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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Resubmitting with adjustment to time frame/activation speed.
    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Hoshi No Shitsumei) – Marmot Arts: Star Sight Loss
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Utilizing four hand seals; sheep, horse, snake, and tiger. Focused fire element chakra builds at an exponential rate (taking less than 1/2 of a second) to a pinpoint at the tip of a finger, thumb or palm of the hand. This concentration of chakra does not produce any significant heat; almost all of its energy is focused on particle conversion (the reaction in fire that converts energy to visible light as opposed to heat.) Used to blind the target; much like Raigen Raikōchū only not a ginjutsu. At any range the effect of the jutsu causes temporary blindness. If the opponent has sharingan or byuakugan active, the jutsu will cause permanent damage to their retinas if they see it. The effect is that of looking into the sun with a telescope from a distance of only a few meters.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: This jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed because of the intensity of the light.
    Note: The effects of this jutsu last for 2 turns (except where otherwise stated due to dōjutsu.)
    Note: Turning away before the jutsu is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu is enough to avoid it’s effects.
    Note: Because of the jutsu’s nature is the same as that of the stars, Void based jutsus have minimal affect against it.
    Note: If this jutsu is active (in the palm of the hand) while the user grabs the face of the opponent then permanent loss of vision and use of the eyes may occur due to proximity.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.


    ~ The purple part is ridiculous. It basically gives you an auto-kill against any Doujutsu. And if it's so bright that it's like looking into the sun with a telescope from a few meters away, it basically will blind you too, regardless of whether you shut your eyes. ~
    Resubmitting with adjustments based on conversation with Emp.
    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Hoshi No Shitsumei) – Marmot Arts: Star Sight Loss
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All (see notes)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Utilizing four hand seals; sheep, horse, snake, and tiger. Focused fire element chakra builds at an exponential rate (taking less than 1/2 of a second) to a pinpoint at the tip of a finger, thumb or palm of the hand. This concentration of chakra does not produce any significant heat; almost all of its energy is focused on particle conversion (the reaction in fire that converts energy to visible light as opposed to heat.) Used to blind the target; much like Raigen Raikōchū only not a ginjutsu. At any range the effect of the jutsu causes temporary blindness. If the opponent has sharingan or byakugan active or rinnegan, the jutsu will cause permanent damage to their retinas if they see it. The effect is that of looking into the sun with a telescope from a distance of only a few meters.
    Range/Effects:
    • This jutsu effects all ranges, however from long range it causes only severely blurred vision for 2 turns, unless a dōjutsu is active then it's loss of dōjutsu for 2 turns, but can still see.
    • Mid range causes blindness 2 turns, for active dōjutsu loss of ability for match and blinded 1 turn and blurred vision the next.
    • Short range causes blindness 2 turns, for active dōjutsu permanent loss of vision.

    Note: If this jutsu is active (in the palm of the hand) while the user grabs the face of the opponent then permanent loss of vision and use of the eyes may occur due to proximity.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: This jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed because of the intensity of the light.
    Note: Turning away before the jutsu is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu is enough to avoid it’s effects, however byakugan must be disabled due to its ability to see through solids and has around 360° field of view.
    Note: Because of the jutsu’s nature is the same as that of the stars, Void based jutsus have minimal affect against it.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.


    ~Declined~ Seriously OP, do not resubmit it
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ninken Ryo) Summoning Technique: Ninja Hound Ryo
    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementry
    Range: N/A
    ChakraCost:50
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: By using a blood sacrifice, the user is able to summon the Pit bull ninja hound Ryo. Ryo is the boss of all other ninja hounds, and the strongest of all of them. being able to perform fuuton jutsu (only those known by the user). Like all other ninja hounds, he has much higher and acute senses than a normal human. He also has enlarged canine teeth, so that he can bite through anything with relitve ease.

    Note: *can only be used once per battle*


    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ninken Ryoichi) Summoning Technique: Ninja Hound Ryoichi
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementry
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descrption: By using a blood sacrifice, the user is able to summon the son of Ryo, Ryoichi a Pitbull ninja hound. He shares all of his fathers abilities. he has exceptional senses. with his large canine teeth, he can bite through almost anything with relative ease. he can use doton jutsu (up to B-Rank).

    ~Declined~ Proof that you can summon hounds?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ga-youshiki: yaiba ishuu (Moth style-Blade Swarm)
    Rank-A
    Range:Short/Long
    Typeffensive/Supplementary
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:
    The user uses their Mark of the monarch tattoo(located on the left forearm) and the user punches, summoning a swarm of 100 average sized moths, that appear from the user, that all fly at high speeds towards the opponent obscuring the opponents vision of the user. The small moths all have very sharp wings, comparable to that of an extremely sharp paper cutter, and they fly past the opponent, cutting them. The moths disperse as they hit the opponent. They may be controlled by the user.
    *can only stay on the field for a maximum of two turns
    *Can only be used by those Taught By Icemyster
    *Can only be used 3 times
    *Can only be used by those who have signed the Moth Contract

