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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Seiteki Menkan)-Great Static Discharge
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: After weaving 5 handsigns, the user gathers raiton chakra between his/her hands. The condensed raiton chakra forms a ball between the user's hands, and than is shot out at or near the enemy. If not shot directly at the opponent that ball can stop in mid air, and fire out several small balls of electricity in 360 degrees.
    note: User has to get to long range or defend against the A.O.E attack also
    note: When shot as A.O.E dmg reduces to 20(aka paralyze)
    note: can only be taught by Uchihaj

    (Raiton: Youshi ) Proton Neutralization
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Description: The User releases raiton in the form of protons all around him/her. This proton field cancels out any B rank Raiton jutsu coming toward them as a current. The jutsu stops raiton jutsus cancels out jutsus if they are in a Sphere or current shape.

    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Cannot stop Raiton in the shape of spears/chidori
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchihaj


    Summoning Animal: Peacocks/Peafowl
    Scroll Owner:UchihaJ
    Other Users who have signed contract: Uchiha Jinchuuriki ... (When bio gets approved...)
    Summoning Boss if existing: Melak Ta’us: The White (I'll make him later)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Gwaihir Lord of the Seas
    Overview: Large land avian summon. Affinity for genjutsu and wind/water/fire jutsus. Weak to Raiton. Animals that are know for their large extravagant tail, which can place enemies in a genjutsu if it is spread wide. Peacocks also have sharp claws for slashing and cutting. Peacocks aren't able to fly for long distances and serve as poor sources of transportation most of the time.
    Only Manwe and Gwaihir can fly for extend timed other peacocks limited to 2 turns of flight in battle.

    All who sign the contract must get this Peacock tatoo below their left wrist


    Kujakui Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gwaihir-sama
    Type: Supplemental
    Rank: A
    Chakra:30
    Dmg: N/A
    Description: After biting one's finger and putting the blood on the peacock tatoo, the user jumps into the air with their hands facing below them and summons Gwaihir. The user than holds .Gwaihir is one of the four lords of the Peacocks. As the lord of the sea, Gwaihir knows Fuuton up to B rank . Gwaihir also has massive talons to cut and slice opponent. Gwaihir is quarter the size of gamabunta. Can place enemy under a B rank genjutsu of paralysis if the enemy looks when Gwaihir shows his unfolded tail. Gwaihir is one of two peacocks that have master full flight or the Manwe.

    note: Can fly for all 3 turns
    note: Only stays in battle for 3 turns (cannot summon any other eagle Gwaihir is defeated or leaves)
    note: Can only be summoned once
    note: must have signed the Peacock contract

    (Suiton: Mizu Jiraigen)-Water Minefield
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    DMG:60
    Description: The user performs 4 hand signs and the mist from Hidden Mist jutsu condenses into several condensed water spheres on the ground throughout the battlefield. After 1 turn the balls explode destroying almost everything on the ground in the battlefield.

    note:Must have used Hidden mist justu on a previous turn and mist still present.
    note: can only be taught by Uchihaj

    (Suiton: Suikoundan Haretsu)- Water Shark Missile Explosion
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    DMG: 60
    Description: When the user performs a Water Shark missile this jutsu can be activated when the missile is in flight. After performing two hand seals the shark missile open its mouth wide and split into to smaller faster sharks that collide on the opponent exploding. The collision than turns into a giant sphere like water prison. Once the opponent is captured the sphere explodes. This always the shark missile to dodge a blocking jutsu and continue to attack the target.

    Note: User must user Water Shark Missile before this jutsu
    Note: Can only be used 3 time in battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchihaj

    ~All Declined~ Over the weekly limit(Yes summoning contracts count too)
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-15-2011 at 05:03 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Johninto Takashi View Post
    Summoning Animal: Bulls
    Scroll Owner: Johninto Takashi
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    -Approved-
    Summoning Boss: Red Horn
    (Kchuysei:Reddohōn) Summoning: Red Horn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 100
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Red Horn Is The King Of Bulls. He Is As Big As Gamabunta But His Horns Are Red And HHis Body Is Gray. Red Horn Can Use Up To A Rank Fire Release Which Doesnt Require Hand Seals When He Is Summoned. He Will Allow The Summoner To Ride In His Head. He Run At Great Speeds And Use His Horns To Attack At Oppents.
    Note:
    -This Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Bull Contract.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.



    Other Animals Tied To This Contract: Long Horn, Black, Gold
    (Kchuysei: Ronguhōn ushi) Summoning: Long Horn
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After The User Does The Hands Signs They Can Summon Long Horn. Long Horn Is The Bother Of Red Horn. He Is The Same Size Of Red Horn But He Uses UP To B Rank Earth Release. He Has Anger Problems But Will Taken On Any Enemy.
    Note
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Bull Contract.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

    (Kchuysei: Kuro) Summoning: Black
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After The User Does The Hands Signs They Can Summon Black. Black Is The Son Of Red Horn. He Is The Same Size As Gamakichi But He Uses Up To C Rank Water Release. He Wants To Follow In His Father's Foot Steps. He Lets Summoners Ride On Him.
    Note
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Bull Contract.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

    (Kchuysei: Kimu) Summoning: Gold
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After The User Does The Hands Signs They Can Summon Gold. Gold Is The Same Size As Red Horn And Long Horn. But His Fur Is Gold Making Him A Rare Bull. He Can Uses Up To B Rank Lightning Release. He Also Uses His Horns To Attack People.
    Note
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Bull Contract.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.


    Also People With The Contract Must Get A Bull Tattoo Like:

    ~All Declined~ Stop writing every single word with a capital letter as their first letter. Fix that and resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-15-2011 at 06:02 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Yōsai) - Water Release: Fortress

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user will perform 5 handseals and extend his arm in front of him. A perfect orb of water will then materialize inches away from his palm, without being in contact with the user. This jutsu is used to imprison the opponent inside the sphere as he stand close range from him. This jutsu shares the fundamental principals of both "Water Prison" and "Water Shockwave" in which the user will materialize the water out of thin air, and then shape it into the water prison. Similar to the water prison, once caught, it's impossible to move. This jutsu is high ranked for it's complexity since it combine both technique.
    -Can only use it twice per match
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha
    ||Approved||

    (Konran) - Water Release: Disruption

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: With one handseal, the user will gather the moisture in the air around his opponent's hands as he's performing handseals. In an instant, the moisture will push both hands, forcing them against one another. This technique take effect extremely fast and is used to prevent the opponent from completing a jutsu. The moisture does not harm the opponent in any way, but does apply a great pressure on both hands for 2-3 seconds.
    -Can only be used 3 times per match
    -Must wait one turn before using again
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha
    ||Approved|| Added the bolded.

    (Makankosappo) - Water Release: Makankosappo

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus a massive amount of water and lightning chakra in the tip of his index and middle finger, closing his hand with only those two fingers pointed outward. Then, when he's ready, he will aim at his enemy and shoot an extremely powerful stream of water with a lightning arc coiling around the beam. The water as well as the lightning will be spinning, granting a powerful drilling effect able to pierce almost any defense in mid-range (Custom Elements excluded). The stream is somewhat narrow, being only 2 inches in diameter. This technique is near impossible to avoid in short range because of it's raw speed.
    -Can only be used twice per match
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

    Picture:



    ||Approved|| Special Beam Cannon
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 07-15-2011 at 05:09 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~CUSTOM WEAPON~


    Phoenix eyes - Fenikkusu no me

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: -
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: Depends
    Description:
    Fenikkusu no me the twin blade that long ago filled terror in the hearts and minds of its opponent....the wielder of these swords was a shinobi of untold prowess but with legends came backstabbers and with the fear that the swords may fall into wrong hands the shinobi left the swords in the care of his twin summons genja and trenja the first ringtail summons...Later the swords were passed on to -HAN- who was the next person to sign the ringtail summon contract....thereby he underwent the most difficult training in the wielding of the twin blade gaining him the title of the blue spirit....and a mask that he would wear whenever he weilded the twin swords..


    The unique properties of the swords were as follows...
    -Both the swords were made up of an unknown rare element which made them impossible to go blunt...and were thus indestructible
    -The wielding of these swords by the user with the mask makes him the blue spirit of the dual swords
    -But the best part about the swords lies in the fact that if the user channels a certain chakra nature into one sword the other sword will drain your chakra and get charged with the chakra nature that would enhance the chakra nature in the other sword....
    e.g 1st sword fire (user channels) - 2nd sword wind (automatically)
    -The swords when charged with fire in a particular exact amount simultaneously get a little golden glow along there edge and is known to be able to cut through even a diamond hard substance whatsoever.. (though for a thing as hard as a diamond the damage would be considerably reduced compare to other less hard stuff)
    -The user has a tattoo on his wrist and the forehead to which when the user sends chakra he is able to summon the sword and the mask (This happens in an instant) right in his hands
    -The sword and the mask can be de-summoned any time the user wants...(they return to there place in the ringtail village)



    -Although the sword automatically gets charged with a chakra nature that would enhance the other sword it still takes in the users chakra exhausting him fairly quickly..Hence the user is unable to do any Forbidden rank technique for the time these swords are in the battle...Also once de-summoned user cannot use any S rank or Forbidden rank technique for that particular turn.
    -The dual chakra channeling and the golden edged swords cannot be active simultaneously...
    -The summoning and the de-summoning of this weapon can never be done in the same turn..
    -When using the dual swords the user is unable to do any jutsu that requires handseals though he can sheath the sword on his back if he does want to do the seals...though this will take time




    ~CUSTOM JUTSU~


    Quote Originally Posted by -HAN- View Post
    (Ninjutsu:Buki konbo-{Seto & Geto})-Ninjutsu:Weapon combo-{Seto & Geto}
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: They attach to my body while Seto attaches to my hand turning into 8 inch long talons Geto attaches to my chest forming a vest around my chest. These 2 when joined with my body prevent me from falling under any genjutsu since they release there chakra into my body as soon as they feel me falling under a genjutsu.
    -Seto is a wind user thus in the talon form he allows me to use wind jutsu upto A rank without handseals
    -Geto is a earth style user he forms a steel cover to my body that protects me from jutsus upto B rank and prevents sharp weapons from affecting me.
    -Steel cover is not affected by lightening like normal earth jutsus
    -Remains in the activated state for 5 turns in a row
    -can be used twice in a battle.
    -the user suffers general fatigue due to increased chakra activity and is unable to use S-rank for the next 1 turn.
    -cannot be used in the same turn as robinhood style summoning
    -can only be used after the two twins seto and geto have been summoned.
    -They can deform into there normal selves any time the user wants even out of turn and that will not count as a jutsu.

