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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Summoning Animal: Leopon
    Scroll Owner: ~CoOkie Monster~
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Leo
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none atm.
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    (Kuchiyose: Kokuou Reo) ~ Summoning: King Leo
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user offers a sacrifice of blood and then stretches their arm at full length to summon the King Leopon, Leo. Leo has the size and strength of a lion. But, unlike the lion, he has extraordinary climbing abilities like the leopard, which enables him to climb on Natural objects such as trees allowing him to pounce at an angle at prey. He has a very strong jaw and can use a unique arsenal of jutu to his advantage (He can do Earth, Water), and has his own set of jutsu that he utilizes against his prey.
    ~Can only be summoned by ~CoOkie Monster~
    ~Lasts 5 turns
    ~Can do B-rank of Earth and Water
    ~Can only be summoned once

    ~Declined~ Make it so he can use only 1 element. You can specify that he can use that element up to S-rank considering he's your boss summon.

    If you are wondering about the water part, this is from wiki:

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    They will climb like leopards and seem to enjoy water, also like the leopard (oddly enough, the Japanese leopons were born of a water-loving lioness and a male leopard that did not seem to like water)
    (Reopon Gigei: Doku Sukin) ~ Leopon Arts: Poison Skin
    Type: Defence
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: King Leo brings out the inner leopard inside of him and causes his skin to become a dangerous toxin which is dangerous upon contact to non contract holders who haven't been taught the way of the Leopon. The poisonous skin can cause a victim to have his movements slowed down (Such as his handseal movements and motor movements). If enough contact is made with the skin, the victim can become temporary paralyzed.
    ~Only to be used by King Leo
    ~If touched twice within 2 or 3 turns (Don't know which is more suitable), the opponent is paralyzed for 1 turn.
    ~Lasts 3 turns and can be used 4 or 5 (Again not sure which is more suitable) times

    ~Declined~ Unless you've undergone a special training in the med-school, you can't submit poison-related customs.

    (Reopon Gigei: Doku Hari) ~ Leopon Arts: Poison Needle
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: King Leo, after emitting his Poisonous skin, can eject the poison on his fur to at his prey. The hairs on Leo's back are covered in Leo's poison and become erect and contracts and squirts the poison at targets with deadly accuracy.
    ~Only can be used by King Leo.

    ~Declined~ Same as above.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-16-2011 at 07:24 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Satetsu Shīzu / 鉄砂の種子) - Iron Sand Seeds
    Type: Offensive / Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user shoots their Iron Sand at the opponent in small pellets and as the user makes a handseal, the seeds "sprout". The Iron Sand then splits away in the shape of multiple branches of sharp Iron Sand, the saplings. The seeds can also sprout into a defensive wall that can block B-Rank jutsu.
    Restrictions:
    ~The saplings only lasts two turns.
    ~The saplings can be used as a medium for other Iron Sand jutsu.
    ~If the saplings are stopped by an earth wall, they can still sprout as they still have their seed form.
    ~If the user goes to long-range of the saplings, the wall loses shape.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per match

    ~Approved~ Made it 3 times per match.

    (Jiton: Bakuhatsu-tekina shottogan) - Magnetism Release: Explosive Shotgun
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid-Range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will summon 12 pellets made of iron that are already wrapped in explosive tags. The user then hovers them in front of his hand with their magnetism chakra and punches in a direction, releasing a small magnetic pulse. The pellets then shoot out and once they hit something or the user makes a click with their teeth, they set off the explosive tags. The pellets' trajectories can not be manipulated by the user after releasing them.
    Restrictions:
    ~Usable Once.

    ~Approved~

    I have permission from Gin-San to make Kea summonings. I have also signed the contract.

    (Kuchiyose: Kea-to - Firion) - Summoning technique: Kea - Firion
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user either uses a summoning jutsu or their summoning tattoo to summon Firion. Firion is a large Kea that's wing spam outstretches the width of four men. He can only carry one person. Firion is very fast but when carrying someone, he is slowed down a bit more. Firion can use A-Rank or below Raiton jutsu that do not require handseals.
    Restrictions:
    ~Firion only lasts three turns on the battlefield.
    ~Firion can use A-Rank Raiton that do not require handseals, counts as one the user's three moves.
    ~Firion can be summoned in mid-air with a summoning jutsu.
    ~Firion can only be used once per battle.

    Firion looks like:


    ~Approved~ made it A-rank raiton and took out the part where you precised what was needed to kill it.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-16-2011 at 07:28 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon : boruto)- Fire Bolt
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user raises there right hand into the air, and then they gather a good amount of fire charkra into there right hand.And then after gather a good amount of fire chakra they shape manupliate into a bolt made of fire.That can be thrown and when thrown it can seperate into 10 smaller fire bolts heading towards the enemy.
    -can only be used 2 times in one battle

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Doton : buru)- Raging Bull
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user gather a good amount of Doton chakra into there hands,and then release the Doton Chakra into the ground.And once the Doton chakra is in the ground the user shape manupliates the ground forming 5 bulls that attack the enemy
    -can only be used 2 times in one battle

    ~Declined~ Elaborate on the description. Will the bull go in straight line or are they under your control? What size are they? Do they last more then 1 turn?

    (Ninjustu: bachi)- Curse Mandala
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: After performing various hand seals, The user of this technique must maintain a triangle-shaped hand seal at all times to maintain the cage. Should the user's will falter or the entrapped opponent happen to be strong enough, the cage can be broken. When the cage breaks, a massive explosion of energy follows, destroying a wide area and harming the user. The prisoner however, remains safe at the centre of the blast.
    *If the enemy escapes the user dies from the explosion
    * Leaves user's chakra near death level if used over 2turns.
    *takes 4 rounds to perform the handseals,and user must not be hit or they have to start performing the handseal from the beging.
    * Can only be used once during the battle.

    Here a picture of the justu


    And this This technique is somewhat similar in appearance and mechanics to Dust Release techniques, as both allow users to manipulate the size of a geometric 3-dimensional shape composed of energy/chakra by altering the distance between their palms. However, while this technique is decreased in size to compress the target's container, the Dust Release techniques are usually increased in size to increase the range of the attack.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is both OP and unacceptable in terms of RP. It's like an instant win-no-jutsu.

    Katon: tsume)- Flame Claw
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user gather's a good amount of fire chakra into therefist,and when he/she's gathered enough he/she releases the fire chakra from there hand. And shape manupliate it into 4 claws made of fire,which appear from your knucles.
    *can only last 2 turns

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-17-2011 at 02:35 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Suiton: Tsurutsuru Itsu Uetto) | Water Style: Slippery When Wet
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: Equal to the Speed of the OpponentN/A[/B]
    Description: The user focuses their chakra into a wet surface and enhances the slickness of the water. When someone or something attempts to run on the surface they will slip and fall. Depending on how fast they were moving according to the speed chart they will receive that number of damage. For example a taijutsu master sage with the 2nd gate open will receive 22 damage ((8+3) x 2).
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Lasts two turns once used.

    ~Declined~ Rather then making the water more slippery (which would be extremely hard chemically), say you mix it with oil of some slime. Also, never refer to the speed chart, so change the way you deal the damages.

    (Shibou) - Blubber
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This "technique" is the result of a high fat diet and years of drinking unhealthy amounts. The person accumulates a large amount of weight through the formation of a thick layer of fat around their body. The thick layer of fat acts as a cushion against incoming blunt attacks, greatly reducing the effectiveness of things such as punches or kicks. It also acts as a buffer between the muscles and organs of the body. For instance a cut that would spill the intestines of a normal sized person would fail to reach the insides of a person using this. It will still hurt and leave a large wound, but won't be life threatening. Being an anhydrous tissue, fat is a poor conductor of electricity. As a result the person is protected from paralytic affects from unfocused lightning techniques. Fat is also a very good insulator of heat allowing the person to maintain a relatively stable internal temperature in cold weather, though they may be prone to heat exhaustion. The excess weight also reduces the person's speed and agility by the equivalent of one rank.
    -Must be attached to the character's biography.
    -Only available to "large" characters (i.e. Akimichi or reasonable Customs).
    -Only affects areas where layers of fat accumulate.
    -Reduces the character's speed by one rank.

    Link stating fat is a poor conductor of electricity: http://www.glenhealth.net/bodyFat.htm

    ~Declined~ While I find it refreshing to see someone wanted to become morbidly fat instead of ripped like a DBZ character, you've overextended the abilities of your technique. While it does make it harder for electricity to be conducted toward your organs and muscle, the result is simple; severe burns. When electricity isn't channeled, it's because there's a resistance hindering it; meaning it will be released in the form of heat and or light. So all in all, your fat would cause you to be more succeptible to get burned to the second and third degrees when hit by lightning (be it focused or non-focused). You're the opposite from safe when it comes to lightning.

    I'm okay with the resistance to cold, but to what extent? Also, while you can't use the speed chart in your jutsu description, did you really thought that with all those boost I'd accept a mere 1 rank drawback? You need a lot more restrictions and physical drawbacks.

    (Sanshouuojitsu: Tsurutsuru Itsu Uetto) | Salamander Art: Slippery When Wet
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user forms a couple of hand seals and creates a very slick and slimy mucus from the pours of their skin. This slimy substance is usually used by Salamanders to keep themselves moist, but here it can be spread onto the ground of the battlefield to create a slippery surface. It can also be used to cover the user's skin making attacks such as punches and kicks slide off them. When someone or something attempts to run on a surface covered with the slime they will slip and fall. If used on the user's skin, the added moisture can also shield them from one B rank or below fire attack which causes the mucus to evaporate.
    -Can be used twice per battle and lasts three turns once used.
    -Reduces blunt attacks (punches, kicks, etc.) by 20.
    -Can defend against one fire attack B rank or below.
    -User cannot use fire techniques if covered in the mucus.
    -Must have signed the Salamander contract.


    Pretty much re-worked the entire thing to fit it into the Salamander contract. Salamanders need to keep their skin moist and do this with a slimy mucus so I figured it fit well for the technique. Added some bonus defense against taijutsu since it seemed to fit and so I increased the rank and chakra cost. Figure this mucus can be used for the salamander contract in a similar way as oil is for toads.

    ~Approved~ Made it B-rank.

    (Shibou) - Blubber
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This "technique" is the result of a high fat diet and years of drinking unhealthy amounts. The person accumulates a large amount of weight through the formation of a thick layer of fat around their body. The thick layer of fat acts as a cushion against incoming blunt attacks, greatly reducing the effectiveness of things such as punches or kicks. It also acts as a buffer between the muscles and organs of the body. For instance a cut that would spill the intestines of a normal sized person would fail to reach the insides of a person using this. It will still hurt and leave a large wound, but won't be life threatening. Being an anhydrous tissue, fat is a poor conductor of electricity. As a result the person is protected from paralytic affects from unfocused lightning techniques. While they're protected from the paralytic effects of the lightning, they in turn become burned in the fatty areas where the lightning meets resistance. They still receive the damage of the attack, just in the form of burns rather than paralysis. Fat is also a very good insulator of heat allowing the person to maintain a relatively stable internal temperature in cold weather, though they may be prone to heat exhaustion. The excess weight also reduces the person's speed and agility by the equivalent of two ranks. They also become susceptible to exhaustion causing them to be limited to two moves every third turn.
    -Must be attached to the character's biography.
    -Only available to "large" characters (i.e. Akimichi or reasonable Customs).
    -Only affects areas where layers of fat accumulate.
    -Reduces the character's speed by two ranks.
    -Limited to two moves every third turn.


    Increased speed drop to two ranks and added that every third turn they can only use two techs. Added a part that says the lightning attack's damage isn't negated, just transferred to heat instead of paralysis. I'm not sure what the cold resistance would be capable of, the only thing I can think of are techniques that try to cause damage by reducing temperature like 1,000 Years Fever (think that was the name, its that CJ that lower temp to awaken some dormant bacteria or something). If there are any ice techs that try to somehow freeze internal organs or muscles or something like that I guess they would be defended against. Kind of just added that part so he could have a reason for walking around the Land of Iron without a shirt on

    ~Approved~ And that CJ you're referring to, it's actually the opposite, it makes your temperature rise

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Axol-chan) | Summoning Technique: Axol-chan
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Axol is the oldest known salamander and one of the elders. He has a very unique appearance due to being a species of salamander called Axolotl. His size is very small compared to others reaching the length of an average man's forearm with a white body. Due to Axolotls usually living in aquatic environments they possess external gills that appear as feathery pink extensions from just behind their heads. While these are generally used to increase oxygen intake in water, Axol has developed the ability to sense chakra with them using them as antennae to pick up chakra signals. Once summoned he latches on to the summoner's back and communicates via telepathy.
    -Can be summoned twice per battle.
    -Remains on the field for three turns per summoning.

