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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kurimuzon Hakira View Post
    Only Summonings this week. No resubmission (even if I am upset that they were declined. , I guess it will have to wait until next week.)

    Hummingbird Summons:

    ~Approved Contract~

    Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals. When he flaps his wings, he creates a torrent of A-Ranked Flames.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Fire Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of Lightning by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Lightning Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother. He can create an A-Ranked Earth Torrent by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Earth Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of wind by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Wind Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Weapon Summoning:

    Pinned (Kotei sa Reta)
    Rank: A
    Range: Short- to Mid-Range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user throws a previously marked in blood scroll into the air. Five large poles connected by chains fall from the sky on top of the opponent. (depicted below) The opponent is pinned to the ground.
    ~The user must be hit by an A-Rank+ Jutsu first.






    -Declined. You can't just summon weapons-

    IMPORTANT: I have permission in this conversation to resubmit these.

    Hummingbird Summons:

    ~Approved Contract~

    Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird [Gender=Female]. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.



    Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird [Gender=Male]. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird [Gender=Male]. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    Aquarion, the Water Bird (Aquarion, Mizu no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Aquarion, the Water Bird [Gender=Feale]. She is a hummingbird of the Purple-throated Carib variety, distinguished by having no battle scars of any kind. She is able to use up to B-Rank Water Jutsu that do not require hand seals. She is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. She is the twin sister of Silvan, the Forrest Bird.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    Silvan, the Forrest Bird (Silvan, Foresuto no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Silva, the Forrest Bird [Gender=Female]. She is a hummingbird of the Green-throated Carib variety, distinguished by having no battle scars of any kind. She is able to use up to B-Rank Genjutsu that do not require hand seals. She is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. She is the twin sister of Aquarion.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    ~All Approved~ Note that I've changed "thrice per battle" to "twice per battle" and also that if your opponent does damage to one of your birds, if you summon it again, the damage will still be there.
    And for example "genjutsu that do not require handseals" means that she can only use genjutsu that doesn't require handseals and not that she can use all genjutsu without handseals.
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-16-2011 at 02:20 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal:gorilla
    Scroll Owner:shadow1rasengun
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: in the process

    OR

    Summoning Animal:chickens
    Scroll Owner:shadow1darkrasengun
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing:
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    ~Both Declined~ Choose one and make sure that nobody else has it. Both are declined because you only can hold one contract at your current rank, and I'm not gonna choose which one for you.
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-15-2011 at 07:14 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu hari)-Water Needle
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: User creates some small sharping water Needle which travel in high speed into the battlefield. When they touch the opponent they Damage Their Skins organs if the user throws more accurately.
    ~ Only taught by Yagura ~

    ~Declined~ Restrictions? Make the description more understandable... "skins organs"..

    (Suiton: Raiton Tatsumaki)- Lightning Tornado
    Type: Defence
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 22
    Description: User creates An Tornado Using His/Her Lightning Chakra by manipulating wind he/she will be able to defende them self using the tornado..for example they can deflect or use the tornado to disturb the kunai's/explosive's
    ~ Only taught by Yagura ~

    ~Declined~ Similar CANON technique already exists, same rank too I think x_x
     
         
    Last edited by Mugiwara; 07-15-2011 at 07:16 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (fuuton:kaze hando)wind style: hand of wind
    Type: Offence/defence
    Rank:S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user concentrates fuuton chakra into his hands creating a vortex of wind around his hands.This vortex of wind is as sharp as a blade.Now the user can attack the his opponent only head on and he can use his hands to defend even against lighning justsu's of rank S and below and it can also be used to deflect kunai's and shurikens
    NOTE:
    *can only be used by govind*
    *no hand seals required*

    (raiton:raikou enban)lightning style:lightning disc
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:mid range,long range
    Chakra:40
    Damamge:80
    Description:The user creates a lightning disc of 75cm radius which is spinning at a high speed.The user can throw the disc and the disc can cut through any jutsu's(except S rank wind jutsu's) and the disc is not set to explode but if it strikes a person even if it is a scratch the the bolts of current send by the disc could make the entire body numb
    NOTE:
    *can only be used by govind*
    *can only use 3 times in a battle*

    (doton:diedo uzumaki)earth style: mud whirl pool
    Rank:S
    Range:long/mid
    Chakra 40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user uses a whole lot of doton chakra and slams his hands on the ground and releases it on to the ground and uses it to create a whilpool of mud in which the opponent gets trapped making and then covering the opponent with mud
    note:
    *can only be used by govind*
    *doesn't require handseals*

    (katon:kasai sukin)fire style:fire skin
    Rank:A
    Range:short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:Afterthe user performs a single handseal he channels his entire body with katon chakra and,the user coats himself with the katon chakra making him impervious to all katon jutsu's of A-rank and below
    Note:
    *can only be used by govind*

    ~All Declined~They need restrictions, all of them...
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kurimuzon Hakira View Post
    Only Summonings this week. No resubmission (even if I am upset that they were declined. , I guess it will have to wait until next week.)

    Hummingbird Summons:

    ~Approved Contract~

    Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals. When he flaps his wings, he creates a torrent of A-Ranked Flames.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Fire Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of Lightning by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Lightning Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother. He can create an A-Ranked Earth Torrent by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Earth Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -



    Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of wind by flapping his wings.
    ~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The Wind Torrent counts toward the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    -Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -


    Weapon Summoning:

    Pinned (Kotei sa Reta)
    Rank: A
    Range: Short- to Mid-Range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user throws a previously marked in blood scroll into the air. Five large poles connected by chains fall from the sky on top of the opponent. (depicted below) The opponent is pinned to the ground.
    ~The user must be hit by an A-Rank+ Jutsu first.






    -Declined. You can't just summon weapons-
    Quote Originally Posted by Kurimuzon Hakira View Post
    Are these gonna be checked? Sorry if this has been answered, just curious.

    Nara's Shadows: Mocking Bird (Nara no Kage: Mokkinbādo)
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short to Long Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user manipulated their shadow so that it approaches the opponent, and then creates multiple hummingbird-shaped shadows that come off the ground and lunge at the opponent. The shadow birds then stab the target, keeping them in place, as well as wrap around the target. The target can be pulled to the ground if needed.


    -Declined. Wrong chakra info.-

    Nara's Shadows: Copy Cat Clone (Nara no Kage: Mohō Kurōn)
    Rank: A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user manipulates their shadow to take the form of their self in a dark form (still in the form of a shadow). The clone can then attack the opponents. (Attacks are worth applicable damage). The shadow can be destroyed by either being separated from the user or an intense light source.
    ~The shadow is solid, and can use weapons and Nara's Shadows jutsu. It is not effected by weapons, as it is only a shadow and nothing more.