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Name: (Gekko sonata) - Moonlight sonata
    Type: Dagger (Supplementary/Offensive)
    Rank:B (up to A if the effect is activated)
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:25 (up to 30 if the effect is activated)
    Damage Points:00 (60 if the effect is activated)
    Description:The main usage of the moonlight sonata is for the nara shadow techniques as it possessed a chakra reactive metal, which allowed the user to fuse their shadow chakra into the blade. Thus, this also allowed the user to use the Shadow Imitation Shuriken jutsu in a battle. Despite of the shape, the dagger can be used as a close range weapon and also mid-range as it can be thrown. The moonlight sonata can also be an offensive tool as it possessed a side-effect when it trapped the opponent's shadow. However, this effect only works with the presence of the moon, thus the effect is unusable during the day.
    * Only Fallenuchiha can wield this dagger (Can be used by others only with my permission)
    *The effect only can be used once in a battle
    *The side-effect is just a short-shock although it cost 60 damages
    *The user must be a Nara in order to use the effect

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    ~Declined~ OP
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu Ryuujin - Summoning Technique: Dragon God
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: A special katana that was created to rival the original 7SM weapons. Made out of a special metal, Ryuujin has a bright red blade with the ability to channel the users fire chakra through it for its own special attacks. While testing the katana, the forgers were unable to use the katana to its full potential and deemed it a failure. Eventually the blade was discarded and than stolen. Ragnaroc eventually came in possession of the katana and was able to weld it to is full potential. To summon Ryuujin, the user wipes their blood across the forearm tattoo and utters phrase "Burst into flames, Ryuujin". Because the sword had fire chakra flowing through it, any wounds inflicted would sear the flesh shut, killing all nerves and stopping any bleeding, though the person being cut would be in immense pain.

    Restrictions
    - Can only be summoned once per battle, but lasts the entire battle
    - Can not be destroyed
    - if the summoner loses contact with Ryuujin for more than 2 turns, the sword will disappear and cuase damage (30 damage points) to the summoner.

    Approved


    Katon Ryuuka Soshaku - Fire Style Dragon Bite
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Ryuujins basic techniques, the user concentrates their fire chakra through the swords. When swung a blast of fire is shot out, as its about to come in contact with the enemy, a dragons head is formed that envelopes them in fire as it appears to bite them. Depending on the amount of swings, the amount of blasts can range from 1 to 5 per turn

    Restrictions
    - Can only be used when Ryuujin is summoned
    - Can only swing the sword a maximum of 5 times per turn

    Needs more restriction. 5 attacks per turn with no stipulation as to if they all need to be done straight after the other.


    Katon Tobihi - Fire style Leaping Flames
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: An advance technique of Ryuujin, the user strikes the tip of the katana against the ground and after sending fire chakra through the sword, is able to create streams of fire that can be used to attack the opponent or create thunder clouds.

    Restrictions
    - Can only be used when Ryuujin is summoned
    - Can only be used a total of 6 times
    - Can not be used back to back

    i assume a jet of fire bursts from the ground, if so tell me via vm, i'll add the aditional part of the description to clarify and it'll be approved.


    Katon Urame - Fire Style Backfire
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Med/Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: Ryuujins ultimate technique. The user raises Ryuujin high above his head, concentrating his fire chakra into the blade of the sword causing the blade to start pulsating in different shades of red. once the pulsating stops, the user swings the sword down, causing a backdraft to occur. once the swing is complete, oxygen is brought back into the area where the sword was swung, causing an extremely large, powerful and fast blast of fire that is directed towards the opponent. because of the speed it is almost impossible to avoid, unless the person has a doujutsu

    Restrictions
    - Can only be used when Ryuujin is summoned
    - Can only be used once per fight
    - Once used, the user can no longer use any Ryuujin specific S rank attacks.
    - Once used, the user can not use S rank fire techniques for 2 turns, A rank techniques for 1 turn, and any A rank Ryuujin specific attacks for 2 turns.
    - User takes 20 damage.

    i'd need better description as you're practically referring to control of oxygen.


    Katon Yoen - Fire style Burning Embers
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will channel his fire chakra through his feet and into the ground, summoning a giant curtain of fire thats able to attack the opponent from beneath them, distract the opponent or be used to defend the user against most attacks.

    Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 11-26-2010 at 06:48 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Freestyle art death volley = Furīāto no shi no renpatsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, and focuses wind chakra into pre-prepared needles in his/her pants, in the same motion the user spins around incredibly fast, and releases the chakra and the needles, creating a volley of needles that will cover a 360 degrees angle around the user, these needles are very sharp and lethal, and can be filled with poison, if stated at the beginning of the match.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used once per battle.


    better description needed... how exactly do you release them from the pants... yes you spin, but surely they are held in place or they'd just fall out pretty much.


    Freestyle art back in hand stand = Tenokō de furīātosutando
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to go in hand stand incredibly fast, the user focuses on relaxing the nerves and muscles in the body, and on regaining the perfect balance of the hand stand, this technique can be done even during an earthquake, simply because the only thing it takes, is mental focus.


    i don't understand why you can't do this anyway without a jutsu nor it's full usefulness.


