Page 122 of 292 « First ... 2272112118119120121122123124125126132172222 ... Last»
Results 2,421 to 2,440 of 5836
  1. #2421
    Senior Member Passion's Avatar
    Status
    Passion is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Posts
    15,707
    Avoiding responsibilities.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    This week starts with new name for old approved jutsu Called Dragon Somerault

    ( Taijutsu: Doragon Tonbogaeri ) - Hand to hand combat: Dragon Somersault
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: 55
    Description: User encases own feet with chakra and literally sprints with huge speed at opponent and jumps in air when opponent is nearby. When the user has jumped user will land on the opponent's shoulders while flexing own muscles on feet and perform spinning somersault backwards, landing hit on opponent's chin that's powerful enough to break opponent's jaws. The downside of this technique is that user will lose 1/2 speed on running and any movement done with feet for 3 turns.
    Note:
    - Can be only used once


    New name and it's depowered:

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Ago Yakusuru ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Jaw Crusher
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: 45
    Description: User encases own feet with chakra and literally sprints with huge speed at opponent and jumps in air when opponent is nearby. When the user has jumped user will land on the opponent's shoulders while preparing the muscles in user's own feet and perform spinning somersault backwards, landing hit on opponent's chin that's powerful enough to break opponent's jaws. The downside of this technique is that user will lose 1/2 speed on running and any movement done with feet for one turn.
    Note:
    - Can be only used once


    ~ Approved ~

    Two new jutsus:

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Sugoi Keru Saiten ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Great Kick Festival
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Close
    Chakra cost: 15 ( + 20 if used with higher speed )
    Damage points 60 ( + 10 if used with higher speed. - 10/15 to user )
    Description: User encases feet with chakra after he/she has achieved atleast 2nd gate's speed and jumps in air, at opponent. While being in front of opponent user will start kicking with great speed and deliver multiple kicks at the chest area of opponent. From the view of opponent it seems as if user would have multiple legs due the speed of kicks that land. After using this jutsu user suffers little damage and strain on legs.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once per battle
    - Requires speed of 2nd gate
    - User cannot run or use taijutsu at the same turn.


    ~ meh, Approved ~

    ( Doton: Haka no Utsusemi ) - Earth release: Graveyard of Emptiness
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close - Short
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 100 ( - Kills user )
    Description: Graveyard of Emptiness is a suicide move that begins by someone charging their earth chakra all around body and ground around him/her. After doing so the user's body will start to partially into stone as earth around him/her raises and it is being dragged towards the user who is the center of this jutsu. The stone coming at user will start compressing and it covers user and crush other people/animals that are around him/her. At the end of the jutsu stone that was covering the user is no longer visible as layer on top of him/her but user's whole body has been converged into stone, leaving behind stone statue that turns into dust.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once per battle
    - Automatically counts as one kill on the biography that's using this jutsu.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Hakaizu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Destruction Spin
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Close - Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: Black-Leg taijutsu technique which is designed for Taijutsu user against weapon fighter. The technique is used in a way where user first covers his/her feet in chakra. Then if this jutsu is used for defense user will quickly make 360 degree spin to gather up strength. When the spin ends user performs a kick done with the heel part of user's foot. Once the enemy attacks with weapon ( no matter if it's blunt or sharp ) the user will deliver the kick on its side, breaking it ( If not indestructible weapon ), Causing damage to it ( Nearly indestructible ) or kick it out of opponent's grasp with the strength of kick ( For indestructible weapons ). If the jutsu is used for attacking it'll be strong enough to break bones or dislocate limbs.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once
    - Cannot use Genjutsu or Kenjutsu on the turn afterwards
    - Defensive version will kick the sword/weapon out of its course.

    ~ I doubt you can, while spinning, be accurate enough to kick the edge of a descending sword, and then not be affected by it due to "chakra layer" ~

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Kikku Kōsu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Kick Course
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Charka cost: 15 ( - 5 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to leg taijutsu )
    Description: Simple technique that's used by Black-Leg Taijutsu experts. Idea of this jutsu is constant chakra circulation to user's feet, allowing user to deal attacks with feet faster and harder. While having this activated user loses ability to use hand taijutsu but user's hands can still be used for Kenjutsu/Handstanding and other stuff like that.
    Note:
    - Stays with user whole battle
    - Consumes chakra every turn
    - No hand taijutsu can be used while this jutsu is activated.


    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-17-2010 at 09:10 AM.

  2. #2422
    Lord of Kaos's Avatar
    Status
    Lord of Kaos is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Posts
    10,055
    Location
    Not sure yet
    ...
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Jaguar Fusion Mode(Jagā yūgō mōdo)
    RAnk: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Type: supplementry
    Chakra cost:50(-10 chakra per turn)
    Damage: N/a
    Description: This is a secret technique created by jaguar elders that allows the human allies of the jaguars to gain their power. Only a few people know this technique but it can be used with any jaguar. The user makes 5 hand seals and places his hand on a jaguar he summoned earlyer in the battle. Then the jaguars essence and body becomes absobed by the user of the jutsu. The user gains a jaguar like looks; his nails turn into claws, his legs & arms become more muscular, he grows a little fur(the same color as the jaguar used) and gains cheek marks that look like narutos:

    This transformation grats the user increased abilitys like: speed, power and stronger ninjutsu. The ammount of power gained depends on the power of the jaguar the user fused with:
    S-rank Jaguars: +15 Taijutsu, 2nd gate speed, +10 non-elemental ninjutsu and +5 the jutsu of the elements the jaguar can use
    A-rank Jaguars: +10 taijutsu, 1st gate speed, +5 non-elemental ninjutsu
    B-ran and Below jaguars,: +5 taijutsu
    If used with an A-rank or below jaguar this mode lasts 4 turns, if used with a S-rank or higher rank jaguar it lasts 3 turns. When this mode ends the user is left tired and weakened. So after this mode ends the user cannot use A-rank or higher jutsu for 2 turns and can only use 1 jutsu on the turn after this mode ends. Also the users taijutsu deal -5 damage for the rest of the battle because the user is weakened.
    *can only be used once per battle

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-17-2010 at 09:10 AM.

  3. #2423
    Kirabi's Avatar
    Status
    Kirabi is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Posts
    16,140
    Location
    Triple D, TX
    Weegee Death Stare.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Suiton| Shinsui Ginkou- (Water Release| Flood Banks)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user preforms 5 handseals and then instantly, This jutsu, when activated, causes massive geysers of superheated water to erupt from the ground, flooding the entire area. Any living thing caught by the flood will be boiled alive. The flood strength itself equals that of a normal and natural flood, sweeping away the opponent while massively burning him/her.

    ~ Similar technique exists ~

    Suiton| Hydratama- (Water Release| Hydra Bullet)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user makes a string of hand seals and creates a jutsu much like a Water Dragon Jutsu but on a higher scale of 8 Dragons at once. because of the chakra control need to control each of theses at once. the user can only create one other technique this turn.
    (Usable Once)
    (No Water Source Needed)

    ~ Same as above ~

    Fuuton| Washi no Kakou (Wind Release| Descent of the Eagle)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:After the required hand seals are perform the user utilizes their mastery of Wind Release techniques to create a large low pressure column around their intended target. After the low pressure area is created the pressure difference in the atmosphere attempts to fill the void that the technique has left. This results in a powerful, yet artificial, downburst that crashes down and expands outward on the intended target with a force that could level buildings and trees alike. While this technique would be incredibly powerful against a single target, the preparation time combined with the relatively sluggish targeting system makes this technique more suited for targeting enemy bases and large immobile groups. Since this technique utilizes natural wind, as opposed to Wind Chakra, this technique is largely unaffected by Fire Release techniques. When used in a humid area or over water this technique has the ability to randomly affect the weather. This may result in creating a storm artificially or from prematurely ending a storm that is already raging.
    (Usable Once)
    (No Wind Chakra Next Turn)

    ~ Already tried by someone and Declined, told not to resubmit ~

    Custom Weapon (dropping Disk Armor)

    ‡Chi-Mentsu-Hime - Goddess of 1000 Faces‡
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (+10 to maintain form of a copied weapon)
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    "She is never satisfied with her appearance and her true form has rarely been seen by those who don't wield her. She causes men to double take to be sure they have their weapon at hand. But in the same instant, she doesn't hesitate to smite those who oppose her by their own blade, using her wickedness to copy the abilities and looks of other weapons and allowing her owner to fight on equal terms..."

    Chi-Mentsu-Hime is a unique weapon that changes form to whatever weapon the user desires. and has the ability to change on a whim, this weapon is very versatile in the thick of battle.
    When fighting another opponent once per battle the user is able to use the weapons ability to copy the opponent's weapon down to every ability, but won't be able to use any jutsu accompanied by the opponent's weapon as Chi-Mentsu-Hime becomes only a mere copy of the original.
    Abilities:
    - Able to transform into any weapon the user desires.
    - May copy an opponent's weapon's abilities and form. (last a max of 5 turns afterwards she reverts to a normal sword for the rest of battle.)

    ~ Declined, DO NOT RESUBMIT ! ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-17-2010 at 09:12 AM.

  4. #2424
    Kid Ace2392's Avatar
    Status
    Kid Ace2392 is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Posts
    2,576
    Location
    anywhere, nowhere.....everywhere
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shouten Yaiba) Death Blade
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The shouten yaiba is a very sharp sword that is made with thin Metal .But even though the sword is thin it is very strong and very sharp. The sword speical ability is that the sword can turn from liquid to solid at the users well. And if the user send chakra through the sowrd handle the black tape around the sword handle can be use as a chain that lets the user whip around the sword.

    Note: the black tape can only reach out to short-mid range not long range.
    Note: They are 5 shouten yaiba in the world
    Note: can only get the sword from Kid ace2392



    ~ Liquid to solid ? No. ~




    (Subeta gigei:Fumetsu fenikkusu) Sword Art: Undying Phoenix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage: 80
    Descripton: The user will gather element chakra into his hand that is not holding the sword. Then he will rub his index and middle finger on the blade making the blade glow the color of the element. Then he will swing the blade downwards sending a huge bird shape blast that will fly to the opponet in amazing speed of the first gate.
    Note:No hand signs required but the user do have to take 1 whole turn to gather his element chakra.
    Note:The user cant use that element for three turns.
    Note:Have to wait five turns to use jutsu again
    Note: Only usable 3 times per battle.
    Note: Only can be used with Shouten Yaiba
    Can only be taught by kid ace2392

    ~ Get the sword approved first ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-17-2010 at 09:12 AM.