    -On hold. You really want this? It's not good for you, considering that your 'true' self will be unable to move, yet fully visible to the opponents. Anyway, if you still want this you have to state exactly what I told you-


    Hummingbird Hands (Hachidori no Te)
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user unleashes the beak of a hummingbird (that is very sharp) from their sleeve. The beak can open to grab the target.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.


    -Declined: Wrong chakra info-

    Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks (Hachidori no Te: Ichi Sen Bādopanikku)
    Rank: A
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short to Mid-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user begins by using Hummingbird Hands. Instead of being released from the sleeve, it is released from the mouth. The user then upens the beak, releasing two more. The next one does the same, etc. The target now is being swarmed with "one thousand beaks".


    -On hold, until you get the jutsu above approved-

    Demonic Illusion: Torture Chamber (Genjutsu: Gōmon Heya)
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short to Long Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The User throws a smoke bomb, starting the illusion. when the smoke clears, the opponent finds themselves strapped to a table in an extensive torture chamber. the opponent is put through multiple kinds of torture worse than your wildest imagination, and then released from the jutsu. This can be used for interrogational purposes as well.


    -Declined. An illusion does not start by a smoke bomb. State exactly how you are making the illusion happen-

    If it is an accident that this is open, the above will be submitted at another time. Please check the quoted first.
    IMPORTANT: In the first quote, one will be resubmitted. I am allowing another signer of this scroll, Yoso Noko, to submit all except Striker, the Lightning Bird, due to the fact that all summons, with the exception of the boss, are mutually shared.

    Resubmitting:

    Summons:

    Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird.
    ~This summoning can be called upon twice per battle.
    ~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
    ~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Approved~ Note the change

    Custom Jutsu:

    Hummingbird Hands (Hachidori no Te)
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user unleashes the beak of a hummingbird (that is very sharp) from their sleeve. The beak can open to grab the target.
    ~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.
    ~Can be used by summons of the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Approved~

    Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks (Hachidori no Te: Ichi Sen Bādopanikku)
    Rank: B
    Typeffensive
    Range: Short to Mid-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user begins by using Hummingbird Hands. Instead of being released from the sleeve or arm of the user, it is released from their mouth. The user then upens the beak, releasing two more. The next one does the same, etc. The target now is being swarmed with "one thousand beaks," all of which are extremely sharp.
    ~The user must have signed the Hummingbird contract.
    ~Can be used by summons of the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Declined~ Sounds too powerful for B rank..

    New:

    Custom Jutsu:

    Hummingbird Hands: Sea of Stings (Hachidori no Te: Sasa Re no Umi)

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short, Mid, and Long-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user starts of similarly to both Hummingbird Hands and Hummingbird hand: One Thousand beaks, in that multiple hummingbirds are released from both their sleeve and mouth. Then, similarly to Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks, the hummingbirds open their moths, revealing more hummingbirds, all with extremely sharp beaks. These hummingbirds the "swim" throughout the area, creating a large sea of hummingbirds, which engulfs the opponent.
    ~Can only be used by sighers of the Hummingbird Contract.
    ~Can be used by summonings of the Hummingbird contract.

    ~Declined~ Do not resubmit

    Custom Weaponry:

    Triple Bladed Scythe (Toripuru ha no Ōgama)
    Rank: A
    Type: Weaponry
    Range: Short-, Mid, and Long-Ranged
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user wields an "upgraded version" of Hidan's original Triple Bladed Scythe. It is made of black, chakra-conducting metal, as well as the rope, giving more cutting power as opposed to the original. It also has some new features as well, like mentioned in the Third Data Book. It is now able to remove the bladed piece of the scythe, which remain connected to the scythe by wires made from the same metal as the rope and scythe. They can be controlled just like the scythe due to the fact that they are connected to the blade, as the rope is to the scythe. The pieces can split apart, to a distance of up to one yard (approx. 1 meter), connected to the other half by the same wire used to connect them to the blade, to reveal a plethora of explosive tags that can be incorporated into attacks.
    ~The rope can be broken by A-Rank or higher Jutsu.
    ~The wire can be broken by B-Rank or higher Jutsu.
    ~The Scythe, rope, and wire can all conduct Chakra of any kind.
    ~The blade pieces can split apart on the scythe itself, to create a three full crescents, as opposed to three half crescents. One side would be covered in explosive tags, while the other, depicted below, has nothing on it.


    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Toku View Post
    (Raiton- Shikou bai Raikou) Lightning release- Execution by Lightning
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 120
    Description: the user will raise 5 lightning pillars around the opponent at about mid-range from him. The pillars will then sink down into the ground all together sending a surge of lightning from each pillar to converge on the opponent ripping through the ground and creating a huge electrical explosion when they meet up at the center. The jutsu is cancelled if one of the pillars is destroyed before they go into the ground.
    *Note: can’t use any Forbidden-rank lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle.
    *Note: can’t use any lightning the next turn.
    *Note: can’t use any S-rank lightning the turn after that.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu- Taffy) Summoning- Taffy
    Type: Attack/Defend
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will summon Taffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Taffy has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to flap his wings at high speeds and release rock sharp feathers along w/ dust clouds . He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
    *Note: can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu- Laffy) Summoning- Laffy
    Type: Attack/Defend
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will summon Laffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Laffy has an elemental affinity of fire allowing him to release fire from his mouth. He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank fire jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
    *Note: can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.

    -Resubmit when you get unbanned-
    (Raiton- Shikou bai Raikou) Lightning release- Execution by Lightning
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 120
    Description: the user will raise 5 lightning pillars around the opponent at about mid-range from him. The pillars will then sink down into the ground all together sending a surge of lightning from each pillar to converge on the opponent ripping through the ground and creating a huge electrical explosion when they meet up at the center. The jutsu is cancelled if one of the pillars is destroyed before they go into the ground.
    *Note: can’t use any Forbidden-rank lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle.
    *Note: can’t use any lightning the next turn.
    *Note: can’t use any S-rank lightning the turn after that.
    *Note: can only be used by Toku.
    Declined, no resubmit

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu- Kojack Gurizurī) Summoning- Kojack the grizzly
    Type: Attack/Defend
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will summon Kojack, cousin of Odin, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Kojack has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to harden his fur as hard as a rock and cause small tremors by slamming his front paws down on the ground. He is the same size of Gamabunta. He is also able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
    *Note: can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
    Declined, give the hardening the fur a rank level and make it one the three moves per turn

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu- Taffy Ahiru) Summoning- Taffy the Duck
    Type: Attack/Defend
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user will summon Taffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Taffy has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to flap his wings at high speeds and release rock sharp feathers along w/ dust clouds . He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
    *Note: can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
    Declined, need to rank his abilities and count them as one the 3 moves per turn

