the users hands come together the earth around them discluding their position, will begin to pulsate violently, Throwing everything off balance and bringing up massive boulders from the ground that get launched into the sky eventually raining down on everything below it. This jutsu acts as a massive earthquake which creates huge faults and canyons with spikes awaiting their victims, The only place not effected by this jutsu is the users.

    Note: This is a large radius jutsu which can be used to easily destroy anything around.

    Note: The user will not be able to perform any earth jutsu for the rest of the battle, or any elemental jutsu for 1 round and afterwards will not be able to perform any S-Rank jutsu or above for the remainder of the battle.

    Note: The user will be exhausted and fatigued and will need 2 rounds to be back to normal.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle.

    Note: Must be taught by Drizzy.

    Note: Once the user stops holding the handseal the faults will seal up and everything inside will be crushed.

    ~Approved seeing as you restricted it heavily, i added some extra highlighted in bold being as forbidden ranked it will cause damage and not just fatigue~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Pain- View Post
    ( Kuchiyose: Supi-do | Tori ) Summoning Technique: Speed | Bird

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary handseals and summon a vampire finch the size of Gama. The vampire finch abilities is speed. The vampire finch can fly 105 miles per hour due to the fact that is a rare contract and the vampire finch is not able to use elements. The vampire finch name is Fuma.
    (Only can be summon Twice per battle)
    (Only -Pain- is able to summon this)



    ( Raiton: Raikou | Enban ) Lightning Release: Lightning | Disk

    [SPOILER]Rank: B
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Description: The user put one hand up and focus lightning chakra on his hand forming a disk made of lightning, that the user is able to control by moving their hands when the user move one hand to the left the disk go to the left, when the user move one hand to the right the disk go to the right, when the user move one hand up the disk go up, when the user move one hand down the disk go down. This jutsu is able to follow the user all where they run it can be easily destroy with a wind jutsu.

    (Can be only use three times per battle)
    (It take time to do the disk, about twenty seconds)
    (It can't evade a move that is target direct at it)
    (The user that is controlling the disk can't do handseals or the disk would disappear)

    The disk look like this:

    [SPOILER]

    ( Kenjutsu: Awai | Enkou ) Sword Arts: Light | Flame

    Rank: Forbidden
    Damage: 90
    Chakra: 50
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All
    Light Flame is a blade that takes the shape a claymore. The blade was forged by the best blacksmith in the world, made by steel that was blessed by the Highest Priest during the time that the Jūbi ran rampant around the world, in an attempt to forge a weapon that would strike the beast down. The blade was forged of pure iron from a meteor right and obsidian taken from a blessed volcano, and was tempered with holy water the two metals were forged together during a blessing process to form a strange type of steel. The blade itself, infused with chakra, unknown to the priest that their chanting was infusing the blade with a power beyond their understanding, giving the blade a dark gray, glassy look. Because of the material the blade was forged with, it is very light but sturdy, able to wielded with no more effort than it would take to wield a fencing foil, but the blade itself is indestructible; it had to be in order to stand up to the demon.

    The blade, is able to give the user power to make grow the blade shape about 5 ft 9 in, when the user use this technique the strenght also increase making the blade more powerful, but at the same time the blade is really light not matter how big it is, the blade last technique is to increase the user strenght making the user twice the strongest as he normal strenght is.

    (Light flame can only be use by -Pain-, on other words no one else can use the technique)
    (The size increase can be done once and it last five turns)
    (The strenght increase can only be use one and it last two turns)


    ( Kuchiyose: Mei | Tori ) Summoning Technique: Dark | Bird

    Rank: A
    Range: All
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 30 ( +50 because is able to do three element and is rare summoning )
    Damage: 60
    Description: This vampire finch came from Kumogakure, when i found it i call this bird Zuki, this vampire finch is really dark, the bird has the abilities like all of the other vampire finch to talk, this vampire finch is rare vampire finch, is really dangerous because, it can due three elements and the bird also got a weapon call ZukiHD, this weapon is a normal weapon that is just to attack, is a really big one, when zuki have the weapon to attack he got it on his wings and sometimes he put it on his mouth, due to the fact that zuki got a big weapon his a little slow, his speed is 36 mph, unlike other birds this one is really slow. The elements that zuki is able to use is Doton, Fuuton & Katon up to A rank.

    (The user can only summon Zuki once)
    (Zuki is only able to use one element per turn)


    ~All Declined~ Do not resubmit the first jutsu
    I hate when mod do this am not trying to offend you but all mods, how they all declined can you explain and how Lightning Disk is declined if Kawagiri when i first submitted he told me to add stuff to it then i got banned and i re-submit it with the details that he told me to add.

