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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Resubmitting

    (Kaze/-sui konbo, doragon no maito)Wind/Water Combo-Dragon's Might!
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user gathers wind at the bottom of their stomach molding it carefully. He/She then will gather a sufficient amount of water chakra around their mouth. With the water chakra they will create a water net around the rim of their mouth. As this happens they will perform 3 handseals and release the molded wind chakra from their stomach in a giant dragon shaped blast of water and wind.
    *May only be used three times*
    *No wind or water the next turn*
    *Can only be taught/used by Shade Dracova
    I am the current holder of the Cardinal Contract and here are some jutsu that were never checked.

    ~Declined~ this is exactly the same as before. You can't mold two chakra at one. You need to first mold a form of chakra, use it, then mold a second form of chakra.

    Summoning Technique: Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound will appear. Kaminari-on meaning Lightning Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a red bill, black face and red body like most male Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Kaminari can use S-A rank lightning technique that dosent require any handseals due to the fact that while he was a mere baby bird in Aries he was struck by lightning giving extra power but making him weaker in his sound wave ablilty . Kaminari can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds but Kami's is weaker due to him being struck by lightning for reasons unknown.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed* *
    *Only can use S rank lightning if the summoner's specialty is lightning*
    *This is another version of the previously approved Naki Tori in my quotes*

    ~Declined~ Sound jutsus are heavily restricted in our RP so take that ability away. Also make it so it can use lightning that doesn't need hand seals for A-rank and lower.

    Summoning Technique: Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound will appear. Sukaisaundo meaning Sky Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a white bill, black face and red body unlike most Cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Sukaisaundo can use any Wind technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals. Sukaisaundo can also send a high pitched S-ranked sound wave that all Cardinals naturally have the ability to do since they are all sound birds.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
    *This is another version of my previously approved Naki Tori summoning*

    ~Declined~ Same as above.

    Cardinal Mode Stage One
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will call upon the energy of a pre summoned cardinal on the field. That cardinal will convert itself into energy that goes straight into the user. When the cardinal chakra finally enters the body of the user the following effects will take place: A red chakra cloak will grown around the user this gives the user +5 on all cardinal techniques. The user will grow red tatoo's on there legs and back giving them the speed of Rock Lee(without weights. There hair will grow a dark red and that is just for show. The user will also gain the ability to release a S rank sound wave attack(all cardinal's specialties are singing so the soundwave seems fit).
    Note: The transformation is so draining that it will require one cardinal of S rank to be converted to keep in the state
    *This transformation last one turn without another cardinal being converted into energy the next turn*
    *The user will face a large amount of fatigue when the mode ends
    *The user will not be able to use taijutsu, genjutsu or cardinal summonings for the next 2 turns after deactivated*
    *Can only be used once per match*
    *The same cardinal cant be converted twice in a match*
    *Must have signing Cardinal Contract with Shade Dracova*
    *The soundwave can only be used once per turn*[/SPOILER]

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No human-summon hybrid and absolutely no summon turning into energy.

    New

    I will be creating a Taijutsu Custom Set

    (Tera - suwari sutōn no 5 no oshie)5 Teachings of Terra- Sitting Stone
    Type: Attack,Supplementary,Defensive
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description; This is a special taijutsu stance that was first thought of by the Spirit Terra. The user will bring there legs together on both sides and bring both hands together in a praying stance with perfect symmetry. As this happens the user is releasing chakra into the earth as he stands there with his eyes closed waiting for the first movement. As he blocks out his eye sight he/she is enhancing his other senses such as hearing and touch. When the opponent makes the first move it will give a sonar like vibration in the earth which will send a message to the opponent telling him what is about to happen. Also with his enhaced hearing he can hear even the slightest exhale of the opponent. This stance is known as almost perfect due to its very few errors but the opponent cant see so it may be easily tricked with the right strategy. The fighting style of this stance is based around blocking all of the opponents moves until you feel his most vunerable moment then strike will all you power.
    *This stance can only be used/taught by Shade Dracova*
    *While in this stance if the user were to open his eyes for any reason he would be temporarily blinded and confused*
    *The user can also feel motions coming from underground*
    *The sonar effect will only reach short range*
    *Once you decide to release the stance you can open your eyes but you will face loss of hearing and touch for that turn and the upcoming turn*



    I bolded the changes and the previous jutsu from the quotes

    I have included the approved contract for my Cardinal Contract which was approved on pg 246

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ This is too similar to an already existing form of taijutsu developed by Goro Kaguya. Zaitochi taijutsu.
    Resubmitting:

    Summoning Technique: Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound will appear. Kaminari-on meaning Lightning Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a red bill, black face and red body like most male Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Kaminari can use A rank lightning technique that dosent require any handseals due to the fact that while he was a mere baby bird in Aries he was struck by lightning giving extra powerful lightning affinity.
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed* *
    *This is another version of the previously approved Naki Tori in my quotes*

    Summoning Technique: Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound will appear. Sukaisaundo meaning Sky Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a white bill, black face and red body unlike most Cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Sukaisaundo can use any Wind technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals..
    *Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning her counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
    *This is another version of my previously approved Naki Tori summoning*

    (I took out the part about the sound wave and S rank lightning and btw there is no japanese word for summoning)

    ~Both Declined~ "Summoning" is one of the most used word in Narutoverse, the fact you're saying the word doesn't exist is aberrant and proves that you didn't spent one once of effort to even look for it.

    Click here:http://lmgtfy.com/

    See how easy it was?

    Resubmit those two with Japanese names.



    New:

    (Wasureta shinigami)-The Forgotten Reaper
    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40(20+ with additional techniques in use)
    Description: Thousands of years ago a scythe was forged by a great warrior who had the ability to wrench the souls of others from there body. The great warrior made this in hopes that some young warrior would be able to carry on his legacy. While this was being built the warrior literally put small traces of his soul into the weapon making it even more powerful. this procedure ended in him dying but as a result the sword gained special abilities to the point where everyone wanted to get there hands on it. Though the warrior knew that it could wreak havoc if it had fallen into the hands of a villainous being so he used his soul energy to engrave a security system so only those with a good heart can wield it.

    Abilities

    - The Forgotten Reaper is nearly indestuctible(only jutsu or weapons of forbidden rank cant break it).

    - Due to the warriors specialty being Katon and Fuuton, the user gets +5 damage points on all Katon and Fuuton. The user can also perform each of those elements with 1 less handseal.