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu- Laffy Ahiru) Summoning- Laffy the Duck
    Type: Attack/Defend
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user will summon Laffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Laffy has an elemental affinity of fire allowing him to release fire from his mouth. He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank fire jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
    *Note: can only be used once per battle.
    *Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
    Declined, need to define the breathing fire from his mouth, is this him using the fire techniques or an ability of his own, if his own provide a rank and count towards one your three moves

    (Doton-Tsuchi Kikai Hou Sentou) Earth release- Earth Machine Gun Punch
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 60
    Attack points: 120 (-15 to user )
    Description: the user focuses earth chakra on his fist after performing “Earth release- Earth Gun Punch” and launches a barrage of punches releasing multiple rock gloves to be sent in the direction of the opponent causing tremendous damage to the opponent and the area around him.
    *note: cant make any hand seals while the gloves are on.
    *note: can only be use 1x per battle.
    *note: can’t use any earth release s-rank and above for the next 2 turns.
    *note: can only be used by Toku.
    Approved, i added a damage cost to you as its forbidden ranked
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 09-29-2011 at 05:10 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I'm not of a high enough rank to use the summoning technique yet, but I want to reserve this contract if that's allowed

    Summoning Animal: Owls
    Scroll Owner: Captain Shodai
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Declined~ it already exists, both canon as custom
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ddkcwill View Post

    Summoning Animal: Elemental Dogs
    Scroll Owner: ddkcwill
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Riiku- The lightning dog



    (Kchuysei: Riiku- Za Raiton Inu ) Summoning: Riiku-The Lightning Dog
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does the nessecary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon .
    Riiku - A specially trained dog who can use up to C rank lightning without handseals. He is big enough to carry one person on his back (size of Akamaru)

    Fetures
    -has black eyes
    -brown fur
    -lightning symbol tattoo on his back

    Note:
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 2-turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle




    if declined, please tell me what's wrong so i can fix it...

    -approved-
    Addition

    Kchuysei: Fuunshin- Za Kaze Inu ( Fuunshin- The Dod of Wind)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40 (-5 every turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:he user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. He then places his hand on a surface to summon the creature.This summoning calls upon.
    Fuunshin, The dog of wind - a specially trained dog able to use up to A rank Wind Techniques.
    He is big enough to carry one person on his back (size of Akamaru)


    Fetures
    -has black eyes
    -white fur
    -wind symbol tattoo on his back

    Note:
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 4 turns.
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kinjutsu Jinton: Kaibyaku Hatsuseken no Jutsu) Forbidden Dust Release: Creation of the New World Technique
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 120 (-80 to user)
    Description: After performing a single hand seal the user places their palms together in front of their chest and pulls them apart revealing the sphere between their hands and 9 cubes rotating around their body. The cubes then shoot off to a mid range around the user and expanding in size plowing everything over in front of them or in their rotation path. The user then thrusts their hands above their head launching the sphere into the air and the 9 cubes shoot towards the sphere as its expanding and collide causing a massive explosion that destroys and/or levels everything in the blast radius thats the size of Konoha.
    Note: This jutsu can only be used once per battle. Must know Jinton to perform this. Must be taught by Zanji to use this
    Note: The user is left in an unconscious state after performing this jutsu.
    Declined, do not resubmit
    (Jinton: Hatsuseken Jijo) Dust Release: New World Order
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal the user launch a ball that has a smaller ball on the inside of it the quickly launches at the opponent and expanding in size flattening and leveling anything in front of it.
    Note: Must know Jinton to use and must be taught by Zanji to use this.
    Declined, requires some restrictions being S rank
    (Jinton: Furai Ahitasora) Dust Release: Fly into Tomorrow Sky
    Rank: S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 0
    Description: After performing a single hand seal the user changes their own mass and density enabling them to fly at will. The user may also apply this to a tagged kunai and enable their allies to fly as long as they possess the kunai.
    Note: Must know Jinton to use this and be trained by Zanji
    Note: This jutsu only lasts for 2 turns.
    Declined, to similar to Onoki's flight technique
    (Jinton: Raitayori Hane Hebitake) Dust Release: Lighter than a Feather Heavier than a Mountain
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 0 (+60 if used on opponent)
    Description: The user performs a single hand seal and can effortlessly lift any object as if it was lighter than a birds feather. But can throw said object or drop the object with ten times its original weight. This is done by changing the objects mass and density upon contact.
    Note: Must be able to use Jinton to use.
    Declined, exactly how is this a dust release technique in anyways? to me it seems like some normal ninjutsu that gives you a strenth enhancement
    (Jinton: Futashika Sekisho) Dust Release: Indefinite Barrier
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: The user performs a single hand seal and creates a small sphere between their palms as a giant sphere surrounds the user and/or their allies protecting them. The sphere is capable of with standing single elemental jutsu's up to S-Rank and Elemental Combination Jutsu's up to A-Rank.
    Note: Must know Jinton to use and be trained by Zanji to use.
    Declined, requires some level of restriction, and make it up to A rank elemental cmbinations as to be appropriate to ranking level
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Rhinoceros beetle
    Scroll Owner: Black Uchiha
    Other Users who have signed the contract: none
    Summoning Boss if existing: King Shinobu
    Other Animals tied to contract: Ryu (car size)
    Rie (20 ft wing span), Satoru (dump truck size), Kumiko & Kamiko (Akamaru (shippuden) size)

    These rhinoceros beetles are from Mt. Gen they are known for there strength and power as they can carry things 850 times their own weight. They are under the leadership of King Shinobu. Most of them have Lightning, Earth, and Wind affinitys. These beetle range in sizes from normal to bigger that Gamabunta. They can fly but in most cases don't



    ~Contract approved~




    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User summons Ryu. Ryu has a nature affinity for Lightning element using lightning jutsu up to A rank. Known for his strength and his durability do to his size.
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns (my turns).
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned 3 times per battle.






    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User summons Rie. The size of a jet ski. The user stands aborad her to achive flight. She has the nature elements of lightining and wind using them up to A rank. With her 20 ft wings she add +10 damage to her wind techs (like Temari's fan). Known for her speed.
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns (my turns).
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned 4 times per battle.






    Rank: A
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User summons Satoru. Satoru has the nature elements of earth, using it up to A rank. With his hard earth infused exoskeleton, he can block up to S Rank: Earth, Wind, and Water techs, without harm. Known for his strength and his durability do to his size, mostly used for defense.
    -If used to block S-rank techs Satoru is disperse for 3 turns.
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 2-turns(my turns).
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned 4 times per battle.