    You are now banned for one month. Because another mod told you to add stuff doesn't mean that its going to be automatically approved, just means that you had to add stuff before its reviewed again. now begone!
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ga-youshiki:keibatsu gai(Moth Style:Judgement Scythe)
    Rank-Forbidden
    Range-N/A
    Chakra-50
    Type-Supplementary
    Damage-N/A
    Description-
    The User, by Activating the Mark of The Monarch Tattoo, transforming the Tattoo into this weapon. The Tattoo painfully rips itself from the user, transforming immediately into a scythe, that appears to be the size of the user. The Scythe's Blade has the Mark Of the Monarch etched into the Blade of it, and can be used to summon moths. The Scythe itself May be used as a weapon. The Scythe may move independently of the user, able to use all moth techniques and attacking the enemy.
    *CAn Only Be USed Once Per Battle
    *Can only Be used Trained expressly By Icemyster
    *Is Indestructable
    *The User Is Un-Capable of using S-Rank Techniques for two turns

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting

    Summoning Technique: Kaijin (Grand Cotta Summoning)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across the tattoo on Oraan's left arm, Oraan summons Grand Cotta. Grand Cotta is the largest Hyena of them all. He is the same size as Gamabunta. He is the only Hyena capable of using Jutsu other then GenJutsu, consisting primarily of Fire and Lightning. Because Grand Cotta has a very thick hide if attacked with Lightning, only an S Ranked or above Lightning jutsu can kill him (Unless a water technique is used in conjunction to cause the lightning techniques to be powered up through the conduction allowing A ranked lightning techniques to cause damage). Grand Cotta has a helmet made of Manganin, which is a metal that is very resistant to lightning. The helmet, and the hide, are why it is so hard to kill Grand Cotta with Lightning abilities.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for a Maximum of 4 turns.
    Note: Can use all Lightning Techniques that the User knowsthat doesn't require hand seals
    Note: Can use all Fire Techniques that the User knows up to S Rankthat doesn't require hand seals
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.


    ~Approved i have added some
    stuff make it a bit more reasonable~


    Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User is coated in an armor of thick Hyena hide, belonging to Grand Cotta. The User gains a helmet made of Manganin, the same metal used as Grand Cotta's protective headgear. The Transformation into Kaijin (Hyena Mod) happens instanteously. While this is active, Hyena mode has these effects.
    *Decrease all Lightning Jutsu damage by 20.
    *Lightning jutsu that hit the user does not cause Paralyzation due to the hide of the Hyena.
    *User's Peripheral vision is impaired due to Helmet.
    *User cannot use Kage Bunshin while in this mode.
    *Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Lasts for 5 turns
    *Can only be used 2x per battle



    ~Declined, change the highlighted parts and modes take time to enter and there not instantaneous and the kage bunshin change to any type of clone

    ]Summoning Technique: Kami no Hidari-te Akuma no Migi-te (God's Left Hand, Devil's Right Hand)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User, while in Kaijin (Hyena Mode), summons what appears to be two clones of the user. The only difference between the three is that one has A yellow Manganin helmet, while the other has a red Manganin helmet, and the user's helmet is brown. The God's left hand(Kami) has all Lightning Abilities and is capable of using all the Lightning Techs that the user knows. The Devil's Right Hand(Akuma) has all Fire Abilities, and is capable of using all the Fire Techs that the user knows.
    Note: Usable only in Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Vision impairment still applies for Each Summoned "clone".
    *Each Summoned "Clone" is immune to attacks of their element S Rank and Below.
    *User cannot use any Lightning or Fire Techs while each respective Summoning Clone is on the field and for 1 turn after they are destroyed.


    ~Get the mode approved first~

    [QUOTE](Kami/Akuma: Kurama Bushuugi)- God's Left Hand/Devil's Right Hand: Wheel of Misfortune
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage Points: 80
    Desription: A combination of Kami's and Akuma's natural elements. They stand back to back and shoot a fireball and lightning ring, which combine and travel toward the opponent, gaining speed as it goes.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
    Note: Counts as two of the 3 moves in a turn.
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    Note: Can only be used in Kaijin (Hyena Mode.


    i have added parts and when hyena mode is approved then i will approve this

    Earth Style: Chakra Sensing Bear Trap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
    Damage: 80
    Description: From the earth, the user forms a large bear traps that rise from the earth. The bear trap seeks out the chakra of anything that is touching the ground, including the chakra of the user. When an opponent, ally or the user, becomes trapped, the bear trap then drags them under the ground and will not stop until they reach the earths core. As it is earth based, the bear trap can easily travel along earth, to include vertically.
    Note: Users feet MUST be touching earth in order to use this technique.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: Only Oraan may teach



    ~Declined~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Freestyle art backbreaker = Furīātobakkuburēkā
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 25
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, wraps his/her legs around the targets body, and swings himself/herself around the target, grabs the targets neck, and pulls it backwards damaging the targets spine severely.


