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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by akhira 231 View Post
    raiton: tenkashoheki

    raiton: lighting barrier

    type: defense
    rack: E
    range: it moves w/ the user
    chakra cost: 10
    damage points: 20
    descriptions:remember the sands of gaara... .... it's kind of like that.... but he get his/her electricity under ground.... the user harvest the electric energy of the friction of the rocks below.... & use it....to counter every move of the enemy..... the electricity is lock on the enemy's chakra.... that why it can counter every attack.... even if its super fast.....
    but....he can't attack in a long range.... w/o losing his tenkashoheki..
    Was it truly necessary for you to add "..." after every 3-4 words? I don't think anyone understands that, and the effects of that technique are FAR over E rank. Just because you categorize it as E, doesn't mean it is. You didn't even recieve training for you to be able to control lightning like that, in the first place.

    Do you even have a biography?

    And, it's "rank" not "rack".
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Shigure~ View Post
    Was it truly necessary for you to add "..." after every 3-4 words? I don't think anyone understands that, and the effects of that technique are FAR over E rank. Just because you categorize it as E, doesn't mean it is. You didn't even recieve training for you to be able to control lightning like that, in the first place.

    Do you even have a biography?

    And, it's "rank" not "rack".
    easy man. then it's rank
    don't make it a big deal man.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by akhira 231 View Post
    easy man. then it's rank
    don't make it a big deal man.
    HE won't.
    I will.

    This thread is Closed till I find some suitable compensation for your brilliant custom.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    ( Tonbogiri ) ɸ Dragonfly-Cutting Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( +5 per turn to support weight for faster swings )
    Damage Points: 60 for simple stabs, thrusts, strikes etcetera.

    An heirloom of Honda Tadakatsu, the Tonbogiri has been passed down among generations of skilled warriors, before reaching its wielder today. The spear's blade beggars description, the sharpness it possesses unparalleled, a dragonfly that came to rest on the blade instantly being cut in two. The weapon weighs roughly 15 kg.
    This eight foot weapon, comprising of three feet of deadly steel blade and five of reinforced wood handle, is one of the Three Great Spears forged by a matchless blacksmith.
    The blade of the weapon is similar to that of a chokuto, having a straight, double-edged blade ending in a sharp point. The edge of the blade itself possesses backward-facing serrations. This allows the spear to be swung and slashed with - the length of the weapon increasing its angular momentum, and thus striking power. Comparatively speaking, a sword swung with the same momentum possesses less strike force, compared to this blade. The weapon can also be thrusted or thrown to stab. In such a case, once the sharp point of the blade slides effortlessly into the target, the backward-facing serrations ensure that when the spear is pulled out of the target, a large part of the target's insides come out with it, creating a savager wound. Skilled wielders can produce a sort of kuba-yari-esque corkscrewing effect during thrusts to create deeper and deadlier wounds.
    The other end of the handle possesses a metallic rectangular piece tipped by a crescent, much like a monk's spade, that can be used to catch strikes from incoming weapons or simply to stab a target. The rectangular piece can be swung like a club, to deal blunt-force damage or break bone.
    A length of chain lies inside the weapon at each end, which can be shot out with thought, to send either the blade or the crescent shooting forward, an extra five meters of chain on either side. Through subtle movements of the weapon's body, the weapon end that was shot out with a chain can be made to move such that the chain winds itself around an opponent's limb or weapon or bypass a static guard.
    The weapon itself can be made to split apart into two, with a chain connecting both ends so it can be swung like a three-sectioned staff.
    The Tonbogiri is stored in a seal the shape of a bisected dragonfly which is on the wielder's upper arm of his dominant hand.
    The Tonbogiri like all legendary ninja weapons, is indestructible, though this does not mean it can slice or stab through everything.
    The blade of the Tonbogiri is made of a pyroelectric material, which means electricity is generated with heat; this basically means fire chakra can be channeled to the blade, setting it aflame while it crackles with electricity at the same time, thus doing much more damage when it strikes. The fire/electricity remains for one turn.

    The weapon does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • Once fire chakra is channeled to the blade, then there has to be a one-turn gap before it can be channeled again.


    ~Change the part I highlighted into a mechanism or by channelling chakra or something, but not just your thoughts, outside that it's fine~

    ( Kadoshinkirou Jusui ) ɸ Vortex Mirage Drowning
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90

    A devastatingly complex, confusing technique. To a person caught in it, it seems to bend reality, to an observer it seems that the opponent killed himself through his inaction.
    First, the user places his hands with his fingers linked together, and palms facing the opponent. A genjutsu then activates on the opponent, making him believe that the ground/water under him is pulling him under it to suffocate him.
    Any good ninja will realise it is a Genjutsu, and break out of it, either through pain or with the help of Kekkei Genkai.
    Now, the user places his hands in the same motion once more ( the position is recognisable easily due to its unique-ness ) and the ground/water begins swallowing the opponent into it once more. This time, however, it happens in reality, due to application of earth or water chakra.
    Looking at it from the viewpoint of an opponent, he has just been put in a Genjutsu and broken out; and now the user is making the same motions, and the same effect is happening to him. Logically, he believes this also to be a Genjutsu.
    When the opponent now breaks out of the fake "Genjutsu", a real, second Genjutsu is immediately cast on him, that makes him believe that, once he broke out of what he thought was a Genjutsu, things returned to their normal form, with the fight continuing. The opponent is thus even further convinced that he broke out of the "Genjutsu" when it was used a second time, and is also convinced that he is now in reality, and is fighting with the user once again.
    However, in actual reality, the opponent is pulled under, unable to breathe and suffocates, even while his mind believes he is fighting.

    The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • This technique may be used only once per battle.
    • The three-tomoe Sharingan and above, will automatically notice that what they perceive as reality, really isn't and will break out again and realise they are being actually pulled under, thus letting them know and escape.
    • Only one other move can be used the same turn.
    • No Genjutsu for the next two turns.


