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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Alucard View Post
    That is Ace's summon. Along with Octopuses which somehow got approved.
    oops sorry,i'll fix it:shrug:
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Suiton:Mizu ude(Water Release:Water Arm)
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user concentrates his suiton chakra in his arm to make an arm made of water and this water arm covers the users arm and can extend upto Mid-Range.The arm has the power to crush a rock to bits
    Note:
    • can only be used twice per battle
    • cannot use suiton jutsu of A-rank and above in the next turn
    • can only be taught by igneel

    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    Doton:Sogeki yari(Earth Release:Shooting Spears)
    Rank:S
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user does a single handseal and slams his hand on the ground making 2 huge blocks of earth of rise,one to the left of the user and the other to the right and as long as the user keeps his hand on the ground the blocks will shoot huge spears at the opponent.Each block can only shoot 2 spears at a time.A max of 4 spears can only be shot in 1 turn.The user can use the same blocks to shoot spears again later but it will count as another move.The spear is strong enough to cause deep wounds to a strong summon like gamabuntha

    Note:
    • can only be used two time per battle
    • cannot use any doton jutsu of A-rank and above for 2 Turns
    • can only be taught by igneel

    Declined, do not resubmit

    Raiton:Raikou Denka(Lightning Release:Lightning Charge)
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short
    Chakra:80
    Damage:130
    Description:The user makes his raiton chakra cover his entire body and concentrates it and then makes it vibrate in his body thereby covering his entire body with lightning and charges at the opponent.If the opponent is hit he/she will not be able to continue.During the charge anything in the path of the user is destroyed including huge rocks. The charge has high speed and in short range it is nearly impossible to block with techniques that require handsigns



    Note:
    • can only be used once per battle
    • user will suffer intense pain after using this technique which means he/she can only last for 1 more turn and if the match is not finished by then the user will be unabel to move and will faint due to the pain thereby loosing the fight
    • user cannot use any lightning jutsu or doton jutsu in the same turn and in the next turn
    • must have mastered raiton completely
    • can only be taught by igneel

    Declined, do not resubmit

    Raiton:Raikou toppa(lightning breakthrough)
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user builds up his raiton chakra and slams his hand on the ground and releases it and as soon as the user releases it the lightning travels underground and then shoots out from the ground where the opponent is standing and the lightning covers an area of a circle (radius 2m)

    Note:
    • can only be used 2 times per battle
    • cannot use lightning jutsu of A-rank or above in the next turn
    • can only be taught by igneel

    Declined, similar jutsu already exists

    Doraggu tame heru (Drag to hell)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:80
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user does 2 hand seals and and slams his hand on the ground and as soon as that earth below the opponent cracks open and hands start to come out and grab the opponent and if the opponent is made in contact with the hands he/she will be paralyzed i.e; unable to move and the hands will drag you down to hell and the crack on the ground closes trapping the opponent there

    Note:
    • can only be used once time per battle
    • cannot use any jutsu elemental and non-elemental jutsu's of A-rank and above for 2 turns
    • the users speed will decrease by 1 point
    • can only be taught by igneel
    • cannot use genjutsu from then on
      Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fūinjutsu : Fuuin Kawarimi no Jutsu | Sealing Technique : Sealing Substitution Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Once per battle Minato may turn his body into Transformer oil (meaning electrical currents and fire won't ignite it) (like "(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement") thus allowing him to avoid taking direct damage from most physical attacks (he will retain his shape while turning, but physical attacks will go through him). When he turns he will then explode (not incendiary) causing the ink to splatter across Short-mid range. When the ink lands on something with chakra it will write the "Flying Thunder God" formula which Minato can use for the aforementioned technique. After exploding Minato will reform a few metres away from the explosion's epicenter.
    -This counts to the user's substitution limit.
    -Can only be used by a Minato Namikaze bio.

    Declined, do not resubmit

    Fūinjutsu : Fuuin Bunshin Bakuha no Jutsu | Sealing Technique : Clone Sealing Explosion Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long [Activation range] | Short-Mid [Explosion radius]
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique is similar to "(Bunshin Bakuha) - Shadow Clone Explosion" but unique to Minato. Minato will do one handseal causing any of his Shadow clones to turn into transformer oil (meaning electrical currents and fire won't ignite it) and then explode (non-incendiary). This sends the ink throughout short-mid, and when it lands on something with chakra it will write the "Flying Thunder God" formula which Minato can use for the aforementioned technique. This technique can only be used twice per battle and up to four shadow clones can be detonated per use.
    -Can only be used by a Minato Namikaze bio.


    Transformer oil is highly refined oil that is still stable at high temperatures and is an insulator. Minato knowing toads should be able to use oil.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transformer_oil
    Declined, do not resubmit
    Kekkai Ninjutsu : Shuuban | Barrier Ninjutsu : Endgame
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 100 (-25 to the user)
    Description: The user does seven handseals and slams his hand on the ground, causing a large circle of special writing to appear around Short - Mid range. This circle stays there until the user wants to activate it, and once he does he just needs to hold out his hand while performing a one handed handseal with the other hand. This causes the writing to glow and a large spherical barrier is erected covering short - mid range which stops anything from leaving or entering (Unless another Forbidden Attack hits it). Once the user's arm is out stretched he just needs to close his hand in a crushing motion, which destroys everything inside the barrier with pure chakra.
    -Once per battle
    -No other barriers can be used during or two turns after the circle appears.
    -No forbidden jutsu for two turns after if the final effect is used.

    Declined, do not resubmit

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    Sōjutsu : Geki Rekkō | Spear Art : Raging Light Fang
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While holding a spear, the user will thrust it forward while channeling chakra into the end of the spear. This forms a circle of chakra at the end which fires off multiple beams of chakra from it's center in a cage formation at the opponent.
    -Twice per battle



    Sōjutsu : Kongōbaku | Spear Art : Adamantine Blast
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: While holding a spear, the user will channel Fire chakra into the spear. The chakra then moulds at the end of the spear into a large sized dense fireball that can then be thrown (using the spear) at the opponent. On impact the ball explodes increasing it's effectiveness and burning all in close proximity.
    -Twice per battle
    -No s ranked or higher fire jutsu next turn.

    Both Approved
    If your looking at this from a glance LD, no this does not use Adamantine, it's just the name from the source anime.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Puppies
    Scroll Owner: The Humanoid Typhoon
    Other Users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning Boss if existing: none
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Perry View Post
    Resubmit:



    ( Ninpou: Noroi no Busshitsu Sekai ) - Ninja Art: Curse of Material World
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A ( + 20 to every Fuuinjutsu used )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Curse of the Material World is a skill that a ninja can possess if trained in it. Using this technique, ninja is able to imbue fuuinjutsu in pre-existing objects/material or ones that he/she creates at the moment. The technique works by user doing the necessary sealing technique(s) on the object and using + 20 extra chakra, user imbues the seal into the object/material. The smallest thing that this technique can be used on is a coin sized object and the biggest is a small sized boulder and user's size when performing this on him/herself. Unlike many fuuinjutsus, user cannot use this technique on other living things other than him/herself. This technique doesn't drain chakra from user when the seal in the technique is activated but when the seal's been imbued. When the imbued object comes on contact with target, the target's affected as long as the object's in contact with him/her or as long as the object's not broken.
    Note:
    [LIST][*]Takes longer time to perform than average jutsu so it's not useful in combat.[*]Will be mainly used in Ninja World as it is not useful in battle arena[LIST]

    Resubmit:

    ( Kuchiyose: Daikamonohashi ) Summoning technique: Great Platypus
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User offers blood sacrifice and focuses chakra into their platypus tattoo, summoning colossal, blue/cyan Platypus the size of Gamabunta. The Platypus can create tremors by hitting it's tail on ground and a temporary water source by drooling. Hearing him growl strains ears as his growling can reach up to 100dB. The great platypus can also use Water and Earth techniques both up to and including A - rank. The Great Platypus isn't the boss of Platypus summoning due to its common beast brains. Therefore it's unable of communicating with the summoner but it will understand the orders that he/she issues to it.
    Note:
    • Can be summoned only once
    • Cannot be summoned in hot zones such as desert
    • Lasts five turns on field before dispersing.