    -Same as before and also the red parts need editing. Steel is an element not an affinity. You can resubmit-



    This is what seto forms into but just one not a pair (just like monkey king enma turns into a giant staff for hiruzen)
    ~RESUBMITTING~

    (Ninjutsu:Buki konbo-{Seto & Geto})-Ninjutsu:Weapon combo-{Seto & Geto}
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: They attach to my body while Seto attaches to my hand turning into 8 inch long talons Geto attaches to my body forming a protective cover around my body with his tail. These 2 when joined with my body prevent me from falling under any ordinary genjutsu since they release there chakra into my body as soon as they feel me falling under a genjutsu.
    -Seto is a wind user thus in the talon form...
    Since
    Quote Originally Posted by Narutopedia View Post
    The exact amount of chakra necessary to perform a jutsu is manipulated through hand seals.
    in which case seto does the chakra control for me for wind natured chakra allowing me to do wind jutsu upto rank A with no to 1 handseal
    -Geto covers my entire body with the fur of his tail that now attains the qualities of bieng as hard as tempered steel and protects me from jutsus upto B rank (of any element) and prevents sharp weapons from affecting me.
    -Weapons enhanced with wind are unaffective but those enhanced with lightning can do damage though the amount of damage is reduced say -5 damage

    -Remains in the activated state for 5 turns in a row
    -can be used twice in a battle.
    -the user suffers general fatigue due to increased chakra activity and is unable to use S-rank for the next 1 turn.
    -can only be used after the two twins seto and geto have been summoned.
    -They can deform into there normal selves any time the user wants even out of turn and that will not count as a jutsu.
    -Genjutsu cast by an advanced dojutsu like the Mangekuo or the eternal mangekuo sharingan cannot be avoided
    This is what seto forms into but just one not a pair (just like monkey king enma turns into a giant staff for hiruzen)


    ~NEW~


    (Doton:Han'en bōgyo kabe)-Earth style:Semicircular defense wall
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    In this jutsu the user makes a single snake seal and quickly stomps on the ground or slams hands on the ground releasing Doton chakra and causing a semi-circular wall of strong earth elements in the nearby area to appear right in front of him being semicircular the wall guards the opponents left and right side along with his front unlike the Terra Shield jutsu but even here his back is exposed for attacks.This can be considered as an enhanced or modified version of the Terra shield jutsu.
    -Guards against fire attacks upto B rank
    -Guards against wind attacks upto B rank
    -Guards against water attacks upto A rank
    -May work against D rank lightening though no gaurantees
    -May be used 5 times in a battle
    -The wall crumbles away whenever the user wants (this does not count as a move)
    -No Forbidden Doton jutsu for the next turn


    (Doton:Bakuhatsu suru nano bakudan no hahen)-Earth style:Exploding nano shrapnel
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    In this jutsu the user first throws an amount of nano sized steel shrapnel on to the ground from his pouch as if in the process of removing a kunai or shuriken (as he does so he channels these shrapnel with his raiton chakra) and then he channels his Doton chakra into the ground and then collects these shrapnel together (using earth) and encloses them into Micro sized hollow balls of earth. The user forms around 60 to 70 of such balls and then causes them to surround his opponent unnoticed by him and then at the right time the user makes the Dog-Snake-Boar seal and causes the balls to explode sending out lightening infused shrapnels in all directions piercing the opponents and destroying his blood veins and chakra network since this happens at microscopic level.
    -Takes 2 turns to form after the user starts sending Doton chakra into the ground (The user has to specifically mention he starts channeling the doton chakra into the ground)
    -For the 2 turns of its formation user cannot use S-rank doton jutsu
    -Sharingan Dojutsu with MS can see its formation
    -Can be used only once in a battle
    -No S rank doton jutsu for the next 1 turn
    -No Forbidden rank Raiton jutsu for the next 2 turns


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu:Shinz famirī)-Summoning jutsu: Shinz family
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: For this jutsu the user draws blood and then claps his palms together summoning a family of ringtails in the earth right below his feet. This is the family of shinzo and it comprises of his wife avira and his 3 offsprings. They are known to be excellent earth movers and chakra manipulators. When summoned all the family will act like covert ops and work underground to protect the summoner when summoned this family has the ability to stop any earth jutsus to appear in the place the summoner stands or is the last known location of his... (since they can manipulate chakra they cancel any enemy earth jutsu intended to harm the summoner).
    Also they weaken any enemy earth jutsu used upto mid range from the summoner .....
    Note:
    -User earth jutsu get +15 damage upto mid range
    -Opponent earth jutsu recieves +5 damage by default upto mid range from the summoner
    -The location of the summoner will be know to the ringtails only if he is in contact with the ground...
    -To summon them the user must have a direct contact with the ground
    -Remain on the field for 4 turns
    -can be summoned twice in a battle
    -They move extremely quickly under the ground and therefore can be used to send long distance messages
    The family

    Declined, no resubmit
    Note: These jutsus can only be used and taught by -HAN-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Youton: Eki Youton Yoroi)Lava release: Liquid Lava Armor
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases a big amount of lava chakra trough his whole body and he creates a shift of defensive liquid lava. The only places which wont be covered in the lava are the users eyes, mouth, ears and nose. In this state the user can preform any other tecs, except other defensive like Iron skin jutsu, cause that would shut down this jutsu.
    Notes:
    ~Lasts 4 turns
    ~Usable 3 times per battle
    ~Must be taught by sisko
    ~No S ranked jutsus in the same this one was used

    ~Declined~ That would kill you, do not resubmit
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    (Youton: Youton Tanjuu): Lava Release: Lava Pistol
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user transfers some lava chakra into his dominant fist, and punches it with huge power towards the opponent, while he is punching he will release the collected lava chakra and make a mid sized fist shaped projectile go towards the opponent at a huge speed
    Notes:
    ~Must be taught by sisko

    ~Declined~ Restrictions
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    (Youton:Youton Mori Hando):Lava release: Lava helping hands
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user preforms a row of hand seals(4) and he gathers up a big amount of lava chakra a part of his body he wishes(legs, elbows, stomach armpit etc.)And when he collects enough he release is so that he creates a pair of hands made of lava, they have the size and power of the users hands, and they can use hand seals and use lava jutsus(in the same time as the user uses his other hands for another jutsu).The hands can block some attacks
    (2 C rank attacks
    1 B rank attack)
    Notes:
    ~Usable 3 times per battle
    ~Lasts for 5 turns(includes the turn in which the jutsu was used)
    ~Must be taught by sisko(me)
    ~These hands can also use the Lava sword and the Lava pistol jutsu

    ~Declined~ They can't use handseals and lava jutsus because they wouldn't have a chakra circulatory system. Besides, it would burn you.


    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~


    (Katon: Doragon Gekido)Fire release: Dragons Rage
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user preforms 3 hand seals and he releases a huge amount of fire chakra to the sky, after he releases it he waits 1 turn and after that turn he can choose when he will use the sended chakra to make a big dragon come from the sky and strike the opponent.
    Notes:
    ~Usable 2 times a battle
    ~The jutsu counts as a move in both turns when the user sends the chakra and when he sends it back down
    ~Usable only by siskostar
    ~No S rank jutsus in the move the chakra is sent

    ~Declined~ It's impossible, fire existing so high up? The oxygen is really thin and its cold as hell that far up
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-15-2011 at 05:09 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by oasis2082 View Post
    (Fuuton: Hogo shīrudo) - Wind style: Protective Shield
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence
    Range: Mid / long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage points:N/A
    Description: The user focuses his wind chakra within their both palms and release it at once then manipulate their wind chakra to spinning as size of human body then become their shield, this spinning shield able to block and push away back any elemental jutsu at same rank.