    -The Forgotten Reaper can slice through all B rank techniques.

    - Due to the warriors soul living inside The Forgotten Reaper, the scythe will inform you as soon as you are cast under a genjutsu. How you deal with it is on the wielder.

    - The Forgotten Reaper slightly increases the reflexes of the wielder due to the warriors soul being able to tell what is going on somewhat. Though it isn't Byakugan and cant protect your blind spots.

    Restrictions

    -Can only be used by Shade Dracova or anyone given permission to use by Shade Dracova

    - The Forgotten Reaper weighs over 100 pounds so the user must have somewhat training in taijutsu to prove his muscle strength.

    -While wielding The Forgotten Reaper you cant use S rank jutsu for any of the Basic 5 elements except for Katon and Fuuton while the scythe is in the wielders hands.

    - Due to the heavyness of the scythe, you -1 speed level when holding it.

    It should look something like this:




    ~Declined~ Anything related to soul, dead, resurrection...etc will be automatically declined. No cutting through techniques, it's already been done so you're ripping it off. Make it so the +5 boost affects only one element. Fix the thing with genjutsu, no soul in the sword anyway. Lastly, you can't make any reference to the speed chart so alter your last restriction.

    (Majo shinigami)-Gemini Reaper
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: 40
    Damage Points: 80(if it hits)
    Description: The user will release a massive amount of chakra into"The Forgotten Reaper", combine it with the soul warriors soul within it. The outcome is a major power up. The scythe will grow a upside down "L" chakra aura around the blade. When in this form "The Forgotten Reaper"s soul is linked with the wielders giving the weapon and wielder perfect sync causing the wielder to make no mistakes whatsoever when he performs this attack. The user will jump or dash at his opponent and slice them perfectly inhalf. This jutsu can also be used to slice through any S rank jutsu.
    Must posses "The Forgotten Reaper" and have permission to use this from Shade Dracova.
    - Once this is done "The Forgotten Reaper" will lose all of it's abilities and restriction making it a plain scythe as the soul energy has to recharge. The scythe will gain its abilities and restrictions back in the 2nd turn
    - Can only be used once

    ~Declined~ Sword was declined.

    (Kasai rirīsu: Jigoku rokettsu)Fire Release:Hell Rockets
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: All
    Chakra Points: 30
    Description: The user will firmly plant his feet and fist towards the ground. He/She then will release massive amounts of katon chakra out there legs and fist which would result in flames pushing out. This jutsu can propel the in any direction. This jutsu is continuous so you can fly around in the air.
    - Can only be used/taught by Shade Dracova
    - No Katon the next turn.
    -Can only be used three times per battle

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-25-2011 at 02:16 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by InuYasha.. View Post
    (Fuuton: Ōfū no Tekunikku) - Wind Style: Crosswind Technique
    Type: Defense /Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The user clasps his hands together channeling his wind chakra into the air causing the wind to form a various ring-like formation around the user that rotates rapidly with enough wind force to excavate the earth and fling it outwards from underneath the user creating a shield around the user that defends well against most techniques, even from under his feet as well as can cause serious skin lacerations if the opponent is caught within range of this technique. When the technique is over, a small round hold it underneath the uses feet.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: Cannot perform fire techniques while inside the sheild.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato.. or Zenryoku

    ~Declined~ Re-submissions won't be checked if the changed/added part aren't put in bold.


    (Ninpou: Dākuchakura) Ninja Art: Dark Chakra of Hatred Summoning

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: +30
    Damage: Cost of 65% of the users life force

    Description: User will think about pain and all the struggles and harm hes caused similar to your life flashing right before his eyes, in this brief second he will be consumed by hatred and chakra will burst from all directions around being able to defend form an incoming attack from all around. He then will have the ability to use the Dragon of the Darkness Flame.


    Note: Only Lasts 5 turns then the user will be left almost depleted of his life energy.
    Note: No S ranks or above after this technique is over.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..


    Looks like this [Minus The Third Eye]


    ~Declined~ This is too unrestricted for a Forbidden technique. Make it last 3 turns. Does this blast coming out from you when you enter the mode last for more than 2-3 seconds? Can it block more then one attack? What rank can it block? Add some physical drawbacks.


    (Ninpou: Yami no honoo no ryū) Ninja Art: Dragon Of The Darkness Flame

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: All
    Damage: Cost 10% of the users life.

    Description: After unleashing his pain in a violent rush of chakra the user will summon a dragon made out of chakra to burst from his arm, swirling around to attack the opponent from any direction above ground. The Dragon is attached to the users arm and can be manipulated to change directions at will. When the dragon is near the user when entering short range from the opponent it will expand also opening its mouth to consume them.

    Note: When the technique is over the user will be left knocking on deaths door.
    Note: No A ranks or above after the techniques over.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..

    Looks like this


    ~Declined~ The mode needed for this jutsu was declined. Also, take away the 10% of user's life considering you already had 65% of your life taken away from the mode you must enter. Replace it with something else.


    (Ninpou: Shisubeki Honoo no Kobushi) Ninja Art: Fist Of The Mortal Flame

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The Fist of the mortal flame is a mass of unfocused chakra. The user releases this out of their dominant hand and collects it in a mass. He/She then releases it all at once it explodes outward. It has enough force to knock any opponent in Short range back as well as breaking a few bones and tearing at their flesh. It can be launched into Mid-Long range as a projectile it slams into the opponent with enough force to smash bones and it will explode outward releasing waves of chakra that can knock the opponent unconcious if hit directly. It can also be used as a devastating short range punch that can if hit directly in the chest can stop the opponent's heart.

    Note: Can Only Be Used 3x Per battle
    Note: No S Ranks or above after for the next turn
    Note: Must be taught by Nagato..

    Looks like this


    ~Declined~ OP. Work on the part where you rip the flesh off your opponent as you simply create the jutsu.

    Re submissions.


    (Fuuton: Ofu no Tekunikku) - Wind Style: Crosswind Technique
    Type: Defense /Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The user clasps his hands together channeling his wind chakra into the air causing the wind to form a various ring-like formation around the user that rotates rapidly with enough wind force to excavate the earth and fling it outwards from underneath the user creating a shield around the user that defends well against most techniques, even from under his feet as well as can cause serious skin lacerations if the opponent is caught within range of this technique. When the technique is over, a small round crater is underneath the users feet.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: No other Wind jutsu in this turn or the next.
    Note: Cannot perform fire techniques while inside the sheild.
    Note: Can only be taught by InuYasha.. or Zenryoku

    ~Declined~ This technique doesn't make any sense. If there's a crater under your feet then it mean you'd be standing on the rotating wind while it's grinding the earth, hence it would be grinding into the palm of your feet too, slowly shredding you to pieces. Fix the description, I know you want to defend from attacks coming from under you, but it simply won't work the way you're making it.