    ~You need to specify better as what the specific rank is of genjutsu 1 and 2. The whole can be considered forbidden, but I'm not going to approve it when both genjutsu are forbidden too as to escape the first genjutsu you would need to cut off a limb or something. And I need to add to that no S rank both~
    ( Kadoshinkirou Jusui ) ɸ Vortex Mirage Drowning
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90

    A devastatingly complex, confusing technique. To a person caught in it, it seems to bend reality, to an observer it seems that the opponent killed himself through his inaction.
    First, the user places his hands with his fingers linked together, and palms facing the opponent. A genjutsu then activates on the opponent, making him believe that the ground/water under him is pulling him under it to suffocate him.
    Any good ninja will realise it is a Genjutsu, and break out of it, either through pain ( a deep cut is enough ) or with the help of Kekkei Genkai.
    Now, the user places his hands in the same motion once more ( the position is recognisable easily due to its unique-ness ) and the ground/water begins swallowing the opponent into it once more. This time, however, it happens in reality, due to application of earth or water chakra.
    Looking at it from the viewpoint of an opponent, he has just been put in a Genjutsu and broken out; and now the user is making the same motions, and the same effect is happening to him. Logically, he believes this also to be a Genjutsu.
    When the opponent now breaks out of the fake "Genjutsu", a real, second Genjutsu is immediately cast on him, that makes him believe that, once he broke out of what he thought was a Genjutsu, things returned to their normal form, with the fight continuing. The opponent is thus even further convinced that he broke out of the "Genjutsu" when it was used a second time, and is also convinced that he is now in reality, and is fighting with the user once again.
    However, in actual reality, the opponent is pulled under, unable to breathe and suffocates, even while his mind believes he is fighting.

    The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • This technique may be used only once per battle.
    • The three-tomoe Sharingan and above, will automatically notice that what they perceive as reality, really isn't and will break out again and realise they are being actually pulled under, thus letting them know and escape.
    • Only one other move can be used the same turn.
    • No Genjutsu for the next two turns.


    Specified the amount of pain to break the Genjutsu, as requested

    ( Tonbogiri ) ɸ Dragonfly-Cutting Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 ( +5 per turn to support weight for faster swings )
    Damage Points: 60 for simple stabs, thrusts, strikes etcetera.

    An heirloom of Honda Tadakatsu, the Tonbogiri has been passed down among generations of skilled warriors, before reaching its wielder today. The spear's blade beggars description, the sharpness it possesses unparalleled, a dragonfly that came to rest on the blade instantly being cut in two. The weapon weighs roughly 15 kg.
    This eight foot weapon, comprising of three feet of deadly steel blade and five of reinforced wood handle, is one of the Three Great Spears forged by a matchless blacksmith.
    The blade of the weapon is similar to that of a chokuto, having a straight, double-edged blade ending in a sharp point. The edge of the blade itself possesses backward-facing serrations. This allows the spear to be swung and slashed with - the length of the weapon increasing its angular momentum, and thus striking power. Comparatively speaking, a sword swung with the same momentum possesses less strike force, compared to this blade. The weapon can also be thrusted or thrown to stab. In such a case, once the sharp point of the blade slides effortlessly into the target, the backward-facing serrations ensure that when the spear is pulled out of the target, a large part of the target's insides come out with it, creating a savager wound. Skilled wielders can produce a sort of kuba-yari-esque corkscrewing effect during thrusts to create deeper and deadlier wounds.
    The other end of the handle possesses a metallic rectangular piece tipped by a crescent, much like a monk's spade, that can be used to catch strikes from incoming weapons or simply to stab a target. The rectangular piece can be swung like a club, to deal blunt-force damage or break bone.
    A length of chain lies inside the weapon at each end, which can be shot out b flowing chakra into that part of the spear, to send either the blade or the crescent shooting forward, an extra five meters of chain on either side. Through subtle movements of the weapon's body, the weapon end that was shot out with a chain can be made to move such that the chain winds itself around an opponent's limb or weapon or bypass a static guard.
    The weapon itself can be made to split apart into two, with a chain connecting both ends so it can be swung like a three-sectioned staff.
    The Tonbogiri is stored in a seal the shape of a bisected dragonfly which is on the wielder's upper arm of his dominant hand.
    The Tonbogiri like all legendary ninja weapons, is indestructible, though this does not mean it can slice or stab through everything.
    The blade of the Tonbogiri is made of a pyroelectric material, which means electricity is generated with heat; this basically means fire chakra can be channeled to the blade, setting it aflame while it crackles with electricity at the same time, thus doing much more damage when it strikes. The fire/electricity remains for one turn.

    The weapon does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • Once fire chakra is channeled to the blade, then there has to be a one-turn gap before it can be channeled again.


    ||Both Approved||

    Changed thoughts to chakra flowing activates a mechanism
    New ones -

    ( Katon: Haikafunka Ranma ) ɸ Fire Release: Ash Pile Eruption Anarchy
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80

    An advanced variant of Fire Release: Burning Ash Accumulation, the technique made famous by Asuma Sarutobi, the user spits out a larger volume of ash straight up into the air. The ash then spreads out and floats above the entire battlefield for fifty meters around the user. Whenever the user clicks his teeth, half of the ash descends downward upon an area of ten square meters selected in a vicious cloud from all directions. The opponent is trapped with the burning ash on all sides and above him. The ash then crushes the opponent between itself as well as burning him badly.
    A wind technique can blow the ash away, but due to its density it will return and settle back the next turn, hotter than usual from absorbing the wind.

    The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -
    • This technique may be used only twice per battle.
    • The ash, once released, forms a cloud above the area for two turns. After that, it automatically dissipates and the technique has to be used again if possible.
    • With each use of this technique, the ash can be made to descend and crush twice, either simultaneously at two parts, or any time within the two turns that the ash is present in the cloud.
    • No Forbidden Rank fire techniques for the next two turns.


    ||Declined|| If the ash is blown away, how can it return to its place of origin without some connection. Ash isn't sentient, after all.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    ~ Thread Opened ~
    (Futon: Kaze Ou-Yoroi) - Wind release: Wind Samurai Armor
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 15
    Description: The user uses wind release to control the air around him, creating small spinning winds around his arms, winds around his legs and upper body.
    This technique doesn't have any offensive function besides that the user is able to send small hurricanes that can push the opponent back. The spinning winds work as defense against lightning techs, however after getting hit by B rank lightning, the armor is dispersed. The user can use the spinning winds around his limbs to propel himself in a direction he likes to by shooting the spinning winds from his limbs, and making new winds around the limb after doing so. When the winds are shot from a limb, they are only strong enough to stop an incoming projectile, not a high ranking earth jutsu. The speed at which the user propels himself is very high, making him able to avoid really fast techniques and enables him to levitate 1 meter above the ground.
    • Usable twice per battle
    • Lasts for three rounds when activated
    • The user cannot use lightning techniques while this technique is active
    • Using fire techniques while the technique is active will increase the power of the fire technique by 5 damage, but will also do 5 damage to the user, giving him slight skin burn.