    ~Approved~

    Freestyle art handstand kick combo = Furīāto sakadachi wa, konbokikku
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 20
    Descritpion: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, and swings his legs in an unpredictable combo, consisting of 8 kicks, at his opponent, these kicks a very powerful, and each one of them are capable of breaking bones.


    ~Approved~

    Freestyle art defensive kicks = Furīāto bōei no kikku
    Rank: B
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 15
    Description: A Taijutsu move where the user stands in hand stand, swings his/her legs around in a protective pattern, these sweeps are made as a protective technique, and are able to block Taijutsu up to (and including) C-rank.


    ~Approved~

    Earth release: Freestyle art hands of steel = Doton: Hagane no furīāto no te
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses earth chakra in his hands, and covers them with hardened earth, the users hands must touch the earth to do this, these “gloves” are extremely heavy durable and resistant to fire, the gloves will keep fire jutsus below S-rank, from touching the users hands, but because of the weight of the gloves, the user will be unable to move his hands while they’re equipped.
    Notes:
    • Requires no handseals.
    • Can last for two turns.


    ~Declined similar technique exists in the basis of creating earth gloves~


    Freestyle art death volley = Furīāto no shi no renpatsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, and focuses sharp wind chakra into pre-prepared needles in his/her pants, the needles are held in place by small threads, and therefore they don’t disturb the user during combat, because of the sharpness of the wind element, the user is able to release the wind chakra in his pants, which will sever the threads, and carry the needles with it. This creates a volley of needles, that will cover a 360 degrees angle around the user, (exception are right below the user, and right above), these needles are very sharp and lethal, and can be filled with poison, if stated at the beginning of the match.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used once per battle.


    ~Declined, only those trained in medical arts can use poison~

    Again these freestyle jutsus are made for a special bio, no ordinary ninja can use them properly.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by PowerOfDarkness View Post
    (Koton: Ho Fenikkusu) - Fire Release: Fire Phoenix
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user molds his Koton chakra to his dominant hand and then release it making it a Phoenix shaped stream of fire which stays attached to the users hand through little streams of fire. The Phoenix can be manipulated trough the little steams of fire and send at the wanted direction. When the Phoenix reach the enemy the user performs a single handseal and the Phoenix explodes. The explosion destroys everything in 8m radius
    Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per Battle.
    Note: No S rank Fire techniques for the next turn.
    It's too similar to my techniques, so I don't think this should get approved.
    [Ryuuki Fenikkusu no Jutsu] ♦ Rising Phoenix Technique ♦
    Range: Short/long
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals; draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and then immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large soaring phoenix of flames. The mythical bird will then swoop up and into the foe at high speed. Not only can it cause very hot burns but can give a powerful hit upon contact as well. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. After it is done, because of the impact, the phoenix explodes into a bunch of blazing ashes all over ground, but the user can explode it whenever it's needed.
    ~Usable twice per battle.
    ~Faust can only teach this.

    [Nenshou Haigara Ryuuki Fenikkussu no Jutsu] ♦ Burning Ashes Rising Phoenix Technique ♦
    Range: Short/long
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 50 [+30, when the user takes the second deep breath]
    Damage: 90 [+20, when the user takes the second deep breath]
    Description: This technique can only be used after using ♦ Rising Phoenix Technique ♦ in which it utilizes the blazing ashes left over from the jutsu. The ninja does the necessary hand seals; draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and then immediately exhales it. They then blast a streaming jet of fire into the centre of all the ashes, which then spreads out into all the blazing flames and they all ignite and burst up in a giant circular wall of fire, spinning violently the blazing glare consolidates into a rapid moving giant sphere. Once the sphere is made, it then burst out and two phoenix like wings of fire blast outwards to the sides. Finally, with another deep breath through the nostrils, the fire out put will be increase and the blazing fire will rise back up into an even larger and stronger phoenix then before and the technique is basically repeated but with greater power. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. After it is done, because of the impact, the phoenix explodes into a bunch of blazing ashes all over ground that can burn the surroundings.
    ~Usable once per battle.
    ~Only one other technique that turn, can be used before this technique. After this technique none can be used until next turn.
    ~No fire element for the next turn.
    ~No Taijutsu for next turn
    ~Faust can only teach this.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sexy~Tendo~ View Post
    (Nendou Ame) - Clay Rain
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description:After creating clay bird for flight, Deidara then creates a big ball of clay still connected from his hands, droplets then shoot like bullets from the clay ball towards the enemy and explode by contact.
    ~only Deidara can use this jutsu.
    ~bullets can only go straight and it's trajectory can't be manipulated.

