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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Inori wa Raiden ni) - Prayer to Raiden
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (+30 damage at the first wave; +60 at the second wave)[+10 damage to the user]
    Description: The user puts his palms together in a praying motion, starting to gather a massive amount of lightning chakra in his whole body. After a mere 2 seconds the user clasps his hands, and then a part of his chakra is expelled outwards in a 360 degree wave that causes burns on anything it comes in contact with, and pushes them back a few metres. Finally, when the user unclasps his hands he releases the rest of his chakra into a huge wave of lightning chakra going straight towards the opponent, leveling the first ten meters it travels, and burning everything it passes through.
    - May be used once per battle.
    - This jutsu must be the first one used in a move, and afterwards, no lightning jutsus may be used.
    - The jutsu takes approximatively 3 seconds to release the first wave, and another 3 seconds to release the second wave.
    - If hit directly by the final wave, the affected can recieve up to 4th degree burns.
    - Requires great lightning chakra mastery to not cause burns to the user also.
    - When it is released, the user also gets first degree burns on his skin.
    - May be taught only by Symbiote.


    your description mentions one wave... where does this second one come from? does this count as a second move?

    (Chakra-Ten no Keisei) - Chakra-Point Formation
    Rank: S
    Type: Suppelementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80(if opponent passes through)
    Description: The user infuses an awful amount of chakra in a spot in the ground. When foreign chakra comes in contact with that spot, the chakra is released and it forms a barrier-like dome, made out of chakra that traps the opponent in, however, for further protection, the user also has infused lightning chakra into it. The barrier dispels only when it comes in contact with the chakra of the user, or after 2 turns.
    - May be used twice.
    - The dome is big enough to trap the opponent in, so let's say 6 foot tall and 2 foot long, not giving the opponent enough space to perform jutsus, however, if managable, the opponent can perform techniques, that will bypass the barrier, however it shall not disrupt it.
    - May be taught only by Shigure.


    Declined: do not resubmit


    (Futsu-Nushi-no-Kami: Kyouei no Yari) - God of Lightning: Feast of the Spear

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90(+20 to the user)
    Description: Futsu-Nushi-no-Kami turns into a huge mass of lightning and falls upon the enemy, covering him completely from under, front, back, left, right and above, begining to electrocute and burn him. When the lightning turns back to normal the opponent is left in nothing but ashes.
    - May be used once.
    - The user may not use any lightning jutsus anymore for the rest of the battle.
    - Must posses Futsu-Nushi-no-Kami.


    not enough damage to user.


    (Doton: Tobou Kyodan) - Earth Style: Escaping Platform
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user infuses his chakra around a chunk of earth beneath his feet, then, seconds later he uses his chakra to push that chunk of earth from under his feet, which launches him in the air. Whilst in mid-air the user does a backflip and falls from the platform about 12 meters away from the initial position.


    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 12-19-2010 at 01:07 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Origanlly posted by ~tempa E~
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: garui faita panda: Jean paul & Jean christoph) Summoning
    jutsu: panda street fighters :Jean paul & Jean christoph
    rank: A
    chakra:30
    damage: both 40
    Jean paul and Jean christoph are two french brothers (who are roughly the size of gamakichi) brought up on the streets of Levy in Pandala a parallel universe of panda summons.Being abandoned by there adoptive teacher for constant disruption and fighting the brothers quickly turned to crime fighting using there kenjutsu and their unique drunken taijutsu skills.The main way they fight when summoned is using combo element jutsu they learned during there training with the Great panda king, although their taijutsu skills are considered remarkable in the world of pandas they are vulnerable against trained nijna and depend on their kenjutsu and combo skills to defend themselves . As as combo sumning JP can only use raiton justsu's up to rank B and JC suiton jutsus up to rank B when they attack they mainly use combos but can also attack one by one. When the caster does this summon he must slam both hands on the ground.
    ~The user can only do this summon once per fight~
    ~Restrictions?~


    (Ranton ogi:kousen assai) storm release secret technique:Crushing beams

    rank: A
    range:long
    type: offensive
    chakra cost:30
    damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates large Thunder clouds that release 3 Circular storm beams that descend and crush the enemy. The user has to make sure that he is in a long enough distance away from the enemy or he himself will get caught in the jutsu.
    The user can only do this twice per fight~
    ~The user must wait 2 turns before he can use this jutsu again~
    ~Restrictions?~



    (Ranton:Rēzā disuku) storm release: lazer discs

    rank: B
    range:medium
    type: Offensive/defensive
    chakra cost: 25
    damage points:40
    Description: The user uses shape manipulation to create 10 lazer discs around each finger the user then throws the discs at the target. Note if the discs are used to counter normal kunai or shuriken it will cut straight threw.
    ~The user can only throw ten discs per turn and must wait to turns to use this technique again~
    ~Restrictions?~




    just to make sure if you know or not by NO means do you submit cannon techniques do so again after this warning i will ban you for a week


    I edited the top ones so there are restrictions on them know the original is 1 page above


    (Resurāsutairu: ishi bomu Hiya) wrestler style: Stone cold bomb
    rank: A
    range:short
    type: offensive
    chakra cost:30
    damage:60
    The user taps himself into strong raiton chakra and knees or kicks the opponent into the stomach and nearly simultaneously strongly grabs there head and makes a small jump in the air and smashes them head first into the ground thus creating a small crater in the ground
    ~can only be used twice per battle~


    ~Approved~


    (Resurāsutairu: atomikku book ate) wrestler style: atomic book end
    rank: A
    range: short
    type: offensive
    chakra cost: 30
    damage: 60
    The user taps himself into raiton chakra then punches the enemy in the stomach then grabs and hooks the opponent in between one arm and carry's them above the head and slams them down using his own body as momentum and smashes the ground creating a medium sized crater.
    ~can only be used twice per battle~

    ~approved~

    weapon:
    (suisei) comets

    Comets are two double chained scythes that count as one they come separately but can be attached together via there strong chains. The scythes can be thrown at long distances( one can be thrown at a time whilst the other is wielded or both can be thrown depending on what the user says he does) and can easily cut threw rock given the right amount of chakra.The scythes have there jutsu of there own that the user can use only when wielded

    ~only i can use these double chained scythes~
    ~they can only be thrown at a person or clone at mid ranges~

    "chakra of their own" exactly how much chakra can you use for yourself and how does the weapon possess chakra?


    (Shīrudo hoshi) Shield☆Star :
    rank: A
    range : short-medium
    type: deffensive
    chakra cost:30
    damage: n/a
    The user throw his double chained scythe in the air or infront, and focuses raiton chakra into them and they form a large shield the shape of a star that defflects any jutsu up to B rank exept raiton and and Doton in wich it deflects attacks up to A rank.
    ~It can only be used if you are wielding the double chained scythes~
    ~can only be used 3 times per battle~


    Approved (upon approval of the weapons)


    (Torappu hoshi) Trap☆Star :

    rank: A
    range: short
    type deffensive/ offensive
    chakra cost: 30
    damage; A
    The user swings his double chained scythes around to create a star shape on the ground using his own chakra and chains. The jutsu allows the user to be protected by any aponent coming in for close range combat as, as soon as the jutsu detects any other chakra from the user, friend or foe it will activate at speeds in wich is unavoidable and will slice the enemy with its blades.
    note the jutsu is about 5 meters long each triangle of the star
    ~only a double scythe user can use this technique~
    ~can only be used if double scythes are wielded~


    better description needed
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 12-19-2010 at 01:14 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Nero View Post
    (Doton: Inmetsu Eppei) Earth Technique: Destruction Parade
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does one handsign forming rasor sharp blades within the ground in a short range circle below the user or a targeted area which the blades of earth then spin at an rapid speed going in any direction or angle the user chooses the user then does another handsign to make the rasor blades shoot into the area within the short range area. The targeted area can be any where mid range away from the user. These sharp Arank blades can cut any Arank and below rock jutsu.

    Restrictions?

    (Kuchiyose: Iseki) Summoning: Iseki!
    Type: Supplimentary
    Range: Short
    Rank: C
    Chakra: 15
    Damage:
    Description: The user summons a toad from mount myoboku about the size of gamabunta. This toad has mase the mase has a blunt end like a bat at the end of it but a spiked ball at the end of the chain. This toad is extremely balanced and wise but barely talks.

    so whats his abilities?

    (Doton: Doton Indojin) Earth Release: Rock Indian
    Type: Defensive/Supplimentary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:
    Description: The user simply makes one handsign making 4 giant slams shoot up out of the ground from infront, behind, and the sides making a tent around a certain area. The giant slabs are thick sizes of rock as tall as rampart walls and thicker than a mud wall. This tent has no cracks in it so it is extremely dark. The slabs are infused with chakra so nothing can be sensed inside of it.
    Wall only stands for one turn.
    Can only be used twice.


    add some sort of limitation to the user aswell as you wouldn't be able to know whats going on outside the tent if they cant know whats going on inside plus doujutsu would see through it
    (Kuchiyose: Iseki) Summoning: Iseki!
    Type: Supplimentary
    Range: Short
    Rank: C

    Chakra: 15
    Damage:
    Description: The user summons a toad from mount myoboku about the size of gamabunta. This toad has mase the mase has a blunt end like a bat at the end of it but a spiked ball at the end of the chain. This toad is extremely balanced and wise but barely talks. The chain can expand or shrink as iseki pleases as quick as a snap.

    Expandable chain?

    ~approved, but take note, expanding a chain won't increase the speed the mace ends move~

    (Doton: Doton Indojin) Earth Release: Rock Indian
    Type: Defensive/Supplimentary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:
    Description: The user simply makes one handsign making 4 giant slams shoot up out of the ground from infront, behind, and the sides making a tent around a certain area. The giant slabs are thick sizes of rock as tall as rampart walls and thicker than a mud wall. This tent has no cracks in it so it is extremely dark. The slabs are infused with chakra so nothing can be sensed inside of it.
    Wall only stands for one turn.
    Can only be used twice.
    User takes 10 damage.