    I hope we aren't talking EIG Speeds here ...~Approved~

    (Hone Hana) - Bone Flower
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is the ultimate defense technique of the Kaguyas. The Kaguya will control the strongest bone in his body, the same one he uses for Dance of Clematis Flower, he will take control of the flower and making it grow out of his whole body, covering his whole body with spiral shape bone, which is hard as diamond when used by someone with Kage rank chakra reserves. When the technique is done, it looks like a spiral shaped cacoon, with sharp tip on top and bottom, when created, half of the cacoon is underground. While inside it, the only thing the user can do is send chakra into the pores of the "cacoon" and make it drill fast into the ground.
    • Can only be used once per battle, and if used, cannot use Dance of Clematis Flower for 3 turns, vice versa.
    • Lasts for two rounds
    • Since the cacoon is drilled halfway into the ground, lightning techs will get grounded and have no effect on the user, however advanced fire techniques and advanced lightning techniques will heat up the cacoon and cook the kaguya inside alive.

    ||Approved||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Futon/Suiton/Raiton: Anata no mēkā: Aiorosu, Poseidon to Zeusu shōkai) - Wind/Water/Lightning: Meet your makers: Aeolus, Poseidon and Zeus
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: After doing 3 hand seals user will create strong wind tornado that even cuts deep into the earth. After 6 more hand seals user will expel large amount of water chakra to make strong water/wind combination and after that user will, after doing 5 hand seals, through high amount of concentration precisely inject huge amount of lightning chakra into tornado thus making one of the strongest elemental combinations.
    *Note - After making water/wind combination it takes 4 seconds of concentration to successfully inject lightning element in water. If user is interrupted in making of wind/water combination user can still use wind tornado (A rank) and if he is interrupted in making wind/water/lightning combination he can still use wind/water tornado (S rank).
    *Note - Tornado lasts for 2 turns and user can control direction of it.
    *Note - This move costs the user 2 whole turns (The one where he made it and one after making it) and after successfully using the whole combination user can't use wind, water and lightning for 2 turns after the jutsu is ended due to huge drain of wind, water and lightning chakra.
    ||Declined|| This is just an Elemental Combo. It's basically 3 separate jutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Gin-Sama View Post
    Summoning Animal: Kangaroo (Kangaru)
    Scroll Owner: Gin-Sama
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Roger Sr.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Roger Jr.

    Summoning Jutsu: Kangaroo Roger Sr. (Kuchiyose :kangaru Roger Sr.)
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user bites their thumb and wipes it on His hand and summon a Kangaroo King Roger Sr. Roger Sr. is an Expert in Taijutsu. his the father of Roger Jr (obviously) He has a fire and Wind Element He can use fire and wind Jutsu A-rank Below but still need hand seal.
    He can slum hes foot that can make a crater,small earthquake or even a fissure by concentrating his chakra in his feet, and he can Extent his tail to attack or to bind the enemy up to Mid range. hes size is like Gamabunta. He use hopping as a means of locomotion. which is the act of self-propulsion. has many manifestations, including running, jumping and flying not totally flying like a bird is like a long jump..
    Note:
    • Can only be summoned Twice per battle.
    • Lasts 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can only use by Gin


    ~ Un-understandable ~

    Lightning Style - Heavens Descent Ranging Dragons
    Raiton - Hebunzu kōka doragon haka
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user's will make an 6 hand sign and then send a lightning chakra on the thunderclouds. the 5 lightning dragons head forms. and the user can manipulate it. either he can direct it to 5 opponents or he can also direct to one opponent. if he direct to one direction its too deadly and it make a big craters in the ground.
    Note:
    • Can only be use if there's a thunder clouds
    • if the user use it in short range he will be dead
    • Can be used only Twice per battle
    • Can only use by Gin


    ~ Restrict it ~

    Earth Style - Pillar torch
    Doton - Hashira Tōchi
    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: the user's will make an 3 hand sign and then slam his hands into the ground. and the 6 pillar torch will appears. 6 big pillars 1 meter circle size and the high is 10 meters and the above of it is a fire like a torch that can make Thunder clouds in the battle field. this pillars you can control it how you use..
    Note:
    • Can use this pillar for prison
    • Can use this pillar for blocking the B rank below attack
    • Thunder clouds will be created in next turn
    • Can be used only Twice per battle
    • Can only use by Gin


    ~ Bad description ~



    Summoning Animal: Kangaroo (Kangaru)
    Scroll Owner: Gin-Sama
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Roger Sr.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Roger Jr.

    Summoning Jutsu: Kangaroo Roger Sr. (Kuchiyose :kangaru Roger Sr.)
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user bites their thumb and wipes it on His hand and summon a Kangaroo King Roger Sr. Roger Sr. is an Expert in Taijutsu. his the father of Roger Jr (obviously) hes size is like Gamabunta.
    He has a fire and Wind Element He can use fire and wind Jutsu A-rank Below but still need hand seal.
    He can slum hes foot that can make a small earthquake
    He can Extent his tail to attack or to bind the enemy.
    He can run fast. he can high jump and long jump
    Note:
    • Can only be summoned Twice per battle.
    • Lasts 4 turns once summoned.
    • Can only use by Gin


    ___________________


    Lightning Style - Heavens Descent Ranging Dragons
    Raiton - Hebunzu kōka doragon haka
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user's will make an 6 hand sign and then send a lightning chakra on the thunderclouds. the 5 lightning dragons head forms. and the user can manipulate it. either he can direct it to 5 opponents or he can also direct to one opponent. if he direct to one direction its too deadly and it make a big craters in the ground.
    Note:
    • Can only be use if there's a thunder clouds
    • if the user use it in short range he will be dead
    • This technique may be used only once per battle.
    • No Forbidden Rank techniques for the next two turns.
    • Can only use by Gin


    __________________

    Earth Style - Pillar torch
    Doton - Hashira Tōchi
    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: the user's will make an 3 hand sign and then slam/stomp into the ground. and the 6 pillar torch will be raising from the ground. 1 meter circle size and the high is 10 meters and the above of it is a fire like a torch that can make Thunder clouds in the battle field. this pillars you can control it how you use..
    Note:
    • Can use this pillar to trap the opponent like Pillar Prison
    • Can use this pillar for blocking the B rank below attack
    • Thunder clouds will be created in next turn
    • Can be used only Twice per battle
    • Can only use by Gin


    ___________________
    Alligator - Blade
    waniguchi - ken
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 (+5 each turn its activated)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A weapon that own by a very dangerous assassin code name "God of death" This weapon is a large and huge Blade weighting 45 kilos. this Blade can block or shield of minimum explosion. and also can throw like a Spear. this blade is unbreakable. The user can channeled Chakra to the blade and can adsorb Lightning Attacks when it connected to the ground. to activate the sword the user must constantly give it chakra,once the user stops,it just becomes a Normal Blade. If This blade is on the users back it can still be activated. +10 bonus to Elements

    to the reader or to who read this. this is not yet finish i will try it to edit asap. i sign out now see yeah...