    Earth release: Freestyle art hands of steel = Doton: Hagane no furīāto no te
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses earth chakra in his hands, and covers them in a very hard and flexible metal, these “gloves” are very resistant to heat, and can also be used to regain or uphold the hand stand at a critical moment.
    Notes:
    • Requires no handseals.


    Declined, you're basically talking about a metal release...



    Illusion Technique: Mirror world = Genjutsu: Mirā no sekai
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user casts a genjutsu, which will change the way the targets senses find things, it will literally turn the targets world upside down, the target will feel like it’s standing in the sky looking down onto the ground, like if the two had switched places. The targets will hear everything in reverse, making it impossible to understand anything, the target will feel like it’s switched preferred hands, (if it was a lefty before, it’ll be right handed now) and the target will, as long as this jutsu is in effect, have a really mean headache, as if someone is were inside their heads, trying to break free. All this combined, will cause extreme confusion in the targets instincts and senses, and will result in slower reactions and speed altogether.
    Notes:
    • Lasts for three turns.
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.


    Leaving for others... this probably exists as it's a total rip of shinji's technique



    Secret Freestyle art: Nightmare Steelcage = Himitsu no furīāto: Naitomeasutīru
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Descritpion: This technique is an adapatation of Jiraiya's crushing toad stomach technique, which reverse summoned the user and their opponents, into the stomach of a toad on Mt. Myoboku. In this version, the user reverse summons him/her and the opponent, into a 9x9x9 meter steelcage, place in an unknown location. The cage is made up of very thick bars, covered in chains, and with seals all over them, the cage is impossible to escape from. The seals placed on the bars, will prevent even bugs to escape, and they will prevent any summoning inside the cage. The floor and ceiling of the cage, is made of extremely hard steel, with seals placed on the outside of them, and with drawings of people performing freestyle moves, on the inside. Because of the seals, it’s not possible to remain in the cage for very long, and when the time’s up, the user and target, will be transported back to precisely where they stood before this jutsu was activated.
    Notes:
    • Any clones the user and/or the target might have made, will not be affected by this jutsu, but they will be there when the target and user returns.
    • Lasts for three turns.
    • Can only be used once per battle.
    • The user will be incapable of using any summons for the rest of the battle.


    Declined, no reverse summoning the opponent with customs.


    Note: these freestlye art jutsus are all made for a special bio, which i will make later if my freestlyle art gets approve, no ordinary ninja can do these properly, so please don't decline them because of that, the bio i'll make will practically be in hand stand through the whole battle, and if it suits you better i won't share them.

    ~Leaving for someone else~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Jutsu name:Live Blaze
    Type:attack
    Range:N/A
    Rank:S rank
    Damage:90
    Chakra:60
    Description:the user burns dark fire coloured flame spontaneously which comes to life and follows the opponent told.on contact the flames rage and burn the opponent badly.the user has to retreat for about 5 seconds.this technique uses ferociousness of fire,strenght of earth,life of yin and power of yang.can be used for manipulating many other jutsus like the BLAZING WARRIOR TECHNIQUE.
    Note:can be used only by the ones who have the elements required after taught by me

    ~Declined~ Edit after a mod has editted will get you banned from the CJ's

    + read the rules as you have the bio nor rank to submit Custom jutsu's.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton :Hone Assaiki) Earth Style: Bone Crusher
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their charka in the palm of their hands then send it through the earth manipulating it creating two massive hands made of solid rock. The hands then enclose the enenmy as they come together and crush the users opponent.
    Note:Can be used underground.
    ~Declined~ Similar to existing jutsu's
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Monki) Summoning Technique: Monkeys
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user must bite their thumb (drawing blood) before preforming the necessary handseals to preform this summoning. Then they place their hand on the summoning scroll or tattoo to do this summon. According to the amount used of chakra used determines which monkey you summon.

    -Each monkey has a different affect when summoned
    -Summoning only lasts 3 turns
    ~Declined~ already submitted
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton:Mokusei no shi) Secret wood style:Wooden death
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Type:Attack
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80 (-50 to user)

    Description: This is a secret wood style technique due to the impact and danger this jutsu posesses. In this jutsu the user cleverly manipulates the earth or water (since wood is formed from both water and earth)too form wooden mines all around the opponent in random positions in a 3 metre radius with the opponent as the centre beneath the surface of the ground or water(about 1 inch below the ground or water surface). These wooden mines are extremely sensitive and if there is any foot movement they explode like a mine,expelling no smoke but the explosion destroys the 1 inch layer of earth above it and causes wooden splinters to travel at high speeds and pierce the opponent like grenade shrapnel leaving the opponent severely damaged.