    -The User can’t perform any jutsu during the spinning shield occured
    -only can be used three times per battle.
    -can only taught by Oasis

    -Declined. Similar jutsu already exists-

    (Fuuton: Atsuryoku no tenohira) - Wind style: Palm of Pressure
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Mid / long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal the user make a basic stances with their dominant hands in their waist while he/she gathering their massive wind chakra in his dominant arms then release is all at once through their dominant palm, if the jutsu hits a building or ground then the destruction shape like a huge human palms

    -The User use half of their Power
    -can only be used two times per battle.
    -can only taught by Oasis



    -On hold. Why do you want this? There are 3 cannon for this. Just for the shape of human palm? It's a waste of a jutsu. It's your choice though, so just resubmit, fixing the red part, if you still want this and I'll approve-


    (Kage no supaiku) - Shadow spike
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: the user focus his shadow circular beneath their feet then when an incoming physical attack the shadows will merge from the ground like multiple tendrils surrounding the user body and will stab the opponent with multiple stabs and lift them up and throw them away.

    -Only Nara clan can use this jutsu
    -can only be used four times per battle.
    -can only taught by Oasis

    -Declined. Makes no sense. Technically, you would need to be able to control where the sun is-

    (Kage kara no karyūdo) - hunter from shadow
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This is an advance jutsu of Shadow Imitation try to trap the enemy by combining their shadows together but the different is the shadow will moving with three shadows shapes like a trident and stab the opponent from beneath them and going up, when the opponent try to escape the trident shadow, the user will run towards chasing the opponent while extending their shadows until the user accomplish to stab the opponent.

    -Only Nara clan can use this jutsu
    -can only be used three times per battle.

    -Declined. This is not a jutsu.-
    -can only taught by Oasis

    Resubmitting

    (Fuuton: Atsuryoku no tenohira) - Wind style: Palm of Pressure
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Mid / long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing Serial of hand seal the user make a basic stances with their dominant hands in their waist while he/she gathering their massive wind chakra in his dominant arms then release is all at once through their dominant palm, if the jutsu hits a building or ground then the destruction shape like a huge human palms

    -The User use half of their Power
    -can only be used two times per battle.
    -can only be taught by Oasis
    ||Declined|| Similar Jutsu exists.

    New Submission

    (Suiton: Umi no kaibutsu)-Water Style: Monster of the sea
    Type: Attack /Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers a massive water chakra around their body then perform a serial handseal to make a massive water rise up about 10 meters away and shape it like a huge beast of water which the monster whole single part of it’s body able to whip around to destroy everything in its path as the user instruct it. This water beast also can block any elemental jutsu excluding a strong earth jutsu.

    Note:
    ~ Required a huge water sources such as lake, river or a sea.
    ~ Can also be summons after perform Water Basin Technique
    ~ This water monster move in medium speed and according the user aiming.
    ~ can only be use in 3 turn
    ~ Can only be use by S-Rank Ninja or above
    ~ Able to Destroyed by Strong Earth jutsu with similar rank
    ~ can only be taught by Oasis with his teaching method
    ||Declined|| Similar Jutsu Exists


    (Doton: Hoppu to iku)-Earth Style : Hop and go
    Type : Attack
    Rank : A
    Range: Short - Mid Range
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : 60
    Description: The user gathers his chakra to their whole part of his both hands then stomp his both hands into the ground then lift the ground between themselves and the opponents with his both hands to bounce up the opponents sky high and cause the opponents off balance then with the ground which the user have lift with his both hand, then he smash the opponents with it like a racket smash a tennis ball.

    Note:
    ~The ground will lift up as size as half of Soccer field
    ~ can only be use in 3 turn
    ~ can only be taught by Oasis with his teaching method
    ||Declined||

    (Katon: Kasai Bunshin no Jutsu) – Fire Release: Fire Clone Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates up to three clones made of fire. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical attack, Lightning or Earth techniques. They can also use up to C rank Fire techniques.
    Note:
    ~ Must have known Kage Bunshin No Jutsu
    ~ can only be use in 3 turn
    ~ can only be taught by Oasis with his teaching method
    ~ Weak against Water technique C Rank above
    Declined|| Do not Resubmit

    (Katon: Chōshinsei)-Fire Style release: Supernova
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Fire clone will spin circling around the opponent with a high speed running until the air pressure around the opponent decrease below zero and will cause the opponents numb and unable to move or choke to die and the spin effect shall cause a super heated temperature until 10.000 ° Celcius like a super heat the explosion of a star or also known as the Supernova which can melted any kind of Iron and steel in the world or high level degree burn to the flesh in instant

    Note:
    ~ The user must avoid the heat by move to long range or will be killed by the heat effect
    ~ Can only be use by Katon bunshin no Jutsu and count as 2 move
    ~ can only be use in 3 turn
    ~ can only be taught by Oasis with his teaching method
    ||Declined|| ...
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Wasps
    Scroll Owner: Scarface
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Contract approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    (fezachiri Kuchiyose no Jutsu) fezachiri summoning
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: fezachiri is a humming bird its beak and talons are both enhanced by doton chakra increasing there strength and defence (not against lightning clearly) the feathers in its wings are infused with fuuton chakra and he can send them at his opponent in a attack (its like a fuuton infused kunai) fezachiri can use both doton and fuuton abilities up to A rank (needs summoner on his back and summoner must do handseals if required) feza is capable of surrounding himself in a dense wind protecting himself against B ranked attacks (C-ranked if katon)
    -can be out for 4 turns
    -must have signed humming bird contract
    -can be summoned once per match

    (hagane Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Hagane sumoning
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:Hagene is a humming bird it with a extremly long tail which he uses to protect himself or his summoner. its feathers are as hard as steel (thus his name which means steel) the feathers on Hagenes are made speacial however the ones on his tail are stronger then the rest of his body. due to this feathers he is able to deal with B ranked attacks (tail can block A ranked). Hagen can use both fire and wind techs up to B rank (cant use ones that need hand seals unless someone preforms them for him and they must be on his back at the time)
    -can be out for 4 turns
    -must have signed humming bird contract
    -can be summoned once per match

    ~Approved Contract~



    ken kabe no jutsu (sword wall Technique)
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank:A/S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 for A ranked/40 for S rank
    Damage Points: 60 for A rank/ 80 for S rank
    Description: this can be done with one or two swords the user swings a sword(s) in a systematic way similar to Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms it can be used to slash and cut a close opponent or defend against a attack the blade work is so fast that it appears to be silver flying around the user

    -metal conducts lightning so doesnt work on lightning
    -if your only using one sword its A ranked S ranked if your using two swords
    -can only be taught by foamy

    (ken chuuseki) sword pillars
    Type: Attack/Supplementry
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: the user makes the a handsign then stabs there sword into the ground there sword gets sucked down into the earth then the user makes the tiger handsign and a dozen blades (these are shadow clones and are made the same way you do the Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu) pop out of the ground (blade side up). The user can control where the swords come up they can use them to skewer there opponent.
    -as this is a viration of shadow clone jutsu must have mastered shadow clone jutsu
    -cant use the sword used for this tech for the rest of the fight
    -can only be taught by Foamy
    Both Declined, no resubmit

    (koton: blacksmith) steel release: blacksmith
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user claps there hands together then as the hands move away from eachother the user makes a weapon made completly out of steel the jutsu can only make weapons that are one solid piece such as swords, staffs, kunai, and arrow it cannot make bow (couldnt make the string for it) or nunchucks (couldnt make the chain links)
    -can only be used by steel bio
    -can only be taught by foamy
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kyousei Samurai Guntou no Jutsu) Greater Samurai Sabre Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This technique is a Greater Variation of the "Samurai Sabre Technique". By increasing the amount of chakra channelled the damage of the attack can be greatly increased. (The technique is capable of countering Ninjutsu of S rank and below due to the chakra charge technique).
    Note: Can only be used by a Samurai Bio
    -Thrice per battle


    (Ougi Samurai Guntou no Jutsu) Ultimate Samurai Sabre Technique
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 100 (-30 to the user)
    Description: This technique is the ultimate version of the "Samurai Sabre Technique". By increasing the amount of chakra channelled to the maximum amount the damage of this attack can be greatly increased at the cost of damage to oneself. (The technique is capable of countering Ninjutsu of Forbidden rank and below due to the chakra charge technique).
    Note: Can only be used by a Samurai Bio
    -Only once per battle.
    -Can only use A rank and under techniques for the following three turns after this.


    Note: If approved then the Land of Iron social group may use these techniques


    ~Both declined, do not resubmit~ be real -_- you just placed a higher rank on the same jutsu, that's like making Chidori forbidden ranked.