    Rank: B
    Type: Defense/Attack
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: User summons the Kum/Kam twins. The twins are the size of Akamaru (Shippuden). Kumiko has a nature affinity for lightining element using it up to B rank and Kamiko has a nature affinity for wind element using it up to B rank. Both are skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi from Mt. Gen. Known for their taijutsu skills, both carry basic ninja tools (makibishi spikes, senbon, kunai…etc)
    -this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns(my turns).
    -this Summoning can only be Summoned 3 times per battle.








    Please edit where you see fit
    ~All jutsus declined~ Resubmit separately, don't submit a contract and jutsus for that contract in the same post.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmitting:
    (Suiton: Zekkou Ranmyaku) Water Style: Perfect Chaos
    Type:Attack, Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost:80
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform thirteen handseals and hold the last seal. The user will then cause an enormous wave of water to form in front of them and flood the entire field. From this water, the user will then form a large serpentine creature and stay in the base of it's stomach, inside of a small air pocket. The user will be able to create water-tendrils out of the water made in the first part of the technique to attack the opponent. The user, while inside of the serpent, can move very quickly through the water.
    Note: The air-pocket only lasts for three turns, after which the user will end the technique.
    Note: The user must hold the last handseal throughout the duration of the technique or it will end.
    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: No Suiton techniques can be used for two turns.


    (Suiton: Zekkou Ranmyaku) Water Style: Perfect Chaos
    Type:Attack, Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: All
    Chakra Cost:80
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform thirteen handseals and hold the last seal. The user will then manipulate a large amount of water from a large water source and form it around himself into a serpentine creature and stay in the base of its stomach, inside of a small air pocket. The user will be able to create water-tendrils out of the water that surround it in order to attack the opponent. The user, while inside of the serpent, can move very quickly through the water.
    Note: The air-pocket only lasts for three turns, after which the user will end the technique.
    Note: The user must hold the last handseal throughout the duration of the technique or it will end.
    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: No Suiton techniques can be used for two turns.
    Note: The water source must be large. (Ocean/Sea/Large Lake.)


    ||Approved||

    The following technique is based on the ability of some shinobi to infuse their hair with chakra and extend it. (Jiraiya and Ino, I think.)

    (Ninpou: Hanage No Chō Kobushi) Ninja Art: Fist of the Nose Hair
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:60
    Damage Points: Similar damage to normal Taijutsu.
    Description: The user focuses chakra into the hairs in his/her nose in order to manipulate them. This causes them to become as thick as half the circumference as one's finger. The hairs can be extended and used as agilely as one can use his limbs. The user uses these hairs like whips to attack the enemy, doing the same damage taijutsu would cause.
    Note: Lasts five turns
    Note: The hairs cannot be broken by normal physical strength or a non-chakra-assisted blade. (Unless the user of the sword is a samurai.)
    Note: Only three hairs can be used in each nostril.
    Note: While this technique is in effect, the user's nostrils are plugged and he must breathe through his mouth.

    ||Pending|| Need another mod's opinion first.

    (Kyousei Shoton no Jutsu) Greater Crystal Technique
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user can form very large structures out of Crystal from their Shoton chakra, water, and earth. (As long as the enemy's chakra isn't manipulating the latter two.)
    ||Declined|| Go into more detail. Can you immediately create crystals out of any water on the battlefield, or what?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by JTjutsumaster View Post
    Summoning Animal: Arai Inu (Wild Dog) Dingoz (Dingo)

    Scroll Owner: JTjutsumaster

    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A

    Summoning Boss if existing:Shikon/Fang

    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Nero, Greta, Arie, Kashikoi
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shi Youso Dingoz Buntai!) Summoning Technique: Four Elemental Dingo Squad!

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Defense/Summoning
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20 / 40 (If two summons)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Four Elemental Dingo Squad consists of 4 Dingos. Each one is about the size of Akamaru in the Shippuden Series. Each Dingo has the ability to use each of the four elements: Water, Lightning, Wind, and Earth.

    Drip is the controller of the Water element. She has blue fur and has a gentle and soft personalilty. Drip can use any Water jutsus from D to B Rank.


    Raze is the user of Lighting. He is quick and doesn't think all the time. Raze has yellow fur with black lightning strips. Raze can control Lightning techniques from D to B Rank.


    Breeze is the user of Wind. She is fast like Raze and has white fur. Breeze is very cautious and careful. Breeze can use any Wind techniques from D to B Rank.


    Muk is the user of Earth. He loves rolling in the dirt and he has dark brown fur which is usually covered in dirt. Muk is lazy, but smart. Muk has the ability to control Earth techniques from D to B Rank.


    Notes:
    -When using this jutsu, you can only summon up to 2 Dingos.
    -If you summon 2 summons, it includes as one of the '3 moves per turn' rule.
    -Must hold the Dingo Contract
    -Can only be taught by JTjutsumaster


    Approved, note tho summoning 1 will also count as a move per turn
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    RAVEN SUMMONS

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Daku) Summoning Jutsu: Daku
    Type: Attack/Defence/Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Daku is the youngest son of the Raven boss. He has a very dark nature and is always looking for a chance to get his first kill, so that he can impress his father enough to gain his respect. When summoned, Daku will sit on the shoulder of the user and command 6 of his friends to his bidding. His friends will attack the enimy or defend Daku and his summoner even at the cost of their lives.
    Note: Must Have Raven summoning contract
    Note: This sommon lasts for 5 turns
    Note: If Daku is injured, the sommon will end
    Note: This summon can only be used once per battle
    Note: This summon can only be taught by Uchiha91
    Approved
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kagenami) Summoning Jutsu: Kagenami
    Type: Attack/Defence/Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Kagenami is the middle child of the Raven Boss. She doesn't nessisarily care for being summond, but at the same time is bord when not in combat. This sommon is mainly a flying sommon, where the user jumps on her back and rides her. She can also attack the enimy when commanded.
    Note: Must Have Raven summoning contract
    Note: This summon lasts for 5 turns
    Note: If Kagenami is injured, the summon will end
    Note: This summon can only be used once per battle
    Note: This summon can only be tought by Uchiha91
    Approved
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sanpatsu Umou) Summoning Jutsu: Scattering feathers
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Using the summoning jutsu, the user summons hundreds of black feathers all arround him that trap and confuse the target if they get caught. This allows the user one chance to trick the enimy into attacking the wrong target or a clump of feathers that look like the user.
    Note: Must have the Raven Summoning contract
    Note: The summon lasts for 2 turns or until it is used to trick the enimy
    Note: This summon can only be used once per battle
    Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Uchiha91
    Declined, this is to similar to another technique
    Lighning Jutsu

    (Raiton: Odama Raikyu) Lightning Release Giant Lightning Ball
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user forms a giant ball of lightning the size of a small car in their dominant hand and throws it at the intended target. It then explodes causing damage to the surrounding area and stunning anything that it doesn't kill. Because of its size, it doesn't move varry fast, but it does tramendous damage to the surrounding area.
    Note: Because of its slow speed, it is easy to dodge
    Note: Stun for one turn
    Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha91
    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suna : Sabaku arano) - Sand Style : Desert Wasteland
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does a string of 6 handseals and then slams both hand onto the ground, allowing the user to release all his current available sand, spreading all over terrain, crumbling earth in front of it, turning it into sand hence making it into a desert wasteland as it eats away.
    • Must be a sand user
    • can only be used once.
    • Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    • Everybody's speed, including the user, here is reduced due to the sand surface.
    • After the user's 5th turn, the sand released by him returns to his gourd while the rest of the sand just flows into the earth.