    Restrictions:

    *can only be used twice per battle
    *no A ranked and above mokuton jutsus the next turn
    *doujutsu users and sensors can sense or see the mines but those who do are not sensors or doujutsu bearers they are oblivious too the wooden mines
    *due too the strain on mokuton chakra the user is also damaged
    *the user forms around 25 mines around the opponent
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha


    (Mokuton:Mudō no de~yuo) Secret wood style :The Ravaging Duo

    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Chakra cost:50(drains 20 more chakra per turn)
    Damage:90

    Description : This jutsu is a very famous jutsu said to be used by hashrama when he fought madara and the kyuubi. This jutsu is forbidden i rank due too the ravaging and destruction that the giants cause. So in this jutsu the user chains 8 handsealsafter which 2 giants Shawn Micheals and Triple H emerge.They are about 25 metres tall and have a devlish personality.They dont have the brain too talk normally but they can comprehend basic commands.

    Both of them have wooden spikes all over their body except the soles of their feet.this makes them invunerable too taijutsu moves. Shawn micheals is a thin giant and is very agile and uses both his hands and legs in combat very effectively. Triple H whereas uses a sledgehammer(made of wood) as a weapon and causes a huge amount of destruction.

    Restrictions:

    *can be used only once per battle
    *no mokuton jutsus while the giants are on the field(but jutsus that are already active are not effected)
    *they poof away after 4 turns
    *they can protect the user from S rank attacks only once (one giant can protect once only and then he is destroyed)
    *they can destroy defensive doton jutsus upto B rabk due to their brute strength
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha
    Note:
    The background is just for fun not any prediction or stuff.Also the names are just redundant but i added them just for fun. Please dont mind all that stuff.



    ~Declined~ Use a font thats easier to read
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Liliana View Post

    (Fuuton/Katon: Ikusen no Houou) Wind/Fire Release: The Army of the 1000 Scorching Falcons


    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This technique consists in two different steps, which can be preformed simultaneously, using an ally, or in a quick succession. The first part consist in stringing together 4 handseals before spitting a huge quantity of seriously hot ashes, which will then burst into an hellish flock of 1000 bird-like ash structures. The birds will fly out in different directions, some will fly high into the sky, while others (Only a few) will attack the opponent(s) directly.
    The second part of the jutsu consists in preforming 3 handseals. The first will quickly gather air around each individual bird. The second will concentrate the gathered wind into the ash-hawks, which will make them burst ablaze. At that point, the birds will be sharper and faster, aswell as hotter. The third handseal will make all of the birds fall onto the opponent. Much like real hawks, the free-falling bird-structures will acquire great speeds, and will violently explode upon impact. The few birds that directly attacked the opponent will simple burst outwards, burning anything close to them.
    *This jutsu can only be done once per battle*
    *The user will the ability to call forth Fire or Wind Chakra to preform techniques higher than B rank in the turn after usage, higher than A in the next and higher than S in next*
    *The user will suffer a damage loss of 20 damage points*

    ~Declined~ OP
    (Fuuton/Katon: Ikusen no Houou) Wind/Fire Release: The Squad of the Scorching Falcons
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This technique consists in two different steps, which can be preformed simultaneously, using an ally, or in a quick succession. The first part consist in stringing together 4 handseals before spitting a huge quantity of seriously hot ashes, which will then burst into an hellish flock of about 10-15 bird-like ash structures. The birds will fly out in different directions, some will fly high into the sky, while others (Only a few 2-3) will attack the opponent(s) directly.
    The second part of the jutsu consists in preforming 3 handseals. The first will quickly gather air around each individual bird. The second will concentrate the gathered wind into the ash-hawks, which will make them burst ablaze. At that point, the birds will be sharper and faster, aswell as hotter. The third handseal will make all of the birds fall onto the opponent. Much like real birds of prey, the free-falling bird-structures will acquire great speeds, and will violently explode upon impact (At the scale of a Paper Bomb induced Explosion). The few birds that directly attacked the opponent will simple burst outwards, burning anything close to them.
    *This jutsu can only be done once per battle*
    *The user will the ability to call forth Fire or Wind Chakra to preform techniques higher than B rank in the turn after usage, higher than A in the next and higher than S in next*
    *The user will suffer a damage loss of 20 damage points*


    I toned down the number of Bird-Like Ash structured created, from 1000 to 10-15. I think that was the reason why this was considered OP, though it was meant for attacks at a larger scale, not necessarily for 1 on 1 matches...
    Also I specified the explosion to that of a Paper Bomb...

    Can I have a note that enables 1000?:

    *For Large Scale Attacks, the user will be able to increase the number of Scorching Falcons to an Army of 1000, which will shoot to the sky as a whole, and then fall like a rain of arrows onto the targets, at the cost of additional 100 chakra, and the loss of Fire or Wind in the next 3 turns*

    ~Approved~ but the bolded "note" is declined
    Quote Originally Posted by Liliana View Post
    (Fuuton: Rashinban Taka no Me) Wind Release: Compass HawkeyeRank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user does one handseal, and the air in 4 different locations, North, East, South West, will compress and assume the shape of a hawk, soaring in the air about 20 meters from the ground, and Long range from the opponent(s). They will glide around in a circle, always keeping the same distance from their correspondent target. With one seal, the user can make these wind-hawks (One at a time, or as the user wishes) shoot themselves at speeds slightly higher than the current sniper bullets, and will assume a similar shape, aiming to pierce the opponent in specific (or not) places, depending on the accuracy of the user of this technique.
    *Can only be used once. All of the hawks must be dispersed or used before the user (And only the specific user) of this technique can preform any other jutsus. If the user of this technique is knocked unconscious, killed or vanished, the hawks will immediately shoot to the heart.
    Once targeted (At the beginning of the jutsu) the hawks can't change opponents, and will disperse harmlessly if the said opponent vanishes, looses consciousness or get's killed.

