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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Seto Kaiba View Post
    (Jukenpo:shiro Jiten ) -
    8 trigrams: white rotation
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: close
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This is a unique type of rotation that requires the addition of a little quantity of wind chakra to the normal chakra needed for rotation.first off,the user channels out wind based chakra through all 361 chakra points whilst,immediately following it with the channelling out of non-elemental chakra,making they two almost close before rotating rapidly, thus using the wind chakra as a sheild against opposite/weaker elemental attacks. whilst in rotating motion the chakra dome gives off a whitish like color, unlike the normal rotation,hence the name.
    -must be a hyuuga clan member.
    - twice per battle.
    -this is a good defense against certain lightning based jutsus but leaves the user completely open for some certain fire jutsu.
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    (Jukenpo:chakassh Jiten ) -
    8 trigrams: brown rotation
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: close
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This is a unique type of rotation that requires the addition of a little quantity of earth chakra to the normal chakra needed for rotation.first off,the user channels out earth based chakra through all 361 chakra points whilst,immediately following it with the channelling out of non-elemental chakra,making they two almost close before rotating rapidly, thus using the earth chakra as a sheild against opposite/weaker elemental attacks. whilst in rotating motion the chakra dome gives off a brownish like color, unlike the normal rotation,hence the name.
    -must be a hyuuga clan member.
    - twice per battle.
    -this is a good defense against certain water based jutsus but leaves the user completely open for some certain lightning jutsu.
    ~Approved~

    Custom weapon

    (akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short/long
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A(20+ gen)
    Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are three in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked.Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion.
    Because of its portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.

    -Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
    -when weilded,every genjutsu used by the user,gain's +20 damage points.
    -Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.
    ~Declined~ Needs a chakra cost.

    I would make the tones as seperate jutsus,if approved^^

    (hiebie ame no jutsu):cold rain technique
    Rank: S
    Type:Defence
    Range:long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:After making the required set of handseal,the user causes an extremely cold rain to continously shower the emidiate area.due to the coldness and heavyness of this rain every fire jutsu performed under it,gets reduced.
    -must have mastered rain release.
    -lasts for 5 turns and once per battle
    -no rain jutsu for one after it ends.
    -Reduces,every fire jutsu by one rank.
    ~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists

    (Fuuton: Sukai Toku) - Wind style: sky shield
    Rank: S
    Type: defense
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The users focuses and channels a certain amount of wind chakra into their head,then he or she manipulates the chakra into a large flat sphere of wind,more like a flat hat atop the users head,which is large enough to shade the user's whole body and acts as a barrier against attack from skywards.
    -useable twice.
    -lasts for 3 turns
    ~Approved~ note that this attack should be weak to Aerial Fire attacks.

    (fuuton-fuduo enban) wind style-floating disk
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user gathe's a great amount of wind chakra in both legs,then creates a sphere of wind beneath both feets,which grants them ability to float on the air and by channeling more wind chakra into the sphere,they are able to navigate to any part of the battlefield whilst on the sphere.this is similar to garra's floating sand but resembles a round disk.
    -twice per battle.
    -lasts for 3 turns.
    ~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost. Similar technique exists.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton:kishu tekunikku)water rider technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:When the user is holding onto a wire or any orther solid thing they will disolve into water within a second and can travel along the wire this makes it extremely hard for the user to be damaged because they are water and are moving fast.
    ~lasts 1 turn (obvi)

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    (suiton kishu tekunikku jinsoku seme)Water rider swift attack
    Rank:B
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:40
    Description:
    While the user is using Water rider technique the can partly form a hand which has water kunai and shurkien in the user will then throw them at the targeted person while moving and because they are still techniqly water they cant be hurt easily.
    ~Must be used while using Water rider tech.

    Custom weapon:
    ( kyuuketsuki ken)Vampire Blade.
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementry
    Range:Short
    Damage:N/A(+10 against uchiha)
    Description:
    The balde has a black hand grip while the rest of it is pure red the same shade of red as blood.The blade does extra damage against uchiha because is is infused with ancient magic which makes it deal more damage to clans that are atracted to violence such as the uchiha clan.The metel of the blade is also stainless.
    ~All Declined~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning request

    Summoning Animal: black cockatoo
    Scroll Owner: Jaydennscott
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A


    ~Declined. I googled and it seems like that they belong in the same family as parrots and there's another member who has this contract~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by jaydennscott View Post
    Summoning request

    Summoning Animal: hippogriff
    Scroll Owner: Jaydennscott
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    This will be declined, no mythical creatures


    My submission:

    (Kaen Rai Mo-Do) - Blazing Lightning Mode
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra cost:50 (-20 per turn)
    Damage Points: see below
    Description: The user will focus a lot of fire/lightning chakra together throughout and around their entire body. This will turn their skin a red like colour as though they have been burnt by steam, some flames will appear around the users body touching it, but not quite burning them aswell as unfocused lightning bolts all around the users body. In this mode the users fire and lightning jutsu are boosted by +15, but they are unable to perform earth or water elements while this mode is active. In this mode, the user can stamp their foot on the ground pushing forwards, launching themselves like a blast of lightning in any direction, though this counts as one of the users jutsu and can only be used 4 times. This mode is a mainly for taijutsu use and with every taijutsu attack the user makes, the fire and lightning will surround that part of the users body increasing the attack by +20 do to the damage of the fire/lightning. The lightning will be released from the attack too, creating a parylising effect on the target.

    Note: Taijutsu get +20
    Note: Fire/lightning get +15
    Note: Lasts for 5 turns or until canceled
    Note: Can't use water or wind in this mode
    Note: The user takes 40 damage from the burning of the fire
    Note: If this mode is active for the full 5 turns the user can't use fire or lightning afterwards
    Note: No genjutsu while in this mode.
    Note: If someone hits the used in this mode with taijutsu, they will take fire damage and shocks from the lightning

    Looks:


    Declined

    (doton: tsuchi kakujuu) - Earth style: Earth expansion
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: +25
    Description: After releasing a earth jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the earth jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the earth jutsu boosting any earth jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the earth jutsu will grow in size and become more dense addding to its power.

    Note: Can only use used on earth the user or the users summon has created
    Note: Can only be used once one each earth jutsu creates
    Note: can only be used 3 times
    Approved
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 08-25-2011 at 09:52 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by HyugaNeji View Post
    (Katon:Torikki Batafurai)-fire style:tricky butterflies
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70(+15 if a fire master like the uchihas)
    Description: the user release huge amount of chakra creating a lot of butterflies these butter flies are look like the regular butterflies so it will trick the opposite and will attacks him if the butterflies touched the opposite's body it will make a huge damage even it can kill him
    -can only used 3 times per battle
    -can't use any katon jutsu at the same time
    -can only used-tought by HyugaNeji


    (Raiton:Erekutorikku Tsuki)-lightning style:electric moon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put a very huge amount of chakra into his hands then rise his hands to the sky ,by that he is able to release a huge electric moon that can send to any direction and it even can go into a very deep spot on the ground
    -can't use any raiton jutsu at the same time
    -can only used 2 time per turn
    -can only used tought by HyugaNeji



    (Doton:Rikiddo Deido)-Earth style:liquid mud

    Type:Attack
    Rank:a
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:50
    Description: the user slam his foot into the ground releasing big amount of chakra then he turn the ground that under the opposite into a mud then by it his legs will be stuck and then quickly as the mud surround his lig the user release some fuuton chakra that will turn the mud into a groud again so he won't be able to move it



    (Katon:Enkou yari)-Fire style:flame spear

    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put huge amount of his katon chakra into his hand then he release it creating a flame spear that can reach the opposite on one second and if it reach the opposite it will Immediately kill him because it will go throught his body or it will burn all his body
    -can only used twice per turn
    -can't do any fire jutsu at the same turn
    - can only used by HyugaNeji



    (Raiton:Erekutorikku yari)-lightning style:electric spear

    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put huge amount of his raiton chakra into his hand then he release it creating an electric spear and the second it will touch it will shock him till he die or it will go throught his body killing him
    -can only used twice per turn
    -can't do any lightning jutsu at the same turn
    - can only used by HyugaNeji

    ~All Declined~ All OP add restrictions
    re post add restrictions

    (Katon:Torikki Batafurai)-fire style:tricky butterflies
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70(+15 if a fire master like the uchihas)
    Description: the user release huge amount of chakra creating a lot of butterflies these butter flies are look like the regular butterflies so it will trick the opposite and will attacks him if the butterflies touched the opposite's body it will make a huge damage even it can kill him
    -can only used 3 times per battle
    -can't use any katon jutsu at the same time
    -can only used-tought by HyugaNeji
    - can't use and wind jutsu at the same turn
    -only and -can't use any wind jutsu with this
    -must mastered katon
    -must mastered katon aact


    (Raiton:Erekutorikku Tsuki)-lightning style:electric moon
    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put a very huge amount of chakra into his hands then rise his hands to the sky ,by that he is able to release a huge electric moon that can send to any direction and it even can go into a very deep spot on the ground
    -can't use any raiton jutsu at the same time
    -can only used 2 time per turn
    -can only used tought by HyugaNeji
    -only and -can't use any wind jutsu with this
    -must mastered raiton
    -must mastered raiton aact

    Both Declined, do not resubmit
    (Doton:Rikiddo Deido)-Earth style:liquid mud

    Type:Attack
    Rank:a
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:50
    Description: the user slam his foot into the ground releasing big amount of chakra then he turn the ground that under the opposite into a mud then by it his legs will be stuck and then quickly as the mud surround his lig the user release some fuuton chakra that will turn the mud into a groud again so he won't be able to move it
    -can only make twice per battle
    -can only used or tought by HyugaNeji
    -can't use any doton jutsu at the same turn