    ~Declined~ Find another mean of communication than telepathy. Only a summon related to the Yamanaka clan could possibly get this ability accepted.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kasei) | Summoning Technique: Kasei
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: In many mythologies the Salamander is seen as the physical embodiment of fire. The accepted origin of this idea came from people seeing salamanders coming out of lit fire wood and mistaking it for the salamanders being born from the flames. However the true beginning of the myth was born with Kasei. Long ago a village came under attack from a giant salamander with a large black body with dark red spots and markings. The village specialized in fire techniques but no matter what they attacked with the salamander simply walked through the flames unharmed. The image of the salamander walking through flames as though they were air led to the villagers naming the salamander "Kasei", or "Fire Born". Kasei is one of the oldest salamanders and one of the most experienced warriors. His temper matches his elemental affinity giving him an explosive temper. His black and red body is covered in scars. The normal moist skin of salamanders combined with his strong affinity for fire have rendered Kasei immune to normal fire techniques up to B-rank, though advanced fire elements are hot enough to burn him. Twice per battle he can release an S ranked blast of fire up to long range. Salamanders also posses a semi-permeable skin that usually absorbs oxygen. Kasei's skin is unique in that its also capable of absorbing fire. The skin can absorb up to S rank flames once per battle. The absorbed fire can then be used to increase the rank of Kasei's next fire attack. Like Ibuse, and other salamanders, he is capable of tunneling through the ground.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Stays on the field for four turns once summoned.
    -All techniques count towards one of the three moves per turns.
    -No other summoning animals on the field at the same time.

    ~Approved~ Made it resistant to B-rank and under fire techniques, otherwise you'd be stacking too many abilities.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Talaya) | Summoning Technique: Talaya
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Considered to be the creator of Amegakure's rain style, Talaya is one of the most powerful salamanders known. She is considered a matriarch by other salamanders and is one of the three great salamander warriors along with Kasei and Ibuse. Her calm and cooling nature has made her one of the few beings capable of controlling Kasei's temper. She is a benevolent white salamander of similar size to Ibuse and has an elemental affinity for water. Talaya's body constantly channels water chakra into the sky causing a constant rain storm in a large area around her that covers the battlefield. She is able to use all the rain techniques up to S-rank and has one unique S-ranked attack in which she causes the rain over the opponent to take the form of a giant salamander which crashes down on the target with its mouth open, swallowing them in a torrent of rain water. This can be used twice per battle and counts towards the three move set. Like Ibuse, and other salamanders, she is capable of tunneling through the ground.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Rain storm covers the battlefield and remains as long as Talaya is on the field.
    -Rain techniques count towards one of the three moves per turns.

    ~Approved~ Make it so it can use up to S-rank rain technique.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-17-2011 at 02:49 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Weapon: Hizashi shin):sunlight heart
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (To Summon)
    Damage points: 30 – 80 (Depending on the ability used)
    Description:
    hizashi shin is a hybrid weapon of spear and lance with a long handle with a large decorative cloth attached.When user wrap the cloth with his body parts basically hand, and pours raiton/Katon chakra into the sword and throughout the blade. The user can then use the sword as a normal blade or use certain jutsu that involve the sword. The Jutsu depends on how much chakra is poured into the blade by the user.

    Note:Can only be used for 3 turns.
    Note:Can be put away during any of the 3 turns, but it counts as a jutsu used that turn.
    Note:Can only use twice per battle.
    Note:Cannot use other ninjutsu, besides those of the swords while wielding it.
    Note:Cannot use Raiton jutsu the turn after the blade is put away.
    Note:Can only be used under the permission of ~Captain Bravo~



    (Hizashi higyou):Sunlight Slasher Technique "C-rank"
    Rank: C
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 35
    Description:
    The user pours raiton chakra into the sunlight heart And aims the tip of the blade towards the opponent,as the user stops drawing chakra , a small lightning bolt, jolts from the tip of the blade and towards the opponent.

    Note: Can only be used when wielding the sunlight heart.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle

    ~Both Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-17-2011 at 02:50 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Omori No Kei Go | The Weight of Strong Words
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Med
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A special ninjutsu of the highest caliber that can only be done by those who have excelled in ninjutsu. The user takes out a scroll which he previously prepared by writing a text in Jõko Nihongo (Ancient Japanese) with Hiragana and Katakana scripts instead of Kanji. As he takes the scroll out and unfolds it in front of him in a semi crescent gesture, he claps his hands focusing chakra. He then performs 3 hand seals (Horse+Hare+Boar) and touches the scroll. His chakra takes the form of the Hiragana and Katakana caracters, glowing as light blue chakra constructs. These rapidly converge like snakes to the enemy, binding him like chakra chains, stopping him from moving. This jutsu has a more powerful yet more limited performing method: the user will take a smaller scroll (only slightly larger than his hand) with the same caracters and slam it with his palm on the enemy. The moment there is contact, the rows of Katakana and Hiragana caracters spread across the enemy's body as chains, resctriting his movement. Although highly faster and having no need for hand seals, this alternative method has the same binding strength as the normal method. This jutsu can be done to restrict anything solid, with equal strength regardless of size or mass.

    Note1: Can only use jutsu up to S-rank next turn
    Note2: Usable only twice
    Note3: Because of the dense chakra in them, the chakra bindings are as strong as elemental jutsu of the same rank
    Note4: User can't use other regular ninjutsu in the same turn
    Note5: The binding doesn't require user to maintain contact and lasts until broken or released
    Note7: Can only be taught by Scorps


    This is an old submission which i only maintained the name and revamped the whole thing (although Zen said to no resubmit, this is very very different from the previous technique so i'm submitting it as a completely new one but i'll still provide the quote to the previous one)

    ~Declined~ OP. From what I read, it seems like it'd take an immense amount of strength to break it (considered it's chakra based and not a simple scroll), or a Forbidden ranked technique considering it's as strong as S-rank elemental technique. Either re-word it if I misread something or lower the abilities. Also, you'll notice I made it Short-Mid range, keep it that way.

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post
    Panda Ninpou: Mezameru | Panda Arts: Awakening
    Type: Mode/Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short (Long on senses)
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+10 to Taijutsu)
    Description:
    The elder Pandas have long abandoned their predatory instincts and behaviors, choosing a life of peace and meditation, becoming vegetarians. As they abandoned the bear within them, they lost most of their enhanced predatory senses. As a response, the Elder Pandas started to commune with nature. They sought to become one with their surroundings. Eventually, through meditation, they started to become aware of their surroundings, gaining a Seventh Sense that enabled them to surpass their dormant instincts. However, even so, to protect their way of life, Panda Warriors trained the ability to revive the primitive predatory instincts within them, to aid them in their battles. By combining both of these teachings, Panda Masters develop a serenity, or peace of mind, with everything surrounding them, and especially the earth. Because of this powerful connection between them and the earth around them, their very chakra becomes easier to mold when performing Earth based jutsu, making it needless to use handseals. Furthermore, the earth around them will begin to feel like an extention of his very being, allowing them to feel everything in contact with earth. Also, as a result of this awakening, Panda Masters feel an increase in physical strength and speed and a renewed stamina. These teachings were passed down to only their chosen students, of which Scorps was the first, needing only to spread blood directly on the Panda tattoo to activate. Once activated, the skin around the users eyes becomes pitched dark, forming two circles around them as the kanji for "Balance" appears in the users left cheek.

    Abilities gained:
    -Enhanced Seventh Sense (user can sense everything in contact with earth)
    -Ability to use Earth Jutsu without handseals and with increased speed
    -Boost in physical strength (comparable to Sage Mode) and slight increase in speed (+1 level of speed) that gives +10 to Taijutsu.

    Limitations:
    -User can't use Lightning jutsu while in awakening mode
    -User only fully awakens in the turn after he activates the technique
    -User remains in full Awakening mode for 4 turns
    -Can only be used once per match
    -User can't use Jutsu above S-Rank in the first turn of awakening
    -User can't use Earth Jutsu or any Jutsu above A-Rank for 2 turns once the mode is released

    Note: must have signed Panda Contract and have the contract Tattoo
    Note2: can only be taught by Scorps
    Note3: can't be used with other modes


    All Declined, do not resubmit

    Panda Ninpou: Mezameru | Panda Arts: Awakening
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short (Long on senses)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The Panda Masters, after centuries of negating the aggressive instincts of their Bear ancestors in exchange for a life of peace and perfect communion with Gaia (Nature), have came to accept their predatory background and its usefulness. As such, years of meditating have allowed them to awaken their dormant instincts and their predatory senses. As a result of their own close connection to Gaia, Panda Masters that Awaken not only gain new abilities as they also boost their already powerful skills. They gain increased senses and become able to hear and smell with enhanced accuracy and range and they gain the ability to sense anything in contact with the Earth. Scorps was the first human ever to master this art and the only one ever since. To awaken the user must clap his hands and start focusing on his chakra for a second. As his chakra changes and powers up his body, two dark circles appear around his eyes mimicking the pandas and when completely formed, give proof of the user having achieved full awakening.

    Abilities gained:
    -Enhanced Seventh Sense (user can sense everything in contact with Earth long range around him)
    -Enhanced Hearing and Smelling (user gains the ability to hear way beyond the normal boundaries of human hearing, both below and above the normal range and with increased perception, accuracy and range, gaining the ability to block some hazardous sounds; gains the ability to smell as accurately as a good ninja dog and block enemy pheromone/smell induced effects and techniques)

    Limitations:
    -User only fully awakens in the turn after he activates the technique
    -User remains in full Awakening mode for 4 turns
    -Can only be used once per match
    -User is limited to S-Rank techniques and below in the turn after the technique ends.

    Note: must have signed Panda Contract and have the contract Tattoo
    Note2: can only be taught by Scorps



    ~Declined~ You may have a nice background story behind this jutsu, but the abilities are almost similar to existing techniques. I approved one recently, and if you want to witness one for yourself, here's mine:

    (Fuuinjutsu: Tenrai Kanji) - Sealing Technique: Divine Senses


    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A(-50)
    Description: The user will make the tip of his index glow and will carve a seal in the flesh of his forehead. This seal as the ability to stop/suppress any sense: Sight, Hearing, Taste, Touch and smell. The more sense will be sealed, the more the remaining ones will be develop. For example if everything is sealed but the sense of touch, the user can feel any movement in a radius of a mile around him. The user can seal as many sense as he wants, but can only unseal one.The user will also get a huge boost in speed and strength for each sense that is sealed (the more sealed, the bigger the effect).
    -For the next turn the user will only be able to perform A-rank and lower
    -The user can only unseal one sense after being sealed
    -This jutsu can only be used once per match
    -This jutsu can only be used by Izuna Uchiha and -Naruto Uzumaki-


    While mine share many similarities to yours, I can assure you there are which resembles yours even more.


    Doton: Omotai no Gozen | Earth Release: As Heavy As Can Be
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30-40
    Damage: 60 to a normal weapon attack (+20 to Kenjutsu Attacks)
    Description:
    Using his Earth Chakra, the user infuses hand weapons (Katanas, Swords, Ninjatos, Staffs, etc) or objects to make them heavier. This increases both momentum and impact but has no effect on the weapons/objects inherent strength (in regards to destructibility). This technique can increase the weight up to 100 times (a 1 kg sword can weight about 100 kgs). The user won't feel the weight of the weapons or objects as he manipulates them and will be able to throw them with the same ease as before. Its best used with long, dull weapons in downwards slams rather than sharp weapons and sideways slices. To use without physical contact with the Objects/Weapons, the user must perform 2 hand seals (Boar+Serpent) and spend more chakra, becoming an S-Rank technique.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note2: Can't change weight of organic matter like flesh, wood, etc
    Note3: User can't use above S-Rank on the same turn
    Note4: Object/Weapon stays passively infused the whole turn
    Note5: Can only be taught by Scorps

    ~Declined~ OP. Making it's weight 100 times heavier while not feeling the difference? That just doesn't make any sense IMO. Also, please explain how infusing it with earth chakra would make them heavier? Creating extremely dense matter inside the kunai? (If yes then it'll be declined. To make an object 100 times heavier would required an insane amount of energy which makes it equally OP).