    ~Declined~ OP
    (Fuuton: Rashinban Taka no Me) Wind Release: Compass Hawkeye
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user does one handseal, and the air in on of 4 different locations, North, East, South West, will compress and assume the shape of a hawk, soaring in the air about 20 meters from the ground, and Long range from the opponent(s). It will glide around in a circle, always keeping the same distance from their correspondent target. With one seal, the user can make this wind-hawk (One at a time, or as the user wishes) shoot itself at speeds slightly higher than the current sniper bullets, and will assume a similar shape, aiming to pierce the opponent in a specific (or not) place, depending on the accuracy of the user of this technique.
    *Can only be used once. The hawk must be dispersed or used before the user (And only the specific user) of this technique can preform any other jutsu. If the user of this technique is knocked unconscious, killed or vanished, the hawk will vanish.
    Once targeted (At the beginning of the jutsu) the hawk can't change opponents, and will disperse harmlessly if the said opponent vanishes, looses consciousness or get's killed.


    The user now creates only one hawk, and if the user is killed/knocked unconscious or vanished, the hawk vanishes aswell.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Boukou) -Outrage

    Type:Weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:For both form it made out of pure strong steel that it's almost indestructible and the sheath is made up of black/black crystal like mineral.
    This sword also allow user to channel in fire/lighting chakra in it. To go to second form of the sword [ Katana ] the user will have to channel in chakra into the first form [ Cane ] in order to transform to the second form but it doesn't take up alot of time and the user will say out the name of the sword The user also capable of launching chakra waves that can knock back eneny[cane form] and also launching chakra wave(red in colour)that can seriously harm/even kill enemy [ sword form ]

    First Form[Cane]


    • User can channel in fire/wind/lighting chakra in it
    • Launching chakra wave can only be used 3 time per battle in this form


    Second Form[Black Katana]


    To use the second form of the sword user will add chakra into the cane form[doesn't require alot of time]
    User also can channel in fire/wind/lighting chakra in it
    Launching of bigger/stronger chakra wave can only be used 3 time per battle in this form


    -Fun purpose :D -
    Chakra wave- red in colour
    Calling the sword name when changing the form [cane to sword]


    ~Declined~ Did you really just try to steal a technique from Bleach?

    (Komodo Dragon Summoing no Jutsu:Chi Seeker)- Komodo Dragon Summoning Jutsu : Blood Seeker




    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the user performs the required handseal and using a small amount of blood of the user, the user slams his hand onto the ground and summons boss of the komdo dragon. It has very sharp claws and it also has a very thick-skin that normal swords/kunai won't be able to penetrade. He is very small in size (1,3 meters), he is extremely fast that naked eye won't able to follow him (1st tomoe sharingan is able to, if the sharingan user really focuses on him, 2nd tomoe and above will able too), he has also has a big amount of strength he could easily knock down a normal sized enemy with his tail he can also use the tail as a shield to defend himself. He is capable of spitting out fire from his mouth, and if he bites the opponent he will be able to trace the opponents bloodscent

    Can be only summon once per battle.
    Capable of using up to S rank fire jutsus.
    Capable of using his strong tail as a weapon to harm enemys.


    ~Declined~ Already exists

    (Hijutsu:Su-pa Shiroari Houmen)- Secret Technique: Super Termite Release


    Rank: B
    Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost : 25
    Damage : 40
    Description:The user will summon/release a host of Super Termites from their very own body. Super Termites is a nickname of Formosan subterranean termite (Coptotermes formosanus) because of their destructive habits and ability to consume wood at a extreme/rapid speed rate and that is why the nickname has been given to them.

    Must be bug user to use it
    Can be taught only by ~Faith~
    Capable of consuming wood/wood related stuff/wood jutsu
    Capable of flying/digging into ground

    ~Declined~
    (Hijutsu:Su-pa Shiroari Osanago Rankei) - Secret Technique: Super Termites Baby Egg

    Rank: B
    Type:Attack/Defend/Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The female Termites will start to lay white eggs everywhere they are including underground After laying their egg they will just fly off leaving their egg there to hatch on itself. The eggs will hatch into small baby termites they are also capable of flying and consuming wood but not as power as the normal super termites.