    (Katon:Enkou yari)-Fire style:flame spear

    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put huge amount of his katon chakra into his hand then he release it creating a flame spear that can reach the opposite on one second and if it reach the opposite it will Immediately kill him because it will go throught his body or it will burn all his body
    -can only used twice per turn
    -can't do any fire jutsu at the same turn
    - can only used by HyugaNeji
    -can't use any wind jutsu with this
    -must mastered katon
    -must mastered katon aact



    (Raiton:Erekutorikku yari)-lightning style:electric spear

    Type:Attack
    Rank:s
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:70
    Description: the user put huge amount of his raiton chakra into his hand then he release it creating an electric spear and the second it will touch it will shock him till he die or it will go throught his body killing him
    -can only used twice per turn
    -can't do any lightning jutsu at the same turn
    - can only used by HyugaNeji
    -can't use any water jutsu with this
    -must mastered raiton
    -must mastered raiton aact

    All Declined, similar jutsu exist
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 08-25-2011 at 10:01 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Jigoku no ichi-nichi) Genjutsu: A Day In Hell

    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user puts his oppent into a genjutsu where the oppent believes he is being burned alive and the oppents mind can stay that way for up to 24 hours depending on the ninja its used againist due to the nature and strenght of this attack it takes up a very large amount of chakra

    Note:Can only be used by Itachi Uchiha1992
    Note:Can only be used once a battle
    Note:Can only use B ranked Genjutsus for the rest of the match after using this

    (Fuuton:Sen no kaze no genzai no)Wind Release- The Current of a Thousand Winds

    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: the user focus alot of their fuuton chakra into their lungs after its all gathered up the user will then due three hands signs and release a giant gusts of wind.. the gusts of wind are powerful enough to blow any object away and destroy large thick trees

    Note:Can only be used once seven turns and can only be used by Itachi Uchiha1992

    Both declined, do not resubmit

    (Katon:Uzumaku honoo) Fire Release- Swirling Flames

    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: the user will punch and kick their oppent in the air after the oppent is up there the user will take a deep breath in and do four handseals and a stream of fire while the stream is being released the user will shape and spin the stream of fire into a giant vortex of fire and send it at his oppent before they hit the ground

    Note:Can only be used by Itachi Uchiha1992
    Note:Can be used twice per Match
    Note:Cant use any more S ranked jutsu for 1 turn
    Declined, similar jutsu exists
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 08-25-2011 at 10:02 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Lord Danzo View Post
    Wind Style: Hidden Ceiling
    (Futon: hitoshirezu uchibari)
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Decription: The user creates a large barrier of wind over the top of the battlefield. The barrier is split in two halves that move in opposite directions. This causes things that hit the top of the barrier to be thrown in random directions while things that hit the bottom of the barrier are thrown straight down. The ceiling is invisible due to it being made of the wind element though it can be seen by doujutsu.
    ~Can only be used twice.
    ~Remains over the battlefield for a turn after creation.
    ~Declined~


    Form of the Fire God | Pillar of Fire
    (Kagatsuchi Kata: Hibashira)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The form of the fire god is a stance of the Ogame school in which the swordsman focuses on raw power for their attacks. In this technique the swordsman holds the sword over their head in their right hand with the tip pointed down so the blade is vertical and splitting their face. Their left hand is held horizonatally over their head with the fist bisecting the right elbow. They then flick the sword up while at the same time flicking their left hand up so both the sword and their left hand are now pointing up, and then they will bring the sword down in a whipping motion putting the full force of the attack in the tip of the blade. They use their entire body by dropping to the ground and bringing the left arm down as well to create as much power as possible. This makes their attacks capable of breaking through solid steel such as other swords or staffs.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used thrice per battle.
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-26588...chapter-3.html
    ~Declined~
    Form of the Fire God | Spinning Crimson Lotus
    (Kagatsuchi Kata: Gurensen)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The form of the fire god is a style of the Ogame school in which the swordsman focuses on raw power for their attacks. In this technique the user with their right arm across their body bent at the elbow so their form is vertical and the wrist is in front of the left eye. The left arm is is held perpendicular to the base of the right forearm across the chest and sword in the left hand with the blade extending back behind the swordsman. They will then drive their right elbow back and up while swiping the sword in the left hand horizontally across their body. This creates a circular attack that can strike multiple enemies with tremendous power capable of slicing through steel.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used thrice per battle.
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-46856...hapter-35.html
    ~Declined~
    Form of the Void | Shadow Stitch
    (Oboro Kata: Kagenui)
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The form of the void is a style of the Ogame school in which the swordsman makes quick movements to simultaneously dodge an attack and close the distance on their target. With this technique the swordsman rotates their body to narrowly avoid an incoming attack while simultaneously stepping forward to close the distance to their opponent. By doing this they move into extremely close range while the opponent over extends themselves, creating an opening for attack while the opponent is incapable of defending themselves.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used thrice per battle to avoid melee attacks.
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-26591...chapter-6.html
    ~Declined~

    Wind Style: Hidden Ceiling
    (Futon: hitoshirezu uchibari)
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Decription: The user creates a large barrier of wind over the top of the battlefield. The barrier is split in two halves that move in opposite directions. This causes things that hit the top of the barrier to be thrown to the left while things that hit the bottom of the barrier are thrown straight down. The ceiling is very hard to see due to it being made of the wind element.
    ~Can only be used twice.
    ~Remains over the battlefield for a turn after creation.
    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    Form of the Fire God | Pillar of Fire
    (Kagatsuchi Kata: Hibashira)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The form of the fire god is a stance of the Ogame school in which the swordsman focuses on raw power for their attacks. In this technique the swordsman holds the sword over their head in their right hand with the tip pointed down so the blade is vertical and splitting their face. Their left hand is held horizonatally over their head with the fist bisecting the right elbow. First they focus chakra to their arms to increase their stength and then they flick the sword up while at the same time flicking their left hand up so both the sword and their left hand are now pointing up, and then they will bring the sword down in a whipping motion putting the full force of the attack in the tip of the blade. They use their entire body by dropping to the ground and bringing the left arm down as well to create as much power as possible. This makes their attacks capable of breaking through solid steel such as other swords or staffs.
    -Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-26588...chapter-3.html


    Form of the Fire God | Spinning Crimson Lotus
    (Kagatsuchi Kata: Gurensen)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The form of the fire god is a style of the Ogame school in which the swordsman focuses on raw power for their attacks. In this technique the user with their right arm across their body bent at the elbow so their form is vertical and the wrist is in front of the left eye. The left arm is is held perpendicular to the base of the right forearm across the chest and sword in the left hand with the blade extending back behind the swordsman. They then charge chakra into their arms to increase their strength and drive their right elbow back and up while swiping the sword in the left hand horizontally across their body. This creates a circular attack that can strike multiple enemies with tremendous power capable of slicing through steel.
    -Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-46856...hapter-35.html


    Form of the Void | Shadow Stitch
    (Oboro Kata: Kagenui)
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The form of the void is a style of the Ogame school in which the swordsman makes quick movements to simultaneously dodge an attack and close the distance on their target. With this technique the swordsman rotates their body to narrowly avoid an incoming attack while simultaneously stepping forward to close the distance to their opponent. By doing this they move into extremely close range while the opponent over extends themselves, creating an opening for attack while the opponent is incapable of defending themselves.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle to avoid melee attacks.
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-26591...chapter-6.html


    Esoteric Technique | Demon's Return
    (Onigaeshi)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 40
    Description: This is an Ogame school technique outside the five main elemental styles. For this attack the swordsman first preforms a downward vertical slash. If the enemy dodges by stepping backwards the swordsman then preforms an upward slash while rotating their their arm, sliding their shoulder forward and turning the neck, thus dislodging the shoulder blade and extending the reach of their strike. They then preform a secondary slash, this time upwards that will catch the enemy off guard as they think they're out of range.
    ~Can only be used by a person trained in the Ogame school of kenjutsu.
    ~Can only be used twice times per battle.
    ~Can be seen here if the description isn't clear enough: http://www.mangareader.net/408-49949...hapter-42.html
    All Declined
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Misuto Henkan) - Water Style: Mist Transformation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra:30(-10 each turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will focus water chakra all over his body and turn it into mist. In this state he is able to merge with water (since mist is practically water just of lower quantity). While he is in that state he looks completely normal until an attack passes through him. Since he’s intangible, the user has to constantly focus a lot of chakra to keep his body in one piece (since he is made of mist).
    *This jutsu doesn’t require any water source
    *User can't use any taijutsu since mist isn't strong like water in Suigetsu's case

    Just to clarify - there already exists a jutsu that replaces the user with mist (just like water replacement - similar description etc.). My jutsu is more similar to Izuna and Goro's water transformation.


    (Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Style Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Descripton: The user is able to make clearly visible objects by using their chakra to dense and move the lightning at great speed (if he creates a pillar one cannot stand on it like he could on earth). Jutsu can be used to create shapes like small sized pillars of lightning, tools, and shields of lightning (Just like earth style technique).

    (Taibu Raiton no Jutsu ) Greater Lightning Style Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: attack/defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user is able to make clearly visible objects by using their chakra to dense and move the lighting at great speed (if he creates a pillar one cannot stand on it like he could on earth). Jutsu can be used to create shapes like medium sized pillars of lightning, tools, and shields of lightning (Just like earth style technique with more chakra used in order to make objects bigger and stronger).

