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    Red flesh cloud's choking out
    the morning sky, they said
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    was a lie. All forms of life
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Raiton: Chou no Ryoku) Lightning Release: The Psycho Threads
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user holds their hands out in front of them and sends out strings of their lightning chakra that wrap around the opponent, trapping them and causing a paralyzing effect while the threads touch them, due to the constant shocks to their nervous system the victim feels extremely drained after the technique ends and physical struggling increases the drained feeling. Along with either a partner, multiple partners who has been allowed to use this jutsu or shadow clones this technique can be used together on the same enemy to increase its holding power.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -User must remain still while using technique.
    -Can be used by multiple people at once to increase its power, 2 people make it S rank, 3 or more make it forbidden.
    -3 times per battle.
    Declined, do not resubmit


    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hone Assaiki) Summoning Technique: Bone Crusher
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, the user summons a huge hyena the size of gamahiro who is said to have the strongest jaws of any living hyena in the world. Like most other hyenas Bone Crusher is able to use genjutsu and his laugh places all opponents on the field in a movement restricting illusion as long as they hear it.
    -Bone Crusher can bite through anything up to S rank but can't use any elemental jutsu.
    -Due to the hyena's thick hides it takes S rank lightning to harm him
    -Must have signed the Hyena contract to use
    -Lasts for a maximum of 4 turns.
    Declined, rank the genjutsu ability and limit its usage aswell as stating it to be one of the three moves per turn usage.

    (Raiton: Taiyou furea) 
Lightning Release: solar flare

    Rank: S

    Type: offense/defense

    Range: long
    
Chakra Cost:40
    
Damage Points:N/A

    Description: The user does the required set of hand seals,then raises his or her both hands skyward While doing so,he or she continually expels lightning essence into the sky ,then with the help of solar based light,it produces a flash of light that douses the entire area and temporarily blinds unshielded eyes.This jutsu is mainly used for escapes or retreats. 

    -twice per battle and lasts for 1 turn

    -No A-rank raiton and above next turn.

    -both the user and target gets blurred vision as long this it active

    Declined, similar jutsu exists

    (Genjutsu: okashi sen) Illusionary Technique: Candy Beam
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User points at the opponent which places a genjutsu on them which makes it seem as if a pink beam of energy is fired from the user's finger at lightning fast speed which transforms the opponent into a candy version of themselves, paralyzing them since food can't move.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
    -3 times per battle.
    Approved

    (Raiton: Seishou Ringu) Lightning Release: Energy Rings
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user extends his right arm and points his middle and index fingers at the opponent Then, he fires powerful rings made out of condensed, solid lightning chakra at his enemy, trapping them by their arms, legs, and neck so that the user can attack them while the opponent is incapable of fighting back.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
    -twice per fight
    -rings last for 2 turns.
    Declined, do not resubmit
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hone Assaiki) Summoning Technique: Bone Crusher
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, the user summons a huge hyena the size of gamahiro who is said to have the strongest jaws of any living hyena in the world. Like most other hyenas Bone Crusher is able to use A rank genjutsu and his laugh places all opponents on the field in a movement restricting illusion as long as they hear it, twice per battle.
    -Bone Crusher can bite through anything up to S rank but can't use any elemental jutsu.
    -Genjutsu use counts as one of the 3 moves that turn.
    -Due to the hyena's thick hides it takes A rank lightning to harm him
    -Must have signed the Hyena contract to use
    -Lasts for a maximum of 4 turns.

    fixed, spoilered the others since im not resubmitting them.
    Approved
    -New ones

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kuintetto airon chuuseki) Summoning: Quintet of Iron Pillars
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: User summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars made of iron, connected to each other by chains to pin a target to the ground and crush them.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -Once per battle.
    -Can't have other summonings on the field when used.