    Declined, do not resubmit due to it being to similar to an already existing technique

    (Suna : Suna senbon himatsu)- Sand Style : Sand needle spray
    Type: Offence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to form many dense sand needles which will form underground. When the user wants to, he slams both his hand together, releasing all the build-up sand senbons bursting from the ground, all flying up into the sky, impaling the enemy from below upwards.
    • Must be a sand user
    • Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    • Can only be used four times per battle
    • No S rank sand jutsus allowed the next turn

    Declined, limit its usage 4 times for an s rank is to much

    (Suna : Suna sasori) - Sand Style : Sand scorpions
    Type: Offence/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user performs a single handseal and then slams his hand onto the ground, making 2 ferocious sand scorpions, 2metres tall, form in front of the user. These sand scorpions can also be used to block incoming attacks as well as attack with their non-poisonous stingers.
    • Can only be used two times per battle.
    • Must be a sand user
    • The sand scorpions are literally made of sand
    • Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    • They move slow although their agility with their non-poisonous stingers are fast.

    Approved

    (Katon: Nenshou yutori)- Fire Style: Burning room
    Type: Offence/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform a row of 4 handseals and then slamming the user's hand onto the ground. Fire chakra would then travel underground and towards the enemy, causing a ring of fire to appear around the enemy on the ground. After a few moments, the enemy would be immobilized inside a pillar of fire which will shoot up from the ring of fire and into the sky. If the enemy touches the surface of the fire pillar, he'll be severely burned. Although, if the user doesn't do anything, he'll be engulfed in flames due to the walls closing in on him.
    • Can only be used two times per battle
    • Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
    • Short time interval before the pillar of fire shoots into the sky.

    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    (Suna : Butoukai haretsu) - Sand Style : Ball Explosion
    Type : offensive/Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short-Mid
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user holds his hand out in any position he likes and then concentrates on forming a dense sphere-like sand ball that levitates an inch above his hand. The user is then able to release the ball flying towards the enemy at moderate speed and when the user wants to, the user releases the dense sand ball causing sand to fly everywhere around it but doesn't cause too much pain as to kill when an enemy is hit, but it can cause the user to feel abit pain or maybe be hit in the eyes.
    • Usable three times per battle
    • Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-

    Approved
    Edit if needed, would be sad if i had to resubmit some of theses ~_~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Greed
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Greed is a turtle that can never be full. He's as big as a trailblazer, he can eat any kind of attack. He can only be pierced by S-rank and above attacks
    Note: can only eat 3 jutsus per battle
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle
    Add japanese name, and restrict his eating ability and make it count as one your 3 per turn ability

    (Raiton: Junsei Erekiteru) - Pure Electricity
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses pure raiton chakra into his hands with electrical properties. By touching another object (except the ground) the user has the ability of giving it an electrical charge by releasing the raiton chakra into the object. When the user touches the object, he's simply either adding one proton or taking away an electron. Since every substance that has doesn't have an electrical charge (such as a tree) has an equal balance of electrons and protons, but if that balance was disrupted, then that object would have an electrical charge. And if the user adds a proton then the object would have a positive charge, if the user added an electron then the object would have a negative charge. Objects with a positive charge are attracted or drawn to objects with a negative charge. Also the charged object with the lower mass is drawn by an electrical bond to an object with the opposite charge and higher mass (so a human being with a positive charge is drawn to a tree with a negative charge. And a kunai with a negative charge is drawn to a human being with a positive charge). The force that attracts these objects is near impossible to escape, because no human can defy gravity. If the user has touched the objects once, he can do it again to restore the balance, and only he can do so.
    Note: Can only be used/taught by Axle

    (Raiton: Nyu-toron Soujuu) - Neutron Manipulation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user channels pure raiton chakra into his hands, and by touching an object with this raiton chakra, he can add or take away neutrons. By doing adding neutrons, the object gains 10lbs for each second the user touches it. By subtracting the neutrons, the object loses 10lbs for each second the user touches it.
    Note: can only be used/taught by Axle
    Both declined, do not resubmit
    (Genjutsu: Netsu) - Fever
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: (-10 Taijutsu to the opponent each turn)(-60 to the user for exhaustion)
    Description: The user casts a genjutsu where the opponent thinks that they are coming down a fever. The opponent's temperature starts rising higher due to psychology which states that if the mind thinks that there is something wrong with the body, then the body will act accordingly to the mind. By staying on the battlefield, the opponent is constantly making his conditions worse by the turns.
    (1 turn - reaction speed decreases)
    (2 turn - overall speed decreases)
    (3 turn - becomes weaker)
    (4 turn - unable to maintain balance)
    (5 turn - vomiting occurs)
    (6 turn - vision becomes blurry)
    (7 turn - passes out due to massive exhaustion and dehydration)
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: no genjutsu for the rest of the match
    Note: can only be used/taught by Axle
    Declined, OP, do not resubmit
    Tut
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Tut is the best deffensive turtle alive, he's as big as a 7 story building, he has spikes on his back that are a story tall each. All lightning attacks used, are directed to his spikes, and are then shot back at the opponent. He can only be pierced by Forbidden rank jutsus
    Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
    Note: Must be taught by Axle
    add japanese name, being forbidden also costs damage and it requires abit more restrictions
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Seto Kaiba View Post

    (Takopo:Tako Feisu Han ) - Octupus
    art: Octupus face illusion
    Rank: S
    Type: deffence/Offense
    Range: short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This illusion technique allows the foe to think that the
    user instantly gained an octupus like
    face but scarying,disgusting and
    terrifying.A glance, at it by the foe would
    leave them unable to move their whole
    body cos of the horifying face and
    they can feel cold water running down
    their head and shoulder.
    -Last for 1 turn and twice per battle
    -Must be able to summon Octupus.


