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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ranton: Arashi Senkou) Storm Release: Storm Flash
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 70
    Description: The user does one handseal and then puts their hands together, like they're praying. Then a bright light flashes around them, blinding anyone in Mid-Range, while sending electricity out 360 degrees around them.
    Note: Usable 3X
    Note: Paralyzes on contact

    (Ranton: Dageki Nami) Storm Release: Shockwave
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 70
    Description: The user puts their hands together like they're mashing something, while gather their storm chakra. They then condense it to a point that its not visible to naked eye. The user then expells it, creating an invisible shockwave, that doesn't cause external damage, but internal. The shockwave is powerful enough to rupture an internal organ.
    Note: Usable 2X

    ~Both declined: Follow proper jutsu template~

    (Doton: Kibaku Tsuchi Kinchou) Earth Style: Exploding Earth Birds
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will do 2 handseals, while standing still, spreading their chakra throughout the earth. Immediately, small, 6 inch, tiny birds will arise from the earth under the opponent, encircling them. On another handseal, the birds will explode, sending shrpnel, made of earth, at the opponent.
    Usable 2x
    No A-Rank Earth for 1 turn

    ~Declined: Wouldn't the shratnel hit you too since you're so close to the explosion? Plus, this justu as already been done countless times, the only difference now it that the bomb are birds~

    (Katon: Doki Za San Tenshi) Fire Style: Wrath of the Sun Gods
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 120
    Description: The user will do a row of 4 handseals, then raise his hands to the air. Immediately giant fire balls will rain down all over he battlefield, not on the user, from the air. The fireballs will destroy and burn everything in front of the user, killing all life, and burning the earth, causing it to turn into magam/lava.
    Note: Usable 1X
    Note: +30 Damage to user, because of strain
    Note: No Fire Techniques for 3 turns

    ~Declined: OP~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 12:30 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Johninto Takashi View Post
    (Suiton: Kurōsumasshu) - Water Release: Claw Smash
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: A water jutsu that is concentrated in the user's hand. Water starts to form around the users hand and forms the a lobster's claw shape. The user can crush the opponent with the claw or can hit the opponent like it was Chidori.
    Note: Can only be taught by Johninto Takashi
    Approved
    (Suiton: Tsume no gurabu) - Water Release: Claw Grab
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user increases the range of their Claw Smash by using form manipulation to extend it into a claw up to 10 meters in length. This claw is capable of splitting the enemy in half. This is a Claw Smash like technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by Johninto Takashi
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Tsuki to taiyō no burēdo) The Moon and Sun Blades
    Rank: A
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost N/A (20 for adding Suiton and 20 for adding Katon)
    Damage Cost: N/A (15 When adding chakra)
    Description: The Moon and Sun Blades are twin blades one is white and one is black. These swords were created by Johninto Takashi. When the user is holding the moon sword he can add his suiton chakra into the blade making covered in water and able to reach longer. When the user is holding the Sun sword he can add his katon chakra into the blade cover the blade in fire and causing the sword's range to be increased. The user can use both swords at once but can only put one chakra nature in one sword at once.
    Note: Can only be used by Johninto Takashi
    Note: Only one nature chakra can be used if user is holding both swords.
    Note: If added Suiton or Katon chakra it only last 3 turns and must wait 1 turn to infuse more chakra.
    Picture:
    Declined, provide the extra range they are given
    Resubmitting Custom weapon

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Tsuki to taiyō no burēdo) The Moon and Sun Blades
    Rank: A
    Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost N/A (20 for adding Suiton and 20 for adding Katon)
    Damage Cost: N/A (15 When adding chakra)
    Description: The Moon and Sun Blades are twin blades one is white and one is black. These swords were created by Johninto Takashi. When the user is holding the moon sword he can add his suiton chakra into the blade making covered in water and able to reach longer by 3 more feet. When the user is holding the Sun sword he can add his katon chakra into the blade cover the blade in fire and causing the sword's range to be increased by 3 more feet. The user can use both swords at once but can only put one chakra nature in one sword at once.
    Note: Can only be used by Johninto Takashi
    Note: Only one nature chakra can be used if user is holding both swords.
    Note: If added Suiton or Katon chakra it only last 3 turns and must wait 1 turn to infuse more chakra.
    Picture:
    Bold part is what I added

    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 12:35 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    The following jutsus have nothing to do with HBA-s dragon summoning contract


    Fire Dragon's Sword Horn (Karyū no Kenkaku)
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user ignites his whole body in fire, and he runs at the opponent at hige speed raming into the opponent and dealing huge damage to the target, after the user rams into the target he can also use his leg or arm to shoot the opponent upwards.
    Notes:
    Usable 3 times per battle
    No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
    in the same move this jutsu was used he cant use forbiden rank tecs for the next 4 turns


    ~Declined: You set yourself on fire and suffer no damage? A forbidden rank technique isn't necessarely powerful, it just mean that you hurt yourself. From the description of your jutsu, it could be classified as Forbidden. Hence, you need to specify how you protect yourself from the fire. Layer of chakra maybe...~


    Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow (Karyū no Enchū)
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user starts shooting fire from his elbow tip, boosting the power and speed of his punches, when the fire starts shooting from the elbow tip the user charges with huge speed at the opponent, and punches him into any body part.
    Notes:
    Usable 3 times per battle
    No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
    in the same move this jutsu was used he cant use forbiden rank tecs for the next 4 turns

    ~Approved~

    ~Update: declined~I already made that one a long time ago

    Crimson Lotus: Fire Dragon Fist (Guren Karyū Ken)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The users palms get covered in crimson red flames, then the user rapidly charges at his opponent and he starts punching into the opponent with huge power and speed, with every punch that hits the target a small explosion on the body of the target appears leaving heavy burns on the skin
    Notes:
    Usable just one time per battle
    In the same move this was used the user will be able to make just 2 jutsus all together
    No fire for the next 2 turns
    No s ranked jutsus the next turn

    ~Approved~

    Fire Fang(Ho Saiga)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The users covers his nails in fire, extending them a bit, after that he rushes at the opponent and he starts slicing with his claws on the entire body of the opponent, every little scratch will make burns on the wounds making them even more painfull.
    Notes:
    Usable 3 times per battle
    No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
    in the same move this jutsu was used he cant use forbiden rank tecs for the next 4 turns

    ~Approved: I'll approve this one even after what I said in your first jutsu, but only because the fire is small~
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 08-31-2011 at 05:04 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon
    Name: (Naitomeaburēdo)Nightmare Blade
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack/ Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A ( 40 when used with Raiton and 40 when used with Doton)
    Damage Points:N/A(60 WHEN USED WITH CHAKRA)
    Description: The Nightmare Blade is a blade that was made by -Itachi- himself the sword is about 4 feet long and about 4 Inches wide.. Nightmare can be infused with Raiton or doton chakra when used with Doton chakra it gives Nightmare a extra layer of thickness which make its almost impossible to break.. the user can also infuse nightmare with raiton to increase its speed and cutting ability when used with Doton the length and reach stays the same but when used with raiton nightmare can reach 4 more feet

    note:Nightmare can only be used by -Itachi-
    note:When infused with chakra it stay infused for 3 turns and the user then must wait 2 turns to infuse his blade with chakra again