    ~ The clay bird counts as a separate jutsu ? ~
    (Nendou Ame) - Clay Rain
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:After creating clay bird for flight, Deidara then creates a big ball of clay still connected from his hands, droplets then shoot like bullets from the clay ball towards the enemy and explode by contact.
    ~only Deidara can use this jutsu.
    ~bullets can only go straight and it's trajectory can't be manipulated.
    ~must create clay bird first
    ~Can only be used 3 times

    ~Approved, i edited the cost and damage to correct amounts and added the bold section~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting as per instructions


    (Mokuton:Mokusei no shi) Secret wood style:Wooden death


    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Type:Attack
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80 (-50 to user)

    Description: This is a secret wood style technique due to the impact and danger this jutsu posesses. In this jutsu the user cleverly manipulates the earth or water (since wood is formed from both water and earth)too form wooden mines all around the opponent in random positions in a 3 metre radius with the opponent as the centre beneath the surface of the ground or water(about 1 inch below the ground or water surface). These wooden mines are extremely sensitive and if the user moves or there is any other movement around the mines like the ground shaking or anything falling on the mines, they explode like a mine,expelling no smoke but the explosion destroys the 1 inch layer of earth above it and causes wooden splinters to travel at high speeds and pierce the opponent like grenade shrapnel leaving the opponent severely damaged.

    Restrictions:

    *can only be used once per battle
    *no A ranked and above mokuton jutsus the next turn
    *doujutsu users and sensors can sense or see the mines but those who are not sensors or doujutsu bearers are oblivious too the wooden mines
    *due too the strain on mokuton chakra the user is also damaged
    *the user forms around 15 mines around the opponent
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha


    ~Add a reasonable time limit to create the mines~

    [(Mokuton:Mudō no de~yuo) Secret wood style :The Ravaging Duo

    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Chakra cost:50(drains 20 more chakra per turn)
    Damage:90

    Description : This jutsu is a very famous jutsu said to be used by hashrama when he fought madara and the kyuubi. This jutsu is forbidden i rank due too the ravaging and destruction that the giants cause. So in this jutsu the user chains 8 handseals after which 2 giants, Vita and Orcus instantly emerge.They are about 25 metres tall and have a devlish personality.They dont have the brain too talk normally but they can comprehend basic commands.

    Vita is a thin giant and is very agile and uses both his hands and legs in combat very effectively and also carries a Halberd in his right hand along with a circular shield in his left hand(both made of wood).Orcus on the other hand is a well built giant and uses a sledgehammer(made of wood) as a weapon and causes a huge amount of destruction.They obey their masters command at all times and in no way can they hurt their summoner,but the opponent whom they consider as enemy feel hell.
    Restrictions:

    *can be used only once per battle
    *no mokuton jutsus while the giants are on the field(but jutsus that are already active are not effected)
    *they poof away after 4 turns
    *they can protect the user from S rank attacks only once (one giant can protect once only and then he is destroyed)
    *they can destroy defensive doton jutsus upto B rank due to their brute strength
    *they posses extreme strength and are capable too severely damage an
    opponent if they connect a hit (they are giants )
    *the giants are not capable of performing any jutsu except ,forming normal wooden weapons like swords,spears,warhammers,made from wood no other weapons beside these three can be formed by them
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha


    Edit the highlighted section as they wouldn't be able to defend against all elemental S rank techniques, lightning can destroy with wood with ease and their size would also limit their speed
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-01-2010 at 05:33 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Note: I am only resubmiting Elder Kyu because I presume since you never had any problems with the other 2 that those are approved.
    Summoning: Elder Kyu (Kchuysei: Kyu-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Kyu.Kyu has the the ability of advanced speed which is equivalent to the speed of lee without weights.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner,he merges with the users legs, for the rest of the battle. Once merged the user has the ability to have speed of lee without weights.(although he gets a -2 damage each turn)
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle

    ~Declined~
    Chimpanzee ultimate elder form (chimpu kyuukyoku senpai ninmenjuushin)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user has has summoned and merged with all 3 elders- Kyu-Uky-Oku (which forms the name) the user will enter the chimpanzees ultimate ancient form that increases the users chakra flow and enhances it.The users hair will instantly grow long,spiky,solid and turn silver.While in this form the user will gain the speed faster of lee without weights and tremendous strength (+15 to tai/ken).Though if the user didnt used the elders abilities before activating this than he loses them because you can not use the abilities in this form as the elders are focused on enhancement of the users chakra.
    *mUst be a chimpanzee user and taught ONLY by mugen
    *Must be merged with all 3 elders that are summoned individually at a individual cost of chakra.(in all to preform this it will be 40+40+40+50=170 chakra) + each elder must be summoned on a individual turn making a total of 4 turns to activate this.(3 turns to summon and 1 to activate,unless delayed even more)
    *May only be activated once and last for 4 turns.If the user does not win on the 4rth turn,then the battle will end automatically with the user drained out of energy.