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    ||All Declined|| Bad Descriptions, plus most of them make little to no sense.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: Raiton : Kami Genkotsu (Lightning Style : God Fist)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user uses a large amount of Raiton chakra to supercharge the electrons on his hand(s), and thus increasing the electrons mass and force to the equivalent of a large truck. The user does this just before he punches, but can harm the user if the punch hits anything, as there is nothing stopping some of force from being pushed back at the user's fist.
    Note
    - Can only be used twice in battle.
    - The push back force from the punch landing breaks the user's hand (making it unusable till repaired) and thus is why it can only be used twice in battle.
    -This jutsu has to be done just before the punch is thrown as the increased mass of the electrons will be too heavy if done too early or late.
    - (Can only be taught by Ragerok)
    P.S If you can't see how this would work Pm me and I will tell you with all the science stuff.
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    Name: Doton: Kadou Gatling Gan (Earth Style: Mobile Gatling Gun)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user uses Earth chakra to fuse one of his arms with nearby rock and forms a circle with 8 rock hollow barrels around the arm. Then by using Wind chakra they can fire up to 8 bullet-like projectiles at their enemy. There is rifling (spiraling grooves) inside the barrels for added spin and penetration.
    Note
    - Can only be used twice.
    - Firing at long range decreases it's penetration abilities.
    - Its recoil can cause it to be inaccurate
    - The user must use all projectiles as the jutsu only lasts one turn.
    - (Can only be taught by Ragerok)

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    ||Approved||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ragerok View Post
    Name: Raiton : Kami Genkotsu (Lightning Style : God Fist)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user uses a large amount of Raiton chakra to supercharge the electrons on his hand(s), and thus increasing the electrons mass and force to the equivalent of a large truck. The user does this just before he punches, but can harm the user if the punch hits anything, as there is nothing stopping some of force from being pushed back at the user's fist.
    Note
    - Can only be used twice in battle.
    - The push back force from the punch landing breaks the user's hand (making it unusable till repaired) and thus is why it can only be used twice in battle.
    -This jutsu has to be done just before the punch is thrown as the increased mass of the electrons will be too heavy if done too early or late.
    - (Can only be taught by Ragerok)

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    Name: Doton: Kadou Gatling Gan (Earth Style: Mobile Gatling Gun)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user uses Earth chakra to fuse one of his arms with nearby rock and forms a circle with 8 rock hollow barrels around the arm. Then by using Wind chakra they can fire up to 8 bullet-like projectiles at their enemy. There is rifling (spiraling grooves) inside the barrels for added spin and penetration.
    Note
    - Can only be used twice.
    - Firing at long range decreases it's penetration abilities.
    - Its recoil can cause it to be inaccurate
    - The user must use all projectiles as the jutsu only lasts one turn.
    - (Can only be taught by Ragerok)

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    I'm pretty sure guns are forbidden as CJ, simply because they were never shown to have been used in the anime.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Hasashi~ View Post
    flame-flame punch (mera-mera panchi)
    rank: A
    type: attack
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: 80 (60 for A rank+flame-flame bodi boost)
    description: This technique is Ace's signature move, a combination of fire and taijutsu. He charges the opponent while turning his hand to fire and punches out at the opponent releasing an inferno of fire incinerating the opponent.
    ~only when mera-mera is activated

    ~ Similar technique exists ~

    flame flame whips (mera-mera shiranui)
    rank: S
    type: attack
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: 100 (80+20 for mera-mera)
    description: Ace launches two long lances made of fire at his opponent's chest. The lances have the combined effect of simultaneously burning an opponent while piercing their chest.
    ~only when mera-mera is active

    ~ What, no restrictions ? ~

    flame flame whips (mera-mera shiranui)
    rank: S
    type: attack
    range: short
    chakra: 40
    damage: 100 (80+20 for mera-mera)
    description: Ace launches two long lances made of fire at his opponent's chest. The lances have the combined effect of simultaneously burning an opponent while piercing their chest.
    ~only when mera-mera is active
    ~Twice per battle
    ~no wind jutsu same turn
    ||Approved|| I changed it to "twice per battle".


    this next one is a remake of an old custom i just want to clear up what i mean in the jutsu

    earth style: crushing earth (doton: assai tsuchi)
    rank: A
    type: attack
    range: short-long
    chakra: 30
    damage: 60
    description: First the user will make the basic earth hand sign, then by focussing his chakra throughout any form of earth (whether it be a dust cloud, a bunch of mud, the opponent being underground ect...) then the earth will come together and crush the opponent/s surrounded by the earth. This jutsu can also be used to ready the earth below the opponent to crush him as soon as he enters
    ~3 times per battle
    ||Declined|| (Similar Jutsu Exists)


    mera mera jiten (flame flame spin)
    type: Attack
    rank: S
    range: short-long (depending on the speed and power of the spin)
    chakra: 40
    damage: 100 (+20 for mera-mera mode)
    description: Much similar to the Hyuga clan rotation Ace spins top speed. Because of his body of fire the spinning releases a wave of fire that burns everything in it's path(goes in all directions) at high speeds (the same speeds as pressure damage). When the technique ends the entire battlefield is left in ruins and the ground in a near-lava state. No more ice jutsu can be used for the duration of the battle, Furthermore all water sources previously on the field are evaporated, thus in order to perform most water jutsu the opponent first has to create a source however water jutsu that don't require a source are usable. All fire jutsu (for the user and opponent) go up +10 due to the heat in the air. Since the jutsu is made originally from Ace's own body he can choose if he wants to appear at the end of the wave by traveling the fire or remain in the same position.
    ~1 times per battle
    ~only fire jutsu in the same turn as usage
    ~only 2 jutsu in the same turn and the next turn
    ~no fire jutsu 2 turns after mera-mera ends because of this
    ~the opponent takes +20 damage instantly due to the heat in the air after the technique ends and whenever the user ends mera-mera mode he takes the same damage (+20)
    ~only water jutsu of the same rank (either S with a boost or forbidden b/c the jutsu equals in power with forbidden due to mera mera technique) can stop this jutsu. If a water jutsu on a lower rank is used it will just be evaporated
    ||Pending|| I want Emperor's opinion.
    ~ Approved ~

    note that although the way it is created is similar to rotation they are completely different techniques
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton- Mizu Baindo) Water release- Water Bind
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Attack points: 60
    Description: the user envelopes the opponent in chakra infused water while the opponent is underwater. The water around the opponent converges on him enabling him to be able to come back up for air and holds him tight bruising him.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: User must have contact w/ the water source.
    *Note: Opponent must be underwater.