  5. #2425
    Divine Palm Essence's Avatar
    Status
    Essence is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Posts
    4,557
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Buki:Kaguzuchi)-Weapon: God of the Flame
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:A
    RangeShort
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user summons to twin red daggers into their hands. the user can focus fire chakra into the blade making it able to cut a slice through things better. if the user has fire chakra into the blade and cuts an opponents limb off, the fire will wield the seal shut to stop it from bleeding. Once the blade makes contact with the opponents skin it leaves second degree burns. The user can Absorb fire jutsu up to C-rank.
    The Daggers:

    Restrictions:
    (Can only be summoned once per battle)
    (you can only focus fire chakra into the sword 3 times per battle and it lasts 2 turns each time)
    (You can only absorb Fire chakra twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Karin)

    ~ Too similar to Kagutsuchi ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-17-2010 at 09:13 AM.

  6. #2426
    Head of D.U.M.B Emperor's Avatar
    Status
    Emperor is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Posts
    14,062
    Location
    Beyond the Fourth Wall.
    I'm every kind of demon, kid.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~ Thread Opened ~
     
         

  7. #2427
    Master Blader Gin-Sama's Avatar
    Status
    Gin-Sama is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    May 2010
    Posts
    4,740
    Location
    Wants kenjutsu Figth PM me ^^
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Gin-Sama View Post
    Summoning Animal: Kangaroo (Kangaru)
    Scroll Owner: Gin-Sama
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Roger Sr.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Roger Jr.

    Summoning Jutsu: Kangaroo Roger Sr. (Kuchiyose :kangaru Roger Sr.)
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user bites their thumb and wipes it on His hand and summon a Kangaroo King Roger Sr. Roger Sr. is an Expert in Taijutsu. his the father of Roger Jr (obviously) hes punch is like Tsunade. He has a fire and Wind Element He can use fire and wind Jutsu A-rank Below but still need hand seal.
    He has a large foot that can make a crater,small earthquake or even a fissure
    hes size is like Gamabunta. He use hopping as a means of locomotion. which is the act of self-propulsion. has many manifestations, including running, jumping and flying not totally flying like a bird is like a long jump..
    Note
    Can only be summoned Twice per battle.
    Lasts 4 turns once summoned.
    Can only
    ~ No, he does not have a punch like Tsunade, and he does not have such a big foot. ~
    Summoning Animal: Kangaroo (Kangaru)
    Scroll Owner: Gin-Sama
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Roger Sr.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Roger Jr.

    Summoning Jutsu: Kangaroo Roger Sr. (Kuchiyose :kangaru Roger Sr.)
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user bites their thumb and wipes it on His hand and summon a Kangaroo King Roger Sr. Roger Sr. is an Expert in Taijutsu. his the father of Roger Jr (obviously) He has a fire and Wind Element He can use fire and wind Jutsu A-rank Below but still need hand seal.
    He can slum hes foot that can make a crater,small earthquake or even a fissure by concentrating his chakra in his feet, and he can Extent his tail to attack or to bind the enemy up to Mid range. hes size is like Gamabunta. He use hopping as a means of locomotion. which is the act of self-propulsion. has many manifestations, including running, jumping and flying not totally flying like a bird is like a long jump..
    Note:
    • Can only be summoned Twice per battle.
    • Lasts 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can only use by Gin


    ~ Un-understandable ~

    Lightning Style - Heavens Descent Ranging Dragons
    Raiton - Hebunzu kōka doragon haka
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user's will make an 6 hand sign and then send a lightning chakra on the thunderclouds. the 5 lightning dragons head forms. and the user can manipulate it. either he can direct it to 5 opponents or he can also direct to one opponent. if he direct to one direction its too deadly and it make a big craters in the ground.
    Note:
    • Can only be use if there's a thunder clouds
    • if the user use it in short range he will be dead
    • Can be used only Twice per battle
    • Can only use by Gin


    ~ Restrict it ~

    Earth Style - Pillar torch
    Doton - Hashira Tōchi
    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: the user's will make an 3 hand sign and then slam his hands into the ground. and the 6 pillar torch will appears. 6 big pillars 1 meter circle size and the high is 10 meters and the above of it is a fire like a torch that can make Thunder clouds in the battle field. this pillars you can control it how you use..
    Note:
    • Can use this pillar for prison
    • Can use this pillar for blocking the B rank below attack
    • Thunder clouds will be created in next turn
    • Can be used only Twice per battle
    • Can only use by Gin


    ~ Bad description ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 08:22 AM.

  8. #2428
    Senior Member Passion's Avatar
    Status
    Passion is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Posts
    15,707
    Avoiding responsibilities.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nnoitra-Sama View Post
    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Hakaizu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Destruction Spin
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Close - Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: Black-Leg taijutsu technique which is designed for Taijutsu user against weapon fighter. The technique is used in a way where user first covers his/her feet in chakra. Then if this jutsu is used for defense user will quickly make 360 degree spin to gather up strength. When the spin ends user performs a kick done with the heel part of user's foot. Once the enemy attacks with weapon ( no matter if it's blunt or sharp ) the user will deliver the kick on its side, breaking it ( If not indestructible weapon ), Causing damage to it ( Nearly indestructible ) or kick it out of opponent's grasp with the strength of kick ( For indestructible weapons ). If the jutsu is used for attacking it'll be strong enough to break bones or dislocate limbs.
    Note:
    - Can be used only twice
    - Cannot use Genjutsu or Kenjutsu on the two turns afterwards
    - Defensive version will kick the sword/weapon out of its course.

    ~ I doubt you can, while spinning, be accurate enough to kick the edge of a descending sword, and then not be affected by it due to "chakra layer" ~

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Kikku Kōsu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Kick Course
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Charka cost: 15 ( - 5 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to leg taijutsu )
    Description: Simple technique that's used by Black-Leg Taijutsu experts. Idea of this jutsu is constant chakra circulation to user's feet, allowing user to deal attacks with feet faster and harder. While having this activated user loses ability to use hand taijutsu but user's hands can still be used for Kenjutsu/Handstanding and other stuff like that.
    Note:
    - Stays with user whole battle
    - Consumes chakra every turn
    - No hand taijutsu can be used while this jutsu is activated.


    ~ Approved ~
    This weeks:

    ( Raiton: Saigo Hibana ) - Lightning release: Final Spark
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 100 ( - severely damages user, preventing from fighting )
    Description: Final Spark is a double edged lightning release jutsu. It begins with user drawing all his/her lightning chakra out and by using it user can release the chakra in form of thunder and travel on it. The jutsu can be used to released five straight lightning bolts that user can travel with opponent, pummeling him/her through various obstacles that they might encounter and shock him/her while at it. After using this jutsu the user and opponent will stop on ground while user's body releases steam/smoke and he/she suffers a shock similar to Kirin. The speed of the traveling on lightning bolt is 1/4 of the natural lightning's speed and both user + opponent suffer damage from it. Moving on straight lightning bolts is simple; User must release a bolt towards the direction where he/she wants to travel.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once
    - Severely damages user
    - No other jutsus can be used afterwards.


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    And resubmitting Destruction spin with the ability to kick blunt type away from its side.

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Hakaizu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Destruction Spin
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive - Defensive
    Range: Close - Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: Black-Leg taijutsu technique which is designed for Taijutsu user against weapon fighter. The technique is used in a way where user first covers his/her feet in chakra. Then if this jutsu is used for defense user will quickly make 360 degree spin to gather up strength. When the spin ends user performs a kick done with the heel part of user's foot. Once the enemy attacks with blunt weapon the user will deliver the kick on its side, breaking it ( If not indestructible weapon ), Causing damage to it ( Nearly indestructible ) or kick it out of opponent's grasp with the strength of kick ( For indestructible weapons ). If the jutsu is used for attacking it'll be strong enough to break bones or dislocate limbs.
    Note:
    - Can be used only once
    - Cannot use Genjutsu or Kenjutsu on the turn afterwards
    - Defensive version will kick the blunt type weapon out of its course.


    ~ Approved ~

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Hazumu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Dodge Haze
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary - Defense
    Range: Short - Close
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Dodge Haze is a special jutsu that only the ones that have fully mastered Black-Leg taijutsu and are using Kick Course can use. This jutsu works by user using the chakra boosted legs to make fast sidesteps and/or leans to avoid incoming projectile/taijutsu/weapon attacks. After avoiding the attacks user can attack with another jutsu, giving him/her the upperhand.
    Note:
    - Can be used only twice
    - Must wait three turns before using it again.


    ~ Approved. No dodging any sort of nin,gen, or elemental jutsu though ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 08:25 AM.

  9. #2429
    Daemon's Avatar
    Status
    Daemon is offline
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Posts
    15,998
    Location
    A place
    Above the law.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton|Ryuuki Gufuu)- Wind Release|Rising Typhoon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra into the air. Then the user causes it to rotate around the opponent causing a small typhoon to be formed around them while they are in the eye of the typhoon. the user thins out the wind on the inside of the typhoon to make slicing winds to slice them in all directions. If this jutsu is used in a dusty place or sandy place the sand will go up in the wind blocking the users vision of the opponent.
    (Can only be used twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ Similar technique exists ~

    (Nousatsu Kenjutsu|Vorutekkusu)- Enchanted Sword Technique|Vortex
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user focuses chakra into the tip of their blade(s). The user the begins to spin in a counterclockwise direction and they hold their sword(s) outward. The user then releases the chakra sending a burst from the tip of the sword capable of slicing clean through a boulder.
    (Can only be used three times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ Approved ~

    (Nousatsu Kenjutsu|Rasuto Arukanamu)- Enchanted Sword Technique|Last Arcanum
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The focuses a massive amount of chakra into their blades then they deliver A series off three slashes to the opponents body. The strikes cannot cause any instant death injuries but it can leave deep cuts in the opponents skin. (series of Strikes: 1 Horizontally across the waste,1 Diagonally across the chest,and 1 Vertically down the chest.)
    (Can only be used three times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ O_o Approved ~

    (Nousatsu Kenjutsu|Ragunaroku)- Enchanted Sword Technique|Ragnarok
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:10
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user releases a burst of lightning chakra from their blade that emits a flash from the sword capable of blinding the opponent for about 20 seconds.
    (Can only be used three times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ Similar technique exists ~

    (Nousatsu Kenjutsu|Bāsaku)- Enchanted Sword Technique|Berserk
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: the user focuses a very massive chakra into their blade(s) then release a 9 hit combo on the opponent that comprises of a series of slices focusing on the torso and rib cage. This move can be done without adding chakra to the blades but the chakra gives it more effective damage
    (Can only be used three times per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    ~ Approved o_O ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 08:19 AM.