    New techniques:

    Custom Weapon: ( Masamune ) - True Principle
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Self - Short
    Chakra cost: N/A ( - 5 when chakra is guided to the sword )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Masamune is one of the few master swords forged in Narutoverse. Their creator whose name was Masamune, named this sword after himself and one of its names is ''Sword of the enlightened''. The name comes from the fact that no amateur could use a sword like this without having extreme difficulties, which will result more harm than good. Masamune is usually hidden in it's scabbard which varies from the smaller version to the longer version. The smaller version is about one meter long and black as the longer version is as long as the Masamune's length is. The smaller scabbard has multiple seals hidden inside of it, including one that reduces it's length for as long as it is hidden inside that scabbard. The Masamune itself is a 2 meters long Katana/Thin Nodachi which is made from chakra metal. The Masamune's blade's color varies from regular silver color into silver color with slight blue glow/tint when charka is infused into it. The handle is long enough for two hand to grab it with and is black colored just like the scabbard.

    The Masamune and it's scabbard share many abilities. One of them is extending the Masamune's blade when chakra is being guided into it. This will double the length of the sword, resulting the sword to gain 2 extra meters of length. The Scabbard has many seals inside of it and one of them allows the Masamune's size to be reduced when it's stored inside of the scabbard while other one enables user to seal a chakra based attack up to and including S - ranked once per battle. The sword was built to be perfectly balanced and light to those who know how to use it and it's indestructible. No attack can destroy Masamune. Being made from chakra guiding metal, infusing chakra into it is quick and easy, which will result quicker Kenjutsu techniques.
    Note:
    • Sealing a technique can be used once per battle and it counts as a jutsu
    • Masamune follows it's owner to death and beyond. It will not accept new owner that kills it's old owner so it cannot be stolen, only passed on.
    • Sealing a technique inside of the scabbard will take - 30 chakra from the user.
    • Extending it costs - 5 chakra and you user can decrease it's size when he/she desires so.


    ( Doton: Fukkatsu ) - Earth release: Resurrection
    Rank: D/Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 5/50
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Resurrection is a technique used to animate any already existing statues around user. The technique requires user to release earth chakra into the surroundings. While doing so user must perform string of eight hand seals ( Serpent > Hare > Bird > Ox > Dragon > Rat > Serpent > Clap hands together ) and when that is completed, the earth chakra in surroundings forces the statues to start moving and eventually be controlled by the user.

    The statues must be made from stone or other substance like clay for it to work. The statues are strong against taijutsu attacks but weak against Lightning element attacks. Statues are unable to use techniques with the exception of Earth technique that they can use to manipulate their weapons. Statues using Earth technique don't count as user's technique.
    Note:
    • This can be used only once
    • The rank of this technique and chakra cost is counted by the amount of statues there is to animate
    • Technique requires stone statues or ones made of clay. Clay statues of course are more fragile than statues made of full stone.


    ( Katon: Umi no Honō ) - Fire release: Sea of Fire
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive - Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 100
    Description: User takes a deep breath, inhaling oxygen while performing a string of 10 hand seals ( Horse → Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Rat ). Then, as the hand seals are completed, user breathes out a wall of fire that then covers a large area as if it were serpent and will follow target(s) that were given to it. If escaped, the fire will ignite objects around it, creating a sea of fire that will kill anyone who falls into it. The amount of fire can stay the same if there isn't anything to ignite, creating only a serpent. The technique is best used in a closed space that has many Walls/piles of objects for it to both ignite and circle around, making it harder for opponent to escape.
    Note:
    • Requires elite ninja that can use this technique.
    • Can be used once per battle
    • It harm anyone who comes in contact whether it is a friend or foe.
    • Cannot be controlled and after using, user will be exhausted and cannot use fire techniques for two turns afterwards.
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary - Defensive
    Range: Short - Self
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user that knows Water release can use their ability to use technique called Water rejection. The first step to use this is to coat themselves in Water water chakra, making it look as if they were forming an orb of chakra from the Doujutsu user's point of view. Then, as any Water technique comes in contact with the Water chakra orb, it will reject the Water from the technique(s), leaving user dry and unharmed. However it makes the user more weaker to lightning techniques and wont protect them from Forbidden ranked water techniques.
    Note:
    • Can be used only twice per battle.



    Approved
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 100 ( X 5 )
    Description: Covering dome is a barrier method technique that requires five persons for it to. Every one of these five persons must know how to use this technique and once the five persons are ready, they will perform string of sixteen handseals while releasing chakra into the air. This will soon start to form a barrier similar to the one Tsunade taught Shizune, Hinata, Sakura and Ino use to subdue the three tailed. The Barrier will raise and cover long area. Anyone who tries to pass through the barrier, will be paralyzed for next three turns and to destroy the barrier, 500 damage is required. The Barrier itself is white/light yellow colored and is invisible to anyone except Doujutsu users unless it's attacked. When attacked, the part that's being attacked becomes visible as it blocks the hit.
    Note:
    • Can be used only once
    • Leaves the users exhausted for five turns after used.
    • Requires 100 chakra from each person who takes part in making the barrier.



    Declined, do not resubmit

    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User of this technique begins by taking concentrating on opponent and his/her location before and points their open hand at target. Then, as the user has locked on targer, he/she will send Wind chakra to them gathering oxygen nearby their target that will start pressuring them. Once the opponent is caught in the pressuring oxygen, they're unable to move their body and will experience death/damage by crushing. Unlike many techniques, this cannot be countered by merely firing fire technique in middle of nowhere, as it constantly keeps attracting oxygen to the spot. Once the opponent is trapped, user cleanses their fist, crushing the body of someone who's been caught in this technique.
    Note:
    • Can be used only once per battle
    • Leaves user exhausted so he/she can perform only two techniques next turn
    • No Wind one turn afterwards.



    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    -removed due to similarity to a best bro's custom-

    (Raiton: Kaminari no ​taihō sutoraiki)- Lightning Release: Lightning Cannon Strike
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short- Mid (if fired)
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: Charging lightning chakra into their fist (or weapon) the user swings it to release cannon shaped orbs of lightning. A maximum of four orbs can be released at a time. Each orb is dense with lightning chakra and upon touching can ensnare target in current of lightning.
    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: Zeus' Kuroi Yari)- Lightning Release: Zeus' Black Spear
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user gathers black lightning into their hand. They then manipulate it, causing it to become a spear of pure black lightning. The user then throws this spear at the target, on contact it will impale the target, while continuously shocking them. If it doesn't hit a target, it will expand, where it lands, shocking everything nearby.
    Note: No black lightning or lightning techniques up to S-Rank the following turn
    Note:Usable 2x a match
    Note: Must know black lightning, must be taught by McAfeezy

    Approved
    (Raiton: Kuroi Raion Pride)-Lightning Release: Black Lion Pride
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user will gather their black lightning chakra and release it around them. The user then creates lightning bolts, that bolt forward. These lightning bolts turn into different lions, creating a pride of lions, that rush forward, attacking the opponent.
    Note: Usable 2x a match
    Note: No black lightning up to A-Rank the next turn
    Note: Must know black lightning, must be taught by McAfeezy

    Approved
    (Kiba Mo-do: Hauringu Raiton Ryouken)-Fang Mode: Howling Lightning Hound
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:45
    Damage Points:90
    Description: While in Fang Mode, the user will gather up an extreme amount of raiton chakra. Then the user will swing their arm forward, releasing a devastating mass of lightning, in the shape of a hound. When the hound reaches the opponent/opponents, the hound will extend tendrils from its body, shocking everything in a nearby radius. Then its will explode, doing damage to whoever is nearby When the user releases the hound, it howls, therefore getting its name.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times, while in Fang Mode, the the user will be removed from fang mode.
    Note: Will shock, paralyze, and burst in a rapid succession
    Note: Must know Ninja Dog Summoning, must be in Fang Mode