    Resubmitting :

    Quote Originally Posted by Scorps View Post

    Genjutsu: Tsuyoi Haji no Odaku Ko no Hitotsu | Illusionary Arts: The Mighty Grab of the Perverted Old One
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user, without the need for hand seals, makes the enemy experience the sensation of being grabbed and squeezed in a specific region of the body, preferably the butt. This distracts the enemy and can even make a shy enemy blush. Although it doesn't do any damage, one must be careful to use this on a woman as it often leads to uncontrollable rage or, in some cases, marriage. To enhance it, the user can use some random dirty pick-up line to further augment its perverted effect.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps

    ~Declined~ I lol'ed but let's be serious, if you submit this as a jutsu and you don't have a Sharingan, then you need to perform hand seals or have some sort of intense visual contact to perform this.
    Genjutsu: Tsuyoi Haji no Odaku Ko no Hitotsu | Illusionary Arts: The Mighty Grab of the Perverted Old One
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user gazes upon his enemy intensely and makes him experience the sensation of being grabbed and squeezed in a specific region of the body, preferably the butt. This distracts the enemy and can even make a shy enemy blush. Although it doesn't do any damage, one must be careful to use this on a woman as it often leads to uncontrollable rage or, in some cases, marriage. To enhance it, the user can wink an eye and use some random dirty pick-up line to further augment its perverted effect.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note2: Requires direct dirty eye contact and complete lack of shame from the user

    ~Approved~

    Houyi No Meimei Ya | Houyi's Divine Arrow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    It is said that Houyi, the ancient chinese God of Archery, once challenged Apollo, the greek God of War and Archery to a duel. In an attempt to easily defeat and embarrass the old god, Apollo sabotaged Houyi's bow. As he picked it up, the bow broke between Houyi's fingers. Without a weapon, he resorted to his own spiritual and physical energies to produce a pure bow and arrow, completely obliterating Apollo and his pride and claiming the title of Great God of Archery to himself. Using advanced shape manipulation, the user focuses his chakra on one of his arms forming a bow of pure chakra. Then, by joining both his hands and pulling the other hand back, he forms a dense arrow made of pure chakra. The user then releases it at his opponent with great accuracy as he would do with a normal bow and arrow. The arrow lacks the piercing ability of a normal arrow (its dull and can't actually pierce) but carries great momentum and speed and at impact can shatter bones or give severe internal injuries from the sudden decompression of chakra and its inherent small shockwave. Because of the advance shape manipulation needed to produce such a dense chakra arrow, it becomes as strong as elemental ninjutsu. The speed of the arrow is slightly above to that of a normal arrow but can still be followed by the vision of a normal ninja. The arrow and the bow, formed by pure chakra, are both visible in a color spectrum between Glowing White and Solid Black, according to both the users mastery of the technique and his own emotions.

    Note: Usable 3 times, once per turn with a 1 turn cold down
    Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note3: Color of the technique is given when training in this technique
    Note4: Scorps color is a light glowing blue

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist (flame bow, water bow, wind bow, chakra bow, ice bow...etc, they've all been made).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    Resubmits

    (Konchū sutairu: Shamen no tama) Insect Style: Sphere of Absolution
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user sends two massive amounts of insects out the gourd carried on their back (at once). One to blacken the sky of the battlefield, the insects blanket the sky (mid-range from the ground) not letting anything in from the outside (light, rain…etc). The second mass of insects digs 6ft underground, under the user and opponent (unknown by the opponent). The two masses connect making a dense chakra draining sphere of insects (that can withstand A-rank and below elemental attacks of any kind) around both user and opponent blinding them both (due to the darkness).
    -Must have a gourd, and said gourd must be listed in your bio
    -Empties the gourd and almost half the bugs inside the user
    -After this technique (if the insects are destroyed) the user can only use C-rank and below bug techniques (until the use of insect cocoon which is B-rank but it doesn't use bugs)

    - Only last 2 turns
    - Can only use 2 times per battle
    - Can only use A-rank and below bug techniques while in use
    - Dojutsu users can see the chakra of the underground insects
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    It was mentioned in my bio on the 23rd, and u checked it on the 27th....I just forgot to put it in my sig...lol...but its there now and if not here is the link
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=103867

    ~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't make sense. How could you cover such a large surface when you initially had nothing more then a gourd filled with insects. You had a certain volume of bugs which cannot be possibly bigger then your gourd and your body combined.


    New Submissions
    Please edit where needed

    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (of his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) effective up to S-rank. In doing this, the insects increase their power & durability
    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ I like the idea, but what does it actually do when your bugs gain power and durability? Make it clear that it's non-elemental chakra techniques that they can devour. Make it twice per match.

    (Konchu sutairu: Adobansu konchu no muyu) Insect Style: Advance Insect Cocoon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced form of the insect production jutsu (Insect Cocoon). The user wraps himself inside a cocoon to aid in the rapid reproduction of his insects, in this cocoon the user not only produce more insects but also splice traits into the new insects, to make them more resistant/effective towards techniques that they have survived before; creating a new breed of insect. This jutsu is dangerous to the user because it leaves him static and unable to move
    -Can only use twice per battle
    -Bugs must be hit by the same attack twice at a certain rank/level (ex. 2 A-rank lightning/2 A-rank fire...etc) to produce that rank of immunity
    -Can only make one rank of certain immunity, per elemental/technique immunity, per battle
    -Takes 2 turns to complete
    -Can only withstand up to/use against up to A-rank
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Pending~ Re-submit with an example because I find this extremely confusing. Re-word it to make it clearer.

    Resubmits
    Please edit where needed

    (Konchū sutairu: Shamen no tama) Insect Style: Sphere of Absolution
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user sends two massive amounts of insects out the gourd carried on their back (at once). One to blacken the sky of the battlefield, the insects blanket the sky (20 Ft from the ground) not letting anything in from the outside (light, rain…etc). The second mass of insects digs 6ft underground, under the user and opponent (unknown by the opponent). The two masses connect making a dense chakra draining sphere of insects (that can withstand A-rank and below elemental attacks of any kind) around both user and opponent blinding them both (due to the darkness).
    -Must have a gourd, and said gourd must be listed in your bio
    -Empties the gourd and ¼ of the bugs inside the user
    -After this technique (if the insects are destroyed) the user can only use A-rank and below bug techniques (until the use of insect cocoon)
    - Only last 2 turns
    - Can only use 2 times per battle
    - Can only use A-rank and below bug techniques while in use
    - Dojutsu users can see the chakra of the underground insects
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    It's now is only a total of 26 ft in diameter which won’t take as many bugs, but here’s a video of Shino’s dad releasing a large amount of bugs: go to 1min and 40 sec



    ~Approved~

    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (of his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) effective up to S-rank. In doing this, the insects increase their power(+10 to bug attacks) & durability(+10 meaning they would be able to survive something they normally wouldn’t fire/lightning of the same rank as the bug tech used the next turn).
    -Non-elemental chakra only
    -Power-ups only work on the bugs that ate the chakra

    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ OP. You can basically block an S-rank attack with this and instead of killing the bugs, it makes them stronger? Re-work this jutsu.

    (Konchu sutairu: Adobansu konchu no muyu) Insect Style: Advance Insect Cocoon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced form of the insect production jutsu (Insect Cocoon). The user wraps himself inside a cocoon to aid in the rapid reproduction of his insects, in this cocoon the user not only produce more insects but also splice traits into the new insects, to make them more resistant/effective towards techniques (elemental and otherwise) that they have survived before(has to be hit twice be the same rank of a technique…fire, lightning, crystal…etc ); creating a new breed of insect(one that can withstand that level of attack it was hit with before). This jutsu is dangerous to the user because it leaves him static and unable to move
    -Can only use twice per battle
    -Bugs must be hit by the same attack twice at a certain rank/level (ex. 2 A-rank lightning/2 A-rank fire...etc) to produce that rank of immunity
    -Can only make one rank of certain immunity, per elemental/technique immunity, per battle
    -Takes 2 turns to complete
    -Can only withstand up to/use against up to A-rank
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    Example:
    Ninja 1 shoots Intense pain (A-rank) at ninja 2’s (Aburame) Destruction Bug Hail Technique, killing off most of the bugs, ninja 2 then does Destruction Bug Pupa Technique and ninja 1 shoots Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire (A-rank) at the bugs again killing off most of the bugs.
    Ninja 2 can then make the cocoon and produce bugs that can now withstand A-rank fire attacks (i.e. A-rank bug attack vs. A-rank fire= bugs win out as they are engineered to withstand it like Shino did against Guren/the crystal) after meeting the requirements (takes 2 turns to work/finish)

    ~Declined~ Similar jutsu exists

    New submits

    (Ninja āto: Chakurasutingā) Ninja Art: Chakra Stingers
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user sends chakra into his/her hands and makes 30 stingers (wasp sized) on/around each hand. If the user strikes the opponent with his/her stinger covered hand, the body part/area that was stung; swells up and can’t be used for 2 turns. Stingers can also be shot at the opponent.
    -Swelling only last 2 turns
    -Stingers only last 2 turns
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ Elaborate, it is poison related?

    (Raitoningurirīsu: Zeusu no boruto) Lightning Release: Zeus Bolts
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates up to 2 bolts of lightning in his/her hand(s) then either launches it into the sky where it streams across the sky and then rains down as 50-100 mini sized lightning bolts. Or throw it on the ground where it streams across the ground (long-range) and then forms small spikes (mid-range from impact only).
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    -No other lightning jutsu in the same turn
    -The spike are only 3 inches long & as thin as senbon
    -The user can be caught in the jutsu (if not protected/out of the way)
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    how the streaming lightning looks:



    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Please edit where needed

    RESUBMIT
    Quote Originally Posted by wastedmonkey View Post
    (Chi no Bōso) - Riot of the Blood
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost : 40(-10 every turn activated)
    Damage : N/A(+10 to taijutsu, +5 to elemental jutsu of affinity)
    Description: The user will go on a frenzy that increases their strength, speed and resistance to pain. User will be on a Offensive state of mind. The user will be able to withstand B-rank jutsu and below and will have a plus on their natural elemental affinity and taijutsu. After leaving this state, the user will be in pain and will be restricted in his movements.


    Note: Only activated for 4 turns
    Note: After deactivation the user can only perform up to B-rank jutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: After deactivation the user can only perform up to 2 moves of the allowed 3 moves per turn for 2 turns.

    Note: No defensive jutsu while activated
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey



    *i.e., If you have a Naruto bio you get +10 on all your wind jutsu when you use riot in blood. Same goes for Uchiha Bios and all fire jutsu*



    (Chi no Bōso) - Riot of the Blood
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage : N/A(+5 to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will go on a offensive state that increases their strength, speed and reaction time. The user will have a plus on their taijutsu. After leaving this state, the user will be in pain and and cant perform any physical attacks.

    Note: Only activated for 4 turns
    Note: After deactivation the user cant perform any taijutsu for 3 turns.
    Note: No defensive jutsu while activated
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ You need a valid reason to receive a boost or enter a mode, I see none here.

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    NEW ENTRY

    (Konchū-Sui-Fū) Insect Water Wings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: When the user is underwater they grow wings of insects from their back to propel them through water at high speeds.

    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan
    Note: No handseals needed
    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: Can only be used underwater
    Note: Co-created and can only be use/taught by BlackUchiha or WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Fezā Bōkō) Feather Assault
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user first makes 3 hand seals then makes feathers appear all around the opponent. The feathers then rush at the opponent and stab into the skin of the opponent which will then cause them to fall a sleep.

    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Sleep last for 2 turns
    Note: When in effect you can only use up to B-rank Jutsu
    Note: Co-created and can only be use/taught by Black Uchiha or WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ This jutsu makes no sense whatsoever. Is it a genjutsu? Elaborate.

    (Doton: Tochi Kyojin) - Earth Release: Earth Behemoth
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will gather their doton chakra and the release it into the ground. Earth will then rise up from the ground in a for of a Behemoth up to its mid section. The Behemoth can spit out several spear like projectiles that can be use to attack the oppenent. The giant can also use its hands to attack to opponent.

    Note: Can be used only once per battle.
    Note: Last on the field until destroyed.
    Note: Spear like projectiles are A-rank Doton Jutsu.
    Note: It cannot move around the field.
    Note: Moves made by the behemoth counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn (shooting spikes counts as a move).
    Note: No Doton jutsu while still on the field.
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey.

    ~Approved~

    Custom Weapon

    Kanshō and Bakuya
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release electricity that will shock the opponent and leaving then stunned for the next turn. When chakra is channeled through the swords it can shoot out spike like projectiles to attack the opponent. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang.

    Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
    Note: Shock is an A-Rank Raiton Jutsu.
    Note: Stun last for 1 turn.
    Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
    Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey




    when swords is infused with chakra



    *bio where the weapon is used*

    Please edit if needed

    ~Declined~ I like the boomerang ability, keep that, but take away the projectile part. There's enough swords with that ability already. Also, take out the part where it stuns the opponent for a turn if he touches the sword, you can keep the electrical current to make him drop the sword though.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by wastedmonkey View Post
    RESUBMIT

    (Chi no Bōso) - Riot of the Blood

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost : 40(-10 every turn activated)
    Damage : N/A(+10 to taijutsu, +5 to elemental jutsu of affinity)
    Description: The user will go on a frenzy that increases their strength, speed and resistance to pain. User will be on a Offensive state of mind. The user will be able to withstand B-rank jutsu and below and will have a plus on their natural elemental affinity and taijutsu. After leaving this state, the user will be in pain and will be restricted in his movements.


    Note: Only activated for 4 turns
    Note: After deactivation the user can only perform up to B-rank jutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: After deactivation the user can only perform up to 2 moves of the allowed 3 moves per turn for 2 turns.

    Note: No defensive jutsu while activated
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey



    *i.e., If you have a Naruto bio you get +10 on all your wind jutsu when you use riot in blood. Same goes for Uchiha Bios and all fire jutsu*






    (Chi no Bōso) - Riot of the Blood

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage : N/A(+5 to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will go on a offensive state that increases their strength, speed and reaction time. The user will have a plus on their taijutsu. After leaving this state, the user will be in pain and and cant perform any physical attacks.

    Note: Only activated for 4 turns
    Note: After deactivation the user cant perform any taijutsu for 3 turns.
    Note: No defensive jutsu while activated
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey



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    (Konchū-sui-fū) Insect Water Winds

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: When the user is underwater they grow wings of insects from their back to propel them through water at high speeds.

    Note: No handseals needed
    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: Can only be used underwater
    Note: Co-created and can only be use/taught by BlackUchiha or WastedMonkey



    (Chikyū rirīsu: Rokku kakuchō) Earth Release: Rock Expansion

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user makes 1 handseal then stomps the ground or hits some earth source, and makes a compresses baseball sized stone jump from it. He then grabs the stone and throws it at the opponent, and the stone then expands to the size of a large boulder (Indiana Jones sized)

    Note: Can be used up to 3 times
    Note: Only A-rank and below Doton for the next turn
    Note: Co-created and can only be use/taught by BlackUchiha or WastedMonkey




    (Doton: Tochi Kyojin) - Earth Release: Earth Behemoth

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will gather their doton chakra and the release it into the ground. Earth will then rise up from the ground in a for of a Behemoth up to its mid section. The Behemoth can spit out several spear like projectiles that can be use to attack the oppenent. The giant can also use its hands to attack to opponent.

    Note: Can be used only once per battle.
    Note: Last on the field until destroyed.
    Note: Spear like projectiles are A-rank Doton Jutsu.
    Note: It cannot move around the field.
    Note: Moves made by the giant counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn.
    Note: No Doton jutsu while still on the field.
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey.
    the red is a technique already in existence. just pointing it out.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Manipulating the gold dust, the Fourth Kazekage will attach a sand armor to his skin, defending from earth and wind from A-rank down, fire from B-rank down but increase the attack of Lightning by 5 due to gold conductivity.
    ~Can only be used thought by Rikerslade and have a Fourth Kazekage bio~
    ~Only lasts for four turns~



    Rank: S
    Rnge: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Cost: 80 (+10 when combined with a Katon jutsu)
    Description: The user shoots a ball of compressed Fuuton at the opponent. On contact, the ball expands around the opponent, trapping them in sphere of Fuuton. The user can then launch a Fire jutsu, creating an explosion
    ~Can only though by Rikerslade~
    ~Only usable three times per battle~



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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Mokuton: Chika Soshi) Wood Style: Underground Prevention
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence/Attack
    Range: It can be created in Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (If the user creates the spikes)
    Description: The user does 3 quick hand seals and uses his chakra to create an underground bowl of wood beneath the opponent. Since the rim of the bowl is a few inches beneath the surface, only dojutsu users can see it. This bowl can be used to prevent underground escaping. By doing 5 more hand seals after the bowl is created, it will shoot out multiple wooden spikes to skewer anything inside of it. The spikes do not protrude through the surface of the ground, just like the bowl itself.
    *Note: If the user creates the spikes, they cannot use any A-Rank or higher Mokuton techniques the next turn
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per match
    *Note: Can only be used by -Vendetta- and Yamato.. (Co-Creator)

    ~Approved~limited it to 3 times per match
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Za Senjou Kibun) The Cleaning Feeling
    Rank: A
    Type: Self
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 [-10 every turn activated]
    Damage Points: +10 Every Water technique.
    Description: The user Activates the Cleaning feeling mode, The Cleaning feeling mode is used to gain +10 for every water jutsu, The user feels that everything around him is dirty, so he uses this mode to use Water technique's against everything he sees, If it's against an opponent his body goes on automatically and try to clean the opponent with only Water based technique's, the user using this technique will go insane and act womanish and says almost 'Eek' to everything or anything that the opponent or him/herself does, being able to activate this technique is only possible if the User says 'Eek', because of activating this technique the user will go on an adrenalin rush and hence gaining the ability of +10 for every water technique, but not only that, the user is also immune to C-Ranked water techniques and below.

    Note: The user will lose -20 damage points to every other element expect Water
    Note: This technique will dis-activate automatically after 4 turns
    Note: The user won't be able to perform C-Ranked water techniques or above If this technique is dis-activated


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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Hayaton Mo-Do)- Swift Release: Swift Mode
    Type: Supplement
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 to activate and -20 each turn. On the 3rd turn it takes from the users reserves.
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform the "boar" handseal and gather a great amount of their swift chakra. They will then perform the handseal once more releasing it throughout their body, muscles, organs ect. In return they gain incredibly faster movement similar to that of shadow-less flight which can be tracked by 3T and 3T users can react to it. along with increased senses and reactions. The user will also force regular chakra to their muscles pushing them to their limit and the user will send small amounts of swift chakra to certain locations of their eyes increasing tracking ability to where they can track their own movements. The user will be able to perform a row of 10 handseals in the time it takes to do 2 hanseals. This mode lasts for 3 turns and afterwards the user is almost drained of their swift chakra and can't use swift techniques for 2 turns.

    - Only usable once per battle.
    - Only lasts for 3 turns.
    - Can't use any swift techniques while in this mode or in the same turn as activation.
    - Can't use wind or lightning techniques while in this mode.
    - Can't use swift techniques for 2 turns and then can only use 1 per turn.
    - User is slightly slower for 2 turns after this mode is over due to soreness of their body. In this case the users speed will decrease by 2 ranks. If they were a normal sage ranked user than their speed is reduced to that of a sannin. Then on the next turn their speed will go up by one rank and on the turn after that it will return to normal.


    (Hayaton No Jutsu)- Swift Release: Swift Technique
    Type: Supplement
    Rank: B
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:
    Description: The user through the use of swift release will perform the "Boar" handseal and move from Short to mid range. This technique is similar to that of shadow-less flight and can be used to dodge some attacks.
    - Can't use wind or lightning jutsus in the same turn.
    - Can't use any other swift techniques in the same turn.
    - Can only be used 3X per match.
    - Must have a swift release bio.



    (Katon: Kaen Sono Uchiha)- Fire Release: Flame Of The Uchiha
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: +10 to fire -10 To wind jutsus
    Description: Uchiha's are known for not only their kekke genkai but for their great use or "mastery" of the fire element. This style of fighting shows the true skill the uchiha clan has with the use of the fire element. The user will gather Katon chakra for 2 turns. They will then release it throughout their body enhancing their fire jutsus strength by allowing them to add more katon chakra to each fire jutsu easier at the cost of their wind elemental chakra suffering from it. They will be able to send some of the katon chakra to certain locations of their body and releasing it (see below for details) causing small fireballs to be released from those points that are equal to C rank. This is mainly used for close combat and the flames only reach out to short range.
    Fist work.
    The user will send katon chakra to their fist and release it causing a small C rank fire ball to erupt from their fist and come at the opponent/target.
    Foot work
    The user sends katon chakra to their heels and will release it shooting out a small fireball at the opponent.
    Notes:

    - Each fire ball counts as one of the users 3 jutsu per turn however due to them being low and short range and small fireballs ranked they do not require handseals.
    - Can only be used by an uchiha biography who has mastered katon with aact's.
    - Can only be used once per match.
    - Lasts for 3 turns.
    - The user must gather the katon chakra for 2 turns before using this and thus cannot use katon jutsus for 2 turns before use.
    - The user can also only use 2 jutsus per turn while gathering the needed katon chakra.









    (Fuuton: sansaku Oite Tenkuu Gikou)- Walking on air technique:
    Type: Supplement
    Rank: B
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will use their fuuton chakra to fix the air particles in the air around them/underneath their feet and use it to land and stand on. They fix the particles by adding to them making them much more dense and can only be used for the purpose of standing on air or landing on air as well as they can only add to air that's within mid range. It cannot be used for attacks in any way.
    - Must be at least sannin rank to use due to chakra control.
    - Must have mastered fuuton with aact's.
    - No S rank wind in the same turn








    For the next jutsu I did a lot of research on the cm, sasuke's personality and abilities of chakra and the effect/abilities the curse mark can place on the user.

    (Watashi Gozen Ato Fukushū-Sha) I am an Avenger!
    Type: Supplement
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is only to be used when in a serious fight when all else has failed. Sasuke will suddenly start to get extremely paranoid making him focus more on hearing and sight giving him smewhat increased senses and will start to slowly go insane by the thought of not being able to kill his foe. He will unleash 70% of his chakra throughout his body increasing overall physical strength and endurance. His eyes will stay locked on his opponent as he slowly starts to lose himself more and more. Chakra will continue to release but he won't be able to tell nor will he be able to tell of how much pain he's in at that moment and with this going on his body is tensed up and in severe pain from the strain of releasing that much chakra at once. Due to so much chakra being released from him the curse seal will automatically activate to inject chakra into him as a natural reaction as seen in the chuunin exams. The curse seal of heaven gives the user 80 chakra. Once activated Sasuke will go into a pit of pure psychotic rage where he will release the chakra his curse mark brings to him and will use 20% of it in techniques adding more chakra to them so that he can perform jutsus and 80% using it to increase movement further this is at greater cost tho. The effects it has on his body are severe as just the regular curse mark effects caused him pain in the anime/manga and sometimes so much that he couldn't move after completing a rather simple task. This gives 5 times those effects due to him taking the chakra that is being used to try and aid him away. With this, his every movement is based off of his own unconscious yet motivated mind to go completely all out against his foe. Every move he makes that's driven by him in that state is forced with his own chakra like how he used his curse mark in the forest of death to gain almost double his usual speed and strength. Since he is said to be nearly as fast as rock lee without weights in the anime/manga also with the wiki saying they are actually equal in speed in the wiki chart and he has activated his curse mark while unconsciously using his chakra to increase succession and speed of movements this puts him at around 4X the average Ninja's speed. He will use up nearly 10% of his chakra each turn and after 3 turns he will die from chakra exertion. Since his chakra is being used up so much that on the next turn he will only be able to perform B rank jutsu while his chakra continues to drain in this state then on the 3rd turn he can only perform C rank jutsu. The user can only use curse mark of level one while in this state of mind, going any further would put too much stress on the body when there's already enough.

    Advantages: 4X speed and slightly heightened hearing and sight mostly a 15% improvement induced by fear/paranoia.


    Notes:
    - Only able to use if you haven't used S rank on the previous turn.
    - Must not have used Basic ninjutsu for 2 turns before this jutsu.
    - No Ninjutsu while in this state, just elemental Ninjutsu.
    - No Genjutsu while in this state either.
    - only B rank the next turn and C rank on the turn after.
    - Can only use 1 jutsu per turn.
    - -10 Damage per turn altogether = 30 damage but either way, user still dies.
    - Using any other modes will kill you in this state.
    - You die after 3 turns no matter what.
    - This restriction will defeat any hope of being alive after the 3turns are up no matter if they use a jutsu that will keep them alive or not. After 3turns the user is paralyzed from strain and can't use any jutsu as they have no chakra at all but that's only to eliminate any chance of using a jutsu to keep yourself alive after this.
    - Can obviously only be used by a sasuke uchiha bio with curse mark.
    - Can't exceed level one curse mark while in this state.
    - This is not necessarily a "mode" that you can deactivate. Meaning once you use this there is no going back.
    Similar to this technique.