    (Doton- Doryuu Kekai Gyakuten) Earth release- Earth Fissure Reversal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Attack points: n/a
    Description: the user performs the same hand seals as the earth fissure, but at the end claps his hands together closing the fissure crushing anybody that has happened to fall inside after performing the earth fissure prior to this jutsu.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.


    (Katon- Furea Doragon) Fire Release- Flare Dragon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Attack points: 60
    Description: the user will throw a kunai w/ a paper bomb attached to it that when detonated will flare up a dragon of fire that will collide w/ the opponent burning him.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.
    *Note: can only be used 3x per battle.

    ||All Declined| Similar Jutsu Exists, and the last one is just pointless.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton:ikimono kurie-shon)~ Earth style:Animal creation
    Type: Supplementary/attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30(60 if the user makes the biggest creature)
    Attack points: 60
    Description: The user will concentrate chakra in their hands and slam them into the ground(or any other earth source),then with their chakra they will draw an animal(whatever animal,the user can choose) on the ground and that animal will gain "life" and rise and help the user in the fight.The animal's size depends on how much earth the user used and how much chakra the user used.Making bigger animal would take more time to draw.This animals don't have any kinds of special power and can do exactly the same that animal could do without using jutsu(For example,if the user draws a bird,that bird can fly but won't be able to use any jutsu).The animals are made of earth and can be used as a source for another earth jutsu.
    • Note: can only be used by Jinbei.
    • Note: can only be used once in three turns.
    • Note:The biggest animal the user can create with this will be of gamabunta's size and will take a total of 10 seconds to draw with chakra,however smaller creatures will only take 5 and the smallest will only take 1 second.


    ||Pending|| I like the idea, but it seems exploitable to the point that you could make some sort of invincible creature.
    ~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

    If you find anything that isn't good enough feel free to change
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    |Shinigami Tenshidan| Death Angel Squad
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40 (+10 chakra per ability)
    Damage: 80
    Description:

    "They were sent from the heavens to cleave the souls of men in two. Vengeful souls have no chance and neither do you"

    Shingami Tenshidan, is a set of six weapons; Sword, Axe, Mace, Hammer, Dagger, and Lance. By combining them into one, the user can create the Rokusupirittoken| 6 Spirit Sword. Shingami Tenshidan on its own is a very formidable set of weapons, able to be controlled by the users, chakra the user can attack the opponent quickly, and sufficiently. Each one has its own special set of abilities...

    Sword
    A long slender weapon and the most balanced weapon of the 6, it's able to slice jutsu A-Rank and below in half stopping them 2-Times per battle and has a Raiton-Based affinity, allowing it to be able to conduct Lightning Chakra.

    Hammer
    A ball and chain weapon, it can be used from multiple ranges making it a very useful weapon. By coating this weapon with Fire Chakra the fire chakra is expelled in all directions spherically around the Hammer, which creates a larger version of the weapon the size of Katon: Blaze Ball, only its controllable by the user only 2-times per battle.

    Mace
    A long weapon with large spike protrusions at its head. If the user infuses it with Earth Chakra, by slamming it on the Ground it can cause a huge crater up to about Mid-Range releasing a shockwave, 2 times per battle.

    Lance
    A typical lance style weapon that has a drill style body that spirals into a sharp point. By coating this weapon with Wind Chakra, the user can throw this weapon, and have it move at blinding speeds due to the speed of wind and the rotation of the drill body making it aerodynamic and easily able pierce the opponent. 2-times per battle.

    Dagger
    A short but over-sized weapon, it has 6 points on it enabling the weapon to pierce the opponent in multiple points on their body. By using water chakra, when the dagger enters the opponent's body it can absorb the moisture, causing dehydration to the opponent only, 2 times per battle.

    Axe
    A typical Axe Styled weapon, it can be charged with a chakra, to allow it to expand or extend to the user's will only 2-times per battle.



    ~ Declined, too many weapons ~
    (Dropping Disk Armor)


    Shuurai Tekken Do [Way of the Lightning Strike Fist]
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: +30 to taijutsu
    Description: Believed in the Country of Lightning to be one of the oldest taijutsu styles still in practice, Shuurai Tekken Do was originally developed by the monks that helped to create the first incarnation of the Hidden Village of Cloud long before there were even inklings of such a drastic change. Honed over hundreds of years, this style has been given an essential definition that is rooted in the seeming paradox of the practice of the style itself: "What you cannot see can indeed hurt you."

    The paradoxical nature of the practice of this style is the fact that despite being called the 'Way of the Lightning Strike Fist,' practitioners of Shuurai Tekken Do are known for their meticulously, almost languidly slow pace during practice. A simple movement bringing a fist across the chest from left to right may take up to a full minute or more in practice, but therein lies the difficulty itself. During all movements, muscles are constantly tensed and released without exerting much outward motion, thus making the slowness of the style the way in which it tones the body. Many practitioners choose to hold large buckets filled to the very brim with water while practicing, hoping to attain a sort of rigid fluidity, a statement that highlights the paradox present in the style's practice.

    In combat, however, the practitioner demonstrates exactly what this type of practice does for his or her close combat ability. As the practitioner progresses, the laboriously slow practice tones the muscles in such a way that muscle reaction times are increased exponentially with every level of the style achieved. Thus, in a combat situation, the practitioner spends the fight attacking with extremely quick single hits and flurries and then backing off, rapidly responding to any counter-attacks made, and then repeating the process ad lib. When mastery of this style is attained, some users have been known to appear to stand still while their opponent is mysteriously ravaged and bloodied when coming near to them. Despite the general lack in strength exhibited even by masters of this style, it is still a wholly destructive art. The Raikage has covered up the weakness in this taijutsu by increasing his muscle capacity to the extreme. This style coupled with his Raikage Armor makes him an unstoppable force in close clombat by those using anything less then the 6th Gate.

    Shuurai Tekken Do: Stages

    Shokidankai: Arashinomaenoshizukesa [Initial Stage: The Calm Before the Storm]
    In the first stage of learning Shuurai Tekken Do, the practitioner focuses in training on slow, fluid motion while flexing and releasing different areas of muscle. No aids are yet used to provide extra resistance to the training, only strict guidance from a good teacher with a judgemental hand. In battle, the practitioner focuses on blocking with sweeping motions and striking with fast single strikes, taking advantage of the forms learned in practice.