    Kekkai : Jikoku Kakuchō Hara | Barrier : Time Dilation Field
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short [only affects things in this range]
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By doing four hand seals Minato can create a short range barrier to rapidly form around any FTG seal that he has placed. Even though the technique's name suggests a manipulation of time, this is not the case. In fact it is all in realtime inside and outside the barrier, the reason why the barrier slows down movement of all things is that there's such a high concentration of chakra in such a small area, that it reduces the speed of anything (it weighs down and pushes it outwards) inside the barrier to a crawl (physical movement). The barrier won't reduce the power of attacks while activated (unless they are velocity based). The barrier also effects the user.
    -Twice per battle
    -Lasts up to two turns.
    -Must have a Minato Namikaze bio.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~ makes no sense, not to mention FTG seals could be potentially everywhere

    Fūinjutsu : Henzai Suru Douka | Sealing Technique : Omnipresent Assimilation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: While standing on a tangible surface Minato will do three hand seals. This causes multiple FTG seals to rapidly spread out from any part of his body that is touching the surface covering the whole of short-mid range in FTG seals for his needs. Minato may do the hand seals and throw a FTG kunai. When it hits a tangible surface, FTG seals will rapidly spread from it and cover short-mid with the kunai as the epicenter. The seals can travel across any tangible surface.
    -Thrice per battle
    -Seals lasts three turns before disappearing.
    -Can only be used by a Minato Namikaze bio.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~ do you really think we're going to approve a jutsu that makes it so that you can't even be hit anymore practically in every corner of the battlefield -_-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: white fox(Yoru)
    Scroll Owner: sasuke uchiha 28
    Other Users who have signed the contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Animals tied to contract: N/A
    *can use up to A rank genjustu

    already approved just need to get the summoning boss and other animals approved

    Summoning Boss: Black Fox(Ace)
    (kuroi:kitsune) Summoning: Black Fox
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This Boss has jet black fur and a cut over he's Right eye,he is very cold towards any of his summoners If he doesnt know them well enough. And he's eye's are pure white and any oppent who looks into them is stricken with fear and unable to move,and he is the same size as Akamaru in naruto shippuden
    *Note*
    This Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Fox Contract.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle
    -The Boss can use fire justu's up to A
    you have white foxes as ur summoning and you create one with black fur Declined, edit so he is white fur to go with your contract

    Other Animals Tied To This Contract: Sinopa & Ginopa,Rockstar

    (buntai:kitsune ) Summoning: Sinopa(F) & Ginopa(M)
    Type: offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Sinopa & Ginopa are two foxes who are deeply in love so they work well together in desire situation,Sinopa has a all white coat with a light blue strip going down from his neck to his tail.And Ginopa has a all white coat with a light blue stripe going down from his head to his tail.They both carry a katana in there mouth and are the same size as a reagulary dog.
    *Note*
    This Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Fox Contract.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle
    -they both can use water justu up to A rank and count as one the users three moves if one uses water technique.Approved added bold

    (komakai :kitsune) Summoning: Rockstar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: e
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 5
    Damage Points: 10
    Description: Rockstar is a small as a puppy so he's either walking or getting carried by his summoner on there head,he has all black fur with deep red eyes and he is very kind to he's summoner's as he is still a fox pup and hasnt been out of his world enough.But he is very skilled in tracking a enemy. Because all he needs is one sniff of his oppent and he has it for the whole battle.
    *notes*
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the fox Contract.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -can smell a enemy anywhere they are just by one smell
    Declined, make it white fur to go with your summoning contract >_>
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (katon:hou) fire style: fire shot
    Type: offense
    Rank: S
    Range: short-range& long-range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gather alot of fire charkra in there body then shoot it out of his/her index finger.Or he/she can make multiple shots or waste all his fire charkra in one blast.
    *can only be taught by sasuke uchiha 28*
    *can't use anymore fire justu for the 2 turns

    ~Declined~ similar technique exists
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton:Kaze Hari) - Wind Needle
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: After performing two hand seals, The user releases his/her fuuton chakra into the atmosphere creating countless small microscopic needles and directs them at target. The User can manipulate the needles and can determine the direction of attack.
    Note:
    *This Jutsu can be use twice per battle.
    *This Jutsu can only be detect by doujutsu Users.(who are able to see chakra flow.)
    *This Jutsu can only be taught by Lizh.

    ||Declined||
    (Doton: Chakra Kenpa No Reiya) - Chakra Senseing Layer
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This jutsu is similiar to Chakra Senseing Rain. The User releases his/her chakra into the earth, a layer will cover a large area, user can sense the presence of anything with chakra, touches it.
    Note:
    *This Jutsu can only be taught by Lizh.

    ||Declined||
    (Hayai Fushoku) - Fast Corrosion
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user releases his/her chakra into atmosphere increasing the amount of water and oxygen in the air, results in corroding opponents metal weapons.
    Note:
    *Corrosion will take effect after 2 Turns.
    *It will stop the opponent to channel his/her chakra into weapon. They can be used as simple weapons until 2 more turns.
    *If the User gets into the range, his/her weapons will also be effected.
    *The range of this jutsu is 20~40 meters. (Depends on the User's Chakra)
    *This Jutsu can be used once in the battle.
    *This Justu can only be taught by Lizh.

    ||Approved||
    Summoning
    Summoning Animal: Melanosuchus

    Scroll Owner: Lizh
    Other Users who have signed contract: Not yet
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
    *Note:After signing the contact the user will get the following tattoo over his/her chest.

    *I'll drop my Water Buffalo contact, If this gets approval.
    *Only Lizh can teach this summoning.

    ||Declined||

    ( Tsuin Fuzen Tsuki Kamisori ) - Twin Evil Moon Razors


    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: 40( additional 20 chakra more if charged by chakra/elemental chakra)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:

    This duo consist of two black and white blades. They Can be fused with user's chakra/elemental chakra. (Black|Fuuton & White|Raiton). The User can combine these two blades to increase the range of the weapon. Something like this:


    Black Razor:

    It is made up of an alloy consist of 40% Iron 30% Steel & 30% Carbon, due to the presence of carbon, it is pure black in appearance. The Major Features of this sword includes Buddha's symbol guard with raised edges, chain half-link on end of sword, black finish carbon steel blade with red/black handle, and 68 inches overall. This sword is massive and sturdy from end to end with a 10 inch tang into the hardwood handle. The weight of sword is 18 lbs.

    White Razor:

    This blade has mostly same features like Black Zangetsu, like Buddha's symbol guard with raised edges, chain half-link on end of sword, and the dimensions of the white zangetsu are exactly same as black one except of its composition which is 30% Iron, 40% Steel and 30% Antimony.

    *Can only be wielded by Lizh.
    *These weapons stays on the User's back all the time.
    *The sword can cut through B-rank & below Fuuton|Raiton Techniques if it´s infused with chakra (depending on the Opponent's jutsu).
    *Fuuton Techniques can be cut only by Black Razor|Raiton Techniques can be cut only by White Razor.
    *User holds Black Razor in his/her Right hand|White Razor in his/her Left hand.


    ||Declined||

    If needed to be edit feel free to do so.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    This week's:

    ( Ninpou: Noroi no Busshitsu Sekai ) - Ninja Art: Curse of Material World
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A ( + 20 to every Fuuinjutsu used )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Curse of the Material World is a skill that a ninja can possess if trained in it. Using this technique, ninja is able to imbue fuuinjutsu in pre-existing objects/material or ones that he/she creates at the moment. The technique works by user doing the necessary sealing technique(s) on the object and using + 20 extra chakra, user imbues the seal into the object/material. The smallest thing that this technique can be used on is a coin sized object and the biggest is a small sized boulder and user's size when performing this on him/herself. Unlike many fuuinjutsus, user cannot use this technique on other living things other than him/herself. This technique doesn't drain chakra from user when the seal in the technique is activated but when the seal's been imbued. When the imbued object comes on contact with target, the target's affected as long as the object's in contact with him/her or as long as the object's not broken.
    Note:
    - Takes longer time to perform than average jutsu so it's not useful in combat.

    -On hold. Well, how exactly are you planning to use it?-


    ( Raiton: Josaidōki ) - Lightning release: Defibrillator
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A ( + 60 )
    Description: User makes Serpent handseal while focusing chakra into his/her palms. Once the chakra is focused and gathered, user ends the serpent handseal and lightning will crackle between the hands. The lightning charge itself will last for two turns before it fades from user's hands. This jutsu is mainly used to start fallen comrades' heart but it can also be used as an offense. If the target is being hit from the offense version of this, it will result 60 damage unless it's a direct hit on opponent's heart are, which will result his/her heart being stopped from the hit.
    Note:
    - Offensive version can be used twice per battle
    - Takes three to five seconds to gather the lightning chakra
    - Requires mastery over lightning and knowledge over human's anatomy and/or medical training.

    -Medical jutsus should be submitted to Nexus via pm or in the School. I see nothing wrong with this and I would approve, but technically, you need to ask the Headmaster-

    ____________
    -Declined- we already have a life support jutsu...



    ( Genjutsu: Shirei te katsu ) - Illusion technique: Command and Conquer
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced Genjutsu that is being activated by gazing into one's eyes. The genjutsu itself isn't fatal but the effects on the other hand make it harder for the weaker ninjas to continue what they were/are doing. The Genjutsu enchances one's senses and pits them with heavy feeling of responsibility and an illusion where their next action will be vital and they're in war like situation along with hearing screams of their friends, comrades and seeing flashes of them dead. Low ranked shinobis with no experience of leading troops or war situation will perish unlike stronger shinobis who will not be affected of this at all. If affected by this for long time the weak target(s) will be led to edge of desperation where the last option would be suicide to avoid the illusion, responsibility and war situation that this gives.
    Note:
    - Can be used once per battle
    - Only a hardened Veteran of Kage + above rank can use this.
    -Approved-


    ( Hayatōn: Jetto dasshu ) - Swift release: Jet Dash
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30 ( - 5 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Jet Dash is similar to Shadowless flight but the difference between them is that Shadowless flight is short timed, fast paced moving. Swift release user makes Boar handseal and gathers chakra into legs, allowing him to run faster compared to normal ninjas for longer distances. This technique is a bit slower than 1st Gate but still it's hard for normal ninjas to keep up with you.
    Note:
    - Normal Swift release rules apply this technique too
    - User cannot use Lightning or Wind as long as this is activated.

    -Approved-
    @ Curse of Material World and Rei: I was planning on having a jutsu that could be used to make traps ( mainly for Ninja World ) from already existing sealing techniques instead of submitting a bunch of new techniques.