    (Katon No Jutsu) - Fire Style Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Descripton: The user is able to make clearly visible objects by using their chakra to dense and move the fire at great speed (if he creates a pillar one cannot stand on it like he could on earth). Jutsu can be used to create shapes like small sized pillars of fire, tools, and shields of fire (Just like earth style technique).

    (Taibu Katon no Jutsu ) Greater Fire Style Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: attack/defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user is able to make clearly visible objects by using their chakra to dense and move the fire at great speed (if he creates a pillar one cannot stand on it like he could on earth). Jutsu can be used to create shapes like medium sized pillars of fire, tools, and shields of fire (Just like earth style technique with more chakra used in order to make objects bigger and stronger).

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    New week

    (Suiton: Mainā Suirou No Jutsu) Water Style: Lesser Water Prison
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user is able to make smaller (maximum diameter of 0.5m) sphere-shaped water prisons by utilizing their suiton chakra. Since they are smaller than regular "Water Prison" jutsu they can be created faster and without having to keep their hand on the sphere.

    (Suiton: Mainā Suirou No Jutsu) Water Style: Water Prison Crush
    Rank: A/S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30/40
    Damage Points: 60/80
    Description: By taking control of "Water Prison" user can cause it to "shrink" to any extent he wants (he can shrink just a bit if he wants to, for example, torture someone or shrink it to it's fullest thus compressing the opponent in small orb of water) with formidable speed and force.
    *Using S-ranked version once will result in no S-rank jutsus next turn
    *Using S-ranked version twice will result in no S rank or A rank jutsu next turn

    (Katon: Kaen ma Kabe)- Fire Style: Flame Demon Wall
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Jutsu is a fully controllable vortex of flame which forms around the user after rather long preparation. It is utilized by combining the atmosphere with the users chakra and altering the atmosphere property to create fire from, basically, nothing. The user can also affect the atmosphere inside the vortex weakening there opponents with the heat or smoke. Vortex can spread to circle on a maximum of mid range around the user. If needed, user can redirect parts of vortex to attack his opponent on the outside or inside of it. All fire jutsus have +30 damage while they are inside of vortex range and user doesn't have to do any hand seals to perform them. If the vortex of fire is extinguished user can easily recreate it since the atmosphere changes haven't dissapeared.
    *Can be used only once
    *After the turn in which this jutsu is used, it takes 9 more to complete and use it (All in all - for jutsu to be used it takes 10 whole turns)
    *If user uses any fire style jutsu while this jutsu is in process of creation, process will stop and it won't be able to get started again
    *After jutsu's creation user will be able to use fire style and fire style only for the rest of battle
    *After jutsu's creation user can't be harmed by fire
    *Can be used only once

    btw If jutsu's idea is approvable and you think that 10 turns is too much pls be so kind to lower the number

    (Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger.

    (Suiton: Chakurasenshingu Suibun) - Water Style: Chakra Sensing Moisture
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: This jutsu is based on "Chakra Sensing Rain", but in this case user spreads his chakra throughout the ground and moisturizes it with same type of water that is used in "Chakra Sensing Rain". Through that moisture he can sense any surface or underground motion. It can be also scattered and mixed with normal water (e.g. lake) to produce same effect.
    *Co-created with Izuna Uchiha

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    Another New Week :D

    (Suiton: Appurippu!) - Water Style: Rip-up!
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By using water chakra user will "rip-up" water molecules (H2O) and separate them thus seemingly "erasing" a body of water. After user separates them he has to keep them divided by coating them with chakra in order for them to not merge again into water. Since technique requires precision, substantial amount of chakra and a lot of concentration the body of water can't be too big or else the technique will fail (biggest amount of water user can "erase" is roughly the size of "Water Dragon Bullet").
    *Due to complexity of jutsu it can only be used twice
    *can only be used by Kaziname

    (Suiton: Eakurīnā) - Water Style: Air Cleaner
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By using water chakra user will implement some of his chakra into moisture in the air. After that user will execute one hand seal and from that moment on, moisture will mix with and neutralize any potential poison or deadly gas by combining with them in perfectly harmless compund.
    *Can be only used twice
    *Can be only used by Kaziname

    (Shio no Hakobi-shu) - Tide Bringer
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This sword was said to be wielded even by the infamous "Blackbeard". Sword was held as the strongest of all swords on the sea and gave the user unparalleled mastery over water element. However, sword fell into oblivion once "Goddess of Water", strongest of all, was retrieved from the depths of seas. As everyone's attention followed "Goddess of Water", blood trail left by "Tide Bringer" was almost lost... There is rumor that some ninja found it and claimed it as his own, but it will take a while for the glory of "Tide Bringer" to reach it's old proportions.
    *The user will not need to perform any hand seals to perform water jutsus at all for as long he has Tide Bringer.
    *Sword gives the user's water jutsus +15 and the opponent -5 to his.
    *Sword can be infused with water chakra to attain chainsaw-like blade.
    Notes:
    *Sword is indestructible, though that doesn't mean it can destroy everything.
    *Looks: http://saberandsword.com/images/25-898A.jpg

    (Raiton: Nō shigeki sōchi) - Lightning Style: Brain Stimulator
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using similar mechanics as in "Lightning Armour" of 4th Raikage user can, by using lightning chakra, speed up all brain functions instead of body functions. Human eye picks-up around 300 fps which allows humans to see things as in slow motion. However, since brain has to process numerous tasks other than sight, it processes only around 30 fps. With use of this jutsu user's brain gains the ability to process all 300 fps.
    *Since jutsu requires extreme precision with lightning chakra user can't use any other lightning jutsus while this one is in effect
    *Can be only used by Kaziname
    *Can be only used once
    *Can be only used for a maximum of [X] turns (fill in the number if you think it is required)
    All Declined, do not add new weeks submitions to an old post make new ones in future
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Aburame Hijutsu: hoiku saiinzai) - ♦ Aburame Hijutsu: Nurturing Aphrodisiac♦
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Support
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The ultimate Aburame jutsu, used as a last resource, is only known by the most proficient Aburame clan members. Only a handful of people know how to perform this jutsu and even a lower number is aware of its existence. The Aburame member will partially fuse with his own bugs, using their quick reproduction as cells to heal injuries at a very rapid pace. Depending on the number of bugs that the user has merged with, this technique’s healing speed will vary. For instance, each bug represents a 2% increase hence if the user were to merge with 20 bugs, it would represent a 40% increase in the healing factor. Likewise, the bugs that fused with the user can’t be used to battle, hence the more bugs the user uses, the less bugs he will be able to use for fighting.

    ~ The user can only use this technique once per battle
    ~ The user must be an Aburame, no exceptions.
    ~ If the user merges with too many bugs, it will be harder for him to actually have full control of his body hence the user should not fuse with too many.
    ~ The user may not use Aburame techniques for 2 turns after the usage of this technique.
    ~ Shall only be used as a last resort jutsu

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    (Raiton: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Raiton Release: Blades of Honor
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will channel Raiton chakra into the earth, channeling it underneath the enemy, as the Raiton gets under the opponent, with one handseal, spears or lighting will errupt form the ground, around the opponent, stabbing him from underneath.
    Note:
    -Can be used up to 2 times in a battle.
    -doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
    ~Declined~ one restriction for a S rank?
    (Sution&Katon: Moeru Kanketsusen) Water&Fire Release: Blazing Geysers
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: 130 [-10 to the user]
    Description: The user sends an enormous amount of his chakra through his feet underground, way down where ground-water can be found as this takes about no time, hence only those who has mastered the water are able to do it, then the user stomps on the ground making multiple tunnels underground, then sends an S-ranked Katon underground, boiling up the underground-water. The underground is filled with Boiling Water, and starts spewing out chakra from the ground immediately, geysey errupting going from the ground and up around 30 meters above ground, like multiple errupting geyseys. The geyseys that the ground shoots up are strong enough to burn the insides of the person(s) caught in it. The ground will continue shooting up boiling water up into the skies for two turns, covering the whole field, and because the water is made out of the user's chakra, he is immune to the geyseys that's shooting up. After the third turn, this enormous amount of water gathered in the air will come down, and the user has no control over the water which is striking down from top to bottom motion.
    Note:
    -If the user get cut in the boiling water while it's comming down in the 3rd turn, the user will burn.
    -Only those who mastered Katon and Sution can use this.
    -Because the user has used up all the water which was surrounding the battlefield, there will be no pre-existing water around.
    -The user will take -10 damage as he sents S-ranked fire in the tunnel, burning his feet.
    ~Declined~ OP
    (Katon: Appurufureimingu ) Fire release: Flaming Apple.
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: I Blow out Katon chakra arounding me, surrounding me with a really thick layer of Katon chakra, protecting me from any Elemental attacks, except water of the same rank.
    Note:
    -Can be used 1 time.
    -only S-ranked Wind or higher could cover the sphere up, leaving me burned inside, dying.
    -If I don't cancel it within 2 turns, I burn to death.
    -The user is able to release only fire attacks from the sphere.
    -Katon sphere that is surrouding me is really hot and if anyone comes in contact, it'll burn him up
    ~Declined~
    (Sution&Fuuton: Netto no appuru ) Water&Wind Release: Apple of Net
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user manipulates a soccerball sized waterball on his pointing finger, then me manipulates wind around it, then water like multiple spears enchanted with wind, will spread from the waterball.
    Note: Edit as much as needed.
    ~Declined~ No restrictions on a S rank
    (Raiton:Reikyaku tatchi) Lightning Release: Chilling Touch
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Hand-to-Hand
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Once the user touches his opponent's either his back, or rib cage with his palm, he releases a slight lightning into the opponent's body, disturbing the functions of nearby organs for a whole 2 turns.
    Note:
    -If the opponent is touched from anywhere other then the nearby organs, the limb goes numb for a whole 1 turn.
    -If the opponent is touched on the head, he'll loose his sight for 3 whole turns.
    ~Declined~
    Resubmitting:
    (Raiton: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Raiton Release: Blades of Honor
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will channel Raiton chakra into the earth, channeling it underneath the ground, and with one handseal, spears or lighting will errupt from the ground, under the opponent, stabbing him from underneath.
    Note:
    -Can be used up to 1 times in a battle.
    -doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
    -Only those who has mastered Raiton can use this.
    -You can't use any other lightning jutsus in the same turn, hence it will take up all your Raiton chakra.
    -In the next turn, you can't use any higher then a B-ranked lightning justu
    -Can be taugh only by Dr. House