    Approved: if your chakra is in the walls, unless you used it to form something such as an eye on the walls or such, you couldn't tell what's going on outside either, however both of you could sense chakra abnormalities such as increases in chakra in certain areas in theory should either have the ability to sense chakra.

    (Doton: Inmetsu Eppei) Earth Technique: Destruction Parade
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does one handsign forming rasor sharp blades within the ground in a short range circle below the user or a targeted area which the blades of earth then spin at an rapid speed going in any direction or angle the user chooses the user then does another handsign to make the rasor blades shoot into the area within the short range area. The targeted area can be any where mid range away from the user. These sharp Arank blades can cut any Arank and below rock jutsu.
    Can only be used twice.

    rock jutsu? you mean earth? how many blades? just general expansion on details needed.
    by the way i took the liberty of adding a rank which you seem to have ommitted from the template
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 12-19-2010 at 01:24 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by katonpwnz View Post
    (Kage Beruto)- Shadow Belt
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: With two handseals user creates several, 2 ft wide, belts of shadow that wrap around the target and crush it. They can also grab and move large objects.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz




    ~Approved~

    (Kage Pondo)- Shadow Pound
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: With one handseal, the user extends his shadow and crushes anything below it into the ground leaving a 4 ft deep crater and immobilize the target. When used within short range it leaves an 8 ft deep crater. If the shadow has been extended using light, it will be able to keep its size after.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    ~Declined do not resubmit~

    (Kurai Eikyō)- Dark Influence
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user extends his shadow to the back of his head allowing him to control his body even if he is paralyzed along with full control of his senses which lets him stop and prevent genjutsu that affect them. The senses can be enhanced to highest possible for a ninja as well. The user cannot use shadow jutsu during this or for 2 turns afterward. This jutsu requires no handseals and can be performed in 2 seconds.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts up to 5 turns
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    ~Declined do not resubmit~

    (Kage no ō)- Shadow King
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user forms the rat handseal and makes a pattern of shadow all over his skin. While in this form, only 2 jutsu can be used per turn, not including the turn this jutsu was used, and only shadow jutsu may be used. Shadow jutsu can travel at double the speed a ninja can run, require no handseals, can be done simultaneously, and moves such as Shadow Sewing can originate from the user's body. When this jutsu ends, no shadow jutsu can be used for the rest of the battle and for two turns the user's movements are slowed and painful.
    -Usable once per battle
    -Lasts up to 3 turns
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    ~add some more restrictions if your hoping for the double speed of shadow performance, like doujutsu are still capable of reading the speed of the attack~

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user clasps his hands together and creates a circular mark in the palm of each hand that emit powerful jets of flame that can propell the user for a total of 5 seconds. These marks can be transferred to another object by placing a palm on it. The jutsu's timing and jet power is controlled by the user.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    ~Remove the part that you can transfer the marks ~
    Resubmittions:

    (Kage no ō)- Shadow King
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user forms the rat handseal and makes a pattern of shadow all over his skin. While in this form, only 2 jutsu can be used per turn, not including the turn this jutsu was used, and only shadow jutsu may be used. The speed of shadow jutsu are doubled, they require no handseals, can be done simultaneously, and moves such as Shadow Sewing can originate from the user's body. Dojutsu can read the speed of the shadows and they are not hidden while moving through another shadow. When this jutsu ends, no shadow jutsu can be used for the rest of the battle and for two turns the user's movements are slowed and painful.
    -Usable once per battle
    -Lasts up to 3 turns
    -Can only be used by a Nara clan member
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    ~Approved~

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user clasps his hands together and creates a circular mark in the palm of each hand that emit powerful jets of flame that can propell the user for a total of 5 seconds. The jutsu's timing and jet power are controlled by the user. They can get the user to a target at mid range in 2.5 seconds.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    ~Approved~

    New:

    (Fuuton: Saigai Nokogiri)- Wind Release: Disaster Saws
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn active)
    Damage: 80 (+10 with each element combined with)
    Description: The user creates two large wind gusts that are compressed into the form of two spinning saw blades that the user manipulates. They can gather surrounding elements into themselves to increase their power. With a handseal, the user can make them expand into a violent cyclones. While in use, the user can perform only 2 other jutsu per turn.
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -Cannot be used again until 2 turns after the last usage.
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    expand on how elements are gathered.

    (Sora no Ori)- Empty Cage
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a few handseals, the user instantly creates a projection of a dome-like steel cage around the opponent that is covered with many horizontal and vertical bars. It can be made up to 20 meters in diameter. It is not tangable but it casts a shadow for a more realistic effect. Dojutsu can see through this technique. It lasts as long as the user wishes.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz


    , i'm unsure about this however i know full well this is for use with shadow jutsu.
     
         
    Last edited by Kawagiri; 12-19-2010 at 01:31 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton:Uddo bakuhatsu)Wood style:Wood blast
    Range:Short-Long
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Damage points:80
    Chakra Cost:40

    Description:An immensely useful mokuton jutsu devised by Hashirama senju himself.With this jutsu the user is able to make any wood present in the vicinity to explode expelling wood shrapnels that pierce the opponent severely damaging him and causing intense pain.

    Restrictions

    *can only be used twice per battle
    *once used can only be used again after three turns
    *no mokuton jutsus for the next turn
    *can only be used/taught by jinbei


    Declined: to be fair, if in a forest or you create a forest, there is a huge amount of wood to use, and even if it's cut, it's still wood. taking this into
    consideration it makes this seem quite OP


    (Mokuton:Mizu mo ki)-Wood style:Water to wood-

    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Supplemetary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:50
    Damage:N/A(-30 to user's health per use)

    Description: An extremely useful mokuton jutsu known to be developed by Hashirama Senju himself.This jutsu is based on the elemental combination that forms wood,and by discerning the fact that water and earth are the two components that form wood,hashirama developed this jutsu which enabled him to transform water an element that forms wood ,into wood itself (transforming water entirely into wood which possess all the properties of wood).

    So in this jutsu the user is able too transform water into wood by adding doton chakra into it and then the user is able to manipulate the water with his own will,but the disadvantage to this technique is that if the user uses this jutsu on the opponents water jutsu i.e if the user wants too transform the opponents water jutsu into wood then he is unable too control the opponents jutsu but still the water or water style technique transforms into wood(techniques only upto A rank can be changed into wood)d.But if the user uses this jutsu with his own water style technique then depending on the jutsu the user is able to manipulate and utilise water as wood.The user can initiate the jutsu by touching or even by focussing his chakra into the water only upto mid range because if used long range the jutsu can exhaust the user's chakra.

    Restrictions

    *can be used thrice per battle and once used the user has too wait for one turn too use it again
    *when the jutsu is initiated by touch it is instant like chidori nagashi and no handseals are required but when this jutsu is initiated by focussing chakra then it requires four handseals
    *no other mokuton jutsus in the same turn can be used
    *techniques only upto A rank can be changed into wood

    *oceans or lakes cannot be transformed entirely into wood but an area of 20 metres square(only the surface of the lake ocean not the entire volume) can be transformed into a wooden surface
    *can be used/taught by Jinbei


    Declined: i see little use for this... why turn your own water jutsu to wood? just make a wood jutsu... and you can't just turn an opponents water jutsu to wood so easily as that would involve controlling their water chakra. also natural water doesn't have chakra... so you would still have to feed in your own chakra anyway.

    (Mokuton:Chikyū mo ki)Wood style:Earth to wood

    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Supplemetary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:50
    Damage:N/A(-30 to users health)

    Description: An extremely useful mokuton jutsu known to be developed by Hashirama Senju himself.This jutsu is also based on the elemental combination that forms wood,and by discerning the fact that water and earth are the two components that form wood,hashirama developed this jutsu which enabled him to transform earth an element that forms wood ,into wood itself (transforming all earth based techniques including mud and sand based techniques entirely into wood which possesses all the properties of wood).

    So in this jutsu the user is able too transform earth into wood by adding doton chakra into it and then the user is able to manipulate the earth with his own will,but the disadvantage to this technique is that if the user uses this jutsu on the opponents earth jutsu i.e if the user wants too transform the opponents earth jutsu into wood then he is unable too control the opponents jutsu but still the earth or earth style technique transforms into wood.But if the user uses this jutsu with his own earth style technique then depending on the jutsu the user is able to manipulate and utilise earth as wood.The user can initiate the jutsu by touching or even by focussing his chakra into the earth only upto mid range because if used long range the jutsu can exhaust the user's chakra.

    Restrictions

    *can be used thrice per battle and once used the user has too wait for one turn too use it again

    *when the jutsu is initiated by touch it is instant like chidori nagashi and no handseals are required but when this jutsu is initiated by focussing chakra then it requires four handseals
    *no other mokuton jutsus in the same turn can be used
    *techniques only upto A rank can be changed into wood
    *the entire terrain cannot be transformed entirely into wood but an area of 20 metres square(only the surface of the land/desert not the entire volume of sand/earth) can be transformed into a wooden surface
    *can be used/taught by Jinbei



    Declined: same as above, just swap the words "water" for "earth"
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Beetle
    Scroll Owner: Tosiyuki
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Tsuyoi(Mighty) *If approve*
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None


    Approved if beetle summoning isn't taken, will have to have someone check


    (Kuchiyose: Tsuyoi) - Summoning Technique : Mighty

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the user performed the require handseal and used a small amount of blood of their own the user will slam onto the ground and summon a black beetle and the size of the beetle is a little smaller then '' Gamakichi ''. Even though Mighty is much smaller in size but his strength is greater or as same as big summoning boss like Gamabunta, Mighty is capable of flying too which give him advantage of dodging certain attacks, he is also capable of producing poison gas from his bottom. He is also able to divide himself into thousand of smaller size of beetle.