  10. #2430
    Missing-nin HiddenShadowNinja's Avatar
    Status
    HiddenShadowNinja is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Posts
    9,428
    Location
    I've gone off to find myself. If I'm not here by the time I get back...let me know....O.o
    This user has no status.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by HiddenShadowNinja View Post

    (Sugi za Saigen)- Past the limits
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user takes the idea and philosophy of the Futae No Kiwami (Mastery of the Two Layers) and the Toa-a-tae (Double Layer Limit) taijutsu techniques and applies them to ninjutsu. He creates two shockwaves of chakra pushed out of his palms in quick succession. The first blow destroys the targets natural resistance while the second instantaneously deals the damage. As the Double layer limit is able to pulverize anything within a small raidus, this does the same in a 180 degree angle infront of the user. This jutsu is strong enough to shatter even Kaguya bones.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja's bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *This jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    *Must wait at least 4 turns after the first use to use it again
    *For the first turn after usage the user may not use any taijutsu involving his arms, and if he does a normal Futae No Kiwami attack with his arms at any point during the rest of the battle it will break whatever part of the arm he did the attack with. If it was a punch it will break his hand, rendering him incapable of any punch-related taijutsu the rest of the battle and making the user take -5 damage for every jutsu he uses that requires handsigns.

    ~ Kaguya Bone ? Hmm...Either de-power it or restrict it more ~
    1)
    (Sugi za Saigen)- Past the limits
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user takes the idea and philosophy of the Futae No Kiwami (Mastery of the Two Layers) and the Toa-a-tae (Double Layer Limit) taijutsu techniques and applies them to ninjutsu. He creates two shockwaves of chakra pushed out of his palms in quick succession. The first blow destroys the targets natural resistance while the second instantaneously deals the damage. As the Double layer limit is able to pulverize anything within a small raidus, this does the same in a 180 degree angle infront of the user. This jutsu is strong enough to fracture even Kaguya bones.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja's bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *This jutsu can only be used twice per battle
    *Must wait at least 4 turns after the first use to use it again
    *For the first turn after usage the user may not use any taijutsu involving his arms, and if he does a normal Futae No Kiwami attack with his arms at any point during the rest of the battle it will break whatever part of the arm he did the attack with. If it was a punch it will break his hand, rendering him incapable of any punch-related taijutsu the rest of the battle and making the user take -5 damage for every jutsu he uses that requires handsigns.

    Changed shattering Kaguya bones to only fracturing, de-powering it as asked.

    2)
    (Taijutsu: Chika Senmetsu)-Underground Annihilation
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage: 80 (40 to user)
    Description: The user combines the ideas and practices of a Futae No Kiwami (Mastery of the Two Layers) and Toa-a-tae (Double Layer Limit) and stomps on the ground. This creates a 360 degree crater around the point of impact that destroys the earth and anything in it around the user up to mid range. The earth turns to dust, and should a person be underground in range he will be left will all his bones broken. This jutsu is highly dangerous to the user as well however as this amount of power being transferred through the users leg causes it to break as well. This can also be done with a punch, with the same results and breaking the users arm. The punch is even more dangerous however as it will be difficult for the user to make handsigns.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja's bios can use/teach this jutsu
    *This jutsu can only be used up to four times per battle (once per leg and once per arm)
    *If done with a leg speed will be reduced by 1 rank, and any high-speed movements will cause the user an additional 20 damage.
    *If done with a punch the user will take an additional 20 damage each time he needs to make handsigns

    3)
    (Kuchiyose: Heibi of za Kage Dageki)Summoning: Snakes of the shadow strike
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid (can travel to long)
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: These snakes are very small and slender, very difficult to see. Their main purpose is biting the opponent and injecting their special venom into them. This venom numbs the part of the body that was bitten. For example if he bites a hand, the opponent won't be able to do handsigns as his one hand is numb. Matsu can also be used in conjunction with the Hidden Shadow Snake Hands/ Multiple Hidden Shadow Snake Hands jutsu for quick striking and blending in with the other snakes.
    *Only usable by HiddenShadowNinja
    *Must be able to summon snakes
    *Lasts up to 6 turns and only 5 can be summoned at once.
    *Only 1 body part can be numbed at a time,no matter how many places are bitten, and the numbing affect only lasts 1 turn each time.
    *For opponents in mid range it takes them 1 full turn to travel to them on the ground (since he's of small size)(He will be at their location at the start of the turn after travel). For opponents in long range it takes them 2 full turns to travel to them.(Same thing, he will be at their location at the start of the turn after the 2 turns of travel)

    and re-submitting this

    (Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 1-Venomous)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
    *The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
    *The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns


    adding an extra effect

    4)
    (Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 1-Venomous)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns) In many stories Snakes have an alluring quality and often use this charm to draw things to them and tempt them. Even though it isn't genjutsu, this venom has almost a genjutsu type effect on people. Once infected by the venom the targets mind is affected by this lure (because of the venom-tainted blood flowing to the brain) and they won't be able to get out of short-range of the user as they will be unknowingly drawn to the source of the poison that infected them.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
    *The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
    *After this jutsu ends the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
    *The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

    ~Declined~ They are all OP
     
         
    Last edited by Ragnaroc; 09-21-2010 at 05:38 AM.

  11. #2431
    Izumō's Avatar
    Status
    Izumō is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Posts
    19,158
    Location
    Crazy Fool that Gang Bang, EST 19XX and Stay Lace Up
    #BlackFlag #MachineGunKelly
    #Dub-O #Slim #LaceUp #EST19XX
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose:Ninja Tou)Summoning:Ninja Weapons
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20(+20 if summoning opponent's weapon(s))
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user carriers a scroll to summon weapons of his choice, Shurikens, Kunais, Flash Bombs, Smoke Bombs and Swords. All he has to do is touch the seal which has the name of the weapon(s) he wants to summon. The summoning scroll can also be used to summon an opponents weapon(s) to his hand, just by touch whatever seal has the name of the weapon that is being thrown at him. This doesn't apply to special or custom weapons.

    Note to the mod who is checking this. This contract is my personal weapons summoning and the restrictions for summoning say I can make one weapons summoning contract and this is the contract that I will be summoning weapons with expect my custom sword at the bottom which will be on my hip.
    ~ Kindly ask a mod before you assume some crap like this. One weapons summoning means one custom weapon. It does not mean having random scrolls. Remove either one of these two and resubmit ~

    (Inu Nendo)Dog Clay
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Dog Clay is a katana sword. The swpord hilt is shaped into a dog and the color of the handle is white like Deidara's clay with four black diamonds on each side. On the blade it has the Uchiha crest on each side. The user wears the sword on his right hip. The sword can channel their lightning chakra through the blade, Ths user can also channel Chidori and Lightning Fang through the blade. This sword was only made for Deidara Nara and the sword will return to him by the him whistling.

    -When the user channels Chidori it will cost the same amount of chakra but with a added 25.
    -When channeling Lightning Fang through the blade it will be the same amount of chakra but with a added 20.
    -When ever the user channels one of this attacks the user can't channel their lightning chakra through the blade for 4 turns.
    -When the user channels their lightning chakra their the blade the amount of chakra is 15.
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 08:24 AM.

  12. #2432
    Nos Venerabilem KeotsuEclipse's Avatar
    Status
    KeotsuEclipse is online now
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Posts
    8,591
    This user has no status.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by KeotsuEclipse View Post
    (Kendou: Mugen Ichi-Katana kata – Fukisoku Narabi) Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style – Disorderly Line
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will spin the sword in their hand in a circular manner which causes them to knock the swords around them into the air. By continuing to spin the sword in the user’s hand, the user can hit the other swords as they are in the air, which makes them stay afloat. A small amount of wind chakra is channeled inside the user’s blade to help achieve this. This technique allows the user to keep ten swords afloat around him in the air, allowing both a powerful defense and an overwhelming attack, depending on how the user decides to use the floating blades. Coming into close range, into the range of the swords, is ill-advised because the opponent would be slashed to shreds do to the high speed needed to keep all the swords afloat, and thus, the swords themselves are moving quickly around the user.
    *Note: Must have the Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style active.
    *Note: Usable only by Musashibo, Akiza, and KeotsuEclipse.
    *Note: Only Musashibo is allowed to teach this move.
    *Note: Only usable twice per battle.
    *Note: If two swords are used the amount of swords able to be kept in the air by the user doubles to twenty.
    *Note: May not be used again for three turns after first activation.
    *Note: The swords remain in the air as long as the user works to keep them there, though this keeps the user from using handseals.
    *Note: The swords in this technique may be used to activate other Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style techniques.

    Mifune using Disorderly Line in the air.



    (Kamei Gigei: Shinkirou Ken) Command Art: Mirage Blade
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Unlike other Kenjutsu Shockwaves which are generally large, Mirage Blade is a small shockwave that’s size is the same as the blade length of the sword used to launch it. Sacrificing power for speed and quantity, Mirage Blade travels at a speed traceable only by 2 Tome Sharingan users and above – experienced Shinobi can also track this attack without a Doujutsu. A large amount of chakra is focused inside the blade in a massive wave. Though the chakra should pour out of the user’s sword, a shell of chakra formed around the blade causes the chakra to rebound infinitely inside the actual blade of the sword. When the user slashes their blade it releases some of this chakra in a white, rippling shockwave; thus the name Mirage Blade. This attack passes through physical objects (such as steel or buildings), but is stopped by energy attacks (such as fire, lightning, or chakra). If this attack hits the opponent, they will feel the physical impact of the attack, despite the shockwave being pure chakra.
    *Three shockwaves can be fired per use.
    *This attack does 40 damage to the opponent’s health and the other 20 points is subtracted from their chakra total.
    *Useable three times per battle, though if the user does not launch all three shockwaves in one turn the shockwaves can be launched at a later time; no more than 9 shockwaves via this technique may be used in a battle.
    *Cannot be used on consecutive turns.
    *Shockwave is traceable by people with 2-tome or higher Sharingan, or by S-rank and above ninja.
    *Useable and taught by Keotsu only.