    -Declined. You need to state how you do things. -





    (Takopo:Tako Houshou ) - octupus art
    ctupus sing
    Rank: S
    Type: offense
    Range: mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes a deep
    breath and starts making an
    extremely loud,iritating noise much
    like one made by an octupus.once
    heard by the foe,he/she's entire
    muscles would be paralyzed thus
    restricting their movement as long as
    they keep hearing the noise.
    -while this jutsu is active the user can't
    use any other type of jutsu because of
    the concentration needed.
    Lasts for 1 turn and only twice per
    battle.
    Must be able to summon octupus.
    -Target stays paralyzed for that 1 turn.


    -Declined. I researched: An octopus is a silent hunter, slipping through briny waters with little, if any, sound.

    "They make no sound that I know of," emails biologist Roy Caldwell, a professor at the University of California at Berkeley, " except possible incidental sounds from strong jets of water passing in and out of the mantle (a muscular bag that stores the animal's gills and body organs). There are a couple of reports of these sounds being produced in squid, but again, they seem to be a byproduct of jetting."

    Also, apparently octopuses cannot hear. At least we have detected little evidence that they do.




    (Jukenpo:Aoi Jiten ) -
    8 trigrams:Blue rotation
    Rank: S
    Type: defense
    Range: close
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This is a unique type of rotation that requires the addition of a little quantity of water chakra to the normal chakra needed for rotation.while in rotating motion the chakra dome gives off a blue color, unlike the normal rotation.
    -must be a hyuuga clan member.
    - twice per battle.
    -this is a good defense against S rank fire jutsu but leaves the user completely open for any lightning jutsu.

    -Declined. Poor description and also makes no sense.-



    (Raiton: mei mei no Yoroi) -
    Lightning Release: Divine
    Armour
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defence
    Range: Short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user surrounds
    Himself with a strong amount of electricity and instantly expands it at 360 degrees, thus forming a lightning dome.the expansion is meant to numb a target without them comming close to the user.
    -Twice per battle
    -No A rank raiton next turn
    -Target stays numb for one turn after being hit.

    -Declined. Similar jutsu already exists and again, your description is poor-


    (Raiton:shainingu boruto ) -
    Lightning style: shining bolts
    Rank: forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user focuses a large amount of lightning chakra and trasmits them into both hands whilst gathering a pool of shinning lightning energy in his palms,then stretching forth his hands,his able to release them in many shinning bolts that travells widely and with an insane speed.
    -Twice per battle
    -No A-rank and above next turn
    - this shinning bolts has the ability to temporalily blind anything that makes eyecontact with it.This goes for the user also.
    -sun shades are unable to block it.

    -Declined. If you release lighting to create bolts (hence electricity) and them transmit it into your own body you'd get fried. Obviously-


    (Takopo:Tako Houshou ) - octopus art
    : octopus sing
    Rank: S
    Type: offense
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: whilst an octopus has been already summoned unto the battle,the animal begins to generate water within itself whilst transmiting water jets in and out of it's mantle (a muscular bag that stores the animal's gills and body organs).thus volunteraly producing little sounds whithin itself ,then instantly ehancing it into extremely loud,iritating noise .once
    heard by the foe,he/she's entire
    muscles would be paralyzed thus
    restricting their movement as long as they keep hearing the noise.
    - only an octopus with water affanity can use this jutsu.
    -Lasts for 1 turn and only twice per
    battle.
    Must be able to summon octupus.
    -Target stays paralyzed for that 1 turn.

    ,am very sorry i always thought octopuses make a certain sound/noise,so i never bothered to check but after some researches i found out they truely dnt
    So i kinda changed the whole jutsu based on the fact u stated below and the only source of noise which was made by an octopus.

    [I]An octopus is a silent hunter, slipping through briny waters with little, if any, sound.

    "They make no sound that I know of," emails biologist Roy Caldwell, a professor at the University of California at Berkeley, " except possible incidental sounds from strong jets of water passing in and out of the mantle (a muscular bag that stores the animal's gills and body organs). There are a couple of reports of these sounds being produced in squid, but again, they seem to be a byproduct of jetting."

    Declined, do not resubmit your not got any sound ability either

    (Takopo:Tako Feisu Han ) - Octupus
    art: Octupus face illusion
    Rank: S
    Type: deffence/Offense
    Range: short/mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:whilst the user is in octupus mode, thus the user gaining features of an octupus and his/her body is undergoing some octupus like changes.The user instantly generates an octopus like face but scary,disgusting and
    terrifying,when the targets sets their eyes on it they instantly falls into an illusion which leaves them speechless and unable to move a muscle in their whole
    body as long as they are still making eye contact with the horifying face,they user is posing and
    they targets often feels cold water running down
    their head and shoulders.
    -Last for 1 turn and twice per battle
    -Must be able to summon Octupus.
    -must be in octopus mode

    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Jukenpo:Aoi Jiten ) -
    8 trigrams:Blue rotation
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: close
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This is a unique type of rotation that requires the addition of a little quantity of water chakra to the normal chakra needed for rotation.first off,the user channels out water based chakra through all 361 chakra points whilst,immediately following it with the channelling out of non-elemental chakra,making they two almost close before rotating rapidly, thus using the water chakra as a sheild against opposite/weaker elemental attacks. whilst in rotating motion the chakra dome gives off a blue color, unlike the normal rotation,hence the name.
    -must be a hyuuga clan member.
    - twice per battle.
    -this is a good defense against certain fire based jutsus but leaves the user completely open for any lightning jutsu.
    Gave more details,this time

    Approved

    (Raiton:shainingu boruto ) -
    Lightning style: shining bolts
    Rank: forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user focuses a large amount of lightning chakra and trasmits them into both hands whilst stretching forth his/her hands,he/she gathers a pool of shinning lightning energy in his palms,then releases them in many shinning bolts that travells widely and with an insane speed.
    -Twice per battle
    -No A-rank and above next turn
    - this shinning bolts has the ability to temporalily blind anything that makes eyecontact with it.This goes for the user also.
    -sun shades are unable to block it.

    Corrected^_^

    Declined, firstly forbidden ranked techniques require damage to yourself, secondly they may be only used once per battle, thirdly there is no need for that shade thing remove it no one can have shades that protect them from blinding lights and such so its pointless to have

    (suiton:waza no kugutsu) - water style- art of puppetry
    Rank:S
    Type: Defence/Offense
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This technique enable the user to restrict every single muscle on the target body by streching forth their hands towards the target.They are also able take over all their movement thus turning the foe into their puppet,by manipulating everybit of water within the targets body.Since,a normal human body has 50 to 80 percentage of water,which circulates through out the whole body.
    www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Body_water
    -can't use any other type of jutsu while using this.
    -lasts for a turn and twice per battle
    -no water jutsu next turn.