    *Mighty has Fire Affinity and able to use Fire jutsu up to A rank
    *Must sign Beetle Contract in order to summon this boss
    *Can be only be taught by Toshiyuki


    info needed on smaller beetles, e.g. abilities, strength etc.


    (Hijutsu: Takigi Houmen) - Secret Technique: Firewood Release

    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost : 25
    Damage : 40
    Description: A Special kind of insect that has the ability to consume wood in a extremely rapid speed rate in which they are known as few of the most feared bug in the world. They also have the ability to fly, This type of bug is one of the most loyal & obedient to their master which mean they would even lay their life in order to protect their master.

    *Can only be taught by Toshiyuki
    *Can only be used by Toshiyuki


    if you plan to use this one bug to make wood release completely useless then no...

    (Mushi Hebi) - Insect Serpent

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Desrciption: The user send their bug onto the battlefield and the bugs will form 4 long & middle-size serpent. This jutsu could be beaten with suffiecent force.

    *Can only be taught by Toshiyuki


    explain abilities of serpents, and what can kill them.


    (Mokuton: Kishou mokuzai doragon) Wood Style - Rising Wood Dragon

    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Desrciption: A advance wood technique that take shape/form like a dragon when the user make stomp onto the ground and call for 3 dragon made out of wood that capable of giving opponent severely serious damage.


    1 dragon restriction, to avoid sending 3 dragons seperately taking up all 3 of the opponents moves... and follow templates and include ranks >_>
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Ninjutsu/Fuuton: (Heki Tsuki)- False Moon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user places a spherical barrier of chakra around a flash bomb and throws it in the air. The user then makes two handsigns and creates a small tornado of wind under the ball that suspends it in the air for short while. When the flash bomb explodes the light is trapped within the chakra barrier and unable to disperse. This creates a constant source of light in places where there may be little to none for a short while.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *The ball is only able to stay in the air for 4 turns before the wind and the barrier gives out, allowing the light to disperse.



    *The point of this is mainly to create shadows, making shadow jutsu possible in places they might otherwise not be able to function*

    ~Nice idea, icnrease rank to A and restrict time limit before shadow techniques used after dispersal of method example 1 turn before shadow techniques can be used again~
    Ninjutsu/Fuuton: (Heki Tsuki)- False Moon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user places a spherical barrier of chakra around a flash bomb and throws it in the air. The user then makes two handsigns and creates a small tornado of wind under the ball that suspends it in the air for short while. When the flash bomb explodes the light is trapped within the chakra barrier and unable to disperse. This creates a constant source of light in places where there may be little to none for a short while.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *The ball is only able to stay in the air for 4 turns before the wind and the barrier gives out, allowing the light to disperse.
    *No Shadow jutsu can be used for 1 turn after this technique ends.



    *The point of this is mainly to create shadows, making shadow jutsu possible in places they might otherwise not be able to function*


    Approved

    (Kageton: Ten'un Saiken) Shadow style: Destiny Bond
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Mid (can extend to long using natural shadows/more light/etc)
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: N/a
    Description: This jutsu is the most advanced version of the Kage Mane jutsu. While a normal Kage Mane ties the user and targets movements together, this varient ties their very fates, their souls, together as well as thier movements. While the user and opponents shadows are connected, if one dies so does the other.
    *Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
    *Must be a member of the Nara clan to use this jutsu
    *Usable once per battle
    *Neither user nor target can use jutsu while this is active, only taijutsu/weapons
    *No Forbidden rank jutsu for the rest of the battle if this jutsu ends
    *No Shadow jutsu for 4 turns after/if this jutsu ends
    *Only the real Nara member can use this jutsu, it cannot be done by clones. The user is basically a sacrifice to take down powerful opponents.

    *The point of this is the same as Alucards barrier jutsu. The user is a sacrifice to take out opponents quickly*


    Declined: you don't even mention a time limit.

    (Kuchiose: Uria) Summoning: Uria
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Uria is a Kyodaija sized snake. However, unlike normal snakes, his scales are incredibly sharp and hard, almost like Kunai. Uria is able to attack opponents by either slicing them with his scales as he moves around them, or he can shoot his scales off his body like projectiles at an opponent. Uria is also a great defensive summoning because of his tough scales, making him able to withstand two S-rank jutsu before poofing away.
    *Must be able to summon Snakes
    *10 scales can be shot at a time, and it takes 2 turns for them to re-grow to be shot again
    *Can withstand up to 2 S-rank jutsu
    *No other snakes can be summoned for 2 turns after Uria is gone
    *Uria can stay on the field for 4 turns


    ~Approved~ (unless another mod disagrees)
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Se Doshaburi no Jutsu - Torrential Downpour no Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:
    Clan: Akatsuki
    Description: By using wind and lighting chakra and lacing clouds (that's what the wind chakra is for) together to create a large thunderstorm. The user concentrates a downpour of rain on the battlefield. This technique cuts visibility and also making lightning jutsu more conductable allowing the electricity from other attack to travel further.
    Note:The downside is the user must continually focus there chakra keeping the clouds together preventing the user from attacking.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle

    Declined: what really makes this different from rain jutsu or allow you to bypass taking the rain test etc?

    Raiton: Daibakaryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current no Jutsu
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 ( +10 if used with Se Doshaburi no Jutsu)
    Clan:Akatsuki
    Description: The user uses excessively large quantities of chakra in an effort to bring out a large unfocused blast of lightning that travels outward from the user with a large radius. This excessive amount of electricity creates morbid results killing or fatally wounding anyone within the circle. Obviously the victims closer to the outer of the circle are more likely to be severely injured or fatally wounded than the victims closer to the user. This technique's range can be expanded with Se Doshaburi no Jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note:Cannot use lighting jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends

    actually victims further away would be less injured as the pulse spreads out the amount of lightning is the same but spread out over a larger area, therefore less will hit a single target.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ZeroG View Post
    Freestyle art back in hand stand = Tenokō de furīātosutando
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to go in hand stand incredibly fast, the user focuses on relaxing the nerves and muscles in the body, and on regaining the perfect balance of the hand stand, this technique can be done even during an earthquake, simply because the only thing it takes, is mental focus.

    (i was asked what it's usefullness was, and it's simply because i've created a special bio for these CJ's, and some people might argue that he would've been knocked over by some pressure or something, so i would like to have this in reserve to avoid discussions.)

    ~If you wish this approved then i want you to edit to account for the change an earthquake can cause as it doesnt matter how much mental focus one has it would not happen if the land was sloped at a high gradient so it would require some limitation in that respect~


    Freestyle art death volley = Furīāto no shi no renpatsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user stands in hand stand, and focuses sharp wind chakra into pre-prepared needles in his/her pants, the needles are held in place by small threads, and therefore they don’t disturb the user during combat, because of the sharpness of the wind element, the user is able to release the wind chakra in his pants, which will sever the threads, and carry the needles with it. This creates a volley of needles, that will cover a 360 degrees angle around the user, (exception are right below the user, and right above), these needles are very sharp and lethal.
    Notes:
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.
    • Can only be used once per battle.

    (poison removed)

    ~Approved~


    Freestyle art Power legs = Furīāto Pawā ashi
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The first stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech, the user focuses big amounts of chakra into his legs, this technique allows the user to temporarily increase the strength in his legs, by pumping the muscles and tissue full of concentrated chakra. This technique gives the user 10+ damage to all Taijutsu, which involves using his legs, and a boost of speed, equal to Lee without weights. This technique does have some drawbacks, when it ends, the user will have used a big amount of power in his legs, making them weaker.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used twice per match.
    • Lasts for three turns.
    • After it ends, the user has -5 damage to all his Taijutsu, for the rest of the battle.
    • No A-ranked or higher techniques in the next turn.
    • Can only use two moves in the next turn
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.


    ~Approved~



    Freestyle art Mega legs = Furīāto Mega ashi
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The second stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech, the user focuses great amounts of chakra in his legs and feet, and surrounds them with wind chakra, this techniques allows the user to temporarily enhance the strength of his legs, by strengthening the tissue and muscles in the users legs. The wind chakra around the users legs, serves as a wall for the great amount of chakra which is release when this technique is used, this “wall” is controlled by the user, and can be used to fire a shot of concentrated wind chakra, simply by releasing some of the chakra, which will build up in the users legs because of the technique. As long as this technique is active, the user gains a 10+ damage to any Taijutsu which involves using ones legs, and a great boost in speed, similar to Lee in 2 gate release without weights, to any action performed with the users legs, this technique has some major drawbacks though, when it ends the user will be completely drained of strength in his/her legs, and unable to use advanced techniques for some time.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used once per battle.
    • Lasts for three turns.
    • When the technique ends, the user will be unable to move his legs for the rest of the match. (exception Freestyle art Ultima legs)
    • The shot of wind chakra can be used twice, but can be fired at the same time, (in one jutsu).
    No A-ranked or higher techniques in the next 2 turns. (exception, Freestyle art Ultima legs)
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.


    ~tell me how is the bolded part possible if you have already stated that you cant move your legs for the rest of the match? and remove the exception of ultima legs , your legs would only be usable if you manage to push past the boundary of will to move your legs but if you did that would cost you dearly~



    Freestyle art Ultima legs = Furīāto Urutima ashi
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 90
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The third and last stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech. The user focuses intense amounts of chakra into his legs and feet, this technique allows the users to, for a very short time, increase the power in his legs to incredible heights, by pumping his muscles full of chakra, and reinforcing and thickening the layer of wind chakra, created by Freestyle art Mega legs, on the users legs. By doing this, the user will stack an incredible amount of chakra, around and inside his legs. While doing this, the user will begin to spin around himself, because of the incredible amount of chakra in the users legs, the user will spin around himself with speed equal to the rotors of a helicopter. This will create an air pressure in itself, but by releasing all of the chakra stacked inside and outside his legs, the user is able to create a gigantic windblast, which will travel with incredible speed, and rip apart everything inside Mid range of the user. This windblast will be released in 360 around the user, and as said before, rip everything in Mid range and closer to the user apart, this also includes the very ground around the user. As soon as this windblast has been released, the user can light a lighter, and set everything in Mid range and closer, ablaze in an instant, both the windblast and the fire, travels so fast that even a Sage ranked opponent wouldn’t have time to for any handseals. The user’s legs will explode due to the incredible pressure on his legs, and because of the incredible amount of chakra and energy this technique requires, the user will be completely drained of chakra and power after use.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used once.
    • No Nin Gen Taijutsu and/or any other techniques, for the rest of the battle.
    • The user’s legs will explode, making him unable to move for the rest of the battle.
    • Can only be used while Freestyle art Mega legs is active.
    • Can only be used by ZeroGarra.
    • No other jutsus can be used the turn this is activated.


