Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

**BluePhenix** · 08-31-2011, 03:57 AM

Originally Posted by BluePhenix

(Doton: Meiun Hishou) – Earth Style: Doom Flight
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Opponent may be knocked out)
Description: User stomps the ground and two S-rank pillars of earth immediately sprout from the ground and intertwine to bind the opponent, then separating from the ground to further launch towards the sky while forcibly carrying the opponent along with them. This move is so sudden that, by the time the opponent reacts to it, he is already launched in the air. And if he doesn’t escape the bind he is assured a freefall crash to the ground, where he will be knocked out.
Note: Can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
Note: Cannot perform any other earth technique in the same turn that Doom Flight is used.

Declined. Different opponents have different reaction times which can be amplified by using certain techniques, so you cannot force a condition like that. Please re-phrase the bolded part in order to make a more generalized assesment of its speed.

Thanks for the feedback! I've amended the bolded part by using Mugi's speed chart as reference.

(Doton: Meiun Hishou) – Earth Style: Doom Flight
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Opponent may be knocked out)
Description: User stomps the ground and two S-rank pillars of earth immediately sprout from the ground and intertwine to bind the opponent, then separating from the ground to further launch towards the sky while forcibly carrying the opponent along with them. This move's effectiveness will vary with the user, i.e. for opponents with reaction speed less than or equal to that of the user, this move is so sudden that, by the time they react to it, they will already be launched in the air. And if they don’t escape the bind they are assured a freefall crash to the ground, where they will be knocked out.
Note: This move can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
Note: User cannot perform any other earth technique in the same turn that this move is used.

~Declined: It was clearly stated that the speed chart should only be used when debates arise in the RP section, it is not to be used as reference in customs~

**Dōdai** · 08-31-2011, 04:36 AM

~Accepted~

~Declined: thousands of chakra needled and it's a D-rank jutsu? I doubt it~

~Declined: take away the bold part or elaborate on it~

~Declined: You didn't undergo Yin Yang training~

**-Yard-** · 08-31-2011, 05:06 AM

Originally Posted by ~Yard~

Custom Weapon

(Kchuysei: Sendo's houtei ) Sendo's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 on the first turn summoned if summoned.)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This sword is one of two swords and was named "seiryoku" Meaning "Might". The twin swords belonged to Lord Sendo and aided Lord Sendo through many battles in the great Condor war. Lord Sendo passed his swords down to the holder of the Condor contract to aid anyone who has signed the Condor contract in battle. This swords special ability is being able to literally cut any lightning jutsu. Any jutsu that is aimed at the user that is lightning base will be attracted to the sword making this sword exactly like a lightning rod. With every bit of lightning that this sword absorbs, it can be fired back at the opponent. This sword can also help on the user's own Raiton techniques by adding the lightning it absorbs into the jutsu that is performed. While sword fighting, the lightning that has been absorbed can also be easily channeled through the blade making cutting and piercing and also making the slashes lightning fast, very easily.

Notes:
* Doesn't need to be summoned if the sword is placed in the users bio.
* If summoned it must be summoned within the first 3 turns.
* Can only be summoned by those who have signed the condor contract
* If someone tries to wield the sword besides the summoner, they will be shocked with enough amps and current to kill.

~Declined: Read the bold part, they must go or be altered to something acceptable. Where are the restrictions on it's abilities?~

Custom Weapon

(Kchuysei: Sendo's houtei ) Sendo's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 on the first turn summoned if summoned.)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This sword is one of two swords and was named "seiryoku" Meaning "Might". The twin swords belonged to Lord Sendo and aided Lord Sendo through many battles in the great Condor war. Lord Sendo passed his swords down to the holder of the Condor contract to aid anyone who has signed the Condor contract in battle. This sword is able to absorb lightning techniques. With every bit of lightning that this sword absorbs, it can be fired back at the opponent. This sword can also help on the user's own Raiton techniques by adding the lightning it absorbs into the jutsu that is performed. While sword fighting, the lightning that has been absorbed can also be easily channeled through the blade making cutting and piercin, very easily.

Notes:
* Doesn't need to be summoned if the sword is placed in the users bio.
* If summoned it must be summoned within the first 3 turns.
* Can only be summoned by those who have signed the condor contract
* If someone tries to wield the sword besides the summoner, they will be shocked with enough amps and current to make them drop it.
*Can only absorb 3 Raiton attacks.
*User still takes 10 damage upon the sword absorbing the attacks.

Added restrictions.

~Declined: I feel like you're just trying to pull a fast one on me here. What's the difference between "being able to literally cut any lightning jutsu" and "This sword is able to absorb lightning techniques"? You added no restrictions whatsoever concerning the rank of lightning it can absorb, which I was asking for. Also, do you really believe that adding 10 damage to yourself will change anything in my decision? If you wanted to add physical restrictions, add ones that really have an impact on your abilities to fight~

Updating my summoning boss and another condor and yes I hold the condor contract.
http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...3&postcount=84
The reason is that I just got the contract from a friend and also learned a few limitations on summonings and these were pretty under powered Compared to the limitations so I figured I'd adjust them while taking advantage of this contract and bring some life into it

So from this...

To this...

(Kchuysei: Joutei Sendo) Summoning: Lord Sendo:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 100 (20 per-turn when Fused)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This summons Joutei Sendo the Lord of the Condors. Joutei Sendo has the unique ability to fuse on it's Summoners back, when fused it appears that the user has wings. This lets the user fly at fast speeds and make it easier to use Raiton Jutsu Joutei Sendo can also use up to S-rank Raiton techniques.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
-The Summoning can only use a total of 4 Raiton techniques.
-When fused Raiton Jutsu need one less hand seal.
-Every jutsu used by the summon counts in the user's 3 jutsu per turn.
-Can only be fused for 3 turns

Bolded what I updated ^^

~Approved: Edited the bold part and made it so your summon can use up to S-rank raiton~

Boufuu Kyouzuu no Jutsu (Gale Surge)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: A defensive jutsu at best. The user distils the air around him or her with his or her chakra and at the exact moment of attack releases a large burst of air. The blast of wind goes out three feet and knocks a victim back at least five feet and can stop projectiles. It is a defensive move that is usually used when the user is caught off guard.
The wind can only be released in one direction however.
- Can only be taught by Zen and Yard.