    (Genjutsu: sagefuri) Illusionary Technique: Plummet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: User does 2 hand seals and places his opponent in a genjutsu that makes them feel as if the ground has droped out from under them and they are falling face first into a black hole and unable to move their limbs due to the gravity of the supposed black hole.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
    Both Declined do not resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Hōkai) - Water Release: Collapse
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will force a large amount of chakra in a water source on the field, making it impossible for anyone other then the user to walk on that water. Anyone standing on it by coating their feet with chakra (or any other body part), will helplessly fall into the water.
    Note: The chakra in the water disappear after one turn
    Note: Can only be used 5 times per match
    Note: Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha


    (Suiton: Shizukesa) - Water release: Serenity
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: short-long
    Chakra:40 (-15 every turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After making one handseals, the user will spread his water chakra throughout the field, increasing the moisture in the air. Both the user and his opponent can notice the change in the air’s density, but that change in itself doesn’t reveal the purpose of the jutsu. This dense air is a very advance variation of the “Chakra sensing rain technique”. Everything that moves above ground is felt by the user as long as he keeps the jutsu active. Only a master in both Rain and Water jutsu can perform this technique.
    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: Following turn no S rank or above water
    Note: Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha
    Both Approved

    (Fuuinjutsu: Shīru o furasshu) - Sealing Technique: Flush Seal
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will take a specially prepared tag and place it on thier body. Once applied, the seal releases its stored chakra into the user's body which radiates through the users chakra circulatory system, which regulare-regulates regular chakra flow and purges the chakra in impurities.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times
    Note: Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha and Scary Yamato
    Declined, describe it better please and describe "impurities better"

    (Genjutsu: Chikaku sekai) - Illusion Technique: Perceived World
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid (On ally)
    Type: Supplementary / Attack
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user injects chakra into their parietal lobe to make it believe it is receiving a painful stimuli. The body will then think it is in pain and respond naturally.
    -Cannot defend against tsukuyomi
    -The user feels the physical manifistation of the pain for the rest of the turn, causing slightly decreased function
    -Can only be used 3 times per match
    -cannot use another genjutsu in the same turn
    -Must wait a full turn before this can be used again
    -Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha and Scary Yamato

    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by KenseiTachikage View Post
    (Raiton:Kaminari-ryoku sutoraikā)- Lightning style: Lightning Force Striker
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The User does a handsign then the user holds his hand out in a front position as they use charge up there attack it gives off a crackling sound as lightning sparks from the palm of there hands that goes up to a 2 foot radius. When the user shot of this jutsu it makes the sound of a particle beam scaring the field and emitting lightning from it paralyzing anyone in a 3 foot radius that's not in the path of the beam.
    Note:User can't use A level or up lighting style jutsu
    Note:Can only be used three times in battle
    Note:User cant use this attack for two turns
    Note:Can only be taught by KenseiTachikage

    ~Declined~ I have trouble understanding this technique...

    (Raiton:Tōi raimei o naku) Lighting Style: Far Cry Thunder
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The User makes a handsign then thunder clouds form over the field the user draws in the natural lightning from the thunder clouds that covers the users body. Then the user takes the energy from his body and focuses it to there hands and mouth. Then the user is ready they fire off a three beams of light that move at 70 mph each and are about seven inches wide. When the attack makes impact with something they give off a curtain energy that causes the thunder clouds to strike the locations with lighting.
    Note:Can only be used Twice
    Note:Can only be taught by KenseiTachikage

    ~Declined~ Covering your body in natural lightning would kill you.
    ~Resub~

    (Raiton:Kaminari-ryoku sutoraikā) - Lightning Force Striker
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The User does a handsign then the user holds his hand out in a front of them. The jutsu gives off a crackling sound as lightning from the palm of there hands. When the user shot off this jutsu it scares the field behind it as it emits lightning that can paralyze anyone in a 3 foot radius of the jutsu.
    Note:User can't use A level or up lighting style jutsu.
    Note:Can only be used three times in battle.
    Note:User cant use this attack for two turns.
    Note:Can only be taught by KenseiTachikage.
    Declined, still isnt very well described

    (Raiton:Tōi raimei o naku) - Lighting Style: Far Cry Thunder
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The User makes a handsign then thunder clouds form over the field. Then the user takes the energy from his body and focuses it to there hands and mouth. Then the user is ready they fire off a three beams of light that move at 70 mph each and are about seven inches wide. When the attack makes impact with something they give off a curtain energy that causes the thunder clouds to strike the locations with lighting.
    Note:Can only be used Twice.
    Note:Can only be taught by KenseiTachikage.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    (Yukianesa) - Snow women
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Points: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Yukianesa is a long sword the wielder summons from a scroll.Yukianesa is a blade that was forged by the a person with the kekkei genkai Hyōton during the civil war in the land of water. The sword was used to amplify Hyōton style jutsu but can also allow the weilder use Hyōton style jutsu. Yukianesa manipulates water in the atmosphere to create ice.
    Note:Can only be Wielded by KenseiTachikage unless passed down.
    Note:Can only use Hyōton through the sword.