    Approved

    (Sution&Katon: Moeru Kanketsusen) Water&Fire Release: Blazing Geysers
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage Points: 110
    Description:User makes 7 signs of handseals, while sending an enormous amount of his chakra through his feet underground, way down where ground-water can be found, hence only those who has mastered the water are able to do it, then the user stomps on the ground making multiple tunnels underground, then sends an S-ranked Katon underground, boiling up the underground-water. The underground is filled with boiling water, and starts spewing out chakra from the ground immediatelly, geyseys errupting going from the ground and up into the clouds, like multiple errupting geyseys. The geyseys that the ground shoots up are strong enough to burn the insides of the person(s) caught in it. The ground will continue shooting up boiling water up into the skies for a whole one turn, covering the whole field. After the turn, this enormous amount of water gathered in the air will come down in the second turn, and the user has no control over the water which is striking down from top to bottom motion.
    Note:
    -If the user get cut in the boiling water while it's coming down in the 2nd turn, the user will burn himself.
    -Can be only used 1 time, in a battle.
    -Only those who has mastered Katon and Suiton and Doton can use this.
    -Because the user has gathered up all the water from underground and from all over the field, when the boiling water will shoot down, the field will be covered with water, forming a giant lake under the user.
    -User will take 30 damage too if its used at mid range
    -The user will take -10 damage as he sents S-ranked fire in the tunnel, burning his feet.
    -The user won't be able to use anything higher then a C-rank fire or water jutsus in the next turn, cause of the impact of the jutsu on the user.
    -doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
    -due to the difficulty of this jutsu, the user must be a Kage or above
    -Can be taugh only by Dr. House

    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Katon: Appurufureimingu ) Fire release: Flaming House.
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will blow out an enormous fireball diagonally on the ground, carving out the earth, in it's path as becoming a lava ball.
    Note:
    -the ball has to be in contact with the earth at all times.
    -Can be used only once
    -Can't be used if the ground is muddy, only hardening it.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Summoning Animal: Rooster
    Scroll Owner: Dr. House
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: RoosterTeeth
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description: Mr. RoosterTeeth is a very silly animal, and it possesses quite the characteristics. Mr. RoosterTeeth is almost as big as Gamabunta, so it kind a has a big appetite.
    Declined

    (Raiton:Reikyaku tatchi) Lightning Release: Chilling Touch
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Hand-to-Hand
    Chakra Cost: 30 [ -5 each turn]
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Once the user touches his opponent's either his back, or rib cage with his palm, he releases a slight lightning into the opponent's body, disturbing the functions of nearby organs for a whole turn.
    Note:
    -If the opponent is touched from anywhere other then the nearby organs, the limb goes numb for a whole 1 turn.
    -the user won't be able to use any water jutsus when this is active.
    -the user has to constantly stream chakra onto his hands.
    -the user won't be able to handsign any jutsus but lightning, while this is active.

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦



    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iberian_Lynx (about the animal, if you want to know)

    Summoning Animal: Iberian lynx
    Scroll Owner: wonderwho
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Kingurinkusu
    Approved

    Kuchiose no jutsu: Kingurinkusu (Summoning technique: Lynx King)

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his finger and put the blood on a tatto on the user right hand. This summons Kingurinkusu, the king of all the lynx that can use any Doton jutsu of rank A or lower and Katon jutsus of B rank or lower. He is five times the size of Akamaru.
    He is very kind to the other Iberian Lynx, so he doesnt like to have them in the battlefield with him, because he doesnt want to hurt them.
    He is the only living being that can use the technique Kokoro no setsuzoku with his master, because they are like best friends.
    ~This summon lasts 4 turns
    ~He needs to be the only summon in the field (enemy summon doesnt count)
    ~His jutsu count as a move
    ~If he takes a S rank, two A rank jutsu or four B rank jutsu he is poofed away

    Declined, remove the ability
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Me no sakkaku and Kaminari no Ashi



    Kuchiose no jutsu:Me no sakkaku (Summoning technique: Ilusion eye)

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his finger and put the blood on a tatto on the user right hand. This summons Me no sakkaku, the elder lynx that can use any genjutsu of rank B or lower and Katon jutsus of B rank or lower. He is of Akamaru size.
    He is very selfish and hates the other Iberian Lynx. He is one of the olders lynxs and he is very wise.

    ~This summon lasts 4 turns
    ~He needs to be the only summon in the field (enemy summon doesnt count)
    ~His jutsu count as a move
    ~If he takes a A rank or two B rank jutsu he is poofed away

    Approved

    Kuchiose no jutsu: Kaminari no ashi (Summoning technique: Lighting leg)


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his finger and put the blood on a tatto on the his right hand. This summons Kaminari no ashi that can use any raiton jutsu of rank A or lower.
    He is a young lynx and the faster of all the lynx. He is still small but can carry one person on his back.
    He is faster at running than kisame in shark mode at swiming.
    ~This summon lasts 3 turns
    ~if he uses any jutsu it counts as one of the three moves
    ~If he takes a A rank or two B rank jutsu he is poofed away


    Declined, seriously remove the comparison of running and swimming you cant compare them


    this is the summoning tatto on the user right hand.




    Kokoro no setsuzoku (Mind connection)

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 13 per turn
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique can only be used by Kingurinkusu and wonderwho (his master) because they are like best friends and theyr minds have no problem in entering in each other.
    Kingurinkusu connect his mind with the master mind, making him able to read the master mind and the master able to read his mind. Because of that they can talk without the opponent knowing, and because of that he can see if the master is under a genjutsu.
    ~This technique lasts three turns.
    ~If Kingurinkusu or his master is under a genjutsu of B rank or higher this technique is cancelled until the genjutsu is removed or countered.

    Declined do not resubmit

    Edit wathever you want to make it approved. thanks
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Kurōsumasshu) - Water Release: Claw Smash
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: A water jutsu that is concentrated in the user's hand. Water starts to form around the users hand and forms the a lobster's claw shape. The user can crush the opponent with the claw or can hit the opponent like it was Chidori.
    Note: Can only be taught by Johninto Takashi
    Approved
    (Suiton: Tsume no gurabu) - Water Release: Claw Grab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Claw Smash by using form manipulation to extend it into a claw up to 10 meters in length. This claw is capable of splitting the enemy in half. This is a Claw Smash like technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by Johninto Takashi
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Tsuki to taiyō no burēdo) The Moon and Sun Blades
    Rank: A
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost N/A (20 for adding Suiton and 20 for adding Katon)
    Damage Cost: N/A (15 When adding chakra)
    Description: The Moon and Sun Blades are twin blades one is white and one is black. These swords were created by Johninto Takashi. When the user is holding the moon sword he can add his suiton chakra into the blade making covered in water and able to reach longer. When the user is holding the Sun sword he can add his katon chakra into the blade cover the blade in fire and causing the sword's range to be increased. The user can use both swords at once but can only put one chakra nature in one sword at once.
    Note: Can only be used by Johninto Takashi
    Note: Only one nature chakra can be used if user is holding both swords.
    Note: If added Suiton or Katon chakra it only last 3 turns and must wait 1 turn to infuse more chakra.
    Picture:
    Declined, provide the extra range they are given
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Frederick~ View Post
    (Sune-ku Kutsurogi) Snake Room:
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user slams their hands together and a room warps around the battlefield. The room is filled with thousands of snakes, these snakes can be bent to the user's will with out the need of handsigns.
    Note:
    -Must be able to summon snakes.
    -Only last for 3 turns
    -Can only be taught by ~Frederick~

    ~Declined~ what, no usage restriction? Also this is a summoning.