~Declined: restrictions? It may only be B-rank, but we don't want this jutsu to be spammed in a fight considering it limits the taijutsu. Also, elaborate on the time it takes to perform this jutsu and the effect on the surrounding air (being compressed then released?)~

(Raiton: ranpu suicchi) Lightning release: Light Switch
Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user will form a two handseals and use their raiton chakra to adjust the brightness of Raiton based techs.
- This does not increase the power of raiton techs, only adjusts the brightness.

~Declined: Elaborate on the effect it'd have if you made your raiton jutsu really bright. It lacks descriptions on the effects and restrictions (for the same reasons mentioned in the jutsu above)~

If you think it should be limited then please put what you think the proper limit should be as another restriction.

**DopeyDwarf** · 08-31-2011, 07:53 AM

(Ninpou: Bakuyaku Tama No Jutsu) - Ninja Arts: Explosive Projectile Technique

(Ninpou: Tama Gakure No Jutsu) - Ninja Arts: Projectile Concealment Technique

~Both declined, do not resubmit~

(Mushi Kuuchuufuyou no jutsu) – Insect Levitation Technique

~Declined, do not resubmit~ similar technique exists

(Fuuton: Kaze Hensen) - Wind style: Winds of Change

~Declined, do not resubmit~ similar technique exists.

(Suiton: Sekiyu Tekishutsu) – Water Style: Oil Extraction

~Declined, do not resubmit~ you can't create oil

**Magic..** · 08-31-2011, 09:47 AM

Originally Posted by Seto Kaiba

Custom weapon

(akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A(20+ gen)
Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked.Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion,with the 4th string as an exception.Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder.
Because of its portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.

-Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
-when in posession of the user,every genjutsu used by the user,gain's +20 damage points and the harp blocks illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(ms illusions).
-illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn.
-Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

~Declined~ there are a few things not right. First and for all how the hell can it do +20 damage if a genjutsu by default doesn't do any damage at all. Your harp is not going to change that as then it's not genjutsu anymore. And can agree on being immune to genjutsu, however not against forbidden and not infinitely or without a single drawback

I would make the tones as seperate jutsus,if approved^^

[B]Custom weapon[B]

(akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A(20+ to any genjutsu,that already has a damage point)
Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting
chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked.Each tone
brands it's listeners with a particular
type of illusion,with the 4th string as
an exception.Also the harp acts as a
barrier against illusion attacks thrown
at the weilder.
Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.
-Note: The user can't perform
handseals whilst holding the harp.
-when in posession of the user,every genjutsu used by the user,gain's +20
damage points and the harp blocks
illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions).
-illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 5 times per match.
-Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

I would make the tones as seperate jutsus,if approved^^

~Declined: All the music arts are the property of our fellow moderator; RokuNR. Ask him if you can make similar jutsu to his before submitting it again~

Updating this..

Originally Posted by Seto Kaiba

(Suiton: poseidon's hei,kabe ) - Water Style: poseidon's wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wide Range,10 ft wall of water horizontally in front of the user out from the ground,by slamming his/her two hands on the ground. This wall of water is especially effective at stopping fire and lightining techniques.
Note-
-Does not require water source
-Can only 3 times a battle
-can only stop A rank fire and B lightining jutsu.

To this
(Suiton: poseidon's hei,kabe ) - Water Style: poseidon's wall
Rank: S
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wide Range,10 ft wall of water horizontally in front of the user from the ground,the seconds he/she slams his/her two hands on the ground. This wall of water is exceptionally good,for stoping fire based attacks and can further, be used as a water source
Note-
-Does not require water source
-Can only 2 times a battle

~Approved~

Updating this

Originally Posted by Seto Kaiba

(Tako Taishita modo)-Octupuse mode
Rank: S
Type: Offense/defense
Range: n/a
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take features of an octopus in other words be like an octopus except they gain just more four hands making it six hands in total.In this mode the user is able to stretch some parts of their body up to 10 ft, these includes their tongue,neck,arms and legs,they can also detarch and regrow non vital parts of their body like the legs,hands,tongue and their body are covered with pores which helps them stick to anything their body comes incontact with And also grants the user flexibility,great speed(underwater) and ability to survive underwater.

-Must be able to summon uctopus
-Must be used only once per battle
-The user cannot use Taijutsu in this mode and Taijutsu (B rank) is useless against the user
-Only last for 5 turns
-Must be immobilized/stand still for 1 turn to activate this mode.

Approved

To This
(Tako Taishita modo)-Octupuse mode
Rank: S
Type: Offense/defense
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80(20+ to every water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take features of an octopus in other words be like an octopus except they gain just more four hands making it six hands in total.In this mode the user is able to stretch some parts of their body up to 10 ft, these includes their tongue,neck,arms and legs,they can also detarch and regrow non vital parts of their body like the legs,hands,tongue and their body are covered with pores which helps them stick to anything their body comes incontact with And also grants the user flexibility,ability to squezze through tight openings ,speed only trackable by a 3 tomoe sharingan(on top and underwater) and ability to survive underwater.Lastly four giant size detachable octopus hands erupts from the users back ,which can be used to pound the target to death,as they are able to demolish any wall.

-Must be able to summon uctopus
-Must be used only once per battle
-The user cannot use Taijutsu in this mode,except jyuuken and Taijutsu (B rank) is useless against the user
-Only last for 5 turns
-Must be immobilized/stand still for 1 turn to activate this mode.

~Declined: I wouldn't have approved the original version so I won't approve a powerup of it~

I have tauburn's permission to update this

Originally Posted by -Tauburn-

(Myou Yakke)- Chakra Coat

~Approved~

To this
(Myou Yakke)- Chakra Coat
Rank:S
Type: Defence
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user molds up huge amount of chakra within their body then channels it out through all 361 chakra points to form a blunt coat of chakra covering their whole body.This chakra coat enables the user to walk on sticky materials,swamps, spikes and also a good defense against chakra base attacks(S ranks).
-can only be used by a hyuuga clan member
- only once per battle
- the coat last for 4 turns.

~Declined: I wouldn't have approved the original version so I won't approve a powerup of it~

New submission.
(Doton-Sokonashi no Kussaku) : Earth style-bottomless excarvation
Rank:S
Type: Defense/Offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:This technique requires The user to first perform some handseals, then he or she forcefully seperates his/her hands whilst manipulating and horizontally excarvating/demacating the earth between them and the target.this jutsu can be used to drain out water jutsu,watery/muddy terrain because of the mass capacity of this technique.
-Twice per battle.

~Approved~

**Darijan** · 08-31-2011, 10:32 AM

Originally Posted by Darijan

Resubmit:

Fire Dragon's Sword Horn (Karyū no Kenkaku)
Rank:S
Type

ffensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:100(20 to the user due to the heat and the fire around him)
Description: The user ignites his whole body in fire, and he runs at the opponent at hige speed raming into the opponent and dealing huge damage to the target, after the user rams into the target he can also use his leg or arm to shoot the opponent upwards.(When the user is running towards the opponent he gains +2 levels on the speed)
Notes:
Usable once per battle
No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
no forbiden ranked jutsus for the rest of the battle

~Declined: Respect the template for forbidden techniques and add some real restrictions with regard to it being a forbidden technique. Causing you to suffer 20 point of damage won't affect you in any way in this battle. There need to be physical damage that will actually have an impact on your aptitudes to fight. That is the definition of a forbidden jutsu~

Resubmiting:

Fire Dragon's Sword Horn (Karyū no Kenkaku)
Rank: Forbiden
Type

ffensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:90(30 to the user due to the heat and the fire around him)
Description: The user ignites his whole body in fire, and he runs at the opponent at hige speed raming into the opponent and dealing huge damage to the target, after the user rams into the target he can also use his leg or arm to shoot the opponent upwards.(When the user is running towards the opponent he gains +2 levels on the speed)
Notes:
Usable once per battle
-No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
-No forbiden ranked jutsus for the rest of the battle
-In the same and in the next move this jutsu was used the user wont be able -to use 3 jutsu per turn, instead of that he will only be able to use 2 jutsus per turn
-The user also gets 5 damage for the next 3 turns cause of the little burns which will appear on the skin.

New one(its a fightning style):
(no japanese name found, probably because regulus actually is a name of a star)
Regulus:
Regulus is a type of mostly short-ranged attacks. It was created in a long time ago by te first white lions from Šiškovci. Its a fightning style which you can only use by signing the white lion contract. Another of the things you have to do to learn Regulus is to get the Howaido Raion Ring which is made of Stones from Šiškovci, some stones in Šiškovci have the similar effect as the oil from Mount Myōboku. The stones from Šiškovci allow the user to use Regulus, cause for it the user needs a strong link with Šiškovci and the lions. Regulus is a ninja art where the user uses his chakra to boost his attacks by pressing the chakra from the ring in any part of the users body.

Restrictions for using Regulus:
-Must have signed the white lion contract
-Must have a Howaido Raion Ring
-Must have a quite good chakra control
-Must be Kage rank
-Must have mastered Fire
-Must have mastered Taijutsu and Ninjutsu

And this is how Regulus looks like when its used

if you think that something should be ebited feel free to do it ^.^

~All Declined: Over weekly limit~

**black uchiha** · 08-31-2011, 11:07 AM

Originally Posted by DopeyDwarf

(Mushi Kuuchuufuyou no jutsu) – Insect Levitation Technique

This is a ripoff of my insect cloud as I told you before

http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...ud#post3603426

Here's my jutsu link

http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...ud#post3156642

please delete it.

**Taka** · 08-31-2011, 12:00 PM

(Doton: Gensō bārendōmu no Jutsu) Illusionary Barren Dome Technique:

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Mid-Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user generates his/her Doton chakra to their palms, then slams them to the earthen surface below, forcing their ordinary chakra to rise up in the shape of a dome, not visible to the opponent. Once a segment of the chakra dome is touched or attacked, the segment exposed to damage will solidify into rough stone, unable to penetrated unless the flow of chakra is cut off.
Note: Requires the users palms to be constantly touching the ground as so to constantly flow chakra. If that flow is broken for even a split second, the solidified stone will thus begin to crumble.

~Declined: Do not resubmit~

**Izuna Uchiha** · 08-31-2011, 12:13 PM

When re-submitting customs, put the part you're altering or adding in BOLD. It makes our job easier when checking them.

Thank you all~

**Sheldon Cooper** · 08-31-2011, 12:31 PM

Originally Posted by ~Voldemort~

Scroll Owner:Yellow Flash Of the Leaf
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:Lind-Sama
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Daiken,Kasen

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin:fukurou:Lind-sama) ( Summoning Technique:Giant Owl:Lord Lind)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)

Description: Lind is the king of all owls and he is the most proudest and most strongest owl out of them all,He wont obey anyone Other than his summoner.He is the Size of gamabunta and has the the power to fly at extreme speeds and has full control of the sky.Lind can use Wind jutsus up till S-rank and If the summoner has been trained in Fire he/she can combine the jutsu to make a Fire/Wind technique.The summoner can put chakra into lind's wings to make his wings more powerful (Strength or Speed).He has huge wings and an aerodynamic tail, and he has White feathers.He attacks with his sharp talons or wind enhanced wings if he must resort to physical attacks.Lind is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to lind before he/she can summon him or even stand on his back (although Yellow Flash of the Leaf is an exception, as I hold the contract).

*Note*
-Stays in battle for 4 turns.
-Can fly for all 4 turns
-Can only be used once per battle.
-User rides on Lind's back
-Can use wind up to S-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves and also fire combination allowed.
-Must have signed the Contract of the owls (held by Yellow Flash of the Leaf)

OTHER SUMMONING ANIMALS TRIED TO CONTACT:Daiken & Kasen

PS: Please feel free to edit it if there are any problems.
~Declined~

================================================== ========
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:Lind-Sama
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Daiken,Kasen

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin:fukurou:Lind-sama) ( Summoning Technique:Giant Owl:Lord Lind)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)

Description: Lind is the king of all owls and he is the most proudest and most strongest owl out of them all,He wont obey anyone Other than his summoner.He is the Size of gamakichi and has the the power to fly at extreme speeds and has full control of the sky.Lind can use Wind jutsus up till S-rank and If the summoner has been trained in Fire he/she can combine the jutsu to make a Fire/Wind technique.He has huge wings and an aerodynamic tail, and he has White feathers.He attacks with his sharp talons or wind enhanced wings if he must resort to physical attacks.Lind is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to lind before he/she can summon him or even stand on his back (although Yellow Flash of the Leaf is an exception, as I hold the contract).

*Note*
-Stays in battle for 5 turns.
-Can fly for all 5 turns
-Can only be used once per battle.
-User rides on Lind's back
-Can use wind up to S-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves and also fire combination up till B-rank allowed.
-Must have signed the Contract of the owls (held by Yellow Flash of the Leaf)

OTHER SUMMONING ANIMALS TRIED TO CONTACT:Daiken & Kasen

PLEASE BOLD THE PARTS I MUST CHANGE IF YOU ARE GOING TO DECLINE.

~All Approved: edited the first summon so it stays on the field for 4 turns~

**Konoha's Yellow Flash** · 08-31-2011, 02:10 PM

(Fuuinjutsu: Inpakuto Daiaru) - Sealing Technique: Impact Dial

(Fuuinjutsu: Raiton Daiaru) - Sealing Technique: Thunder Dial

(Fuuinjutsu: Ranpu Daiaru) - Sealing Technique: Lamp Dial

Global restrictions for Dials:

Made the dials separate jutsus as I was told. And made restrictions for the two Kabuto attacks below.

~Declined do not resubmit~ Those are grossly OP and unrestricted. Some things can be mixed between different manga, but certainly not the dials.

(Hi no Tori Boshi/Faiyā Bādo Sutā) – Fire Bird Star
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:Usopp fires a small pellet containing flammable material that will explode in mid air and transform into a massive phoenix, once this phoenix makes contact with the opponent, a large ring of fire will be created in the area where the contact was made. If for some reason the pellet explodes before it’s supposed to (because of an enemy attack or the user’s) the attack will continue with the phoenix continuing towards the target aimed.
*Can only be perfomed with Kabuto(Weapon)
*Because of the size of the pellet, they can be blown away with a strong gust.
*This attack may be with another Kabuto related technique.(Counting as two jutsus)
*Can only be done 3 times per battle.

~Declined: Similar jutsu already exist~

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(Atlas Suisei) – Atlas Comet
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points:60
Description:The user shoots four high speed pellets with gunpowder inside them with smoke tails which converge together and hit a target creating a large explotion. The arcs the four shots make resemble the horns of an Atlas Beetle.

*Can only be perfomed with Kabuto(Weapon)
*Because of the size of the pellets, they can be blown away with a strong gust.
*If another object is used for this technique, the objects will still converge together but if they dont have gunpowder within them they wont explode.
*This attack may be with another Kabuto related technique.(Counting as two jutsus)
*Can only be used 3 times per match

~Approved~

**Passion** · 08-31-2011, 04:34 PM

Originally Posted by Black-Leg

Updating old custom:

( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) ~ Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage orf higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique'll multiple user's speed with 2.0X and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multipled with 1.5. Using this technique for longer duratons will cause stress fracturing which decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra.

Causes stress fracturing on one's legs
Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
Costs 15 chakra per turn.

Declined. If used in one leg, then one leg wouldnt be able to keep up with the other
New one:

( Suterusu wōku ) ~ Stealth Walk
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Stealth Walk is a technique which is used to jump higher in air and to move faster underwater. The technique consists two different variations that can both be used for quick escaping and to give user upper hand in fight. First variation, Blue Walk, can be used underwater by user focusing chakra into their feet as if they were walking on water's surface and this would also prevent them from sinking into water. Then, user can kick water to the direction he/she wants and repeat this four times. Second variation is called Sky walk and using it will give user chance of jumping five times mid air. Upon jumping, user concentrates Wind chakra to their feet and kicks it down in form of air, lifting user up.

Technique can be used three times per battle
Only five jumps can be made with this technique.

Declined. Since this can be used to dodge arial and underwater jutsu it's number of uses needs to be restricted.

( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) ~ Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage orf higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique'll increase user leg's strength momenarily and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multipled with 1.5 with the leg this is activated on. Using this technique for longer duratons will cause stress fracturing which decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra.

Causes stress fracturing on one's legs
Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
Costs 15 chakra per turn.

~Declined: If you have a fractured leg then it'd be close to impossible to walk, even less performing this jutsu again~

( Suterusu wōku ) ~ Stealth Walk
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Stealth Walk is a technique which is used to jump higher in air and to move faster underwater. The technique consists two different variations that can both be used for quick escaping and to give user upper hand in fight. First variation, Blue Walk, can be used underwater by user focusing chakra into their feet as if they were walking on water's surface and this would also prevent them from sinking into water. Then, user can kick water to the direction he/she wants and repeat this four times. Second variation is called Sky walk and using it will give user chance of jumping five times mid air. Upon jumping, user concentrates Wind chakra to their feet and kicks it down in form of air, lifting user up.

Both of the technique's variations can be used once per battle.
Only five jumps can be made with this technique.

Did as you said. Removed speed increase part and restricted uses of stealth walk.

~Declined: Over weekly limit~

**Lucifer** · 08-31-2011, 05:15 PM

~Summoning~

Summoning Animal: Dracula Bat (Kyuuketsuki koumori)
Scroll Owner: Ichigo..
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:

(Kchuysei: Kyuuketsuki Koumori) Summoning: Giant Dracula/Devil Bats
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Akuma Batto is the King of The Dracula bats and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target. He is capable of using his ears(they look like horns) and wings as weapons making him a deadly force.
Note: Can only be summoned once and lasts 4 turn.
Note: Must sign the Giant Dracula contract from Ichigo..
Note: The, User must be sannin or above. (lol ._.)

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

~Declined: I believe Dei Dei is the current owner of that contract~

**Rokusho..** · 08-31-2011, 05:26 PM

Originally Posted by Rokusho

(Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky

~Declined~ Restrictions?

( Raiton: Soudai Oushou Rei ) - Lightning Release: Royal Hollow Flash

~Declined: similar jutsu already exist~

(Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky

~Declined: OP; elaborated what it can defend against~

**Zero Kelvin** · 08-31-2011, 05:29 PM

Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin

~Declined: check the bold part. Also, work on the restrictions.~

~Declined: You're overextending your abilities. You're not using anything to boost your speed or strength~

~Approved: I've edited it and took away the part you've putted in bold~

~Declined: If you want to create a wind jutsu to boost your speed, fine, but don't turn this A-rank genjutsu into a way to merge jutsus and abilities~

**BishamonSama** · 08-31-2011, 05:37 PM

(Resubmitting this first jutsu because it was left back on Page 266 to be approved/declined by "Someone who knows more about sealing" O.o)

(Fuuinjutsu: Hiraishin Yusou no Jutsu)- Flying Thunder God Conveyance Seal Technique
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 40-60
Damage: N/A
Description: The user confines the jutsu of Flying Thunder God to the form of an easily transportable paper seal that the user carries on their person. This jutsu allows the user to "prime" the seal, meaning that the seal will teleport whatever it next touches to the location of a Flying Thunder God "destination" seal. The seal that this technique primes can be attached to a special Flying Thunder God kunai and then thrown. Upon contact with an object, the kunai will then teleport that object to a destination seal of the user's choosing. These seals can also be used to teleport previously-used jutsu (ie., a rock formation created by an an earth jutsu). Since this technique is simply a modification of a seal version of the Flying Thunder God technique, the number of its uses depends solely on the number of paper seals that the user has pre-prepared and on the user's chakra - there is no limit to the uses of the Flying Thunder God Technique. However, the larger the intended teleported object, the more chakra the user must put into "priming" the seal. The "primed" seals wear off after one turn; if the seal does not successfully come into an object within one turn of being primed, it must be primed again for further use.

NOTE: This technique appears to not be restricted much. This is true; the usages of this technique are not restricted, partially because of the unrestricted nature of Flying Thunder God and of the relative simplicity of the idea behind this technique. However, the complexity behind successfully using this technique balances out its lack of usage restriction; the user must first mark a destination, then the user must prime the pre-prepared seal, then the user must make sure that the seal somehow comes into contact with something, then the user must teleport that object to the destination, and then the user must take advantage of the object's teleportation in battle. While easier to use jutsus - say, a big dragon-shaped fireball that burns up everything in sight - have restrictions on the number of their uses, this jutsu, due to the complexity of using it correctly and due to the technique on which it's based, does not and should not have a restriction on the number of its uses.

~Declined~ Now, first of all, I must say this is a very well thought out jutsu and shall not touch it's core. However, this technique leaves me with many question regarding it's applications, hence explaining why it got declined, for the moment.

I want you to clearly explain the followings points and place them somewhere in your jutsu (description added notes):

-Can it activate upon contact of "intangible" source, like fire and lightning? If yes then will it trap the entirety of the jutsu or part of it? (this is tricky considering it'd have to act as a vacuum to transport all of it).
-What is the size limit and how does the seal recognize the boundaries of what you're trying to teleport? To be more precise; if you were to prime it and shoot it toward the ground, would the ground vanish? I certainly hope not, though I want to know what would happen. Also, what defines a "large" target? Be precise.
-I need you to restrict the amount of time this technique can be used to negate the usage of your opponent's jutsu. Even after reading your added explanation on the necessity for this jutsu to stay restriction-less, I feel it could be very easy to turn it into an easy way to counter almost anything (i.e: placing destination seal on a kunai, throwing it away, and throwing a primed kunai at any attack coming).

I think that's about it. It's worth it, great jutsu. Good luck ^^

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Original jutsu:

Submitted updated jutsu:

(Amenonuhoko)- Heveanly Jewelled Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 to summon, 10 to use special abilities
Damage: 80 (+10 to Taijutsu)
Description: The Amenonuhoko is a large naginata (a Japanese spear) created by the primordial Shinto Gods. The Gods gave the naginata to Izanagi and Izanami to create the first land out of nothingness. The naginata itself has a long, razor-sharp blade that never dulls. Its shaft is made of unbreakable holy bamboo. Chakra of any type can be channelled through the blade and shaft of the weapon, and the shaft can be extended and retracted at will in battle, much like the Third Hokage's Enma Staff. The holy power exuded by the naginata gives a mild but noticeable increase to the user's speed strength. Additionally, the naginata is imbued with the Flying Thunder God seal, allowing the user, if he is capable of using Flying Thunder God, to teleport to any location on the naginata.

Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
Note: User must remain within 5 yards of the naginata at all times. If the naginata falls out of the user's possession, then the user will not be able to use its special abilities for the rest of the match.
Note: User cannot use water, wind, or lightning jutsus above S-rank while holding the naginata.

~Approved~

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(Saru no Koukou Mo-do)- Monkey King Mode
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra: 45 (+10 each turn)
Damage: N/A (+10 to Taijutsu, +5 to Fire, Earth, and Lava)
Description: After summoning Monkey King Enma, the user and Monkey King fuse, in a similar way to how Kisame and Samehada fuse. The user's appearance becomes much more monkey-like - he gains a darker face and facial hair like Enma, with his hands and feet turning into claws. The user gains Enma's jaguar pelt, which is able to reflect Taijutsu of C-rank and below. The user gains the ability to stretch his limbs and body to lengths of up to 10 extra feet, a trait granted by the extension capabilities of Enma's staff form. The user also gains increased speed and strength rivaling that of Sage Mode. Additionally, the user's Fire, Earth, and Lava jutsus gain increased power and speed of use. This mode lasts for only three turns, however, and during those turns the user is completely incapable of using Water and Wind jutsus. In addition, after the three turns are up, Enma disappears, Enma cannot be summoned again during the battle, and the user is rendered incapable of using Taijutsu for one turn due to exhaustion.

NOTE: Only usable once per battle. Enma disappears after use.
NOTE: Wind and water jutsus cannot be used during the three turns that this mode is active.
NOTE: None of the Eight Gates can be opened during the three turns of this mode or one turn after this mode.

~Declined: I don't approve fusion techniques, even if they're overly restricted~

**Ryuji** · 08-31-2011, 05:46 PM

Originally Posted by Ryuji

(Fuuton:Shakkuri)-Wind Style:Hiccup

~Approved~

Custom weapon replacement, don't know if you need the link of my previous CW.

(Enpatsu no Uchite Soshite Shakugan no Doragon) - Flame-haired Hunter and Burning-eyed Dragon

Type: Supplementary/Deffensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (10 every turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Two blades crafted by a swordsmith who wanted to create an exact double of an already made sword of his, but each with a different pommel, one with a dragon and other with masked man with flaming hair. Their both of average lenght and made from high carbon chakra steel, a tsuba made of copper and the hilt is made of hardwood with wrapped in a pitched black cloth. These katanas are both kept inside a hardwood scabbard (each) strapped to a sword belt on the user.
Although as much as they seem normal, these swords posses a set of special abilities when used in Shinobi battles:

They react to the user chakra and gain a layer of fire around the blade that doens't hurt the user but it will harm an opponent. If the user's chakra flow becomes irregular (genjutsu, jyuuken etc) the swords will release flare of fire around the user before burning the user for a brief moment (50 Damage Points), dealting enough pain to be release out of an illusion.

The katanas can be use as a medium to perform fire jutsus, eliminating the use of the mouth, thus making the interval time between the use of jutsus very small. The time this takes is the same as performing the hand seals for each jutsu though this isn't much of a problem if the user has a fire affinity.

When the user chanells fire chakra directly into them, the blades can output flames as a blast to either attack, defend or to propel himself through the air at high speeds with great maneuverability. The force of the blast are the same as a B-rank technique with a long range. However if this in use, the user can only use 2 jutsus per turn.

Note: Fire, Kenjutsu and any jutsu based on these swords gain 10 damage points.
Note: The user can't summon anything else a turn before using these swords and 3 turns after starting using them.
Note: The user must stop using these swords after 5 turns and wait 5 turn before using them again, but with double the Chakra Cost.

Declined. The genjutsu release needs a restriction on it regarding the rank it can be released and the amount of times it can be used.

(Enpatsu no Uchite Soshite Shakugan no Doragon) - Flame-haired Hunter and Burning-eyed Dragon

~Approved: I've changed the number of turns those swords can be on the field to 3 and added the note in bold~

**Shuusai** · 08-31-2011, 05:46 PM

Tentei Sono Kin Chiri | God of the Gold dust

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: By concentrating allot of chakra trough the Gold dust, the Gold dust release and technique's will become much faster, adding much more chakra trough it and almost pumping up the chakra trough the user his whole body and trough the Gold dust itself, being able to perform Gold dust technique's much faster at an extremly rapid speed and making the Gold dust while controlling it much more easier for the user to control the Gold dust, also the reaction of the gold dust will increase allot, being equal at the speed of performing lightning technique's.

- No S/A-Ranked Gold dust technique's for the following 2 turns.
- -10 Chakra every turn this technique is activated.
- This technique ain't increasing the damage of any technique, only the impact of the technique's being used against the opponent.
- Only the Fourth Kazekage can perform this technique.
- Can only be used by BloodLust Loki and Joker Kaguya.

~Declined don't resubmit~

Hakabakashii Mokuton Houmen | Rapid Wood Release

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: -
Description: By concentrating allot of chakra trough the Wood element, the Wood element and technique's will become much faster and verstile, adding much more chakra trough it and almost pumping up the chakra trough the user his whole body and trough the Wood itself, being able to perform Wood technique's much faster at an extremly rapid speed and making the Wood while controlling it much more easier for the user to control the Wood, the wood will become almost equal to Lightning currents traveling trough the ground.

- The user will lose -15 chakra every turn this technique is activated.
- No S-Rank wood technique's for the following 3 Turns.
- Can only be thaught by Joker Kaguya.
- This technique ain't increasing the damage of any technique
- The user will be exhausted after having this technique activated for more then 5 turns.

~Declined don't resubmit~

**Kira..** · 08-31-2011, 06:29 PM

Originally Posted by ~Kira~

Roshida Mode (Roshida Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 3o Per Turn of Use
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites their thumbs, and marks their eyelids in blood. During the users next turn, the blood drips from their eyes to their
jaw line, and the user begins to grow colored feathers, as well as feathers of a different color around their neck. The c
olor of these feathers vary from person to person. Their eyes become small and black, similar to that of a hummingbird.
~Cannot be used unless:

The user has not used any summons during this battle.
The user has signed the hummingbird contract.
The user has used no jutsu during the turn of use.
The user has not used taijutsu before or after use. The use of taijutsu forces the user to exit Rashido Mode, and renders them unable to enter it again during the same battle.

~The user can exit Rashido mode at any time.
~Rashido mode can only be entered twice per battle.
~Roshida mode can only be used for a total of ten turns per battle during both uses, and counts as a jutsu each turn of use.
~Kekkei Genkai cannot be used during Roshida mode.

Declined. Strengths? Drawbacks? Regarding your 10 turns between the two usages, Absolutely not, because that means one usage can last 10 turns if you dont have a second.

Roshida Needles (Roshida Senbon)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user shoots a large amount of senbon-like feathers from their mouth, arms, or legs. These can be aimed at a specific point on the target or shot at them randomly.
~Can be used by hummingbird summons or a human in Roshida mode.

~Approved~

Roshida Claw (Roshida Tsume)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user focuses chakra in their hand, and creates a claw-like form out of pure chakra that is capable of piercing through human flesh.
~Can be used by hummingbird summons or a human in Roshida mode.

~Approved~

Roshida Cloud (Roshida Kumo)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user uses their feathers to create a cloud-like buildup of feathers beneath their feet that can be used as a stepping stone.
~Can be used only by hummingbird summons or a human in Roshida mode.

Declined. how are the feathers staying up? you would just push them down.

Earth Release: Roshida Stone (Roshida Tsume)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user channels chakra into an object and turns that object into a strong grey-colored stone. If the target is a living being, only their arms legs and, if possible, tail can be turned to stone. In this case, the user must make direct contact with that limb, or make contact with an object connected to that limb, such as turning a persons leg to stone by touching the ground they are standing on. If the target is touching an object that the object the user is touching is touching, this cannot be used. I.e. Standing on a pole connected to the ground the user is standing on.
~Usable thrice per battle.
~Can be used only by hummingbird summons or a human in Roshida mode.

Declined. Do not resubmit

Roshida Mode (Roshida Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 3o Per Turn of Use
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites their thumbs, and marks their eyelids in blood. During the users next turn, the blood drips from their eyes to their
jaw line, and the user begins to grow colored feathers, as well as feathers of a different color around their neck. The c
olor of these feathers vary from person to person. Their eyes become small and black, similar to that of a hummingbird.
~Cannot be used unless:

The user has not used any summons during this battle.
The user has signed the hummingbird contract.
The user has used no jutsu during the turn of use.
The user has not used taijutsu before or after use. The use of taijutsu forces the user to exit Rashido Mode, and renders them unable to enter it again during the same battle.

~The user can exit Rashido mode at any time.
~Rashido mode can only be entered twice per battle.
~Roshida mode can only be used for a total of ten turns per battle during both uses, and counts as a jutsu each turn of use. Can only be used for up to five turns per usage. Upon exit, the user cannot attempt activation again for three of the user's turns.
~The user's speed is increased during usage (x1.5 on the Speed Chart) as well as their ability to see certain speeds (x1.5 on the Speed Sight chart). The users speed is less than normal for three turns after exit. (x 0.5 on Speed Chart. Does not apply to sight).
~The user's summons for the hummingbird contract can be done without hand seals during usage of Rashido mode. The user's summons all disipate upon exit of Rashido mode. These summons cannot be called upon for three turns after exit of Roshida mode.
~During Roshida mode, Kekkei and Special Abilities are forbidden, and cannot be used between the two usages. They can, however, be used before the first usage and three turns after each usage, with the exception of if the user wishes to use it a second time.

[On a side note, this has been changed drastically, and must be checked again completely.]

Roshida Cloud (Roshida Kumo)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user uses their feathers to create a cloud-like buildup of densely packed feathers beneath their feet that can be used as a stepping stone. Once used, the feathers are pushed in the other direct, propelling the user.
~Up to three clouds can be created per use.
~Only usable by hummingbird summons or a human in Roshida mode.

Roshida Sword (Roshida Ken)
Type: Attac
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra : 6o
Description: The user creates a sword-like beak similar to the beak created by Hachidori Hands. It is a javelin-shaped spear, and can be aimed and thrown at the target. As soon as it lands/hits, it disipates in a cloud of feathers.
~Can only be used by a hummingbird summon or a human in Rashido mode.

Roshida Drill (Roshida Doriru)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user creates to large beaks similarly to how beaks are created through Hachidori Hands. The beaks rotate, acting like spinning drills. The user goes underground and tunnels underneath the target, and comes up from underneath them with the beak.
~Can only be used by a hummingbird summon or a human in Rashido mode.

Rashido Whip (Rashido Muchi)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user creates a whip of tightly woven feathers in the form of a long whip, which can be used to stile the opponent.

~All Declined: Over weekly submissions~

**Sanji..** · 08-31-2011, 06:30 PM

Originally Posted by ~Sanji~

Name: Onyx Foot Style - (Onikisu Ashi Sensu)
Description: The Onyx Foot Style is a unique use of taijutsu developed by a taijutsu ninja who was also a great chef , this was developed to allow the cook to fight effectively without the possibility of damaging his hands , a cooks prized possession. Due to this practitioners of this style have been noted to give off a relaxed image during the fight by usually either putting their hands in their pockets or folding their arms , the only time a practitioner of this style will use their hands is to prop themselves to use a wider array of kicks. As a fighting style, the style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with super acrobatic skill make it a very versatile fighting technique, allowing the user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries , though the use of momentum they can use the continuous combos for a lesser cost of energy but must end the combos after a certain amount of time.

Onyx Foot Style - Neck Meat - (Onikisu Ashi Sensu - Collier)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: This attack that the user executes from standing , placing their hands in their pockets they will deliver a powerful kick directly to the opponents neck. This is achieved with very little back lift which is surprising , the users foot will come in a roundhouse fashion sweeping from the side to attempt to damage the opponents neck. This is all done from a casual standing position with no indication of an attack.

Onyx Foot Style - Shoulder Meat - (Onikisu Ashi Sensu - Epoule)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: This attack is used for a standing position much like Collier , this though is a forceful kick directed straight down with the heel. This axe kick as given away by the name is intended to hit the enemy on top of their shoulder , the idea behind this is an attempt t either knock the opponent off balance , or send them crashing into the floor with the force driving them down on that side taking them off their feet.

~All approved~

Updating all into:

Name: Black Leg Taijutsu - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu)
Description: Black Leg Style Taijutsu is a unique use of taijutsu developed by a taijutsu ninja who was also a great chef , this was developed to allow the cook to fight effectively without the possibility of damaging his hands , a cooks prized possession. Due to this practitioners of this style have been noted to give off a relaxed image during the fight by usually either putting their hands in their pockets or folding their arms , the only time a practitioner of this style will use their hands is to prop themselves to use a wider array of kicks. As a fighting style, the style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with super acrobatic skill make it a very versatile fighting technique, allowing the user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries , though the use of momentum they can use the continuous combos for a lesser cost of energy but must end the combos after a certain amount of time.

New Ones:

Black Leg Taijutsu - Rib meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Cotellete)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: An attack as given away by the name is primarily focused on the ribs of the opponent, the user will fall down onto one of their hands and perform a one handed handstand. As they are falling they bring their legs over and deliver a straight kick to the ribs, this can be and usually is if the attack hits followed with Selle.

Black Leg Taijutsu - Under Saddle Meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Selle)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: This is an attack which is commonly used in combination with Cotellete , the user using the momentum from the Cotellete attack. The user who is still in a handstand will use the momentum to spin back the other way, to deliver a fierce sweeping kick to the opponents lower back or lumbar region.

Black Leg Taijutsu - Chest/Breast meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Poitrine)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description:This attack is different from a lot in the style as it is delivered as a straight stabbing kick , this attack is quicker than most in this style due to its directness. Although it is better in terms of speed it forfeits the large attack area of the sweeping kicks , thus making it a quite balanced attack.

I have permission from Black-Leg To create these.

~All Approved~

**Xanthe** · 08-31-2011, 06:33 PM

(Satetsu no Gādian / 砂鉄のガーディアン) - Guardian of Iron Sand
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense / Defense / Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 per turn.)
Damage Points: 90 (-30 every turn to user.)
Description: This jutsu is a style that was created by the Third Kazekage in order to fend off invaders of Sunagakure. After gathering an immense amount of Iron Sand, he begins to create a gigantic "armored" warrior that holds a spear and shield. The guardian is formed behind the user and exposes the user. The spear can be launch from the guardian's hand by changing the polarity of the Iron Sand. The spear loses shape once passing mid-range however. The shield can block one focused S-Rank jutsu and then it will dissipate. The guardian himself loses shape after being hit by an A-Rank jutsu.
~The user must have used Iron Sand Gathering twice.
~The user can use the Iron Sand from the guardian for a medium for his Iron Sand. (No Iron Sand jutsu used without using him as a medium unless it's with a detached part of him.)
~The guardian lasts three turns and then loses shape.
~The guardian causes so much strain on the user's Kekkai Genkai that it renders it unusable after using the guardian.
~The user's guardian makes the user have to use only magnetism jutsu or Iron Sand jutsu while the Guardian is active.
~If the guardian grabs onto the opponent, the guardian can destroy an opponent with its hands. (Iron Sand Burial)
~While using, the user's speed drops two stages (Mugi's speed chart), and after expiring, it drops one more stage. (-2 while active, -3 after use.)
~Usable only once per battle.

~Declined: First of all, no reference to the speed chart. Is it only to be used if a debate arise. Secondly, lower the abilities of your shield. As I've said before to many members; Amaterasu and Kirin are S-ranked, can they be blocked by your technique? If you think it can, explain why~

-> Approval for Iron Sand Gathering

(Satetsu no Shotto / 砂鉄のショット) - Iron Sand Shots
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user takes their Iron Sand and fires multiple shots of Iron Sand that can punch through B-Rank Doton jutsu. The user fires the shots of Iron Sand by changing the polarity of small amounts of Iron Sand so that they repel against other forces and shoot out with speed that creates a large force.
~Only usable 3 times.

~Approved~

**The Doctor** · 08-31-2011, 06:33 PM

(Meiton:Kyōbu bīmu) Dark release: Chest Beam
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Attack
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The user places his hands to create a sphere over his chest. Afterwards the user focuses dark chakra in his hands. Then, he creates a circle of dark chakra in the back of the sphere. The user release his chakra, and produces an extremely large continuous beam that can be fired at an opponent.
Note:May only be used by Mockingbird
Note:May only be used twice per battle.

~Declined: This "beam" jutsu was done already, countless times~

(Suiton:Misutoaianmeiden) Water release: Mists's Iron Maiden
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will focus his chakra into the mist. Afterwards, using the water molecules in the air or mist, the user will create small spikes, about the size of a finger, which can be shot towards an opponent. or can stay suspended in the air.
Note:May only be used by Mockingbird and Demosthenes
Note:May only be used four times per battle
Note:May not be used on the first turn

~Declined: Explain where the spikes will form and how they will attack the opponent. Also, make it Short-Medium range~

**Heister** · 08-31-2011, 06:39 PM

Originally Posted by Wolfwood

I edited it:

Approved

Not changing anything but allowing other people to use it in battle:

~Approved~

**Kaziname** · 08-31-2011, 07:39 PM

Originally Posted by Kaziname

(Suiton: Umi no ō no Fīrudo) - Water Style: Field of Sea Kings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By distributing one's own suiton chakra around whole battlefield, user can enhance the forming speed of water jutsus two fold. Although jutsu is quite useful it is also a double-edged sword. Unfortunately jutsu was never fully completed thus jutsu works both ways - it enhances the forming speed of all water jutsus in the field (both user's and his opponent's).
*Lasts for 4 turns
*Can be only used once
*Can be only used by Kaziname

~Declined: I like the idea, but I'm not sure I get the bold part. Make it clear and I'll approve~

If you think it is approvable without that (in my opinion big restriction :D) "opponent-gets-the-boost-too":

(Suiton: Umi no ō no Fīrudo) - Water Style: Field of Sea Kings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By distributing one's own suiton chakra around whole battlefield, user can enhance the forming speed of water jutsus two fold.
*Lasts for 4 turns
*Can be only used once
*Can be only used by Kaziname

If you think that that kind of restriction is needed:

(Suiton: Umi no ō no Fīrudo) - Water Style: Field of Sea Kings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By distributing one's own suiton chakra around whole battlefield, user can enhance the forming speed of water jutsus two fold. However - due to large concentration of suiton chakra, it enhances forming speed of opponent's water jutsus two fold as well.
*Lasts for 4 turns
*Can be only used once
*Can be only used by Kaziname

Originally Posted by Kaziname

(Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger.

~Declined: Elaborate on the eye itself. Is it on your body? Does it fly like Gaara, how long does it stays on the field, does it reganarate if hit?~

(Suton: Umi no Me) - Water Style: Eyes of the Sea
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25 (+10 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing suiton chakra user is able to create eyes of water to aid him in combat by covering blind spots or in spying by allowing him to scan the area without exposing himself to danger. Eyes levitate on the battlefield just like Gaara's.
*They don't regenerate if hit
*They can remain active for a maximum of [X] turns

Well, I thought that since they are like Gaara's technique, they should stay active for as long as I send chakra to keep them active (that's why I've put "(+10 per turn)" in chakra cost). If you don't agree then replace the [X] with number of turns you see fit.

Originally Posted by Kaziname

(Suiton: Appurippu!) - Water Style: Rip-up!
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By using water chakra user will "rip-up" water molecules (H2O) and separate them thus seemingly "erasing" a body of water. After user separates them he has to keep them divided by coating them with chakra in order for them to not merge again into water. Since technique requires precision, substantial amount of chakra and a lot of concentration the body of water can't be too big or else the technique will fail (biggest amount of water user can "erase" is roughly the size of "Water Dragon Bullet").
*Due to complexity of jutsu it can only be used twice
*Can only be used by Kaziname

~Declined: Far-fetched (even though it's scientifically possible). Do not resubmit~

~All Declined: Over weekly submissions~

After reading this maybe (and maybe not

) you would reconsider and approve the jutsu - I know you said "Do not resubmit", but really. Far-fetched? Isn't this jutsu one of the "realistic" ones? With this jutsu, I actually do a thing that is scientifically explainable. How about transforming you body into fire (or earth; water; whatever)? In jutsus like that you basically transform every molecule of your body into given element (yeah, definitely not far-fetched -.-) and things like that can't be explained even by science - yet, they got approved.

What I meant by far fetch is, there's a difference between the Narutoverse and our world. Even if something is possible in one, doesn't mean it works in the other. Our laws of physics obviously aren't the same in the Narutoverse.

Also, to efficiently separate the molecule into both H+ and OH-, you need to run an electrical current in the water, it's called electrolysis. If you were to separate a whole body of water, you do realize the air around you would be filled with Hydrogen, right? And since you needed to use an electrical current to achieve this, you'd most likely blow up all the air around you. When someone perform electrolysis, they generally do it on a small scale, and if they do it on large scale, it's certainly not in the open.

If you want to play with the science, do it right

**Ryuko** · 08-31-2011, 08:02 PM

(Uindo& faiākonbinēshon: Faiaharikēn)Wind and Fire Combination: Fire Hurricanes

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will Summon as clone and then release release all his Fuuton Chakra into the air and Summon Three Hurricans Like vortexs then at the same time the Hurricane Votrexs are coming down from the sky The clone will Release a Large wide and Long stream of fire into each of the Vortex's Creating three Vortexs Fire that the user can direct at his oppent

*Note: Can only be used by -Itachi- unless tought by -Itachi-
*Note: Can only be used Twice a Battle
*Note: After using this jutsu the user can only use A ranked Techs for the next turn

~Decline: Over weekly submissions~

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