    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    Kuchiyose|Kurou of Yama Kiba- (Summoning|Elders of Mount Fang)
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user will take out their ninja summon scroll and do the required handseals, while biting their thumb, and slam their hands onto the scroll, or rub blood onto the tatoo they have, summoning, Yajuu and Bibou, the elders of Mount Fang. These elders can gather the energy, required for the user to enter Fang Mode, by fusing with the user and staying still. These elders are also proficient in Genjutsu.
    Note:Takes about 5 seconds for them to gather the energy
    Note:Must know the Ninja Dog Summoning

    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Iwagakure Kyuusho Waza: Doton Kasui Hitoame)Village Hidden in the Rocks Secret Technique: Earth Spike Shower
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Type:Attack
    Chakra:40 ( +15 per turn active)
    Damage:80
    Description: By applying chakra to their bare hands, the user digs their hands into the ground and overturns an enormous piece of earth. The user then launches the earth high into the sky, farther than the regular eye can see. The user then does one handseal, and the earth start to break up into earth senbon. These senbon then rain down onto the battlefield, puncturing opponents. Once the opponents have been punctured, the earth starts to petrify them.
    Usable 2x a battle
    Lasts 2 turns
    Can't fuse with earth, because there is a constant flow of the users chakra
    The senbon rain down only in front of the user

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    please edit where needed so it can be approved.

    Hyouton kyouketsu kiri ( ice style freeze mist)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: b
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: the user focases his water and wind chakra into the air createing a mist that's just cold enough to freeze any water jutsu that is used inside of it.but not cold enough to freeze a person just water.
    Note: must be of the yuki clan.
    Note: doesn't blind the enemy like the normal mist jutsu does it only makes the air cold.
    Note: only freezes water ninjutsu
    Note: can only be used by the 6th hokage.

    Declined, do not resubmit

    hyouton tsunami of yuki ( ice style gaint wave of snow)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:the user will place his hands on the already snow covered ground and make a the snow form a gaint wave that will crash into the enemy and bury them in snow possabley killing them.
    note: must already be in an area that is snow covered
    note: can only be used once perbattle
    note: must be of the yuki clan
    note: only the 6th hokage may use/teach

    Approved
    the next one is a mode

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan

    Approved

    hyouton koori yane) Ice Release: ice roof
    Type:Attack/Defend/Supplementary
    Rank:forbidden
    Range: short-long
    Chakra:All the user's chakra
    Damage Points:n/a ( 250 defensive power)
    Description: while in ice mode the user will make a a row of 10 hand seal and focus all his water and wind chakra into the sky with that chakra he will form a roof of ice ( like a house roof but is a protective barrier) that can be used to cover an entire village (At the expense of all the user's chakra). the roof also could be droped but the end result would kill the user and whoever it was he was trying to protect or attack.
    note: must be in Frost Bite Rage
    note: must be of the yuki clan
    note:after use the user collapses and is unable to move, and ice mode ends.
    note: the ice roof is flat
    note: after use the user is unable to use anything that requires chakra and his body is strained to a great extent(Basically fainting). ( its like a last resort jutsu )


    Declined, do not resubmit

    hyouton senkou tou ) Ice Release: Flash Freeze
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Close
    Chakra:30
    Damage Points:10
    Description: While the user is in Frost Bite Mode, he can channel water and wind chakra into his hands and by simply touching the opponent will cause flash freeze, freezing the moisture around the opponent incasing them in ice. The ice will easily break if hit by the user after usage and if not, the effects will last for 5 seconds.
    note: decreas amount of time one can stay in frost bite rage by one turn.

    Declined, do not resubmit
    please edit where needed so it can be approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon:

    ("Tetsusaiga" Raikou Buzzard Shikon) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Buzzard Fang
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short (Mid-Long for special ability)
    Chakra Points: N/A (+30 for Wind Scar)
    Damage Points: N/A (+60 for Wind Scar)
    Description: Tetsusaiga is a special great sword carved with a special alloy making it as hard as cold steel and special feathers from the lightning buzzard, allowing it to channel lightning chakra for more cutting power. The fur at the end is a conductor, so the user is unaffected by Wind Scar. Due to its sheer size, it can over come smaller weapons such as Katanas, staffs, nunchucks etc. unless it has special properties. The weapon also has a special ability called "Wind Scar" where the user releases a blast/wave of yellow lightning that levels almost anything in its path. The weapon itself can absorb lightning of B-rank and lower to add to the power of Wind Scar.
    Notes:
    -Wind Scar is equal to A-rank Lightning
    -Wind scar can be used 4 times
    -Counts as one of the three used justu per turn
    -Can only absorb lightning of B-rank and lower
    -Can only absorb one lightning tech every 3 turns
    -Negative 2 levels to the user's speed while using it


    The sword itself and the move it uses

    Approved
    If weapon is approved:

    ("Tetsusaiga" Raikou Bure-ka) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Breaker
    Type: Attack/Defend
    Rank:A-S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage Points:60(+power of absorbed lightning tech)
    Description: After absorbing a Lightning tech from the enemy. The user can perform "Lightning Breaker" with Tetsusaiga. The user will thrust the sword into the ground releasing the yellow lightning of wind scar all around him forming a protective barrier in the shape of a pillar. This attack can be used to attack and defend.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used after absorbing a lightning tech
    -Absorbing C-rank and below is a powerful A-rank but absorbing a B-rank is an S-rank
    -Counts as one of the times Wind Scar can be used
    Declined, do not resubmit
    Link to approved swift release bio

    (Hayatōn: Shinshi Hokudon) Swift Release: Roar of The Deppressed Lion
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: When the user is in a deppressed state of mind from the battle, he will use it to his advantage for this technique. The user will utilize his KG and will punch the person at very high speeds while making the dragon hand seal. The punch is so fast that the user's arms dissappear. 1 second later, a shock wave is sent from the opponents body that sends him flying. The punch is powerful enough to crush vital organs.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once
    -Sharingan of 3 tomoe can react aswell as Byakugan and Rinnegan
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Hayaton: Settou Kuri Yo Kaihou Kasai No Jutsu) Swift Release: Stealing Chestnuts Over an Open Fire Technique
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B-A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20-30
    Damage Points:20x2 (30x2 if added fire hands)
    Description: After training in Swift release, the user trained in stealing chest nuts over an open fire without using his KG to master this technique. after finally suceeding in this attack, the user incorporated his KG into this attack. Basically the user will punch something multiple times so fast that it looks like his arm(s) are becoming distorted and looking as if multiple arms are punching. Due to being used to heat, the user can coat his hands in fire to deliver even more devestating blows.
    Notes:
    -Sharingan of 3tomoe can react aswell as Byakugan and Rinnegan
    -Can be done with one fist or both
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Hayatōn: Bakuha Yokushi) Swift Release: Blast Check
    Type:attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: While in high speed the user will utilize the momentum to deliver a devestating punch or kick to the target that is capable of breaking bones and capable of sending the opponent flying into mid-range. It takes a lot of stamina and endurance to use this move so must have had training in taijutsu.
    Notes:
    -Must have had training in Taijutsu
    -Usable twice due to the strain on the user's arm or leg
    -Must use "Swift Release: Shadowless Flight" first
    -Sharingan of 3 tomoe can react aswell as Byakugan and Rinnegan
    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Kenboushou) - Illusion Technique: Amnesia
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User does ram hand seal and cast a genjutsu on their enemy, making them forget what they were just doing for a short moment.
    Declined, elaborate further on how it would work