    Futon: Furaingu Fūjin no Jutsu (Wind Release: Flying Wind God Technique)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 60 (10 every turn it’s active)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: By using wind chakra to create wind bubbles beneath the user’s feet, the user will mimic flight by using the air bubbles created to literally run on nothing more than air. The air bubbles are invisible to the naked eye. This technique can be used to evade some technique.
    Notes:
    Can only be used twice.
    Lasts for 5 turns.
    Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    A new thread as been created to make it easier for everyone to keep up with the official jutsu submission dates:

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    Please refer to this thread when looking for the official dates.

    Thank you all.

     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sage~ View Post
    (Weapon: Akai Kisaki) Red Queen
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30 (To Summon)
    Damage points: 30 – 80 (Depending on the ability used)
    Description:
    The Red Queen is a sword with a long handle and a lever coming from the handles guard. The user squeezes on the lever, and pours raiton/Katon chakra into the sword and throughout the blade. The user can then use the sword as a normal blade or use certain jutsu that involve the sword. The Jutsu depends on how much chakra is poured into the blade by the user.

    Note:Can only be used for 3 turns.
    Note:Can be put away during any of the 3 turns, but it counts as a jutsu used that turn.
    Note:Can only use twice per battle.
    Note:Cannot use other ninjutsu, besides those of the swords while wielding it.
    Note:Cannot use Raiton jutsu the turn after the blade is put away.
    Note:Can only be wielded by Nero bio's
    Note:Can only be used under the permission of ~Sage~


    (Akai Kisaki no jutsu) Red Queen Technique "C-rank"
    Rank: C
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 35
    Description:
    The user pours raiton chakra into the Red Queen And aims the tip of the blade towards the opponent, when the lever on the handle is released, a small lightning bolt, jolts from the tip of the blade and towards the opponent.

    Note: Can only be used when wielding the Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.


    ~Both Approved~

    (Akai Kisaki No Jutsu) Red Queen Technique "B rank"

    Rank: B
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 45
    Description:
    The user pours raiton chakra into the Red Queen, they then stab the tip of the blade into the ground. They then release the lever on the handle and the raiton chakra flows through the ground and shoots up from beneath the opponent.

    Note: Can only be used when wielding the Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.


    ~Declined~ How did the lightning reached your opponent? Did it travel through the ground? Elaborate.

    (Akai Kisaki no Jutsu) Red Queen Technique "A rank"

    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user stabs the tip of the blade into the ground and swings the sword around in a circle, carving a circle about two meters from the users left and right. The user then leaves the sword in the ground and pours raiton/katon chakra into it, when the lever on the sword id released, a thick lightning/flame wall, shoots up from the outside of the circle that was carved in the ground and protects the user.

    Note: User has to clarify what element he uses.
    Note: Can only be used when wielding Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.


    ~Declined~ not that I have anything against your jutsu restriction-wise, but I just don't see it. Re-work your description to make it clearer.

    (Akai Kisaki No Jutsu) Red Queen Technique "S Rank"

    Rank: S
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user pours raiton/katon into the blade and rotates 360 degrees in an instant and slices the sword towards the user. A giant Raiton/katon tornado is launched from the tip of the in a flash and goes storming towards the opponent.

    Note: User has to clarify what element he uses.
    Note: Can only be done wielding Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Can only be used once per turn the sword is summoned.


    ~Declined~ unless you've undergone a Yin Yang training, you can't channel two chakra at the same time. Also, didn't your sword channel lightning chakra only?



    The moves/jutsu that have lightning/fire, means that the user can create either. Only one element at a time. It depends what nature of chakra the user pours into the weapons hilt. The sword was also approved with both elements able to be poured into it (Not simultaneously).

    I Edited and explained what was asked, hope it helps.
    (Akai Kisaki No Jutsu) Red Queen Technique "B rank"

    Rank: B
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short/Medium
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 45
    Description:
    The user pours raiton chakra into the Red Queen, they then stab the tip of the blade into the ground. They then release the lever on the handle and the raiton chakra flows through the ground and shoots up from beneath the opponent.

    Note: Can only be used when wielding the Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

    Yea it travels underground, about a meter deep, is that aloud or no??

    (Akai Kisaki no Jutsu) Red Queen Technique "A rank"

    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user stabs the tip of the blade into the ground and engraves a circle around the user. The user then leaves the tip of the sword on the ground and pours raiton/katon chakra into it, when the lever on the sword is released, a thick lightning/flame wall, shoots up from outside of the circle that was engraved into the earth by the sword and protects the user.

    Note: User has to clarify what element he uses.
    Note: Can only be used when wielding Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

    Is that a bit better?

    (Akai Kisaki No Jutsu) Red Queen Technique "S Rank"

    Rank: S
    Type: Offence
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 45
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user pours raiton/katon into the blade and rotates 360 degrees in an instant and slices the sword towards the user. A giant Raiton/katon tornado is launched from the tip of the in a flash and goes storming towards the opponent.

    Note: User has to clarify what element he uses.
    Note: Can only be done wielding Red Queen.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Can only be used once per turn the sword is summoned.

    Only one element can be channeled into the sword at a time. Would i still need to undergo Yin-yang training?

    (Animal summoning) Tuatara
    Summoning Animal: Tuatara
    Scroll Owner:~Sage~
    Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
    A reptile native to New Zealand.


    Please edit if needed.

    ~All Approved~ Congratulation, I can't remember the last time I approved 4 out of 4 customs.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ekitei) – Summoning Technique: Ekitei
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Ekitei is a Bengal monitor who specializes in spying techniques such as camouflaging. He is normally the size of a regular adult Bengal monitor but will usually transform into the size of a lizard in order to hang/fuse to someone’s back and follow him (like a parasiting technique), his weight being so light that this person won’t know or suspect anything. While he does so, he will camouflage himself and be completely unseen from regular eyes. Moreover, he will convert his chakra to make it look as if he is nothing but a part of the chakra emanating from the body of the one he hangs to, thus deceiving sensory techniques like Chakra Sensing Rain and sensory abilities like the sharingan. When he is summoned, it will appear as a fail as he will already be in camouflaged mode (i.e. he will be the size of a lizard and hanging/fused to the summoner’s back, as well as camouflaging into the summoner’s chakra and hidden from regular eyes). There, he will keep check of any disturbance in the summoner’s chakra flow and release him immediately from any genjutsu. He also serves as eyes in the back of the summoner and makes it impossible for the summoner to be surprised by an attack from a blind angle, communicating such relevant information by sending signals to the summoner through his chakra system.
    Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bengal Monitor contract.
    Note: The summoner of Ekitei must be Sannin rank or above.
    Note: Camouflaging will not deceive a Byakugan user.
    Note: Can only release the summoner from A-rank genjutsu and below.
    Note: Being on the back of the summoner, Ekitei is unaffected by regular genjutsus as long as his presence is undetected, and he is unaffected by visual genjutsus since he doesn't make eye contact with the opponent.

    ~Declined~ Re-work the part about it being attacked unnoticed and letting out similar chakra to the one he attach to. To do so, he would have to suck on the target's chakra and let it out again as a camouflage. Even then, sensory type ninja and doujutsu user would see it.
    Thanks for the feedback and for approving my summoning boss Ekitenshu. For the below resubmission, I have integrated the changes requested, except for the concealing part. As I was initially looking for a technique to help counter sharingan users more easily, I have reworked it by adding a new concept instead of making Ekitei suck on the user's chakra. The changes are highlighted in blue and bolded, hope it works out now. ^_^

    Custom Summoning

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ekitei) – Summoning Technique: Ekitei
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Ekitei is a Bengal monitor who specializes in spying techniques such as camouflaging. He is normally the size of a regular adult Bengal monitor but will usually transform into the size of a lizard in order to hang/fuse to someone’s back and follow him (like a parasiting technique), his weight being so light that this person won’t know or suspect anything. While he does so, he will camouflage himself and be completely unseen from regular eyes. Moreover, he has developed a unique ability known as "Rainbow Chakra" which lets him change the color of his chakra to match that of the one he hangs to, in order to make it look as if he is nothing but a part of the chakra emanating from the body of that person. This lets him remain unnoticed even to a sharingan user as this ability will deceive the sharingan's ability to see through techniques via analyzing chakra colors. When Ekitei is summoned in battle, it will appear as a fail as he will already be in camouflaged mode (i.e. he will be the size of a lizard and hanging/fused to the summoner’s back, as well as camouflaging into the summoner’s chakra and hidden from regular eyes). There, he will keep check of any disturbance in the summoner’s chakra flow and release him immediately from any genjutsu, as well as watch for any attacks coming from the summoner's back, alerting him of such dangers in a timely manner. Thus, while Ekitei is active, it is very hard to catch the summoner off-guard through the use of genjutsu and/or sneak attacks from his back.
    Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bengal Monitor contract.
    Note: The summoner of Ekitei must be Sannin rank or above.
    Note: Camouflaging will not deceive a Byakugan user.
    Note: Camouflaging will not deceive sensory techniques that makes use of physical conditions other than visual ones, such as Chakra Sensing Rain which makes physical contact, or the Inuzuka's smelling senses.
    Note: Can only release the summoner from A-rank genjutsu and below.
    Note: Being on the back of the summoner, Ekitei is unaffected by regular genjutsus as long as his presence is undetected, and he is unaffected by visual genjutsus since he doesn't make eye contact with the opponent.
    sensory techniques like Chakra Sensing Rain and sensory abilities like the sharingan.

    ~Declined~ We do not work with chakra colors in our system, please re-work that part.

    I don't think you need to be so specific as to how you could camouflage your summon. Since he's very small and doesn't weight anything, if he's stuck to the enemy's back, only a doujutsu such as the Byakugan could notice it considering it's in his blind spot. Also, if you're summoning it on your back, then the Sharingan won't notice it because your own chakra is shielding him.


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    Custom Weapon

    (Toriniti-Kaosu) – Chaos Trinity
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
    Chakra cost: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
    Damage points: Varies with Hellraiser Techniques being used
    Description: Cain, a spirit of darkness, and Azael, a spirit of light, belonged to a realm of demons and angels where their ambitions led them to unite in order to overthrow their respective masters and reshape the world under their own rule. However, their opponents prevailed over them and they were condemned to execution. To survive, Cain and Azael fled their realm and reincarnated into a black sword and a white sword respectively. The swords look like twin ones in order to reflect their similar lust for war and power, and their powers can only be used when they are being wielded. The three of them (Cain, Azael and their wielder) are referred to as the Chaos Trinity when they fight together, and are able to perform techniques classified as Hellraiser Techniques.
    Note: The wielder of Cain and Azael must be Sannin rank or above.
    Note: Hellraiser Techniques can only be used once per turn. They count as a move and must be submitted separately for approval.
    Note: Cain and Azael will draw and stock up chakra from their wielder in order to enable him/her to perform techniques without hand seals. As such, the wielder’s other abilities will not be inhibited when performing with the swords.
    Note: Cain and Azael can only be wielded by BluePhenix and people he lends them to, provided they meet the requirement.



    Below you will see some examples of Hellraiser Techniques.

    Hellraiser Techniques

    The following techniques are related to my custom weapon. Grateful if you can review them even if you are declining the custom weapon as it is now, so that I can rework and resubmit all of them simultaneously to avoid any duplicate work for you.

    ~Approved~

    (Reizu Makai: Hakachi) – Hellraiser Technique: Graveyard
    Note Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 20 per turn
    Description: The user will thrust Cain into the ground and a wave of cross-shaped blades will overwhelm the battlefield by spreading onto the surface from the user’s position to the end of the battlefield. If they come across a vertical ridge on the battlefield, the blades will keep on spreading onto it till they cover its sides and top. Same goes for a fissure; the blades will cover the ridges of the fissure and continue towards the end of the battlefield. The shape of the blades make the battlefield looks like a graveyard, and they stand close enough to each other to prevent the opponent from fighting on the ground unscathed, whether or not he’s moving to dodge (see damage points above). Protection from Cain makes it so that the blades will disappear and reappear around the user to let him or her move without taking damage.
    Note: Can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
    Note: Can only be used in Chaos Trinity Mode.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battles.
    Note: No other Hellraiser Techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Hellraiser Techniques demand a life force sacrifice each turn that they are active, i.e. -10CP and -10HP to the user per turn.