    The last three, i know they're a bit special and all, but i've worked very hard on the last three, and tried to make them fit into NB's power level, if you decline these, which you probably do, please just decline them, don't say do not resubmit, i will modify if necesarry.

    ~and whats the speed of the bold equivilant to? ~
    Quote Originally Posted by ZeroG View Post
    Wind release: Multi strike = Fuuton: Maruchisuto
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: E-S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10-50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to strike up to 5 times with a single blow, by infusing his/her weapon with wind chakra, the user can force up to five sharp wind pressures, to hit the target the same time as the actual strike, these wind strikes has the same power as the actual strike. The number of wind slashes can be regulated, E-ranked version gives one wind slash, C-ranked gives two and so on, up to five.
    Notes:
    • S-ranked version can be used two times.
    • A-ranked version can be used three times.
    • Can only be used by ZeroG.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~


    Wind release: Force wave = Fuuton: Chikara-ha
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to defend against sound and frequencies, by bending the wind itself, the user can create an orb of bended wind, which will reject sound waves and frequencies. When sound or frequencies gets close to it, the wind will bounce outwards, like when you burst a balloon, and the wind will thereby carry the sound/frequencies away from the user, rendering them useless.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used three times per battle.
    • Only works on A-ranked techniques and below.
    • Can only be taught by ZeroG.

    The orb looks like this



    ~Reduce the ability to deflect from A to B rank and add a time limit before each use?~


    The elder gauntlet of wind mastery = Kaze no fuuton no chōrō chōsen
    Type: Supplementary equipment
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A (increase wind damage by 15.)
    Description: this is one of the five element gauntlets, these gauntlets were forged in ancient times by blind smiths. The gloves themselves, are created from the bones of 5 grandmasters, each had their own element. The gauntlets were originally created, as a gift to a rich lord of unknown occupation, but under mysterious circumstances, they vanished on the trip to his house, and they were never mentioned in history since then. Though rumors about it being used by ninjas exist, these are mostly viewed as fairy tales.

    Abilities: The gauntlet of wind, is a tool used by ninjas with a wind affinity, to strengthen their wind jutsus. The gauntlet itself is lightweight, and doesn’t hinder the user in any of his/her movements. The gauntlet works like a magnet for wind chakra, it makes it a lot easier to gather wind chakra, and focus on wind techniques. The gauntlet also works as an amplifier for wind jutsus, increasing their damage and destructive power. Lastly, the gauntlet also eases the user’s hands when he’s performing wind techniques, thereby enabling the user to form handseals faster than usually. All these wind abilities come at a price though, at the start of the battle, the user must choose an available element, except for wind, in this element, the user will be unable to perform S-ranked and above jutsus, for the rest of the battle.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used by ZeroG.
    • If the user wishes to use the gauntlet, he must notify his opponent, in the start of the match.

    Picture of the gauntlet.


    ~Restrictions need more , forbidden ranked is forbidden for a reason give it a damage cost and if using to enhance wind element techniques have a certain amount before it is rendered useless and the wearing of the gauntlet should provide the user with damage over period of time so it would also prevent the user from using High level wind for 2 turns aswell ~
    Resubmitting some stuff.

    Freestyle art Mega legs = Furīāto Mega ashi
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The second stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech, the user focuses great amounts of chakra in his legs and feet, and surrounds them with wind chakra, this techniques allows the user to temporarily enhance the strength of his legs, by strengthening the tissue and muscles in the users legs. The wind chakra around the users legs, serves as a wall for the great amount of chakra which is release when this technique is used, this “wall” is controlled by the user, and can be used to fire a shot of concentrated wind chakra, simply by releasing some of the chakra, which will build up in the users legs because of the technique. As long as this technique is active, the user gains a 10+ damage to any Taijutsu which involves using ones legs, and a great boost in speed, similar to Lee in 2 gate release without weights. this technique has some major drawbacks though, when it ends the user will be completely drained of strength in his/her legs, and unable to use advanced techniques for some time.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used once per battle.
    • Lasts for three turns.
    • When the technique ends, the user will be unable to move his legs for the rest of the match.
    • The shot of wind chakra can be used twice, but can be fired at the same time, (in one jutsu).
    • No B-ranked or higher techniques for three turns after this technique ends, and the user may only use techniques that don’t require the use of his/her legs.
    • Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.


    last i heard, gates mimics weren't allowed anymore...

    Freestyle art Ultima legs = Furīāto Urutima ashi
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 90
    Damage Points: 150
    Description: The third and last stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech. The user focuses intense amounts of chakra into his legs and feet, this technique allows the users to, for a very short time, increase the power in his legs to incredible heights, by pumping his muscles full of chakra, and reinforcing and thickening the layer of wind chakra, created by Freestyle art Mega legs, on the users legs. By doing this, the user will stack an incredible amount of chakra, around and inside his legs. While doing this, the user will begin to spin around himself, because of the incredible amount of chakra in the users legs, the user will spin around himself with speed equal to the rotors of a helicopter. This will create an air pressure in itself, but by releasing all of the chakra stacked inside and outside his legs, the user is able to create a gigantic windblast, which will travel with incredible speed, and rip apart everything inside Mid range of the user. This windblast will be released in 360 around the user, and as said before, rip everything in Mid range and closer to the user apart, this also includes the very ground around the user. As soon as this windblast has been released, the user can light a lighter, and set everything in Mid range and closer, ablaze in an instant, both the windblast and the fire, travels so fast that even a Sage ranked opponent wouldn’t have time to for any handseals. The user’s legs will explode due to the incredible pressure on his legs, and because of the incredible amount of chakra and energy this technique requires, the user will be completely drained of chakra and power after use.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used once.
    • No Nin Gen Taijutsu and/or any other techniques, for the rest of the battle.
    • The user’s legs will explode, making him unable to move for the rest of the battle.
    • Can only be used while Freestyle art Mega legs is active.
    • Can only be avoided with space/time techniques if in short range.
    • If in Mid range the target/targets will have about a second to avoid this technique.
    • Can only be used by ZeroGarra.


    Declined

    Wind release: Force wave = Fuuton: Chikara-ha
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to defend against sound and frequencies, by bending the wind itself, the user can create an orb of bended wind, which will reject sound waves and frequencies. When sound or frequencies gets close to it, the wind will bounce outwards, like when you burst a balloon, and the wind will thereby carry the sound/frequencies away from the user, rendering them useless.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used three times per battle.
    • Can only be used once every second turn.
    • Only works on A-ranked techniques and below.
    • Can only be taught by ZeroG.


    Declined: and if i used sound jutsu i'd just shout before performing the technique disabling your jutsu as it reacted to the sound i made... >_>

    The elder gauntlet of wind mastery = Kaze no fuuton no chōrō chōsen
    Type: Supplementary equipment
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: 10 every turn
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A (increase wind damage by 15, but inflicts 5 damage to the user every turn.)
    Description: this is one of the five element gauntlets, these gauntlets were forged in ancient times by blind smiths. The gloves themselves, are created from the bones of 5 grandmasters, each had their own element. The gauntlets were originally created, as a gift to a rich lord of unknown occupation, but under mysterious circumstances, they vanished on the trip to his house, and they were never mentioned in history since then. Though rumors about it being used by ninjas exist, these are mostly viewed as fairy tales.

    Abilities: The gauntlet of wind, is a tool used by ninjas with a wind affinity, to strengthen their wind jutsus. The gauntlet itself is lightweight, and doesn’t hinder the user in any of his/her movements. The gauntlet works like a magnet for wind chakra, it makes it a lot easier to gather wind chakra, and focus on wind techniques. The gauntlet also works as an amplifier for wind jutsus, increasing their damage and destructive power. Lastly, the gauntlet also eases the user’s hands when he’s performing wind techniques, thereby enabling the user to form handseals faster than usually. All these wind abilities come at a price though, at the start of the battle, the user must choose an available element, except for wind, in this element, the user will be unable to perform S-ranked and above jutsus, for the rest of the battle. On top of that, to keep the Gauntlet functional, the user must feed it with his own chakra, and the gauntlet will inflict damage upon the user every turn because of this. It can be used to ones advantage though, once every battle, the user can feed the gauntlet an extra portion of chakra, this will increase the pain the gauntlet inflicts for a second, thereby snapping the user out of any B-ranked or below Genjutsu.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used by ZeroG.
    • If the user wishes to use the gauntlet, he must notify his opponent, in the start of the match.
    Picture of the gauntlet.


    make water the element to make a rank and below only, and the genjutsu bit isn't really needed... you can inflict pain without that.
     