    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 12:47 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kakashi Hatake.. View Post
    ( Koumaken, The Blue Demon Slayer | 紅魔館 青デビ)
    Rank: S
    Type: Att ' Def
    Range: Short.
    Chakra cost: -Up to 40 if used with the special ability.
    Damage points: -Up to 80 if used with the special ability.
    Description: The Koumaken, or Blue Demon slayer, is one of the most powerful sword's of all time. Said to be forged by some of the best Black Smith's known to man. It was also said to have slayed Demon's in ancient times, and that was it's intention. It's spilled so much blood, including that of a human's. It earn's it's name with the help of both of it's chakra affinity's, Lightning and Fire. This is an elemental combination purely used for techniques that are sharp, but also hot. And due to these two element's being combined, there is a flame to the sword from the fire element, but it turn's blue due to the combined lightning element. It is said that when this sword is unsheathed, it also gives the user a new found strength in their heart's.
    Ability's:
    Blue fire addition: This sharp, and also hot technique allow's the user to cut through A rank wind, and even up to A rank Doton techniques. Now you know by now what it would do to a humans body.
    Heart: Once unsheathed, the user will feel more powerful. Although the user gains no extra physical ability's, his fighting will grows in his heart. And this can make anyone more powerful through the mind.
    Koumaken:

    Koumaken:


    Koumaken getting ready to be used with the fire lightning combination.







    ~Declined~
    The amount of times it can cut through wind and earth needs to be restricted.
    ( Koumaken, The Blue Demon Slayer, Satan's Flame | 紅魔館 青デビ)
    Rank: S
    Type: Att ' Def
    Range: Short.
    Chakra cost: -Up to 40 if used with the special ability.
    Damage points: -Up to 80 if used with the special ability.
    Description: The Koumaken, or Blue Demon slayer, is one of the most powerful sword's of all time. Said to be forged by some of the best Black Smith's known to man. It was also said to have slayed Demon's in ancient times, and that was it's intention. It's blade is made from a special material, that man created from the ground long ago. It's spilled so much blood, including that of a human's. It earn's it's name with the help of both of it's chakra affinity's, Lightning and Fire. This is an elemental combination purely used for techniques that are sharp, but also hot. And due to these two element's being combined, there is a flame to the sword from the fire element, but it turn's blue due to the combined lightning element. It is said that when this sword is unsheathed, it also gives the user a new found strength in their heart's. And upon Unsheathing Satan's Flame, the user will be covered in the lightning/fire chakra around the body.
    Ability's:
    § Blue fire addition: This sharp, and also hot technique allow's the user to cut through A rank wind, and even up to A rank Doton techniques. Now you know by now what it would do to a humans body.
    § Satan's Flame: Once Unsheathed, the blue flame will cover your body, and it has to accept you. It will cover the outside area of the body (Around the clothing also) and there will be two flames above your head that look like horns. This technique protect's you from D-Rank Wind techniques and D-Rank Doton. But between using this Technique and any other ability's for Satan's flame, it will have to be used alone, and after being used you will have to wait two turn's before using another technique for it. The sword's blade will still be covered in the blue flame, it just can't cut through Doton/Fuuton at the time.
    § Heart: Once unsheathed, the user will feel more powerful. Although the user gains no extra physical ability's, his fighting will grows in his heart. And this can make anyone more powerful through the mind.
    Koumaken:

    Koumaken:


    Koumaken getting ready to be used with the fire lightning combination.






    魔: Limit's one the fuuton and Doton cutting.

    A rank: Twice per battle.
    B rank: Three times per battle, if used once already can only cut up to one more A rank or B rank.
    C rank: Can also be cut three times, and if cut twice can still cut one A-Rank.
    -And the same from C rank goes for D and E rank's.


    ~Approved: Well done, and well restricted~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 12:52 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mainā Suirou No Jutsu) Water Style: Lesser Water Prison
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user is able to make smaller (maximum diameter of 0.5m) sphere-shaped water prisons by utilizing their suiton chakra. Since they are smaller than regular "Water Prison" jutsu they can be created faster and without having to keep their hand on the sphere.

    ~Declined: too similar to Cannon technique. Make it drastically different or don't resubmit.~

    (Suiton: Mainā Suirou No Jutsu) Water Style: Water Prison Crush
    Rank: A/S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30/40
    Damage Points: 60/80
    Description: By taking control of "Water Prison" user can cause it to "shrink" to any extent he wants (he can shrink just a bit if he wants to, for example, torture someone or shrink it to it's fullest thus compressing the opponent in small orb of water) with formidable speed and force.
    *Using S-ranked version once will result in no S-rank jutsus next turn
    *Using S-ranked version twice will result in no S rank or A rank jutsu next turn

    ~Declined: Already exist~

    (Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger.

    ~Declined: Elaborate on the eye itself. Is it on your body? Does it fly like Gaara, how long does it stays on the field, does it reganarate if hit?~

    (Shio no Hakobi-shu) - Tide Bringer
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This sword was said to be wielded even by the infamous "Blackbeard". Sword was held as the strongest of all swords on the sea and gave the user unparalleled mastery over water element. However, sword fell into oblivion once "Goddess of Water", strongest of all, was retrieved from the depths of seas. As everyone's attention followed "Goddess of Water", blood trail left by "Tide Bringer" was almost lost... There is rumor that some ninja found it and claimed it as his own, but it will take a while for the glory of "Tide Bringer" to reach it's old proportions.
    *The user will be able to use water jutsus with one hand seal less then normally as long he has Tide Bringer with him.
    *Sword gives the user's water jutsus +15 and the opponent -5 to his.
    *Sword can be infused with water chakra to attain chainsaw-like blade.
    Notes:
    *Sword is indestructible, though that doesn't mean it can destroy everything.
    *Looks: http://saberandsword.com/images/25-898A.jpg

    ~Pending: I'm leaving that one for Caliburn to check since it's very similar to the Ame-no-mi-kumari.~

    (Suiton: Misuto Henkan) - Water Style: Mist Transformation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra:30(-10 each turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will focus water chakra all over his body and turn it into mist. In this state he is able to merge with water (since mist is practically water just of lower quantity). While he is in that state he looks completely normal until an attack passes through him. Since he’s intangible, the user has to constantly focus a lot of chakra to keep his body in one piece (since he is made of mist).
    *This jutsu doesn’t require any water source
    *User can't use any taijutsu since mist isn't strong like water in Suigetsu's case

    ~Declined: Already exist~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 12:59 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: koori kumo ) ice relase ice cloud
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user will form a gaint ice spear and then throw it at his enemy on the user's comend the ice will explode into a gaint cloud of ice that will freeze what ever it touchs.
    note: must be a yuki clan member
    note: no a rank attacks next turn.