    Nidankai: An'unteimei [Second Stage: The Gathering Stormclouds]
    After a suitable duration of undertaking the first style to build on the basics, the teacher will add a tool to the practitioner's repetoire - small cups filled to the brim with a liquid. The goal of this addition is to work on the fluidity of the movements while still maintaining rigid muscle control. In battle, the practitioner's speed is noticably faster than the average ninja, and while the sweeping blocks are now accompanied by extremely fast forearm and shin blocks, the single fast strike policy still stands for attacking.

    Sandankai: Yorunotobari [Third Stage: The Veil of Darkness]
    The third stage of learning Shuurai Tekken Do is a grueling one, as whole days are sometimes spent a single position, the two cups of the previous stage being accompanied now by cups positioned on the head, shoulders, tops of the hands and feet, and on the knees. The user spends long durations in a sitting position with arms level at the shoulders, but without a chair to sit on. Sometimes, if the teacher is feeling particularly cruel, the student may be asked to try walking in a small circle while the cups are all still in place. In battle, the practitioner begins to use striking flurries in addition to the quick single strikes, as well as learning to add counters behind the now extremely fast blocks.

    Yodankai: Haizename [Fourth Stage: The Torrential Rain]
    Once the practitioner has attained what the instructor deems to be proper levels of fluidity and solidity, the cups in hand are traded in for medium-sized buckets of water with rough rope handles, which are still filled to the brim with a liquid. The rest of the cups of the previous stage are removed. This adds the extra aspect of maintaining fluidity while improving on muscle control due to the resistance of the added fluid weight. In battle, the practitioner approaches speeds that will baffle the human eye and batter the human body, but due to intense training the user will be able to control every strike, counter, and dodge to a keen precision. Strong single strikes and the occasional flurry are still the mainstay of the practitioner's offense, though there is now a considerable increase in the power behind them.

    Sasshuudankai: Tekken Tenrai no Raijin [Final Stage: The Divine Fist of Raijin]
    In the final stage of Shuurai Tekken Do, the teacher acknowledges the student's abilites by leaving the last training up to him, as the learning is now essentially complete. A complete emphasis on speed should be the focus of the training in the Final Stage; some training methods used in the past include weighted training underwater, deep squats carrying livestock on the shoulders while standing under a waterfall, and other such extremes. In combat, the practitioner is now the stuff of the legends surrounding this style, seeming to be able to attack without physically moving the body from a standstill. Striking and countering become so fluid and fast that some say the blocks are almost up before the opponent's strike begins and the counter is made before the strike is retracting.


    ~ Declined; OP. Do not resubmit. ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Taijutsu no Akimichi keibatsu: desu winku ) - Akimichi clan taijutsu: death wink
    Rank: A
    Type: offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will focus expansion chakra only on his head, therefore making it's size enormous. By concentrating futon chakra into his eyelashes, the user will begin to bat them generating big waves of blunt and pushing wind; which hurt the foe.
    Notes: Only one another move the same turn used with this.(Because this counts as 2 moves)
    Notes: Must be member of the akimichi clan in order to use this.
    Notes: Can be used up to 3 times per battle shooting 3 waves of blunt wind onto the foe.

    ^new-kama kenpo
    ~Add chakra cost and make it just one wave in my opinion~


    (Taijutsu no Akimichi keibatsu: Tru Jinrai ) - Akimichi clan taijutsu: True thunderclap
    Rank: S
    Type: offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80 (-15 to user)
    Description: The user, with both of his hands expanded, will quickly gather raiton chakra into them creating a small cloak of lightning energy within them. With the akimichi strength, the user claps strongly disrupting the raiton chakra flow of his palms, making an electrical surge of electricity race through to the opponent while covering a wide range.
    Notes: Although it is akimichi taijutsu, this jutsu is labeled as ninjutsu.
    Notes: Must have both hands expanded by the partial expansion jutsu or have the whole body expanded with chou baika no jutsu.
    Notes: Must be from the akimichi clan.
    Notes: Can only be done twice per battle.
    ~again add chakra, a bit more description on the form of the lightning, is it like a wave or a straight blast? etc.~



    (Ninjutsu no Akimichi keibatsu: Gomu mane modo ) - Akimichi clan Ninjutsu: Rubber Imitation mode
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: oneself (Short-Mid)
    Chakra: 30 (-20 to maintain)
    Damage: N/A (+5 to user's taijutsu; -10 to the opponents taijutsu)
    Description: The akimichi clan member will, in short row of 4 handseals, will channel expansion chakra throught his entire body. By being an expert akimichi clan member, the user can actually manipulate the expansion chakra in order to make the user's body gain rubber like properties:
    -Resistance to blunt damage (punches, pushes, kicks, hammers, etc)
    -Capacity to stretch one's own limbs up to mid range(Bubun baika already does this, but in this case it doesn't compromise the body volume)
    Notes: Lasts 6 full turns.
    Notes: Must be a member akimcihi clan member with at least sannin chakra reserves.
    Notes: During it's duration, the user must give up an element to keep the feed of expansion chakra to his whole body. The said element will not be able to be used until 2 turns after the deactivation of this mode.
    Notes: Once worn off no more expansion techniques for the remainder of the battle.
    Notes: Insulating properties of rubber are NOT imitated whatsoever.

    Why the jutsu is realistic: we have seen akimichi clan members expand their own bodies with their techniques. We can clearly see all of their bodies are expanded (organs, tissue, chakra pathway system) in order to keep their body in in balance and to adapt to their current size. By utilizing the expansion chakra, and controlling it and molding it in the right quantities, the user can make his limbs and body parts stretch (alongside their bones, blood vessels, etc) without hurting them but also, without compromising their body volume.

    We actually can see choji stretching his arm to mid-range in an ougi jutsu of Narutimate accel 2 with the partial expansion jutsu.

    (Luffy wanna be )
    ~Declined, just changing body size won't give taijutsu immunity as it isn't turning you to rubber.
    also blunt damage would include various earth ninjutsu so it's OP at 6 turns~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Parseltounge: Heibi to-ku no jutsu)- Parseltounge: Snake Speak technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: N/a
    Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have spent a long time with snakes and signed their summoning contract. Using this jutsu the user is able to speak the language of snakes and effectively take control over any snakes on the battlefield, even those summoned by an opponent.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Cannot control Manda the snake boss summon.
    *User cannot summon anything of his own while controlling an opponents snake summon. Jutsu like the hidden shadow snake hands can still be used as it isn't considered a summoning.
    *If another snake master uses this jutsu at the same time, rank will determine who takes control. If both are the same rank, the original summoner keeps control.
    *The user can continue speaking in the language of snakes for the rest of the battle.
    Decline: no commanding other people's summons.