         
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    -Summon Technique: Wiz Khalifa (Kuchiyose: Wiz Khalifa
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The users summons a Kyodaija(Giant) snake named Wiz. Wiz is a snake that is yellow with two black strips going right down the middle of his body and he wheres a yellow scroph(spelling) with black writing on it around his neck. He has no real ability expect his normal snake abilities that snakes have.
    ~Approved~

    -Summon Technique: Young Money (Kuchiyose: Toshiwakai Kane
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user summons a pack of 5 ninken. The pack members are Lil Wayne, Drake, Nicki Manaj(NM), Tyga and Gudda Gudda(GG). They can walk and run on water also they are more dangerous then Kakashi dogs because of their speed(Rock Lee with no weights so basicly all tomeo sharingans can track thier movements) but the are around the same size as Kakashi dogs expect not having a big dog like Bull in the pack. These dogs have no real abilities expect for their speed and the leader can talk and also sense of smell and hearing is like a normal dog.
    -LiL Wayne: He is the leader of the back and the only one who can talk. he also wears a red scroph(spelling) around his neck
    -Drake: He hears a black jacket with writing on the back
    -NM: She is the only girl in the pack and she has a pink spot on top of her head
    -Tyga: He is a skinny but the quickest of the group. His speed can only be tracked by a 2 sharingan and up.
    -GG: He has a black mark on his right side of his face under his right eye looks like a small cross.

    ~Widen the ability limits of types that can track the speed instead of just to sharingan~

    -Clay Style: Clay Travel (Nendo: Nendo Ryokou)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short (but when it gets big and near the opponent(s) Short-Mid)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (60 when exploded aka blows the opponent(s) body(ies) to pieces
    Description: The user puts clay inside the mouth in their hand and claps both hands together. Then focus chakra into the clay and molds the clay into any animal or insect. When ready the user makes a hand seal and clay animal or insect becomes a riding size (the size Deidara rides on in the Manga and Anime). The user can only make one animal or insect per post.
    -Only used 4 times per battle
    -Only used by Deidara Nara
    -The user has to wait one turn to use this jutsu again

    ~Approved~

    -Clay Release: Clay Disk (Nendo: Nendo Disuku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid (thrown) Short (when exploded)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user place clay in the mouths of their hands and focus chakra into the clay. The mouths will mold the clay into a ball of clay. The user will clap his hands together and flat the ball of clay into a disk of clay. The user throws the disk of clay at his opponent and make one hand seal and the disk will expand and the disk will be half of the size of the FRS. The disk doesn't cut or anything like that but it does stick to any surface and will blow up once it hits any surface unless the user makes one hand seal and make it explode before it hits anything. The disk speed is face so only sharingan can keep up with its speed.
    -Only used 3 times
    -Only used by Deidara Nara

    ~declined, edit so that it doesnt require just sharingan to see the attack you wont be able to throw it that fast it has to have some proper limitations other than sharingan only capable of seing the attack~

    -Summon Technique: Gotti (Kuchiyose: Gotti)
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user summons a Kyodaija(giant) snake named Gotti. Gotti is a snake that is all white. He can use wind element and send a b rank wind sphere blast that can be blast up to short-mid. Only ability is the wind blast and normal snake senses that snakes have.
    -Wind blast only used 4 times in battle.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    FuutonTatsumaki ashikase kurushimi) wind style: tornado shackles of pain
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After weaving a row of hand signs, user creates a very rapidly spinning vortex of wind around a target. The air around the target moves so fast that it acts as a barrier witch prevent any wind jutsu to be used while in the vortex. While inside of the vortex four chains of fuuton chakra will be generated that would prevent the use of any ninjutsu witch requires hand signs and will leave enemy vulnerable for the very until the next round.

    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by ~Zion~

    Futon: (shurikens tatsumaki) wind style: ninja start tornado
    Rank : A
    Type : Attack
    Chakra Cost : 30
    Damage Points : 60
    Description: The user will begin by opening a weapon summoning scroll that would rain shurikens on the enemy .Performing quick hand seals, the user will gather his Futon chakra into the lungs to blow out a sharp gust of wind, which in conjunction with the shurikens will create a very violent spinning tornado filled of shurikens that will entrap the enemy and give major damage to there body.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note. Can only be taught by ~Zion~.

    (Futon: kaze Kyu) – Wind style: wind Coffin
    Rank: C
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Similar to Gaara’s sand coffin This jutsu allows the user to control the wind around the user to take a hold of him. Then the user uses the pressure of the wind to crush the enemy

    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by ~Zion~


    ~All declined ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose: Hogama) - Summoning: Great Fire Toad

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: After permorming the handseals and biting there thumb, the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon the Great Fire Toad. This toad was once seen in the anime when jiraiya summoned the mouth to trap kisame and itachi saying its fire proof, though amerterasu was able to burn the mouth. This toad is the greatest fire user of all the toads at Myobokuzan and can use all fire techniques up to A rank. Being the greatest fire user means that Kogamahi has great knowledge of fire jutsu and is unafected by B ranks and below.

    Note: Can only be summoned once
    Note: Must hold toad contract
    Note: Only one Great toad can be summoned at a time
    Note: Stays on the feild for 4 turns
    Note: No other summonings for 2 turns

    (Kuchiyose: Mizugama) - Summoning: Great Water Toad

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description:After permorming the handseals and biting there thumb, the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon the Great Water Toad. This toad is the brother of the Great Fire toad that was once seen in the anime when jiraiya summoned the mouth to trap kisame and itachi saying its fire proof, though amerterasu was able to burn the mouth. This toad is the greatest water user of all the toads at Myobokuzan and can use all water techniques up to A rank. Being the greatest water user means that Kogamahi has great knowledge of water jutsu and is unafected by B ranks and below.

    Note: Can only be summoned once
    Note: Must hold toad contract
    Note: Only one Great toad can be summoned at a time
    Note: Stays on the feild for 4 turns
    Note: No other summonings for 2 turns

    (Kuchiyose: kazegama) - Summoning: Great Wind Toad

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: After permorming the handseals and biting there thumb, the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon the Great Wind Toad. This toad is the brother of the Great Fire toad that was once seen in the anime when jiraiya summoned the mouth to trap kisame and itachi saying its fire proof, though amerterasu was able to burn the mouth. This toad is the greatest wind user of all the toads at Myobokuzan and can use all wind techniques up to A rank. Being the greatest wind user means that Kogamahi has great knowledge of wind jutsu and is unafected by B ranks and below.

    Note: Can only be summoned once
    Note: Must hold toad contract
    Note: Only one Great toad can be summoned at a time
    Note: Stays on the feild for 4 turns
    Note: No other summonings for 2 turns

    (Kuchiyose: Tsuchigama) - Summoning: Great Earth Toad

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: After permorming the handseals and biting there thumb, the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon the Great Earth Toad. This toad is the brother of the Great Fire toad that was once seen in the anime when jiraiya summoned the mouth to trap kisame and itachi saying its fire proof, though amerterasu was able to burn the mouth. This toad is the greatest Earth user of all the toads at Myobokuzan and can use all Earth techniques up to A rank. Being the greatest Earth user means that Kogamahi has great knowledge of Earth jutsu and is unafected by B ranks and below.

    Note: Can only be summoned once
    Note: Must hold toad contract
    Note: Only one Great toad can be summoned at a time
    Note: Stays on the feild for 4 turns
    Note: No other summonings for 2 turns

    (Kuchiyose: Raigama) - Summoning: Great lightning Toad

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: After permorming the handseals and biting there thumb, the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon the Great Lightning Toad. This toad is the brother of the Great Fire toad that was once seen in the anime when jiraiya summoned the mouth to trap kisame and itachi saying its fire proof, though amerterasu was able to burn the mouth. This toad is the greatest Lightning user of all the toads at Myobokuzan and can use all lightning techniques up to A rank. Being the greatest Lightning user means that Kogamahi has great knowledge of Lightning jutsu and is unafected by B ranks and below.

    Note: Can only be summoned once
    Note: Must hold toad contract
    Note: Only one Great toad can be summoned at a time
    Note: Stays on the feild for 4 turns
    Note: No other summonings for 2 turns


    ~All Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Anbu Minato~ View Post
    (Senzankou Kuchyose no jutsu:Chiberiusu)
    Pangolin Summoning Technique: Tiberius
    Type: Supplimentary
    Rank:S
    Range:n/a
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:n/a
    Description: Tiberius is the leader of the pangolins, he is roughly the same height and length as Katsuyu's complete form, he is the oldest and largest of his species. His armoured scales are said to be stronger than any metal used by ninja and therefore can protect him from all S-rank or below techniques, however, his face and abdomen are not protected by these scales and are therefore vulneable to attack. A single S-rank technique to the stomach causes him to leave the field
    Once per battle, Tiberius can curl up into his ball form, removing these vulneable areas from view, in this form he can roll at the enemy, causing considerable damage, howver, if the enemy has damaged his abdomen (hit it with one A-rank or above, or two b-rank) then he cannot roll into his ball form.
    Also tiberius may choose to try and catch the enemy with his tongue that can extend to mid range and is highly adhesive, meaning thet if the enemy is hit, he will be stuck on his tongue, hover, this tongue is higly suseptible to lightning and fire attacks ( a hit from a c-rank or higher tech will damage it)
    Tiberius has some skill in Doton techniques and can use up to B - rank Doton jutsus
    Restrictions:
    1. Cannot attack at all the turn after he rolls up
    2. Cannot use jutsu and tongue in the same turn
    3. Can only be sommoned once per battle and stays on the field for 4 turns, no other summoning can be used while Tiberius is on the field
    4. Can only be summoned by someone who has signed the pangolin contract and has been taught how to summon him by ~Anbu Minato~


    ~edit so that he is affected by some element and not protected against all S rank and below as thats just to powerful as he would have a elemental weakness regardless of being heavily armoured~