    (Ninpou: Dakuchakura) Ninja Art: Dark Chakra of Hatred Summoning

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: +40
    Damage: Cost of 50% of the users life force

    Description: User will think about pain and all the struggles and harm hes caused similar to your life flashing right before his eyes, in this brief second he will be consumed by hatred and chakra will burst from all directions for 3 seconds around being able to defend form an incoming attack from all around. He then will have the ability to use the Dragon of the Darkness Flame.


    Note: Only Lasts 3 turns then the user will be left almost depleted of energy.
    Note: Can only block 1 S ranked technique or 2 A-ranked combo, not both.
    Note: When this technique is over their muscles will be overherted and it will be hard to even move for one turn.
    Note: No S ranks or above after this technique is over.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..

    ~Declined~ Restrictions are still off. Since I've seen the jutsus that come with this technique, you really need to add drawbacks that will balance out the advantages/disadvantages ratio. You're basically defending from any S-rank technique while entering a mode, only the defense part would need to be highly restricted.

    Looks like this [Minus The Third Eye]




    (Ninpou: Yami no honoo no ryu) Ninja Art: Dragon Of The Darkness Flame

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 60
    Damage: 100


    Description: After unleashing his pain in a violent rush of chakra the user will summon a dragon made out of chakra to burst from his arm, swirling around to attack the opponent from any direction above ground. The Dragon is attached to the users arm and can be manipulated to change directions at will. When the dragon is near the user when entering short range from the opponent it will expand also opening its mouth to consume them.

    Note: When the technique is over the user will be left knocking on deaths door.
    Note: When the dragon expands its mouth at close range, its large enough to consume a summon like gambunta.
    Note: No A ranks or above after the techniques over.
    Note: Can only be used by Nagato..

    Looks like this


    ~Declined~ Mode wasn't approved.


    (Ninpou: Shisubeki Honoo no Kobushi) Ninja Art: Fist Of The Mortal Flame

    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The Fist of the mortal flame is a mass of unfocused chakra. The user releases this out of their dominant hand and collects it in a mass and launches it as a projectile that slams into the opponent with enough force to smash bones and it will explode outward releasing waves of chakra that can knock the opponent unconcious if hit directly.


    Note: Can Only Be Used 3x Per battle
    Note: No S Ranks or above after for the next turn
    Note: Must be taught by Nagato..

    Looks like this


    ~Declined~ After carefully re-reading it, this jutsu is no different then a Akira's old Yin Yang gun (basically shooting a raw chakra blast). So, too similar to existing technique.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-25-2011 at 02:25 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Tablet of Life and Time is a continuation of one of 6 jutsus from this page of jutsu that I made. So if the Vault of Odin was approved, then the Tablet of Life and Time can be checked as well.....if not, then you dont have to bother checking it.....just in case the same mods didnt check both techniques.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4755
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    Tablet of Life & Time
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user summons a tablet after making 5 handseals and immediately injects themselves with a serum while reading from a table that appears in their minds eye (opponent cannot see it), healing all injuries by rapidly reproducing the cells, not unlike the technique of Tsunade. This jutsu however, does not last as long as hers, and is only a quick fix, granting the user 3 turns of renewed life before death occurs. This is only to be used as a last resort, and when the opponent has left them for dead.
    Note: this technique cannot be used unless you have Mednin training.
    Note: Can only be used once by the user and lasts for 3 turns (not including the turn it was used in)


    ~Declined~ Vault of Odin wasn't approved.

    Itazuna Toraidento -God of Mischief’s Vibroblade Trident -
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the blade made with the properties of a kunai such that it may have chakra channeled into it without destroying it. This trident is one of a kind vibroblade in the shape of a 7 foot tall trident. It originally belonged to the God of Mischief, and fell into the possession of Loki the Mandalorian mysteriously. He believes that he was given this because they shared the same name, and because of this, it has never left his side and will only respond to him. The blade uses ultrasonic vibrations to increase its cutting effectiveness. If stabbed into the ground, the user’s chakra take form and can spread through the ground by way of the vibrations. When up against a normal weapon (dagger, sword) if the blade of the trident stays connected with the blade for too long then weapon will break. If up against another vibroblade, both blades will break.
    Note: Can only be handled by Loki Laufeyson.
    Note: Can be infused with any chakra of a lightning or Wind like affinity (Black Lightning, White Lightning, Divine Wind, Solar Wind, etc) to give it the desired speed and or power boost of said element.
    Note: Channeling chakra into the ground does not count as a move in the user’s turn.

    ~Declined~ Nice one, but it needs some work. Elaborate on it's ability to spread chakra into the ground with the trident, what does it do other then spreading chakra? Can you break the ground through resonance frequency? Make it so you can only infuse the basic 5 elements. Lastly, define "if the blades stay connected for too long", what is too long?

    Green Secret Technique: Geppeto Puppetry Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: ALL
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A large shadow of the Puppet Master Geppeto appears looming behind the user. Only the opponent can see Geppeto, which causes them to think they are in a Genjutsu. Geppeto is attached to the user by chakra strings that protrude from the user's back. Geppeto forms an infinite amout of chakra strings from his hands and latches onto every body part of all the puppets on the entire battlefield. Through Geppeto, the user can control or move every puppet or part of a puppet throughout the battlefield with a mere thought. Geppeto will move the body of the puppets for the user. If the user wants to use any chakra strings for any reason, they will come from Geppeto.
    Note: User cannot move of his own accord.
    Note: Geppeto moving 1 or more puppets in a turn counts as 1/3 moves in that turn.
    Note: This technique can only be used one time per battle.
    Note: This technique lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: Can only be used by Puppet User's
    Note: Can only be taught by Loki

    ~Declined~ OP, I'll leave you figure out why, I think it's pretty obvious. Also, why would the opponent think he's in a genjutsu? How does he know the user can't see it?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-25-2011 at 02:32 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kaze rirīsu:-Fū no shūto) Wind Release: Wind Chute
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user makes a parachute made of wind that circulates wind into it to propel the user in any direction. Can also be used to slow/stop the user falling from great heights.