    (Kamei Gigei: Hazumi Danmaku) Command Art: Ricochet Barrage
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage: 120 (-60 to user)
    Description: At first appearing as a larger, visible Mirage Blade, Ricochet Blade fires a powerful chakra wave with each swing of the user’s sword. The shockwaves from this attack do not dissipate on contact and actually rebound to their point of origin (the user) once they make contact with a solid object. The true power of this technique comes out after a few shockwaves have started to rebound: by striking the shockwaves with their sword the user can cause the shockwaves to rebound off the sword and back outward as an attack again. By doing this, they have strengthen the shockwave because slashing to reflect the shockwave has added another shockwave to it. If the user can pull off this technique long enough, it is possible to have hundreds of shockwaves flying through the air. The more a shockwave returns to the user and is reflected, the more powerful it becomes, equating to a more difficult shockwave for not only the enemy to block but for the user to rebound.
    *Note: The damage inflicted upon the user from this technique occurs because once the waves have high numbers it would be impossible for the user to reflect them all.
    *Note: If the user uses a second blade with this technique the damage to him/herself is reduced by 20 points.
    *Note: Only two techniques may be used in the turn this technique is used, including this technique.
    *Note: This technique must be the last technique used in the turn in which it occurs.
    *Note: No other Command Arts may be used in the turns immediately before, during or immediately after this technique is used.
    *Note: Only two techniques may be used in the turn following the use of this technique.
    *Note: Useable once per battle.
    *Note: The damage from this technique is not blockable, by either the opponent or the user. The user has the advantage of knowing whether this attack is Mirage blade or not, while an opponent will be caught off-guard by the rebounding shockwaves. Even an opponent that is familiar with the move must quickly try and discern if the move is Ricochet Blade or Mirage Blade.
    *Useable and taught by Keotsu only.




    (Shuuren Kiwa) Training Edge
    Rank: E
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage: 0
    Description: This is a technique generally taught to aspiring swordsman and could be considered the opposite of using wind chakra to lengthen and sharpen a blade. Usually, a Swordmaster or other instructor would use their own chakra to create a small “U” shape around the edges or point of a weapon. The chakra acts as an invisible scabbard on the blade, allowing the students to spar without killing each other or wounding each other past minor bruises and aches caused by the blunt force of the “scabbard” blade making contact. The user activates this technique by extending their hand along a ridge and just letting a small amount of chakra out. This technique is very simple and quick.
    Sorry if I'm not supposed to submit these. I was unsure whether or not I am allowed to have more than five unapproved customs in a thread at one time, even if they weren't submitted in the same week.

    (Kamei Gigei: Gokumonken) Command Art: Prison Gate Sword
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Type: Defense
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: Zero
    Description: This technique utilizes the power of the elements to create a formidable defensive art for the user. While defending to guard against an attack, the user will focus Doton chakra throughout their body, creating a powerful, strong stance that reinforces the user, allowing them to take forces that they would not normally be able to endure. In addition to this, the user runs Suiton chakra through their body at the same time. Using the Doton chakra does allow for a rigidity and strength not accessible through normal means, but the rigidness of the ability would also cause incredible pressure damage upon the weaker points of the user’s stance – the joints. By using the Suiton chakra, they allow their movements to “flow”, like water. This allows the user to use their joints (specifically the knees, shoulders, elbows, not the wrists) as shock absorbers. An example of this would be that if the opponent came falling down from the sky at terminal velocity with an overhead strike, the user would not be able to stand up to this attack normally. By using the Doton chakra, the user creates a firm stance that allows them to guard against the attack provided their blade can stand up to the abuse. The Suiton chakra allows the knees, elbows, and shoulders to bend slighty, compressing, acting almost like hydraulic hinges. When this technique is active, the user is engulfed in a white aura, which gives the user the ability to guard even against intangible (such as Fire, Lightning, or other energies) forms of attack.
    Note: The user can keep this technique active as long as they want, but they cannot move from their current position (excluding small movements to change stances).
    Note: Cannot be used on consecutive turns.
    Note: The user may choose to add Raition chakra to the mix, after absorbing the blow. On the “bounce back” caused by the user returning to their original position (as if the hydraulic hinges were returning to their original positions after the application of pressure is ceased), causing electricity to flow through the user and their sword into the opponent, briefly stunning them and making them susceptible to counterattacks. If the user does this, an additional 20 chakra is added to this jutsu’s cost.
    Note: Useable and taught by Keotsu only.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit. One the earth thing is called the Iron Skin Technique. Two you can't start using two elemental chakra's at the same time like that unless it's a KG, let alone three. Not to mention using elements that are each other weaknesses like water, earth and lightning~

    ~ Leavng all Kenjutsu customs for Cal ~

    (Genjutsu: Bukimi Kyokuchou: Zetsumei) Illusion Technique: Eerie Melody: Death
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user activates this sound based Genjutsu by playing a melody by any means, whether it is by an instrument or by clapping to create a rhythm. As soon as the first beat or note of the rhythm is heard, the opponent(s) are captured in this Genjutsu. Unlike other Genjutsu which affect the brain via the senses to cause illusions, this Genjutsu affects the brain via the senses to rid the opponent of one of their five basic senses: Touch. When caught in this jutsu those captured cannot feel anything. This may seem useless, but it is very useful in that people use touch more than any other sense – pain caused in the feet in addition to the fluid located in the ears helps the human body retain balance while in motion, while the feeling of heat creates the zone of which a human can approach fire, and no farther go in, lest they get burned. Without the sense of touch, these examples and several other things caused by the feeling of touch disappear. This in no way affects those caught in this Genjutsu’s affects ability to use jutsu, but can cause recklessness, disorientation, and a “disconnected” feeling that could make otherwise “harmless” things dangerous – such as clicking your teeth too soon when using Fire Style: Ash Combustion Cloud, as they would be unable to feel the ash being expelled or their teeth clicking together.
    The user must constantly play this melody or rhythm for it to remain in effect and it only lasts one turn. After one turn, the user must pay an additional 20 chakra per turn that they wish to keep the affects of this jutsu active.
    Note: The user cannot move while using this jutsu.
    Note: Only useable twice per battle.


    (Suiton: Suruito ken Suberidai) Water Release: Slip ‘n Slide
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: Zero
    Description: The user focuses a large amount of Suiton chakra and then releases it in a burst from their body, mainly the feet. This burst of chakra from the feet allows the Suiton chakra to move along the ground where it forms one inch of water that is supersaturated with the user’s chakra. This keeps anyone but the user from standing on the water, as since the water is already past its maximum concentration of chakra, it rejects all other attempts for chakra to be imbedded into it. The user can stand on the water by simply manipulating the existing chakra in the water, instead of using more chakra to stand upon it. The water retains its depth, because in the same way a Shinobi uses their chakra to create a barrier and makes their chakra flow with the water to stand upon it, the supersaturation of chakra inside this body of water gives it a type of “surface tension” to help it retain form.

    The main function of this jutsu its that it causes anyone who is moving faster than “normal” speed (Normal being defined as equal terms for both shinobi before a battle begins, when things such as special modes, chakras, or the Eight Inner Gates are factored in) to hydroplane, and thus lose control of their movements and launch in a straight line until they are either launched off the body of water (in which they still have to handle their momentum), or run into something, causing damage. The user is not unaffected by this jutsu, though they do have much more control since they can manipulate the chakra in the water – the user will still hydroplane, but have a way to “slam the breaks”, when they do, to slow them down.


    (Kouryuu/Chokuryuu) AC/DC
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: Zero
    Description: While a Shinobi’s chakra normally runs in a fluid, direct current throughout their entire body much like there blood does, by using the Tiger handseal as a focus point, the user can channel and direct their chakra to alter their chakra flow from a regular flow (Direct Current) to a “burst” flow (Alternating Current), in which the users chakra flows to it’s maximum output, back to minimum output, back to maximum, and etc., though this phenomenon occurs very quickly once this jutsu is activated – several times a second. Switching between AC and DC holds various advantages.

    AC: In alternating current form, the user’s chakra control and efficiency is raised to the absolute max for their rank. Because the chakra does not come in one continuous stream, when creating handseals or using a jutsu there is no lost chakra, as there is no chakra to “leak” out during the time that chakra is being channeled, but not shaped into anything specific. The problem with this, is, that Direct Current is a more “powerful” form of flow and also the natural, powerful flow of chakra inside the body. While in AC form, all jutsu require 10 less chakra, but do 10 less damage, both values (the decrease in chakra cost and the decrease in damage dealt by a jutsu) decreases by 5 each rank (Jutsu require 20 less chakra for Sages, but they also do 20 less damage). Besides this, AC current has many other practical uses, so long as the user understands how AC current works with what they are intending to use it for.

    DC: Direct current form is the “default” form for chakra control in the chakra system. No increase or decrease happens while in this form, and the user is also started out in this form in battle. 25 chakra may be expended to revert back to DC form at any time.

    Note: This jutsu requires only the Tiger handseal for a focal point, but requires several seconds to actually activate so that the change can take place – an instantaneous change in chakra flow would kill the user; either the chakra would go past “maximum output” and destroy the users chakra system, or it would dip below “zero output”, which would kill the user. Therefore, this jutsu is not instanteous, and goes as follows:

    Sannin require 10 seconds to convert their chakra current.
    Kage require 7 seconds to convert their chakra current.
    Sages require only 5 seconds to convert their chakra current.

    Note: This justu cannot be used by anyone under Sannin rank.
    Note: While in AC form, no clones can be created, do to the “pulse” nature of the current making it almost impossible to gauge and capture your chakra in equal amounts to disperse to your clones. Clones made before this technique is used remain unaffected.


    About the jutsu directly about "Besides this, AC current has many other practical uses, so long as the user understands how AC current works with what they are intending to use it for.", I do have a few other ideas about how this jutsu can be used, but I'd like to keep them to myself for now. If you would like me to explain in private, I'd be more than willing to do so.