    (Sune-ku Utogi) Snake Pit:
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:The User make a quick handseal and opens the ground around the opponent, the "Pit" is filled with Snake's that can bite the opponent and bind them dragging them down as the pit closes over there head.
    Note:
    -Must be able to summon snakes.
    -Can only be taught by ~Frederick~

    ~Declined~ once again this is a summoning, you need to summon those snakes and 2nd this is also a doton jutsu as you open and close the earth.
    (Kchuysei: Sune-ku Kutsurogi) Summoning: Snake Room:
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user slams their hands together and a room warps around the battlefield. The room is filled with thousands of snakes, these snakes can be bent to the user's will with out the need of handsigns.
    Note:
    -Must be able to summon snakes.
    -Can only be used twice.
    -Only last for 3 turns
    -Can only be taught by ~Frederick~


    (Doton/Kchuysei: Sune-ku Utogi) Earth Release/Summoning: Snake Pit:
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:The User make a quick handseal and opens the ground around the opponent, the "Pit" is filled with Snake's that can bite the opponent and bind them dragging them down as the pit closes above them. the size of the pit is depending on the usage of chakra.
    Note:
    -Must be able to summon snakes.
    -Can only be taught by ~Frederick~
    ||Declined||

    Summoning:
    Gatagata:
    This snake is the personal summon of Frederick Uchiha and he is the Under-boss of all snakes. Gatagata ("ガラガラ" or "Geta-Geat" meaning "Snake of the Song") is very powerful, and able to stand his own against Gamabunta or even Manda. Long ago Manda and Gatagata fought for the thrown to rule over the snakes. the battle was fearsome and both snakes showed the ability to shed skin in a manner similar to the Body Replacement Technique or Body Shedding, which has been seen during the battle with Manda, Gamabunta and Katsuyu. Gatagata is also able to move underground. His scales are stronger then that of Manda's and sturdy enough to take on strong attacks, and remain intact, while providing as an safe shelter for anyone to hide inside his mouth. because of his Heavy red and black Scales he is very slow. Manda was able to take advantage of this and win there battle. he is able to shake his tell making a fine sound that throws off the equilibrium of the opponent consing them to lose balance, this proves as an excellent hunting tool.

    ||Declined||

    (Doton: Ishi Mie Sekkou) Earth Release: Multi Stone Scout's:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+15 Per-Turn)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is an Advance form of "Doton: Ishi Sekkou" The user will picks up small rocks and throw them in the air. The rocks mold into a bird shape, the birds then fly's high in the sky and scout the battlefield. the user's and Stone Scouts vision's are linked.
    Note:
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by ~Frederick~
    -Maximum of 4 Stone Scouts.
    -Can only be used once per Battle.
    ||Approved||

    (Ko Engai-Tama) Great Dome-Bullets:
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90 (-10 to user)
    Description: A large Dome raises from the ground around the user, this dome is extremely dense and is able to block S-Rank attacks. The dome then brakes apart and shoots thousands of little bullets fragments at the opponent.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by ~Frederick~
    ||Declined||
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 08-25-2011 at 08:30 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ruiz.. View Post
    (Fuuton:Hitomure Karasu)-Wind Release:Flocking Crows
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user surrounds himself with a flock of Crows made of his/her Wind chakra. These Crows can be used to deliver powerful slashing damage to an enemy on contact, or for diversionary tactics.
    ~Usable 3 times per battle
    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

    (Raiton:Hitomure Karasu)-Lightning Release:Flocking Crows
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user surrounds himself with a flock of Crows made of his/her Lightning chakra. These Crows can be used to deliver powerful piercing damage to an enemy on contact, as well as induce paralysis. It can also be used for diversionary tactics.
    ~Usable 3 times per battle
    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..


    (Fukasu Ryuudan)-Smoke Dragon
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user performs three handseals to imbue any existing smoke with chakra, right before manipulating it in the form of a large Dragon. The user can manipulate the thickness of the smoke so that it can physically touch or grab someone. It can also be used a a diversionary tactic, where as the user can hide several Explosive Tags in the Dragon (Since it can become solid enough to touch)
    ~Usable 3 times
    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

    ~All Declined~ All Need restrictions
    (Raiton:Hitomure Karasu)-Lightning Release:Flocking Crows
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user surrounds himself with a flock of Crows made of his/her Lightning chakra. These Crows can be used to deliver powerful piercing damage to an enemy on contact, as well as induce paralysis. It can also be used for diversionary tactics.
    ~Usable 3 times per battle
    ~No S Rank lightning next turn

    (Fukasu Ryuudan)-Smoke Dragon
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user performs three handseals to imbue any existing smoke with chakra, right before manipulating it in the form of a large Dragon. The user can manipulate the thickness of the smoke so that it can physically touch or grab someone. It can also be used a a diversionary tactic, where as the user can hide several Explosive Tags in the Dragon (Since it can become solid enough to touch)
    ~Usable 3 times
    ~No A Rank or above Fire techniques next turn.
    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    (Sōgyo no Kotowari)-Law of the Twin Fish
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Self
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A(80 when redirecting an attack)
    Description:The twin Fish are two Identical katana connected by a large red rope-like chain at the base of the hilt lengthens and silver metal square charms attached to the chain.The blade is thinner than the normal katana and the cross guard now extends up the blade for about 15 cm. Up 25 cm from where the cross guard is, there is a 45 degree cut on the inside of the blade where a second blade is jutting back down and parallel to the main blade. With the edge of the blade facing inward instead of outward. The blades as well as the metal rope/chain connecting the hilts of the two swords are capable of conducting chakra, allowing the user to manipulate chakra throughout the swords and release it at will. The swords have a distinct ability, and are able to absorb certain forms of chakra, and redirect them back at the enemy.
    ~Bonding Process:The ritual for the bonding process between wielder and Swords causes 35 damage to the user. Once the ritual has been complete, no one else can wield this blade.
    ~Redirecting Chakra:These blades are capable of absorbing chakra in the form of Ninjutsu through the left blade. Once abosrbed, the user channels the chakra through the metal rope connecting the Swords, releasing it back at the enemy in the form of a powerful blast of chakra, through the right sword. The process happens very fast. The swords cannot "absorb" the chakra, it is only a means of immediately redirecting it back.
    ~Can only redirect chakra based attacks 3 times per battle
    ~Redirecting chakra counts as the use of a jutsu
    ~Cannot redirect chakra 2 turn consecutively

    (Fuuinjutsu: Inception)-Sealing Technique:Inception
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: This jutsu requires the user to place a seal on the enemy through physical contact, to be effective. Once the seal has been placed on the enemy, at any time, the user can put the enemy under a trans causing them to fall asleep where they stand. While asleep the enemy will be trapped in their own subconscious, where they will be dreaming. The dream is so realistic that to the enemy, nothing will appear wrong at all and everything will continue as it was previously happening before the activation of the jutsu, except now things will be going accordingly with what the enemy's subconscious makes up (Like an actual dream). Because this isn't a Genjutsu, it can't be escaped the same way a regular Genjutsu would be broken. The only way for the enemy to escape this dream, is if they were killed in their subconscious. The dream will then be ended, and they will return to reality.
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~While under the jutsu, the enemy may be affected by the outside environment (i.e if it started to rain in reality, it would suddenly start pouring rain in the dream out of nowhere. If they're body was moved in any kind of way, they would be thrown around randomly in their dream, alerting them that something is wrong)
    ~The only way to end the jutsu, is if the user releases it, or if the enemy dies while in their dream (Causing no physical harm to the affected person)
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Updating my summoning boss and another condor and yes I hold the condor contract.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...3&postcount=84
    The reason is that I just got the contract from a friend and also learned a few limitations on summonings and these were pretty under powered Compared to the limitations so I figured I'd adjust them while taking advantage of this contract and bring some life into it

    So from this...

    (Kchuysei: Joutei Sendo) Summoning: Lord Sendo:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 100 (20 per-turn when Fused)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This summons Joutei Sendo the Lord of the Condors. Joutei Sendo has the unique ability to fuse on it's Summoners back, when fused it appears that the user has wings. This lets the user fly at fast speeds and make it easier to use Raiton Jutsu Joutei Sendo can also use B-rank Raiton Tech. that do not require hand seals.
    Note:
    -This Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -When fused Raiton Jutsu only need one hand seal
    -Can only be fused for 3 turns


    To this...

    (Kchuysei: Joutei Sendo) Summoning: Lord Sendo:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 100 (20 per-turn when Fused)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This summons Joutei Sendo the Lord of the Condors. Joutei Sendo has the unique ability to fuse on it's Summoners back, when fused it appears that the user has wings. This lets the user fly at fast speeds and make it easier to use Raiton Jutsu Joutei Sendo can also use any Raiton Tech the user knows.
    Note:
    -This Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -When fused Raiton Jutsu only need one hand seal
    -Can only be fused for 3 turns

    Bolded what I updated ^^

    and from this....


    (Kchuysei: Hagetaka Houka) Summoning: Hagetaka Fire:

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the nessecary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon "Hagetaka Houka" (Meaning Condor of fire). Hagetaka Houka is one of the Giant "Hagetaka Twins" he is able to hold one Person on his back. Hagetaka Houka can also shoot B-Rank Katon.
    Note:
    -Can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.




    To this....


    (Kchuysei: Hagetaka Houka) Summoning: Hagetaka Fire:

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the nessecary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon "Hagetaka Houka" (Meaning Condor of fire). Hagetaka Houka is one of the Giant "Hagetaka Twins" he is able to hold one Person on his back. Hagetaka Houka can also use any Katon Technique the user knows.
    Note:
    -Can only be in play for 4-turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.



    Bolded what I updated ^^


    Boufuu Kyouzuu no Jutsu (Gale Surge)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A defensive jutsu at best. The user distils the air around him or her with his or her chakra and at the exact moment of attack releases a large burst of air. The blast of wind goes out three feet and knocks a victim back at least five feet and can stop projectiles. It is a defensive move that is usually used when the user is caught off guard.
    The wind can only be released in one direction however.
    - Can only be taught by Zen and Yard.



    (Raiton: ranpu suicchi) Lightning release: Light Switch
    Type: Supplement
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will form a two handseals and use their raiton chakra to adjust the brightness of Raiton based techs.
    - This does not increase the power of raiton techs, only adjusts the brightness.