    Note: Only usable 4 times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha
    *Co-creator Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ A parachute made of wind with wind infused in it?





    How about a simple wind pillow that stops your fall ?






    (Kaze rirīsu:-Fū no supaiku) Wind Release: Wind spikes
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user utilizes the cutting power of the wind chakra, in the form of spikes. These spikes can be used in a variety of ways, like: spikes along the ground, spikes covering the user’s body, raining spikes…etc.

    Note: Only usable 3 times per battle
    Note: User must wait 2 turns to use again
    Note: Spikes only last for 2 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha
    *Co-creator Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ Similar jutsu already exist.


    (Raitoningurirīsu: Sutatikkunoizu) Lightning Release: Static Noise
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40 (+ 10 on hearing enhanced individuals and in caves, wooded areas…etc)
    Description: The user utilizing the lightning chakra’s crackling sound, sends his/her lightning chakra throughout the field. The result is a loud static noise (I. e. radio static, & TV static noise) that hurts the ears of the opponent(s). This noise can cancel sound jutsu of the same rank and below. This technique also is more effective on hearing enhanced individuals of any kind and in caves, wooded areas…etc.

    Note: Only usable 3 times per battle
    Note: Static Noise last for 2 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha
    *Co-creator Black Uchiha

    ~Declined~ I like the idea, but since you're the closest to the sound, wouldn't you suffer the most from this technique?

    RESUBMIT
    Quote Originally Posted by wastedmonkey View Post

    (Chi no Bōso) - Riot of the Blood
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage : N/A(+5 to taijutsu)
    Description: The user will go on a offensive state that increases their strength, speed and reaction time. The user will have a plus on their taijutsu. After leaving this state, the user will be in pain and and cant perform any physical attacks.

    Note: Only activated for 4 turns
    Note: After deactivation the user cant perform any taijutsu for 3 turns.
    Note: No defensive jutsu while activated
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ You need a valid reason to receive a boost or enter a mode, I see none here.




    Custom Weapon

    Kanshō and Bakuya
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release electricity that will shock the opponent and leaving then stunned for the next turn. When chakra is channeled through the swords it can shoot out spike like projectiles to attack the opponent. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang.

    Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
    Note: Shock is an A-Rank Raiton Jutsu.
    Note: Stun last for 1 turn.

    Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
    Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey




    when swords is infused with chakra



    *bio where the weapon is used*

    Please edit if needed

    ~Declined~ I like the boomerang ability, keep that, but take away the projectile part. There's enough swords with that ability already. Also, take out the part where it stuns the opponent for a turn if he touches the sword, you can keep the electrical current to make him drop the sword though.


    (Chi no Bōso) - Riot of the Blood
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage : N/A(+5 to taijutsu)
    Description: When in front of an enemy the blood of the user will start to flow eratically, this will cause his chakra to flow faster. In this state the user will go on an offensive state that increases their strength, speed and reaction time. The user will have a plus on their taijutsu. Being in this state will give an advantage to the user but will also give a lot of physical strain on the body. After leaving this state, the user will be in pain and and cant perform any physical attacks(taijutsu).

    Note: Automatically activated in the beginning of the match
    Note: Only activated for 4 turns
    Note: After deactivation the user cant perform any taijutsu for 3 turns.
    Note: No defensive jutsu while activated
    Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

    ~Declined~ Still doesn't give any valid reason to enter a mode.


    Custom Weapon

    Kanshō and Bakuya
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release red electrical current that will shock the opponent making them drop the sword. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang.

    Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
    Note: Summoning the swords count as a jutsu.
    Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
    Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey




    when swords is infused with chakra




    ~Approved~ Added a note.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Meiton: Sōtenhōkai - Dark Release: Total Celestial Collapse
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    The user of this technique firstly creates a mass of dark chakra in the shape of an orb that hovers over the palm that the meiton mark is placed. He/She then inhales to mould wind chakra into their mouth and releases a typhoon-shaped vortex of wind aimed at the black sphere in ones hand; the two elements then combine to create a large, widespread vortex of dark and wind natured chakra to strike the opponent(s).
    - Only usable twice
    - No Dark or Wind techniques above A-rank next turn.

    ~Declined~ First of all, what is this Meito mark? Secondly, to mold two chakra at once, you need to receive a special Yin Yang training. Did you undergo such training? If not, then you need to fix this jutsu. Otherwise, VM me and I'll re-check it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo.. View Post
    (Yoton: Karyuu No Houkou) - Lava Release: Swirling Lava Roar
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After Performing the serpant, dragon & tiger handseal the user takes in a deep breath as they bring about the ideals of most fire exhaling jutsu into play. Than the user will inhale some air and concentrate his/her chakra into the lungs and exhale a swirling roar made out of lava which he/she directs at the opponent. If, this jutsu hits it will cause you to die in a split second due to the heat of the lava and the flying hot ashes in the air. This jutsu can melt earth in a split second.(This jutsu is similar to fireball jutsu)

    .Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    .Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Earth & Fire.
    .Note: The user must be at sage lvl.
    .Note: After this jutsu is used the user can not use fire techniques for two turns.
    .Note: Can only be used by Ichigo.


    ~Declined~ Look at the bold part. Even if Lava can kill on contact, we never approve techniques that specifically says it's lethal if successful (we're simply trying to apply the damage point rule even though it isn't being used). Also, even if it is hot, melting rock in a split second is OP. Such temperature would cause the air around the lava to rise to such temperature that you'd kill yourself just shooting it (your throat may be coated with chakra to protect you, but the rest of your body can't be protected from heated air). If you need an example, look back when Sasuke was training by the lake when he was a kid, trying to learn the fireball no jutsu. He would come home at night with burns on his cheeks and lips, hence it is possible to get burned by our own technique.

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    ~Resubmiting~

    (Yoton: Karyuu No Houkou) - Lava Release: Swirling Lava Roar
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: After Performing the serpant, handseal the user takes in a deep breath as they bring about the ideals of most fire exhaling jutsu into play. Than the user will inhale some air and concentrate his/her chakra into the lungs and exhale a swirling roar made out of lava/fire which he/she directs at the opponent.

    .Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    .Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Earth & Fire.
    .Note: The user must be at sage lvl.
    .Note: After this jutsu is used the user can not use fire techniques for two turns.
    .Note: Can only be used by Ichigo.