    ~ All te rest declined, do not resubnit ~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 09-29-2010 at 10:19 PM.

  13. #2433
    Senior Member Ben-sama's Avatar
    Status
    Ben-sama is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Posts
    5,863
    Location
    In The Island
    This user has no status.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Fuuton : Haretasora | Wind release : Clear Sky]
    Rank : A
    Type : Supplementary
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : N/A
    The user uses his wind chakra to manipulate the wind in the sky, and uses the wind to blow away all existing clouds away from the battlefield.
    [Twice per battle]

    ~ Expand the description ~

    [Itto No Ankoku | Blade Of Darkness]
    Rank : S
    Type : Supplementary
    Range : Short
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage Points : N/A
    This weapon is said to be forged with a metal that was created from a rock on where the Juubi once stood before it was sealed away by the Sage of six paths, the rock was filled with the dark aura of it and turned into a metal of which was never named. The blade is pitch black and reflects light in a dark purple color. The unordinary metal, fused with the user's chakra can change it's shape and size, so this Blade can turn into a different weapon than just a sword. However it's primary state is a regular blade, so in the end of the battle it will always retake it's shape of a sword. The metal is aswell extremely light, but is hard as diamond. The handle is made of the same metal, and is decorated with gold ornaments. It's sheath is made from the same metal and is decorated by japanese letters made of solid gold, each letter represents each tailed beast's name's first letter from the 1 tails to the 9 tails. Once the blade's handle comes in contact to it's wielder, a tattoo apears on the wielder's arm, using the tattoo, the wielder can summon the blade back to him using the regular summoning technique.
    [User takes -10 damage when he unsheathes this blade]
    [User looses -20 chakra when he uses the tattoo to summon the blade]
    [User looses -5 chakra every turn the blade is in use]
    [User looses -10 chakra every time the blade changes it's shape]

    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    Replacing the Frostmourn

    [Bi-rusu Shi-do | Virus Seed]
    Rank : Forbidden
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short/Long
    Chakra Cost : 50
    Damage Points : 100
    Zetsu closes his flytrap completely and starts to build up chakra within his flytrap, and then uses to chakra to shape it into one big seed that he swallows, then he opens his flytrap and spits out the speed into the air and it explodes causing millions of invisible to eye spores to spread out in a range that can cover an entire island. Every creature with lungs except zetsu will breathe in the spores without even feeling them in air and the spores will stay within their lungs and will not be removed. The spores will slowly fill up the opponent's lungs leaving no room for oxygen to enter and the opponent will die due to loss of oxygen if he does not win the battle within three turns, before his lungs get fully filled.
    [Once per battle]
    [User takes -20 damage due to chakra loss]
    [No Zetsu techniques for the next two turns after this technique is used]
    [Can be used only by Zetsu]

    ~ OP ~

    [Doton/Fuuton/Taijutsu : Spartanammiku Entori | Earth/Wind Release/Taijutsu : Spartanamic Entry]
    Rank : B
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost : 25
    Damage Points : 50
    The runs towards the opponent and releases earth chakra to the ground, forming a pit right behind the opponent and releasing a scream infused with wind chakra that sends a wave of wind that disbalances the opponent. Finally the user kicks the disbalanced opponent into the previously formed pit.

    LMFAO ! Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 08:45 AM.

  14. #2434
    Senior Member Kaze..'s Avatar
    Status
    Kaze.. is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Posts
    8,318
    Location
    In A Rock Mansion In Iwagakure
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Teikoku Mori)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Imperial Lance
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user condenses chakra in his blade then does a forward sword thrust while simultaneously twisting their wrist, this releases a beam of energy from the sword that takes the appearance of a bright blue Lance(5 feet in width 15 feet in length) that moves toward the opponent at A very quick speed (as fast as a A rank lightning jutsu) while also rotating to give it drilling power.
    Note: Can only be used 2 per battle
    Note: When the lance makes impact all the momentum it gained and drilling power is focused on a single Point Making it have to pierce objects of equal or lower Rank(Can Only Pierce a S rank Harden Material Once and A rank or lower next time used)
    Note:Cant be used in back to back turns

    ~Needs more restrictions as it pretty much has none atm~





    (Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Toorima)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Phantom Killer

    Type:Attack/Supplementry
    Rank:B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user forms 1 handsign while simultaneously charging their body with chakra, the user then releases the chakra and multiple phantom like figures shoot from the users body at a very quick speed and attacks the opponent. The Phantoms only perform one attack then disappears. The Phantoms dont make any noise when created.
    Note: The Phantoms cant perform any attack requiring Chakra Only Simple Taijutsu or Kendou attacks
    Notenly 3 Phantoms can be made in a turn

    ~Declined, I don't know what you exactly mean by "phantom" however it sounds a lot like a normal clone jutsu and more specific like the Dance of the Crescent Moon~




    (Ama-no-Murakumo-no-Tsurugi:Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven

    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:7 feet
    Charka:40
    Damage:80 (+15 to all Sword techniques)
    Description: Legend says this sword was created during the first great ninja war and has wiped out several platoons of ninja, after the war the sword was said to be lost but was later found in a cave located in Iwagakure. The Sword has the appearance of a katana with the body of a dragon as the guard then the tail of the dragon extending out becoming the hilt its connected to the scabbard by a chain, see pic for further appearance details.
    While in the scabbard the sword takes the appearance of a normal katana but once drawn from the scabbard its length extends to 7 feet, the chain that connects the blade to the scabbard is normally 3 feet long but can extend up to 10 feet if the user inputs chakra into it, the chain that connects the scabbard and the blade can't be severed from either the scabbard and or sword unless the user wishes for it to disconnect.

    The swords blade is forged from obsidian giving it a very sharp edge.Normal weapons/Non Custom weapons dont have the strength to block this weapon and will be easily cut through by this sword.This sword has enough cutting power to cut through B Rank harden materials but can cut through up to 2 A rank harden materials but after that the user can only cut through C rank harden materials jutsu. The swords scabbard has the ability to transform into a large circular shield that can block c rank and lower jutsu. The Scabbard can be used as a blunt weapon and can block other weapons due to its true form being a shield.The shield can only block 2 Jutsu a battle or it will break but can block and infinite amount of simple weapon attacks such as Kunai,non custom weapons. If anyone other then the user touchs the blade they will see a genjutsu where they are being ate by a dragon


    ~Declind OP.How does the sword become larger? You say it's normal but then just becomes longer when you draw it. Also how does the scabbard transform into a shield? Certainly remove the genjutsu, ever seen a sword cast a genjutsu? Overall it has to much abilties and thus OP~

    ~ Leaving all sword-related stuff for Cali ~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 10-23-2010 at 07:32 PM.

  15. #2435
    The Seven-Scaled boy's Avatar
    Status
    The Seven-Scaled boy is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Posts
    9,779
    Location
    back of the world
    This user has no status.
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by The Seven-Scaled boy View Post
    (Tribaaru Toumoku Mo-do) - Tribal Leader Mode
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Oneself
    Chakra: 80(+10 to maintain in each turn)
    Damage: N/A(+15 to his attacks ; -10 to user on activation -30 upon de-activation.)
    Description: After having signed the caterpillar contract and making intensive research on the very first caterpillar tribe leader, Caterperok; the user manages to learn what made him so powerful. By combining his chakra with natural energy he's abilities grew stronger. After intensive and secret training, the user achieves this mode. By gathering natural energy while being still, the user will gain caterpillar-like properties and find both his body and mind abilties incredibly augemented. To begin with, the user will gain a pair of antena which grant him the ability to sense natural energy and changes in his entourage(humidity, heat, air pressure/currents and, in minor scale unless his head is touching the ground, earth vibartions). The user will also gain a quite unsual ability to eat and quickly digest wood in all of it's shapes and types. By digesting and assimilating the wood(taking, thanks to nature energy enchanced digestive acids, around 5 seconds), the user will gain further natural energy and increse his stamina further and speed. The user's speed is reduced by one rank, unless wood techniques or sourroundings are eaten by the user, beacuse he gains the bulkiness of the caterpillars. By having signed the caterpillar contract, the user normally can spit silk, but while in this mode, the silk spitted is much harder and stickier and it's coated in natural energy, imunnizing the silk against fire. The user strength is augmented by this mode, rivalling jirobo's in his second cursed seal state. By the overflowing natural energy, the users reaction time is augmented too. The looks of the user are not much changed, apart form the changes mentioned above. But, special yellow and black pigments form around the user skin while in this mode, making him look like a maori warrior.
    Notes: May only be used once per battle, lasting up to 4 complete turns or, provided two trees are eaten to a maximum of 6 turns.
    Notes: Due to the bulkiness of the caterpillars taijutsu B-rank and below is not even felt by the user, unless they are combined with elemental energy.
    Notes: The user must stay still for a whole turn to enter this mode. Clones may gather natural energy for him, provided that they are still and once dispersed the user will gain the natural energy and acces this mode.
    Notes: After this mode runs out, the user is left exausted and very tired and, for 2 turns will have the speed of someone 2 ranks below.
    Notes: No A-rank or higher level techniques may be used for the next 5 turns after the mode is de-activated, due to chakra exhaustion.
    Notes: No summoning the turn done and while active.
    Notes: No forbidden rank techniques may be used the turn is activated.
    Notes: The user may only have up to a maximum of 2 clones while in this mode.
    Notes: May not combined with the akimichi pills.
    Notes: Everytime the people under this mode eat a S-rank mokuton technique or a whole tree, the eater will gain one extra turn for this mode.
    Notes: Forbidden-rank mokuton techs may not be eaten by the user.