    ~Declined: OP~

    (Hyouton: yuki bo-ru) ice relase snow ball
    Type:attack
    Rank: A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: the user will place his hands on the already snow covered ground and focas his chakra ino the snow the snow will start to roll forward froming a gaint ball of snow in moments the ball is big enough to crush the enemy under it ( but not enough to kill the enemy)
    note: must be of the yuki clan
    note: must be in a snow covered terrin

    ~Declined: I like it but there's absolutely no restriction other then needing snow~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by the 6th hokage View Post
    updateing ( btw if the update is declined i keep the old version )

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.the user also can't be hurt by fire c rank and lower any ice jutsu used on against the user will have no effect the ice would hit and break as it hit's the user.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan
    ||Declined||


    new submission.
    (Hyouton: Koori tate) Ice Release: Ice Shield
    Type: Defend
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user will for a shield of compressed Ice making it as hard as steal. The user can cause the shield to expand to the needed size to block incoming attacks on scales from the size of the user's wrist to the user's whole body.
    ||Approved|| I removed the "Attack" under type. It's a shield.
    re submitting my update.

    hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra Points:50
    Damage Points:N/A (+10 damage points to Ice techs and +10 damage points to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.[B]the user also can't be hurt by fire c rank and lower.[B]
    Notes:
    -Can only be used once
    -Last 3 turns
    -No more ice abilities for the rest of the battle
    -can only use ice jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode.
    -must be of the yuki clan

    ~Decline: covering yourself in ice this way would surely affect you also. Whether it's freezing you alive or causing severe frostbite, there should be a drawback. I recommend going for something simpler like covering your hands and forearms, hurting you on some level, but without making it life threatening. If you decide to go on with this jutsu, find a way to keep yourself alive as you encase yourself in ice.~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 01:10 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kuchiyose no jutsu | Hesagemonki | Summoning Technique | Earth Sage monkey, Boss of the 5 Sage monkeys.

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short|Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 [-20 everytime turning into a Staff]
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user bites his thumb, performs the Monkey handseal and slams his hand on the ground. Hence being able to summon Hesagemonki, Hesagemonki is one of the 5 Bosses along the Monkey summoning's. Hesagemonki is extremly strong and immune for Earth technique's from A-Rank and below, since his speciality is Earth, he is able to perform S-Ranked Earth technique's and below, he is able to turn into an Staff, an very hard Earth staff, the Staff is huge enough to protect the user from every Wind/Water/Earth/Fire technique's which are A-Ranked and below, Hesagemonki is a very Large monkey, the same size as Manda, but Hesagemonki is covered in an Earth Coat which is able to protect him from C-Ranked technique's and Below, but Hasagemonki is not only extremly good with the Earth Element but also is very Limber and a great taijutsu fighter.

    - The user performing this technique will be exhausted after this.
    - The monkey will stay on the battle field for 3 Turns.
    - Must hold an Monkey Contract
    - Only summonable once per battle
    - No other creatures can be summoned for two turns after this.

    ~Declined: OP~

    Kuchiyose no jutsu | Speedy | Summoning Technique | Speedy

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short|Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20 [-10 everytime turning into a Staff]
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user bites his thumb, performs the Monkey handseal and slams his hand on the ground. Hence being able to summon Speedy, Speedy is one of the fasts Monkey of the Monkey summoning he has the Speed which is equal to Rock lee without weights, this monkey is able to perform C-Ranked Taijutsu technique's and below, this monkey is very limber and can turn into a staff at a very rapid speed, the higher the user's rank the faster. The Monkey's Taijutsu counts as a move in the user's turn.

    - The monkey can stay on the battle field for 5 turns.
    - Must hold an Monkey Contract
    - Only summonable once per battle
    - No other creatures can be summoned for one turn after this.

    ~Approved: I edited the bold part~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 01:36 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Summoning: Nin Dog Digem (Kuchiyose: Nin Inu Digem)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and summons a nin dog. It is about the size of Pakkun but has the inate ability to dig extremely quickly. Underground he can move as fast as Rock Lee without his weights, but to run and to move he can only run as fast as a ninja can. He can use Earth up to A rank but can only use the jutsu while above ground and his feet must be in direct contact with the ground. When underground he is almost undetectiable he can only be seen by a person who is able to see chakra he has a fantastic sense of smell and can sense where the opponent is even from underground. He can also speak english but perfers to yell out the catch phraze "Can you dig it?" anytime he gets the chance.
    ~Can only be active for 3 turns~
    ~Can only be underground for a period of 2 whole turns~
    ~Can only move at high speeds underground~

    ~Declined~ If he can smell others while underground, that means others can track him the same way through smell or sound or vibrations or heat.
    Resubmit

    Summoning: Nin Dog Digem (Kuchiyose: Nin Inu Digem)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and summons a nin dog. It is about the size of Pakkun but has the inate ability to dig extremely quickly. Underground he can move as fast as Rock Lee without his weights, but to run and to move he can only run as fast as a ninja can. He can use Earth up to A rank but can only use the jutsu while above ground and his feet must be in direct contact with the ground. Every jutsu he uses count as a move in the user's turn. He has a fantastic sense of smell and can sense where the opponent is even from underground. He can also speak english but perfers to yell out the catch phraze "Can you dig it?" anytime he gets the chance.
    ~Can only be active for 3 turns~
    ~Can only be underground for a period of 2 whole turns~
    ~Can only move at high speeds underground~

    I took out the part about not being able to be tracked

    ~Approved: I edited the bold part~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal : Red Wolfs
    Scroll Owner:GITANSHU
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

    Red Wolf summoning

    RANK:A
    Type: Defence-Offence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:He is one of those animals who likes to fight with his user with all his migt , It has very well built body so he can use some basic taijutsu (upto c) and has natural affinty towars lightning and can use it (upto B) .
    ~can be summoned 2wice~
    ~lasts for 3 turns~
    ~need to wait for 2 turns to summon again~


    ~Declined: RokuNR is the current Wolf contract owner. Talk to him~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kage: Rippoutai)- Shadow Cube
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    This is used to defend against enemy attacks all around the user. The user connects with their shadow, then they expand the shadow all around them then manipulate the shadow to build walls on all sides of the user creating a shadow cube.

    This move can also be applied to trap an enemy. Only works when the user has connected with the enemies shadow. Once the connection is made the same rules apply, the shadow walls are made all around the enemy to trap them for 1 turn.

    Notes:
    -Cube can protect user for 1 turn
    -Cube can trap enemy for 1 turn
    -Usable 3 times per battle (Trap and Protection are each counted as one)
    -User cannot use Shadow abilities C-Rank and below for 1 turn after cube has been made
    -Only usable by Nara Clan members
    -Must be trained by MeiX
    -Only usable for those who completed shadow training

    ~Declined: How strong is this cube? What can it protect your from?~


    Weapon Custom

    (Bou Haihai Kokuei)- Staff of the Creeping Shadow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 for the summon; 10 to use abilities
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    Passed down by a secret society within the Nara clan. The Three-Sectional Staff is made of black chakra metal which is capable of harnessing the Nara's Shadows. They combine shadow with the same art as doing it with a kunai. When the staff has been infused with the shadow, it increases the strength of the Nara's Shadows. The shadow can be manipulated to make the three-sectional staff connect the three pieces to become one staff, when this happens the wielded can place the staff in front of them able to create the shadows on the staff to span out for a shield or they can create Tendrils/Spikes that come off the staff to do more damage with each hit. Staff can cause Shadow Imitation if when the user strikes the enemy then releases all the shadow within the staff, this in turn makes the staff unable for use for the remainder of the battle.