    Proof!-Of how this jutsu works!! (Its, not the same)

    ~Approved~
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    (Yoton: Yougan Disuku) - Lava Release: Lava Disks
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A jutsu that can only be peformed if there is a lava source on the battle field. Te user will focus his/her chakra into the lava pools surrounding them and create a total of 3 lava disks that rise up from the lava pools all are the size of the Rasen-Shuriken. And send it flying at you opponent it will slice/melt them in an instant if it touches.

    .Note: Can only be used by Ichigo.
    .Note: Must be a lava pool/source nearby.
    .Note: The user can only use this jutsu twice per battle.
    .Note: The user must be at least at sannin lvl to use this jutsu.
    .Note: The user must have completed fire/earth/lava.


    ~Approved~ Made it 3 disk and up to mid-range.

    ================================================== ====================
    (Yoton: Kyousei Yougan Henkaku) - Lava Release: Great Lava Upheaval
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of lava from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.

    .Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    .Note: The user must be at Sage lvl.
    .Note: In order to perfom this jutsu the user must have mastered Fire/Earth.


    ~Declined do not resubmit~ OP. Short-long range, no hand seals, no restriction on the location at which you summon it (could be 0.0001 cm above the opponent), and you can cancel it instantly? I think it's self explanatory why I'm not allowing you to re-submit.

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    Feel free to edit any restrction's or help to approve my jutsu's thanks in advance.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sono Sutago, Cepheus) | The Five Stars, Cepheus
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: N/A (+10 to Rain techniques, -10 to Fire techniques)
    Description: Cepheus is a unique Kusarigama that was crafted by a legendary weapons smith in Amegakure during Hanzo the Salamander's reign. The forger created the weapon as a gift to Hanzo as a symbol of respect and obedience. It was created using a rare and powerful metallic alloy known only to this legendary weapons smith. The sharpness of the sickle is unrivaled and the metal is incredibly strong rendering the weapon indestructible. The most unique feature of the kusarigama is that rather than having a single weight and chain attached to the sickle, it has five chains each with a spiked weight at the end. These weights represent the five stars of the Cepheus constellation which is named after the Greek King Cepheus. By creating this weapon for Hanzo to represent the constellation the weapons smith was showing his recognition of Hanzo as his King. At the beginning of the chains near the handle of the sickle are specialized chain links that are circular rather than ovular. These are made to fit onto the fingers of the wielder's hand. The rings allow each chain and weight to be manipulated by a single finger letting the wielder manipulate all five weights at the same time and independent of each other. The level of difficulty in using the weapon is high and requires someone experienced in kusarigama-jutsu to wield effectively. The sickle portion is fairly large and well crafted, but not much different in style or size than the sickle seen on Hanzo's standard kusarigama. A final feature of the weapon was that the weapons smith imbued it with chakra from the Great White Salamander, Talaya. The strong chakra empowers the wielder by increasing the effectiveness of their rain techniques. While rain techniques are enhanced, fire techniques are inversely weakened. A final feature of the weapon is that due to the imbued salamander chakra, when a person who hasn't signed the Salamander contract tries to hold it, a slime is excreted from the weapon causing it to slip out of that person's hands.
    -Can only be wielded by a person who has signed the Salamander contract.
    -User gains 10 damage to rain techniques.
    -User loses 10 damage to fire techniques.
    -Indestructible, but can't cut through everything.

    (Talaya Summoning for reference:
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Talaya) | Summoning Technique: Talaya
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Considered to be the creator of Amegakure's rain style, Talaya is one of the most powerful salamanders known. She is considered a matriarch by other salamanders and is one of the three great salamander warriors along with Kasei and Ibuse. Her calm and cooling nature has made her one of the few beings capable of controlling Kasei's temper. She is a benevolent white salamander of similar size to Ibuse and has an elemental affinity for water. Talaya's body constantly channels water chakra into the sky causing a constant rain storm in a large area around her that covers the battlefield. She is able to use all the rain techniques up to S-rank and has one unique S-ranked attack in which she causes the rain over the opponent to take the form of a giant salamander which crashes down on the target with its mouth open, swallowing them in a torrent of rain water. This can be used twice per battle and counts towards the three move set. Like Ibuse, and other salamanders, she is capable of tunneling through the ground.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Rain storm covers the battlefield and remains as long as Talaya is on the field.
    -Rain techniques count towards one of the three moves per turns.


    ~Approved~ Well done.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by -Tauburn- View Post
    (Raiton: Raitoninguhōn)- Lightning: Lightning Horns
    Type: Deff
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid (from weapon used with)
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will focus lightning chakra into a weapon, then throw the weapon towards the opponent(s), once the weapon lands the lightning springs out from the weapon with a burst like shape in every direction, begining thin and razor sharp, stabbing through the opponent with easy.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    (Suiton: Kosametsuki)- Water: Drizzling Moon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The use will focus their water chakra into a blade, then release it sending dozens of petal shaped water blasts from the blade at the opponent once swung. These petals are razor sharp and can slice a tree in half.

    ~Declined~ OP for B-rank and where are the restrictions?

    For these next two i am now the owner of the Bat contract.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=106633

    (Batto: Battorijekuto)- Bat Style: Bat Reject
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: More advanced version of Bat Note, where the user wipes blood acrossed his shoes, then makes the tiger handseal and kicks, where the bat then appears and shots streight for the opponent from the users foot.
    - Must have signed the Bat contract,
    - Must have approvel to use from -Tauburn-.
    Bat Reject

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?
    Sorry i meant to edit these with restrictions.

    (Raiton: Raitoninguhōn)- Lightning: Lightning Horns
    Type: Deff
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid (from weapon used with)
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: The user will focus lightning chakra into a weapon, then throw the weapon towards the opponent(s), once the weapon lands the lightning springs out from the weapon with a burst like shape in every direction, begining thin and razor sharp, stabbing through the opponent with easy.
    - Usable 4 times per battle.
    - The weapon used from has to be a bladed weapon. (kunai, sword, shuriken, etc..)
    - Must be taught by -Tauburn-

    ~Declined~ How would your weapon know it's close to the opponent ~__~? Use hand seals.