    • The egg will hatch in one turn after this jutsu is used
    • Must be bug user to use it
    • Can be taught only by ~Faith~

    ~Declined~

    (Konchuu Nami) - Bug Tsunami

    Rank : A
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost :30[Destruction Bug/Honey Bee] 35[Super Termite]
    Damage:60[Destruction Bug/Honey Bee] 65[Super Termite]
    Description: The user will gather their bugs to form a huge tsunami that is huge enough to fully cover opponent view from the user and it's also capable of drowning/crushing down the opponent causing the opponent to be severely/seriously injured.

    There's is 3 kind/type of bug
    • Destruction Bug - Destruction Bug Tsunami will just crush/drown the opponent.
    • Honey Bee - Honey Bee Tsunami will crush/drown the opponent and will also cause the area and also causing the opponent body to be sticky.
    • Super Termite - Super Termite Tsunami will crush/down the opponent it will start to bite the opponent causing the opponent unstoppable pain, if this was use against wood jutsu it will just devour up.


    • Must be bug user to use it
    • Can be taught only by ~Faith~

    ~Declined~ too similar to existing techniques
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Kōkū-Bin)-Wind Style: Air-Mail
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: With one handseal, the user creates a gust of wind that envelopes a distant shuriken or other small object and lets the user manipulate it in midair.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    approved, but will keep a check to make sure it isn't something that can be abused.


    (Hikage no Ki)- Tree of Shade
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user makes a 2 ft wide circle of shadow on the ground. Then with a handseal, it spreads out in all directions and branches off into many shadows that cover a 20 ft radius of it, and combines with anyone's shadow who will be unable to move for 2 turns. Then the other tendrils that didn't catch anything return to the center. This does not affect the user.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    Declined


    (Kurai Eikyō)- Dark Influence
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user extends his shadow to the back of his head which lets him control his entire body even if he is paralyzed. It has the same effect if used on an opponent and will last for 3 turns. This move requires no handseals.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -If successful, no Nara jutsu for 2 turns afterwards
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    make it self controlling only, there is no need for another opponent controlling jutsu when there already is one.


    (Katon: Futten)-Fire Style: Boiling Point
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After performing 4 handseals, the user points at a single spot heats the air around it very quickly. It is capable of evaporating large volumes of water and can be used within objects. The user must keep pointing at the spot to continue its effect.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No fire jutsu the next turn
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    Evaporating techniques exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton:Mokusei no shi) Secret wood style:Wooden death

    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Type:Attack
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage:80 (-50 to user)

    Description: This is a secret wood style technique due to the impact and danger this jutsu posesses. In this jutsu the user cleverly manipulates the earth or water (since wood is formed from both water and earth)too form wooden mines all around the opponent in random positions in a 3 metre radius with the opponent as the centre beneath the surface of the ground or water(about 1 inch below the ground or water surface). These wooden mines are extremely sensitive and if the user moves or there is any other movement around the mines like the ground shaking or anything falling on the mines, they explode like a mine,expelling no smoke but the explosion destroys the 1 inch layer of earth above it and causes wooden splinters to travel at high speeds and pierce the opponent like grenade shrapnel leaving the opponent severely damaged.

    Restrictions:

    *can only be used once per battle
    *no A ranked and above mokuton jutsus the next turn
    *doujutsu users and sensors can sense or see the mines but those who are not sensors or doujutsu bearers are oblivious too the wooden mines
    *due too the strain on mokuton chakra the user is also damaged
    *the user forms around 15 mines around the opponent
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha


    declined - mine techniques exist pretty much identical to this, there's little need for more.



    [(Mokuton:Mudō no de~yuo) Secret wood style :The Ravaging Duo


    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Chakra cost:50(drains 20 more chakra per turn)
    Damage:90

    Description : This jutsu is a very famous jutsu said to be used by hashrama when he fought madara and the kyuubi. This jutsu is forbidden i rank due too the ravaging and destruction that the giants cause. So in this jutsu the user chains 8 handseals after which 2 giants, Shawn Micheals and Triple H instantly emerge.They are about 25 metres tall and have a devlish personality.They dont have the brain too talk normally but they can comprehend basic commands.

    Both of them have wooden spikes all over their body except the soles of their feet,this makes them difficult too assault via taijutsu moves. Shawn micheals is a thin giant and is very agile and uses both his hands and legs in combat very effectively. Triple H whereas uses a sledgehammer(made of wood) as a weapon and causes a huge amount of destruction.