    Notes:
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Staff drains 10 chakra to user every turn the Staff is being used
    -Shadow Shield, Shadow Imitation, Shadow Tendrils/Spikes count as a move
    -When the staff is summoned; shadow techniques increase +10 (not including Tendrils/Spikes)
    -Shadow Shield only protects from one jutsu
    -Tendrils/Spikes increase staff power by +5; usable twice per battle
    -Imitation only usable once; once used the staff is useless for battle
    -Only usable by a Nara Clan Member
    -Can only be used with permission from MeiX

    Staff looks


    ~Declined: I'm all for new shadow customs as it's an underated part of our RP, but this weapon grants you too many ability~


    *Summon Addition*
    Approval

    (Kuchiyose: Cris)-Summoning: Cris
    Type: Summon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Cris is a lesser of the Yeti Crab family. Son to Sebastian. Cris is much smaller than his father. He is approximately the size of small shrine. Cris is known for his speed, which the user may ride on top of him. Cris also can spew a mist which blurs an enemies vision, in addition Cris has the needle-like hairs like his father which may loosen off and be used with Fuuton/Suiton jutsu's and increase there impact.

    Notes:
    -The blur only lasts 1 turn / only usable once per battle
    -Needles increase damage by +10
    -Summon last 4 turns
    -Only usable by a contract signer of the Yeti Crabs
    -Only trainable by MeiX

    ~Approved~

    (Kuchiyose: Hyaku Kurabu Zanpai)-Summoning: Hundred Crab Defeat
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Generally the Yeti crab is a small crab with the exception of the King and his descendents. This summon harnesses the power of the crabs small size. Once the user makes a small blood sacrifice and slams the ground, 100 small yeti crabs are summoned all around the user. They are commanded to either attach themselves onto the enemy which will cause his to be slowed by the amount on him, he's slowed to the point of being able to movie slightly but not enough to move from a jutsu attack. Also they can be summoned for the purpose of firing thousands of small needle-hairs at the enemy. Lastly the crabs can summon "Concealing Mist" (same as Zabuza's concealing mist) which can hide the user for a short period of time.

    Notes:
    -Summon lasts 4 turns
    -The crabs can only do one of three listed abilities when summoned
    -Once they use one of the abilities they are useless for the battle
    -The damage amount only refers too the "Needle shooting"
    -The slow last 1 turn
    -The "Concealing Mist" lasts 1 turn
    -Usable once per battle
    -Only Yeti Crab contract signers allowed to use
    -Must be taught by Dexter..

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Ken jajjimento)-Swords Judgement
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:
    In this jutsu the user concentrates Katon in his sword and then using his sword makes a wide slash and with it releases a really condensed but powerful wave of fire that cuts anything in its path.
    -No S rank and above katon for the next turn.

    __________________________________________________ _________________
    (Katon:Netsu hanpatsu)-Heat repulse
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:
    In this jutsu the user by using his mastery over Katon can release a steady extremely hot stream/pulse of fire from any part of his body by using the chakra points spread throughout his body. By doing this he is able to release a very short but powerful flare of fire from any part of the body. This is a instinctive behavior and happens instantly. Any mud coming into contact with this jutsu hardens as if it were baked.
    -the pulse is an instantaneous outburst of extremely hot fire in short distance.
    -can be used thrice in a battle.
    -cannot use another fire jutsu in the same round.

    Tried to make it less op

    ~Both declined: Those two customs already exist~

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    (Futon:Uzumaku kaze)-swirling winds
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:
    For this justu the user uses two sword in two hands or one sword in one hand and then with his other hand twirls around both in a disk type rotary motion and with that motion releases a powerful twirling wind which keeps rotating around at quick speeds and moves towards the opponent and then envelopes the opponent and then begins slashing him at all the sides at a very high speed. This wind has a powerful circular motion and therefore pulls the air from the surrounding atmosphere rapidly inward and along with the air if there is lightning spread in the surrounding air it is also pulled in and therefore any lightning in its path is nullified.
    -The user needs to have mastered kenjutsu.
    -This jutsu can be used 3 times in a match.
    -No S rank or higher Futon for the next round.
    -It can be used to cary any single body in the air.

    __________________________________________________ _________________



    ~Declined: I was about to approve it until I got the bold part. Even though it's S-ranked, I'm pretty sure it can't defeat Kirin. You need to take into account the size of a jutsu and not just the rank. Change it with "can defeat most lightning" and then it's approvable~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post

    ~When you update a jutsu, add the old jutsu too to show us what's changed~
    Original jutsu:
    (Amenonuhoko)- Heveanly Jewelled Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 to summon, 10 to use special abilities
    Damage: 80
    Description: The Amenonuhoko is a large naginata (a Japanese spear) created by the primordial Shinto Gods. The Gods gave the naginata to Izanagi and Izanami to create the first land out of nothingness. The naginata itself has a long, razor-sharp blade that never dulls. Its shaft is made of unbreakable holy bamboo. Chakra of two types per battle can be channelled through the blade and shaft of the weapon, and the shaft can be extended and retracted at will in battle, much like the Third Hokage's Enma Staff.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
    Note: User must maintain direct contact with the naginata at all times. If the naginata falls out of the user's possession, then the user will not be able to use its special abilities for the rest of the match.
    Note: User cannot use water or wind jutsus above S-rank while holding the naginata.


    Submitted updated jutsu:

    (Amenonuhoko)- Heveanly Jewelled Spear
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 to summon, 10 to use special abilities
    Damage: 80 (+10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: The Amenonuhoko is a large naginata (a Japanese spear) created by the primordial Shinto Gods. The Gods gave the naginata to Izanagi and Izanami to create the first land out of nothingness. The naginata itself has a long, razor-sharp blade that never dulls. Its shaft is made of unbreakable holy bamboo. Chakra of any type can be channelled through the blade and shaft of the weapon, and the shaft can be extended and retracted at will in battle, much like the Third Hokage's Enma Staff. The holy power exuded by the naginata gives an increase to the user's speed and Taijutsu damage equivalent to opening the second gate. Additionally, the naginata is imbued with the Flying Thunder God seal, allowing the user, if he is capable of using Flying Thunder God, to teleport to any location on the naginata.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
    Note: User must remain within 5 yards of the naginata at all times. If the naginata falls out of the user's possession, then the user will not be able to use its special abilities for the rest of the match.
    Note: User cannot use water, wind, or lightning jutsus above S-rank while holding the naginata.