    (Suiton: Kosametsuki)- Water: Drizzling Moon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The use will focus their water chakra into a blade, then release it sending dozens of petal shaped water blasts from the blade at the opponent once swung. These petals are razor sharp and can slice a tree in half.
    - Can be used 3 times per battle.
    - Only usable with a sword.
    - Can only use if taught by -Tauburn-

    ~Approved~

    (Batto: Battorijekuto)- Bat Style: Bat Reject
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: More advanced version of Bat Note, where the user wipes blood acrossed his shoes, then makes the tiger handseal and kicks, where the bat then appears and shots streight for the opponent from the users foot.
    - Must have signed the Bat contract.
    - Must have approvel to use from -Tauburn-
    - No Taijutsu in the same turn, and following tun.
    Bat Reject


    ~Declined~ I still feel this one is far-fetched and unrealistic.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Bijuu : Sabureoni toutatsu) - Tailed Beast Technique : Sand Demon's Arrival
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 35
    Damage points : 70
    Description : When this technique is in play, sand that can be found around the field starts manifesting the shapes of ghouls made out of sand. This happens due to the presence of the Shukaku's chakra being exposed to the surrounding. These ghouls will attack anything that is a threat to the user. Despite being made out of sand, these ghouls travel very fast through the air by turning into sand particles and drift through the air. The number of ghouls determines the size of each and every one of the ghoul. The more ghouls there are, the smaller they are. On average, ten sand ghouls would be the size of a regular human being, a single ghoul could be the size of the Complete Shukaku.

    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Must be in Incomplete Form at the least
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used by the Jinchuuriki of the Ichibi
    Note : Sand ghouls are unable of performing sand techniques

    ~Declined~ Give me a fix number of ghouls you can make, and what they can withstand if attacked. Also, do they reform?

    (Suna : Assakuheki) - Sand Style : Compression Burst
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 35
    Damage points : 70
    Description : The user is capable of compressing individual sand particles very tightly together through the user's chakra. Adding a pinch of the user's fire chakra enables the particles to get excited and be knocking against each other like crazy. With the formation of a single handseal, the user is able to release it and cause a burst of sand that has the capability to pierce through flesh if hit short-range from it due to the tremendous speed it is shot at. This is much like having sand explode.

    Note : Must be a sand user
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : No other sand techniques can be used in the same turn
    Note : Able to hurt the user if used within short-range of self

    ~Declined~ I think I was clear already, no more explosion jutsus. You wouldn't believe the amount that are currently accepted, I can easily label any "exploding" jutsus with: similar technique already exist.

    (Suna : Bousui) - Sand Style : Waterproof
    Type : Supplementary
    Rank : B
    Range : N/A
    Chakra cost : 25
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : After having performed a row of four handseals and spreading the user's chakra around the user's sand, a layer of chakra forms around the sand particles. Much like how a ninja is able to walk on water without getting wet, the sand does the same too. When water attempts to come into contact with the user's sand, it will go around it or go through it like normal without having the sand get wet. Despite this, this does not make the sand hundred percent waterproof. Water which is shot at a high pressure, is able of making contact with the sand by breaking the chakra layer.

    Note : Lasts for 3 turns
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used on sand and no other material
    Note: Because the user needs to keep infusing chakra into his sand to keep this technique active, he can only perform a total of 2 jutsus every turn.
    Note : Water techniques B-rank and below do not have the capability at all to break through the chakra layer

    ~Approved~ If you're unhappy with the changes, VM I'll declined it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Gofuu Kekkai | 4 Corner Perimeter Barrier Seals
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long (wherever the seals are place)
    Chakra Cost: 25 ( 5 per chakra seal ) ( 5 to activate the barrier)
    Damage Points: -
    Description: This is a fuuinjutsu technique designed to put up a detection barrier over an area connected to the Ninja who put it up. It involved placing 4 seals, usually a simple Kanji for North, South, East, West in their proper position in relations to each other, to form the four corners of a square spread out to up to 1 mile wide (long range). Once these kanjis are put in place, which can be done through tags or carving or writing out the kangis out onto proper surfaces the caster must make their way to the approximate center of the “Square” and form a set of 2 hand seals to finally activate the barrier. Once this is done, the caster becomes aware of all chakra sources and signature within that zone, as well as their relative position within the zone. If asleep, the caster will immediately be awakened by a chakra source walking into the area, etc… This is perfect to set up if one wishes to sleep in enemy territory where danger might sneak up on them or such situations. If the caster leaves the square, than the user must once more perform the hand signs to once again reactivate the detection barrier.
    - Can only be use twice per battle.
    - Can't be used to get out of Genjutsus.
    - Re-activating the technique counts as a move.
    - The seals required for this technique can't be placed before the beginning of the match.

    ~Approved~ Added a few notes.


    (Genjutsu: Hekishoku) - Illusion Technique: False Show

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A (whatever the range of the other jutsu is)
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:A tactical Genjutsu that sweeps over the opponent with the belief that the user is able to use Techniques that they would normally not have. For example, one could mask their moves to create a Fire Technique as a Lightning Technique, and even use Wood Jutsu as a cover-up for wires.
    Note: Can only mask 3 times per battle.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Hair spike jutsu(hea gosunkugi no jutsu)
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: 20
    Descripton:The user fings his or hair twords the front and useing chakra the user shoots about 20 spiked shaped hairs twords the enemey if hit the enemey stunged this juts can be used till the user is out of chakra

    ~Declined~ Similar Cannon technique already exist.

    Death ray jutsu (oujou rei no jutsu)
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 25
    Descripton:the user charges his or her finger and sind a blast of chakra twords the enemey Note this jutsu can be stronger using the elements such as fire wind lightning ect and in that case the jutsu would be B or higher

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    Virus crusher cloud (uirusu assaiki kumo no jutsu)
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack/virus
    Range: timed
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage Points: n/a
    Descripton:the user blows out a cloud of spores that inter the enemey blood streame 1st makeing the enemey confused then 5 minets later lost of sight then another 5 minets later lost of morte skills this jutsu takes about 15 minets to be compleet the user should use this jutsu at the start of the battle or a last jutsu befor no charka is gone

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Spores fall under the scope of Custom Elements, do not resubmit such jutsu.