    Genjutsu: (Heibi's Kowakuteki Serena-do ) Snake's Sweet Serenade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After using the Parseltounge jutsu to speak in the language of snakes the user takes advantage of the charming nature of snakes to place the opponent in a genjutsu. In many stories snakes have an alluring quality and often use this charm to draw things to them and tempt them. By speaking certain words/phrases in the snake language the target is put under a genjutsu that unknowingly draws him/her towards the sound. They won't want to get out of short-range of the user as long as the user is speaking this way. This jutsu can also be done by snake summonings if the user doesn't want to preform the jutsu himself as they naturally speak the language of snakes.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must be able to summon snakes
    *Must know and have preformed the Parseltounge jutsu or have a summoned snake on the field.
    *While having the genjutsu active the user cannot attack using anything but taijutsu, as it would be too difficult to keep the genjutsu active by speaking and preform another jutsu. The opponent can still attack as normal.
    *This jutsu lasts until the user stops speaking the words or is hit, preventing him from continuing speaking.
    wouldn't you stop speaking to utter the words of the jutsu you would perform?
    that should be included but i can understand a clone doing it for you.


    Note: This is similar to how Ma and Pa toad have their genjutsu song. If you want me to change it so only summoned snakes can preform it that's fine, but having the user do it makes him more vulnerable as he can only use taijutsu...

    (Kuchiyose: Chika Heibi Debari)Summoning: Underground Snake Projection
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: N/a
    Description: This is a variation of the summoning jutsu. Using this jutsu the user preforms all the same steps as a normal summoning, but upon slamming his/her hand on the ground nothing seemingly appears, making the opponent think the jutsu failed. What has really happened is that the user has summoned a snake directly underground, and at anypoint this turn or next, can have the snake erupt from underneath the target attempting to swallow them or bind them, etc.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must be able to summon snakes
    *Snake must come out of the ground either the turn this is used, or next turn, otherwise it will suffocate and die

    Declined. depending on the size of the snake this would be pretty much impossible to avoid.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton:Shakkuri)-Wind Style:Hiccup
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the neccesary handseals (4) the user will blow from his mouth a very small wind gust at the opponent. The wind will enter through the opponent mouth and nose and it flows through the pharynx, past the glottis and into the larynx and trachea, ending in the lungs. After 1 opponents turns passes the opponent's muscles of the chest and abdomen aids the airflow to move down when the opponent inhales, and then up when exhales, causing the opponent to have hiccups and limits the user to use jutsus that are blown,spew and spit from the mouth since the opponents haves hiccups the jutsus will get stuck in the lungs or trachea and damage them greatly (depending on what jutsu is used).
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Thsi jutsu's effect last for 3 turns.
    Note: No fuuton jutsus for the next 3 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji


    Declined: I really like the idea, but it stops most fire
    and Wind jutsu.


    (Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu:Kyo)-Wolverine Summoning Jutsu-Kyo
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Kyo is the Wolverine Boss Summoning. He is the same size of Katsuyu, he also has a shirt similar to Pakkun's but with ''Fire'' writed on the back, he has claws and fangs with the half size of and average tree and thick brown-redish fur. Kyo has a Fire affinity that lets him used fire jutsu below A-rank but he can only used 4 of them withing the time his summoned he also has a very sharp sense of smell that can help him recognize or find his target or summoner but he can only used this skill 2 times within the time his' summoned.
    Note: Kyo stays summoned for 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Must posses the Wolverine contract.


    Seems good to me, i would however like emp to approve/decline.


    (Katon/Futon:Kunai Dzuki Ken)-Fire/Wind Style:Kunai to Blade
    Type: Offensive/Deffensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will grab a kunai and infused wind chakra in it, the chakra will expands into a sharp blade then the user will exhale fire to the chakra blade engulfing it in flames. This blade can be used in a normal fashion and can penetrate a human body with ease and burning it aswell. It also give the advantage that it retains both the light weight and versitility of the kunai while gaining the length of a sword.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Last for 2 turns
    Note: No wind or fire jutsus while using this jutsu.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.


    Declined: purely on a logical basis.
    to keep the fire burning you need to infuse wind constantly,
    this means the fire would be burning your hand by setting the fresh wind chakra alight too.


    (Futon:Hebi)-Wind Style:Snake
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After performing the neccesary handseals (6) the user will create vortex of wind that takes the form of a giant snake that slithers its way to the opponent destroying everything in it's path. The snake can also be used to ''wrapped'' the user to protect him from incoming attack or blow away big sizes objetcs.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: No wind jutsu while using this jutsu or after using it.
    Note: Can only be taught By Ryuji.


    i'd like clarification, it can only attack or defend per use right?
    not defend you then be sent straight to attack?
     
         
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    (Soudai Sanda-ba-do Gigei|Ikazuchi Pairu)- Majestic Thunderbird Mode| Thunder Pile!
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:100
    Damage Points:90
    Description: the user focuses a massive amount of chakra into their palms. Then they rub their hands together creating friction into the hands of the user then the opponent separates their hands creating a crackling sound in both of their hands. then an electrical current starts to glow yellow because of the electrical current. the the user claps their had together sending an electrical blast from the users hand upon impact of the hands clapping
    (Can only be used once per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)


    Declined, the only downside is chakra drain?


    (Suiton|Wanioike)- Water Release|Alligators In a Pond

    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user focuses water chakra into there hands and slams them on the ground. It then releases a Giant Pond of water underneath the opponent. Then the user forms one Handseal to create Alligators that are made of water under the surface of the pond. then the alligators pull the opponent underwater causing him/her/it to get downed in water.
    (Can only be used twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    seems approvable if the alligators can't leave the pond.
    add that part in please.

    (Konmoui|Konami)- Soul Menace|Big Wave
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user focuses lightning chakra into their elbow. then the user rams their elbow in the back of the opponent. At that instant the user releases the lightning chakra in the elbow sending a shock wave of lightning through the opponents body numbing them for the rest of the turn. If the elbo makes contact with the exact center of the oppoents back the oppoent will cough up massive amounts of blood upon impact
    (Can only be used twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    how can this be mid range?