    (Fuuton: kyousei tei nami) Wind Release: Great Air Wave
    Type: Supplement
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user forms the Tiger handseal and claps his hands together. This releases a large gust of wind from the users body capable of blowing anything in mid range of the user away from him into long range. However, this technique can't do damage to the opponent.
    ~Can't use any other wind technique in the same turn~
    ~Can only be used 3X per battle~
     
         
    Last edited by -Yard-; 08-23-2011 at 05:11 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Aisu Bakuha) Ice release: Ice Explosion
    Rank: A-S
    Type: attack
    Range: short - long
    Chakra: (A rank: 30) (S Rank: 40)
    Damage: (A rank: 60) (S Rank: 80)
    Descriptions: By releasing chakra into ice, user is able to make that ice explode very much like "Mirror Ice Murder" but instead, this can be used to explode any ice, not just Ice Mirrors.
    - Once used, no S-rank jutsus next turn
    - Used twice, no S rank or A rank jutsu next turn

    (With Izuna's permission I used his Water Explosion as a template)


    (Aisu Mo-do)- Ice Mode
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: S
    Tange: Self
    Chakra: 40 (10 per turn)
    Damage: -
    Description: User completely fills their body with water and wind chakra making any water or wind natured jutsus easier to use and more powerful while not being able to use anything else which means no earth/fire/lightning and not even nin/gen/tai/ken. Also, due to amount of chakra that is filling users body, the mode can't be deactivated instantly- after canceling the mode it actualy ends after using three wind and/or water natured jutsus making this mode risky.
    - water or wind based jutsus +15
    - both water and wind based jutsus (Ice) +25
    - after canceling the mode user still needs to get rid of the stored chakra (3 jutsus water and/or wind natured) to be able to use other techniques, additionaly those 3 jutsus will not be boosted by this mode
    - after the mode ends user needs to wait 4 turns before being able to use this again
    - no more than twice per battle
    ||Both Declined|| Similar Jutsu Exist

    ~~If you still think this is OP after all those restrictions could you lower those ++ slightly please?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by the 6th hokage View Post
    please edit where needed so it can be approved.

    Hyouton kyouketsu kiri ( ice style freeze mist)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: b
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: the user focases his water and wind chakra into the air createing a mist that's just cold enough to freeze any water jutsu that is used inside of it.but not cold enough to freeze a person just water.
    Note: must be of the yuki clan.
    Note: doesn't blind the enemy like the normal mist jutsu does it only makes the air cold.
    Note: only freezes water ninjutsu
    Note: can only be used by the 6th hokage.

    Declined, do not resubmit

    hyouton tsunami of yuki ( ice style gaint wave of snow)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:the user will place his hands on the already snow covered ground and make a the snow form a gaint wave that will crash into the enemy and bury them in snow possabley killing them.
    note: must already be in an area that is snow covered
    note: can only be used once perbattle
    note: must be of the yuki clan
    note: only the 6th hokage may use/teach

    Approved
    the next one is a mode

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan

    Approved

    hyouton koori yane) Ice Release: ice roof
    Type:Attack/Defend/Supplementary
    Rank:forbidden
    Range: short-long
    Chakra:All the user's chakra
    Damage Points:n/a ( 250 defensive power)
    Description: while in ice mode the user will make a a row of 10 hand seal and focus all his water and wind chakra into the sky with that chakra he will form a roof of ice ( like a house roof but is a protective barrier) that can be used to cover an entire village (At the expense of all the user's chakra). the roof also could be droped but the end result would kill the user and whoever it was he was trying to protect or attack.
    note: must be in Frost Bite Rage
    note: must be of the yuki clan
    note:after use the user collapses and is unable to move, and ice mode ends.
    note: the ice roof is flat
    note: after use the user is unable to use anything that requires chakra and his body is strained to a great extent(Basically fainting). ( its like a last resort jutsu )


    Declined, do not resubmit

    hyouton senkou tou ) Ice Release: Flash Freeze
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Close
    Chakra:30
    Damage Points:10
    Description: While the user is in Frost Bite Mode, he can channel water and wind chakra into his hands and by simply touching the opponent will cause flash freeze, freezing the moisture around the opponent incasing them in ice. The ice will easily break if hit by the user after usage and if not, the effects will last for 5 seconds.
    note: decreas amount of time one can stay in frost bite rage by one turn.

    Declined, do not resubmit
    please edit where needed so it can be approved.
    updateing ( btw if the update is declined i keep the old version )

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.the user also can't be hurt by fire c rank and lower any ice jutsu used on against the user will have no effect the ice would hit and break as it hit's the user.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan
    ||Declined||


    new submission.
    (Hyouton: Koori tate) Ice Release: Ice Shield
    Type: Defend
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user will for a shield of compressed Ice making it as hard as steal. The user can cause the shield to expand to the needed size to block incoming attacks on scales from the size of the user's wrist to the user's whole body.
    ||Approved|| I removed the "Attack" under type. It's a shield.
     
         
    Last edited by RokuNR; 08-25-2011 at 08:42 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~Updating~

    (Akimichi Keibatsu ninjutsu: kukkingu aida)-Akimichi Clan Ninjutsu: Cooking space
    Type:Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A (varies, depending on how may you hit your opponent)
    Description: The user, just like while performing the spiked variant of the human bullet tank, will extend and harden every single strand of their hair via chakra. But rather than turning them into stabbing spines of destruction, the user keeps them flexible and not sharp. Each of the strands (0.1 micron) can support a weight of 250 kg and can not get cut (like true metal strings). The user can manipulate those strands into various forms and ways. For example warping them around their opponent locking them in a immobile state; making a net in front of you which can then absorb and return logical momentum (S-rank earthen techniques that are related to solid variants of doton can be returned with the same momentum to the opponent. Gates taijutsu simple goes through this, due to the raw strength and well, fiery punches); transportation (using the strands to "float" mid-air or carrying very heavy objects) ; creating blunt hitting shapes like fists or even cubes although it reduce their range to Mid-range.
    Notes: Can only be activated once per battle and it lasts 5 turns unless deactivated.
    Notes: No elemental ninjutsu can be used while this technique is active.
    Notes: It does not allow the user to perform forbidden ranked techniques of any type while this mode is active, and also in the same turn of it's activation and de-activation.
    Notes: The strands are thin, yet visible specially if they are turned into shapes but cause little to no disturbance while moving. Any way to sense chakra will allow to know the location of the hair. Also, when it is used to form shapes the hair is clearly visible.
    Notes: Think of the hair as a extremely light metal. Fire will burn it, wind will not cut through it, water can be stopped yet not returned and lightning can cut through it.


    and

    (Kemushi waza: Hari no Senseitivo) Caterpillar arts: Sensitive Hairs
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: By infusing chakra into their nerves beneath the skin and nearby the hair all around the body, the user will gain an extra sensible sense of touch. Being able to sense changes in air currents, vibrations on the earth and differences in temperature.
    Notes: last up to 5 turns, can be used 2 times per battleand must wait 3 turns before hairs can be infused again..
    Notes: must have signed Caterpillar contract.
    To:

    (Akimichi Keibatsu ninjutsu: kukkingu aida)-Akimichi Clan Ninjutsu: Cooking space
    Type:Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A (varies, depending on how may you hit your opponent)
    Description: The user, just like while performing the spiked variant of the human bullet tank, will extend and harden every single strand of their hair via chakra. But rather than turning them into stabbing spines of destruction, the user keeps them flexible and not sharp. Each of the strands (0.1 micron) can support a weight of 350 kg and can still not get cut (like true metal strings) unless they face a force of at least 1000 times that quantity in which case they'll break (all this means each strand can actually move with a force of 300 kg yet each strand can only return up to 3 tons of force). The user can manipulate those strands into various forms and ways. For example wrraping them around their opponent locking them in a immobile state; making a net in front of you which can then absorb and return logical momentum (Taijutsu, wind, earth, water up to and including S-rank. Shape manipulation, due to the chakra in hairs will be imitated.) Gates taijutsu simply goes through this, due to the raw strength and well, fiery punches); transportation (using the strands to "float" mid-air or carrying very heavy objects) ; creating blunt hitting shapes like fists or even cubes although it reduce their range to Mid-range.
    Notes: Can only be activated once per battle and it lasts 5 turns unless deactivated.
    Notes: No elemental ninjutsu can be used while this technique is active.
    Notes: It does not allow the user to perform forbidden ranked techniques of any type while this mode is active, and also in the same turn of it's activation and de-activation.
    Notes: The strands are thin, yet visible (if concentrated, and watching attentively) specially if they are turned into shapes but cause little to no disturbance while moving. Any way to sense chakra will allow to know the location of the hair.
    Notes: Think of the hair as a extremely light, yet strong and flexible metal. Fire will burn it; both water and wind can be returned with the same momentum to the opponent ( and lightning can cut through the hairs, while not being conducted on it.
    All yours, Caliburn

    and

    (Kemushi waza: Hari no Senseitivo) Caterpillar arts: Sensitive Hairs
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: 0
    Description: By infusing chakra into their nerves beneath the skin and nearby the hair all around the body, the user will gain an extra sensible sense of touch. Being able to sense changes in air currents, vibrations on the earth and differences in temperature. A Sannin or higher user of this technique can pick up specific vibrations, temperatures and currents, allowing him not to get overload.
    Notes: last up to 5 turns, can be used 2 times per battleand must wait 3 turns before hairs can be infused again..
    Notes: must have signed Caterpillar contract.
    ||Pending||? I don't understand what you changed. What do you mean by "overload"?