    Declined, do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Custom Weapon :

    Name:Ryujin Jakka : Flowing Flame Blade
    Rank:S
    Description: Ryujin Jakka is an ancient sword,fused with the Element of fire.Only people with immense affiliation to fire can swing the Ryjin Jakka,as it requires a massive control over fire chakra.
    Due to the sword itself being affiliated to the Element of fire,it can improve many of the techniques the wielder uses that are fire based.
    Appearance: (I couldn't find a normal still picture of it ,so here is a miniature. )

    Note: Due to the mass damage this weapon causes,it can also harm the user.

    If this doesn't get approved,overrule the part about Ryujin Jakka in the CJ below.
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    (Katon:Jokaku Enjo)-Blazing Fortress
    Type: Defense
    Rank:S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user uses "Katon : Jokaju Enjo" to originally send a huge wave of fire towards the opponent,that will cause small amount of damage,but as it reaches it`s target,the wave creates a circle around the opponent,leaving a trace of fire,immediately the trace of fire turns into a huge wall from all sides.
    If the opponent tries to walk or jump through the fire,he will suffer severe burns.If used with the Custom Weapon Ryujin Jakka (Still in the making),the Jutsu will turn into a Forbidden Rank jutsu,the walls will reach far up the sky,and the flames will be stronger,so jumping over them will not be an option either.
    Note: This can also be used to keep enemies away.
    Can only be taught by Nocturnal.

    Demonstration (In case my Description wasn't accurate enough)


    ||Both Declined|| And believe it or not, Jokaku Enjou already Exists.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Donto: Furiru Nekku Eki)- Earth Style: Frill Necked Lizard
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:User clasps there hands and forms the Serpent hand seal, then holds them shoulder width apart and imitates a frill necked lizard. Comically creates a distraction. Works well with Clone or Shadow Clone technique to make escapes.
    ~Declined~ How is that Earth Style?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    taka kingu of za sora ( hawk king of the sky)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:s
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:the summoner wipes blood on his hand or arm then preforms the hand seals needed to use the summoning jutsu the summoner places his or her hand on the ground and focases on summoning this animal, only those whom have tamed this animal may call him by his name sora, this animal is as big as sasukes hawk that he used in the fight with danzo had black feathers and a scar across his right eye. his beak is as hard as steel and his claws as sharpe as a knife ( but cant perice some one he can only use them to cut) his speed is equal to that of a cheeta. he has a natural talent for lighting jutsu and can use any lighting jutsu by waveing his wings while focasesing lighting chakra to them at the same time.
    note: must have signed the hawk contract
    note: only lasts for four turns
    note: can only use lighting jutsu up to the summers knowledge
    note: can only be summoned by the 6th hokage

    ~Declined~King of the skies already exists, and his name is: Quezacotl
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by KeotsuEclipse View Post
    Updating:

    (Kaze Zuiichi Yama) Winds of Everest
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage: 60
    Description: The ultimate form of Fuuton: Reppushou (Wind Style: Wind Gale) this jutsu conjures wind with the same speed and force of the winds at the peak of Everest. This jutsu can deflect weapons, push enemies, and be used to avoid jutsu by pushing the user. The jutsu can also be used to double the speed of thrown items. The user must have an ample distance to activate the jutsu so the wind can gather speed. Usable two times per battle.


    to:

    (Fūton: Fūjin Ibuki) Fūton: Fūjin’s Breath
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offesnive/Supplementary
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The ultimate form of Fuuton: Reppushou, this jutsu allows the user to create powerful gusts of wind and direct them as they wish.


    -On hold. I will approve but you need to state the limits of these gusts as in size, strength and numbers of them-

    New Submissions:
    (Fūton: Fūjin Gekido) Fūton: Fūjin’s Rage
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will form four handseals and will then release their Fuuton chakra into a large ring in the sky, while simultaneously exhaling a slip-stream of wind. The ring will quickly descend upon the field and will constrict itself into a smaller ring, the size of which is controlled by the slip-stream. Then, by forming a fifth handseal, the ring will erupt into a powerful dome that impales and shreds anything inside from all angles. Upon the formation of the fifth handseal, the slip-stream from the user ceases.
    *Once per battle.
    *No Fuuton jutsu in the same turn.


    -On hold. Fix the red part-


    Summoning Animal:Columbidae
    Scroll Owner:KeotsuEclipse
    Other Users who have signed contract: TBA
    Summoning Boss if existing: TBA
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: TBA
    General Description: Columbidae (Pigeons and Doves [biologically, pigeons and doves are the same - "dove" is a term used by humans to - generally - describe the smaller birds in the species]) are as diverse in their abilities as humans are - some Columbidae specialize in technique and element usage while others are simply speed oriented; as each Columbidae is different, each's individual niche will be described when submitted - however, each Columbidae has the ability to transform into a human form, symbolizing Columbidae's concentration around humans.

    About Human form: I know we never reached a consensus about this, but I thought of something that should work out just fine: each of them can use the Transformation jutsu. It's easy enough to fit in, and is believable. I'd add it to each one that it counted as a jutsu to transform.

    -Approved-


    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Ushiwaka) Columbidae Summon: Ushiwaka
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Ushiwaka, or Waka for short, is Keotu’s personal summon. An average sized Dove with golden plumage, Waka is a Columbidae that is more oriented towards Kenjutsu, and has a minor wind element, capable of creating powerful gusts of wind to blow away objects or enemies. Waka is summoned with a flute in his talons, which is actually the mystical sword Pillowtalk. Pillowtalk sprouts a green blade of chakra from one end of the flute once chakra is directed through it. Pillowtalk has the standard slicing capability of a regular Katana, but when someone is hit by the blade of Pillowtalk, in addition to causing a wound, it also makes the opponent sleepy, an effect that gets worse with each consecutive hit – no person has every stayed awake through more than three hits by Pillowtalk, regardless of what they’re doing. When Waka transforms into a human, he is shown with long golden hair, and in a pink kimono along with a purple Sashinuki-hakama, along with a hat that has the motif of a hawk with a long cloak that hides his hair, and tends to pepper his speech with French phrases. He is extremely talented in Kenjutsu, able to use any of Keotsu’s Kenjutsu moves at an equal cost, and has the ability to use his wind powers to allow himself to stay in the air, giving him the ability to “fly” (in actuality, he creates an updraft that allows him to hover, and can change the able to glide around). While in his dove form, he is extremely quick and agile, making him a difficult target.
    *Waka has a strong bond with Keotsu and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when they summon him. When anyone else summons him, he remains on the field for 4 turns, though he can leave Pillowtalk behind for the user to use, until they dismiss the blade.
    *Waka’s Wind Gust in Dove form is equivalent to C-Rank, but only require 10 Chakra, due to it’s not damaging nature.
    *Pillowtalk can only be wielded by Columbidae contract signers.
    *Transforming to/from Dove/Human form takes 5 chakra and counts against one of that turns moves.
    Waka in human form