    (Kage Bunshin Kibarashi) - Shadow Clone Recreation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    User's clone does a handseal for a shadow clone but instead of creating more clones, it disperse itself for a while and then appear again- recreating itself.
    -Only usable by shadow clones
    -Does not count as a sub
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Suiton: Faraday Ori) - Water release: Faraday Cage
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User create a cage around themselves made of well conductive water that shileds the user from external electro-magnetic fields such as lightning or radio waves.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Faraday_cage
    -Doesn't need water source
    -Twice per battle
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Fuuton: Suihou Raishuu) - Wind release: Bubble Attack
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User sends his wind chakra underwater where they create a huge amount of small bubbles with it, those bubbles will raise up to the surface of water and will make anyone standing there sink down because it will not be just water anymore but water/air making it unable to be stood on and since it is lighter than water and there is less friction due to the bubbles, anyone standing there will "fall" underwater and possibly drown.
    note: It has nothing to do with bubble release as bubbles form naturaly under water if air is released there.
    Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 08-12-2011 at 02:55 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Yabusame) - ♦Water Release: Arrow Military Shark♦
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user first wets his arm (even though you need water to use this jutsu, the jutsu itself doesn’t provide any water source whatsoever. It’s up to the user to find a way to make his arm wet), then he punches the air in a chosen direction, using his massive strength to throw many drops of water, which are converted into deadly arrows through mere kinetic force. The arrows are quite rapid, being faster and stronger than regular weaponry such as kunai or shuriken.
    ~ The arm needs to be wet, however it doesn’t need to be soaked. The water contained in a regular bottle would suffice.
    ~ The user can infuse the water drops with wind chakra, increasing it’s speed, penetrative power, making the arrows extremely dangerous.
    ~ The user starts by being able to shot the water arrows once every two turns. After the two turns have passed, if the user uses it again, this time he won’t be able to use it for three turns. Every time used, the recovering time span is expanded, unless the user waits one additional turn from his recovering turns. (For example, if I shoot the arrows for the first time and then wait three turns, the recovering time will stay at 2)

    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Fuuton : kyousei doragon kaze waza ) ♦Wind Release: Great Dragon Wind Technique♦
    Rank: B-Rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user inhales air via his mouth and gathers up chakra into his chest, then the user can fire several large dragon-shaped wind balls at his opponent. The technique appears to require a lot of chakra to use, but if not careful this jutsu can become a more of a burden than an asset. The wind balls seem to be very accurately modeled after a dragon’s head with fine detail. These wind balls can cause great damage to a enemy.

    Approved
    (Suiton : genkaku kiri ) ♦Water Release: Illusionary mist♦
    Rank: B-Rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a chakra infused mist, almost identical to the one created by the hidden mist jutsu. However, this technique has a very peculiar ability; any foreign chakra to the user’s will be affected by a fragrance originated from the very own mist. The mist’ scent will put the target into a genjutsu where the user can make the opponent get restrained, see false objects, mistake his surroundings, etc.
    ~ The genjutsu kicks in 2 seconds after the user is inside the mist.
    ~ The mist is really thick and heavy, so only A-ranks or above will be able to push it away.
    ~ The user can’t hurt the opponent in the genjutsu and if the illusion is not realistic enough, it can be easily escaped of.
    ~ May only be used three times per battle.

    Declined, similar jutsu exists as a cannon technique

    ( Fuuton : Kaze kadou ) ♦Wind Release: Wind Vortex♦
    Rank: C-Rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After doing the needed seals, the user creates a small vortex of wind chakra around a projectile in the user's hand that spins at a rate of around 600 rpm. This effectively creates a small drill bit which can be used to 'drill' into whatever the object hits(1 cm per post unless pulled out), increasing the chances of penetration, as well as increased damage to flesh through ripping. The user can also bend the trajectory of said projectile once.
    ~ The user can only use this technique once every two turns
    ~ The user may only change the direction of the projectile once

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton: Doro Kyuuban) Earth Release: Mud Sucker
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: When the opponent is covered in mud, or the user makes mud appear on the battlefield, he focuses chakra in that mud and uses it to suck the opponent into the mud. It's very hard to get out of this mud
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle if the attack succeeded
    Note: no doton jutsus involving mud in the next turn.
    Declined, do not resubmit
    Feel free to add any restrictions.
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 08-12-2011 at 02:59 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Mizu-osore) - Demonic Illusion: Aquaphobia
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This is an advanced genjutsu that manipulates the fears of the target to induce a petrifying fear of water. Once the target is either standing on or fully submerged in a body of water the user makes the ram handseal and activates the technique. The target instantly becomes aquaphobic, becoming deathly afraid of water and drowning. They begin to panic immediately and attempt to run off the water, but due to their panic they lose control of their chakra and fall into the water. Once in the water they lose the ability to swim as they begin to flail their extremities in sloppy and jerky movements. Their heart rate climbs due to the panic and quickly uses up their last available oxygen. Within the turn they run out of oxygen and pass out, leaving them to drown in a watery grave.
    -Can only be used once the target is on or in a body of water.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Suiton: Mizukyuu) - Water Style: Water Globe
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user preforms a short series of hand seals gather the moisture in the air into a large sphere above the battlefield. The sphere is around ten meters in diameter and hovers several meters above the field. This sphere can then be used as a further source for water jutsu. After it is created it continues to replenish itself by pulling in more moisture for two turns, after which it falls to the earth and loses its form. However a suitable technique can counter the activation if timed right and preventing regeneration from overpowering the technique completely.
    -Can only be used twice per battle and must wait two turns before use again.
    -Lasts two turns once created.
    -No S rank water techniques the same turn activated.
    Approved
    (Futon: Bushōgoma) - Wind Style: Lazy Spinning Top
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will form three hand seals and gather the wind around an opponent into a vortex. The wind becomes a medium sized tornado that doesn't harm the target, but traps them in rapidly spinning walls of wind. The wind is in close proximity to the target making them susceptible to fire techniques while they're trapped in the tornado. This can also be created around the user as a means of defense.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    Approved

    (Mizuchi Kata: Renkaiten) - Form of the Water Dragon | Ripples that Change the World
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: The form of the water dragon is a style of the Ogame school which focuses on bypassing an enemy's guard with a quick alteration of the attack. With this technique the swordsman begins by holding the sword straight outward towards the target. They will then circle the sword around to their right and back above and behind their head ending with the sword being held horizontally back over the left shoulder so that the blade is completely hidden to the opponent. Then in a quick acceleration they swing the sword vertically downward with only the left hand on the grip. As the sword is moving down they then grab the hand guard with their right hand and push across turning the vertical strike into a horizontal strike while accelerating it even further. The combination of changing the direction of the slash while accelerating it at the same time makes it almost impossible to defend against.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used twice times per battle.
    ~Can only be reacted to by someone with enhanced reflexes (through doujutsu or a technique like the sixth sense).
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/gamaran/76/8

    (Kosen) - Iori's Teachings | Tiger Drill
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: The tiger drill is an Ogame school technique in which the swordsman amplifies the piercing power of their thrust through body movement. They will hold the sword at the very end of the hilt in one hand and step forward while thrusting the tip of the blade forward. As they do this they twist the arm holding the sword while simultaneously twisting their body and back leg in unison, creating incredible piercing power similar to a drill. The strength generated from this is capable of piercing through armor such as chain mail or even another sword. This can also be preformed using the the hand in a claw position creating a rasengan-like blow that sends the opponent rotating through the air backwards.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used twice times per battle.
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-43900...hapter-30.html
    Both Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raitoningusutairu - sūpāraitoninguridairekushon)Lightning Style-Super Lightning Redirection
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user will concentrate raton into their index and middle fingers to conduct an incoming Lightning blast from the opponent. In a fluid motion the user will absorb the raton through the index and middle fingers on one hand, pass it through there body, and launch it through the other index and middle fingers. The user must be careful because the slightest distraction could prove fatal because the user must make sure the lightning passes through his chest without touching his heart or he dies.
    * Can be used three times every battle *
    * Can only be used by Rinnegan On The Moon and who I teach *
    * This jutsu cant be used to redirect large scale non-concentrated lightning blast such as Kirin*
    *Can redirect S rank and lower techniques~