    ~ =.= Declined. Too much focus on natural energy. That's the premise of Sage Mode ~

    ^ Removed the body hair part. Other changes in bold.
    (Tribaaru Toumoku Mo-do) - Tribal Leader Mode
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Oneself
    Chakra: 80(+10 to maintain in each turn)
    Damage: N/A(+15 to the users attacks ; -10 to user on activation -30 upon de-activation.)
    Description: After having signed the caterpillar contract and making intensive research on the very first caterpillar tribe leader, Caterperok; the user manages to learn what made him so powerful. By combining his chakra with tribal energy(Obtained by a mixture between nature energy and inner feeling's energy like anger, happines, gratitude, peace, etc) he's abilities grow stronger. After intensive and secret training, the user achieves this mode. By gathering tribal energy while being still, the user will gain caterpillar-like properties and find both his body and mind abilties incredibly augemented. To begin with, the user will gain a pair of antena which grant him the ability to sense nature energy and changes in his entourage(humidity, heat, air pressure/currents and, in minor scale unless his head is touching the ground, earth vibartions). The user will also gain a quite unsual ability to eat and quickly digest wood in all of it's shapes and types. By digesting and assimilating the wood(taking, due to the user's own digestive acids getting enchanced, 5 seconds at most), the user will gain further tribal energy and increse his stamina further and speed. The user's speed is reduced by one rank, unless wood techniques or sourroundings are eaten by the user, beacuse he gains the bulkiness of the caterpillars. By having signed the caterpillar contract, the user normally can spit silk, but while in this mode, the silk spitted is much harder and stickier; and it's coated in tribal energy, imunnizing the silk against fire. The user strength is augmented by this mode, rivalling jirobo's in his second cursed seal state. By the overflowing natural energy, the users reaction time is augmented too. The looks of the user are not much changed, apart form the changes mentioned above. But, special yellow and black pigments form around the user skin while in this mode, making him look like a maori warrior.
    Notes: May only be used once per battle, lasting up to 4 complete turns or, provided that two trees are eaten, to a maximum of 6 turns.
    Notes: Due to the bulkiness of the caterpillars taijutsu B-rank and below is not even felt by the user, unless they are combined with elemental energy.
    Notes: The user must stay still for a whole turn to enter this mode. Clones may gather natural energy for him, provided that they are still and once dispersed the user will gain the natural energy and acces this mode. This, howver has a big weakness, which is genjutsu that affects one's own feelings. By disrupting the feelings
    Notes: After this mode runs out, the user is left exausted and very tired and, for 2 turns will have the speed of someone 2 ranks below.
    Notes: No A-rank or higher level techniques may be used for the next 5 turns after the mode is de-activated, due to chakra exhaustion.
    Notes: No summoning the turn done and while active.
    Notes: No forbidden rank techniques may be used the turn is activated.
    Notes: The user may only have up to a maximum of 2 clones while in this mode.
    Notes: May not combined with the akimichi pills.
    Notes: Everytime the people under this mode eat a S-rank mokuton technique or a whole tree, the eater will gain one extra turn for this mode.
    Notes: Forbidden-rank mokuton techs may not be eaten by the user.
    Notes: If the user eats wood, the speed of him is enchanced quite a lot.

    ~ I've given you enough chances to make someting realistic; this isn't. Declined, do not resubmit ~

    ^Removed natural energy and created a new energy(I still need to use nature energy in a point).

    (Doton: jiten za ichiranhyous ) - Earth style: Turning the tables
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 50 (short) 60 (mid) 80(long)
    Damage: N/A (+30 damage to user)
    Description: The user will stomp his foot very hard on the ground as he releases an enormous amount of doton chakra. Before the oppoenent can react, the earth has already turned 180°, "swapping" the position of both the user and the target. This is done by make a huge circle of doton chakra in the range they choose; the larger scale the more chakra they invest.
    Notes: The reaction part must be ignored of the opponent posses and advance sharingan (3-tomoe) or has opened the 4th gate or above.
    Notes: No doton A-rank or up for the next turn.
    Notes: Must wait at least 4 turns to use again.
    Notes: By the strain of such a release of doton chakra, the user takes 30 damage.
    Notes: May only be done twice per battle.

    ~ WTF ! No ~

    (Ninjutsu no akimichi keibatsu: erementaru hirate) - Akimichi clan ninjutsu: Elemental palm
    Rank: A/S
    Type: offensive/defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30/40
    Damage: 60/80 (-5 to user)
    Description: The user ,after having his palms enlarged by an akimichi expansion technique, will concentrate big amounts of elemental chakra and thrust his open palms forward. The result is that the elemental energy is release in the shape of 2 palms the size they are. This was created to compensate the lack of range some akiimichi users experiment.
    Notes: May only be used 4 times per battle.
    Notes: Must wait 2 turns before using again.
    Notes: No jutsu S-rank or higher the turn after it's use.
    Notes: Must be an akimichi clan member.
    It looks like this:


    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    (Taijutsu no Akimichi keibatsu: pairu-doraiba ) - Akimichi clan taijutsu: Pile-driver
    Rank: S
    Type: offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80 (-5 to user)
    Description: The user, with his arms expanded, will use them to propel above very high and in the direction of the opponent. Once high enough, taking not too much due to akimichi strength, the user will open his legs wide and point his clenched fists onto the opponent. While concentrating doton chakra onto his arms, the user will begin to spin and, due to his increased weight, drop at greats speed against the foe. The attacks ends on the earth beneath the user being crushed into a wide and deep crater (as big as short range).
    Notes: May only be used twice per battle.
    Notes: Must have both arms expanded by the partial expansion jutsu.

    ~ Approved ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 09:11 AM.

  16. #2436
    -Mugen-'s Avatar
    Status
    -Mugen- is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Posts
    11,189
    Location
    under dans bed...shhh
    This user has no status.
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Mugen-sama View Post
    Chimp mode (chimpo modo)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/a
    Chakra Cost:50 (-10 each turn)
    Damage:N/a (40 overall(4 turns) and -5 each time the user talks to someone telepathically)
    Description: the user uses a special technique that was taught by the chimpanzees.The user will enhance his chakra by drinking a special type of water (with concentrated chimpanzee chakra) given to him the the chimpanzees(on the users waist),giving him a +10 to all elemental jutsus and the user gains the ability to talk through the mind,with other people on very,very great distances(like from iwa to ame).But if the user wishes to talk to a chimpanzee than there is no distance from which they cant talk.This ability can also be used to confuse the enemy,because they can talk to them telepathically and scream something,and make it look like someone is behind them.While this is active the users hair will turn silver.
    *Can only be used once and lasts for 4 turns
    *No chimpanzees may be summoned this,previose and next 4 turns.Unless stated in the chimp descreption(none have it yet)
    *After 4 turns the user wont be able to use A-rank or higher jutsus for 1 turn
    *Need permission from Mugen-sama to learn


    ~ +10 to all Elemental jutsu ? No. ~

    edited a bit

    summoning: The chimpanzee strength sage(kchyuse: chikara sannin no chimpo )
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:mid-long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points:N/A
    Description: After wiping blood on the tatoo the user will summon a huge chimpanzee,2 times as big as gamabunto.The chimpanzee is very strong,and can lift gamabunto with 1 hand.His elemental afinity is earth.And he can create a earthquake (80 damage) 1 time per battle by slaming his hand on the ground.
    *Can only be summoned once and lasts 3 turns
    *the user can not use any Gen,nin,summoning or elemental jutsus while he is on the field (no subs) which leaves him open(does not apply if its a clone)
    *Because of the large strain on summoning him he also gets a -40 health disadvantage
    *No summonings for the rest of the battle.(includes the previous turn)
    *To summon,you must have no chimpanzee on the field,or on the previose turn.Also to summon the user cant have more than 2 clones on the field.And no forbidden rank jutsu previous and this turn
    *Can only be taught by mugen


    edited bolded
    ~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

    cooking art: art of boiling (kukkingu bijutsu: bijutsu no futto)
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30-40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user focuses his chakra to any water source in range and makes it boil.This has 2 effects that can be used.The first is he user makes the water boil so the opponent cant stand on it or go near it.(causes steam that can burn if come to near)The second needs more chackra to preform (40),it can make all the water thats in range evaporate almost instantly.(can be used to stop A-rank water jutsus)
    *Can only be used 3 times
    *boiling lasts for 4 turns
    *Can only be taught by mugen


    ~ Hmm...restrict it ~
    cooking art: art of boiling (kukkingu bijutsu: bijutsu no futto)
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30-40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user focuses his chakra to any water source in range and makes it boil.This has 2 effects that can be used.The first is he user makes the water boil so the opponent cant stand on it or go near it.(causes steam that can burn if come to near)The second needs more chakra to preform (40),it can make all the water thats in range evaporate almost instantly.(can be used to stop A-rank water jutsus)
    *Can only be used 3 times
    *boiling lasts for 4 turns
    *No water jutsu can be used the same turn this is used.
    *Cant be used 2 times in a row.Have to wait a turn to use again
    *Can only be taught by mugen


    ~ This is fine, however just focusing chakra from some place isn't enough, you need to be closer to the water source. Edit and resubmit ~

    I added/edited more restrictions

    Chimp mode (chimpo modo)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/a
    Chakra Cost:50 (-10 each turn)
    Damage:N/a (40 overall(4 turns) and -5 each time the user talks to someone telepathically)
    Description: the user uses a special technique that was taught by the chimpanzees.The user will enhance his chakra by drinking a special type of water (with concentrated chimpanzee chakra) given to him the the chimpanzees(on the users waist),giving him a +10 to all elemental jutsus (although you can only give it to 1 element per turn) and the user gains the ability to talk through the mind,with other people on very,very great distances(like from iwa to ame).But if the user wishes to talk to a chimpanzee than there is no distance from which they cant talk.This ability can also be used to confuse the enemy,because they can talk to them telepathically and scream something,and make it look like someone is behind them.While this is active the users hair will turn silver.
    *Can only give a plus 10 bunus to 1 element per turn
    *Can only be used once and lasts for 4 turns
    *No chimpanzees may be summoned this,previose and next 4 turns.Unless stated in the chimp descreption(none have it yet)
    *After 4 turns the user wont be able to use A-rank or higher jutsus for 1 turn
    *Need permission from Mugen-sama to learn


    ~ +10 is still too much ~

    I wanted to edit it but the cj thread was closed.I edited better this time

    lightning release:dance of the dragon(Raiton: Doragon no buyou)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost:1 dragon- 50 (-5 each turn) 2 dragons- 100 (-10 each turn)
    Damage: 90 (1 dragon) 180 (if 2 dragons)
    Description: The user creates a ball of lighting in his hands than uses his manipulation to extend it into a form of a dragon.(can also create 1 in each hand)The user can also (instantly) extend the dragon to a specific range,or make it smaller than extend again to confuse the enemy.If the user creates 2 dragons than he can use them to attack both sides.This is a very strong lightning jutsu and is more like a advanced version of chidori blade.
    *Can only be activated once
    *If 2 dragons are created than it will count as 2 separate jutsus.
    *Last for 3 turns max
    *This is a very strong lightning jutsu so only Forrbiden rank wind can stop it,this is also why the user will receive -30 damage each turn
    *can only be taught by mugen


    ~OP ~

    cooking art: art of Starvation (kukkingu bijutsu: bijutsu no kikatsu )
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage: 90
    Description: This is a sort of illusion that can be used through or without eye contact.The user will make a illusion that the opponent thinks he is starving(not hungry,I mean he is in his limits).This will cause the opponent unreal stomach pain that will make him throw up and immobilize (he can move,but will be in such pain that he will only be focused on the pain).How long this will last depends on whether eye contact was made or not.If it was made it will last for 2 turns,if not than 1 turn.After the opponent is free he wont be able to react,move,or do jutsus as fast as he normally would.(lasts 2 turns)
    *Can only be used once
    *No genjutsu for the rest of the battle
    *Can only be broken by a dojutsu user because they can release it before it even happens.Normal person would need to wait till they are struck by genjutsu to release it,but because of the pain they cant.
    *Causes the user 30 damage cause of the strain.(50 if eye contact)
    *Can only be taught by mugen


    ~ OP ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 09:13 AM.