    ~Declined: No more gates copycat. You can give yourself a boost in speed in your next submission (not saying it'll be approved), but nothing referring to the gates. I really like the part with the Flying Thunder God though.~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Naruto41698 View Post
    (Fuuton: Hari no kōhai) Wind Release: Needle Devastation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user starts out by preforming 4 handsigns and inhaling some air, followed by the user spitting out hundreds of needles infused with wind chakra. Due to the wind element, the needles are capable of going clean through the opponent and are very fast. The user can also move their head back and forth so the needles go everywhere giving a widespread result, making it hard for the opponent to dodge.
    ~Can only be used twice in one battle
    ~This Jutsu can only be used every other turn
    ~No wind jutsu above A rank can be used until you can use this jutsu again
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698

    (Doton/Katon: Iki jigoku) Earth/Fire Release: Living Hell
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After preforming 10 handsigns the user will send there doton chakra through the ground and then create many microscopic holes in the ground. Then the user will commence sending their katon chakra through the microscopic holes and setting the whole field in front of them on Fire. This jutsu is nearly unblockable because the opponent has no way of knowing what is about to happen.
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~No Fire jutsu for the next two two turns and no S rank earth jutsu the next turn
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698

    (Kage Kurōku) Shadow Cloak
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 if used with Shadow Sewing)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will raise their shadow to surround them and make a cloak over them so that anything that makes contact with the Shadow cloak will immediately be under the shadow possession Jutsu. From this Shadow cloak the user can use the Shadow Sewing to impale the opponent. This cloak resembles the Jinchurriki cloak.
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698
    ~This cloak last 3 Turns
    ~Can only be used Twice per Battle
    ~No other Shadow techniques besides Sewing can be used while this cloak is active
    ~Must have finished Shadow training.
    ~All Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's and unrealistic
    Resubmitting

    (Fuuton: Hari no kōhai) Wind Release: Needle Devastation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user starts out by preforming handsigns and inhaling some air, followed by the user spitting out hidden needles infused with wind chakra. Due to the wind element, the needles are capable of going clean through the opponent and are very fast. However the user is only capable of shooting 20 needles at a time.
    ~This Jutsu can only be used every other turn
    ~Can only be taught by Naruto41698
    ~Must know Hidden Needles


    ~Declined: either change the rank or change the description but do something about the bold part~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeyDread View Post
    Resubmitting
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
    Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus when he reforms the crocodile.
    Note: Requires two handseals.
    Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.

    ~Declined~ Needs restrictions
    Resubmitting
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    (Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
    Note: Reforming the crocodile needs two turns.
    Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus above C-Rank after he reformed the crocodile.
    Note: Requires two handseals.
    Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.



    ~Declined: Again, need restrictions. How many time can you use it per battle?~


    Quote Originally Posted by MikeyDread View Post
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is a little smaller than Gamabunta. Kyodaina can use lightning techniques up to A-rank and thanks to his wings he can perform wind techniques upto S-rank. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
    Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
    Note: Kyodaina can't use wind and lightning techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.

    ~Declined~ Way too big to fly, if he is almost as big as gamabunta, his wings would stretch over a couple of kilometers.
    Resubmitting
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
    Rank: S
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is as big as Gamakichi in the Pain Arc. Kyodaina can use lightning techniques up to A-rank and thanks to his wings he can perform wind techniques upto S-rank. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
    Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
    Note: Kyodaina can't use wind and lightning techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.


    ~Declined: Make it use one of the two elements and restrict it's usage so it counts as one of your move too.~


    Edited the bolded parts
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    (Kage: Tama) -Shadow Sphere
    (Kage: Tama) -Shadow Sphere
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will gather his chakra into his shadow wich will extend. Afterwards the user will use the chakra in his shadow to form a sphere around his opponent. He will be unable to see anything and won't be able to run out of the shadow.
    Note: One must have finished his shadow training.
    Note: One must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
    Note : Can only be used by Nara's.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.


    ~Declined: What are the requirement for your jutsu to take effect? Must it connect with your opponent's sword? Elaborate~


    (Kage: Akumu) -Shadow Nightmare
    (Kage: Akumu) -Shadow Nightmare
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: After the user has performed the Kage: Tama jutsu he creates tentacles out of the sphere wich surround the opponent to stab him. The user will be able to locate his opponent in the sphere thanks to the chakra in the shadow.
    Note: One must have performed Kage: Tama.
    Note: One must have finished his shadow training.
    Note: One must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
    Note : Can only be used by Nara's.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.


    ~Declined: Kage Tama was declined~


    (Kenjutsu: Naitomea no surasshu) – Sword Arts: Nightmare Slash
    (Kenjutsu: Naitomea no surasshu) – Sword Arts: Nightmare Slash
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will use his sword to stab towards the stomach of his opponent and as the swords hits the stomach, he will quickly draw his sword upwards to slash trough the head of his opponent.
    Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread



    ~Declined: Restrictions? And change the description, we don't like instant kills~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyouton: Himari)- Ice: Ice Ball
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: User creates a Ball of ice, in their hands by focusing water chakra in their dominate hand while using wind chakra to chill and freeze the ball and will the launch it at the opponent using their wind chakra.
    - Can only be used 5 times per battle.


    (Hyouton: Hikiba)- Ice: Ice Fang
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will focus their water chakra outside of their body, then chill it with their wind chakra, creating a fang shaped ice cicle. Sending it flying at the opponent with their wind chakra.
    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.


    ~Both Approved~

    (Hyouton: Hyouchuu Shougeki)- Ice: Icicle Crash
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will manipulate the wind and water in the sky with their chakra to create a large amount of icicles, that will then drop down on the opponent. The icicles that drop down can be in a organized shape or fall at random.
    - Can be used 4 times per battle.


    ~Declined: Please describe where the distance separating the created ice and your target~


    (Hyouton: Odoribarahana)- Ice Release: Dancing Rose Petals
    Type: Sup
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: By freezing the water molecules in the air with the users wind chakra the user can manipulate them into a blizzard of falling rose's that after making contact with the enemy start's to freeze them until they are frozen in ice, making it impossible to move.
    - Can be used 3 times per battle.
    - Can only be taught by -Tauburn-


    (Hyouton: Hishuriken)- Ice Release: Ice Shuriken
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will condense the moisture around them into numerous shuriken which are then launched at the opponent. As long there is moisture in the air the user can create an almost infinite supply of shurikens.
    - Can be used 4 times per battle.
    - Can only be taught by -Tauburn-


    ~Both Declined: The first one is definitely not A-rank (seen it in Bleach) and need to be restricted differently when you make it S-rank (at least). The second needs further restriction; how many shuriken can you create? Infinite is an automatic decline~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal : Chimpanze
    Scroll Owner:GITANSHU
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

    chimpanze summoning

    RANK:A
    Type: Defence-Offence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:The user does a monkey handseal and summons the great falco
    it has a natural affinity toward Earth and can use it up to A rank and moves fast on land and can climb on almost anything
    ~can only be thought by gitanshu~
    ~lasts for 5 turns~
    ~can only be summoned once per battle~
    ~no B rank and above jutsu for next 1 turn~



    ~Declined: Contract already exist:http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...0&postcount=28~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Migualon J.J. View Post


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    (Kageoni) - Shadow Demon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long (depends on position of opponent´s shadow)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user uses his shadow manipulation power to be able to hurt opponent through his shadow, meaning that if he for example stabs place where the opponent has heart in his shadow, he hits the opponent´s heart too.

    Note:
    *Usable once per battle
    *Can only be used by Nara
    *Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.

    ~Declined~ unrealistic
    (Kawa Kageoni) - Shadow Demon Hide
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long (depends on position of opponent´s shadow)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Describtion: The user manipulates opponent´s shadow and focuses his chakra into it. Than the user manipulates his own shadow and combines his body with opponent´s and hides in it for as long as he wants to.