    Submitting:

    (Katon/Doton: Shinshokurinne) - Fire/Earth style: Cycle of eriosion
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: B or A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 20 or 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will use his katon chakra to stripe off the humidity of any object in contact with him while also fusing it partially with his doton chakra in order to give it a medium and break down any earthen based-tehcnique or mud-related back to earth granules and ultimately sand. The result of the B-ranked technique is to make anything in contact with the user dry and crumble from him and water sources of any kind will be absorbed. While the usage of the A-ranked version is more large scaled being able to use it to dry the whole battlefiel killing all kind of flora (trees, mushrooms, grass, plants) leaving behind a dry (meaning it can dry large water sources) wasteland. It will not work on humans yet on animals and bugs it can be lethal.
    Notes: May only be used four times per battle if all B-rank usages. The A-rank usage counts as two of B-rank.
    Notes: Must wait at least a turn to use it again.
    ||Approved||

    (Katon: Jigoku no juutan) - Fire: Hell's carpet
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will place his hands on the ground and release a tremendous volume of fire which forms a carpet of scarlet flames reducing anything on the surface to cinders (up to short range from the surface) while anything below the ground gets hit by an intense heat, resulting it into getting burned. However, the earth below the user's feet does not turn to lava, only black as fire traveled through it. The user is at the center of the carpet protected since it is a manifestation of his own chakra. The user may manipulate the flames in any way he wishes, however, upon making another technique the carpet simply dissapears leaving a barren, black wasteland behind.
    Notes: No fire techs the same turn and no S-rank of higher fire techniques for 2 turns.
    Notes: May only be done twice per battle.
    Notes: The speed at which the fire takes over the field, make it very hard for the naked eye and unexpectant mind to react.
    ||Declined||

    (tokudan seinou: kenmazai) - Special Ability: Abrasiveness
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: N/A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: N/A (+15 to the technique used)
    Damage: N/A (+ 30 to the technique used)
    Description: The user will implant to any liquid-based the technique the user posses an extra chakra coat, pressurizing it to the extremes; Making projectile moves strike harder and faster. While also adding a bit of his doton chakra into the liquid (If and only if possible) adding small yet hyper dense granules of abrasive material to the technique allowing it to cut through any material (including CEs) of it's same and below rank.
    Notes: Once this ability is approved, the user must post it in his bio for it to be active. Only the People taught this by The Seven-Scaled boy may use it.
    Notes: It weakens the user's doton techniques (-5 damage and +5 chakra cost) and katon techniques (-10 damage). It cannot be turned off once placed in the bio. The only way to remove this is to take out the ability from the bio.
    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sealing Arts: Summoning: Gourd of Sealing|Fuuin: Kuchiyose: Yuugao no Yuugao
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes a string of handseals and summons a gourd onto the battlefield in front of him. The gourd is around the size of the gourd of Gaara's back and has five seals representing the five elements on the sides of it. The user then takes two of those seals and deposits them into the gourd. A bright flash emits from the seal (not of blinding proportion) and the two elemental seals deposited are sealed from use by both the user and enemy as long at the gourd is present on the field. The gourd has a very large, durable and strong shield and armor encasing it that protects it from attacks of A-rank and below, making it very difficult to destroy.*
    *Can only be used once*
    *After using, the user cannot using and Fuuinjutsu for the next two turns*
    *The user nor opponent cannot use either of the two elements selected by the user for the remainder of the fight or until the gourd is destroyed, whichever is shorter*
    *the shield stops all A rank attacks and below, one S rank though destroys the shield and gourd.
    ||Approved|| Nice concept

    Genjutsu: Sniff Sniff! Hello!| Genjutsu: Kunkun Kunkun! Konichiwa!
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs a genjutsu that causes the enemy to think he is under the influence of drugs for three turns. This thinking causes his movements to become wild and slower, decreasing his overall speed. The enemy's train of thought is also disturbed, making it harder for him to remember handseals correctly, causing him to be rendered unable to use jutsus of A-rank and higher. It also causes the enemy to laugh uncontrollably at images he is hallucinating and imagining, which is another factor as to why he is unable to form handseals above B-rank during those turns. The genjutsu also adds the memory of the opponent takin drugs into the opponents subconscious, making the opponent believe that nothing is out of the ordinary, hence it is difficult to escape from, as the opponent first has to figure out he is in a genjutsu.
    *Lasts three turns*
    *After using, the user cannot use any genjutsu for three turns*
    *The user cannot use any S-rank and above jutsus while the genjutsu is in affect.
    *sharingan can easily see through the genjutsu
    ||Declined||

    Earth style: Exploding stones (Doton: bakuretsu ishi)
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: A simple earth technique that causes a stone, or staff made of earth that the user has inserted his chakra into explode. The user will insert his earth chakra into anything made of simple earth, and when the user makes a hand sign a bunch of thin but razor sharp needles made of earth will explode from the object, piercing through anything it touches.
    ~Can only be used on small objects, I.e. a staff made of earth or a rock from the floor.
    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit

    Lightning style: Ring of protection (Raiton: enjin bouei)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will insert lightning chakra into a ring on his finger(can be used with any ring), once the user is put into a genjutsu by the opponent the ring will let an electrical current flow through the users body dispelling any genjutsu(with the exception of MS genjutsu). The electrical current isn't enough to paralyze the user, but does cause slight numbing making it hard to make hand seals the next turn.
    ~twice per battle
    ~can only dis-spell 2 genjutsu per "charge"
    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit

    Sealing Jutsu: Rules (Fuuinjutsu: Kiritsu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 (+10 each turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will form 5 hand signs and slam his hands on the ground, instantly purple kanji will spur from his hand appearing all over the ground, air, and the users and opponents body. The kanji are the written "rules" the user has just imposed into the battle. The rules mean that the user can limit his opponent and himself to not doing certain things, this can range from limiting himself and the opponent to not using Kikkei Genkai, or it can be not using a specific element, whatever the user pleases. Once the rules are in place neither the user nor the opponent can defuse them, until the user or the opponent dies, however the user still has to pay chakra each turn to keep it sustained. If the rules don't apply to the user, I.e. if the user has no kikkei genkai and the rules state the opponent can't use Kikkei Genkai than one element of the users will be taken away for the remainder of the rules being in play.
    ~Once per battle
    ~Only one more fuuinjutsu can be used for the remainder of the battle
    ~The user can't make the rules say "you can't use any jutsu anymore," It has to be limited to one thing, the only way it can affect multiple things is if the restriction isn't applicable on the user. So a rule can be "the user and the opponent can't use water techniques," but it can't be, "The user and the opponent can't use S rank techniques" as this limits multiple elements.
    ||Declined|| I like the concept, but something seems off about it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Chakra Tsubasu|Chakra Wings|
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user channels his chakra into his back and uses it to create 2 wings made purely of chakra which enables the user to fly in the air.The user can fly for 2 turns and the wings can be used to deflect incoming attacks like kunai's and jutsu's of C-rank and below.

    • can only be used 3 times per battle
    • cannot use any elemental jutsu's of S-rank and above while in this mode
    • can only be taught by igneel


    Dyuaru mo-do|Dual Mode|
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:50
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user focuses on two of his chakra natures and then pushes them to their limits such that the user will only be able to use these chakra nature to attack and defend.Each elemental attacks power boosts by 10 .The user cannot choose an element as one and it's vulnerable element as the second.

    • can only be used once per battle
    • lasts for 3 turns
    • cannot use anyother elements in this mode but can use taijutsu and genjutsu in this mode
    • cannot choose two elements like wind and fire at the same time
    • can only be taught by igneel
    • cannot use any techniques of A-rank and higher after releasing this mode

    ||Both Declined||
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kenjutsu Kata : Hebereke Ken ) - Sword Style: Drunken Sword Style
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user chugs a bottle of sake, by doing so they become immediately intoxicated. Making the user's movements wild. Sharingan of 2 tomoe and lower cannot predict the movements because the movements are made up off of instinct and will thus totally off of rhythm. Also because of the drunken style, the user is unable to mold chakra making it impossible to cast genjutsus or ninjutsu. The user also stumbles from time to time, making them evade attacks faster than they normally would.

    Note: lasts for 3 turns
    Note: can only be used/taught by -Yusuke- and Axle

    Declined, give it a rank
    (Kenjutsu Kata : Hebereke Ken ) - Sword Style: Drunken Sword Style
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user chugs a bottle of sake, by doing so they become immediately intoxicated. Making the user's movements wild. Sharingan of 2 tomoe and lower cannot predict the movements because the movements are made up off of instinct and will thus totally off of rhythm. Also because of the drunken style, the user is unable to mold chakra making it impossible to cast genjutsus or ninjutsu. The user also stumbles from time to time, making them evade attacks faster than they normally would.

    Note: Lasts for 3 turns
    Note: No ninjutsu or genjutsu can be used while this is active
    Note: Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke- and Axle

    (Suna : Sabureyane) - Sand Style : Roof of sand
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : After having bits of sand enter the sky above or target location, the user can then compact the sand to become a dense layer of sand with a width of at least a meter. When the user wants to, he brings either his left or right hand up at least above shoulder level and sways it downwards while concentrating his chakra in his hands to direct the layer of sand's movements to fall on the enemy.

    Note : Usable only four times per battle
    Note : Must be a sand user
    Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : The technique becomes truly visible when they compact
    Both Approved

    (Suna : Purotekuto kasui) - Sand Style : Spiked protection
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive/Defensive
    Range : Short
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : Somewhat like the armor of sand technique, this is an improved version with its restrictions. A loose spread out of sand that circles the user and hardens to block an attack. Its basically used when the enemy is near due to it having the spikes and rather not used to defend against a ranged-technique as there wouldn't be any point of the spikes. It can be used automatically if the user contains the Shukaku within them.

    Note : Only thrice per battle
    Note : Must be a sand user
    Note : User can't move while this technique is in use
    Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : No sand techniques while this is active
    Note : Defends effectively against mostly taijutsu, ninja weapons and the such

    (Suna : Sabure Bakuha) - Sand Style : Sand explosion
    Rank : A
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short (Explodes)
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : At first glance the sand appears to be regular sand, but the user is able to detonate the sand at any time to form a large explosion. The technique doesn't form sand for the user but the sand used for the explosion must already be present on the battlefield. Other than that, the sand can be placed like land mines underground as a trap for the enemy.