  17. #2437
    Senior Member -Tauburn-'s Avatar
    Status
    -Tauburn- is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Posts
    10,242
    Location
    ~_~ Where... am i now... Oh forget it, to high to care.
    Traveling the ninja world like
    Ero-Sensei
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Shu_rai Nakami)-Lightning speed Blade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (when used with chakra)
    Damage Points: 60 (when used with chakra)
    Description: The blade is always storing lightning chakra so that it maybe used in battle. When the user wishes to use the stored lightning chakra, the user simply absorbs some of it. When the user uses the sotroed lightning chakra his speed increases to rivale that of the First gate: Kaimon (Gate of opening). Also when the user attivates it his lightning chakra uses are -5 chakra for every lightning justsu used in battle.

    Note: speed and lightning chakra effect only last 5 turns per battle
    Note: after 5 turns are used the sword is normal again
    Note: has to wait 1 turn to be used in battle



    ~ Declined ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 09:13 AM.

  18. #2438
    Riku..'s Avatar
    Status
    Riku.. is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Posts
    11,423
    Location
    Crap, I'm lost again. >.<
    Dead
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Riku.. View Post
    Eh, these were skipped (I realize that it says leaving for Emp, but Emp checked the customs up to somewhere around the bottom of page 119 or something since then). =/ No rush, just notifying.

    (Hyouton: Shimo Hishou) Ice Style: Frost Flight
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will use their ice chakra to burst out of their backs and solidify into two large wings made of ice that will protrude out of their backs. Both wings are around the same size as the user (similarly sized to when Sasuke used to go into his second curse seal stage). The main function of these would be, obviously, allowing their user to fly into the air, however the ice wings have several other functions. By powerfully flapping the wings a single time, a thick blast of what resembles the the vapor in the hidden mist jutsu will shoot out in front of the user to long range. Anything that this blast touches (the blast is equal to A-rank) will, rather than being pushed back, be instantly frozen. The wings are also capable of releasing multiple ice senbon when fully spread out that all rush towards the opponent (this can be done by spreading one wing or both). The wings are also capable of acting as a defense mechanism, allowing the user to cocoon themselves within the wings. In this stage, they are capable of defend the user from enemy jutsu, projectiles, or taijutsu. The wings are consistently releasing a smaller version of the said cool mist, simply radiating from themselves, and therefore whenever the wings move in flight the mist surrounds the user from being spread around. Anyone near the user while the wings are moving (so this only applies when the user is flying), or anyone who touches these wings will begin to be slowly frozen (slowly enough that it still allows them to possibly save themselves, but the freezing starts from the hand, or foot, that they touched the wing with, beginning with a bluish radiance and then slowly encasing them). The wings allow the user to move in the air at a much quicker pace then they would at the ground (equivalent to something that the second tomoe sharingan would have slight difficulty in keeping up with). This jutsu is done relatively quickly, requiring no hand seals, and when the user does this, they can choose to already be in a cocoon form if necessary (similarly to how when Sasuke first went his curse seal level 2 mode he was already being defended by the wings when they appeared).
    Note: May only be used twice per battle and lasts three turns each time (must wait at least two turns, excluding the turn it deactivates, before doing this again).
    Note: If the user uses the ice wings to protect them from a jutsu, it only protect against fire A-rank and lower, one S-rank jutsu, two A-rank jutsu (excluding fire), OR three B-rank jutsu. Emphasis on "or," meaning it can only do one of those, if the opponent uses two B-ranks and one S-rank, for example, the user cannot defend against the S-rank jutsu using the wings, not fully anyway. These jutsu can be blocked periodically (meaning that if the opponent uses one B-rank blocked by this, and then a few turns later the user blocks another B-rank using this, and another later, it is considered valid). After doing blocking any combination of the said jutsu ranks, the wings are both destroyed.

    ~Remove the things I highlighted and I reduced the time from four to three turns~*

    I'm also resubmitting my old sword (new version is outside of the spoiler, picture is in the first spoiler, old version is in the second spoiler):

    (Houto Tame Keimei) Way to Dawn
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40 (if summoned)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Way to Dawn is the name of Riku's most highly favored sword. Riku constantly keeps it in his sheathe, having to often use it in battle, but if not already sheathed, he can call it to the field at any time (this requires no hand seals, so he can do it fluently and quickly in battle, but does require the above chakra amount). It's appearance is quite peculiar, most notably the wing on the inner part of it's blade. The main color of the blade is somewhere between a dark red and black, transitioning in colors from black to dark red from the blade edge to the blade's back respectively. One half of the blade's guard is compromised of what seems to be a demonic wing, whilst the other seems to be an angelic counterpart. Way to Dawn is of fair size for a blade, and Riku most often uses it with one hand, allowing for quicker attacks than most swordsmen could muster. The blade's affinity, being that it's Riku's blade, belongs with ice-related techniques and jutsu. First, whenever the blade is in Riku's hand, he is capable of doing all ice jutsu with barely any handseals, but rather simply by swinging the blade or, in some cases such as the ice spike jutsu, stabbing it into the ground and any jutsu carried out through the sword will be a rank stronger than normally (does not apply to S-ranks, which will remain at normal strength). The sword can, at any time, be imbued with ice chakra that will increase it's durability and cutting power, though this, obviously, requires the user to use up more chakra. When the user does this, the blade will also become larger than normally and be covered in what seems to be a light blue coating, giving the sword extra reach, though still leaving it at the same weight and still allowing Riku to hold it the same way and still be balanced. When focusing ice chakra into the sword, any cut dealt by the blade will gradually encase the opponent in ice (so if the opponent was cut in their torso area, ice will start to spread with that cut as the origin). The sword also has several other abilities (to be submitted as customs).
    Note: When focusing ice chakra into the sword, the user will lose ten chakra points per turn.

    ~About the bolded part are you talking about all jutsu's or only ice jutsu's? Also about the cut = freeze thing I can agree that it happens around the wound, but not that encases the entire opponent. I also changed the no handseals to barely any handseals as no handseals is something from the 7SM even though ice isn't one of them~



    (Kontan Eater) Soul Eater
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Soul Eater is the name of Riku's blade, peculiar in both appearance and abilities. Being Riku�s regular blade, he is able to have it in the beginning of the battle without summoning it but will lose chakra equal to if he did summon it during the battle. Soul Eater is a red sword, and on the blade of the sword is a blue trim, along with blue stripes on four places on the sword. A blue eye with a black pupil is found where the hilt is. On each side of the handle is a wing, one the wing of an angel and one of a demon. When this sword is stabbed into the ground, the user may make spikes of ice protrude from the earth in the form of one large ice spike (B rank) stabbing the opponent or three to four spikes surrounding the opponent, making a tent-like formation around them. Certain ice jutsu can also be carried out through this blade, such as sending a beam or a blast of ice, as well as make a dome or a protective wall. Ice jutsu carried out through the blade will be one rank more powerful. The blade is unique to Riku, so any time the blade is out of his hand, it will return to his hand at his will. A beam of ice can also be shot from the eye of the blade (also B rank). There are other moves unique to the blade (will be made as customs).




    ~ WTH Leaving all for Cali since he's more experienced with walls o' text ~

    ~You freaking schizo-plant, I hope you get eaten by caterpillars~

    ~ I love you too. ~

    ~Wanna go to the McDonnalds? I will buy a vegy-burger for you~

    ~ Why don't we go to Babies R Us ? We could get a teether for you, it's much healtheir than all those nasty old rusted swords ~

    ~Don't worry, I was able to bargen a dentist-insurance when I became a smod~

    ~ What if you accidentally eat it ? The Federation of Sword-Swallowers Union will openly revolt at you, claiming you only have a sword-biter's license ~
    Highlighted parts in the ice wings taken out, and I edited slightly (because I took out the part where the wind blasts forward, I had to make clear what exactly was freezing people when they got to close while the wings were moving, as in my original version I made a reference to the blast to explain that). Btw, Cali said that he wasn't very used to approving summonings so my crow customs are still chilling on page seventeen.


    (Hyouton: Shimo Hishou) Ice Style: Frost Flight
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will use their ice chakra to burst out of their backs and solidify into two large wings made of ice that will protrude out of their backs. Both wings are around the same size as the user (similarly sized to when Sasuke used to go into his second curse seal stage). The main function of these would be, obviously, allowing their user to fly into the air, however the ice wings have several other functions. The wings are also capable of releasing multiple ice senbon when fully spread out that all rush towards the opponent (this can be done by spreading one wing or both). The wings are also capable of acting as a defense mechanism, allowing the user to cocoon themselves within the wings. In this stage, they are capable of defend the user from enemy jutsu, projectiles, or taijutsu. The wings are consistently releasing a small amount of cool mist, simply radiating from themselves, and therefore whenever the wings move in flight the mist surrounds the user from being spread around. Anyone near the user while the wings are moving (so this only applies when the user is flying), or anyone who touches these wings will begin to be slowly frozen (slowly enough that it still allows them to possibly save themselves, but the freezing starts from the hand, or foot, that they touched the wing with, beginning with a bluish radiance and then slowly encasing them). The wings allow the user to move in the air at a much quicker pace then they would at the ground. This jutsu is done relatively quickly, and when the user does this, they can choose to already be in a cocoon form if necessary (similarly to how when Sasuke first went his curse seal level 2 mode he was already being defended by the wings when they appeared).
    Note: May only be used twice per battle and lasts three turns each time (must wait at least two turns, excluding the turn it deactivates, before doing this again).
    Note: If the user uses the ice wings to protect them from a jutsu, it only protect against fire A-rank and lower, one S-rank jutsu, two A-rank jutsu (excluding fire), OR three B-rank jutsu. Emphasis on "or," meaning it can only do one of those, if the opponent uses two B-ranks and one S-rank, for example, the user cannot defend against the S-rank jutsu using the wings, not fully anyway. These jutsu can be blocked periodically (meaning that if the opponent uses one B-rank blocked by this, and then a few turns later the user blocks another B-rank using this, and another later, it is considered valid). After doing blocking any combination of the said jutsu ranks, the wings are both destroyed.