    (Senzankou Kuchyose no jutsu:Chiberiusu)
    Pangolin Summoning Technique: Tiberius
    Type: Supplimentary
    Rank:S
    Range:n/a
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:n/a
    Description: Tiberius is the leader of the pangolins, he is roughly the same height and length as Katsuyu's complete form, he is the oldest and largest of his species. His armoured scales are said to be stronger than any metal used by ninja and therefore can protect him from all S-rank or below techniques, however, his face and abdomen are not protected by these scales and are therefore vulneable to attack, Also, due to the nature of his scales, they are also vulnerable to fire attacks of A-rank or higher. A single S-rank technique to the stomach causes him to leave the field
    Once per battle, Tiberius can curl up into his ball form, removing these vulneable areas from view, in this form he can roll at the enemy, causing considerable damage, howver, if the enemy has damaged his abdomen (hit it with one A-rank or above, or two b-rank) then he cannot roll into his ball form.
    Also tiberius may choose to try and catch the enemy with his tongue that can extend to mid range and is highly adhesive, meaning thet if the enemy is hit, he will be stuck on his tongue, hover, this tongue is higly suseptible to lightning and fire attacks ( a hit from a c-rank or higher tech will damage it)
    Tiberius has some skill in Doton techniques and can use up to B - rank Doton jutsus. He also has a brilliant sense of smell, allowing him to track food for miles around (he can also use this to track enemy ninja)
    Restrictions:
    1. Cannot attack at all the turn after he rolls up
    2. Cannot use jutsu and tongue in the same turn
    3. Can only be sommoned once per battle and stays on the field for 4 turns, no other summoning can be used while Tiberius is on the field
    4. Can only be summoned by someone who has signed the pangolin contract and has been taught how to summon him by ~Anbu Minato~



    ~Approved~

    (Senzankou Kuchyose no jutsu:Augusuto~usu) Pangolin Summoning Technique: Augutsus
    Type: Supplimentary
    Rank:S
    Range:n/a
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:n/a
    Description: Augustus is a member of an offshoot of the main pangolin family that has adapted to the desert environment of their homeland, he is only slightly smaller that Tiberius when on all four legs, but unlike tiberius and the main family, he has the ability to stand on two legs. Augustus and his family have adapted over many long years to this bipedal existance, and as a result, their scales now cover the entireity of their bodies ( Augustus' plates afford him protection of up and including to A rank jutsu) Due to his long existance in the desert Augustus has become a highly skilled user of sand and wind techniques, able to use up to A-rank of both.
    Like the main family he may roll up into a ball to attack, but as he can stand on two legs, the time it takes for him to do so is drastically reduces, and he is able to do it more than once a battle.
    though, as he has adapted to live in the desert, his family no longer use their tongues to attack, as they would be damaged in the desert heat. He also has a brilliant sense of smell, allowing him to track food for miles around (he can also use this to track enemy ninja)
    Restrictions.
    1. May Be Summoned once per battle and Stays on the field for 4 turns
    2. May NOT be summoned if Tiberius, Caligula or Vittellius have been summoned
    3. Can not Roll up and use jutsu in the same turn
    4. Must have signed the pangolin contract and been taught how to summon him by
    ~Anbu Minato~



    ~declined no sand element only Gaara may use sand~

    (Senzankou Kuchyose no jutsu: Nox)
    Pangolin Summoning Technique: Nox
    Type: Supplimentary
    Rank:S
    Range:n/a
    Chakra Cost:40
    Description: Nox is close to the same size as Vitellius. Both his plates and his skin underneath are completely black. His eyes are yellow and they glow in the darkness.His plates protect him from techniques up to C. A B-rank technique will pierce his plates. On his plates there are 4-foot long spikes that work as tread like on a tire. He has the ability to ball up and roll around like other Pangolins, though his spikes allow him to roll straight up mountain sides and continue to roll on ice or mud. Two C-rank attacks or one B-rank attack to an unprotected area will stop him from being able to roll for the rest of the battle. He can also use his tongue to fight, which extends to mid range. It has an acidic nature. If the opponent is hit, the opponent is burned severely. He also may (once per battle) create a cloud of extremely noxious gas, similar to a skunk's spray, that extends to mid range, that is extremely flammable, and also forces the opponent to either retreat to long range or spend his turn covering his face to avoid the gas.He has considerable skill in Katon and can use Katon jutsu up to A-rank
    Restrictions:
    1. May not use tongue and katon in the same turn
    2. May not attack the turn after he rolls up
    3. Stays on the field for 4 turns
    4. Can only be summoned if you have signed the pangolin contract.



    ~add a weakness to the noxious gas so that it is very suseptable to being blown back by a wind technique~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Bodi Fe-zu) Body Phase
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Type: Defense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: Zero
    Description: Forming a single handseal, and focusing their chakra throughout their entire body, the user implements the concept of high-speed vibrations, and causes their body to begin vibrating at incredible speed, so much so that their body becomes “blurry”. In this state, due to the incredible speed of the molecules, all attacks pass through the user, as they are in a similar state to a gas with how their body is moving – they remain together though, as the chakra also acts as a binding agent to strengthen natural chemical bonds.
    Note: The user cannot attack while this is active, as they are intangible, and focusing chakra for justu would disrupt the hold on their atoms, causing them to dissipate.
    Note: Can only be used 5 times.
    Note: Useable only once every other turn after the jutsu disengages.
    Note: The jutsu disengages at the beginning of the user’s turn following the use of this jutsu.
    Note: Only two jutsu may be used in the turn this jutsu disengages.



    ~declined do not resubmit~

    (Burikka-Bunshin) Flicker Clone
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: Zero
    Description: This clone is a cross between the regular Bunshin and Kage Bunshin jutsu. As a regular Bunshin is an intangible clone that has no physical substance, and can therefore do nothing but act as something to shield which is the real user, and a Kage Bunshin is a completely tangible copy made to be a replica of the user, this takes pieces from both. The user creates a slightly unstable clone – this clone can use jutsu just like a Kage Bunshin, but has no physical substance, like a regular Bunshin. This is because the amount of chakra used in the justu allows the clones to consist of chakra and to put on a front of the user, but the additional chakra is reserved for justu, and is not enough to make the clone tangible; where as a Kage Bunshin evenly splits the users chakra between themselves and the Kage Bunshin, this jutsu does not.
    Note: This clone cannot be dispersed, as all techniques will simply pass through it.
    Note: Since the clone is unstable, it will dissipate after three turns.
    Note: This clone cannot inflict damage through physical means (i.e. Taijutsu – Ninjutu still do damage.)
    Note: This clone cannot activate Genjutsu.




    ~declined how can it not be affected by any techniques and that they pass through it, the clone itself would have some vulnerability other than dispersing after a period of time~

    (Kamei Gigei: Raikōsen) Command Art: Lightning Flash
    Rank: S
    Range: Short – Mid
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: One of the more powerful Command Arts, Raikōsen is activated by the user flooding their entire chakra network with Raiton chakra. Using this chakra, an electrical aura will envelope both the user and their blade. Lifting their blade so it is parallel to their face, the user will lunge forward – in doing so, all of the gathered lightning chakra surges around them, and the user is fired in a straight-line bolt from their current position to another point mid-range from their current position in the direction they are facing, as a pure bolt of lightning. Being enveloped in lightning, the user’s blade is thrust forward as the transition occurs, acting as the spear head, and as such gives the user the power to pierce through even thick walls of metal, depending on their sword. After reaching the point of destination, the user crackles back into a solid form. The bolt of lightning will linger between the starting and ending points for approximately half of a second, as the Raiton chakra disperses.
    *Can be used 6 times in a battle.
    *Can be used 2 times in the same turn.
    *This jutsu cannot be used again for 3 turns after being used, excluding the additional time it maybe used (meaning that the user has the choice of using it either once or twice in a single turn, but regardless of which they choose, it cannot be used again for 3 turns afterward).
    *This attack does 60 damage to the enemy’s Health and 20 to the enemy’s Chakra.
    *No other Raiton element attacks can be used in the same turn as Raikōsen.
    This technique is demonstrated in 1:11-1:13 in this video.




    ~declined do not resubmit~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryuji View Post
    (Fuuton:Shakkuri)-Wind Style:Hiccup
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing a single handseal the user will blow from his mouth a very small wind gust at the opponent. The wind will enter through the opponent mouth and nose and it flows through the pharynx, past the glottis and into the larynx and trachea, ending in the lungs. After 1 opponents turns passes the opponent's muscles of the chest and abdomen aids the airflow to move down when the opponent inhales, and then up when exhales, causing the opponent to have hiccups and limits the user to use jutsus that are blown directly from the opponent's gut or mouth since the opponents haves hiccups the jutsus will get stuck in the mouth or trachea and damage them greatly, but jutsus like the Fireball Jutsu who only need a little blow and the fire doesn't contact mouth or gut so the opponent is safe but the jutsu will loose 05 Damage points since the hiccups will interrupt is performance.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Thsi jutsu's effect last for 3 turns.
    Note: No fuuton jutsus for the next 3 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji


    I submited this jutsu some time ago Kiwi declined it (he didn't say I should stop submiting it) but he only said that it stops a lot of fire and wind jutsus so i only clarified a little bit since not all the fire jutsus are blown directly from the mouth some only need a little blow of air. So I hope this time the jutsu is ok now.

    and how is this going to work if you cant garantee the targets mouth will be open at all times when you try to use this ?


    (Butai Batto)-Elemental Bat
    Type: Deffensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A (depending on the Damage points of the jutsu)
    Description: After performing 2 handseals the user will clap his hand and create a bat (baseball bat) of chakra in his hand. This bat can be used to defend against jutsu from C-rank and below with the shape of a sphere or ball by bating the jutsu away or return it to the opponent. But of course since there's a lot of different ball/sphere-shaped jutsu with different elements the user must infuse the bat with an appropiate chakra (lightning=lightning, fire=fire etc.) to defend against it.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note. Can only be taught by Ryuji.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~


    (Katon:Mātarashī Baku-ten Kikku)-Fire Style:Flaming Backflip Kick
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points 60
    Description: The user will focus fire chakra on his feet, then by performing a backflip kick that wil be followed by a trail of fire by releasing the fire chakra from his feet. This backflip can be used to kick the opponent and burn him/her at the same time or if wanted insted just creating a trail of fire the user can shoot from his feet two vertical crescent-shape slashes of fire at the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: No Taijutsu moves in the same turn this jutsu is used.
    Note. Can only be taught by Ryuji.