    (Kasai sutairu - gurandobōru-jutsu)Fire Style-Grand Fireball Jutsu
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform a long line of handseals and release a gigantic fireball from there mouth. This fireball will instantly disintegrate anything it comes in contact with. The downside is that this jutsu is extremely draining to the user causing dizziness and disorientation of movements.
    * Can only be used once a match *
    * This can be the only jutsu used that turn *
    * No fire jutsu the next turn due to how draining it is of katon chakra *
    * Dizzziness and Loss of Balance Follow*
    * Can only be used by Rinnegan On The Moon and anyone he teaches it to *

    Both Declined

    Summoning Animal: Red Cardinals
    Scroll Owner: Rinnegan On The Moon
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Approved On Page 246~

    (No japanese for summoning)Summoning Technique: Naki Tori The Sonic Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Naki Tori The Sonic Sound will appear. Naki Tori meaning songbird is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. She has a pink bill, black face and red body like most female Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Naki can use any fire technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals. Naki Tori can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    wind element :
    (Fuuton-Kaze fantomu jōtai) Wind Phantom State.
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack and defence
    Range: mid- long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: after the required handsigns, the user can transform parts or all of his/her body into the wind element and appears as a shimmer when caught by the light. In this state the user can freely move in the wind at intense speeds, In this state the user can attack by sharpening the wind parts of his body and using it as a type of sword or harden the limb and use it as a hammer of sorts. Whilst in this state the user cannot use any jutsu other than an maximum of B rank in Fuuton style.
    Note: can only use this jutsu three time per battle.
    Note: jutsu weakens user in defence and offence for one turn after he uses it
    Note: this only lasts for 3 turns
    Note : when the user moves super fast they see everything in a blur and cannot distinguish objects
    *only jaydennscott and mattchew1997 can teach this*


    raiton
    Name: ( raiton-Denki yugami)electric Distortion
    Rank: c
    type: Attack and defence
    Range: short - mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    damage : none (because it only messes up there senses )
    Description: This jutsu allows Lightning to distort vision and sound within a certain area. Since its the users jutsu,they are not affected by the distortion. This jutsu allows Lightning to mess with her opponent's ability to aim, as well as dodge. in order to use this the user must physically touch the enemy .
    Note: it only lasts for 4 turns
    Note : only jaydennscott can teach this
    Note: can only be used 8 times per battle
    can only be thought my jaydennscott


    Feel free to edit as u wish

    Both Declined// Do not resubmit the first jutsu. For the last jutsu, elaborate on how lightning disrupts one's vision and sound?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Honeton: Koukai)- Bone Release: Renewal
    Typeffense/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Points:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: One of the most advanced Shikotsumyaku technique. The user releases bone spikes from all over his body, completely covering his body with spikes and bone, removing all skin. And after being completely covered in spikes, the user cannot move, but by focusing chakra, the user can shoot the spikes out in all direction. The bones and all the skin is immediately regenerated. This technique is used when the user is unable to avoid a technique and will get hit by it, this is used to protect the user. The user resembles a hedgehog, just with spikes all over the body and not just the back.
    ~Can only be used twice.
    ~No bone techniques for 1 turn after usage.
    ~User is unable to move while he is covered in the spikes, and while he is regenerating.
    ~The spikes must be shot out on the same turn or the next turn.

    ~Pending~
    Approved

    (Doton: Ichichuuseki) Earth Release: Single Pillar
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Points: 10
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: One of the easiest earth techniques. The user sends chakra into the ground by being in contact with the ground(with any part of the body), and a small round pillar erupt instantly anywhere the user wishes to. The pillars damage can be compared to one of a simple punch. Being really small and fast, it is also really silent and doesn't make any vibrations when its formed.

    (Honeton: Shushi furi-ku) Bone Release: Finger Flick
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B (A)
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Points: 20 (30)
    Damage Points: 40 (60)
    Description: An advanced version of Ten Finger Drilling Bullets. Instead of shooting all 10, the user does a finger flick and instead shoots one(or two if used with both hands) finger bullet with much more speed and power than its predecessor. If the user wishes to, he can do a barrage of finger flicks shooting many bullets(thats the A rank). The bullets are very durable and don't lose speed or power easily.
    ~Cannot use Ten Finger Drilling Bullets for 1 turn(2 turns if used as A rank)
    ~When the A rank version is used for a second time during the battle, the user cannot use any more bone jutsus for 1 turn.

    ~Both Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Alright since ~Sanji~ placed me in charge and the contract holder of the King Cheetah's contract for the time being I am submitting these

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ouja Chiita Bosu Kuchiyose: Astrum) Summoning Technique: King Cheetah Boss Summoning: Astrum
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+80 if hit while it's running)
    Description: The user bites their thumb and slams it onto the ground and summon's Astrum. Astrum while sitting upright is roughly 6 feet tall, but while standing he is about 5 foot 5 inches tall. Astrum is the fastest of all King Cheetah summoning's and all land animal based summons, he is capable of reaching his top speed very quickly when he starts running and is next to impossible to keep track of without a doujutsu, even then it is incredibly hard to follow his movements. He is capable of traveling a great distance without his summoner near him. Astrum is also capable of talking and also capable of using all lightning based techniques the user knows up to S-Rank.

    Astrum is a proud and noble King Cheetah

    Note: Only Zanji Uchiha and ~Sanji~ are capable of summoning Astrum.
    Note: Summoning only lasts 3 turns
    Note: Cannot be summoned if he has already been summoned by the other summoner in the same battle
    Note: Can only use the elemental attacks twice.
    Note: Can only be summoned once.
    Co-Creator: ~Sanji~

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ouja Chiita Kuchiyose: Karakuri) Summoning Technique: King Cheetah Summoning: Dodge
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+80 if hit while it's running)
    Description: The user bites his thumb and slams his hand onto the ground and summon's Dodge, a King Cheetah. Dodge while sitting upright is roughly 5 feet tall and while standing on all four he is 4 foot 5 inches. Although he is not as fast as Astrum he is still remarkably fast, making it incredibly hard for anyone to follow, while doujutsu users have a hard time following him. He is capable of going a far distance without his summoner near him. Dodge is capable of talking, and is also capable of using any Wind techniques the user knows up to S-Rank.

    Dodge is highly temperamental, sarcastic, obnoxious and intentionally provokes his enemies just to see what makes them tick.

    Note: Can only be summoned by Zanji Uchiha
    Note: Summoning only lasts 4 turns
    Note: Can only use elemental based attacks 3 times.
    Note: Can only be summoned 2 times.

    Please Note: The reason I stated them being so fast is because in real life, Cheetah's are the fastest land animal on earth, easily reaching speeds of 112 - 120 km/h (70-75 mph) even at the start of a run they can go from 0 to over 100 km/h (62 mph), and since this is a Naruto based site I amped their speed to keep their speed inline with real life.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by BloodLust Loki View Post
    Resubmitting

    (Raiton:Kami no Hidari-te Raiton Haikiryou) - Kami's Lightning Displacement
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kami, being made of pure Lightning, can freely transform his body into Lightning and reappear either in the same location as before or one range away from where he was originally. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from physical attacks but cannot attack while in this form. The user can reform into there normal body at any time, but in this form they are vulnerable to Wind and Water attacks.
    Note: Cant attack in the form
    Note: Useable Once per battle
    Note: Can only be done with Hyena Mode: Kami
    Note: Lasts for One turn if not cancelled before hand.
    Note: Can reappear from Short to Side of enemy, Short to Mid, Mid to Long, and vice versa

    (Katon:Akuma no Migi-te Katon Haikiryou) - Akuma's Fire Displacement
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Akuma, being made of pure Fire, can freely transform his body into fire and reappear either in the same location as before or one range away from where he was originally. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from physical attacks but cannot attack while in this form. The user can reform into there normal body at any time, but in this form they are vulnerable to Water attacks.
    Note: Cant attack in the form
    Note: Useable Once per battle
    Note: Can only be done with Hyena Mode: Akuma
    Note: Lasts for One turn if not cancelled before hand.
    Note: Can reappear from Short to Side of enemy, Short to Mid, Mid to Long, and vice versa.