    Black sword cutter (kuroi subeta katta no jutsu
    Rank: B
    Type: attack/weapon
    Range: short/long
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage Points: 40
    Descripton The user pulls out a small sword or kuni uering chakra a black blade is forme with this jutsu the user can hold it as long as the user has chakra this jutsu can sllice thrugh flash and bone

    ~Declined~ Very poor description, hard to read. Re-word it properly and re-submit.

    sound wave chime (yowakusuru nami chaimu no jutsu)
    Rank: B
    Type: attack
    Range: short/long
    Chakra cost: 35
    Damage Points: 40
    Descripton the user pulls out a chime that dings a really loud wave of sound twords the enemey if hit the enemey will be knocked out for 5 minets

    ~Declined~ Sound jutsus are very restricted and require special biographies to use.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I had to delete it. I have a new idea but it will yake some time to realize
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [yakekoge] scorch realease:mini scorch rasengan
    rank:d
    Type:Attack
    range:short
    chakra:40
    damage:45
    description: The user forms a beginners rasengan [like the one khonahamoru used against the pain]and puts in some scorch power in it so it glows white and when it is used on an opponent it causes 1st degree burns on where ever you hit it and causes them to lose all feeling in that area.
    notes: can be used 4 times in a battle
    if used by gennin or low level ninja it will wear you out quickly if over used.

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ No Rasengan variations will be approved. There's plenty of them already.

    lightning realease:small storm bolts
    rank:d
    type:attack
    range:short
    chakra:30
    damage:50
    description: The user forms storm chakra into his/her hand and unleashes it in little bolts [for those of you who have played infamous it is like cole's primaray attack] when it hits the opponent it can shock them and make them have muscle spasms and if focused enough it can even push the opponent back.
    notes: this attack can never be powerful enough to block a attack above d rank or go through an opponent unless you are a high level shinobi and use it to a high degree.

    ~Declined~ D-rank, really? First, look at the official template on the first page for custom submission. Secondly, you need a storm bio to use and submit storm release CJ. Go read the rules for this is your only warning, next time you'll be banned from this thread for a week.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My last submission was on the 12th http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=4753 so new cjs!

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr. House View Post
    (Suiton:Hakidasa shizuku) - Water Release: Spew Droplets
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 (If A) - 35 (If S)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will basically blow out huge amounts of driplets infuzed with a lot of chakra into the air, thus nullifying the incoming fuuton jutsu by materializing with it's molecules, thus making the molecules heavier, thus forcing the jutsu on the ground, creating a pond.
    Notes:
    -If the user decides to emit S-ranked, it will only be able to nullify an A-ranked wind techs, but If the user decides to blow out an A-ranked, it will nullify a B-ranked fuuton jutsus.
    -the user can decide as how much water driplets he'd like to emit, thus having an A-ranked driplets, or S-ranked driplets.
    -Being able to release high qualities of chakra, the user needs to be Sannin or above
    -Need to be mastered water
    -Only taught by Dr. house

    ~Declined~ Restrictions on it's usage?

    (Suiton:Hakidasa shizuku) - Water Release: Spew Droplets
    Rank: A-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30 (If A) - 35 (If S)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will basically blow out huge amounts of driplets infuzed with a lot of chakra into the air, thus nullifying the incoming fuuton jutsu by materializing with it's molecules, thus making the molecules heavier, thus forcing the jutsu on the ground, creating a pond.
    Notes:
    -If the user decides to emit S-ranked, it will only be able to nullify an A-ranked wind techs, but If the user decides to blow out an A-ranked, it will nullify a B-ranked fuuton jutsus.
    -the user can decide as how much water driplets he'd like to emit, thus having an A-ranked driplets, or S-ranked driplets.
    -Being able to release high qualities of chakra, the user needs to be Sannin or above
    -Need to be mastered water
    -Can be used twice
    -Only taught by Dr. house

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Elder Connor (Shōkan: Erudākonā)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Connor is thee oldest Orangutan and is an expert in Lightning Jutsu and can use all up to A rank. He cannot perform any Taijutsu as he is too old but is the same size as Gamabunta but much slower. Another advantage of having Connor on the field is he acts as a catalyst for Raiton chakra and if the user is within short range adds to the lightning damage by +15. He also increases the speed for all Lightning jutsu as the Raiton chakra is gathered faster the user requires less handseals. Like all Orangutan he can harden his hairs as a defense but due to repeatedly doing this and his age his hairs are constantly spiked and act as a constant defense.
    Restrictions
    • Can only be summoned once per battle
    • Will stay on the field for 3 turns
    • Can only be summoned if the Orangutan contract has been signed.


    Resubmitting - edited.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Mizu pa-ji) Water Release: Water Purge
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 (-40 to user)
    Description: First the user releases his/her own chakra in the surrounding area and creates a water dome or sphere( incase the opponent is in mid-air) of 15-35 feet in diameter(depending on the range) enclosing the opponent inside it. Then the user forcibly drains all the water from the dome/sphere. Any living creature trapped within the dome/sphere is killed in few seconds, losing all the fluid from their body.

    -can be used once.
    -cannot use A-rank or above water jutsu's for next 2 turn.
    -Only -Avenger- can use it.
    Note: i'm not sure about the damage points, as it kills the opponent.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist, it's one of mine
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Katon: Kyousei Enko Hisaki ) - Fire Style: Great Arc Flames
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user raises his hands into the sky and creates a large ball of fire in his hands , then the user smashes it into the ground . The ball of fire would explode outwards as a great blast of fire which rushes at the target upon impact with the ground , the user would be unaffected as it explodes outwards and towards the direction of the target .

    -Unable to use other katon jutsus during the same turn
    -Can only be used 3 times per fight
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho


    ~Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon: Za Biggu Banggou No Bakuha) Fire Release: The Big Bang Explosion
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user first will gather great amount of his katon chakra and he put all his chakra on a hand of him's ,as the chakra channeld into the hand the user releases it into a small fire ball that will still be in touch with his hand as a laser or something then the user blasts it from his hand into a straight way towards his opponent
    -can only be used 2 times
    -the user can't use any katon chakra on the same turn or the next'
    -the user can't use any technique that required hand seals at the same turn
    - the user can't use any cusotm jutsu at the same turn or the next one

    ~Declined~ OP and mis-restricted. I will never approved anything remotely related to instantenous and this jutsu being a "laser or something" fits that description. Also, forbidden jutsu need to be restricted with physical drawbacks.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    suiton: mizu tekishutsu ( water style water extraction)
    Type:supplemntary
    Rank:C
    Range:long-short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:n/a
    Description: the user will make 3 hand seals and focas his chakra into the ground useing his chakta he will force up any traped water beneth the ground to surface ( only enough to make the ground flooded a little bit ) giving the user a water soruce
    note: can only be used 3 times per battle
    note: the water only reachs as high as the users feet

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Starting now, you are only allowed 3 submissions per week.