    ~Approved~

    (Fuuton:Kushami)-Wind Style:Sneeze
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing only 1 handseal the user will create a really small gust of wind in front of him, the gust will gather dust particles from the ground and send them to the user's nose while he focuses wind chakra in it, after the dust enters the user's nose this one will cause him to sneeze (infused with the wind chakra)sending a incredibly fast wind gust (50 miles per hour) that only a third tomoe Sharingan can track. This sneexe can blow the opponent away to long range as well receive a strong impact. This jutsu can also be used in the same way but to make the opponent sneeze while he/she is about to perform a jutsu that is blown from the mouth and cancel it out.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: No wind jutsus for 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji


    A normal sneeze travels at 100 miles per hour so I just cut it's speed in half but I think is still to fast so please tell me if I have to reduce its speed.

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~

    (Katon:Kobura)-Fire Style:Cobra
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing 4 handseals the user will shoot from his hands a long and wide line of fire that incircles the opponent leaving him/her in the middle, later the fire takes the form of a gaint cobra that raises it's head and strikes down at the opponent drawing all the fire around it. This jutsu can also be used used to attack a giant summoning and burn it greatly.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: No other fire jutsus in the same turn this jutsu is used.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.


    ~Approved, next time add the correct rank to the points you made an A rank with S rank stats but im changing its rank and decreasing its usage by 1 time ~


    (Fuuton:Shakkuri)-Wind Style:Hiccup
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing a single handseal the user will blow from his mouth a very small wind gust at the opponent. The wind will enter through the opponent mouth and nose and it flows through the pharynx, past the glottis and into the larynx and trachea, ending in the lungs. However since is very rare that an opponent opens his/her mouth the user must ''open'' the opponent's mouth by other neccesary means. After 1 opponents turns passes the opponent's muscles of the chest and abdomen aids the airflow to move down when the opponent inhales, and then up when exhales, causing the opponent to have hiccups and limits the user to use jutsus that are blown directly from the opponent's gut or mouth since the opponents haves hiccups the jutsus will get stuck in the mouth or trachea and damage them greatly, but jutsus like the Fireball Jutsu who only need a little blow and the fire doesn't contact mouth or gut so the opponent is safe but the jutsu will loose 05 Damage points since the hiccups will interrupt is performance.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: This jutsu's effect last for 3 turns.
    Note: No fuuton jutsus for the next 3 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

    ~Approved~


    (Genjutsu:Tsukareta)-Illusion Technique:Tired?
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 05
    Damage Points: N/A
    Descrption: By sending chakra to the opponent's brain, the user can depress the central nervous system of the human body, placing the opponent into several states such as, tranquility, relaxation, sleepiness, slowed breathing etc. In other words the opponent will feel sleepy and start yawing. The purpose of this jutsu is to steal a very small time from the opponent to prepare an attack (a yawn last for 2 to 4 seconds), and since this jutsu doesn't exatcly hurt the opponent or put him/her to sleep, theres no need to use Kai or inflict pain to him/her self.

    ~Technically, this isn't an illusion. Another mod please check~


    (Doton:Jenga Hō)-Earth Style:Jenga Cannon
    Type: Offensive/Deffensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (10 each per storie)
    Description: After performing 6 handseals while and channel earth chakra behind him, the user will make a huge building-like pillar of rock, rise from the ground with the height of a 6 storie tall building. Then by making hand gestures the user can launch 1 ''storie'' from the pillar at the selected target or use it to defend against an incoming attack.
    Note: This jutsu lasts until the last storie has been used.
    Note: Only 1 storie can be used per turn.
    Note: The pillars consist of 6 stories.
    Note: No Doton jutsus until each storie has been used.
    Note: Usable once per battle

    ~Approved~ I added the bold part, though I doubt you'd want to use it more than once in a match...


    (Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu)-Wolverine Summoning Jutsu
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15 (10 more for each extra Wolverine)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By performing the handseals Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram and finish with the palm in the ground the user is able to summon Wolverines of various sizes and if wanted the user can summon more than 1 Wolverine, but of course none of this Wolverines will have a special ability.
    Note: Must posses the Wolverine contract taught my Ryuji.
    Note: Only a maximum of 3 Wolverines can be summon at once.
    Note: Other Wolverines with special abilitis can't be summoned while the normal ones are summoned.

    ~Approved~


    (Seiza Gijutsu:Shichi Seiken)-Constellation Arts:Grand Chariot
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: While high up in the air the user will create 7 huge pillars of rock above him then he will send lightning chakra to the pillars, wrapping them in a layer of lighting that connects all the pillars together, then the user can strike the opponent with all of them at once at great speed, if the target gets hit he/she will receive a strong impact as well get electrocuted at the same time. If the opponent manages to avoid the pillars this ones will create a small tremor in the ground as soon they land and send a little current of electricity through the ground.
    Like all the other jutsus of this kind, this jutsu can only be used when fighting at night.
    Note: Can Only be taught by Ryuji
    Note: No Doton or Raiton jutsus in the same turn this jutsu is used.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.

    ~Pending~ Wouldn't the impact disrupt the electrical current completely? Even if it could travel through the ground, the distance would be miniscule at best...


    Picture of it looks from below.


    Just for the record I created the Constellations arts, Roku was the first one to check one of this jutsus, he didn't say I should stop submiting it he just said that it's similar to an existing jutsu, so I'm gonna submit more of this.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Senshinguinperiaru Shindō) - Imperial Vibration Sensing
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Tobirama Senju (or Minato Namikaze) concentrates a lot of chakra in his hands thus increasing sense of touch and puts them on the ground. By doing so, he gains ability to sense enemies that are kilometers away. Only downside to this technique is the thing that concentrating chakra in one's hands to improve sense of touch this much isn't a feat that can be done at whim thus it requires some time to do it.
    *Note - Concentrating chakra in hands require 1 turn and once activated it stays active as long as user keeps his hands on the ground.
    *Note -

    - I don't think that this jutsu needs restrictions as, for example, duration or number of uses since it is pretty unusable in a fight.
    - I have left empty "Note" if you still believe that some restrictions should be added (If you want to add any please do it yourself so I don't have to wait for another checking of CJs - thank you in advance).
    - This jutsu isn't any cannon thing. I just wrote "Tobirama Senju (or Minato Namikaze)" since they are the only ones who have shown the ability to sense ninjas through vibrations of earth.

    (Shindō Kenshutsu) - Vibration Sensing
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Tobirama Senju (or Minato Namikaze) concentrates a lot of chakra in his feet but this time, instead of using chakra to enhance speed or enable user to walk on trees or water, user uses chakra to increase sense of touch in his feet. By doing so, he gains ability to sense enemies through vibrations with his feat instead of hands. Big downside of this technique is the thing that user can't use chakra to enhance speed or enable user to walk on trees or water with this jutsu activated at the same time. User also isn't able to switch this jutsu off and then, for example, be able to use chakra to walk over water in the same turn.
    *Note -

    - I also don't think that this technique is OP since there exist a lot of far stronger sensing jutsus (like that sonar thing that stays on for whole battle and this technique only allows user to sense vibrations of earth). He can't sense someone flying over him, throwing a kunai etc.
    - I have left empty "Note" if you still believe that some restrictions should be added (If you want to add any please do it yourself so I don't have to wait for another checking of CJs - thank you in advance).
    - This jutsu isn't any cannon thing. I just wrote "Tobirama Senju (or Minato Namikaze)" since they are the only ones who have shown the ability to sense ninjas through vibrations of earth.

    ~Both Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Yīngxióng de fángyù*|Earth Release: A Hero's Defense)
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: N/a
    Damage:
    Chakra: 80
    Description: The user will perform 4 handseals and infuse their chakra into the ground, And upon the target being attacked the user will create huge earth walls capable of blocking incoming jutsu.

    Note: The walls of earth are really thick and hard to penetrate, they are also very fast upon rising.

    Note: This jutsu is used to protect others. Only two people can be targeted to protect at a time.

    Note: The user must remain completely still to focus his chakra, If the user moves the jutsu stops. Lasts up to 3 turns.

    Note: Can only be used one time per battle.

    Note: Must be taught by Drizzy
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sora no kuni eshaku)- Land of the skies bow
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:short/long
    Chakra Cost:0( shooting arrows 30)
    Damage:40 per arrow
    Description: This bow, specially crafted by the land of the skies blacksmiths, is made of a light but very resistant metal which is deep blue and trimmed with gold alloy. The bow's trims were sharped relentlessly in order to ensure that, over the years, it may still cut through rock or common metals. The bow has a black handle made of tar-covered sharkskin, just like samurai katanas, ensuring maximum grip. The user of this bow can infuse raiton chakra in great quantities and apply shape manipulation in order to create a thick arrow of pure lightning energy which can be later shot in a straight line but at great speeds and a normal chakra bowstring. The arrow have a penetrating power comparable to chidori, but once they struck the opponent they will revert back to lightning energy and shock the particular area numbing it.
    But the utility of this ancient weapon does not end here, the bow can be disassembled in two separate blades that the user can use freely as very sharp and light weapons. If infused with raiton chakra, the sharpness of the blades is taken to a whole new level.
    Notes: Raiton arrows may be used up to 3 times per battle and shooting up to a maximum of 2 arrows per use.
    Notes: The numbing effects of the arrow last for a turn.
    Notes: No lightning the same turn the arrows are used.
    Notes: The arrows travel so fast that only a sharingan user with 2 or more tomoe can keep up with them.