    -On hold. Fix the red parts. Especially, the sleeping part is a special thing, so you need to have some sort of preparation before its use or side effects for it.-
    Resubmitting:

    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Ushiwaka) Columbidae Summon: Ushiwaka
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 0
    Description: Ushiwaka, or Waka for short, is Keotu’s personal summon. An average sized Dove with golden plumage, Waka is a Columbidae that is more oriented towards Kenjutsu, and has a minor wind element, capable of creating wind gusts equal in strength to Fuuton: Reppoushou. Waka is summoned with a flute in his talons, which is actually the mystical sword Pillowtalk. Pillowtalk sprouts a green blade of chakra from one end of the flute once chakra is directed through it. Pillowtalk has the standard slicing capability of a regular Katana, but when someone is hit by the blade of Pillowtalk, in addition to causing a wound, it also makes the opponent sleepy, an effect that worsens with each consecutive hit – no person has every stayed awake through more than five hits by Pillowtalk, regardless of what they’re doing. When Waka transforms into a human, he is shown with long golden hair, and in a pink kimono along with a purple Sashinuki-hakama, along with a hat that has the motif of a hawk with a long cloak that hides his hair, and tends to pepper his speech with French phrases. He is extremely talented in Kenjutsu, able to use any of the summoner’s “non-elemental” or wind element Kenjutsu moves at an equal cost, and has the ability to use his wind powers to allow himself to stay in the air, giving him the ability to “fly” (in actuality, he creates an updraft that allows him to hover, and can change the able to glide around). While in his dove form, he is extremely quick and agile, making him a difficult target.
    *Waka has a strong bond with Keotsu, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he summon him. When anyone else summons him, he remains on the field for 4 turns, though he can leave Pillowtalk behind for the user to use, until they dismiss the blade.
    *Waka’s Wind Gust in Dove form is equivalent to C-Rank, but only require 10 Chakra, due to its not damaging nature.
    *Pillowtalk can only be wielded by Columbidae contract signers.
    *Transforming to/from Dove/Human form takes 10 chakra and counts against one of that turns moves.
    Waka in human form


    Tried fixing some things. Compared his wind ability to another C-rank jutsu, increased the number of hits need to make someone fall asleep (not quite sure how to restrict that other than to increase the hits needed), fixed the part about the Kenjutsu to only being able to use the ones of the person that summoned him, and doubled the chakra needed to make him transform.
    Approved

    (Fūton: Fūjin Ibuki) Fūton: Fūjin’s Breath
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The ultimate form of Fuuton: Reppushou, this jutsu allows the user to create a powerful gust of wind and direct it as they wish. Since these winds are straight line winds, they are rather large in width, and have ample power, able to topple large buildings. Only one gust can be created per use of this jutsu.

    Limited, as per above.
    Approved

    (Fūton: Fūjin Gekido) Fūton: Fūjin’s Rage
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will form four handseals while focusing their Fūton chakra into an orb somewhere in the air. While focusing their chakra, the orb will compress itself as it rotates and condenses its chakra, creating a light wind. Upon formation of the fifth handseal, the orb rapidly expands into a dome of wind that impales and shreds anything inside to pieces.
    *Once per battle.
    *No Fuuton jutsu in the same turn.


    Changed the way it works, in an attempt to make it more believable.
    ~Approved~
    New Submissions:

    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Aero) Columbidae Summon: Aero
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Aero is one of the two “boss summons” for the Columbidae contract. She has brilliant silver plumage, with blue accents around her eyes. Her tail feathers have three golden bands, and her chest is adorned with a navy “U” that ends on either side of her wings – a single navy stripe goes down her back as well. She is just less than 20 feet from head to tail, making her very small, as far as boss summons are concerned – however, this reduction in size seems to benefit her, as it concentrates her power and makes her much faster than most bosses. Aero has a dual Fuuton/Suiton element, able to fire an A-rank beam from her mouth that is treated as an elemental combination of the two. She also has the ability to create a large dual element vortex as well, equivalent to S-rank, though only one time per time she is summoned. In Human form, she appears a beautiful woman who has long silver hair and wears a royal blue ball gown. She can use Fuuton and Suiton jutsu up to A-rank, and they too acquire a dual-element. Unlike her brother who specializes in sheer strength, Aero takes half damage from all attacks.
    *Aero has 120 Health.
    *When summoned, she stays on the field for 5 turns.
    *Can be summoned twice in one battle, but not within three turns of her dismissal.
    *Using the Vortex (Avian form) or jutsu (Human form) counts against the 3 jutsu per turn limit.
    *Transforming to/from Human/Avian form requires 10 chakra and counts against one of that turns moves.

    Approved

    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Kurahato) Columbidae Summon: Kurahato
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Kurahato is one of the two “boss summons” for the Columbidae contract. He has stark black plumage, crimson breast feathers and a red flare around his eyes. His tail has two vertical silver bands, and he has crimson feathers on his back as well. He is just over 20 feet from head to tail, making him larger than his sister, but still small as far as boss summons are concerned. This reduction in size seems to benefit Kurahato, though, as it effectively concentrates his power. Kurahato has a dual Katon/Raiton element, able to fire a flamethrower-like blast from his mouth, equivalent to A-rank. He also has the ability to summon a dual element cyclone as well – a tornado of fire that is struck multiple times by lightning bolts. The vortex is equivalent to S-rank, but can only be used once, per time he is summoned. In his human form, he appears as an attractive young adult male, with jet black hair and blazing crimson eyes – dressed in a black single-breasted suit. He can use Katon and Raiton jutsu up to A-rank, and they too acquire a dual-element. Unlike his sister, who specializes in durability, Kurahato deals double damage with all attacks. Kurahato has the ability (in Avian form) to “warp” short distance (his summoner included, if they are riding him), by converting himself into electrical energy and “striking” to that place, like a lightning bolt.
    *Kurahato has 60 health.
    *Blast and Cyclone do double damage for their corresponding rank. Jutsu also do double damage, but require 1.5x chakra to perform.
    *When summoned, he stays on the fields for 5 turns.
    *Can be summoned twice per battle, but not within three turns of his previous dismissal.
    *Using the Vortex (Avian form) or jutsu (Human form) counts against the 3 jutsu per turn limit.
    *Transforming to/from Human/Avian form requires 10 chakra and counts against one of that turns moves.


    Declined, remove the warping ability no form of teleportation is allowed
     
         
    Last edited by Nirvāṇa; 07-22-2011 at 01:06 PM.

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