    New techniques:

    ( Kenjutsu: Hoshizora ) - Sword techniques: Starry Sky
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 ( + 15 when used on mid range also )
    Damage points: 30 ( + and numbness while this hits )
    Description: User that's formidable with both Raiton and Kenjutsu can infuse their blades with lightning chakra. Instead of making the blade any lethal or having it cut through solids, the user can release the chakra in form of small star like shards when the blade's swung or it comes in collision with another blade. The shards are not solid but still cut the opponent(s) and can cause numbness around the areas where they hit. This technique has been named after the shards that resemble Starry sky in the second way of using this. The second way of using this is by swinging sword multiple times, leaving the shards floating in air and then, they will be floating there for few seconds before they rain down, causing damage to everyone on the area they cover. The shards are visible to naked eye when they are floating and once they rain down, a sharingan or good reflexes are needed to deflect/defend from all of them. The shards will not penetrate far into ones skin and will only create superficial cuts.
    Note:
    - Can be used two times
    - User is also vulnerable to shards that might rain down
    - Requires one turn cool down
    - Requires sword and raiton training or a sword user biography.

    ~Approved~ Note the changes

    ( Suiton: Kūkidan ) - Water release: Air steps
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when activated )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: In Narutoverse, Ninjas have shown ability to control water and even make it defile the laws of gravity. Using that basis, advanced ninja is able to walk in air by quickly gathering Oxygen and Hydrogen atoms from air, creating H2O beneath his/her feet as he/she walks/runs/steps midair. The user can manipulate the water so that it doesn't fall once it's being made and by taking use of water walking lessons, shinobi can easily walk midair. A master of Water release can also run in air as if he/she was running on ground. The down side of this technique is that once user has activated this, he/she will be unable to perform any water release techniques as long as this is activated, due the water chakra concentration being used in making H2O.
    Note:
    - Costs - 10 chakra per turn when activated
    - User cannot use Water techniques while this is in play.

    ~Declined~ similar technique exists

    ( Doton: Kōtai ) - Earth release: Hard body
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Master of earth element who knows Iron skin technique, using the knowledge of that technique can focus earth chakra into their organs and inner ear, to harden them, much like iron skin technique reversed. The technique makes the organs steel hard but doesn't affect skin at all, so user is still vulnerable against any hits aimed at tissue and skin. This also causes user to be weaker against lightning attacks
    Note:
    - User becomes weaker against lightning attacks
    - Can be used three times in a battle
    - User cannot use lightning when this technique is in play.

    ~Declined~ Harden your organs and they'll stop working, in other words, you'll die.

    ( Kuchiyose: Daikamonohashi ) Summoning technique: Great Platypus
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User offers blood sacrifice and focuses chakra into their platypus tattoo, summoning colossal, blue/cyan Platypus the size of Gamabunta. The Platypus can create tremors by hitting it's tail on ground and a temporary water source by drooling. Hearing its growl is also lethal since it can reach up to 140dB by just growling loudly, which goes beyond the human ear tolerance. The great platypus can also use Water and Earth techniques both up to A - rank. The Great Platypus isn't the boss of Platypus summoning due to its common beast brains. Therefore it's unable of communicating with the summoner but it will understand the orders that he/she issues to it.
    - Can be summoned only once
    - Cannot be summoned in hot zones such as desert
    - Lasts five turns on field before dispersing.

    ~Declined~ Edit out the growl being lethal part.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Wesobi View Post
    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Hognu)Summoning Technique: Fire Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Hognu is now summoned straight from The Firepit of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and who's covered in a coat of fire. His affinity for fire makes him immune against fire attacks up to B-rank useless against him, and he is able to use any fire attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this.


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Raignu)Summoning Technique: Lightning Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Raignu is now summoned straighly from the mountaintops of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and who's fur consists out of a sparkling lightning coat. His affinity for lightning makes him immune against lightning attacks up to B-rank, and he is able to use any lightning attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this




    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Mizugnu)Summoning Technique: Water Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Mizugnu is now summoned straight from the lakes of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and whose fur is made entirely out of constantly moving wavering water. His affinity for water makes him immune against water attacks up to B-rank, and he is able to use any water attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Tsuchignu)Summoning Technique: Earth Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Tsuchignu is now summoned straight from the caves of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and whose fur is rockhard. His affinity for earth makes him immune against earth attacks up to B-rank, and he is able to use any earth attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Kazegnu)Summoning Technique: Wind Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Kazegnu is now summoned straight from the clouds of Gnutamia .He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and whose fur is no more than spiky wind. His affinity for wind makes him immune against wind attacks up to B-rank, and he is able to use any wind attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this


    -All declined. Having an affinity does not mean you are immune to something. It means that you can, more easily than with other elements, utilize those skills you have within. -
    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Hognu)Summoning Technique: Fire Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Hognu is now summoned straight from The Firepit of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and who's covered in a coat of fire. He is able to use any fire attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this.


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Raignu)Summoning Technique: Lightning Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Raignu is now summoned straighly from the mountaintops of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and who's fur consists out of a sparkling lightning coat. He is able to use any lightning attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this




    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Mizugnu)Summoning Technique: Water Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Mizugnu is now summoned straight from the lakes of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and whose fur is made entirely out of constantly moving wavering water. He is able to use any water attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Tsuchignu)Summoning Technique: Earth Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Tsuchignu is now summoned straight from the caves of Gnutamia. He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and whose fur is rockhard. He is able to use any earth attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this


    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Kazegnu)Summoning Technique: Wind Gnu
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The user bites his thumbs, performs the hand seals and slams his hand on the ground.
    Kazegnu is now summoned straight from the clouds of Gnutamia .He is a majestic gnu who stands as tall as Jiraiya, and whose fur is no more than spiky wind. He is able to use any wind attack up to A-rank.
    Note: Must hold Gnu Contract
    Note: Only summonable once
    Note: Only one Elemental Gnu on the field at a time
    Note: Stays on the field for four turns
    Note: No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this


    ~All Approved~ ø_ø
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    previous submit
    Quote Originally Posted by USAmiCZka View Post
    (Doton: Haima-to) - Earth style: Homeland

    Type: Defense/supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    User inserts his chakra into ground in 4m radius around him hardening it and making it unable to be used by enemy earth jutsu (can't even emerge from ground there) also canceling any earth jutsu in progress by enemy (if enemy jutsu is bigger than Homelands radius then rest of it still happens.
    Secondary it can be used to boost power of existing earth jutsu by one rank by touching it and improving its structure (earth wall and so on)
    -no handseals required, only contact

    -Declined. Makes no sense. Why would your earth chakra cancel other peoples' earth techniques? -

    .
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    (Fuuton: Twister) Wind style: Twister

    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    This jutsu lasts 2 turns, when used it forms a tornado around enemy which is 15m tall and 10m wide, doing no harm to the enemy so far but if fire jutsu is used the tornado gets ignited and burns whoever is inside or in close range, if somebody get recklessly caught in the tornado he/she will be unable to act for two turns until the jutsu ends. In second turn the tornado narrow itself enough to catch it's victim (if he/she remains inside) and make him/her unable to act for one turn until the jutsu ends.

    -On hold. How exactly are you forming a tornado and control it considering your low rank? Also, if someone gets caught in a tornado they won't just become 'unable to act'. -



    ..no Jap for twister..

    resubmit:

    (Doton: Haima-to) - Earth style: Homeland
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User inserts his chakra into ground in 4m radius around him hardening it (similiar to Terra shield, but made under user instead) and making it unable to be used by enemy earth jutsu (can't even emerge from ground there). Secondary it can be used to boost power of existing earth jutsu by one rank by touching it and improving its structure (earth wall and so on)
    -no handseals required, only contact
    -Can only be used three times.
    ~Approved~

    also i wish to resubmit "Twister" when i get higher rank

    New:

    (Genjutsu: Metsubou) - Illusion Technique: Downfall
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User does few handseals and put target under genjutsu, first thing that the target sees is one more hand seal (Snake), which will make him think that user is performing earth technique (at this time user is already doing something else) and then ground beneath him starts to lightly shake and also rise abit behind him while it sinks in front. As this happen victim will reflexively fling back to keep his balance (it's part of the genjutsu that makes the enemy think that it's best to just fling back) but in reality he makes himself fall on his back. All of this happens very quickly and illusion only lasts few seconds (enough to make victim hit the ground) after that the illusion is released.
    -Can be used multiple times, but after first use enemy will already know what is happening

    Approved

    (Suiton: Bochabocha) - Water release: Splash
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User stopms on water and release chakra into it, transforming splashed water into thin and very sharp needles to pierce his enemy. This is very fast attack that takes advantage of speed at which water is splashed after fast stomp.

    Approved

    (Doton: Jishin) - Earth style: Earthquake
    Type: Defense/supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    This is very advanced version of World Shaking, user make required hand-seals and slam both hands on ground creating strong Earthquake that makes anyone up to mid range fall onto ground and makes them unable to stand as long as this is active, making most of actions hard or impossible to do.This is powerfull jutsu and cannot be controlled, affecting everyone up to mid range (except very small area around user) be it friend or foe.
    May be active max. one full turn but stops immediately if user raise his hand/s from the ground.