    Restrictions:

    *can be used only once per battle
    *no mokuton jutsus while the giants are on the field(but jutsus that are already active are not effected)
    *they poof away after 4 turns
    *they can protect the user from S rank attacks only once (one giant can protect once only and then he is destroyed)
    *they can destroy defensive doton jutsus upto B rank due to their brute strength
    *they posses extreme strength and are capable too severely damage an opponent if they connect a hit (they are giants )
    *can be used/taught by Gaara of konoha


    Note:

    The background is just for fun not any prediction or stuff.Also the names are just redundant but i added them just for fun. Please dont mind all that stuff.


    needs more info, can they use jutsu? also remove the ballerinas and use some anime or serious names... no real life names/people really imo :/
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Wind Shroud [Kaze Ooi]
    Rank: D
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the Tiger hand seal the user focuses on swirling his chakra around his body rapidly this causes the wind around him/her to swirl causing a shroud of wind to form this blocks level D and E attacks for two turns

    *Can only be used by me*

    follow the template fully.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user creates a Wave of Fire, that is 10ft. tall, travel towards the opponent and infuses the ends of the wave with Wind chakra as it approaches to make it wrap around the target and encircle them, the fire also spreads at the top and makes the wave of fire form into a dome of fire. As the fire wraps around, the user can anytime make the jutsu explode by releasing the wind chakra inside of it.
    *Can only be taught by Itachi4life*
    *Only can be used once per battle*
    *Cannot use Fire Jutsu the next turn*




    just a small point, how exactly are you storing wind within fire without it reacting together?

    _______

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The User creates a floating orb of concentrated Fire. The user then combines it with Lightning chakra and keep the Lightning buried down inside the core of the fire ball. The user then launches the Jutsu at the opponent at great speeds. The Jutsu can either hit the opponent dead on and cause major burns and electrocute them or when it is range the user and make the orb explode and release a great amount of fire and lightning. The explosion being massive and if the opponent is in range completely incenerate them.
    *Can only be taught by Itachi4life*
    *Only can be used once per battle*
    *Cannot use Fire Jutsu the next turn*




    Declined ... raiton + katon rasenshuriken? that's basically what this is... even the explosion is chakra expansion rather than a real explosion/

    _______

    Summoning Animal: Caracal
    Scroll Owner: Itachi4life
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet.

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user make the correct handsigns and summons Dunbar a Caracal. Dunbar is a very fast Caracal, being the fastest in his species. He is large enough for the user to ride on his back and has a great amount of strength. He is able to use up to A-Rank Wind jutsu and uses Wind Chakra to make his movements faster. He is very devoted to his summoner and will risk everything to protect them.
    *Must of Signed the Caracal Animal Contract*
    *Can only be taught by Itachi4life*
    *Only can be summoned twice per battle*
    *Can only be summoned for four turns at a time.*
    *Must wait three turns before can be summoned again*





    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user make the correct handsigns and summons Rokuro a Caracal. Rokuro is very strong and has some speed, but is not as fast as Dunbar. His talents don't rely on his speed but his usage of Earth chakra to make him very strong and have a strong defense. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Ninjutsu. He is able to block against most B-Rank Jutsu, but since is body is constantly flowing with earth chakra he is weak against lightning jutsu and is only able to defend against C-Rank Lightning. His mood is not all that good and will sometimes ignore the user.
    *Must of Signed the Caracal Animal Contract*
    *Can only be taught by Itachi4life*
    *Only can be summoned twice per battle*
    *Can only be summoned for four turns at a time.*
    *Must wait three turns before can be summoned again*
    *Rokuro can only defend against a maximum of two attacks per turn. If pushed farther he will poof away. If the attack is stronger than B-Rank(or C-Rank Lightning) he will disperse and leave the user helpless.*



    leaving summons for someone else
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kage Tsume) - Shadow Claws
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms shadows on there finger tips making talons on each hand, talons can be then used to slice and dice anything in the users way.
    (May only be used once per battle.)
    (only last 2 turns)
    (Only Huzuki is able to use this.)




    (Kage no Kabe) - Wall of Shadows
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user's shadow rises up as a large wall to guard against an attack.
    (Only Huzuki is able to use this.)
    (blocks mid-long range attacks only)




    (Kage Kasui) - Shadows Spikes

    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user Sends there shadow out and expands there shadow, shadow spikes that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.
    (Only Huzuki is able to use this.)
    (user must stay focus and not move during the jutsu)




    no solid shadows.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ragnarok) Ragnarok
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 when blade is reforming. 40 to make the blade start vibrating. 50 when forming wings. Amount of chakra of the jutsu for Absorption.
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: He is a long, pitch-black, medieval-like broadsword with a with a single white line along the length of the blade. His guard is composed of a spiky band with three bands coming up the base of the blade in a zig-zagging pattern. Just above those bands, there is a large, red-lipped mouth. He has a long, two-handed, handle, but he can be wielded with one hand. Ragnarok is a living sword. No physical attack can break Ragnarok but, if ever broken, Ragnarok will turn into a black liquid and reform over the course of one turn. When Ragnarok is being used in battle, he can use the wielder's chakra to make himself vibrate, giving him buzzsaw-like cutting abilities. The strength of Ragnarok's vibration is significantly stronger than any Raiton-induced vibration. After he starts vibrating, he never stops with the exception of him breaking. Once per battle Ragnarok can use the wielder's chakra to form black wings on the wielder's back, giving them the ability to fly at great speeds for 4 turns. He can also absorb up to A rank techniques 3 times per battle by sucking them into the mouth on the side of the blade.
    Note: Can only be used by Demosthenes.
    Note: Wings can be formed once per battle and last 4 turns. The forming of the wings counts as one of the 3 moves that can be done per turn.
    Note: 3 techniques up to A rank can be absorbed per battle.
    Looks:

    Extra Information:
    Unnecessary:
    Ragnarok is a being that was mentioned in ancient myths. In these myths it is said that Ragnarok was a being that was created from the insecurities and fears of the people of the world. He began to grow stronger as more and more insecurities and fears were felt and he was soon deity-like. He began to destroy villages and entire countries, causing more fear, making him ever stronger. As Ragnarok continued to go on this rampage, he caught the attention of a very power Shinigami, who then went to the mortal realm to face him. After a great clash between the two, Ragnarok was defeated and stripped of his powers. He was then turned into a blade that the Shinigami himself used to deal with later problems. It is not known if this is true.