    Note:
    *Usable once per battle
    *Can only be used by Nara
    *Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.

    ~Approved~
    My new CW, dropping my Katen Kyokotsu (well, it´s name isn´t Katen Kyokotsu, but whatever )

    (Enraiha; Subeta No Faia) - Enraiha; Sword Of Fire
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Describtion: Enraiha is sword that is said to be created by king of Flame Spirits. It is very light weapon which was made from steel of the highest quality, it has special color, it is dark orange because the King of Flame Spirits put his powers into it and it became wanted by everyone for it´s special abilities. It can cut through human´s neck with not high problems if infused with normal chakra.



    Abilities and Notes:
    *The user even if he has this sword "only" on his back on on his belt, can use Fire Jutsus without any hand seals
    *The user can put his own Fire or Normal Chakra into this sword to make it be surrounded by Fire or Normal Chakra
    *The user´s Fire Jutsus got powerboost +15 to damage
    *Enraiha is indestructible

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing Fire swords

    (界王拳; Kaio-ken) - Fist of the World King
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: (Taijutsu +15) (-10 to the user for every turn activated)
    Describtion:
    Kaio-ken is technique which was created by famous martial art master King Kai who wasn´t able to completely master it so he taught it to his student Migualon J.J. who completely mastered it and currently he is the only person able to use it. The user can at any time deactivate Kaio-ken. The user focuses his chakra around his body which creates crimson "cloak" around the user thanks to which the user´s strength and speed increases dramatically. The user´s chakra is active all the time Kaio-ken is activated, the user is hurt every turn it is active.



    Note:
    *Can only be used once per battle
    *Lasts for 7 turns
    *The user´s speed increases by 5 (by the Speed chart)
    *The user can´t use genjutsus and Water element while the Kaio-ken is activated
    ~Declined~
    Re-submitting
    (bolded parts are changed)



    (界王拳; Kaio-ken) - Fist of the World King
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (-10 chakra for each turn it´s activated)
    Damage: (Taijutsu and Kaito´s Taijutsu +10) (-10 to the user for each turn activated)
    Describtion:
    Kaio-ken is technique which was created by famous martial art master King Kai who wasn´t able to completely master it so he taught it to his student Migualon J.J. who completely mastered it and currently he is the only person able to use it. The user can at any time deactivate Kaio-ken. The user focuses his chakra around his body which creates crimson "cloak" around the user thanks to which the user´s strength and speed increases dramatically. The user´s chakra is active all the time Kaio-ken is activated, the user is hurt every turn it is active.



    Note:
    *Can only be used once per battle
    *Lasts for 5 turns
    *The user´s speed increases by 5 (by the Speed chart, in other words, speed of SM)
    *The user can´t use genjutsus and Water and Earth element while the Kaio-ken is activated


    ~Declined: This should be ranked forbidden considering the great strain it puts on the user's body. Work on the restriction, 5 turns is too much and there should be some physical drawback other then 10 damage points which basically don't do anything~

    (Sutaffu No Hinote) - Staff Of Fire
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: (costs 30 chakra when using Water Evaporation)
    Damage points: N/A
    Describtion: Sutaffu No Hinote is a spear-like staff, which is weapon, which is said to be made by gods for 1 person who masteres the Fire Release completely. This weapon is famous because it was weapon of Sage Of The Six Paths and than of his Older Son. This weapon has become even more famous for being 1 of the weapons of Madara Uchiha and when he was defeated by Shodai Hokage Hashirama, he took it and it became 1 of the biggest treasures of Konoha. This treasure wasn´t used for a long time, but during 2nd Shinobi Great War, Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi was using it to increase his power in Fire Release. After the war, Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi created "law" thanks to which it must never be used, only in the War in which Konoha would need big help. It wasn´t used in 3rd Shinobi Great War, but on the start of 4th Shinobi Great War, Godaime Hokage Tsunade gave this weapon to Migualon J.J., shinobi from Amegakure who decided to help them in this very hard war.



    Abilities and Notes:
    *The user, even if he has this staff "only" on his back, can use Fire Jutsus without any hand seals
    *The user can put his own Fire or Normal Chakra into this staff to make it be surrounded by Fire or Normal Chakra (on it´s blade)
    *When infused with Fire Chakra it can evaporate B-rank Water Jutsus and below when it hits them (3 times in the battle)
    *Evaporating Water Jutsus is considered as 1 of the 3 moves per turn
    *Staff Of Fire is indestructible
    *If someone else than Migualon J.J. (or those who get permission to use it) touches this staff, they get burned

    ~Declined: this is a 7SM rip off even if it isn't technically a sword and is bit OP~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Doton: Chikyū no naka Kami) - Earth Release: Rebirth of the Earth God
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self-Affected
    Chakra cost: 50 (+10 per turn.)
    Damage points: N/A (-20 to the user.)
    Description: The user will make a single hand sign causing several brown Kanji signs to appear over his whole body which then begins to glow with a brownish aura. As the Kanjis appear they will begin to draw in natural chakra from the earth, causing the user to enter a state called Ancient Earth Mode, which makes him able to ultlize a stronger form for earth release, it's more hardened and faster than ever. Only the most high ranked and skilled Earth users have been able to get acces to this state.
    Abilities which the user gains:
    -The users durability, stamina, strenght and speed inceases drastically.
    -The user gains mastery over the Earth Element which makes him able to mold/use earth techniques without the need of hand signs or requires contact with the ground.
    -The users Earth techniques will get boosted by +25 and +10 Taijutsu as his skin will get hardened aswell.
    -The user will be able to sense anything which contains chakra, that is in contact with the ground.
    Drawbacks:
    -The Kanjis on the users body will remain glowing brownish for five turns after entering the mode, when the five turns end, the kanjis will loose their glow and the user will return to normal and won't be able to enter this state for the rest of the battle.
    -The user cannot use any elemental ninjutsu execpt for for earth release, mainly because of the high amount of earth chakra within his body. Though non-elemental ninjutsu may still be taken in use in this mode.
    -When the five turns end and the Kanjis loose their glow the user will return to normal with a heavily strain on their body and heavy breathing which leaves him pretty much open for attacks(The strain will be equaling to 20 damage on the user.).
    ~Declined~ OP
    (Doton: Chikyū no naka Kami) - Earth Release: Rebirth of the Earth God
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self-Affected
    Chakra cost: 50 (+10 per turn.)
    Damage points: N/A (-20 to the user.)
    Description: The user will make a single hand sign causing several brown Kanji signs to appear over his whole body which then begins to glow with a brownish aura. As the Kanjis appear they will begin to draw in natural chakra from the earth, causing the user to enter a state called Ancient Earth Mode, which makes him able to ultlize a stronger form for earth release, it's more hardened and faster than ever. Only the most high ranked and skilled Earth users have been able to get acces to this state.