    Declined, similar jutsu exists
    Custom weapon:

    (Zaigou) Sin
    Rank: A
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Mid (only mid)
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Dream breaker is a long black whip with very small fishooks at it's end- those can pierce soft materials such as skin/clothes. Other than those small fishooks it looks ordinary but the interesting part is inside, there is a special wire which is made of excelent chakra conducting metal, thanks to this the weapon can gain special modes dependant on type of elemental chakra used.
    ~this also comes with few ordinary holders for carrying the weapon (one on side, one on right wrist and one on left shoulder)~
    It looks like this:

    Modes:
    Destruction (lightning chakra)
    Rank: A
    Damage points: 60
    This charges the whip with lightning, giving it destructive attack that can easily get through earth techniques.

    Speed (wind chakra)
    Rank: A
    Damage points: 60
    This charges the whip with wind, making its movement much faster by making a very sharp windblade in direction of its swing giving the whip minimal friction, gliding through air with ease.
    Note: Mode can be set only once a turn

    I really wish to have this weapon, so if there is something wrong with it please tell me so i can fix it. Or change "minor" mistakes. (:

    needs sorting out and those two abilities should have a chakra cost for each one
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Hercules Beetle
    Scroll Owner: Joker
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    Tattoo



    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    note:this phoenix isn't like the other phoenixs he has all the chakra types exept earth not just fire


    Summoning Animal: blue phoenixs
    Scroll Owner: HyugaNeji
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: ultra
    (Kuchiyose no jutsu:aoi fenikkusu) Summoning Technique:Ultra
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: first to summon him ultra must attack you on your stomach with a small fire ball and then the user have mark on his stomach just like naruto and the kyuubi cuz ultra can't be with someone coward and about altra he has a blue flame surround him and he by it he can make all a rank katon techniques and can change it into a shield can protect him and protect the user and that shield can protect him
    the mark that the user have on his stomach
    $note$
    - Can only be summoned 4 times per battle.
    -you must sign the blue phoenix contract
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: working on it

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~ be real, this is not a different animal.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Yard~ View Post
    [SPOILER]


    (Fūton: haipa tatsumaki) – Wind Release: Hyper Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra and releases it as wind that spirals around their opponent creating a tornado around their opponent.
    The opponent will be caught in the eye of the tornado so he/she will be trapped inside and so the user throws shuriken into the tornado and
    uses their wind chakra to control the blades. After doing so the user controls the shuriken and uses them to violently cut their opponent.

    -The controling of the shuriken counts as one of the users turns
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~


    -Declined. Obviously, your wind chakra can't be released and just create a tornado without some sort of manipulation, use of nature or a tiny bit of creativity from your side. -




    (Katon: Hagetaka kaen) Fire Release: Condor Blaze
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will form a row of 10 handseals, he will then disperse into 20 highly compressed katon flames that are shaped like condors. The condors will then soar through the air at great speeds at the opponent. 1 condor will be the user and will travel to the desired location that the user wants and the user will appear from that condor while the other 19 condors soar through the air and attack the opponent. The condors hit the opponent all at the same time. On impact the condors will explode in a huge fiery explosion that covers the area . Once the condors explode all surroundings within mid range will be covered with 6ft tall flames.
    -If the user has signed the condor contract then this jutsu will only require 5 handseals.
    -No Katon for the next 2 turns.
    -Can only use this jutsu once per battle.
    -Can only use 2 jutsu on the next turn.
    -No Katon jutsu before this jutsu.
    -The turn that this jutsu is used, the user can only use one more jutsu so this jutsu counts as 2 moves.
    -If the user is caught in the explosion then he/she will die.
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~

    -On hold. Limit the fire condors-


    (Fūton: haipa tatsumaki) – Wind Release: Hyper Tornado

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra into their hands and sends it to the sky. They use that chakra to gather clouds above the opponent and alter the weather conditions to the point of which wind will start to spin around the opponent until it turns into a tornado around the opponent.
    The opponent will be caught in the eye of the tornado so he/she will be trapped inside and so the user throws a large amount of shuriken into the tornado and uses their wind chakra to control the blades. After doing so the user controls the shuriken with their wind chakra and uses them to violently cut their opponent.

    -The controling of the shuriken counts as one of the users turns
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~

    Approved

    (Fuuton: uindo dageki shouheki) - Wind Release: Wind Strike Barrier
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplenetary
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra and releases it from their body, making it spin around the user creating a barrier of spinning wind in short range of the user. (It looks like neji's rotation except the user doesn't spin around) The user then releases endless blades of wind as the wind spins around them spin making the blades shoot out in every direction. The spinning wind also protects the user against B rank Fire attacks and has the ability to redirect it back at the opponent.
    -The user can't use jutsu while in the wind barrier.
    -The blades of wind counts as a move.

    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Katon: Hagetaka kaen) Fire Release: Condor Blaze
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will form a row of 10 handseals, he will then disperse into 13 highly compressed katon flames that are shaped like condors. The condors will then soar through the air at great speeds at the opponent. 1 condor will be the user and will travel to the desired location that the user wants and the user will appear from that condor while the other 12 condors soar through the air and attack the opponent. The condors hit the opponent all at the same time. On impact the condors will explode in a huge fiery explosion that covers the area . Once the condors explode all surroundings within mid range will be covered with 6ft tall flames.
    -If the user has signed the condor contract then this jutsu will only require 5 handseals.
    -No Katon for the next 2 turns.
    -Can only use this jutsu once per battle.
    -Can only use 2 jutsu on the next turn.
    -No Katon jutsu before this jutsu.
    -The turn that this jutsu is used, the user can only use one more jutsu so this jutsu counts as 2 moves.
    -If the user is caught in the explosion then he/she will die.
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~

    Declined, Forbidden rank requires

    (Doton: Iwa tama shinchou) Earth Release: Rock Ball Expansion.
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs a single handseal (Tiger) and will spit a small stone from their mouth that's made of highly compressed Doton chakra. The user then makes the Snake handseal and the rock will expand to the size of a meteor equal to the size of Fire Release: blaze ball. Best used with fire or wind. Fire would create a more meteor like attack and wind would give a good advantage by defending the ball of earth against lightning based attacks.
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle.


    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    (Raiton: raikou myaku) Lightning Release: Lightning pulse
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank - Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 ( 50 If charges for 2 moves)
    Damage Points: 80 (90 If charged for 2 moves)
    Description: This is a much more evolved form of Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current. The user will make one handseal charging their raiton chakra and then forms another handseal which then releases a massive amount of electricity from their body. The amount of electricity that's released is based on how much raiton chakra they have charged. For instance, if the user charges it using enough chakra for two moves then the user can only use one more jutsu for that turn. But, will gain an extra rank in power. If Charged with enough chakra for two moves, this jutsu will release a massive amount of non focused electricity from the users body into the air and ground capable of destroying everything on the field and leaving a small crater in the ground around the user. The amount of chakra doesn't take more than a few seconds to charge since it's almost forced from the users body. If only charged for one move then it's speed of using this tech is comparable to Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current and will release non focused electricity into the air and ground around around the user and opponent and will reach out to mid range.

    Notes:

    -No Raiton for the next turn if charged for Forbidden Rank.
    -No A rank Raiton for the next turn if charged for only S rank.
    -If charged for forbidden rank the user takes 20 damage due to the strain on the users body.
    -No ninjutsu on the next turn just elemental jutsu.
    -The electricity has enough amps and current to kill.
    -No raiton before or after this jutsu in the same turn.
    -Charging of 1 move = S rank rank.
    -Charging of 2 moves = Forbidden Rank.

    Declined, if you want this to be considered for approval remove anything linking it to chidori as it will be considered chirdori variation which isnt allowed anymore
    By moves I basically mean it's like charging double the chakra that you normally would for the move that equals S rank.
    So, if you charge the attack for 2 moves you get a more powerful attack.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Hayaton: Tama Panchi) Swift Release: Bullet Punch
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges a huge amount of Swift release chakra into their right arm and legs and pulls the charged arm back in the apperence of preparing to throw a punch, as they bring their fist forward they use the chakra in their legs to move at a speed completly unseeable by eyes below 3 tomoe sharingan and connect with the punch to the enemy while moving, stoping 10 meters behind the enemy with their arm extended in front of them.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -Only useable twice per battle.

    -Declined. OP. Why wouldn't normal eyes see this? The chakra released should be visible-


    (Hayaton:Koudo Mueisho) Swift Release: Advanced Shadowless Flight
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 100 (5 every succesful blow landed)
    Description: After making 4 hand seals the user can move at fast speeds through the swift release and strike their opponent at multiple angles, the user will make up to 20 back to back blows at superhuman speed.

    -Declined-

    (Hayaton:Tatsumaki Haijo) Swift Release: Tornado Rejection
    Rank: B
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 10
    Description: The user grabs onto their enemy's arm or leg and spins at great speeds, releasing the enemy after spinning them several times, leaving them disorientied and skidding across the ground, eventually stoping 10meters away from the user.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -Can't be used to defend againest A rank or above taijutsu
    -Only useable once per turn

    -Approved-

    (Hayaton:Zensokuryoku Kobushi) Swift Release: Full Speed Fist
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User first focuses earth chakra in their fist and forearm to harden it to steel-like quality then charges the enemy,building up swift release chakra in their legs as they run, user becomes a blur after leaving long range and are unseeable to eyes below 3tomoe sharingan during mid range. Using the built up speed in a straight line the user hits the enemy in the chest with the hardened fist, breaking the sternum and fracturing the ribs around it.
    -Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Only useable once per battle
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -Only avoidable in short-mid range by space/time users and EIG users with 6+ gates open
    -3 Tomoe sharingan and above are capable of reading the movements.
    -At short range the user is moving too fast for non-enchanced reflexes to counter.
    -Able to punch through B rank and below defences.
    -Can't use B or above Swift Release techniques for 2 turns afterwards.