    ~Declined~ Extremely OP
    Manslayer style (Battossai ryu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will convince himself that his life is meaningless and not important.After that his eyes will become sharp and he will see everyone who is in his way as a enemy.This is dangerous style and can not be used around allies.This needs one full turn to activate.During that turn the user must only make offensive moves so that he rises his aggression.
    *lasts 5 turns once activated
    *Must be taught by Mugen

    ~Declined~
    Manslayer style: three blade attack (Battossai ryu: sa)
    Rank: B
    Type: attack
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user once activates the man slayer style will put chakra in his sword and draw his sword at great speed,and also doing 2 slashes after that making 3 chakra blades attack the opponent.However 2 of them will attack him at both his sides and one to the front.
    *Must be taught by Mugen


    Manslayer style: shadow sword (Battossai ryu: kage katana)
    Rank: B
    Type: attack
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user once activates the man slayer style will put chakra in his sword and than create a image to his opponent as if he was slashing and while the opponent is blocking that one the user attacks in the blind spot with his real sword and hands.
    *Must be taught by Mugen

    ~Last two declined~ Main style isn't approved
    Note: I am only resubmiting Elder Kyu because I presume since you never had any problems with the other 2 that those are approved.
    Summoning: Elder Kyu (Kchuysei: Kyu-sama )
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on his tattoo the user will summon one of the 3 chimpanzee elders- Kyu.Kyu has no ability,but he has a lot of chakra.Unlike many chimpanzees his age he is small,he is only the height of a human arm.Like all of the elders he has the ability to merge with the summoner,he merges with the users legs, for the rest of the battle. Once merged,kyu shares his chakra with the user and all the jutsus preformed by the user has a -15 chakra requirement.
    *May only be summoned once and merged once per battle


    Chimpanzee ultimate elder form (chimpu kyuukyoku senpai ninmenjuushin)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user has has summoned and merged with all 3 elders- Kyu-Uky-Oku (which forms the name) the user will enter the chimpanzees ultimate ancient form that increases the users chakra flow and enhances it.The users hair will instantly grow long,spiky,solid and turn silver.While in this form the user will gain tremendous strength (+15 to tai/ken).Also the user gains a +2 bonus of earth and once per battle the user can punch the ground and cause a huge S-ranks tremble through the whole field.(-10 to user).Though if the user didnt use the elders abilities before activating this than he loses them because you can not use the abilities in this form as the elders are focused on enhancement of the users chakra.
    *must be a chimpanzee user and taught ONLY by mugen
    *Must be merged with all 3 elders that are summoned individually at a individual cost of chakra.(in all to preform this it will be 40+40+40+50=170 chakra) + each elder must be summoned on a individual turn making a total of 4 turns to activate this.(3 turns to summon and 1 to activate,unless delayed even more)
    *May only be activated once and last for 4 turns.If the user does not win on the 4rth turn,then the battle will end automatically with the user drained out of energy.


    Manslayer style (Battossai ryu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will convince himself that his life is meaningless and not important.After that his eyes will become sharp and he will see everyone who is in his way as a enemy.This is dangerous style and can not be used around allies.This needs one full turn to activate.During that turn the user must only make defensive moves so that he rises his aggression towards the opponent(s).
    *lasts 4 turns once activated
    *Must be taught by Mugen


    Manslayer style: three blade attack (Battossai ryu: sa)
    Rank: B
    Type: attack
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user once activates the man slayer style will put chakra in his sword and draw his sword at great speed,and also doing 2 slashes after that making 3 chakra blades attack the opponent.However 2 of them will attack him at both his sides and one to the front.
    *Must be taught by Mugen


    Manslayer style: shadow sword (Battossai ryu: kage katana)
    Rank: B
    Type: attack
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: the user once activates the man slayer style will put chakra in his sword and than create a image to his opponent as if he was slashing and while the opponent is blocking that one the user attacks in the blind spot with his real sword and hands.
    *Must be taught by Mugen


    ~Leaving for rag~
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 12-01-2010 at 05:34 PM.

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