    Thank you all.

     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I am re-posting just to make sure everyone sees and understand that the new limit is now set at 3 submissions per week.

    Pass the word people.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    All done now

    Have fun re-spamming it

    Keep in mind the new 3 submissions per week rule !

     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submissions starting on the 10/24/2011 ending on the 10/30/2011
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade Hyuga View Post
    (Kuchoiyse: Toro)-Summoning Technique: Toro the great bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Toro is the boss of the bulls he is normaly agitated when summoned and would at times slap the user with his tail for summoning him. He is the bull associated with earth and is around 7ft tall his horns are able to shoot off and grow back in very short time like all bulls, he can stomp his hooves and increase an earth jutsu by 20 dp, and up 1 rank

    (Kuchoiyse: Riko)-Summoning Technique: Riko the fire bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Riko is the bull associated with fire and has the same attitude as Toro, he also hates being summoned even more than Toro. He is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back. His ability it he can manipulate any fire jutsu and make it bigger adding 15 dp to any fire jutsu

    (Kuchoiyse: Aero)-Summoning Technique: Aero the wind bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Aero is the bull associated with Wind and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disapear into the wind and strengthen the users wind jutsu by one rank.

    (Kuchoiyse: Marina)-Summoning Technique: Marina the water bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Marina is the bull associated with water and is more level headed than the other bulls and also the only female bull she is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off her horns and grow back, Her unique ability is that she can Sink into any water source and increase its damage points by 10 points.

    (Kuchoiyse: Zeek)-Summoning Technique: Zeek the lightning bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Zeek is the bull associated with lightning and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disperse into lightning and go into the clouds to enhance the users lightning so moves that need to send lightning into the air can be automatic since he is lightning in the air.

    -Only two bulls can be summoned per battle
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Each bull lasts 4 turns
    -After the bull has left the user cant summon it and is limited to only B-Rank of that element for 2 turns

    ~All Declined~ Place your restrictions under each individual submission and personalize those restrictions. I've seen some very OP stuff (+20 damage point for example) and all their abilities need to be restricted.
    Re-Submitting

    (Kuchoiyse: Toro)-Summoning Technique: Toro the great bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Toro is the boss of the bulls he is normaly agitated when summoned and would at times slap the user with his tail for summoning him. He is the bull associated with earth and is around 7ft tall his horns are able to shoot off and grow back in very short time like all bulls. His main ability is he can merge with the ground and boost earth attacks by 5 dp
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Every now and then the user will take 10 direct damage from him being summoned
    -Toro stays on the field for 4 turns
    -He may not be summoned until the battle has carried on 3 moves
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank earth for 3 turns


    (Kuchoiyse: Riko)-Summoning Technique: Riko the fire bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Riko is the bull associated with fire and has the same attitude as Toro, he also hates being summoned even more than Toro. He is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back. His ability it he can manipulate any fire jutsu and make it bigger adding 5 dp to any fire jutsu
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Riko stays on the field for 4 turns
    -He may not be summoned until the battle has carried on 2 moves
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank Fire for 3 turns

    (Kuchoiyse: Zeek)-Summoning Technique: Zeek the lightning bull
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Zeek is the bull associated with lightning and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disperse into lightning and go into the clouds to enhance the users lightning so moves that need to send lightning into the air can be automatic since he is lightning in the air.
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -Zeek stays on the field for 4 turns
    -After he has left the field the user is limited to B-Rank lightning for 3 turns

    Please edit if needed

    ~All Declined~ When re-submitting customs, you need to put the added part in bold or explain what you took out from the original.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton:Raikou Ridairekushon (lightning Redirection)
    Rank:S
    type: Defence/Offense
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage points:10-80

    Description:This technique allows the user to absorb lightning into their body as energy, then release it in a more desirable direction.The user creates a pathway for a lightning attack used against him with the fingertips and redirects the raiton chakra/energy
    through their arm to the shoulder, then down into the stomach. The stomach is the source of energy in your body; it is called the sea of Chi. From your stomach you direct it up again and one the other arm shooting it out in a blast of lightning.

    ~Restrictions~
    -Can only redirect S rank and below lightning techniques
    -Once used no raiton based techiques can be used for five turns
    -Can't be used while moving
    -Can only be used as of now by Swizzik & hawaiianmike
    -The rank,chakra cost and damage of this attack is the same as the attack its redirecting
    -Can only be used thrice









    ~Declined~ This jutsu as been done countless times already.

    Katon:kanetsu ridairekushon(Heat redirection)
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence/Offense
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage points:10-80

    Description:This technique allows the user to redirect heat from fire based attacks releasing it in a more desirable direction.The user creates a pathway for a fire attack's heat energy used against him with the fingertips and redirects the katon chakra/energy ,by the use of their chakra network,through their arm to the shoulder, then down into the stomach. The stomach is the source of energy in your body; it is called the sea of Chi. From your stomach you direct it up again and one the other arm shooting it out in a concetrated wave of pure heat that is capable of severely burning its victim.

    ~Restrictions~
    -Can only redirect S rank and below fire techniques
    -Once used no katon based techiques can be used for five turns
    -Can't be used while moving
    -Can only be used as of now by Swizzik & hawaiianmike
    -The rank,chakra cost and damage of this attack is the same as the attack its redirecting
    -Can only be used thrice






    ~Declined~ Since the lightning one was already made, you do not own the patent to this jutsu, hence you can't make copies of it for different element.

    Heart Sense (chuushin Kansei)
    Rank:B
    Type:Suplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:25(+10 for each turn active)
    Damage points:N/A

    Description:The user focuses chakra in their ears in order to enhance their hearing.This enables them to locate and focus in their target and also block other sounds which enables them to find the target wherever they are on the battle field. The enhancement is so potent that it allows one to hone in on the sound of ones heartbeats hence its name.

    ~Restriction~
    -Extremely Loud noises can disrupt the viewers ability to sense their opponent
    -Sensory Overload can occur if a loud enough noise causing the user intense pain and stops completely the users sense of hearing for 3 turns
    -It takes a turn to hone in on target
    -Can only be used by Swizzik & Hawiianmike

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Cannons at that.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 10-27-2011 at 03:10 AM.

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