    ~Declined~ OP. Why is this even Forbidden? No risk for the user and no physical drawbacks? Fix that or make it S-rank while lowering the abilities. Also, your restrictions are way off for a forbidden technique, you need to be close to chakra exhaustion on the next turn to so restrict the jutsu you can use.

    (Reizu Makai: Yomi) – Hellraiser Technique: Underworld
    Note Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 20 per turn
    Description: The user will thrust Cain into the ground and the underground of the battlefield will turn into a hall of hell due to lava, formed from fire chakra melting the earth, coursing and dripping out everywhere. Once the new stage is set, the surface will weaken and crumble, taking the user and his opponent to continue their battle there. In this new stage, underground motion techniques will be impossible due to the lava, wind techniques will be weakened by two ranks due to the area taking better advantage of its elemental weakness, water techniques will be weakened by one rank due to vaporization, and fire techniques will be strengthened by one rank. Also, flying ashes will be constantly doing damage to the opponent (see damage points above). Protection from Cain makes it so that the ashes deviate from the user when drifting around.
    Note: Can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
    Note: Can only be used in Chaos Trinity Mode.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battles.
    Note: No other Hellraiser Techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Hellraiser Techniques demand a life force sacrifice each turn that they are active, i.e. -10CP and -10HP to the user per turn.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ OP and a similar technique already exist.

    (Reizu Makai: Harumagedon) – Hellraiser Technique: Armageddon
    Note Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 20 per turn
    Description: The user will throw Azael in the air similarly to a boomerang, and the sword will then fix itself above the user in the sky and begin to rotate faster, generating and spreading special clouds all over the battlefield. The clouds are made from mixed fire and lightning and prevent anyone and anything from flying any higher than short range from the battlefield’s surface. Any attempt to ward off the clouds will be difficult, i.e, the combination of fire and lightning is stronger than any lightning or fire attacks on their own, earth and wind attacks will suffer from elemental weaknesses, and water attacks will be weakened due to the high heat pressure causing evaporation. The special clouds generate a highly acid rain all over the battlefield, which will constantly damage the opponent (see damage points above). Protection from Azael will make it so that the sword always moves right above the user as the location below the sword is the only spot where acid rain droplets will not fall.
    Note: Can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
    Note: Can only be used in Chaos Trinity Mode.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battles.
    Note: No other Hellraiser Techniques in the same turn.
    Note: Hellraiser Techniques demand a life force sacrifice each turn that they are active, i.e. -10CP and -10HP to the user per turn.

    ~Declined~ What's with all those OP techniques!? Re-read what I said above concerning F-rank technique and lower the abilities of this technique.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suna : Supurinkura) - Sand Style : Sprinklers
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 35
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : The user will first have his sand churn and turn minerals and earth into sand in previous turns, there after, he performs a single handseal and ends up by slamming his hand onto the surface of the ground. Just as the slam is made, sand starts sprinkling out of the ground in numerous locations around the battlefield. This looks somewhat like what happens when the basement of a pirate ship starts leaking due to the number of holes in the walls and floor, only this time, sand starts leaking out of the ground like water sprinklers. In no time at all, sand covers the battlefield, making it look like the beach or desert if you prefer.

    Note : Only twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used by a sand user
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : No S-rank or above sand techniques can be used the same turn this is used or the next turn
    Note : Must have sent sand underground to churn for more sands in previous turns to use this
    Note : Will damage the eyes if the sand hits directly into the eye when a person bends down or head is near ground level

    ~Approved~ Check bold part.

    (Boushirenzu) - Eye-piece Lens
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short
    Chakra cost : 35 (+5 to maintain)
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : This is merely just two eye-piece lens that are specially designed to utilize chakra within them. Once placed in the user's eyes, the eye-piece lens aren't visible to the enemy eyes and will only turn visible when coming in contact with enemy chakra. When this happens, it starts turning a translucent colour of blue and then fades away. The purpose of the technique is to block out enemy chakra that is sent via the eye, making it a defense against genjutsu that require eye contact or transference of chakra to the user's mind. The user is not able to control when it can be activated, it will self-activated once detecting enemy chakra trying to enter the user's body.

    Note : Usable only once per battle
    Note : Only up to B-rank illusion techniques
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Unable of defending against MS level techniques
    Note : Not capable of activating manually by the user
    Note : Counts as a move when it self-activates
    Note : Can either be stated in the user's biography or the start of a battle

    ~Approved~ I'm not a fan of such tools, but it doesn't seem to be against any rules. Made it effective for up to B-rank illusions.

    (Doton : Shingurukasui) - Earth Release : Single Spike
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 35
    Damage points : 70
    Description : A much more advance technique of 'Earth Style : Stone Spikes', the user is able to conjure up a single spike instead of numerous spikes. Due to this, the user doesn't have to focus and maintain his chakra among many stone spikes hence the user is able to bring out the full potential of that single stone spike. This single spikes is much deadlier, faster, smoother and easiler to manipulate but has a higher chance of missing since its only a single spike.

    Note : Makes only a single spike
    Note : Can only be used four times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist (many techniques in fact).

    (Fuuton : Kyouseikaze dagekiyoroi) - Wind Release : Great Wind Strike Armor
    Type : Offensive / Defensive
    Rank : S
    Range : Short
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : Much like the technique, 'Lightning Style : Lightning Strike Armor', this technique allows the user to surround themselves with sharp and piercing wind that spins madly around the user, as though hungry to destroy something. This deadly wind field protects the user by cutting, dispersing or slicing anyone or anything that comes into contact with it but only works for a single attack and then its done.

    Note : Works for only one attack
    Note : Can only be used thrice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke
    Note : If technique is kept active for two turns, it goes berserk and attacks the user itself
    Note : Within the protective field, the user may not utilize any other wind techniques as long as its active

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (Sky Kaguya made this a long time ago if my memory is correct).

    (Genjutsu : Chinioi sabure) - Illusion technique : Stench of Blood Sand
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Mid
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : This is a technique which involves the use of Gaara's bloody sand from his gourd. When the user is able to get his sand the right distance from the target in order to use it, he is able to induce an illusion technique by concentrating his chakra into his sand really hard. After doing so, the smell of blood from the sand will turn stronger, along with being infused with the user's chakra. Once the scent has gotten into the enemy's body, the target will be paralyzed from having thoughts and visions of thousand of people dying by the clutches of Gaara's sand. During this period when the target's having visions, he does not have sight over what's in front of him.

    Note : Can only be used 3 times per battle
    Note : Can only be used a Gaara biography
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Requires sand from Gaara's gourd to be used
    Note : Target is paralyzed and blind for a whole turn
    Note : That sand must be in mid-range from the target to be used

    ~Approved~ Made it 3 times per match.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Its more then 10 days since my last Submission.

    (Genjustu: 100 kuro-n) - A 100 Clones
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: User shows his enemies a genjustu, in which he shows that he creates a 100 clones around his enemies, which are exact copy of him, including his chakra and everything. As the user will do something like justu or body movements, the clones will do the same thing at the same time. So it will be impossible for enemy to judge the original user. And if user uses some jutsu, so will clones will use that jutsu, and enemy will take the damage from all the justu.
    Note: ~Lasts untill enemy gives user a injury.
    ~Can be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by proteus.

    ~Declined~ Check the bold part, this tells me you don't quite understand how genjutsus work. Re-work.
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    (Doton: Rokku Boudai) - Earth Style: Rock Expansion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20 (or depends on size)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After focusing on his doton chakra, the user expands the size of any rock or earth in battlefield.
    Note: ~Chakra will be proportional to the expansion size.
    ~Can only expand by doubling the size or upto a mini bus size.
    Note: ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Proteus.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
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    (Doton: Iku Batsu) - Earth Style: Several Attacks
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user creates 25 small squirrels made up of earth, anywhere in battlefield, whose eyes are linked with user, and user can blast every single of them one by one or together by making a single handseal. The blast which is made is of 1m radius.
    Note: ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Proteus.

    ~Declined~ OP and a mix of already approved technique. The only difference in your custom is that you used squirrels.
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    (Doton: Tenkan Hando) - Earth Style: Converting Hand
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A (+5 for each bite)
    Description: The user slams his hands on earth and pulls out a 15m giant hand made of earth near him, which lifts the user and puts him at safe place within its reach to prevent from a incoming attack of the enemy. And just after that, that hand converts into several small rats, which spreads around the field, whose eyes are connected to the user, which can bites.
    Note: ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Proteus.

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

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    (Doton: Hisan Tori) - Earth Style: Flying Bird
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user creates a akamaru size bird, made up of earth, which can fly with the speed of normal bird. And user can use that bird for flying in air.
    Note: ~Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Proteus.

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    Try to search this thread before submitting jutsus which are very common.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Summoning Animal: Bee
    Scroll Owner: bansal
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

    ~Declined~ Contract already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Sution:nurunuru bunpi|Water Release:Slimy Bunpitsu|
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user secretes a slimy fluid from his body by using his suiton chakra which coats the user thickly not covering the users nose ,mouth and eyes.The advantages of this slimy stuff is that the user can be harmed by taijutsu as the slimy substance will absorb all taijutsu blows and some would slip though the users skin due to the slime.The user cannot be harmed by ordinary kunai's or slashs or cuts from blades.The user is free to do other jutsu's while covered in this slime

    Note:
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle
    • Lasts for 3 turns after activating the slimy substance
    • Cannot use any suiton jutsu's of S-rank while covered in slime
    • Can only be taught by igneel


    ~Declined~ There is a very similar technique existing but it was solely made from water so I'll give you a change to work it out. First, it's OP the way it is now. You're basically invincible to all taijutsu/kenjutsu, work that out. Also, make it last for 1 turns and twice per match. Add some restrictions related to the jutsu you can use after water (can't use S-rank and above for X turns...).

    Fuuton:Sandoicchi|Wind Style:Sandwich|
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Range:Short-long
    Type:Attack
    Description:The user channels fuuton chakra into the air and does 3 handseals and as he does the first handseal, wind walls start to from on the the front and rear side of the target and when he does the second seal the wind wall finishes forming(the wind wall is not visible to naked eye,only doujutsu users or sensers can see or feel it) and when he does the 3rd seal the walls move towards the target at high speed and the two wall will collide in 2 seconds,trapping the target in middle restraining his movements and also the target will have multiple fractures

    Note:
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle
    • Must have mastery over wind
    • cannot use any wind jutsu in the next turn
    • can only be taught by igneel


    ~Declined~ You're creating 2 thick walls made of wind close-range from your opponent and he wouldn't feel it being created around him and moving? That's unrealistic and OP. Also, define the size of those walls, we can't have you create 2 50m by 50m slab of wind.

    Raiton:Sankaku Bukahu|Lightning Style:Traingulr blast

    Rank:A
    Type:Attack
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Range:Short-Mid
    Description:The user does 5 handseals and brings together his hands and forms a triangle using his hand(as shown in pic) and concentrates raiton chakra in between the triangle and shoots a blast of lightning a the opponent which reaches an opponent at mid-range in the blink of an eye and blasts a hole in the opponent

    Note:
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle
    • Sharingan of 2T and above can follow the speed of the attack
    • Must have mastery over lightning
    • Cannot use any raiton jutsu in the same turn
    • Can only be used by igneel




    Ninja Art: Power Up|Ninpou:Kaio-Ken

    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user builds up a huge amount of chakra in his body and it is clearly visible to others.The user summons chakra from each and every cell in his body to get into this powered up state.All the attack the user uses gets boosted 1 rank higher but the user cannot use any jutsu which was forbidden initially.The user can use S-rank jutsu's like Wind style:Serial Waves which would get boosted to 1 rank higher.Due to the strain of the jutsu the after effects are pretty devastating

    Note:
    • Can only be used once per battle
    • Cannot use any jutsu which was forbidden initially while in this state
    • User can use only a maximum of 2 S-rank jutsu like Serial waves per turn
    • This mode lasts for 3 Turns
    • After the mode disappears the user will suffer extreme pain in his body and will not be able to use any jutsu's including tai,nin,gen and basics as well as CE well
    • User will collapse on the ground as soon as he gets out of the mode and will faint(which means the user will loose the match if he doesn't finish his opponent in the 3-turn time)
    • can only be taught by igneel


    Ninja Art: Buddha's Heavenly Palm|Ninpou:Butsu Amatsu Hira
    Typeffence/Defence
    Rank:S
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Range:Short-Mid
    Description:This is a technique used by ancient ninja's and was one of the most deadliest attacks.The user first brings both his hands together as if he was praying and then the user first focuses his chakra into his palms and puts his hands in a position as shown in the pic below.