    Ability which the user gains:
    -The users durability, stamina, strenght and speed inceases drastically.
    -The user gains mastery over the Earth Element which makes him able to mold/use earth techniques without the need of hand signs.
    -The users Earth techniques will get boosted by +25 and +10 Taijutsu.
    -The user will be able to sense anything which contains chakra, that touches the ground.
    Drawbacks:
    -The Kanjis on the users body will remain glowing brownish for five turns after entering the mode, when the five turns end, the kanjis will loose their glow and the user will return to normal.
    -The user cannot use any elemental ninjutsu execpt for for earth release, mainly because of the high amount of earth chakra within his body. Though non-elemental ninjutsu may still be taken in use in this mode.
    -When the five turns end and the Kanjis loose their glow the user will return to normal with a heavily strain on their body and heavy breathing which leaves him pretty much open for attacks(The strain will be equaling to 20 damage on the user.)
    -The user aswell will only be capable of using two jutsus per turn for 3 turns after he exits this mode.

    (Added bolded part, hopefully it will get approved now. >_<)

    ~Declined: Still OP~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon : Kasai Ni-Doru)- Fire style: Fire Needles
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage Points: 65
    Desription: The User concentrates his fire chakra and blows out a fireball into the air once he blows out the fireball. It explodes directly so, it also harmes the user. But when it explodes it releases dozens of needles that the user directs at his opponent. The needles are so, small that your opponent barely can see them. So, when this jutsu is used the user has to protect him/her self.
    .Note: This, jutsu can be used once per battle.
    .Note: The user must be Sannin rank or above.
    .Note: This jutsu can be cancelled out by water jutsu above A rank.

    --------------------------------------------------------------------------

    ~Declined: If it hurt you then it should be forbidden. The jutsu in itself is a bit OP and the restrictions don't make sense; it could be stop by something other then water. Talking about restrictions, this jutsu is seriously lacking them~

    (Yoton: Maguma Koutetsu) - Magma Release: Magma Armor
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 100
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performing the necessary handseals then take in a deep breath as the user brings forth Lava out of the users mouth and then shoot it over your own body and create a Armor made out of Maguma (Lava, Yoton). So, the users whole body is covered in Lava.+ the user can move freely. This, forbidden jutsu can be used against wepons who try to cut the users body, Wind jutsu, Fire jutsu. And, any attack weaker then S-class won't work on;y the five Elements.
    .Note: The, User must be Kage or above.
    .Note: The, User must have Kurotsuchi, Terumi or a Rõushi Bio.
    .Note: This, Jutsu Lasts 3 turns.
    .Note: This, Jutsu can be used once per battle.


    ~Declined: Work on the bold part. Add some restrictions, cause right now you're basically moving freely with a lava suit. There needs to be some physical drawbacks to you wearing a lava armor~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Konchū sutairu: Saimin u~ēbu) Insect Style: Hypnotic Wave
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user sends a huge (house size) rolling wave of insects towards the opponent. The insects, in this falling motion, use the shine of their shells/exoskeleton to refract the light of the sun or the moon into the opponent’s eyes (unknown to them…only sees the wave) to cause them to have a mild seizure from the light. This makes a slight muscle spasm of the opponent’s legs, paralyzing them as the wave of insect crash down on them.
    -Can only use with a clear sky
    -Can only use two times per battle
    -Paralyzes last one turn
    -Can be blocked by sunglasses
    -Only A-rank and below bug techniques the next turn
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined: Reflecting the light with their exoskeleton? Really? Do no resubmit~

    (Konchū sutairu: Konchū doragon-jutsu) Insect Style: Insect Dragon Jutsu
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes two handseals to create up to two large dragons of insects. The insects on the outside of the dragon release a constant supply of chakra, to protect them from A-rank and below attacks. Once the dragon get close/hits the opponent, the insects on the inside of the dragon begin to viciously feed on the opponent’s chakra. The dragon can also (with one more handseal) shootout insects from its mouth (like a dragon’s fire). The user can stand on the head of the dragon.
    -Can only use three times per battle
    -Last two turn
    -Shot insect are A-rank and counts as a move
    -No S-rank bug techniques the next turn
    -Must be a bug user
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined: sustaining a chakra wall capable of protection A-rank and lower attacks would most likely kill those bugs from chakra exhaustion. They're not ninjas, keep in mind the extent of their abilities~

    (Konchū sutairu: Konchū barikēdo) Insect Style: Insect Barricade
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user send out a wall/dome of insects that release the chakra of the user/opponent that they feed on, to make a wall able to withstand A-rank and below attacks and still stand. The wall then falls in an avalanche of insects (wall only) attacking the opponent and feeding on their chakra.
    -Can only use three times per battle
    -Wall/Dome falls if used to block an S-rank attack
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Approved: The bold part makes the difference between this jutsu and the last one~


    (100 Ningyō no rikugun: Torappusukuwaddo no arufa) 100 Puppet Army: Trap Squad Alpha
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This squad is made up of 15 puppets of the 100 Puppet Army. These puppets have seals on them (feet, arms, and chest) and work in three teams of five; the tags are to make a five seal barrier. The puppets, after surrounding the opponent, plant their legs underground (via drills); in a pentagon formation and release the seals at once. This instantly makes a barrier from puppet to puppet, three feet underground and eight feet above the ground (block style). The barrier can be destroyed by an aggressive S-rank technique or two A-rank technique, otherwise it’s unbreakable. The user can shoot Senbon/smoke into the barrier (counts as a move) from the puppets that make up the barrier (via small holes in front of the puppet’s mouth)
    -Must release the 100 Puppet Army before
    -Can only use three times (15 puppets) per battle
    -Barrier last two turns
    -Once the barrier is used the puppets become unusable
    -Senbon/Smoke bombs count as a move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined: Check the bold part. Also, work on the restriction; 3 times per match is too much for example~


    (Godai-juu no ayatsuri ningyō) The Five Great Beast Puppets
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user summons five puppets called The Five Great Beast. The five puppets are made to look like human/animal hybrids, each with different looks and abilities (A-rank & below). The puppets are outfitted with the normal puppet gear, with a few extras. The animals are Bat, Panther, Eagle, Tiger, and Octopus.

    1. Ulquiorra-Bat: Has large spring loaded wings that give him the ability to generate A-rank gusts of wind. He also has a whip tail, and uses it as such.



    2. Grimmjow-Panther: Is a basic combat puppet with blades extending from his elbows and legs. His lack of weapons, slender frame, and sharp claws give him an speed advantage over other puppets, this also increases his attack power to A-rank taijutsu




    3. Redder-Eagle: Has large wings with sharp feathers (kunai size) that can be shot out at the opponent with the flap of the wing (B-rank). He also has sharp talons for feet.




    4. Vega-Tiger: Has a sharp blade on each hand and a whip-like tail with a sharp short dual-sided blade on the end. On his head he has two steel fangs on each side of his face, with wire attached; these fangs are capable of being shot out and retracted. Vega has a small generator inside his head that applies a C-rank electrical current through the wire and fangs.