    Ragnarok is a sentient blade that speaks and uses the wielders chakra.

    Ragnarok does not need to be summoned because the wielder carries the blade on his/her back, holding it there with chakra control similar to that which is used to walk on water or on a wall.


    If I need to make CJ templates for all of the abilities of Ragnarok, I shall.

    If an ability has to be removed, I will remove it.

    ~Declined OP, do not resubmit~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Gankyū no Hitei) – Marmot Arts: Eyeball Negation
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All (see notes)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After making the four required hand seals. Fire element chakra builds in approximately 1/2 of a second, to a pinpoint in the palm of the hand to create a grand flash. The flash from the jutsu itself only lasts for about a second and a half. This jutsu is used to temporarily blind the target. At various ranges the effect of the jutsu differ. If the opponent has sharingan, byakugan active or rinnegan, the jutsu can actually scorch the retinas causing permanent damage to their eyes if they see it at close enough range. The effect while having a dōjutsu active would be that of staring into the sun with a telescope from a very close distance because of the enhanced perception of both chakra and actual elements/objects. Direct line of sight is required to be subject to the effects. Because of the intensity of the light this jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed.
    Note: This jutsu can easily be rendered useless by simply turning away before it is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu, however byakugan must be disabled due to its ability to see through solids and has around 360° field of view.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Range/Effects:
    • This jutsu effects all ranges, however from long range it causes only severely blurred vision for 1 turn, unless a dōjutsu is active then it's loss of dōjutsu for 1 turn, but can still see.
    • Mid range causes blindness 1 turn, for active dōjutsu loss of ability for match and blurred vision for 1 turn.
    • Short range causes blindness 2 turns, for active dōjutsu permanent loss of vision.

    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Māmatto Gijutsu: Gankyū no hitei) – Marmot Arts: Eyeball Negation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: All (see notes)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After making the four required hand seals; sheep, horse, snake, and tiger. Focused fire element chakra builds at an exponential rate, taking approximately 1/2 of a second, to a pinpoint at the tip of a finger, thumb or palm of the hand. This concentration of chakra does not produce any significant heat; almost all of its energy is focused on particle conversion (the reaction in fire that converts energy to visible light as opposed to heat) which is used to blind the target. At various ranges the effect of the jutsu is different. If the opponent has sharingan, byakugan active or rinnegan, the jutsu can actually scorch the retinas causing permanent damage to their eyes if they see it at close enough range. The effect while having a dōjutsu active would be that of looking into the sun with a telescope from a distance of only a few meters because of the enhanced perception of both chakra and actual elements/objects. Direct line of sight is required to be subject to the effects. Because of the intensity of the light this jutsu effects the opponent even if they have their eyes closed.
    Note: This jutsu can easily be rendered useless by simply turning away before it is activated or having a solid (ie: not water, wind, fire, or lightning based) object between your eyes and the jutsu, however byakugan must be disabled due to its ability to see through solids and has around 360° field of view.
    Note: Because of the jutsu’s nature is the same as that of the stars, Void based jutsus have minimal affect against it.
    Note: This justu may only be used 3 times during a battle.
    Note: Must have signed the Marmot contract in order to use this jutsu.
    Note: Only DOD_bld can teach this jutsu.
    Range/Effects:
    • This jutsu effects all ranges, however from long range it causes only severely blurred vision for 1 turns, unless a dōjutsu is active then it's loss of dōjutsu for 1 turns, but can still see.
    • Mid range causes blindness 1 turns, for active dōjutsu loss of ability for match and blurred vision for 1 turn.
    • Short range causes blindness 2 turns, for active dōjutsu permanent loss of vision.

    Additional note: This is not a jutsu based on the principles of the CE light, this only uses fire and its natural properties.
    WTF? Rag said " do not resubmit" all you did was change the name of the jutsu
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ragerok View Post
    WTF? Rag said " do not resubmit" all you did was change the name of the jutsu
    Actually it is a different jutsu, just because it still has the same basic effect that the other one did, doesn't make it the same jutsu. I think there are only 4 or 5 things that are similar with the previous. Besides Emp pretty much gave me the go ahead with that one before he went on hiatus.

    So stop spamming this thread, and mind your business. If you've something to say use PM, or VM...
     
         
    Last edited by DOD_bld; 11-25-2010 at 07:21 AM.

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