    Then the user compresses more of his chakra into his palms completely covering his palms with it( visible to naked eye) and then the user pushes his right hand forward sending a blast of chakra shaped in the form of a huge palm at the target(this blast of chakra is not visible to the naked eye).The palm has enough power to push back the opponent dealing him major damages like rupturing his internal organs.The attack has power to push back attacks aimed at the user.

    Pics:
    Effect of the jutsu on the ground

    Effect of the jutsu on a huge building


    Video for better understanding:
    watch from 1:10 for better understanding


    RESTRICTIONS:
    • Can only be used once per battle
    • Cannot use any ninjutsu in the same turn or for the next 4 turns(not elemental)
    • Must have mastered Taijutsu
    • User cannot use any form of taijutsu(like punches and kicks) after using the jutsu(user can still throw projectiles like shurikens,kunai's)
    • Must be atleast Sannin Rank
    • Can only be taught by igneel


    ~All Declined~ Those were all great idea but they all already exist. The Kaio-Ken was just recently done and a whole set of custom was created around the Buddha's palm by a senior member named Devlin.
    ~Resubmitting ~

    Sution:nurunuru bunpi|Water Release:Slimy Bunpitsu|
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user secretes a slimy fluid from his body by using his suiton chakra which coats the user thickly not covering the users nose ,mouth and eyes.The advantages of this slimy stuff is that the user cannot be harmed by taijutsu as the slimy substance will absorb all taijutsu blows of A-rank and below and some would slip though the users skin due to the slime and also earth.The user cannot be harmed by ordinary kunai's or slashs or cuts from blades.The user is free to do other jutsu's while covered in this slime.While in this form the users speed is reduced by 1lvl.

    Note:
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle
    • Lasts for 1 turn after activating the slimy substance
    • Cannot use any suiton jutsu's of S-rank for the next 2 turns
    • Can only be taught by igneel


    i hope i've changed enough

    ~Declined~ Take out the part about being invincible to blades. Being slimy won't change the back that a left to right slash would cut you in half or that a stab would pierce you.

    Fuuton:Sandoicchi|Wind Style:Sandwich|[/B]
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Range:Short-long
    Type:Attack
    Description:The user channels fuuton chakra into the air and does 3 handseals and as he does the first handseal, wind walls of dimensions 25m X 25m start to from on the the front and rear side of the target and when he does the second seal the wind wall finishes forming(the wind wall is not visible to naked eye,only doujutsu users can see it) and when he does the 3rd seal the walls move towards the target at high speed and the two wall will collide in 2 seconds,trapping the target in middle restraining his movements and also the target will have multiple fractures

    Note:
    • Can only be used 2 times per battle
    • Must have mastery over wind
    • cannot use any wind jutsu in the next turn
    • can only be taught by igneel


    ~Declined~ You only added the size of the walls, and they're simply too big. 25m squared is huge. Re-read what I said on your last submission and apply it.

    Kyōka Suigetsu
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    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:50(-10 per turn as long as the user hold Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands )
    Damage:+5 to all raiton jutsu's
    Description: Kyōka Suigetsu is the ancient sword that was awarded to Igneel by the kage of kumogakure. Kyōka Suigetsu is said to be the Sword made from a thunderbolt and can only be wielded by True warriors.As long as the user holds Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands,Kyōka Suigetsu sucks the users raiton chakra(10 points per turn)and coats herself with this chakra,thereby making the sword much more sharper such that she could slice through anything except diamond hard substances.Kyōka Suigetsu has the ability to absorb raiton jutsu's of A-rank and below and gets coated with lightning chakra such that bolts of lightning could be seen surrounding the sword.The bolts last for 1 turn and if the user uses the sword to cut the opponent now,it will make the opponent numb.

    • Can only be wielded by Shisui and if anyone else touches the sword a 1000V current strikes the wielder
    • Can cut through all elemental jutsu's of B-rank and Below(except fuuton only C-rank fuuton jutsu's can be cut) and can absorb A-rank Lightning
    • Cutting through jutsu's and absorbing lightning jutsu's count as a move
    • Cannot use any Fuuton jutsu's of A-rank and above as long the user holds Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands.
    • Kyōka Suigetsu sucks the user chakra 10 points per turn
    • When the sword is unsheathed the user cannot use any jutsu of S-rank in the same turn
    • Absorbing opponents jutsu's count towards one of the users turns


    ~Declined~ Take out the part where you absorb an element, there's enough sword that does that already to call yours a rip-off. A 1000v discharge if your opponent touch it? That's an instant kill and it's OP, take it off. Define cutting through jutsu, can it cut through more than lightning jutsu? Cutting anything that isn't Diamond-like? What about other swords that coat themselves with lightning? Take out that part and replace it by something more trivial like: "Can cut through most materials as it's extremely resistant".

    Gesshirui Mo-Do |Rodent Mode|
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Type:Supplementart
    Chakra:40
    Damage:+15 to ninjutsu
    Description:The user does the confrontation handseal and waits for 15-20sec and draws in chakra from the ground( energy from the ground) and the users chakra substantially increases not as much as seen in sage mode.The user must have ground contact to enter the mode.After Entering the mode,the users ears becomes similar to martens getting enhanced hearing and as long as the user is standing on the ground,he/she could sense others who are standing on the battle field.The users speed gets an amazing boost and his/her reflexes becomes as fast as minato's.The hands get covered in marten hair and the user nails elongates to form something similar to claws seen in marten and these claws are smei-retractable and the claws allow the user to scratch his target which would inflict deep wounds the.The user can also smell anything or anybody within mid-range due to his/her enhanced nose.If the user looses ground contact,he/she must retain ground contact in the same turn or the mode disappears.And as long as the user is stationary he/she is immune to genjutsu of B-rank and below as there is constant flow of chakra from the ground to the user while the user is stationary

    • can only be used once per battle
    • must have signed marten contract and can only be given to others if both lili-chwan and igneel agrees
    • lasts for 4 turns
    • the user becomes exhausted after the mode disappears and cannot use any S-rank jutsu's in the next


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No human/animal hybrid mode and all in all this jutsu is just a rip-off of many already existing modes.

    Fuuton:Awa Anki|Bubble Fate|
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user concentrates on his fuuton chakra and then does 2 handseals and creates bubbles made of wind around the opponents hands.These Bubbles restrict the Opponent from using handseals or holding stuff.These bubbles are very strong and if the opponent tries to spew out fire to destroy the bubble,he/she may result in burning his/her own hands.So while the buuble restricts the opponent he can only use jutsu's which don't require handseals.

    • Must have mastery over wind
    • can only be used 2 times per battle
    • lasts for 2 turns


    ~Declined~ I like that one, but why would the bubble make it impossible to make hand movements? And in order for you to keep this active, you'd have to keep focusing chakra into them, taking away 1 of your moves per turn. Also, we don't accept jutsu that takes immediate effect on your opponent, find a way to make it happen near the opponent so he can react and defend.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Ren'ai) - Illusion Technique: Emotion.
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close(0m-5m), Mid(5m-10m)
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: This Genjutsu is so unique as it doesn't create a physical illusion like false surrounding, but instead effects the opponents emotions, much life parilysing fear. The user will release their chakra into an dome shape all around to mid range, effecting anyone caught within the area. This genjutsu effects the part of the brain of the targets that controls the emotions they feel. When the target is caught in this genjutsu, the user will be able to create the illusion of one of their emotions, or, make it so they can feel an emotion coming from the user.

    (Ren'ai: Kigi )- Emotion: Fear
    By creating the illusion of fear in the opponent, it will effect the opponents fighting spirit, as is always seen. A scared man wants to run or is to scared to act rather than fight. So when the user creates the illusion of fear the targets will be stunned for 1 turn from the shock. Though due to this being a genjutsu, if the opponent knows it's a genjutsu they will be able to break it with high levels of pain or a burst of chakra. If the target is a higher rank than the user then it will have no effect on them.

    (Ren'ai: Shinpyou)- Emotion: Trust
    By creating the illusion of trust in the target, it will make them more vulnerable in a way. By creating the illusion that the target will trust the user, they will be less likely to suspect them of doing anything sneaky. The way this works in an actual battle is that the target will trust the user, and will lower their defenses as they wont expect the user to attack them. In doing so they will reduce their own reaction time by half. This effect lasts until the gen is broken or after it has been active for 3 turns as after that the target will have no reason to trust the user.

    (Ren'ai: Aijou)- Emotion: Sadness
    By creating the illusion of sadness in the target, it will make them more vulnerable in a way. When a person is sad, they are unable to concentrate on what's going on around them. Sadness such as losing someone close to us makes it so our brains don't function properly, and so we make mistakes and mess things up. In a battle, by creating the illusion that the target is sad, their moves will become sloppy reducing the speed of their attacks by half and reducing the power behind them by 10 damage. This lasts for up to 3 turns or until broken.

    (Ren'ai: Rokujou)- Emotion: Anger/Rage
    By creating the illusion of anger/rage in the target, it will make them more vulnerable in a way. As seen ¬¬in naruto, when someone fights when they are angry they lose sight of their actual goal and destroy everything that gets in their way. Not only that, but they focus on damage instead of accuracy and speed which makes their fighting skills useless. So by creating the illusion that the target is angry, the power of their attacks will increase by +10. This may be seen as a good bonus but it comes at the price of speed. And so, when the target is fighting, there speed will be reduced to 1/3 of their speed at the time. This lasts for 3 turns or until broken. This increases the chakra cost of the target's jutsu by 10 due to the extra power they are using.

    (Ren'ai: Ikkyou)- Emotion: Surprise
    By the creating the illusion of anticipation/surprise on the target, they will become more on edge and jumpy. By believing they are on edge, they will be surprised by what goes on around them, some are more effected that others. The way this will work in battle, is when the target is more jumpy, they wont expect things as much and so their reaction time drop greatly as they would like skip a heart beat. The reduction in reaction time would be like the difference between an Uchiha's reaction of when he has 2 tomoe active and his normal eyes. So if an Uchiha had 2 tomoe active active, their rections would be reduced back to normal. This lasts until broken or for 3 turns.

    (Ren'ai: Opuchimizumu)- Emotion: Optimism
    By the creating the illusion of optimism on the target, they will become more confident in their fighting skills. In effect, they will believe that their attacks are stronger than they actually are. In doing so their jutsu's power will suffer as the damage will be reduced by 10. Lasts for 3 turns

    (Ren'ai: Koigokoro)- Emotion: Love
    By creating the illusion that the target is in love with the user, they will not want kill or even hurt the user. Love is a very powerful emotion that will drive a person to do almost anything to help the ones they do love. In a battle, by creating the illusion that the target is in love with the user, they will reduce the damage of the attacks they are using and so their attacks will 15 less damage that normal as they just want to stop the user not kill them. Lasts for 3 turns.


    Note: Useable three times
    Note: For the restrictions on the use of each emotion, see the end of the description.
    Note: Only one of the emotion illusions can be created per use, and only one can be in effect at a time.
    Note: If the user is effected, so are his clones.
    Note: This genjutsu only creates the illusion of the emotion to effect the targets fighting style, and so will be stopped just like any other gen.

    ~Declined~ This technique doesn't fall under the "strict" definition of Genjutsu:

    "Genjutsu is created when a ninja extends their chakra flow through the cerebral nervous system of their opponent to control their mind's chakra, thereby affecting their five senses."

    If you read the whole article on Naruto Wiki you'll see that they're very subjective as to whether it's possible or not to directly influence emotions, however in our RP we decided to prohibit such possibilities; deeming it OP.

    I know you must have worked hard on that jutsu so I will let you re-submit it again. Try and fix the description so it fits with the official definition of a genjutsu; make it related to the senses.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I'v been holding this off for a long time. A revision of my Black Burn jutsu, more or less I wanted to clear up some details.