    Note : Must be a sand user
    Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Must have existing sand for this technique
    Note : Can only be used six times per battle

    (Doton : Kajouhashira) - Earth Release : Spiral pillars
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive/Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points 80
    Description : After making the handseal 'Snake', the user is able to conjure up two pillars of earth which rises from the sides of the enemy. As the earth pillars rise to the sides of the target, they will coil around him/her like a snake binding its prey. With an additional handseal of 'Ram', the user is able to force the earth pillars to tighten immediately and try to crush the enemy if possible up to the point where it has covered to far.

    Note : Can only be used thrice per battle
    Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : User must be in contact with the ground
    Note : No other earth techniques while this technique is active
    Note : When the additional feature is used, user has to hold on to the handseal 'Ram' till the pillars have finish crushing the target or when the user wants to release it
    All Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by CrossArc View Post
    (Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user molds his chakra into razor sharp lines and releases it out of all their tenketsus and spins to form a razor sharp dome shield to attack and defend all in one move

    -Usable only 3 times per battle
    -Can only be used by Hyuuga clan members
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc


    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    (Kyoukudai Cannon) - Maximum Cannon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gathers chakra into his fist and compresses the chakra , the user will then throw a punch in the direction of the opponent and fires the compressed chakra out of the user's fist in a blast

    -Usable only 3 times
    -No ninjutsu the turn after this is used
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc




    ~Declined~ Similar technique exists
    (Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky
    Rank: S
    Type:Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user molds his chakra into razor sharp lines and releases it out of all their tenketsus and spins to form a razor sharp dome shield to attack and defend all in one move

    -No Jyuuken the turn after this is used
    -Usable only 3 times per battle
    -Can only be used by Hyuuga clan members
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    Declined, similar jutsu exist as cannon

    ( Nakkuru's Kyoukudai Kyuukei ) - Knuckle's Maximum Break
    Rank: S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: ( +15 to taijutsu and +15 to ninjutsu )
    Description: The user gathers chakra and channels it into every muscle of the body to energize the cells in the muscles by using chakra . By doing so , the user's mitochondria in the cells of his muscles produces ATP at a much faster rate , giving the user the speed of the 4th Raikage in his armor and the strength of Tsunade . But after it deactivates , it leaves the user in a state of exhaustion and he would be unable to use jutsus B-rank and above for one turn .

    -Takes a few seconds to fully activate
    -Lasts for 3 turns
    -Usable only 2 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user creates 2 Shadow Clones , then the Shadow Clones and the user will channel chakra into the muscles of the arms and legs to increase their speed and strength for a brief moment , the 2 Shadow Clones will then dash up to the target and punch the target in the left and right of his torso . Then the user following behind the Shadow Clones , will land a blow on the target's chest

    -No taijutsu the turn after this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times due to the amount of stress it poses on the user's arms and legs
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    you sure you want this creating two shadow clones and not using two existing cause if ya want this one add a note that it counts as one your shadow clone technique usages per battle

    ( Chakra Henkou ) - Chakra Deflection
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage points: -
    Description:The user releases a burst of compressed chakra out of the lower part of the arm to deflect taijutsu , ninjutsu and to a certain extent , elemental ninjutsu . It doesn't send the jutsu back at the opponent but merely disperses it , much like both jutsus cancelling each other out .

    -Deflects taijutsu S-rank and below , cancels out ninjutsu S-rank and below and elemental ninjutsu A-rank and below
    -Doesn't damage the opponent
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    Declined, do not resubmit

    ( Rankyaku Gaichou ) - Storm Leg: Victorious Bird
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user focuses chakra into his leg and compresses it , then the user kicks the air and releases the compressed chakra in the shape of a bird that is capable of cleaving through steel

    -No ninjutsu the turn after this is used
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by CrossArc

    Declined, the set up for this is either Tsunade or Sakura's method of attack and only they can use that form of attack
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    [Niiro Asaito] - Red Thread
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra cost: N/A ( cost 15 chakra for A rank chakra blast/ 30 for S rank)
    Damage points: 80
    Description: '' Red thread '' takes the form a sleek, medium-sized sword. The grip has a gentle decorative bend that ends at a crimson tassel dangling from the pommel. Instead of a crossguard, there is a U-shaped decoration covering the first three or four inches of blade, with a flower petal design just as it meets a red string wrapping. The string is wrapped thrice around the hilt, with a three-loop bow on one side and a folded paper decoration on the other. '' Red thread '' blade is straight and slim, though somewhat short, with the tip ending in a slanted razor-like edge instead of being tapered to a point and the whole blade metal is made out of special metal which allows user to infuse any type of chakra including element chakra , the user can fires particularly strong and destructive chakra-colored energy blasts which able to cancel out or slash through element attack at the same rank or lower. The energy flows out of the blade and fires at an opponent usually in the arc of the swords swing.

    -Chakra blast can be used once per turn in the whole battle and must wait for 1 turn before using it again
    Declined, make it more clear on the ranks of the chakra blasts and add that they also count towards one of the users 3 moves per turn

    (Doton: Gouzen Ko-ru) - Earth Style: Roaring Call
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: By performing two simple hand seal the user is able to call up maximum 4 tiger out from the earth which made out of rock or earth mineral when the tigers are out they will first roar out so loudly that it is capable of shaking the ground causing an mini earthquake but only when all 4 tiger are out, the lesser tiger is made the lesser power of the earthquake is. Second ability of theirs is able to shoot out countless of small rock but hard enough to hurt people, like causing wound or if serious, internal damage but the tigers are only allowed to use one ability whenever they are out. Afterward they are freely allowed to bite and tear off flesh from the enemy or simply use any means they have to attack the enemy like knocking them down.

    Can be used 3 time per battle.
    Must wait for 1 turn before using it again.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Doton: Younen) - Earth Style: Childhood
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By performing the '' Bird '' hand seal, the user can freely expand to extend any of his earth jutsu instantly and up to the maximum rank the user knows but it must be activated first meaning if the user didn't perform any earth jutsu this jutsu will not have any effect, the purpose of this jutsu is to increase the size or the length of his earth jutsu if somehow his enemy is trying to escape however those jutsu got expand or extend will not have any power increase, only the size increase or the length(maximum is 10meter long).

    Can be used 4 time per battle.
    Declined, similar jutsu exists
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Quote Originally Posted by Shinjitsu-sama View Post


    (Jiton: jiki sacchi) - Magnet Release: magnetic sense
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Through concentrated control of the magnet release kekkei genkai, one is able to sense magnetic forces being released by objects such as magnetic minerals and the natural magnetic force emitted from animals & humans, within a 1 mile.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    Please start putting the jutsu's titles before the spoiler title. Failure to do so will result in auto-declining of jutsu's
    re-post of earlier custom, this time with restrictions.

    .Jiton: Jiji Sacchi.

    (Jiton: jiki sacchi) - Magnet Release: magnetic sense.
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Through concentrated control of the magnet release kekkei genkai, one is able to sense magnetic forces being released by objects such as magnetic minerals and the natural magnetic force emitted from animals & humans, within a 1 mile.
    Restrictions: Once used this jutsu lasts for 3 turns & once expired, takes 1 turn before user can re-use.
    Approved
    New custom tech's.

    .Jiton: Satetsu Areno.

    (Jiton: Satetsu Areno) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Desert
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A huge wave of iron sand that can cover a large area and drown the enemy in sand.
    Approved
    *****

    .Jiton: Satetsu Bodi Ayatsuri.

    (Jiton: Satetsu Bodi Ayatsuri) - Magnetism Release: Iron Sand Body Manipulation.
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A (+30 if used as a close range attack that hits.)
    Description: Similar to the Satetsu Kawarimi jutsu, the user is able to manipulate his body into iron sand for use as attackive/defensive purposes. (eg. Attack: manipulate's his arm into twice the size and as solid iron sand for a more effective punch. Defense: manipulate's his torse into protruding iron spikes from his body to act for a more effective close combat defense.)
    Approved
    *****

    .Jiton: Satetsu Fuyuu.

    (Jiton: Satetsu Fuyuu) - Magnetism Release: Floating Iron Sand
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A platform-cloud of iron sand that levitates the user to protect them from harm or to give then an air advantage.
    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summunong animal: Charizard
    Summonig contract holder: ~SiskoStar~
    Summoning animals conected to th contract: N/
    Summoning contract king: N/A
    Other who signed it N/A
    Declined, do not resubmit

    and new white lions ^.^

    (Howaido Raion Kuchyiose: Kobushi)White Lion Summoning: Kobushi
    Rank: B
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Kobushi is one of the youngest white lions in the white lion valley and he mastered the walking on 2 feet at a very young range, he was never interested in learning ninjutsu so he concentrated himself at taijutsu and he is able to use taijutsu up to A rank(only basic tai up to A rank). He isnt wearing a long white coat cause he says that it disturbs him at the fightning and he always likes to have a little taijutsu spar with his summoners.
    Notes:
    -Can be summoed twice per battle
    -Stays on the field for 3 turns
    -No other summoning for the next 2 moves after he dissapears
    Approved

    (Howaido Raion Kuchyiose: Hane)White Lion Summoning Hane
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Hane is probably one of the wierdest lions in Siskovci, cause he has wings, he is able to fly and he can carry up to 2 persons on his back. He cant walk on 2 legs, but while he flies he can use his forder legs as hands so he can do hand seals and he can use wind jutsus up to A rank.
    Notes:
    -Can be summoed twice per battle
    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -No other summoning for the next 3 moves after he dissapears
    edit if needed
    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 08-26-2011 at 09:09 AM.

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