    5. Luppi-Octopus: Has eight large steel tentacles extending from his back. The tentacles can reach to mid-range to attack and have retractable spikes in the ends, they also can be used to make an A-rank shield



    -No other puppets can be used (unless sasori uses his chakra thread machine)
    -Has to summon all at once
    -Can be destroyed by S-rank attack
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha


    ~Declined: Great jutsu, but some things to work on. Look at the bold part in the last puppet's description and change it to short-range. Also, lower that A-rank defense. Again, you're lacking restrictions. Such a jutsu should have major drawbacks. Take away the part about Sasori being able to summon more puppets when those are on the field~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by HightimesHoward View Post

    (Kchuysei: Sendo's kenshiki) Sendo's Pride
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short(Summon) Short-Mid(Lightning blast)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A(+80 for lightning blast)
    Description: This sword is the second of two swords passed down from Lord Sendo. Named "Sendo's Pride" because of it's slick and slender beauty. This sword was always in Sendo's possession since he first obtained it from the Condor Elders long ago. He shared his chakra with it just as he did the other, so it too has the ability to rank up Raiton jutsu if the user so wishes it. It still feeds on the users chakra just as it did with Sendo taking in their Raiton chakra and making it it's own. The chakra absobed by the sword from the user can be sent out as a blast of lightning that can be used as a Short-Mid range attack. It can only be used a total of five times in battle. It's final ability is gained due to the fact that the sword has absorbed both the user's and Sendo's Raiton chakra. The sword can absorb B Raiton jutsu and below it then nullifies the attack this can be done 5 times as well.

    Abilities:

    + 1 Rank to Raiton jutsu
    Lightning blast(3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)
    Absobtion of B rank and below jutsu Raiton jutsu (3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)

    Notes:

    ~Has to be summoned within the first 3 turns~
    ~Cannot be summoned with any condors the turn before or after~
    ~Doesn't need to be summoned if it is in the user's bio~
    ~Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Condor contract~

    ~Declined~
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    (Kchuysei: Sendo's kenshiki) Sendo's Pride
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short(Summon) Short-Mid(Lightning blast)
    Chakra Cost: 40(+20 each turn to the user)
    Damage Points: N/A(+80 for lightning blast)
    Description: This sword is the second of two swords passed down from Lord Sendo. Named "Sendo's Pride" because of it's slick and slender beauty. This sword was always in Sendo's possession since he first obtained it from the Condor Elders long ago. He shared his chakra with it just as he did the other, so it too has the ability to rank up Raiton jutsu if the user so wishes it. It still feeds on the users chakra just as it did with Sendo taking in their Raiton chakra and making it it's own. The chakra absobed by the sword from the user can be sent out as a blast of lightning that can be used as a Short-Mid range attack. It can only be used a total of five times in battle.
    Abilities:

    + 1 Rank to Raiton jutsu
    Lightning blast(3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)


    Notes:

    ~Has to be summoned within the first 3 turns~
    ~Cannot be summoned with any condors the turn before or after~
    ~Doesn't need to be summoned if it is in the user's bio~
    ~Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Condor contract~
    ~The sword takes 20 chakra from the user each turn feeding on his chakra~

    Added the bolded and took out the underlined....

    ~Declined: In all honesty, do you believe the restriction you added will affect you in a fight?~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    CUSTOM WEAPON
    (Shingiri no Tachi)-Sword that cuts the Gods
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 (when using effect)
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This katana, named Shingiri no Tachi (Sword that cuts the Gods) is feared by many. The blade is made out of an unknown metal, in that it is a silent blade and when swung, its swipe is unheard. It has a golden brown diamond guard. It has the power to vaporize into dust which floats around the wielder, confusing the opponent that the weapon is gone. The wielder can instantly reform the sword to finish off an opponent.
    ~ Setsuna Chiri (Instant Dust) is the swords effect

    Weapon's jutsu:
    (Setsuna Chiri)-Instant Dust
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 0
    Description: User converts the sword into dust which floats around the user. The user can freely convert the sword from dust to sword and vice versa instantly without sound.
    ~Only Byakugan can see the dust precisely



    CUSTOM SUMMON

    Summoning Animal: Leopon
    Scroll Owner: ~CoOkie Monster~
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none atm.

    ~Both declined: the first one is OP and the second one falls under the "jurisdiction of either the lion contract or the leopard contract~

    ~Update: contract approved~ a Liger contract exists too
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kuchiyose: Saimyōshō) ~ Summoning: The Hell Wasp
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform the tattoo version of the summoning jutsu of the wasp contract, summoning forth Saimyōshō~The Hell Wasp. Saimyōshō is a single gigantic king of the wasps, the size of Gamabunta with the flying speed of Pein's giant bird. Saimyōshō can use all fire element techniques, he can only use 5 techniques per summoning. They count as one of the users 3 jutsus per turn. Saimyōshō's poisonous stinger is unlike any other bug, a single drop of venom from Saimyōshō paralyzes the foe for 1 turn.

    ~Saimyōshō can only be summoned once per battle
    ~Saimyōshō can only remain on the field for 5 turns of the summoner
    ~Nothing under B-rank can harm Saimyōshō, to kill Saimyōshō you must deliver 4 b-rank techniques, 3 a-rank techniques, or 2 s-rank techniques irregardless of element.

    ~Declined~ Too big for an insect, make it smaller..
    (Kuchiyose: Saimyōshō) ~ Summoning: The Hell Wasp
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform the tattoo version of the summoning jutsu of the wasp contract, summoning forth Saimyōshō~The Hell Wasp. Saimyōshō is a single gigantic king of the wasps, the size of a horse with the flying speed of Pein's giant bird. Saimyōshō can use all fire element techniques, he can only use 5 techniques per summoning. They count as one of the users 3 jutsus per turn. Saimyōshō's poisonous stinger is unlike any other bug, a single drop of venom from Saimyōshō paralyzes the foe for 1 turn.

    ~Saimyōshō can only be summoned once per battle
    ~Saimyōshō can only remain on the field for 5 turns of the summoner
    ~Nothing under B-rank can harm Saimyōshō, to kill Saimyōshō you must deliver 4 b-rank techniques, 3 a-rank techniques, or 2 s-rank techniques irregardless of element.

    EDITED SIZE

    ~Declined: Work on the bold part. 2 S-rank is too much for a summon. Kirin and Amaterasu are S-rank and I'm pretty sure one shot of those could kill your wasp~


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    (Kuchiyose: Saimyōshō Chakra Sen'yaku) ~ Summoning: Hell Wasp Chakra Infusion
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will summon a giant wasp, the size of a horse, and infuse into him upon summoning, a specific element of chakra (fire, water, lighting, ice, etc) of the users choosing. The wasp will then be able to use all of that element's jutsus, and carry that element's weakness, example, a wasp infused with fire chakra, will have a weakness to water.

    ~This jutsu can only be used twice
    ~Can be used with ANY element the user knows, KG or otherwise
    ~Can only be destroyed by high rank jutsus from the weakness element (3 a rank, or 2 s rank jutsus of the wasps current weakness. Example: if the wasp is infused with fire chakra, he needs to be hit by 3 a rank water or 2 s rank water jutsus to be destroyed)
    ~The wasp's jutsus count as one of the users 3 jutsus

    ~Declined: I like the general idea, but same as above, the restrictions are off in my opinion. Also, take out the part about your wasp being able to copy any element including KG. It should be restricted to the basic fives~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 08-30-2011 at 03:47 AM.

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