    Here goes nothing.
    Quote Originally Posted by Sin View Post
    (Katon: Kuroi Kashou)Fire Style: Black Burn
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user releases crows of flame that appear out of the user, and start to form blasts of fire, the user also turns into black flames that dissapear and then appear where the user set any crows, and can decide which crow to appear to, when the user reaches the target, the user turns into the users normal self and release black flames that attack the opponent.
    Note: The user can keep it as armor, that will hurt anybody who touches it.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Only People Taught by SinRival Can use it
    |Approved|
    New One:

    (Katon: Kuroikashou) Fire Style: Black Burn
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Performing the Snake handseal, the user will expel dark blasts of fire that then form into 5 black birds, these black birds aren't able to be followed by the naked eye but they can tap into the brain of the user and will go to the place where the user wants them.
    The user will tell where the blackbirds are by following this template

    Bird 1: Set- Short Range behind the Opponent
    Bird 2: Set- Mid Range to the left of the opponent. (Right to the user)
    Bird 3: Set- Long Range behind the user.
    Bird 4: Set- Short Range in front of the opponent.
    Bird 5: Set- Long Range behind the opponent.

    Changing the distances from either the user or opponent, and when the blackbirds are in position. It is a sort of body flicker/substitution jutsu which makes it very quick also the blackbird will be absorbed by the user and is able to defend 1 A-Rank jutsu, 2 B-Rank, 3 C-Rank and 4 D-Rank.
    Note: Must be given permission to use by Sin
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: No Water jutsus can be defended.


    I'v reworked the entire description and restrictions.

    I hope this will work. :lili:

    ~Declined Forever~ (), sorry mate but the first version of it shouldn't have gotten approved, so I certainly won't make it stronger. The fact that this technique was spread around to many many members isn't helping either.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Wesobi View Post
    Hyourinmaru – Ice Ring
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A sword that has been passed down through Yuki clan for ages. It was broken before, in the war where the Yuki Clan almost became extinct. The sword is said to be made out of the heart of a special meteor that fell in the village. The meteor was as cold as ice, and had all the properties of ice. The Yuki Clan took the meteor, and forged a sword out of the core of this heavenly rock. As the sword was formed, it gleamed heavily and continued to send out a soft blue light. The user of this sword gets a +15 damage point boost on every Ice Release jutsu used, as well as slowly freezing anything it comes in contact with. Of course not the wielder, considering it must be one of the Yuki Clan to wield this. The sword also comes with a most secret technique. It gives the user the ability to use send out a wave of ice from the tip of the sword. This wave can be used as a direct attack or shield). It also has the ability to let the user use any ice-release attack without any hand seals.
    Note: The wave can only be used once (so the user has to choose for the offensive or defensive side)
    Note: When using the wave, it has the attack power of an A-rank attack, and can only defend up to A-rank attack, except fire.
    Note: The user can only use an ice attack without hand seals twice
    Note: The user can only use attacks without hand seals when having the sword in his hands.
    Note: Only one of the Yuki clan can wear this sword (especially Wesobi). If anyone else touches it, he/she gets frozen instantly.
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    ~Declined~ OP. Work on all those abilities...this sword is almost stronger than the 7SM. Take out the part about it reducing all hand seals to zero for ice jutsu. Work on it, you stacked many abilities that could have been hard to approved if it was the only this sword possessed.

    Hyourinmaru – Ice Ring
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A sword that has been passed down through Yuki clan for ages. It was broken before, in the war where the Yuki Clan almost became extinct. The sword is said to be made out of the heart of a special meteor that fell in the village. The meteor was as cold as ice, and had all the properties of ice. The Yuki Clan took the meteor, and forged a sword out of the core of this heavenly rock. As the sword was formed, it gleamed heavily and continued to send out a soft blue light. The user of this sword gets a +5 damage point boost on every Ice Release jutsu used, as well as slowly freezing anything it comes in contact with. Of course not the wielder, considering it must be one of the Yuki Clan to wield this. The sword also comes with a most secret technique. Once per battle, the user can channel Hyouton chakra through the sword and let a spear extend from it, up till mid range (much like Chidori Eiso). The second way to channel Hyouton chakra through it gives the user the ability to send out a wave of ice from the tip of the sword. (The same as Hitsugaya when he swings his sword in Bleach) This wave can be used as a shield from incoming jutsus.

    Note: The spear is formed as rapidly as Chidori Eiso, but can only be used once per battle.
    Note: The "Wave of Ice" can only be used twice and defend up to A-rank attacks.
    Note: The "Wave of Ice" counts as on of the 3 jutsus used per turn.

    Note: Only one of the Yuki clan can wear this sword (especially Wesobi).

    Additional changes to the bold: I left out the part where I don't require hand seals when having this sword on me. I was also unsure if I should have put able to defend up to A or B rank in the wave of ice technique. Please change this if needed.
    Many thanks.

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    ~Approved~ Make it +5 and took out the part where you kill anyone who touch your sword by freezing them instantly.


    (Hyouton: Daiguren Hyōrinmaru)Ice Release: Grand Crimson Lotus Ice Ring
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 for every turn active)
    Damage Points: +5 to Ice, Water, Wind and -5 to all other elements(-5 DP per turn for the user)

    Description: The user does a chain of 5 hand seals (Snake – Rabbit – Rooster – Dragon – Ox) and releases a large amount of Hyouton chakra. The outburst of Chakra manifests as an orb of thick ice around the user for a one second, and then breaks. The outburst causes ice splinters to fly everywhere, but this is not the main function. The user goes into an enhanced state after leaving the encased ice, having grown wings of ice as well as a tail of ice, and if the user is wielding Hyourinmaru it is also encased in ice. This gives him the ability to fly in the air, as well as greatly increasing his speed (as fast as rock lee without gates). Next to this ability, the user gains incredible strength (as strong as Tsunade in her prime). While in this form, his ice techniques require considerable less amount of time to use, and the damage points of his attacks are increased by 5.
    Note: This form lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Due to the strain of this on the body, the user will not be able to use any S-rank and above attacks after this mode wears off for 2 turns while being extremely exhausted, having difficulty to move.
    Note: The user will not be able to use Ice, Water or Wind for the next 2 turns after this mode wears off.
    Note: The user must have Hyourinmaru in possession if he wishes to use this attack.
    Note: The user can only use Ice, Water and Wind techniques in this form.

    Appearance of this form:




    ~Approved~ Made it +5, took out the part where you freely manipulate ice and snow (we don't allow element bending CJ anymore), and made it so you couldn't perform S-rank and higher for the next 2 turns. Oh and -5 to all other element.


    (Katon: Nayami no Hisaki) Fire Release: Anguish of Flames
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user start by rapidly releasing 3 large fireballs from his mouth. They do not fly in the direction of the opponent, but rather around the opponent (not in close range of the opponent). The opponent will believe that the user missed him, but instead the 3 fireballs form a triangular form around the opponent. When they reach position, the user does the tiger hand seal, and the fire balls form a link of fire with one another. This create a triangle with the opponent at the center of the triangle. The fireballs then release all the fire and heat in the triangle, creating a triangular pillar of fire, incinerating everything inside of it, and in the air/underground radius of it.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Can not use any other fire attacks in the same turn, and can't use any during the next 2 turns.
    Note: When used in close range, the user gets hurt himself, receiving 15 damage as well as second degree wounds on his chest.
    Note: Despite seeming as a technique that goes slow, all the actions happen in a rapid succession.

    ~Declined~ The description is a bit shaky and the jutsu in itself is OP (burning everything underground?). Needs work.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuton: Washi's Doki) Wind Style: Eagle's Wrath
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will make three handsign and quickly release a large amount of Fuuton chakra into the air. Using shape manipulation, he will form a giant eagle in the sky, the eagle will flap its wings and severely strong slicing winds will come crashing down onto the opponent.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle
    *Note: No S-rank or higher Fuuton techniques for the next turn.
    *Note: Can only be taught by Kaien..

    ~Approved~ Added a restriction

    (Mokuton: Mokuzou Ya ) Wood Style: Wooden Arrow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Yamato will quickly make the 'Ram' handsign and focus a large amount of Mokuton chakra into his hands. He will then use the chakra to form a large bow made of wood on his right hand. Then out of the user's hand, he will sprout an arrow made of a highly compressed and hard wood. The user will then pull back a chakra string and fire the arrow. The arrow will soar towards the opponment at incredible speeds.
    *Note: Can only be taugh by Kaien..
    *Note: Can only be used three times per battle

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Mokuton: Jinsei's Enjin Sodekuchis) Wood Style: Life's Wristbands
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+10 To All Mokuton Techniques)
    Description: The user will release a large amount of chakra from both of their wrists and use it to create wristbands of a highly dense and durable wood. The chakra in the wood will strengthen the user's use of Mokuton and will give them a +10 to their normal Mokuton techinques. With the wristbands, the user will be able to use additionally created techniques designed to be used while the wristbands are active.
    *Note: The wristbands can only be activated for 4 turns per use.
    *Note: After they are deactivated, you must wait for three turns before they can be activated again.
    *Note: Can only be activated twice per battle.
    *Note: Can only be taught by Kaien..

    ~Declined~ The reason for this boost doesn't make sense. Either find a reasonable explanation as to why those wristbands would strengthen you Mokuton jutsus or don't resubmit it.

    (Mokuton: Mokuzou Ami) Wood Style: Wooden Net
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will quickly hold both of his hands outwards towards the opponent. Then, he will quickly form a seed made of Mokuton. Then user will then throw the seed towards the opponent and with the use of a handsign, the seed will burst open and form into a Mokuton net. The net will hit the opponent and bind him to the ground below him. The net is made of highly dense wood that will be far to heavy for the opponent to move beneath. With the use of another handsign, the net will protrude large spikes from it, peircing into the opponent as he is caught in it.
    *Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    *Note: Can only be taught by Kaien..

    ~Approved~

    Feel free to edit anything as you see fit.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    It is presumed that Dark release is a mixture of Fire and Lightning Based chakra and possibly follows the Yang nature being fire and lightning and yang is perceived as black energy within the yin-yang symbol

    (Meiton no Yoroi ) - Dark Release Armour

    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (-20 to user)
    Description: This armour is very simalar to the Raikages Lightning armour. The user will concentrate and wrap his entire body in a highly concentrated dark release chakra infused with more lightning chakra affinity by doing this he can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. Though he is not as fast or as strong as the 4th. With the armor active, only 3 tomoe sharingan comes close to being able to track his movements. Due to this armour, lightning attacks up A rank dont effect him, and S ranks only deal half the damage they normally would. However the user is weak against wind.

    Note: Once Per Battle
    Note: Leaves User Exhausted Any Movement Hurts for 2 turns
    Note: No Water While Active
    Note: Lasts 4 turns
    Note: Cant use Dark Release Techniques for 3 turns afterwards
    Note: Must be at least Kage ranked
    Note: Can Only Be Taught By Nagato..

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No more Raikage's armor rip off. There are many jutsu similar to this one already, which are also inspired/copied from the Raikage's armor.


    (Meiton: Andāwārudo hantei) - Dark Release: Underworld Judgement

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will perform 3 necessary handseals sending his dark release chakra underground slams his hand unto the ground causing the earth underneath the opponent to crackle with energy and then erupt in a violent blast of dark energy of a 6 meter radius that shoots up like a cylinder. The blast will cause severe lacerations to the skin all over.

    Note: Can Only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: No S Ranked Dark Release for 2 turns.
    Note: Can Only Be Taught By Nagato..

    ~Approved~


    (Meiton: Dākufangu) - Dark Release: Dark Fang

    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will rotate his body while surging unfocused dark energy around himself. The user can choose to launch himself towards the enemy as a violent vortex of swirling dark energy that has enough force to break bones on contact. This technique can be used to avoid certain techniques. This technique looks like Kibas single fang over fang technique except you are covered in unfocused dark chakra.

    Note: Can Only be used 3x Per Battle
    Note: If missed hitting the ground user will be left disorientated.
    Note: Can Only Be Taught By Nagato..

    ~Approved~


    (Meiton: Dākusupaiku) - Dark Release: Dark Spikes

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will perform the bird handseal creating solid spikes made out of dark release to protrude from the ground impaling the target(s) within a 12ft radius. The size of the spikes are big and sharp enough to impale a summon.

    Note: Only 3x per battle
    Note: Can Only Be taught by Nagato..

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist.

    (Meiton: Fōsu o isogu) - Dark Release: Rushing Force
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will focus his dark release chakra into his blade and swing it in an arc at an angle towards the ground infront of him causing dark release to hit the ground sending a wave of dark release energy and earth to rise and rush along the ground towards the opponent within seconds. This technique can be done without a sword, but you would need to perform 5 handseals in order to use it and send the dark release from your hand towards the ground.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: This technique is 7 meters wide.
    Note: No Dark Release techniques for the following turn.
    Note: Must Be Kage ranked.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Enough with the swords shooting elemental blasts.
     
         
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