    -Declined. Ibid. first jutsu-

    (Hayaton:Zanzou no jutsu) Swift Release: Afterimage Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After making two hand seals the user can move so swiftly that an image of the user is left behind. Can leave behind up to 4 images in multiple areas at once but once the user makes an attack the images all fade away
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -Only useable thrice per battle

    -Declined. Ridiculous. Don't resubmit-

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Sarutobi View Post
    Custom Weapon for my Gin bio

    God Spear (Shinsō)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 to extend the blade from short to mid or +20 to extend from short to long)
    Damage Points: +10 for mid range attack, +20 for long range (due to the extra chakra flowing through the blade when extended)
    Description: It looks like an ordinary wakizashi. The hilt is light-blue with a tsuba made of two slim swirls of metal looping around the blade to make an open oval, resembling an "S". It is normally in its wakizashi form when not used, or when a shorter blade is favorable to the user but can become the size of a katana at will and stay that length without an extra chakra drain.
    Shinsō gained its name due to the special chakra metal it was forged with and (much like gaara's grourd sand) its passive ability to slowly absorb the users chakra while not in use to become naturally more resistent to breaking then normal swords at all times. When the user applys a larger amount of chakra then normal to the blade of Shinsō it can extend to great lengths, the blade's less famous feature to those who are unfamiler with it, is the great speed the blade extends and retracts, able to extend up to Mid range in about 1 second and return to original length in the same amount of time, able to extend to Long range in 3 seconds and return to original length within another 3.

    -Can only extend up to long range once every 4 turns
    -Can extend to Mid range once every 2 turns
    -Extending and contracting the sword counts towards one of the 3 moves.
    -Can only be used by Professor Sarutobi

    -Declined. I cannot approve special types of chakra unless they are originating from a special or a custom approved clan-


    (Hayaton: Hayaton Zama) Swift Release: Swift State
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every turn until canceled)
    Damage points: +10 to all taijutsu
    Description: A heightened state of constantly flowing swift release chakra to the body and mind, allowing the user to move and percive actions at superhuman speeds without hand seals, due to the constant use of elevated speed the users muscles are worn out after being the state if they maintained it for all 5 turns and the user experiences a more sluggish reaction time then normal.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -only useable once per battle, lasts 5 turns.
    -movements only readable by 3 tomoe and above sharingans.

    (Hayaton:Hayai Undoushinkei)Swift Release: Swift Reflexes
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user releases a quick burst of swift release chakra to a single limb to heighten their reflexes substantially for a few seconds.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.

    -On hold. Change the red part.-

    (Hayaton:Shinsuu Kobushi Panchi) Swift Release: 10 Fist Punch
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases swift release chakra into their arms to increase the speed of their arms substantially for a few seconds, allowing them to throw 10 punches but in a burst of speed so that it appears to only look like one punch was thrown.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio
    -Only useable once per turn

    -approved-

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Majikkjuutan) Summoning: Magic Carpet
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every turn after that or until canceled)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Summons Mr. Popo's "Magic Carpet" under the user's feet allowing flight through the use of the user's chakra being charged into it.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -User can't have other summons on the field at the same time.
    -Lasts as long as the user can pay the chakra price or until canceled.
    -Can't be used againest Mr. Popo as the carpet above all else will listen to him over anyone else who has summoned it.

    -Declined-

    resubmitting

    1.(Hayaton: Tama Panchi) Swift Release: Bullet Punch
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user charges a huge amount of Swift release chakra into their right arm and legs and pulls the charged arm back in the apperence of preparing to throw a punch, as they bring their fist forward they use the chakra in their legs to move at great speeds appearing as a blur to normal eyes but can be read and reacted to by 3 tomoe sharingan and connect with the punch to the enemy while moving, stoping 10 meters behind the enemy with their arm extended in front of them.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -Only useable twice per battle.

    (Removed the unseen by the naked eye part and made it normal swift release levels)

    2.God Spear (Shinsō)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 to extend the blade from short to mid or +20 to extend from short to long)
    Damage Points: +10 for mid range attack, +20 for long range (due to the extra chakra flowing through the blade when extended)
    Description: It looks like an ordinary wakizashi. The hilt is light-blue with a tsuba made of two slim swirls of metal looping around the blade to make an open oval, resembling an "S". It is normally in its wakizashi form when not used, or when a shorter blade is favorable to the user but can become the size of a katana at will and stay that length without an extra chakra drain.
    Shinsō gained its name due to the chakra metal it was forged with and its ability to extend to great lengths when the user applys a large amount of their own chakra to the blade of Shinsō. Shinso's size changing ability also happens at a great speed, the blade extends and retracts up to Mid range in about 1 second and return to original length in the same amount of time and is able to extend to Long range in 3 seconds and return to original length within another 3.

    -Can only extend up to long range once every 3 turns
    -Can extend to Mid range once a turn
    -Extending and contracting the sword counts towards one of the 3 moves.
    -Can only be used by Professor Sarutobi

    (Tried to make it more clear the chakra involved is normal and the sword's chakra metal is what allows it to extend so it shouldn't need a custom clan to use)

    3.(Hayaton: Hayaton Zama) Swift Release: Swift State
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every turn until canceled)
    Damage points: +10 to all taijutsu
    Description: A heightened state of constantly flowing swift release chakra to the body and mind, allowing the user to move and percive actions at high speeds and activate swift release techniques without forming any handseal. Due to the constant use of elevated speed the users muscles are worn out after using the state if it was maintained for all 5 turns and the user experiences a more sluggish reaction time then normal for 2 turns afterwards.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -only useable once per battle, lasts 5 turns.
    -movements only readable by 3 tomoe and above sharingans.

    (removed the superhuman speeds without handseals part and made it "high speeds and activate swift release techniques without forming any handseal)

    4. (Hayaton:Zensokuryoku Kobushi) Swift Release: Full Speed Fist
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User first focuses earth chakra in their fist and forearm to harden it to steel-like quality then charges the enemy,building up swift release chakra in their legs as they run, user appears as a blur to most ninja due to the great speed. Using the built up speed in a straight line the user hits the enemy in the chest with the hardened fist, breaking the sternum and fracturing the ribs around it.
    -Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Only useable once per battle
    -Can only be used by a swift user bio.
    -Only avoidable in short range by space/time users or EIG users with 4+ gates open
    -3 Tomoe sharingan and above are capable of reading the movements.
    -Able to punch through B rank and below defences.
    -Can't use A or above Swift Release techniques for 2 turns afterwards.

    (changed a bit as well and resubmitting alongside bullet punch)


    New but related to the weapon resubmit.

    5.
    (Buto)-Dance
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Using Shinso the user sends a large amount of chakra into his blade to activate its ability to extend great lengths at great speed, reaching mid range in one second and long in 3.

    (this would be the jutsu posted when using shinso's power as one of the 3 moves)


    ~Leaving for some other mod
     
         
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    (Dokou Kata ‡ Aragami) - Form of Dokujin ‡ Wild God -

    Rank: A
    Type: Defence/Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 0/60
    Description: Aragami is a kenjutsu technique that achieves a harmony of offense and defense. You start with a special high stance where you hold your sword with two hands above your head with the sword pointing diagonally backwards and also you turn your upper body and hips a bit sideways. Then, when the opponent attacks, you target and strike your enemy's weapon with a downwards crescent-shaped slash. In that instant when your weapon hits your opponent's weapon, you give your sword a sharp twist and add a sudden burst of speed to it's impact. Thereby not only destroying your oppenent's weapon but also knocking it away. The twist is amplified by the twist of your hips and upper body. If for instance an opponent attacks with a spear with his right foot in front, when used Aragami on it the spear point shatters, is blown backwards and the opponent's left foot stands now in front.
    It can also be used directly on an opponent, but in that case it doesn't really cut but the force from the twist can cause severe internal damage. When the opponent's weapon is knocked away, he's completely open for a counter attack.

    The stance:


    The attack and twist:


    Opponent blown backwards:


    ||Approved||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kurimuzon Hakira View Post
    Only Summonings this week. No resubmission (even if I am upset that they were declined. , I guess it will have to wait until next week.)

    Hummingbird Summons:

    ~Approved Contract~

    Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals. When he flaps his wings, he creates a torrent of A-Ranked Flames.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Fire Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of Lightning by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Lightning Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother. He can create an A-Ranked Earth Torrent by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Earth Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of wind by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Wind Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Weapon Summoning:

    Pinned (Kotei sa Reta)
    Rank: A
    Range: Short- to Mid-Range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user throws a previously marked in blood scroll into the air. Five large poles connected by chains fall from the sky on top of the opponent. (depicted below) The opponent is pinned to the ground.
    ~The user must be hit by an A-Rank+ Jutsu first.






    -Declined. You can't just summon weapons-

    IMPORTANT: I have permission in this conversation to resubmit these.

    Hummingbird Summons:

    ~Approved Contract~

    Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird [Gender=Female]. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.



    Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird [Gender=Male]. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird [Gender=Male]. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    Aquarion, the Water Bird (Aquarion, Mizu no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Aquarion, the Water Bird [Gender=Feale]. She is a hummingbird of the Purple-throated Carib variety, distinguished by having no battle scars of any kind. She is able to use up to B-Rank Water Jutsu that do not require hand seals. She is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. She is the twin sister of Silvan, the Forrest Bird.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    Silvan, the Forrest Bird (Silvan, Foresuto no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Silva, the Forrest Bird [Gender=Female]. She is a hummingbird of the Green-throated Carib variety, distinguished by having no battle scars of any kind. She is able to use up to B-Rank Genjutsu that do not require hand seals. She is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. She is the twin sister of Aquarion.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    ~All Approved~ Note that I've changed "thrice per battle" to "twice per battle" and also that if your opponent does damage to one of your birds, if you summon it again, the damage will still be there.
    And for example "genjutsu that do not require handseals" means that she can only use genjutsu that doesn't require handseals and not that she can use all genjutsu without handseals.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:gorilla
    Scroll Owner:shadow1rasengun
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: in the process

    OR

    Summoning Animal:chickens
    Scroll Owner:shadow1darkrasengun
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing:
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    ~Both Declined~ Choose one and make sure that nobody else has it. Both are declined because you only can hold one contract at your current rank, and I'm not gonna choose which one for you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu hari)-Water Needle
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: User creates some small sharping water Needle which travel in high speed into the battlefield. When they touch the opponent they Damage Their Skins organs if the user throws more accurately.
    ~ Only taught by Yagura ~

    ~Declined~ Restrictions? Make the description more understandable... "skins organs"..

    (Suiton: Raiton Tatsumaki)- Lightning Tornado
    Type: Defence
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 22
    Description: User creates An Tornado Using His/Her Lightning Chakra by manipulating wind he/she will be able to defende them self using the tornado..for example they can deflect or use the tornado to disturb the kunai's/explosive's
    ~ Only taught by Yagura ~

    ~Declined~ Similar CANON technique already exists, same rank too I think x_x
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (fuuton:kaze hando)wind style: hand of wind
    Type: Offence/defence
    Rank:S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user concentrates fuuton chakra into his hands creating a vortex of wind around his hands.This vortex of wind is as sharp as a blade.Now the user can attack the his opponent only head on and he can use his hands to defend even against lighning justsu's of rank S and below and it can also be used to deflect kunai's and shurikens
    NOTE:
    *can only be used by govind*
    *no hand seals required*

    (raiton:raikou enban)lightning style:lightning disc
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:mid range,long range
    Chakra:40
    Damamge:80
    Description:The user creates a lightning disc of 75cm radius which is spinning at a high speed.The user can throw the disc and the disc can cut through any jutsu's(except S rank wind jutsu's) and the disc is not set to explode but if it strikes a person even if it is a scratch the the bolts of current send by the disc could make the entire body numb
    NOTE:
    *can only be used by govind*
    *can only use 3 times in a battle*

    (doton:diedo uzumaki)earth style: mud whirl pool
    Rank:S
    Range:long/mid
    Chakra 40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user uses a whole lot of doton chakra and slams his hands on the ground and releases it on to the ground and uses it to create a whilpool of mud in which the opponent gets trapped making and then covering the opponent with mud
    note:
    *can only be used by govind*
    *doesn't require handseals*

    (katon:kasai sukin)fire style:fire skin
    Rank:A
    Range:short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:Afterthe user performs a single handseal he channels his entire body with katon chakra and,the user coats himself with the katon chakra making him impervious to all katon jutsu's of A-rank and below
    Note:
    *can only be used by govind*

    ~All Declined~They need restrictions, all of them...
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kurimuzon Hakira View Post
    Only Summonings this week. No resubmission (even if I am upset that they were declined. , I guess it will have to wait until next week.)

    Hummingbird Summons:

    ~Approved Contract~

    Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals. When he flaps his wings, he creates a torrent of A-Ranked Flames.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Fire Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of Lightning by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Lightning Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother. He can create an A-Ranked Earth Torrent by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Earth Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of wind by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Wind Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Weapon Summoning:

    Pinned (Kotei sa Reta)
    Rank: A
    Range: Short- to Mid-Range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user throws a previously marked in blood scroll into the air. Five large poles connected by chains fall from the sky on top of the opponent. (depicted below) The opponent is pinned to the ground.
    ~The user must be hit by an A-Rank+ Jutsu first.






    -Declined. You can't just summon weapons-
    Quote Originally Posted by Kurimuzon Hakira View Post
    Are these gonna be checked? Sorry if this has been answered, just curious.

    Nara's Shadows: Mocking Bird (Nara no Kage: Mokkinbādo)
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short to Long Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user manipulated their shadow so that it approaches the opponent, and then creates multiple hummingbird-shaped shadows that come off the ground and lunge at the opponent. The shadow birds then stab the target, keeping them in place, as well as wrap around the target. The target can be pulled to the ground if needed.


    -Declined. Wrong chakra info.-

    Nara's Shadows: Copy Cat Clone (Nara no Kage: Mohō Kurōn)
    Rank: A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user manipulates their shadow to take the form of their self in a dark form (still in the form of a shadow). The clone can then attack the opponents. (Attacks are worth applicable damage). The shadow can be destroyed by either being separated from the user or an intense light source.
    ~The shadow is solid, and can use weapons and Nara's Shadows jutsu. It is not effected by weapons, as it is only a shadow and nothing more.


    -On hold. You really want this? It's not good for you, considering that your 'true' self will be unable to move, yet fully visible to the opponents. Anyway, if you still want this you have to state exactly what I told you-


    Hummingbird Hands (Hachidori no Te)
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user unleashes the beak of a hummingbird (that is very sharp) from their sleeve. The beak can open to grab the target.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    -Declined: Wrong chakra info-

    Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks (Hachidori no Te: Ichi Sen Bādopanikku)
    Rank: A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short to Mid-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user begins by using Hummingbird Hands. Instead of being released from the sleeve, it is released from the mouth. The user then upens the beak, releasing two more. The next one does the same, etc. The target now is being swarmed with "one thousand beaks".


    -On hold, until you get the jutsu above approved-

    Demonic Illusion: Torture Chamber (Genjutsu: Gōmon Heya)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short to Long Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The User throws a smoke bomb, starting the illusion. when the smoke clears, the opponent finds themselves strapped to a table in an extensive torture chamber. the opponent is put through multiple kinds of torture worse than your wildest imagination, and then released from the jutsu. This can be used for interrogational purposes as well.


    -Declined. An illusion does not start by a smoke bomb. State exactly how you are making the illusion happen-

    If it is an accident that this is open, the above will be submitted at another time. Please check the quoted first.
    IMPORTANT: In the first quote, one will be resubmitted. I am allowing another signer of this scroll, Yoso Noko, to submit all except Striker, the Lightning Bird, due to the fact that all summons, with the exception of the boss, are mutually shared.

    Resubmitting:

    Summons:

    Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Approved~ Note the change

    Custom Jutsu:

    Hummingbird Hands (Hachidori no Te)
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes the beak of a hummingbird (that is very sharp) from their sleeve. The beak can open to grab the target.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.
    ~Can be used by summons of the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Approved~

    Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks (Hachidori no Te: Ichi Sen Bādopanikku)
    Rank: B
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short to Mid-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user begins by using Hummingbird Hands. Instead of being released from the sleeve or arm of the user, it is released from their mouth. The user then upens the beak, releasing two more. The next one does the same, etc. The target now is being swarmed with "one thousand beaks," all of which are extremely sharp.
    ~The user must have signed the Hummingbird contract.
    ~Can be used by summons of the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Declined~ Sounds too powerful for B rank..

    New:

    Custom Jutsu:

    Hummingbird Hands: Sea of Stings (Hachidori no Te: Sasa Re no Umi)

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short, Mid, and Long-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user starts of similarly to both Hummingbird Hands and Hummingbird hand: One Thousand beaks, in that multiple hummingbirds are released from both their sleeve and mouth. Then, similarly to Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks, the hummingbirds open their moths, revealing more hummingbirds, all with extremely sharp beaks. These hummingbirds the "swim" throughout the area, creating a large sea of hummingbirds, which engulfs the opponent.
    ~Can only be used by sighers of the Hummingbird Contract.
    ~Can be used by summonings of the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Declined~ Do not resubmit

    Custom Weaponry:

    Triple Bladed Scythe (Toripuru ha no Ōgama)
    Rank: A
    Type: Weaponry
    Range: Short-, Mid, and Long-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user wields an "upgraded version" of Hidan's original Triple Bladed Scythe. It is made of black, chakra-conducting metal, as well as the rope, giving more cutting power as opposed to the original. It also has some new features as well, like mentioned in the Third Data Book. It is now able to remove the bladed piece of the scythe, which remain connected to the scythe by wires made from the same metal as the rope and scythe. They can be controlled just like the scythe due to the fact that they are connected to the blade, as the rope is to the scythe. The pieces can split apart, to a distance of up to one yard (approx. 1 meter), connected to the other half by the same wire used to connect them to the blade, to reveal a plethora of explosive tags that can be incorporated into attacks.
    ~The rope can be broken by A-Rank or higher Jutsu.
    ~The wire can be broken by B-Rank or higher Jutsu.
    ~The Scythe, rope, and wire can all conduct Chakra of any kind.
    ~The blade pieces can split apart on the scythe itself, to create a three full crescents, as opposed to three half crescents. One side would be covered in explosive tags, while the other, depicted below, has nothing on it.


    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-16-2011 at 01:27 PM.

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