    Cleared up the part about what jutsu it enhances here, and removed the freezing part entirely (making it only be able to partially freeze someone seemed sort of pointless unless I manage to attack at their arms or legs, which would be almost impossible for them NOT to dodge in even a normal kenjutsu spar).

    (Houto Tame Keimei) Way to Dawn
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40 (if summoned)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Way to Dawn is the name of Riku's most highly favored sword. Riku constantly keeps it in his sheathe, having to often use it in battle, but if not already sheathed, he can call it to the field at any time (this requires no hand seals, so he can do it fluently and quickly in battle, but does require the above chakra amount). It's appearance is quite peculiar, most notably the wing on the inner part of it's blade. The main color of the blade is somewhere between a dark red and black, transitioning in colors from black to dark red from the blade edge to the blade's back respectively. One half of the blade's guard is compromised of what seems to be a demonic wing, whilst the other seems to be an angelic counterpart. Way to Dawn is of fair size for a blade, and Riku most often uses it with one hand, allowing for quicker attacks than most swordsmen could muster. The blade's affinity, being that it's Riku's blade, belongs with ice-related techniques and jutsu. First, whenever the blade is in Riku's hand, he is capable of doing all ice jutsu with barely any handseals, but rather simply by swinging the blade or, in some cases such as the ice spike jutsu, stabbing it into the ground and any ice-related jutsu carried out through the sword will be a rank stronger than normally (does not apply to S-ranks, which will remain at normal strength). The sword can, at any time, be imbued with ice chakra that will increase it's durability and cutting power, though this, obviously, requires the user to use up more chakra. When the user does this, the blade will also become larger than normally and be covered in what seems to be a light blue coating, giving the sword extra reach, though still leaving it at the same weight and still allowing Riku to hold it the same way and still be balanced. The sword also has several other abilities (to be submitted as customs).
    Note: When focusing ice chakra into the sword, the user will lose ten chakra points per turn.

    (Kontan Eater) Soul Eater
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Soul Eater is the name of Riku's blade, peculiar in both appearance and abilities. Being Riku�s regular blade, he is able to have it in the beginning of the battle without summoning it but will lose chakra equal to if he did summon it during the battle. Soul Eater is a red sword, and on the blade of the sword is a blue trim, along with blue stripes on four places on the sword. A blue eye with a black pupil is found where the hilt is. On each side of the handle is a wing, one the wing of an angel and one of a demon. When this sword is stabbed into the ground, the user may make spikes of ice protrude from the earth in the form of one large ice spike (B rank) stabbing the opponent or three to four spikes surrounding the opponent, making a tent-like formation around them. Certain ice jutsu can also be carried out through this blade, such as sending a beam or a blast of ice, as well as make a dome or a protective wall. Ice jutsu carried out through the blade will be one rank more powerful. The blade is unique to Riku, so any time the blade is out of his hand, it will return to his hand at his will. A beam of ice can also be shot from the eye of the blade (also B rank). There are other moves unique to the blade (will be made as customs).




    ~ Cali, you know the drill ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 09:14 AM.

  19. #2439
    Typhon's Avatar
    Status
    Typhon is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Posts
    15,199
    Location
    Konohagakure
    We Do Not Sow
     



    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahamut View Post
    Secret Jaguar Art: Welcome to the Jungle
    (Hijaga-jutsu: Uerukamu dzukiza Junguru)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: 0
    Descritpion: This technique is an adapatation of Jiraiya's crushing toad stomach technique which reverse summoned the user and their opponents into the stomach of a toad on Mt. Myoboku. In this variation the user reverse summons him and his opponent deep into the homeland Rain forest of the Jaguars. Giant trees fill the forest with their thick canopies hundreds of feet in the air and to those below looks like a pitch black night sky. The thickness of the canopy blocks out light limiting vision to both the user and the opponent so that nothing can be seen at long range, at mid range a person's silhouette can be seen while at short range they are fully visible. In this forest it is constantly raining in a heavy down pour that saturates the area. This location is a specifically forbidden section of the forest due to its mysterious and sacred past. People who remain here too long will be forcible removed after three turns by unknown forces.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~After three turns the user and opponent will be forcible returned to their starting location.
    ~Must be capable of summoning the boss Jaguar summon.
    ~No Jaguar summonings or reverse summonings can be used for the remainder of the battle.

    ~ Nice idea. More restrictions ~


    Secret Jaguar Art: Welcome to the Jungle
    (Hijaga-jutsu: Uerukamu dzukiza Junguru)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage: 0
    Descritpion: This technique is an adapatation of Jiraiya's crushing toad stomach technique which reverse summoned the user and their opponents into the stomach of a toad on Mt. Myoboku. In this variation the user reverse summons him and his opponent deep into the homeland Rain forest of the Jaguars. Giant trees fill the forest with their thick canopies hundreds of feet in the air and to those below looks like a pitch black night sky. The thickness of the canopy blocks out light limiting vision to both the user and the opponent so that nothing can be seen at long range, at mid range a person's silhouette can be seen while at short range they are fully visible. In this forest it is constantly raining in a heavy down pour that saturates the area. This location is a specifically forbidden section of the forest due to its mysterious and sacred past. People who remain here too long will be forcible removed after three turns by unknown forces.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Must be capable of summoning the boss Jaguar summon.
    ~No Jaguar summonings or reverse summonings can be used for the remainder of the battle.
    ~Inside this area the user is incapable of using Fire or Lightning techniques.
    ~Must be taught by Bahamut.

    Approved

    Secret Nanabi Art: Anger of the Land
    (Nanabi Hijutsu: Rokojou sono Rando)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 0
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The Nanabi digs its horn into the earth and uses its incredible strength to lift a huge portion of the battlefield (around half) which is then flipped over, crushing anyone caught in its wrath. (If you're familiar with FF7 this would be the attack used by the Titan summoning).
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~No techniques requiring the Nanabi's horn can be used during the same turn.

    ~ OP ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 09:15 AM.

  20. #2440
    Pain..'s Avatar
    Status
    Pain.. is offline
    Gender
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Posts
    9,680
    Location
    New York
    Oldie
     

    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Kuchiyose: Enkou Ketsueki ) Summoning Secret Technique: Flame Blood

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 40 ( +10 Rare Vampire Finch )
    Damage: 80
    Range: All
    Description: The user does three handseals and does are Ram - Dragon - Ram and summon a rare Vampire Finch that i able to do three elements and does three elements are Fire - Wind - Lightning this summoning does fire up to S rank and throws it from his mouth but this summoning can't do the fire jutsu that is needle to do handseals. It can also do Lightning up to C rank the summoning does the one that doesn't has handseals and is only to use one chidori and that's Chidori Nagashi. It also can do wind element with both of his big wings it can do wind up to A rank this rare summoning is not able to do the wind jutsu that is needle for handseals. Like all the other Vampire Finch the summoning able to such opponent blood faster because is one of the bigger Vampire Finch is a bit bigger then Gamabunta. This vampire finch is one of the faster out of all the other the speed is about 150 mph. This can only be summon once per battle and has also the abilities to talk.



    ( Kuchiyose: Kinshou Kyuuban Ketsueki ) Summoning Technique: Little Sucker Blood

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 ( +10 )
    Damage: 30 ( Death if reach the user limit )
    Description: The user does two handseals and does are Horse - Ram and start to focus chakra on his/her hand and summon about 20 little vampire finch that attack the opponent to such blood all that this vampire finch does is suck blood this summoning is not able to use any kind of element . The vampire finch are really little they a size of a normal bird on real life. This can be only use twice per battle once use the second time wont have so much it's gonna have about ten.


    ( Kuchiyose: Kuchikukan Doubutsu ) Summoning Technique: Destroyer Animal

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Range: Short-Long
    Description: The user is needle to do the necessary handseals and does are Ram - Bird - Horse once done the user summon one giant vampire finch that is one of the faster vampire finch that ever live the speed of this vampire finch is 140mph it also can do one element and that element is fire it can do fire up to A rank this vampire finch move his wing really fast and like all the vampire finch it got Special Blood.


    ( Kuchiyose: Tentei Senpai ) Summoning Technique: Lord Elder

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra: 30 ( +8 Rare Vampire Finch )
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does the Ox - Fox - Rat - Tiger handseals and summon an elder that is able to do Lightning up to A-Rank and Fire up to B Rannk. The Elder can only be summon once they are really needed and can only be summon twice per battle. This Elder is able to see what's happening on Kumogakure and he get's a feeling that Kumogakure is on war or something like that. Can only be use twice per battle once summon it could be summon again but once summon twice the Elder can only use Lightning up to A-rank. This elder is one of rare elder and is the king of elder the elder name is Izukilla.


    ( Kuchiyose: Konki Kemono ) Summoning Technique: Energy Beast

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 ( +20 Rare Summoning )
    Damage: Depends
    Description: The user does the Tiger handseal and summon a big vampire finch. This vampire finch abilities is to suck energy the vampire finch is able to swallow the opponent and start to suck energy the vampire finch suck energy so fast that if the opponent touch the vampire finch it doesn't matter where but if the opponent touch the vampire finch the vampire finch start to suck energy making the opponent slower and almost not able to move. This can only be use once per battle this vampire finch does not have any kind of elements. This can only be use three time on wars.


    ~ All explanations bad ~
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 09-27-2010 at 09:16 AM.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •