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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    summoning

    (fukurou Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Owl summoning/great horned owl (if owl isnt specific enough)
    Summoning Animal: Owl
    Scroll Owner: Foamy
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A


    Summoning

    (Washi Kuchiyose no Jutsu) eagle summoning/ bald eagle (if eagle isnt specific enough)
    Summoning Animal: Eagle
    Scroll Owner: Foamy
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    (only if first one is already made)

    ~both declined already exist and owls are within the manga/anime now so you cannot submit a cannon summoning~

    weapon

    (kamereon no Burēdo) chameleon's blade
    Type: Weapon/Sword
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This was the final blade created by Shigure's father. It can is his greatest master piece and can easily cut threw other steel objets (such as shuriken). Its greatest ability is it can cut through elemental jutsu by absorbing elemental chakra up to the B rank (A rank the jutsu would be cancled but the blade would shatter S rank the blade would simply shatter) and the sword then takes the element that it just absorb. However the blade can only have one element at a time and becomes weak against the opposite element (i.e if you absorb water your weak against earth). you can release the elemental chakra in the sword by channeling the element and sending it out in a blast (the blast would be short-mid)

    -Can only absorb two different elements a fight
    -Can only absorb one attack at a time (i.e if you absorb a water attack cant absorb another attack even if it is water until that chakra has been released)
    -If absorbs water blade can lliquadize and reform
    -If absorbs fire can melt objects
    -If absorbs wind blade becomes invisable so opponent cant judge its length
    -If absorbs earth does more damage
    -If absorbs lightning can numb opponent if it cuts them

    (kouseitan'i kaihou) element release
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: releases chakra in chameleon blade in a concentrated spherical blast the element changes with the chakra that the blade has absorbed

    -Can only be used with Chemeleon's blade
    -This cant be used the same turn you absorb a jutsu


    ~Declined~ remove the bolded parts. With the wind a solid metal isn't going to disappear, not to mention you yourself wouldn't be able to see it, partially the same for liquid. Also is that 2nd jutsu the thing you described in the first jutsu?
    (kamereon no Burēdo) chameleon's blade
    Type: Weapon/Sword
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This was the final blade created by Shigure's father. It can is his greatest master piece and can easily cut threw other steel objets (such as shuriken). Its greatest ability is it can cut through elemental jutsu by absorbing elemental chakra up to the B rank and the sword then takes the element that it just absorb. However the blade can only have one element at a time and becomes weak against the opposite element (i.e if you absorb water your weak against earth). you can release the elemental chakra in the sword by channeling the element and sending it out in a blast (the blast would be short-mid)

    -Sword can only be used by Foamy or people with permission (if its not ok please just edit this part out)
    -Can only absorb two different elements a fight
    -Can only absorb one attack at a time (i.e if you absorb a water attack cant absorb another attack even if it is water until that chakra has been released)
    -If absorbs water blade can reform if it gets chipped
    -If absorbs fire can melt objects
    -If absorbs wind blade cuts through the wind easier making attacks quicker and more fluid
    -If absorbs earth does more damage
    -If absorbs lightning can numb opponent if it cuts them

    -Approved-

    (kouseitan'i kaihou) element release
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: releases chakra in chameleon blade in a concentrated spherical blast the element changes with the chakra that the blade has absorbed

    -Can only be used with Chemeleon's blade
    -This cant be used the same turn you absorb a jutsu




    -approved-
    edited it and yes the second jutsu is what is described in the first

    (houka tori Kuchiyose no Jutsu) houka tori summoning
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: houka is a sword bill humming bird (about 12 feet tall big enough for one person to stand on him) that is almost surrounded by of fire except on its back big which its summoner can stand on. it can use all fire attack up to B rank (if it requires handseals you must be on its back and preform them for houka) houka has a long beak that can melt through 12 inch metal wall. The flames on houka are so intense they can cancel out water techs A ranked and lower. Houka is immune to fire based attacks.

    -can be out for 4 turns
    -must have signed humming bird contract
    -can be summoned once per match



    -Declined. You need to use an animal from the animal world, not just make one up-

    ken kabe no jutsu (sword wall Technique)
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank:B/A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25/30
    Damage Points: 40/60
    Description: this can be done with one or two swords the user swings a sword(s) in a systematic way similar to Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms it can be used to slash and cut a close opponent or defend against a attack the blade work is so fast that it appears to be silver flying around the user

    -metal conducts lightning so doesnt work on lightning
    -if your only using one sword its B ranked A ranked if your using two swords
    -one sword can defend C ranked jutsu
    -two sword can defend B ranked jutsu
    -can only be taught by foamy

    -Declined: wrong chakra info, also the speed you are describing is not matching your rank-

    (genwaku ranpu) blinding light
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: this is a form of quick draw the user runs at his/her opponent once the opponent begins to attack you begin to unsheeth your sword partially and use your blade to reflect light blinding your opponent and while there blind strike them in two vital spots (generally either in there arms or legs immobilizing them but can also be used on kedneys or any other organs on the side of there bodies) the speed of which you are running is vital to this attack
    -if you are slowed or stopped the attack wont work
    -can only blind and alter the first attack if they are able to do a second attack you cant blind them again
    -needs a strong light source (I.E sun or industrial strength lights) to be used (if fight is in a cave or at night with no strong light source around it wont work)
    -can only be taught by foamy



    -Make this a C rank, cause thats what it is. Considering you need to be fighting in daylight and also be in the right position to actually reflect the light which cannot really be pre-agreed. If I were you, I would drop this-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Satetsuton : airon sunaarashi ) ɸ Iron Sand Style : Iron Sandstorm

    Rank: B
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Type : Offense|Defense|Supplementary
    Description:The user releases a powerful tornado in conjuction with Iron sand,thus creating a more powerful tornado made out of Iron Sand.However,this is just the beginning of the technique; even though the tornado can be used as an attack or defense mechanism , it's power resides in it's second ability:
    Once and if the tornado misses, the tornado will dispel and transform into a rampaging Iron sandstorm that will restlessly harass the opponent, blocking his vision as well as , literally, make the opponent breath Iron Sand, which the user can then control.


    ~The Sandstorm will last for 2 full turns and afterwards, it will be active only once every two turns for the rest of the battle.

    ~The user can not perform an iron sand technique as the following move(I.e:The user performs this technique as his first jutsu during that turn, the second jutsu of the same turn can not be an iron sand technique).


    ( Suiton : Mizu Kuuki ) ɸWater style : Water Atmosphere

    Rank: B
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Type : Supplementary
    Description:The user releases his water chakra into his surroundings, filling the atmosphere with water.This water will basically constantly absorb heat(only from techniques that are not casted by the user), making every single fire technique useless while this is activated.Likewise, every water technique performed by the user of this technique will receive a boost, making it one rank stronger.As a matter of fact, this water in the atmosphere can actually be called upon in order to gain a vast water source.

    ~It takes the user about 5 seconds to actually release all of the water in the atmosphere,leaving him vunerable for attacks.

    ~In order to perform this technique, you need to perform the following set of hand seals: Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird

    ~If the water of the atmosphere is called upon, all of the abilities this technique had will vanish,since the water is no longer in the atmosphere.

    ~In order to keep up this technique, the user has to give up chakra(-5) every turn this is active.


    -Both declined just by the wrong rank and info. If you are throwing a tornado, with iron sand, which then kills your opponent well...this is not a B rank now, is it? Same for the next jutsu-


    ( MizuKoutei ) ɸ Water Emperor

    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: 80
    Type : Supplementary
    Description: A sword that was given to Kirigakure's most skilled water users, this sword is known throughout the whole ninja world. it resembles a normal katana. The only decoration is the tsuba, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle.

    It's sharpness has yet to find an equal, it's said that this sword is able to cut almost anything and that it could cut through stone with much ease.However, it's resistance can't be compared to it's offensive capabilities.It doesn't mean, though, that this sword is easy to break.

    The water emperor has a strange ability; it allows the user to perform any water technique without the need to even make a hand seal and can also sense water.

    It had a second ability that allowed the user to manipulate water by moving the sword around.The water would follow the movement of the sword, making the user look as if he'd be in total control of the water.

    Finally, the Water Emperor's most amazing ability is that if the user infuses it with water chakra, it can turn anything the sword strikes into water.Whenever the user strikes something, the water chakra infused into the sword will be released inside the object that was striked.The chakra will then continue and start to change the particles and composition of the object before it turns into water.


    ~Regarding the ability to move water, it's actually very restricted.Small water sources will be moved with ease but larger ones will be moved at an extremly slowly rate.In fact, due to the concentration and strain it puts on the user, the user will barely be able to fight after moving such a large water source.However, with things of a smaller size, such as a water drop or something of the size of a big shield, can be moved at much faster pace without much strain.This ability may only be used once per turn.

    ~In order to actually turn something into water, the sword must be in contact with said object for at least 2 seconds, which is the time it takes for the sword to release all of the infused water chakra.In order to infuse the chakra to the sword, the user will loose 10 chakra points.This ability can only be used once every two turns.


    -Declined: Similar custom jutsu already exists-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Kuro Anaboko ) Kenjutsu: Black Hollow

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack - Defense - Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50 ( +20 when level three is release )
    Damage points: 90 ( +30 more damage when level three is release )
    Description: Black Hollow is the history of all sword. Black Hollow is the sword name because is a sword that has damage the Nine Tails Fox during the time of Madara Uchiha attack to the Hidden Leaf Village. Black Hollow was the first hokage secrete weapon. The first Hokage never use Black Hollow because is able to take control of the user lose control of his chakra. Black Hollow has three different level of abilities. Black Hollow first, level abilities is to increase the user speed putting the user four time more faster than normal. The second level of Black Hollow is to absorb fire, wind and water jutsus and throw it back at the user for example, if the opponent did a fire jutsu the blade can absorb the jutsu and throw the same jutsu right back at the opponent. The third level of Black Hollow is too do Genjutsu the user that is using Black Hollow spin his sword slowly and the sword start making a song when the opponent start to listen to the sword music the opponent get trapped in a genjutsu that can't be release with the Genjutsu Release the only way that the Genjutsu be release is by thinking the worst thing that ever happen to them.

    Note: When the user release abilities level three the user is not able to use the sword abilities for the whole battle.
    Note: The Genjutsu is not easy too release it would take the user some time to release it.
    Note: Only -Pain- is able to use Black Hollow it can't be stolen.


    The sword look like this:


    ~Declined~ do not resubmit, also you say "black hollow" way too many times -.-

    ( Enkou Hei ) Fire Syle: Flame Wall

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense - Supplementary - Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40 ( +10 when the user use wind and fire )
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus fire chakra and wind chakra then, the user clap both hands together making first, four flames around the opponent then, quickly do four wind wall around the opponent. Making a strong wind and fire combo around the opponent.

    Note: Can only be use twice per battle
    Note: If the user add wind to the fire is plus 10 more chakra making the chakra cost 50.



    -Declined. Poor description. Also clapping doesn't release chakra.-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    First Customs, Hope they get approved

    (Kaze Makanai)-Wind release:Wind Board
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short- Long
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:To use the move, the user must add wind nature chakra to jump in the air while adding more(wind,shape, and chakra manipulation) to form a sort of medium in the shape of a snow board to glide across the air able to reach speeds up to 70 mph but u could just use it to leisurely move around. It becomes harder for the opponent to track ur movemrnts due to u gliding across the wind.U will slowly fall to the ground(One foot every ten seconds), and therefor must reach high heights to keep it active for long periods.It can also be used to skate across the floor up to 40mph.(I don't know what to compare the speeds to.)
    -Can be used 6x


    -Declined. Unrealistic.-

    (Kaze Myakuhaku)- Wind release:Wind Pulse
    Rank:A
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra:30
    Damage Points:N/A(+5 to all wind ninjutsu)
    Description: The user gathers his wind chakra and release causing ruptures in the wind and then contain it. Whenever projectiles are shot at the user, he/she can automatically release a pulse of wind to block it. This can block incoming B-rank wind, C-rank water,A-rank lightning, and D-rank earth.Although, at close range it can only block C-rank wind, D-rank water, and B rank lightning and taijutsu(except for S rank and forbidden). It has the ability to knock back someone to mid range. Due to the force of the wind, it can increase the speed and power of other wind ninjutsu
    -Last 2 turns
    -2 time usage


    -Declined. Unrealistic.-

    (Mizu Nagareboshi Shawa) Water release: Meteor Shower
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:30(minus 5 for each turn its maintained)
    Damage Points:60
    Description:While making the Boar-Ram-Tiger hand seals, the user gathers his/her water chakra and create a mass of water but then condense it(No water source needed). The user than launch it into the air 20 ft. above the user. He then makes the tiger hand seal again and causes multiple meteor shaped spheres of water to come out of the mass and are guided to strike at different times causing many explosions of water making big puddles. This move has enough force to destroy rock.(Note can all be used at once or be used over the course of 5 turns if u use one once a turn)
    ~ maximum 5 meteors


    -Declined. Unrealistic.-

    Custom Weapon:Bakusaiga "Omni Sword"
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Range: Close-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: There was once a ninja who mastered in water release that was considered very dangerous(Like an S-class ninja) who was willing to kill anyone to reach his goals even if it was a good or bad deed. He came to be known as "Lord Death Omni" with his most trusted sword "Bakusaiga". This weapon has special properties. Not only can it absorb water nature (Up to B-rank) but it has the ability to chanel water nature chakra and become very maluable being able to turn into different types of weapons that require a handle by extending chakra induced water and condense.(Long sword, Great sword, Hammer,etc) Even though its made of chakra induced water, It is as strong as steel and is very hard to break.
    -Note: Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Namikaze


    -Declined. Unrealistic.-

    (Mizu Kyousei Kanadzuchi) Water release:"Bakusaiga Great War Hammer"
    Rank:A
    Type:Attack/Defense
    Range:Close
    Chakra:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user takes "Bakusaiga" and forms a giant hammer made of chakra induced water that is condensed.(1 meter apart)This hammer is as strong as metal. The user can swing or smash causing ruptures of water with enough force to break C-rank earth and block B-rank. It can absorb water nature attacks up to B-rank and become bigger & heavier for more force(grows to a maximum of 5 meters across). The water can be released by smashing the ground and making a mass of water(3 meters can make a pool 10ft. deep) for further water ninjutsu(creating the hammer and releasing water counts as two of the three jutsu used a turn).


    Note: Can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
    I tried to give them originality but if they resemble someone elses jutsu, could u send me a link


    -Declined. Unrealistic.-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Isseki Nichō) One Stone, Two Birds

    Rank: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Isseki Nichō is a perfectly balanced chakra-metal Katana. It's blade is thick but sharp, to no bounds. It's sheathe is marked with flower and bird patterns, of orange colour.
    The sword is perfectly adapted to the Samurai's abilities, so is capable of highly enhancing one's power, giving it the power of the rank above, without feeling it's drawbacks. For example, if one power is A rank, it will become S rank. If one power is B rank, it will become A rank, making it's chakra slashes more powerful, and it's chakra transformations bigger. If charged with enough chakra, the user is able to make the ilusion of having two swords in the same hand, one physical and one made of chakra.

    -Approved-



    Summoning Animal:
    Parrots
    Scroll Owner:
    Luiz
    Other Users who have signed contract:
    Liliana
    Summoning Boss if existing:
    N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Parrot Chicks
    Average Parrots
    Altorio Parrots

    Origin:
    Parrots are from a secret Rainforest, on top of a remote plateau, called the Altorio Forest.

    General Description:
    Parrots are colourful and majestic birds, with a diverse pallet of colours and a wide range of shapes. They possess strong beaks and claws, and a are beautiful and agile in the air.

    Summon General Abilities:
    The parrots of Altorio are very strong and fast. And average Parrot from Alto Rio is about the same size as a Lion, and is able to carry up to 2 people on their back without loosing any speed. They all can use chakra, though some have acquired unique abilities, such as Elemental Affinity or other Battle related skills. They are very energetic and warm, and speak in a very thick Portuguese accent.

    Summoning:
    The person who signs this contract is able to summon parrots from Altorio, and can also be summoned by parrots. In case of an unsuccessfully summoning, or the usage of a very small amount of chakra, the user calls forth a baby chick, without much use in a battle other than being very cute. The canon Summoning Jutsu calls forth common parrots, from average size or smaller, but with no special abilities other then a random small weapon. Using specific amounts of chakra, the user can summon special parrots, with special abilities, all up to the Boss. (Which will be submitted using the official template)

    -Approved.-

    (Oumou no Jutsu: Rio no Shanikusai) Parrot Style: Rio’s Carnival
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: Multiple parrots from a multitude of colours, shapes and sizes burst out of the users’s body, hitting a opponents with a barrage of beak slams and claw scratches, and provide a great distraction for the user to flee or attack, amidst the flying birds. The technique works similarly to the Murder of Crows Confusion. The amount of birds that appear depend on the chakra the user puts into the technique, when no longer needed, the parrots disperse. In parties, the user can make the parrots dance Samba.


    -Approved.-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Wangestu Hinote) Fire Style: Crescent Flames
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The Crescent Flames technique is basically the art of releasing fire in the form of crescent-shaped waves from the feet of the user. After making a single hand seal, the user will swing their legs in sweeping motions to create flames that are sent outward; flames that move rather quickly and hold enough power to, instead of simply burning an opponent, bowling them over with their speed and force. The user can perform this technique one of three ways. First, being the most common way, the user can simply send out the crescent flames directly forward toward their opponent by swinging their legs across several times. Alternatively, a very commonly used method would be the user dropping down to the floor on their back and rapidly spinning on their hands and back while swinging their legs around, releasing these flames in all directions. The final method of performing this would be a simple spinning kick either in the air like the Leaf Hurricane, or by dipping low onto the ground as in the leaf whirlwind. This technique is considered a mixture of taijutsu and fire style, being that by performing one hand seals, the user may perform this technique while hitting the opponent.
    Note: When utilized along with a wind jutsu, the speed of this jutsu increases, and it is capable of travelling a farther range.
    Note: Usable six times per battle.

    -Approved-

    The next one is a remake of a very old custom:

    (Keyblade Shukun Gigei: Senpuu of Sono Ki-) Keyblade Master Arts: Whirlwind of the Key
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Sora will first spin the Keyblade extremely fast in front of him. The Keyblade will keep spinning until it makes a large tornado-like whirlwind that will extend from the keyblade and towards the opponent. Sora will then throw the keyblade into the whirlwind making the Keyblade go extremely fast as it turns throughout the whirlwind. By the time the Keyblade leaves the whirlwind it will be going extremely fast towards the opponent making it undodgeable. Once the Keyblade leaves the tornado-like whirlwind, all of the wind from the whirlwind will converge around the Keyblade and at the front end there will be a sharp point of wind capable of slicing through the opponent using the power from both the Keyblade and the powerful wind.
    Note: Only useable 3 times per battle.
    Note: The user must wait 2 turns in between using this.
    Note: Must have the Keyblade out.


    Ahem... back in my... extreme KH phase. >_>

    (Kenjutsu: Kamisori Teikiatsu) Sword Style: Razor Cyclone
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This technique requires the user to mix their kenjutsu skills with their mastery of wind; hence the chakra cost. This technique begins with the user rapidly spinning one blade in front of them. As the blade spins quickly, the user focuses and vents out wind chakra from the blade, which spins rapidly like a large cyclone emitting from the blade. The user will continue to spin their blade until a sizable cyclone is formed, a cyclone that is horizontal to the ground (vertical if the user holds their blade upward) with the funnel shooting outward toward the opponent. The user will then take another weapon and throw it into the torrent of wind, its blade facing forward toward the opponent. From there, the weapon will begin to rapidly spin inside of the funnel as it moves forward toward the opponent. Once the blade is spinning rapidly, the wind, moving forward along with the weapon, will condense around it. This result is a rapidly spinning, extremely quick weapon coated with wind with the strength to slice through trees (being that a kunai simply augmented with wind is capable of going through a boulder). This move is nearly impossible to block, as even most fire jutsu, even with feeding off of the wind, would only result in the sword shooting through the fire.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
    Note: The user must wait three turns before using this a second time.
    Note: The whirlwind must be made by using a sword, however, the weapon thrown into the cyclone can be nearly anything--another sword, a lance, a dirk or another type of short blade, a kunai, etc. Anything with a sharp point that has one straight edge (meaning that weapons like shuriken would not be adequate for this technique) is capable of being thrown into the whirlwind for the same devestating effect. Alternatively, this technique can be done with one sword by quickly retracting and thrusting the sword after making the cyclone.
    Note: Although this technique is nearly impossible to block, it only moves in one straight, concentrated line and cannot change direction in mid-air.

    -Approved.-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Kung Fu - 武术

    Chinese martial arts, also referred to by the Mandarin Chinese term wushu, are a number of fighting styles that have developed over the centuries in China. These fighting styles are often classified according to common traits, identified as "families" (家, jiā), "sects" (派, pài) or "schools" (門, mén) of martial arts. Examples of such traits include physical exercises involving animal mimicry, or training methods inspired by Chinese philosophies, religions and legends. Styles which focus on qi manipulation are labeled as internal(内家拳,nèijiāquán), while others concentrate on improving muscle and cardiovascular fitness and are labeled external (外家拳, wàijiāquán). Geographical association, as in northern (北拳, běiquán) and southern (南拳, nánquán), is another popular method of categorization. One who seek's out mastery of many Kung Fu styles is known as a Kung Fu Master.

    Kung Fu Style: Chángquán - 长拳長拳
    The forms of the Long Fist style emphasize fully extended kicks and striking techniques, and by appearance would be considered a long-range fighting system. In some Long Fist styles the motto is that "the best defense is a strong offense," in which case the practitioner launches a preemptive attack so aggressive that the opponent doesn't have the opportunity to attack. Others emphasize defense over offense, noting that nearly all techniques in Long Fist forms are counters to attacks. Long Fist uses large, extended, circular movements to improve overall body mobility in the muscles, tendons, and joints. Advanced Long Fist techniques include qin na joint-locking techniques and shuai jiao throws and takedowns.[citation needed]
    The Long Fist style is considered to contain a good balance of hand and foot techniques, but in particular it is renowned for its impressive acrobatic kicks.[citation needed] In demonstration events, Long Fist techniques are most popular and memorable for their whirling, running, leaping, and acrobatics. Contemporary changquan moves are difficult to perform, requiring great flexibility and athleticism comparable to that of gymnastics.
    Long Fist's arsenal of kicks covers everything from a basic front toe-kick to a jumping back-kick, from a low sweep to a tornado-kick.

    (Chángquán Style: Shadowless Kick Technique)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid - short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user from mid-range(or short) Quickly dashes in front of the opponent, to the opponent to his surprise and assumes the crane stance where he then jumps and kicks the opponent in the chin with the upper most top part of his foot. The opponents head will be forced upwards and thats when the user quickly dashes around the opponent, ending up behind him. Where he then delivers a strong kick to the opponents side, connecting his shin to opponents rib cage. The user then dashes around the opponent again, back to front and kicks them dead in the chest with a chakra infused foot. Quickly incapacitating the opponent or among certain situations brings upon death.
    *This can only be attempted twice per battle.
    *Can only be landed once.
    * Since the user uses all of his speed, he is exhausted and can only preform two jutsus in the next turn.

    -Approved.-

    (Chángquán Style: Heavenly Wind Kicks)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: short -mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60 (plus 10 every kick)
    Description: The user begins by doing cartwheel into a high spinning corkscrew kick which he uses to jump over the opponent, ending up behind them. After the user successful lands behind them he begins backflipping into the opponent. The users puts his hands on the ground and flips backwards, successfully driving their feet into the opponents head. The user will do approximately 5-8 kicks and the last part ends with the user quickly flipping over the opponent again and placing one hand on the ground and kicks the opponent dead in their chin sending them backwards. With each kick the opponent gets pushed back, and with the last kick ends up in mid-range.
    Note:The user can do however many kicks he likes with the maximum of 8.
    * After the technique has been executed, the user is in pain from the strain it put on his legs and back. Slowing his movements down.

    -Approved.-

    (Kokuujin: Yuuikaze) - Judgement: Snowstorm
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description:- The user will stop an incoming attack with a quickdraw slash that creates a shield of ice infront the user blocking the attack and then will counter by striking through the shield with their sword covered in ice shards much like samehada's appearance and then slashing through the enemies shoulder.

    -Approved.-

    (Sekkajin) - Snow Flower Storm
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra costs: 30
    Damage costs: 60
    Description:- The user wildly slashes with their sword at the target whilst releasing ice chakra from their blade that instantly turns into a powder of snow and with several slashes the user creates a flurry of snow to envelop the target and then with a final slash the user will release a chilling wind that freezes the snow creating a flower of ice to encase the target.

    -Approved.-

    (Hyouton youshiki : Dansu sono hyouketsu waza) - Ice Style: Dance Of The Freezing Art
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/ Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra costs: 40
    Damage costs: 80
    Description: The user rushes the opponent while constantly flowing ice chakra out of their arms and legs. He then gages the opponent in taijutsu, With each connecting hit the user releases ice chakra wherever he hit. So with each successful hit on a certain area of the opponents body begins to freeze. If the user hits them in that same spot twice it would freeze over.
    * Due to the constant flow of chakra to the users limbs, It can only lasts two turns.
    * After effects wear off, the user cannot use Hyouton jutsu for the next two turns.
    Note: If a certain part is hit only once, If the opponent doesn't do something about it the freezing will begin to spread and that area of the body will be frozen within a turn.
    Note: Can also be used in conjunction with other taijutsu techniques.

    -Declined. Please stick to Naruto-
    (Credit goes to Zen for some of the jutsus above. Also i'm not ripping Kung Fu off of Sasuke Uchiha.., we decided to come up with jutsus together.)
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Shigan| Finger Gun
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack; Taijutsu
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Shigan is a close-quarter combat technique, in which the user gathers a good amount of chakra on his hands. Then he pushes their finger into a certain target at a very high speed, leaving a wound similar to a bullet wound, making swords or similar weapons unnecessary. Because the area of contact in very small (the point of the finger), this technique has incredible penetrating power, being capable of piercing through swords or even strong walls. Tough it's more frequently used with a single finger, the user can use his whole hand for a wider wound/hole on his target.
    *Usable three times per battle


    -Approved, but needs some seconds to gather all this chakra-

    Meiton Hijutsu: Ichimyaku, Kuwashii Seishou Kaihou |Dark Secret Technique: One Pulse, Full Energy Release
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack; Nintaijutsu
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: **
    Description: This is a taijutsu technique which requires the use of the Dark Element. While fighting against the opponent, the user will be absorbing multiple of the opponent's techniques. Then, once the user has absorbed enough chakra, he will manipulate it with his own and release it all through the lower square mark on his hands in form of an extremely compressed chakra pulse. Once it comes in contact with the opponent, it will do massive internal damage to him. **The damage caused on the opponent will be the same as all the techniques the user had previously absorbed, meaning that in some causes, if successfully performed, this technique can put the opponent in a near-death state or even kill him.
    ~Usable twice per battle
    ~No S-rank or higher Dark Release techniques during the following turn

    -On hold. Please explain the visibility of the pulse and why this is not forbidden ranked-

    Meiton: Yuuen Kyūketsukō| Dark Release: Grand Inhaling Maw
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: This technique is a stronger version of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw, used only to absorb high ranked techniques. It follows the same concept, however, instead of just one hand to perform, the user will need to use both. He will point his palms together in the direction of the incoming technique and will then absorb it. This is this technique's weakness: since the user needs both hands to perform it, he will be more vulnerable to a surprise attack, being unable to perform an adequate defence most of the times. The absorbed technique can then be released via Dark Release: Judegment
    ~Usable twice per battle
    ~There must be a gap of at least one turn between each usage
    ~Can only absorb techniques up to S-rank or combos made of techniques up to A-rank

    -Approved-

    Meiton: Shuukaiyami| Dark Release: Mass of Darkness
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: -
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: -
    Description: By spreading his darkness chakra throughout his body, the user can turn himself into an amorphous mass of darkness. By turning the whole body in darkness at will, this technique makes it impossible to receive damage from physical attacks. From a single hair to the skin and muscles, everything can be turned in darkness and solidified at will. Be it to evade an enemy's attack during a short range battle, to infiltrate a structure, or to launch a surprise attack, this technique boasts a high strategic value. While using this technique the user is more vulnerable to large scale wind techniques which can make his body of darkness to be blown away. If that happens the user will immediately solidify into his original body but this will be a slow process as it will take some time to collect the darkness from the surroundings. This gives an open for the opponent to attack
    *Usable four times per battle
    *Lasts one whole turn


    -Declined-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Axle View Post
    Suiton Bunshi: Water Molecules
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage : (15 damage per turn )
    Description: The user puts their hands together as if they were praying but is actually releasing large amounts of water chakra into the water molecules in the air so that now all fire attacks lose -15, sand is reduced to mud, lightning used becomes instantly conducted and all water or elements containing water gain +15
    Note: can only be taught by Axle
    Note: lasts 5 turns
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: after this technique is done the user can't user any A-rank and above water jutsus for 3 turns
    Note: can be used as a water source

    Approved

    Kame Kawa: Turtle Shell
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: ( +15 taijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses chakra into their skin until it becomes hard and solid just like a turtle's shell. The user is unaffected by A-rank and lower moves (except lightning lightning which is B-rank and lower). The user's speed decreases like he's wearing 30lb weights all over his body. Thus when this move is over the user's speed is doubled and he moves as fast as lee with no weights (as all people who play sports know, when you run or move with weights, your speed increases once you drop the weights like rock lee)
    Note: Lasts 5 turns
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle
    Note: the speed only lasts 5 turns also until the muscles tear in the legs and arms forcing the user to forfeit

    Make the bold section more explained its confusing

    Kame Bikou: Turtle Nostrils
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses chakra into their nose, until it takes the shape of that of a turtle. By taking in deep breathes, the user can smell the opponents chakra. This only lasts for 5 turns
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle

    Declined, do not resubmit

    Genjutsu: (Gokai) Lust
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 (per target)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user winks their eye, causing the opponent to think that they're being played with sexually until the climax, this feels real and leads to a climax in the real battle.
    Note: The opponent is stunned for 1 turn
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: can only be taught by Axle
    Note: can be used on multiple targets at a time

    Declined, do not resubmit

    Ingrid
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60 (heals +15)
    Description: The user summons a turtle named Ingrid, the fumes in her belly are a sort of antidote. Ingrid can swallow the user and while the user is in Ingrid, by consuming the fumes, all poisons and internal damages the user may have are healed. Ingrid can only be pierced by A-rank and above attacks. Ingrid's roars are so fierce that they are classified as A-rank wind attacks. Ingrid is 2 stories tall.
    Note: Must have Signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle

    Declined, healing of anykind is medical classed skills

    Katon Hando: (Fire Hand)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (20 damage to the user hand because of burns)
    Description: The user holds out one of their hands, they then cup it, causing fire to instantly form under the opponent (the opponent is now standing on a piece of earth but is surrounded like the shape of my cupped hand hand by the fire). The user can then close their hand, causing the fire to close around the opponent, the fire then eats the oxygen from around the opponent, causing them to suffocate, and also the heat would cause the opponent to pass out. The atmosphere is so dry in the hand that no water can be formed from inside. If the user clinches their fist, then the hand crushes the opponent with flames.
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: no fire jutsu for the next 2 turns
    Note: only Axle can teach

    Declined, similar jutsu exists
    Quote Originally Posted by Axle View Post
    Kame Kawa: Turtle Shell
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: ( +15 taijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses chakra into their skin until it becomes hard and solid just like a turtle's shell. The user is unaffected by A-rank and lower moves. The user's speed decreases like he's wearing 30lb weights all over his body. Thus when this move is over the user's speed is doubled and he moves as fast as lee with no weights (as all people who play sports know, when you run or move with weights, your speed increases once you drop the weights like rock lee)
    Note: Must have the shell on for 3 turns
    Note: Lasts 5 turns
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle
    Note: The speed only lasts 5 turns also until the muscles tear in the legs and arms forcing the user to forfeit
    ~Declined, this is a resubittion it requires quotes for me to mark any changes ~

    Custom Weapon: (Chakra Debas)Chakra Knives
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user pulls out 2 knives that are used on bras knuckles also. By focusing chakra into them, they light up with wind chakra, a blade of wind chakra then extends out from the side of the knives.This is basic wind manipulation, the blade extends based on how much chakra the user focuses into them. Since the blades are made of pure wind chakra, blocking the blades or avoiding them will still get the opponent cut (-10) it also pushes the opponent back a few yards. By holding the user's arms straight out right beside each other and focusing wind chakra in the knives, a wind shield is formed in front of the user, this has some properties of a rapid spinning fan. It pushes with enough wind to blow away medium sized objects. The shiled only covers the user's front. Also if anything comes into contact with the shield, they are immediately ripped to shreds
    Note: The user can change the chakra amount at anytime
    Note: can only be taught/used by Axle
    ~Declined~ 80% of what you just described are Asuma's knives, you get them by default if you make an Asuma bio

    (Kentou Sensu) - Boxing Style
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: (Taijutsu rules)
    Description: The user raises their fists up close to their face and begins jogging in place. By using this style, they must concentrate on their opponent at all times. And it has basically became a reflex to jab and dodge, making the user move a little faster than average (nothing compared to gates speed). The user also is ready to block at will, since his fists are already raised to do so. In this style the user only uses punches and constantly shifts their feet to move at lightning fast speed around the opponent when in elbow range. Also a direct hit to the opponent's temple is enough for a complete K.O.
    Note: Can only be taught/used by Axle
    Note: being in this style involves a strong cardio system, so it's very difficult to maintain without getting exhausted.
    1- training session let's the user maintain for 2 turns
    2:3 - training sessions lets the user maintain for 5 turns
    5-training sessions lets the user maintain for 10 turns
    Note: takes 3 turns to use this style again in the same match.
    ~Declined, remove the K.O. we dont allow such things ~

    Atsui-Appu: Warm-up
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: (Taijutsu +10)(Ninjutsu +5)
    Description: The user jogs in place while punching the air, causing their blood to pump faster making them a little faster and stronger. Because of this early warm-up, the user is also more focused causing their reflexes to sharpen. With this blood pumping sensation, chakra also flows easier and faster, letting the user use jutsus faster.
    Note: Can only be taught by Axle
    Note: lasts the whole battle
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: doesn't count as a move
    Note: must be done at beginning of battle
    ~Declined, doesnt count as a move course it does considering this is a techniqe >_>~
    Kame Kawa: Turtle Shell
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: ( +15 taijutsu)
    Description: The user focuses chakra into their skin until it becomes hard and solid just like a turtle's shell. The user is unaffected by A-rank and lower moves. The user's speed decreases like he's wearing 30lb weights all over his body. Thus when this move is over the user's speed is doubled and he moves as fast as lee with no weights (as all people who play sports know, when you run or move with weights, your speed increases once you drop the weights like rock lee)
    Note: Must have the shell on for 3 turns
    Note: Lasts 5 turns
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle
    Note: The speed only lasts 5 turns also until the muscles tear in the legs and arms forcing the user to forfeit

    -Declined. This should be a mod and not a jutsu and similar mode exists-


    (Kentou Sensu) - Boxing Style
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: (Taijutsu rules)
    Description: The user raises their fists up close to their face and begins jogging in place. By using this style, they must concentrate on their opponent at all times. And it has basically became a reflex to jab and dodge, making the user move a little faster than average (nothing compared to gates speed). The user also is ready to block at will, since his fists are already raised to do so. In this style the user only uses punches and constantly shifts their feet to move at lightning fast speed around the opponent when in elbow range.
    Note: Can only be taught/used by Axle
    Note: being in this style involves a strong cardio system, so it's very difficult to maintain without getting exhausted.
    1- training session let's the user maintain for 2 turns
    2:3 - training sessions lets the user maintain for 5 turns
    5-training sessions lets the user maintain for 10 turns
    Note: takes 3 turns to use this style again in the same match.


    -Approved-


    Atsui-Appu: Warm-up
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: (Taijutsu +10)(Ninjutsu +5)
    Description: The user jogs in place while punching the air, causing their blood to pump faster making them a little faster and stronger. Because of this early warm-up, the user is also more focused causing their reflexes to sharpen. With this blood pumping sensation, chakra also flows easier and faster, letting the user use jutsus faster.
    Note: Can only be taught by Axle
    Note: lasts the whole battle
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: must be done at beginning of battle


    - Edit as to make it last for 5 turns ( and one for preparation). If it lasts for the whole battle, of course it doesnt need to be used more than once per battle.


    Genjutsu: (Su-pa Hyu-man Joukei) Super Human Sight
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 25 to user
    Description: The user casts a genjutsu where the opponent's eyes have become so advanced, they see everything in slow motion. Because nothing but their eyes are advanced, the human brain cannot process all of the images and takes the opponent a long time to react to any movement. In the opponent's eyes, it takes the user a year just to reach out and touch him.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: No genjutsu for the rest of the match
    Note: Can only be taught/used by Axle

    -Smart, I like it. However, as you should know by now, the Forbidden ranked jutsus should cause side effects to the user. Resubmit with proper restrictions-

    Summoning Jutsu: (Kame) Turtle Summoning: Bubba
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Bubba is the most artistic turtle, he has been with user so long that they have good chemisty and they don't need to talk during battle to understand each other, by stomping his foot he can perform A-rank and lower earth jutsus from anywhere on the field. He's 5 stories tall. Can only be pierced by A-rank and above jutsus.
    Note: can only be pierced by A-rank and above jutsus
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle

    -Needs some sort of contact between them at least, else we are dealing with telepathy-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Futon: Torune- do, buatsui jiten )- Wind style: tornado, massive rotation
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D
    Range: mid- long
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user gathers chakra , the chackra then vanishes, at the time the chakra
    Vanishes, a X, is marked at the opponents feet. The tornado then suddenly forms, the fast
    rotation damages the opponent while still leaving the opponent dizzy in confusion.



    (Futon: chikara tei oshi)- Wind Style: forced air pressure
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D
    Range: short- mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: The user gathers chakra in his palms, with a gentle push, a high air pressure is forced on an opponent. The attack will damage an opponent and send him flying for a distance
    of 85 meters.


    (Futon: kihou noukou)-Wind style- high tension
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: short- mid
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The opponent is choked by the high pressure of the wind. The air circulating around there body is chsnged to carbon dioxide, leaving the opponent without air for 10 seconds, during this time the user can escape or make a next move

    -All on hold. Resubmit using proper format and better descriptions-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Buki Kurōn Gijutsu)-Weapon Clone Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After stringing together a number of wires and shuriken around a ball of explosive tags, the user channels chakra into the frame of weapons to create a Shadow Clone around the weapons, with the ball of explosive tags around it's heart. This clone acts exactly as a Shadow Clone, except when it gets hit, instead of simply going 'poof', the explosive ball ignits, sending a barrage of weapons in all directions, the clone ceasing to exist in the aftermath.

    Note:~Stringing together the weapons with wire counts as one of the jutsu for that turn, making the user only able to use one other jutsu in the same turn they make this clone.


    (Kyōyū Dorīmu)-Dream Sharing
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A unique genjutsu where the user makes physical contact with his opponent, and puts both of them asleep, sending them both into a dream (this creates a new terrain populated by the opponents suboncious that the user may choose and manipulate). The user is aware of being inside of a dream, whereas his opponent is not (dreams seem real while you're in them. It's only after you wake us you realize something was odd. Even the new terrain won't set off ones opponent, as your memory is somewhat fogged while in a dream). While inside the dream, the laws of physics can be ignored, and even controled if one realizes that they are dreaming. When in a dream, if you die, you wake up, and your actual body isn't harmed, whereas if you merely harm your opponent, not aiming to kill, they will actually feel the pain.
    Unfortunatly, while in a dream, the user will be hunted by his opponents subconsious mind, which get's more aggressive each turn (as it's the opponents subconcious, they have no control over it whatsoever). If the user remains in the dream for more than five turns, at the end of his opponents sixth turn, he will be utterly surrounded by armed men bent on killing him. At the end of the users sixth turn, the user will be killed by his opponents subconcious, no questions asked.
    When going into a dream, all clones that both the user and his opponent had made are dispelled, as while you're sleeping you cannot control your chakra to feed your clones or control your clones at all. While in a dream, jutsu require no chakra (your opponent may be think they are moulding chakra, when they aren't, because that's the way dreams are; you think you're running while you're really lying still), and you have an unlimited ammount of projectiles (kunai, shuriken, ect.).
    Just as in normal genjutsu, the opponent can realize that they're sleeping, and can control the dream just as the user can (they still cannot control their subconcious) or kill themselves to wake up. If one person in a dream wakes up, both people are taken out of the dream. Just like in (Genjutsu: Kokohin) Illusion Technique: False Surrounding, the dreams can be doubled over, creating a dream within a dream, so if the opponent wakes up, they'll believe that they're in the real world, while still being in a dream. The opponents subconcious travels with them, and will not touch either person sleeping inside of a dream.

    Note: ~Can only be used twice per battle (not including making a dream inside a dream).
    ~When going into the dream, the user and his opponent will start at mid-range from each other.
    ~To survive five-six turns, the user must kill their opponents person-formed subconcious constantly throughout their fifth and sixth turns.
    ~The user's opponent will always make the first move in the dream (meaning this must be the last jutsu used in the users turn, and it must be the last thing they do in their turn otherwise).
    ~The opponents subconcious varies in power. It'll have genin rank people-forms, all the way up to one rank above their own people-formations. No subconcious form will have a Kekkei Genkai (regardless if the opponent has one himself).
    ~As the subconcious knows that it has created many human-forms, the human-forms don't bother to defend themselves; only attack the user.
    ~The more the user manipulates the laws of physics, the quicker the opponents subconcious becomes agressive.
    ~Manipulating the laws of physics counts as one of the three moves per turn (can be used in a row as many times as the user pleases, and it counts as one jutsu).
    ~When the user and his opponent wake up, whoevers turn it was is over and the fight resumes on the users opponents turn.
    ~The 'three jutsu per turn' still applies in the dream.
    ~As this jutsu dispells all clones, a clone cannot use it, and clones cannot be used inside the dream.


    (Sēfudorīmu)-Dream Safe
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While in a dream created by Kyōyū Dorīmu, the user creates a hidden, heavy duty safe, indestructable with the only way to get in being a three number combination, consisting of any number from zero to sixty. When a safe or safe-like object is placed in a dream, the mind automatically fills it with secrets. The user knows the location to the safe, and the opponent knows the combination, which is made up of the first three numbers that come to his head when questioned about it (if the opponent somehow finds the safe before the user can find the opponent, the comination is any three numbers the opponent wants). If the user get's the combination and gets the files in the safe, when he wakes up, he can counter his opponents next move knowing the whole move before it happens.

    Note:~Can only be used one time per level of dream.
    ~This is an exception to the rule where Kyōyū Dorīmu must be the last jutsu of your turn, and can be used the moment the dream is created.
    ~This jutsu requires chakra, whereas normal jutsu inside Kyōyū Dorīmu do not.


    (Sakusei Dorīmu)-Dream Creation
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The exact opposite of Hakai Dorīmu, while in a dream created by Kyōyū Dorīmu, the user can create anything they want with this jutsu; be it a weapon, or a shield, or a hallway, ect. Due to the contruction of dreams, the spontaneous appearance is not considered odd to those who don't know it's a dream.

    Note:~As this jutsu is used in a dream, it requires no handseals.
    ~This jutsu requires chakra, whereas normal jutsu inside Kyōyū Dorīmu do not.
    ~When this jutsu is used, the user cannot manipulate the laws of physics in the same turn.
    ~Can only be used once per turn.
    ~Can be used as many times during the battle as the user wishes, but only in one level of a dream (if it is used in the first level of a dream, and then the user creates another level, when the user and his oppoent wake up, this jutsu still cannot be used).
    ~Cannot create clones or other people.


    (Hakai dorīmu)-Dream Destruction
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The exact opposite of Sakusei Dorīmu, while in a dream created by Kyōyū Dorīmu, the user can destroy anything they want with this jutsu; be it a weapon, or a shield, or a hallway, ect. Due to the contruction of dreams, the spontaneous disappearance is not considered odd to those who don't know it's a dream.

    Note:~As this jutsu is used in a dream, it requires no handseals.
    ~This jutsu requires chakra, whereas normal jutsu inside Kyōyū Dorīmu do not.
    ~When this jutsu is used, the user cannot manipulate the laws of physics in the same turn.
    ~Can only be used once per turn.
    ~Can be used as many times during the battle as the user wishes, but only in one level of a dream (if it is used in the first level of a dream, and then the user creates another level, when the user and his oppoent wake up, this jutsu still cannot be used).
    ~If the user destroys a part of the landscape, the landscape around it is sealed up as if it were never there.
    ~Cannot destroy the opponents subconcious or the opponent themselves. The user must kill them with jutsu or weapons.


    ~All Declined~ Do not resubmit without spell checking and change this to a CE
    Resubmitting:

    (Buki Kuron Gijutsu)-Weapon Clone Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After stringing together a number of shuriken with ninja wires around a ball of explosive tags, the user channels chakra into the frame of weapons to create a Shadow Clone around the weapons, with the ball of explosive tags around its heart. This clone acts exactly as a Shadow Clone, except when it gets hit, instead of simply going 'poof', the explosive ball ignites, sending a barrage of weapons in all directions, the clone ceasing to exist in the aftermath.

    Note: ~Stringing together the weapons with wire counts as one of the jutsu for that turn, making the user only able to use one other jutsu in the same turn they make this clone
    ~This jutsu can only be taught by Sharingdork


    New Jutsu:

    (Subarashii No Jutsu)-Awesome No Jutsu
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 for every turn that it's active)
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used offensively)
    Description: The user forces chakra out of their chakra nodes into a visible aura around themselves, similar to a jinchuriki's Tailed-Beast chakra cloak, but on a much weaker level, for a maximum of four turns. This chakra cloak can defend against weapons that aren't chakra-infused, up to B-rank taijutsu (excluding Kaito's Tai, as it incorporates chakra, which will break through the chakra shield), and up to B-rank tangible elements (earth and water) by concentrating the aura into one spot/area to become a small chakra shield (due to the nature of how the cloak defends, it cannot defend against attacks coming from different angles, and the user must be aware of the incoming attack). It can also defend up to B-rank ninjutsu and up to C-rank intangible elements (wind, fire, and lightning) by redirecting the chakra that makes up the attack around the user. This cloak can also defend against up to B-rank genjutsu by sensing a disruption in the user’s chakra system, and returning to the users body, thus breaking the user out of genjutsu in a similar way to jinchuriki.
    This jutsu can also create 'arms' similar to Naruto's fox cloak to attack the enemy from an angle unattainable by the user. These arms are slightly weaker than the user’s actual arms, making them desirable only for a defense/distraction until the user can actually attack. When the user uses taijutsu while in the cloak, the chakra focuses around whatever is attacking (fist, foot, sword, etc.) to increase the power of the taijutsu. The cloak also makes all projectiles (kunai, shuriken, etc.) fly through the air with more speed and precision. In addition, with chakra molded and at the ready all around the user, ninjutsu takes much fewer hand seals, though it's power is not increased at all.

    Note: ~Genjutsu, elemental jutsu, and Kekkei Genkai cannot be used while in the cloak
    ~After the cloak does work once (defends, creates arms, increases taijutsu power, increases speed of projectiles, reduces time to use ninjutsu, etc.), it disappears
    ~Kekkei Genkai/Custom Elements (lava, ice, etc.) cannot be defended against by the cloak
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork


    (Jojishi No Jutsu)-Epic No Jutsu
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+10 for each turn it's active)
    Damage Points: N/A (+20 if used offensively) (+15 to the user for every turn it's active)
    Description: An advanced version of 'Subarashii No Jutsu', Jojishi No Jutsu creates a denser chakra aura around the user that lasts for a maximum of three turns. The cloak looks exactly the same as 'Subarashii No Jutsu', meaning that only sensors and dojutsu users can tell the difference. This cloak is capable of defending against chakra-enfused weapons, up to A-rank taijutsu (exluding Kaito's Tai, as it incorporates chakra to use, which will break through the chakra shield), and up to A-rank tangible elements (earth and water) by compressing itself into a small shield (slightly larger than 'Subarashii No Jutsu'). It can also defend against non chakra-infused weapons, B-rank and below taijutsu and tangible elements coming from different angles (up to two different angles). The aura also defends against A-rank and below ninjutsu, and B-rank and below intangible elements (wind, fire, lightning) by redirecting the chakra flow making up the jutsu around the user. It can also defend against up to A-rank genjutsu by sensing a disruption in the users chakra system, and returning to the user's body, breaking out of genjutsu similar to a jinchuriki. In addition to this, in a way similar to Gaara's sand, this jutsu can defend without the user being knowledgeable of the attack (can defend against a surprise attack).
    Like it's weaker counterpart, Jojishi No Jutsu can also create arms, but at the same physical level as the users actual arms (without enhancements by weapons or chakra) to attack or defend from any angle of the cloak. The cloak also surrounds any part of the body performing taijutsu (fist, foot, sword, etc.) to enhance it's attacking power greatly, as well as being able to increase the speed, precision, and power of projectiles (kunai, shuriken, etc.) thrown from inside. This jutsu also makes A-rank and below ninjutsu take only one handseal to form (unless it requires none; ie. Rasengan), and has increased power (ie. if two A-rank ninjutsu clashed, the user's would win).
    Unfortunately, due to the great amount of chakra required to use this jutsu, and maintain it, it puts a great strain on the users body, physically exhausting and harming them after the cloak dissipates. After the cloak leaves, the user is too exhausted to stand for one turn, leaving them vulnerable to their opponent. For the next two turns, the user can stand, but their chakra system is still too exhausted to allow them to use chakra, meaning that any jutsu with a chakra cost cannot be used during this time. They can also only use two jutsu per turn during this time. After those turns, the user is back to full power and can use chakra-required jutsu, and three jutsu per turn once again.

    Note: ~Genjutsu, elemental jutsu, and Kekkei Genkai cannot be used while in the cloak
    ~After the cloak does work once, it dissipates
    ~Kekkei Genkai/Custom Elements (lava, ice, etc.) cannot be defended against by the cloak
    ~Can only be used once per battle
    ~If the cloak does no work over the three turns that it can be active, the users chakra system is pushed farther than it can take, and is exhausted for the rest of the battle (can only use jutsu without a chakra cost for the rest of the fight, after taking in the downside to the jutsu in the final paragraph)
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork


    -All declined. Simplify your descriptions and also keep your jutsus realistic-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton:Ro Kaze)-Wind Release:Low Wind
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Description: The user will raise both his hand in the air and begin to release wind chakra around the air, afterwards the user will gather the air around into a large wind ball, using the previously released chakra. The user will slam his hand in the ground followed by the wind ball, making the air from it dispersed above the ground, the wind will reach the opponent and from the force of it he or she will get lift at least 30cm from the ground, land back with loose balance and fall to the ground. This jutsu is just to stall the opponent for a short amount of time or to attack him/her while in the ground.
    - Can only be used twice per battle.


    (Fuuton:Tei Hou)-Wind Release:Air Cannon
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Air Cannon is a special technique that needs a good chakra control. The user will focus wind chakra in any part of the body or the whole of it, then he will violently release the chakra in the form of a very strong white-clear blast with enough force to repel a Taijutsu attack (E to C-rank) from the opponent or blow back kunais shurikens etc. The blast's power, speed, range, and force vary based on the rank of the user.
    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.


    (Kenjutsu:Heki Shikon Rendan)-Sword Technique:False Fang Barrage
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Description: When using the White Light Chakra Saber, Sakumo will start swinging the tanto giving off a white streak of white chakra with each swing, then by using his own chakra he will make each streak to advance towards the opponent giving the impression of being attack with various sword slashes while in fact it's just harmless chakra. This technique is only used to decive the opponent and follow up with a surprise attack.
    Other users can only perform this technique by channeling lightning chakra into the blade of a sword or tanto and use a similar procedure of Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar but insted of emanating light this will create small arcs of light when the blade has been swung.
    -Casn only be used twice per battle.

    -On hold. resubmit when you get a higher rank so you can make those jutsus B & A ranked-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fukasu-Fukasu Bodi) Smoke-Smoke Body
    Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:The user takes a pull of his cigarette, and then mixes the smoke with his chakra. His body then takes on all the characteristics of smoke, except for physical appearance, which stays the same. While in tis form, the user can choose to be intangible, and be impervious to all physical attacks, such as Taijutsu, and Kenjutsu, regaining anybody part, or healing any injury obtained while in this form (since the smoke would just go back and fill the space it was removed from during the hit). The user can also choose to be tangible, thickening the smoke until it is dense enough to land a physical blow on an opponent. (The idea for this jutsu comes from Smoker from One Piece)

    ~While in this form the user is only affected by Wind/Water/Lightning attacks. The user isn't affected by Fire/Earth based attacks.
    ~While in this form, the user can only use Fire/Earth techniques.
    ~This jutsu lasts for 3 turns once active
    ~Only usable 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

    NOTE
    For these jutsu, im not sure if Kigiri is the only one who can use smoke jutsu. But i tried to make this different from his jutsu, by making it so that you manipulate the smoke from cigarettes that you've taken in by mixing it with your own chakra.

    -Declined. Completely unrealistic and irrelevant to Naruto's world. Nicotine doesn't give you any ability. I would know, since I am a smoker.


    (Fukasu Karyo) Smoke Overdose
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user, after taking a pull from his/her cigarette, will then expel the smoke, mixing their chakra with the smoke, and blow it towards their opponent. Afterwards, they cover the smoke in a layer of regular chakra trapping the enemy in a dome of Tobbaco smoke, that cannot be broken by a jutsu of lower rank. (Because of the nature of narcotics, the longer the enemy is exposed to the smoke, they will become increasingly drowsy)

    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

    -Declined. Completely unrealistic and irrelevant to Naruto's world. Nicotine doesn't give you any ability. I would know, since I am a smoker.


    (Katon: Hoka Bakuha) Fire Style:Fire Explosion
    Rank:
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user releases their fire chakra all at once all around themselves in a brief but powerful fire explosion, that hurts anyone near him/her.

    ~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

    -Declined. If you wanna make yourself a bomb then you must be prepared to die. If you are up for that, resubmit having your death as a note-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I don't know if this was done before, but I don't feel like reading hundreds of pages. X) It's like the one from Bleach.

    (Shunpo)-Flash Step
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C
    RangeShort
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user gather's an extremely large ammount of chakra into their feet and then releases it, causing them to move at incredibly high speeds the human eye cannot follow.


    ~It cannot be countered unless countered with Shunpo itself because nothing is as fast except for itself. It can only be dodged with the use of a fully-Developed sharingan
    ~It can only be used once during battle. It can be used as many times as the user wants outside of battle
    ~A fully-developed Sharingan can track its movements, and dodge, but not counterattack as quickly
    ~Only GaaraRules111 and people he selects can learn it

    -Declined. Similar jutsu already exists. I also highly appreciate the fact that you made me search for a similar jutsu just because you 'don't feel like reading hundreds of pages'. Your attitude is offensive to the staff. You are banned from submitting any kind of jutsu for 2 weeks. X) -
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Updating:

    (Kaze Zuiichi Yama) Winds of Everest
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The ultimate form of Fuuton: Reppushou (Wind Style: Wind Gale) this jutsu conjures wind with the same speed and force of the winds at the peak of Everest. This jutsu can deflect weapons, push enemies, and be used to avoid jutsu by pushing the user. The jutsu can also be used to double the speed of thrown items. The user must have an ample distance to activate the jutsu so the wind can gather speed. Usable two times per battle.


    to:

    (Fūton: Fūjin Ibuki) Fūton: Fūjin’s Breath
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offesnive/Supplementary
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The ultimate form of Fuuton: Reppushou, this jutsu allows the user to create powerful gusts of wind and direct them as they wish.


    -On hold. I will approve but you need to state the limits of these gusts as in size, strength and numbers of them-

    New Submissions:
    (Fūton: Fūjin Gekido) Fūton: Fūjin’s Rage
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will form four handseals and will then release their Fuuton chakra into a large ring in the sky, while simultaneously exhaling a slip-stream of wind. The ring will quickly descend upon the field and will constrict itself into a smaller ring, the size of which is controlled by the slip-stream. Then, by forming a fifth handseal, the ring will erupt into a powerful dome that impales and shreds anything inside from all angles. Upon the formation of the fifth handseal, the slip-stream from the user ceases.
    *Once per battle.
    *No Fuuton jutsu in the same turn.


    -On hold. Fix the red part-


    Summoning Animal:Columbidae
    Scroll Owner:KeotsuEclipse
    Other Users who have signed contract: TBA
    Summoning Boss if existing: TBA
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: TBA
    General Description: Columbidae (Pigeons and Doves [biologically, pigeons and doves are the same - "dove" is a term used by humans to - generally - describe the smaller birds in the species]) are as diverse in their abilities as humans are - some Columbidae specialize in technique and element usage while others are simply speed oriented; as each Columbidae is different, each's individual niche will be described when submitted - however, each Columbidae has the ability to transform into a human form, symbolizing Columbidae's concentration around humans.

    About Human form: I know we never reached a consensus about this, but I thought of something that should work out just fine: each of them can use the Transformation jutsu. It's easy enough to fit in, and is believable. I'd add it to each one that it counted as a jutsu to transform.

    -Approved-


    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Ushiwaka) Columbidae Summon: Ushiwaka
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Ushiwaka, or Waka for short, is Keotu’s personal summon. An average sized Dove with golden plumage, Waka is a Columbidae that is more oriented towards Kenjutsu, and has a minor wind element, capable of creating powerful gusts of wind to blow away objects or enemies. Waka is summoned with a flute in his talons, which is actually the mystical sword Pillowtalk. Pillowtalk sprouts a green blade of chakra from one end of the flute once chakra is directed through it. Pillowtalk has the standard slicing capability of a regular Katana, but when someone is hit by the blade of Pillowtalk, in addition to causing a wound, it also makes the opponent sleepy, an effect that gets worse with each consecutive hit – no person has every stayed awake through more than three hits by Pillowtalk, regardless of what they’re doing. When Waka transforms into a human, he is shown with long golden hair, and in a pink kimono along with a purple Sashinuki-hakama, along with a hat that has the motif of a hawk with a long cloak that hides his hair, and tends to pepper his speech with French phrases. He is extremely talented in Kenjutsu, able to use any of Keotsu’s Kenjutsu moves at an equal cost, and has the ability to use his wind powers to allow himself to stay in the air, giving him the ability to “fly” (in actuality, he creates an updraft that allows him to hover, and can change the able to glide around). While in his dove form, he is extremely quick and agile, making him a difficult target.
    *Waka has a strong bond with Keotsu and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when they summon him. When anyone else summons him, he remains on the field for 4 turns, though he can leave Pillowtalk behind for the user to use, until they dismiss the blade.
    *Waka’s Wind Gust in Dove form is equivalent to C-Rank, but only require 10 Chakra, due to it’s not damaging nature.
    *Pillowtalk can only be wielded by Columbidae contract signers.
    *Transforming to/from Dove/Human form takes 5 chakra and counts against one of that turns moves.
    Waka in human form


    -On hold. Fix the red parts. Especially, the sleeping part is a special thing, so you need to have some sort of preparation before its use or side effects for it.-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Yard~ View Post
    Earth jutsu


    (Doton: Earth Body)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 60
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will use their earth chakra to encase themselve in a large 20ft tall human shaped body of earth.
    The user is kept in the stomach part of the body of earth with 2 holes where the user will stick their arms out of in order to preform other jutsu.
    The user can then use their earth chakra to make the body of earth move like how humans do with their brain and energy.
    This can be used to increase defense and attack power.
    Notes:
    -Must be taught by ~yard~
    -User cannot see his opponent while being in the body of earth unless he/she has either a byakugan bio or a special jutsu that allows them to see with their eyes being covered (which I have learned a custom that does)
    -takes 3 seconds to make this body of earth.
    -user cannot move his/her body while being in the body of earth except for their arms which will be sticking out making them vulnrable.
    -Since the body of earth is so large and depends on chakra for mobility, the body of earth moves a little slower.
    almost 2 seconds per each step when walking. almost 3 seconds when moving their arms from their sides to being strait up in the air.


    ~Declined, do not resubmit

    (Doton: Earth Swords) [This is not a custom weapon]
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (when making the sword)
    Attack points: 50
    Description: The user cups their hand as if they were holding a handel and molds a strong sword using their earth chakra.
    since the earth used is made from the users chakra it can cut through C rank earth.
    -The user cannot use any jutsu that require hand seals while holding the sword.
    -Sword takes 3 seconds to make.
    -Must be taught by ~Yard~

    ~Declined, incorrect points for B rank


    (Doton: Earth Arms)
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After making 3 hand signs the user sends his earth chakra into the ground around his opponent and raises arms from the ground that can grab his opponent and hold him/her in place.
    -The user must make contact with the ground in order to use this jutsu meaning he/she cannot use this while being in the air.
    -Must be taught by ~Yard~
    -Must have a proper understanding of earth jutsu meaning you must be able to use B rank earth to learn this jutsu.
    Note: If used in short-mid range you can add more chakra to the arms of earth and use them to crush the limbs of your opponent.


    Ps: I am aware that you can do this with another earth bending jutsu, but this is made of stronger earth



    ~Approved~


    Death Mode


    (Death Mode)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: -100 each turn
    Damage Points: +10 to Taijutsu +10 to Ninjutsu -100 To The User
    Description: The user releases life chakra throughout their body, this gives them increased strength, speed and even jutsu power.
    However, since the user is using his/her life chakra the user takes damage for each turn they keep it active.
    Notes
    -Usable Once per battle.
    -Last 3 turns.
    -User Recieves -100 damage for every turn
    -Can taught by ~Yard~


    ~Declined, do not resubmit

    Summoning




    Contract owner: ~Frederick~


    (Kchuysei: Hagetaka Chikyuu) Summoning: Hagetaka Earth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the nessecary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon "Hagetaka Chikyuu" (Meaning Condor of Earth).
    Hagetaka Chikyuu is A giant condor he is able to hold one Person on his back. Hagetaka Chikyuu can also use B-Rank Earth techniques that don't require hand seals.
    Hagetaka Chikyuu Can also move through earth with ease.
    Note:
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

    ~Edit so that the traveling freely through the ground counts as one your 3 moves

    (Doton: tsuchi heika) Earth Release: Earth swords [This is not a custom weapon]
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (when making the sword)
    Attack points: 40
    Description: The user cups their hand as if they were holding a handel and molds a strong sword using their earth chakra.
    since the earth used is made from the users chakra it can cut through C rank earth.
    -The user cannot use any jutsu that require hand seals while holding the sword.
    -Sword takes 3 seconds to make.
    -Must be taught by ~Yard~


    -Approved-




    (Raiton: Inabikar akuserere-ta- ) - Lightning Release: Lightning acceleration
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a chidori into their right hand.
    They make a fist and turn their fist to the side to where their pinky is at the bottom (so they turn their hand to the right)
    They then manipulate the chidori into a large wing that starts out on the knuckles of the users fist and stretches out to being behind the user.
    They then release the wing of lightning as a large bolt of lightning that hits the ground and propels the user forward, the user still has the
    chidori in their hand and can attack their opponent with greater speed and force.
    -This is a direct attack that cannot be stopped by the user, so once you use this technique there is no stopping your self
    due to the force and acceleration that the lightning propels you at.
    -this technique can be used two times per battle.
    -can be used to lift yourself into the air if you aim the bolt of lightning at the proper angle.
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~
    -User cannot use any A rank lightning on the next turn if used two times.


    -Declined. No one can manipulate lighting that well. Also, if you would hit the ground with this lighting bolt to get propelled forward, you wouldn't be able to still hold the chidori unaffected-



    (Raiton: ichi motte raikou ) - Lightning Release: One With Lightning
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Supplement/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The User releases large amounts of raiton chakra throughout their body until they have made a strong barrier of lightning Armour.
    The user keeps channeling their raiton chakra throughout their body and forces it through their muscles and joints this allows them to react quickly to moves and move faster than they have been before as well as increasing overall strength.

    -this technique can be used only once per battle
    -Can only be used by ~Yard~
    -User cannot use any raiton jutsu for 2 turns after using this jutsu and then they can only use B rank raiton.
    -Due to the user forcing lightning through his muscles and joints, it will be harder for them to move after using this jutsu and they will be
    extremely exhausted after using this jutsu for the next 2 turns.
    -This jutsu will last for 3 turns and during that time the user can only use 2 jutsus per turn as this jutsu will count as one of their 3 turns on every turn that it's active.


    -Declined. Similar jutsu already exists-



    (Fūton: haipa tatsumaki) – Wind Release: Hyper Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses their wind chakra and releases it as wind that spirals around their opponent creating a tornado around their opponent.
    The opponent will be caught in the eye of the tornado so he/she will be trapped inside and so the user throws shuriken into the tornado and
    uses their wind chakra to control the blades. After doing so the user controls the shuriken and uses them to violently cut their opponent.

    -The controling of the shuriken counts as one of the users turns
    -Can only be taught by ~Yard~


    -Declined. Obviously, your wind chakra can't be released and just create a tornado without some sort of manipulation, use of nature or a tiny bit of creativity from your side. -




    (Doton: sankyu aburana) - Earth Style: Chasity Belt
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Points: 90 To his pride
    Description: The user gathers his earth chakra, focuses it around his waist area and molds it into a chasity belt. This jutsu is mainly used for defense against HBA's as it makes it so he can't attack you for 2 turns, but the user can also use it to defend against on coming attacks directed to his waist.

    -Declined. HBA should be able to rape us all -


    If there's anything wrong with the jutsu's feel free to edit them in any way.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Daruny View Post

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the necessary hand seals the user slams his/her hands on the ground, this channels the chakra down to the earth, solidifying the ground under him/her. If a person is trapped within the earth, or is hiding, the person would be stuck underground until the user of the jutsu lifts his/her hand from the ground or runs out of chakra.




    Declined, needs restrictions
    Resubmitting:


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After the necessary hand seals the user slams his/her hands on the ground, this channels the chakra down to the earth, solidifying the ground under him/her. If a person is trapped within the earth, or is hiding, the person would be stuck underground until the user of the jutsu lifts his/her hand from the ground or runs out of chakra.
    Note: The user must keep his hands on the ground to keep the earth solid.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.




    -Declined. Why would your channeled chakra solidify the ground under you? Without any type of manipulation or handseal or something. Makes no sense. Shinobis, walking on trees or stepping on water would be able to do the same thing without even wanting to. Do not resubmit-


    New Submission:


    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user concentrates chakra on his hands and mold them into wind chakra, when the user strikes the opponent with his/her palms, the opponent's air is knocked out of his/her lungs. Disabling any wind jutsu that deals with their lungs.
    Note: Opponent can't use wind jutsus related with his/her lungs for 2 turns.




    -On hold. I like this jutsu but you have to state that this lasts only until the opponent ... breathes again. My suggestion is to push this a bit further and if you do it in a smart way you will have an exemplary jutsu-


    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After the user does Terra Shield (Doroku Gaeshi), the user slams the wall of earth, making it move quickly forth.
    Note: Must have done Terra Shield before.




    -Approved-



    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user of the jutsu sends chakra on a layer of the ground, this layer must be 50 cm depth at least off the ground for it to work. After the chakra is released on the ground the user senses the surrounding that are touching the area, meaning if an opponent is flying, then that person/thing is not noticed. Because genjutsus affect the brain as illusion, the opponent must specify that is doing an illusion that is emulating a person touching the ground.
    Note: Byakugan can see this chakra, there for disrupting it.
    Note: Layers x2, or 1 meter of depth doubles the chakra usage.
    Note: It lasts 4 turns, but it does not move with the user, meaning if the user leaves the boundaries, he/she will have to perform a new Setchi Kyokaii to notice the opponent.




    -Declined. Ibid. first jutsu-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summons


    (Kchuysei: Hagetaka Suchi-Ru) Summoning: Hagetaka Steel:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+40 Senbon)
    Description: The user does the nessecary handseals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon "Hagetaka Suchi-Ru" (Meaning Condor of Steel). Hagetaka Suchi-Ru is One in 3 Condor Giants know as the "Hagetaka San" (Meaning Condor Trio) She is big enough to hold 2 People on Her back. Hagetaka Suchi-Ru fether's are made of a dense still like substance this protects her from most Teijutsu, She can also Shoot her fethers like Senbon at fast speeds, the rain of senbon equal that of an B-Rank technique.
    Note:
    -Can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -Senbon counts as a move.

    (Kchuysei: Hagetaka Sou) Summoning: Hagetaka Stream:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+40 Jet-Stream)
    Description: The user does the nessecary handseals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon "Hagetaka Sou" (Meaning Condor of Streams). Hagetaka Sou is one of 3 of Condor Giants know as the "Hagetaka San" (Meaning Condor Trio) He is big enough to hold 2 People on His back. Hagetaka Sou has The ability to shoot a high powered Jet-Stream of water that equals A-Rank technique.
    Note:
    -Can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -Jet-Stream counts as a move.

    (Kchuysei: Hagetaka Oizu) Summoning: Hagetaka Noise:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+60 Sonic Boom)
    Description: The user does the nessecary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon "Hagetaka Oizu" (Meaning Condor of Steel). Hagetaka Oizu is the leader of 3 Condor Giants know as the "Hagetaka San" (Meaning Condor Trio) She is big enough to hold 2 People on Her back. Hagetaka Oizu Is able to Screech loud enough to create an sonic boom quality, the sonic boom can be used as a shield to block B-Rank technique. or be focussed as a sonic beam that equals A-Rank technique.
    Note:
    -Can only be in play for 3-turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -Sonic Boom counts as a move.

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Frederick~ View Post
    (Kchuysei: Senpai Kyokan) Summoning: Elder Kyokan:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 140
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bite's both thumbs and claps his hands together. This summons Senpai Kyokan, Grand Elder of the Condors. Kyokan is a Giant Condor, He is larger then Gamabunta, he stands at 60 meters (180ft.) high giving him a wingspan of 200 meters (600ft.), because of his size it takes a lot to Summon him, after the summoning the user will feel drained and can't use strong Jutsu the next turn. Kyoken is able to blow High winds with his wings that equal to S-Rank. and Drop large amounts of water from his mouth.
    Note:
    -This Summoning can only be in play for 4 turns.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -No A-Rank Jutsus or higher next turn.
    ~Declined, need restrictions on those abilities like counting as one your 3 moves ~
    (Kchuysei: Senpai Kyokan) Summoning: Elder Kyokan:
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 140
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bite's both thumbs and claps his hands together. This summons Senpai Kyokan, Grand Elder of the Condors. Kyokan is a Giant Condor, He is larger then Gamabunta, he stands at 60 meters (180ft.) high giving him a wingspan of 200 meters (600ft.), because of his size it takes a lot to Summon him, after the summoning the user will feel drained and can't use strong Jutsu the next turn. Kyoken is able to blow High winds with his wings that equal to S-Rank. and Drop large amounts of water from his mouth. providing a water source.
    Note:
    -Can only be in play for 4 turns.
    -Can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
    -Can only be Summoned once per battle.
    -No A-Rank Jutsus or higher next turn.
    -Wind/Water Counts as a move


    -All approved-
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Flying Horse ( from greek history such as Hercules etc)
    Scroll Owner:Rotm
    Other Users who have signed contract: None Yet
    Summoning Boss if existing:

    Summoning Technique: Pegasus The Flying Storm
    (Couldnt find Japanese name)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Pegasus is a large flying horse that can manipulate wind and lightning. He is x2 the size of a standard horse and can hold 2 people on his back. Pegasus is very low temper so only his master(ROTM) and someone with his masters blessing can ride on his back can ride on his back. Pegasus fully obeys his master no matter what in battle. Pegasus has a giant rod that sticks straight out of his head that can conduct up to b rank lightning techs. He can only be destroyed by S rank techs but 2 or more A ranks will destroy him. When he opens his mouth he shoots out 2 powerful B rank wind bullets. He can ram into wall or domes with his rod sticking out his head(up to A rank). Once he is dissapears he cant be brought back for the whole battle.
    * He only lasts for 4 turns*
    *He can only be summoned once a battle*
    *When he dissapears poofs away you cant use A rank Raiton or Fuuton techs for the rest of the match since it takes up so much chakra*
    *Cant be summoned the same time as one of the Goofy Horse Brothers*
    * Must sign contract with ROTM*
    * The Lightning Absorption and Wind Blast Techs count as one move each*

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    Gi the Flying Horse Of Earth
    (No Japanese Name)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Gi is one of the Goofy Horse Brother. Gi is considered the strong one. Gi is one of the two sons of Pegasus. Unlike his father he dosent have a rod at his head but a square rod. He dosent have many special abilities. He is know as the iron guard. The rock on his head can expand to create a large rock wall but he cant create the wall in mid flight. He is the size of a standard horse. He can hold one person on his back.
    * He can only be out for 3 turns (only 2 if his brother is summoned at the same time and 1 if his brother is summoned after.)
    * If his brother is Summoned before he automatically leaves*
    *He can only use his rock wall twice and its a B rank wall*
    * The Rock Wall counts as 1 tech*
    * Must sign contract with ROTM*


    Parádeisos The Flying Horse Of Heaven
    (No Japanese Name)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: c
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Parádeisos is one of the Goofy Horse Brothers( the younger brother). He cant stand his older brother Gi. He is the other son but is considered a disgrace to his father Pegasus. He can only carry one person on his back. He dosent have and special abilities except he can create a river or lake where he pleases. He can fly like his family. He has more of a personality so everyone except his master(ROTM) must answer a question that only his master knows the answer to. He can talk. The special thing about this horse is he can communicate with people telepathically(only summoner).
    * He can only be out for 3 turns (only 2 if his brother is summoned at the same time and 1 if his brother is summoned after.)
    * He can be summoned twice per match*
    *The Water River Tech counts as two moves since it is such a large body of water being created out of no where*
    * If his brother is Summoned before he automatically leaves*
    *He can only use his Water River Tech twice*
    * Must sign contract with ROTM*


    ~Contract Declined~ do not resubmit. Just giving a horse wings is not going to make it count as a separate species.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Dansu No Ha) - Illusion Technique: Dancing Leaves
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a whirlwind of leaves and then uses genjutsu to blend themselves among the leaves, making it very hard for enemies to pick out the user's location. Any sounds made by the user however, are able to be heard by the enemy. If the user attempts to attack the target, he must make himself visible while making the attack.
    Note: To perform a jutsu the user must reveal themselves to activate it.
    Note: Lasts three turns.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    -Declined. The description is poor. What exactly do you use to create a whirlwind of leaves and why would you have to use genjutsu to blend yourself amongst them? -

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    (Genjutsu: Āmu hen'i-zashi) - Illusion Technique: Arm Displacement Stab
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 45
    Description: The user cloaks their arm and weapon in genjutsu while simultaneously creating an illusion of their arm, which follows the movements of the true arm, however the actions of the illusionary arm happen a second slower than the movements of the true arm. The user then stabs the target. The target would feel the stab a second before they actually saw the blade coming into contact with them.
    Note: The user must have an object with stabbing capabilities.
    Note: This can only be taught by inchato.

    -On holdSubmit this as a S ranked-

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    (Kenjutsu: Ha Kaunta) - Sword Technique: Bladed Counter
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points:45
    Description: The target of this technique must be within a short range of the user and be performing a jutsu that requires handsigns. The user builds chakra up in their feet and draws their sword. The user then releases the chakra, launching themselves towards the target at a high speed. The user then slashes into the opponent's hands as they form the hand seal.
    Note: The user must have a sword.
    Note: This does not require the user to already have their sword sheathed.
    Note: Must be taught by inchato.

    -On hold. A smart idea, but certainly not a B rank. -


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    (Kenjutsu: Mikazuki no sutoraiku) - Sword Technique: Strike of the Crescent Moon
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 45
    Description: The user takes a back hand slash at the target. The user then pivots so that their back is facing the target and as they pivot they adjust their grip on the sword so that the sword's blade is nearest to their smallest finger. As the pivot ends the user brings down a vicious stab at the target's gut.
    Note: The movements following the back hand slash are extremely fast.
    Note: The user must have a sword.
    Note: This must be taught by inchato.

    -On hold. Again this is not a B rank-

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    (Suiton: Mizu sāji) - Water Style: Water Surge
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points:45
    Description: The user slams their hand on the ground and flows water underground towards the target. A geyser errupts from under the target, propelling them into the air. The user is able to control the angle at which the geyser errupts.
    Note: This can only be taught by inchato.

    -Declined. You need to state exactly how you do thing. In this way, if I slam my hand on the ground I would be able to do the same thing, right?-
     
         
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