    (Konmoui|Nentenkei)- Soul Menace|Twisting Punishment
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user focuses lightning chakra into their palms then the user slams his/her on the opponents chest. When it connects the user turns there palm to the right in a 90 degree angle when the opponent turns their hand it will release the massive wave of chakra into the opponent sending them flying backward.
    (Can only be used twice per battle)
    (Can only be taught by Daemon)

    again... how can this be mid range?



    (Okaishiki No Buraindo Samurai)- Heightened Senses of Blind Swordsman
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:100
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: This technique can only be activated if the user is blinded or cannot see.(the user can cover their eyes with a blind fold for it to work properly). He/She focuses their chakra into the 2 senses of the body, the Ears,and nose. Once the user focuses a massive amount of chakra into these to parts of their body, the senses are heightened immensely. Here are the effects of the heightened heightened senses:
    ~ Nose: the users ability to smell increases drastically much to the effectiveness of the Inuzuka Clan. This Ability doesn't last long it only lasts 2 turns when this is activated.
    ~ Ears: His/Hers hearing is improved greatly. This part is powerful that it can hear an opponents foot steps and breathing from Mid-range. This only Lasts 2 turns.

    Disadvantages:

    1) While this is activated the user can only use Kenjutsu and Taijuutsu nothing else.
    2) This technique can only be taught 2 by two other people who can deem themselves worthy to learn

    Advantages:

    1) the user cannot be put under genjutsu that require eye contact.
    2) the users reflexes are heightened.

    Restrictions:

    (this can only be used once per battle)
    (this lasts 2 turns)
    (only Kenjutsu and taijutsu can be used while this is activated)
    (can ony be taught by Daemon)
    (after this jutsu is deactivated the users chakra levels are low and will take 2 tunrs for the chakra lost to return. meaning after the jutsu is deactivated they can only use b-rank and lower jutsu


    will leave for caliburn, as it seems based for kenjutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I am dropping my 4 Head Axe fir this sword.


    (Inu Nendo)Dog Clay
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Dog Clay is a katana sword. The swpord hilt is shaped into a dog and the color of the handle is white like Deidara's clay with four black diamonds on each side. On the blade it has the Uchiha crest on each side. The user wears the sword on his right hip. The sword can channel their lightning chakra through the blade, Ths user can also channel Chidori and Lightning Fang through the blade. This sword was only made for Deidara Nara and the sword will return to him by the him whistling.

    -When the user channels Chidori it will cost the same amount of chakra but with a added 25.
    -When channeling Lightning Fang through the blade it will be the same amount of chakra but with a added 20.
    -When ever the user channels one of this attacks the user can't channel their lightning chakra through the blade for 3 turns.
    -When the user channels their lightning chakra their the blade the amount of chakra is 15.

    seems OP
    the bold part is bad description,
    does this mean any attack used through the sword would only take 15 chakra?
     
         
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    (Enjin Waruyoi Ryodan) Gorilla Drunken Brigade

    Rank: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The Drunken Brigade is a squad of 4 humanoid puppets (Drunkies), each with different abilities and hidden weapons. They're perfectly capable of being used simultaneously, but the user can choose to bring less into battle, with the option of summoning the remainning ones with a single scroll.

    Murdok Niccals (Kengou)

    Murdok, or the Master Fencer, is the main puppet, and it serves as a second body for the puppeteer, from where she can manipulate all the other Drunkies. While inside this puppet, the user is able to preform handseals and jutsus. Murdok is a fairly agile puppet, and weilds a cane, hidding a thin katana, but since it bears the user, it's movements are somewhat slowed down to those of a normal ninja. The user is able to remove her arm from the puppet's arm, increasing their movement greatly, making it seem as if the puppet has 4 arms. If needed, the user can escape the puppet extremely fast.
    • Guards the User
    • One Katana/Cane
    • Use Jutsus
    • Seems to have 4 Swords, due to Arm Speed


    Russel Hobbs (Yokodzuna)

    Russel, or Sumo Champion, is the largest and strongest Drunkie (2,5 meters tall). His fists are made of steel, and can grow spikes to increase it's offencive abilities. It's also the toughest puppet to destroy, not because of it's structure, but because of the Chakra Shields he can summon. He has one on each arm(which open from his forearms), one on each leg, two big ones (appear from his diafragm and from his back) and a spherical one that appear around his head. All of them can deflect up to large and heavy weapons, and up to B rank jutsus. (An A rank destroys the shield, and the correspondent Leg/Arm/Head(Not Torso)). Each shield can only be used 2 times max.
    Despite being a large puppet, it is surprizingly fast (though the slowest of all the Drunkies). He can shoot out each fist once per battle, at great speeds. Either to punch a target or grab it (Simply for Constriction, it isn't retractable)

    Steel Fists, which Grow Spikes
    7 Chakra Shields (Up to B Rank)
    Shoot Fists

    Stuart "2D" Pot (Kikeijin)

    Stuart, or the Trickster, is a poison puppet. His arms have 2 small compartiments with a seal inside, which summons small winged balls, like big flies. They're twice has fast as normal flies, and when thrown at an opponent, they fly aimlessly in zigzag until they reach their targets. Upon contact, they inject a deaddly poison (There are multiple injection points, so it doesn't matter the side that touches the target). These flies are very fragile, and at the smalles touch they simply disperse, injecting their poison.
    It can shoot out a shower of needles from his mouth, that poison at the smallest cut. His Legs (Up to the knee) and Arms (Up to the elbow) are filled with near invisible stings, which inject poison at the minimum contact. Once per battle, the puppet can spit a cloud of poison. He is the second fastest puppet, though it's still alot slower than the fastest puppet. His poison has powerfull paralizing abilities. The targetted person can't stand after 3 seconds, and will gradually loose motion. In about 3 days, the person stops breathing and it's heart stops beating.

    • Cloud of Poison
    • Poisonous Flies (20)
    • Poisonous Needle Shooter (Mouth)
    • Poisonous Arms and Legs


    Noodles (Sokutama)

    Noodles, or the Speed Ball, is the fastest puppet, due to it's short size. His speed almost touch the 2nd Gate, though to reach it's top speed, no other puppet can move, including the user itself when inside the main puppet. He can bring forth an extendable blade from it's palms and feet, which can be as short has a dagger or as long as a katana, aswell as multiple ones from his back. The fists and anckles can rotate, giving him great sword agility. He has 2 seals on each shoulder, which allows him to summon 4 additional arms, with the same characteristics as the original ones.

    Top Speed, 2nd Gate Equivalent
    Extendable Blades (4) and Flexible Wrists/Ankles
    Multiple Blades Pop from the Back
    4 Additional Arms and Blades (Seal)


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