    New

    (Katon: Gurando Haiena Agos ) Fire Release: Jaws of Grand Cotta
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User forms 3 hand seals and breathes out a huge wave of fire that forms into the huge head of the Grand Cotta at the end of the stream of flames. The user can guide the fire to follow the opponent but must remain stationary and keep his hands together in the Tiger hand seal while controling the fire.
    -only people who have signed the hyena contract can use

    (Genjutsu: Kichigai Warai ) Illusionary Technique: Mad Laughter
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: While in Hyena Mode the user begins laughing which places the opponent in a genjutsu where they feel like they are begining to be driven mad by the laughter and lose focus, wishing for the sound to stop to the point they actually attack their own ears so they won't hear it anymore.
    -Must be in Hyena Mode
    -Lasts 3 turns
    -only people who have signed the hyena contract can use

    God of Mischief's Vibro Trident - Itazuna Toraidento
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage Points: 50
    Description: a vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall trident, It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki the Mandalorian mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The Trident automatically comes back to Loki at the begining of Loki's next turn unless prohibited. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase the cutting effectivity.
    Note: Can only be handled by Loki.
    Note: Can be infused with Lightning Chakra.
    Note: Can be infused with Wind Chakra.
    Note: Can be Thrown like a Kunai/spear from Short to Mid Range.
    Note: Can be Combined with Water Tecniques to make the Technique One Rank Stronger.
    Note: Has to wait 2 turns between each Water Combo before it can be used again.
    Note: Can only combine to make a water combo 3 times per fight.

    ~All Declined~ OP
    Resumbitting

    (Genjutsu: Kichigai Warai ) Illusionary Technique: Mad Laughter
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: While in Hyena Mode the user begins laughing which places the opponent in a genjutsu where they feel like they are begining to be driven mad by the laughter and lose focus, wishing for the sound to stop to the point they actually attack their own ears so they won't hear it anymore.
    -Must be in Hyena Mode
    -Lasts 1 turns
    -only people who have signed the hyena contract can use
    ~Declined~
    God of Mischief's Vibro Trident - Itazuna Toraidento
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage Points: 50
    Description: a vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall trident, It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki the Mandalorian mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The Trident automatically comes back to Loki at the begining of Loki's next turn unless prohibited. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase the cutting effectivity.
    Note: Can only be handled by Loki.
    Note: Can be infused with Lightning Chakra.
    Note: Can be infused with Wind Chakra.
    Note: Can be Thrown like a Kunai/spear from Short to Mid Range.
    Note: Can be Combined with Water Tecniques to make the Technique One Rank Stronger.
    Note: Has to wait 5 turns between each Water Combo before it can be used again.
    Note: Can only combine to make a water combo 2 times per fight.

    ~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit
    NEW

    Doton/Fuuton: Joushou Shouwakusei Hitoame: Earth/Wind Combo Style: Rising Asteroid Shower
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 80
    Description : User sends their Earth Chakra into the ground behind them. The earth, in huge chucks that resemble asteroids, raise 30 feet into the air, before decending quickly, covering the field in front of the user.
    Note: No other Earth Jutsu can be used in this turn.
    Note: No Earth Jutsu can have been used behind the user the turn before this jutsu is used.
    Note: User cannot be at Long Range when using this jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: No Earth Jutsu above B Ranked for 3 turns
    Note: Only Loki and Nagato.. may use
    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's

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    Gold Dust Customs techniques. I have an approved Yondaime Kazekage bio in my sig.

    (Sakin Nami no Jutsu) - Gold Dust Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: Use to create small objects made of gold for Attacking or Defense. No handseals required.
    Note: Can only be used by the 4th Kazekage.
    Note:Can only be taught by BloodLust Loki & Joker
    ~Approved~ All approved Gold techniques can be revoked if canon jutsu's are shown
    (Sakin Nami no Jutsu) - Golden Senbon Showers
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: 30
    Description: Golden Senbon rain from the sky, which can attack the opponent from above from different angle's and because of the heaviness of Gold dust, the user will duck slowly on his knees because of the pressure getting on him from above. Requires 3 handseals.
    Note: Can only be used by the 4th Kazekage.
    Note: Can only be taught by BloodLust Loki and Joker.
    ~Approved~ All approved Gold techniques can be revoked if canon jutsu's exist
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Hi Sentou)- Ice Release: Ice Punch
    Type: Supp
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: Ths user will focues a large amount off water a wind chakra createing a thin layer of ice or frost around the users hand, then the user will punch anything releasing their water and wind chakra freezing what was hit.
    -Can only be used 5 times per battle.
    - User must wait one turn to use any other ice jutsus.
    - Can only be taught by -Tauburn-
    -Freezes anything hit but if a person is hit they will freeze for single move.

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
    (Fuuton: Tsumetai Fuuton)- Wind: Chilled Wind
    Type: Supp
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will make 3 handseals releaseing his wind chakra into the air around themselves and will chill the wind very quickly. Doing so with a ice jutsu previesly used will chill and harden the ice jutsu.
    - Can only use with both hands free.

    ~Declined~
    (Hyouton: Seiteki Hinasu Youshiki)-Ice Release: Static Ice Make Style
    Type: Supp
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Ice Make Style is a form of fighting in which the user will summon, any premade inanimate objects, such as weapons, walls, gates, and even protective shields and such as domes or arm based sheilds, even just a simple shape, made completely of Ice. The summons can be summoned from either short range or mid range never at long range. The user will combine their Water and Wind chakra to form a frost like substance around the users body once done so the user will be able to activate summoning tattoos all around his body, but does not need blood to activate, only the users wind and water chakra. However Yuki Clan members are able to use this without having premade weapons, due to their actauly makeing their own Ice.
    - Static Ice Make Style Can only be activated, once in a battle and will last for 5 turns.
    - Only Pre made inanimate objects can be summoned useing Static Ice Make Style, unless ur part of the Yuki clan.
    - User Must have a complete list of premade objects stated in their Bio, unless they have a Yuki clan Bio.
    - Once Per every other turn the user must chose to "Rest", which will involve giving up one of the users 3 moves per every 2 turns. If user does not rest then Static Ice Make Style will be released if not "rested".
    - Will allow the user to summon any inanimate objects, counting as a move its self.
    - If the user still has to fight after using this jutsu the use must wait 3 turns before any other Ice jutsus may be used.

    ~Declined~
    Next is a Weapon if approved i will be dropping my old one Kaze Sai Katana

    (Nain Katachi Ken)- No Shape Blade
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a large bladed weapon with focusing chakra into it will make it so that the Blade will mold into a shape by the user own munipulation. The Shape in which the user molds the blade into well determine the strength, a small blade like a dagger or short sword will have a cost of only a D-Rank jutsu, a large version of swords will cost that of a C-Rank jutsu, While a sword the size of Samehada or a sheild even will cost that of an B-Rank jutsu, etc, etc. The Weapon its self is nothing other than a large Hilt made of chakra absoring metal with a long and tattered wrap on it.
    - Any Shapeing of the blade will cost it that of its rank mentioned above.
    - The weapon will have to wait atleast 2 turns per battle before being drawn/used.
    - The User is only able to use its shaping once per turn. but the weapon its self is able to shape countlessly.
    - Only -Tauburn- is able to wield the No Shape Blade.