    ^ The bow, when used as sperate swords

    ^The bow's arrow


    Re submitting this weapon- restrictions added

    Custom weapon:
    (Sora no kuni eshaku)- Land of the skies bow
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:short/long
    Chakra Cost:0( shooting arrows 30)
    Damage:40 per arrow
    Description: This bow, specially crafted by the land of the skies blacksmiths, is made of a light but very resistant metal which is deep blue and trimmed with gold alloy. The bow's trims were sharped relentlessly in order to ensure that, over the years, it may still cut through rock or common metals. The bow has a black handle made of tar-covered sharkskin, just like samurai katanas, ensuring maximum grip. The user of this bow can infuse raiton chakra in great quantities and apply shape manipulation in order to create a thick arrow of pure lightning energy which can be later shot in a straight line but at great speeds and a normal chakra bowstring. The arrow have a penetrating power comparable to chidori, but once they struck the opponent they will revert back to lightning energy and shock the particular area numbing it.
    But the utility of this ancient weapon does not end here, the bow can be disassembled in two separate blades that the user can use freely as very sharp and light weapons. If infused with raiton chakra, the sharpness of the blades is taken to a whole new level.
    Notes: Raiton arrows may be used up to 3 times per battle and shooting up to a maximum of 2 arrows per use.
    Notes: The numbing effects of the arrow last for a turn.
    Notes: No lightning the same turn the arrows are used.
    Notes: The arrows travel so fast that only a sharingan user with 2 or more tomoe can keep up with them.
    Notes: Arrows thrown will count as a jutsu, however it does not matter the amount of arrows thrown( although it cannot exceed 2 in the same turn).
    Notes: The bow cannot be disassembled and assembled in the same turn.

    ^ The bow, when used as sperate swords

    ^The bow's arrow


    ~declined - seems too fast, it's merely a projectile and having only sharingan users able to see it seems a bit OP imo ~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kobushi Jin Enkou)-Fist of the Mortal Flame
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will Mold their fire chakra around their hand(s), Increasing their Hand to hand combat by 5 and decreasing their Water techs by 5 while the fire still remains around their hands, when used with a hand wind jutsu this jutsu increases by 5, When used on one hand the fire is more controlled than when using it with both hands.
    Note: The jutsu lasts for 1 round and can only be used 4 times in one battle.
    Note: If used on both hands its less controlled.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can teach this jutsu.



    "less controlled"? in what way?, please expand on how this affects the jutsu as opposed to using it one handed.


    (Jagan Boushi)-Jagan Eye
    Type: Sup
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will form one handseal, once the user does so an "Eye" will appear on the middle of the users forehead, this "eye" will increase the the power an range of Genjutsu's once after the eye has had time to completely open, the "eye" will increase the user's Genjutsu by 5 and up the range of the Genjutsu to the next range above the tech (range short will be increased to Midrange).
    Note: The Jagan Eye takes 1 round to fully open and use its increaseing techs.
    Note: The Jagan Eye can only be used 2 times per battle.
    Note: The "Eye" can only Remain with the user form to rounds.
    Note: The "Eye" is not real Just a Genjutsu in its self.
    Note: Only Orange-Hokage can teach this jutsu.



    "increasing effect of genjutsu" expand. does it increase turn duration? and also you need to make it sight based genjutsu only and if it's a genjutsu in itself and not a physical eye it shouldn't increase your own jutsu effects as genjutsu isn't able to enhance personal performance.


    Sorry Kawagiri but this Jagan eye is to be declined and not resubmitted its to similar to creating a new doujutsu as its using a new eye to enhance genjutsu
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by BloodLust Loki View Post
    Resubmitting

    Summoning Technique: Kaijin (Grand Cotta Summoning)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across the tattoo on Oraan's left arm, Oraan summons Grand Cotta. Grand Cotta is the largest Hyena of them all. He is the same size as Gamabunta. He is the only Hyena capable of using Jutsu other then GenJutsu, consisting primarily of Fire and Lightning. Because Grand Cotta has a very thick hide if attacked with Lightning, only an S Ranked or above Lightning jutsu can kill him (Unless a water technique is used in conjunction to cause the lightning techniques to be powered up through the conduction allowing A ranked lightning techniques to cause damage). Grand Cotta has a helmet made of Manganin, which is a metal that is very resistant to lightning. The helmet, and the hide, are why it is so hard to kill Grand Cotta with Lightning abilities.
    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for a Maximum of 4 turns.
    Note: Can use all Lightning Techniques that the User knowsthat doesn't require hand seals
    Note: Can use all Fire Techniques that the User knows up to S Rankthat doesn't require hand seals
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.


    ~Approved i have added some
    stuff make it a bit more reasonable~


    Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User is coated in an armor of thick Hyena hide, belonging to Grand Cotta. The User gains a helmet made of Manganin, the same metal used as Grand Cotta's protective headgear. The Transformation into Kaijin (Hyena Mod) happens instanteously. While this is active, Hyena mode has these effects.
    *Decrease all Lightning Jutsu damage by 20.
    *Lightning jutsu that hit the user does not cause Paralyzation due to the hide of the Hyena.
    *User's Peripheral vision is impaired due to Helmet.
    *User cannot use Kage Bunshin while in this mode.
    *Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Lasts for 5 turns
    *Can only be used 2x per battle



    ~Declined, change the highlighted parts and modes take time to enter and there not instantaneous and the kage bunshin change to any type of clone

    ]Summoning Technique: Kami no Hidari-te Akuma no Migi-te (God's Left Hand, Devil's Right Hand)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User, while in Kaijin (Hyena Mode), summons what appears to be two clones of the user. The only difference between the three is that one has A yellow Manganin helmet, while the other has a red Manganin helmet, and the user's helmet is brown. The God's left hand(Kami) has all Lightning Abilities and is capable of using all the Lightning Techs that the user knows. The Devil's Right Hand(Akuma) has all Fire Abilities, and is capable of using all the Fire Techs that the user knows.
    Note: Usable only in Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Vision impairment still applies for Each Summoned "clone".
    *Each Summoned "Clone" is immune to attacks of their element S Rank and Below.
    *User cannot use any Lightning or Fire Techs while each respective Summoning Clone is on the field and for 1 turn after they are destroyed.


    ~Get the mode approved first~

    (Kami/Akuma: Kurama Bushuugi)- God's Left Hand/Devil's Right Hand: Wheel of Misfortune
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage Points: 80
    Desription: A combination of Kami's and Akuma's natural elements. They stand back to back and shoot a fireball and lightning ring, which combine and travel toward the opponent, gaining speed as it goes.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
    Note: Counts as two of the 3 moves in a turn.
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    Note: Can only be used in Kaijin (Hyena Mode.


    i have added parts and when hyena mode is approved then i will approve this

    Earth Style: Chakra Sensing Bear Trap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
    Damage: 80
    Description: From the earth, the user forms a large bear traps that rise from the earth. The bear trap seeks out the chakra of anything that is touching the ground, including the chakra of the user. When an opponent, ally or the user, becomes trapped, the bear trap then drags them under the ground and will not stop until they reach the earths core. As it is earth based, the bear trap can easily travel along earth, to include vertically.
    Note: Users feet MUST be touching earth in order to use this technique.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: Only Oraan may teach



    ~Declined~
    Resubmitting

    Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User is coated in an armor of thick Hyena hide, belonging to Grand Cotta. The User gains a helmet made of Manganin, the same metal used as Grand Cotta's protective headgear. The Transformation into Kaijin (Hyena Mode) takes a 2 seconds to form, the Manganin helmet is the last to form. While this is active, Hyena mode has these effects.
    *Decrease all Lightning Jutsu damage by 20.
    *Lightning jutsu that hit the user does not cause Paralyzation due to the hide of the Hyena.
    *User's Peripheral vision is impaired due to Helmet.
    *User cannot use any clone techniques while in this mode.
    *Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Lasts for 5 turns
    *Can only be used 2x per battle



    2 seconds is hardly appropriate... if it only took 2 seconds to enter sage mode it wouldn't be a problem in the anime/manga for the characters who use/used it.


    Summoning Technique: Kami no Hidari-te Akuma no Migi-te (God's Left Hand, Devil's Right Hand)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User, while in Kaijin (Hyena Mode), summons what appears to be two clones of the user. The only difference between the three is that one has A yellow Manganin helmet, while the other has a red Manganin helmet, and the user's helmet is brown. The God's left hand(Kami) has all Lightning Abilities and is capable of using all the Lightning Techs that the user knows. The Devil's Right Hand(Akuma) has all Fire Abilities, and is capable of using all the Fire Techs that the user knows.
    Note: Usable only in Kaijin (Hyena Mode)
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    *Vision impairment still applies for Each Summoned "clone".
    *Each Summoned "Clone" is immune to attacks of their element S Rank and Below.
    *User cannot use any Lightning or Fire Techs while each respective Summoning Clone is on the field and for 1 turn after they are destroyed.



    (Kami/Akuma: Kurama Bushuugi)- God's Left Hand/Devil's Right Hand: Wheel of Misfortune
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage Points: 80
    Desription: A combination of Kami's and Akuma's natural elements. They stand back to back and shoot a fireball and lightning ring, which combine and travel toward the opponent, gaining speed as it goes.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
    Note: Counts as two of the 3 moves in a turn.
    Note: Must have signed the Hyena Contract to use.
    Note: Can only be used in Kaijin (Hyena Mode.



    until hyena mode is approved don't submit these corrections please, or at least go over it with someone first.

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    Katon: Enkou Bu-Meran (Fire Style: Flame Boomerang)
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/ Mid/Long
    Chakra: 80
    Damage: (-20 of the original jutsu)
    Description: With a flick of the User’s hand, the User is capable of manipulating/redirecting a preexisting Fire/Lava jutsu. The User pulls the fire/lava jutsu back towards the enemy (after having missed them) at the expense of making the jutsu weaker.
    Note: This can only be used/taught by BloodLust Loki
    Note: Fire/Lava jutsu must have either missed the enemy or appeared behind them in order to use successfully.
    Note: If Attack is unsuccessful, User must defend against the attacking jutsu as if the opponent were attacking him.
    Note: Lowers the level of the jutsu used by one rank.
    Note: -20 the attack points of the jutsu
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    as long as it only misses them it's fine, however you can't use this to avoid defences.
     
         
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