    This next jutsu is only able to be used after the user uses (Tatsumaki Kobushi)- Tornado Fist
    AHAHAHAAAA ~Declined~
    (Raiton/Fuuton: Tatsumaki Kobushi kyuuzou)- Lightning/Wind: Tornado Fist Explosion
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After creating (Tatsumaki Kobushi)- Tornado Fist the user will release lightning and wind chakra into the tornado fist, which will be compressed by the tornado fist. The lightning will begin to crackle around in the tornado around the fist, and will make a blueish glow from the tornado. Once completed the lightning and wind will be released all at once causeing a larger tornado to blast out ward from the tornado fist and shoot towards the opponent or target.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Can only be used if taught by -Tauburn-
    - Can only be used if taught tornado fist by -Tauburn-

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu No Aki)-Water Release: Water Fall
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user makes a single hand seal and sends their suiton chakra into the sky above their opponent. They then manipulate the chakra so that it turns into a large volume of water, which in turn falls down on the enemy with a large amount of force. Due to the force, the enemy may be slammed against the ground and be overwhelmed by the weight of the water crashing down upon him.
    Note: After the water is created, it can be used as a water source.
    Note: Looks similar to "Earth Release: Mud Fall."

    (Suiton: Mizu Supiasutoraiku)-Water Release: Water Spear Strike
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user makes a single hand seal and sends their suiton chakra into the air near the opponent. They then use their suiton chakra to create a spear of highly condensed water in the air near the opponent. The user then uses their chakra to propel the spike into the opponent.
    Note: Does not require a water source.

    (Suiton: Kaiyō Kussaku)-Water Release: Ocean Excavation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes three hand seals and sends his water chakra into the ground all throughout the battle field. He then uses the chakra to gather up all of the water that is below the surface of the battlefield. He then uses his chakra to bring all of the water to the surface at once, instantly flooding the entire battle field.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: The result of this jutsu looks similar to when Kisame made an ocean when fighting Guy, however this jutsu happens instantaneously and rises from up from all of the surface that is going to be covered in the water.
    Note: This jutsu will retain it's depth due to the user holding it together with their chakra. Thus, it won't spread out across the land and lose all of it's depth.

    (Doton: Supaiku no Hashira)-Earth Release: Pillar to Spike
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: C Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user adds further shape manipulation to pillars of earth created by themselves or an opponent. The user manipulates the end/top of the pillar to form a razor sharp spear as it rises out of the ground, thus stabbing the enemy should they attempt to have the pillars push them through the air.
    Note: This technique refers to the pillars created by the "(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique," and will not work on pillars created by other techniques.
    ~All Declined~ All are too similar to existing jutsu's
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Hari no kōhai) Wind Release: Needle Devastation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user starts out by preforming 4 handsigns and inhaling some air, followed by the user spitting out hundreds of needles infused with wind chakra. Due to the wind element, the needles are capable of going clean through the opponent and are very fast. The user can also move their head back and forth so the needles go everywhere giving a widespread result, making it hard for the opponent to dodge.
    ~Can only be used twice in one battle
    ~This Jutsu can only be used every other turn
    ~No wind jutsu above A rank can be used until you can use this jutsu again
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698

    (Doton/Katon: Iki jigoku) Earth/Fire Release: Living Hell
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After preforming 10 handsigns the user will send there doton chakra through the ground and then create many microscopic holes in the ground. Then the user will commence sending their katon chakra through the microscopic holes and setting the whole field in front of them on Fire. This jutsu is nearly unblockable because the opponent has no way of knowing what is about to happen.
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~No Fire jutsu for the next two two turns and no S rank earth jutsu the next turn
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698

    (Kage Kurōku) Shadow Cloak
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 if used with Shadow Sewing)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will raise their shadow to surround them and make a cloak over them so that anything that makes contact with the Shadow cloak will immediately be under the shadow possession Jutsu. From this Shadow cloak the user can use the Shadow Sewing to impale the opponent. This cloak resembles the Jinchurriki cloak.
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698
    ~This cloak last 3 Turns
    ~Can only be used Twice per Battle
    ~No other Shadow techniques besides Sewing can be used while this cloak is active
    ~Must have finished Shadow training.
    ~All Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's and unrealistic
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Torikki Batafurai)-fire style:tricky butterflies
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70(+15 if a fire master like the uchihas)
    Description: the user release huge amount of chakra creating a lot of butterflies these butter flies are look like the regular butterflies so it will trick the opposite and will attacks him if the butterflies touched the opposite's body it will make a huge damage even it can kill him
    -can only used 3 times per battle
    -can't use any katon jutsu at the same time
    -can only used-tought by HyugaNeji


    (Raiton:Erekutorikku Tsuki)-lightning style:electric moon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put a very huge amount of chakra into his hands then rise his hands to the sky ,by that he is able to release a huge electric moon that can send to any direction and it even can go into a very deep spot on the ground
    -can't use any raiton jutsu at the same time
    -can only used 2 time per turn
    -can only used tought by HyugaNeji



    (Doton:Rikiddo Deido)-Earth style:liquid mud

    Type:Attack
    Rank:a
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:50
    Description: the user slam his foot into the ground releasing big amount of chakra then he turn the ground that under the opposite into a mud then by it his legs will be stuck and then quickly as the mud surround his lig the user release some fuuton chakra that will turn the mud into a groud again so he won't be able to move it



    (Katon:Enkou yari)-Fire style:flame spear

    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put huge amount of his katon chakra into his hand then he release it creating a flame spear that can reach the opposite on one second and if it reach the opposite it will Immediately kill him because it will go throught his body or it will burn all his body
    -can only used twice per turn
    -can't do any fire jutsu at the same turn
    - can only used by HyugaNeji



    (Raiton:Erekutorikku yari)-lightning style:electric spear

    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put huge amount of his raiton chakra into his hand then he release it creating an electric spear and the second it will touch it will shock him till he die or it will go throught his body killing him
    -can only used twice per turn
    -can't do any lightning jutsu at the same turn
    - can only used by HyugaNeji

    ~All Declined~ All OP add restrictions
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Futon: Futatsu no Kaze Futatsu no Sekai | Wind Release: Two Winds Two Worlds
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique requires mastery of wind. This technique allows the user to use the two most common gases in the atmosphere individually, instead of mixing them like regular wind users do. By performing an extra handseal after each wind technique and using more chakra in each technique, the user is able to compose his wind techniques entirely of Nitrogen or Oxygen. If the user chooses to compose the technique of Nitrogen, the technique will cost 10 chakra points more to perform. The technique will lose one rank in general strength, but it will also lose its normal weakness to fire and instead gains a two rank strength over fire. Should a fire technique overpower the wind technique, it will not turn into a fire & wind combo, since Nitrogen cannot be set ablaze. If the user chooses to compose the technique of Oxygen, the technique will cost 15 or 30 chakra more to perform. If the user spends 15 extra chakra points on the technique, the wind technique will lose one rank in general strength. If the user spends 30 extra chakra points on the technique, the wind technique will keep its original rank. All wind techniques composed completely of Oxygen will be extremely weak to all fire techniques and have a two rank weakness against all fire techniques. All techniques fully composed of Oxygen will be extremely proficient at enhancing the strength of fire that overcomes it, or is used in combination with it. The enhancements will follow this scale.
    C-ranked Oxygen technique: +10
    B-ranked Oxygen technique: +20
    A-ranked Oxygen technique: +30
    S-ranked Oxygen technique: +40
    Forbidden-ranked Oxygen technique: +60
    -Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
    ~Declined~ Restrictions are where?
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    Futon no Jutsu | Wind Style Technique
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 30-40
    Damage points: 60-80
    Description: By infusing the wind around him/her with their chakra, the user is able to control and manipulate wind. It is not possible to use this technique to empty an area of air. If this technique is used from a 2 meters distance or closer to a target, the target is able to feel the wind gathering and has time to react. This technique cannot be used to control an opponents wind techniques.
    -S-ranked version can only be used twice per match.
    -Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
    ~Declined~ Unrealistic
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    Hone no Jutsu | Bone Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: By infusing his/her bones with more chakra and by using the strongest bones in the body as a base for toughness, the user is able to create and use much stronger bones than he would normally have access to with his basic bone manipulation. The bones created with this jutsu can be manipulated into almost any form.
    -Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
    ~Declined~ Restrictions?
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    Futon: Kaze no Hōsoku | Wind Release: The Laws of the Wind
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 (10 every turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user infuses the air around him with his chakra, to develop a certain bond with the wind itself. While this technique is active, the user is able to feel every single shift and change in the wind.
    -Lasts for 5 turns.
    -Can only be used 3 times per match.
    -Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
    ~Declined~ 3 times per match and up to 5 turns is a bit too much
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    Futon: Saikuron | Wind Release: Cyclone
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage points: 120
    Description: The user slams his hands together, which causes the wind on the entire field to spin around the user as a gigantic cyclone. The users position when he performs the technique and the area 1 meter around him, will act as the eye of the cyclone and as such the user won’t be affected by the storm itself. The cyclone has the sharpness of the wind element.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Causes 15 damage to the user.
    -No Futon techniques the turn after this have been used.
    -Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
    ~Declined~ OP
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Demonic Illusion: Perpetual Agony (Genjutsu: Pāpechuaru Kunō)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 3o
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs any number hand seals to start. At this moment, when the hand seals are started, the Genjutsu starts to begin. Slowly, reality melts away, keeping the appearance of the hand seals being made (although they can be stopped at this point, as the illusion will make it seem as through they are being continued), so slow that it is hard for the opponent to notice with the naked eye.* As the hand symbols start to speed up in pace, so does the speed of the illusion setting in. A large cage is created around the target in the depths of Mu, or nothingness, and the target depicts multiple clones of the user gagging them and chaining them to the floor, bars, and roof of the cage, so they are suspended in mid-air, while the real thing still appears to be in front of them, in the cage, performing hand seals (although in reality the hand seals had been stopped being made as soon as the Genjutsu starts to set in, due to the fact that they are merely a distraction, to prevent the target from trying to escape the Genjutsu, while preparing for a more realistic attack, such as an Elemental Ninjutsu). The user can then torture the opponent for interrogation, or merely kill them directly. This can also be used to keep the opponent in place long enough to perform a jutsu that requires multiple hand seals, or for the user to remain still, such as summonings and Sage Mode. If the opponent is hurt, it will seem like it is coming from an invisible source, while if they are being spoken to it will seem to them as if they are hearing the voice in their head. The fake-real user (The Fake Illusion of the user in the Genjutsu) just continues to perform hand seals, not moving or speaking, as if preparing for something greater. The user can manipulate the illusion so that once the jutsu is complete, the fake user is the one talking to the target, or even have the fake user appear to deal the finishing blows.
    ~Can only be used three per battle, but only once successfully, meaning the jutsu has taken full effect and was completed.

    *Requires a Three Tomoe or more Sharingan, or a trained Byakugan, to notice. Although the Three Tomoe Sharingan will not be enough to escape the jutsu itself, it will be able to notice the changes due to the fact that it can see changes in chakra, unlike the One and Two Tomoe Sharingans.


    Demonic Illusion: Soul Slicing Wind (Genjutsu: Tamashī Suraisu-Fū)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 3o
    Damage Points: 6o
    Description: The user creates an illusion where the ground below the opponent becomes like a hardening muck that the opponent sinks into, slowly hardening around them. The target sinks in until they hallucinate suffication, which can be caused by the user. (Such as grabbing their throat and suffocating them, or using a jutsu to make the sinking seem or even become partially real.)


    Perpetual Agony: Falcon Kick (Pāpechuaru Itami: Rōtasukikku)
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid (When Starting) Point Blank (When Making Contact)
    Chakra Cost: 3o
    Damage Points: 6o
    Description: The user jumps into the air, does multiple flips in the air, building momentum, then uncurls and kicks the opponent on the with such intensity that the kick causes small flames on the user's leg that are easily put out.


    10,000 Years of Death (Shi no Man-Nen)
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 3o
    Damage Points: 6o
    Description: A stronger (And not to mention more serious) version of 1000 Years of Death, the user focuses chakra in their hand, and pulses it through the hand, creating enough force puncture through skin, muscle tissue, and even bone, making it not only more serious, but more fatal as well. It can be performed with one hand as well as without the dramatic effects, and used on any part of the opponent's body. Unlike 1000 Years of Death, it cannot be used with explosive tags, as seen being done by Naruto on Gaara when he was possessed by the One Tails.


    Lightning Release: Thor (Raiton: Thor)
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 3o
    Damage Points: 6o
    Description: The user focuses lightning chakra in their hand, and releases it outward in a small beam, capable of puncturing directly through solid stone and normal metals. If Chidori Sharp Spear, this is more like a sharpened pole or beam rather then a bladed weapon. The reach is about the same as Chidori Sharp Spear.

    ~All Declined~ All OP
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Scroll Owner:Yellow Flash Of the Leaf
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:Lind-Sama
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Daiken,Kasen


    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin:fukurou:Lind-sama) ( Summoning Technique:Giant Owl:Lord Lind)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)

    Description: Lind is the king of all owls and he is the most proudest and most strongest owl out of them all,He wont obey anyone Other than his summoner.He is the Size of gamabunta and has the the power to fly at extreme speeds and has full control of the sky.Lind can use Wind jutsus up till S-rank and If the summoner has been trained in Fire he/she can combine the jutsu to make a Fire/Wind technique.The summoner can put chakra into lind's wings to make his wings more powerful (Strength or Speed).He has huge wings and an aerodynamic tail, and he has White feathers.He attacks with his sharp talons or wind enhanced wings if he must resort to physical attacks.Lind is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to lind before he/she can summon him or even stand on his back (although Yellow Flash of the Leaf is an exception, as I hold the contract).

    *Note*
    -Stays in battle for 5 turns.
    -Can fly for all 5 turns
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -User rides on Lind's back
    -Can use wind up to S-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves and also fire combination allowed.
    -Must have signed the Contract of the owls (held by Yellow Flash of the Leaf)

    OTHER SUMMONING ANIMALS TRIED TO CONTACT:Daiken & Kasen

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin fukurou: Daiken) Summoning Technique:Giant Owl: Daiken
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: short - long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 depends on the jutsu
    Description: Daiken is the personal Owl summon of Yellow Flash of the Leaf. He is very calm, friendly, and is extremely loyal to Yellow Flash of the Leaf. He is twice the size of Gamatatsu, and has the ability to fly at high speeds and he also has a wide array of aerial maneuvers. The Jutsus he can use are Fire up to A Rank. When using fire, he can channel fire chakra throughout his body, and even to the tips of his wings and tail, making them glow with fire. He has large wings and a small tail, and he has Gold, red feathers.He attacks with his sharp Beak if he must resort to physical attacks.Daiken can only be summoned by Yellow Flash of the Leaf, and they are good Friends Thanks to it.

    *Note*
    *Stays in battle for 3 turns.
    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *Can use fire up to A-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves
    *Can only be summoned by Yellow Flash Of the Leaf and anyone who he specifically teaches
    *Daiken's size twice that of Gamatatsu

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin fukurou:Kasen) Summoning technique:Giant Owl:Kasen
    Type:Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (depends on jutsu)
    Description: Isuma is a large owl and half the size of Gamabunta.Kasen is the Owl Madam of the sea, and can use suiton up to S-rank. Since she is a Owl, Isamu can fly extremly fast and has complete control and a vast array of aerial movements. A user of the contract gains control over the Owl, and can fly on Isamu’s back. Isamu is a very Smart,obedient Owl that cares for those who summon her. She tries her hardest in battle, and will do whatever is asked of her. She has white and blue feathers that cover her body and huge wings, as well as sharp beak and Talons for combat.

    *Note*
    *This Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns
    *Can fly for every turn
    *This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Owl Contract.
    *This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle
    *Summoner rides on Kasen's back
    *Can use water justu up to S-rank and count as one the users three moves if she uses water technique.


    PS: Please feel free to edit it if there are any problems.
    ~Declined~
     
         
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