    Picture of the sword


    Declined, elaborate on the amplifying ability and the ability to manipulate water in the atmosphere to create ice cause this is just to vauge and the sword itself wouldnt do 80 damage
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Just to make it even more official, Fishman Karate is already a pending custom style reserved for the Gyojin Clan:

    Gyojin Clan

    (I'm doing this to avoid going through the process of VMing everyone who'd try and do customs related to Fishman Karate from the current One Piece arc)

    We'll be happy to accept some new member if/when the clan is approved
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by foamy View Post
    (kuchibashi Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Beak summoning
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user does a couple of handseals and a gaint beak comes out of the ground underneath you or your opponent closing around whichever the beak is extremly strong and can withstand most attacks if used agaist a opponent the birds tongue will wrap around the person then the bird will regurgitate its stomache acid into the beak the acid is very strong and can easily melt steel as for who this humming bird is only the boss of the humming birds knows for sure and when asked all he would say was he is a ancient bird who long ago lost the ability to fly and now lives underground
    -can only be used by foamy and those givin permission
    -must have signed humming bird contract
    -stays on the field one turn

    NOTE: this has nothing to do with bears i never mention bears so i have no idea why it was declined
    dunnah why i put it but either way Declined, do not resubmit

    (Kōton: Raikou Roddo) Steel Release: Lightning Rod
    Type: Attack/Supplementry/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: the user preforms three handseals then four steel rods come out of the ground around either them or there opponent these rods attract any lightning based attack and absorb the lightning once the rods have absorbed lightning the user can then preform the dragon,dog handseals and make lightning incircle the person inside protecting them from B ranked attacks or lower (C for fuuton) or he can preform the boar,dog handseals and the lightning will electicute anything in the center of the rods
    -Can only absorb up to A ranked lightning attacks
    -Can only be used by steel bios
    -Can only be used 3 times per match
    -Can only be taught by foamy
    Approved

    (Kōton: Bia Kansei) Steel Release: Bear Trap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: the user stomps there foot on the ground then creates several bear traps that are just under the surface the traps are stronger then normal and if triggered they can cut your leg clean off
    -Can only be used by steel bios
    -Can only be taught by foamy
    Declined, resubmit without the cutting leg clean off they have not got that capability

    (Kōton: Kōhana) steel release: steel flower
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: mid-long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: the user does 2 handseals then steel blade instantly come out of the ground and surround the opponent (looks kinda like a open flower when i come out of the ground) the blades then cut the opponent to shreds by closing (happens very quickly) the reason this cannot be used short range is because the blade are very long and if done is short range the user would be caught in it as well
    -can only be taught by foamy
    -can only be used by steel user bios
    Declined, do not resubmit
    looks kinda like this


    (Kōton: Kōkuro-n) steel release: steel clone
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: +10 taijutsu
    Description: the user creates a clone of themselves made out of steel the clone can only use steel release, taijutsu and kenjutsu since the clone is made out of steel is immune to wind and earth techs and can block water up to A rank (clone rusts if hit with S rank) steel clone is weak against fire and lightning (destroyed by B ranks for both)
    -must be a steel user
    -can only be used three times per battle
    -can only be taught by foamy
    Approved
    Note: i have learned the cannon tech from Thor

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=89958
    Quote Originally Posted by foamy View Post
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    (Kōton: shrapnel) steel release: shrapnel
    Type:Attack
    Rank: C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:30
    Description: the user touches a steel object and manipulates the steel molecules causing the molecules to expand and make object explode (no fire or anything like that) the steel debree shoots out in every direction and can cause severe damage to anyone near this can be done instantaneous (mean right after you touch the object) or timed for a couple of seconds later up to 20 seconds later (this depends on the amount of chakra used more chakra then quicker less the later)
    -must be steel user bio
    -can only be taught by foamy

    You do realize that it attacks you too, right? Whether it's instantly or delayed you also will have to block against that jutsu of yours as it's an indiscriminate attack. If that's what you want ~Approved~ if not resubmit with a more clearer description.

    (Kōton: rikiddo hagane) steel release: liquid steel
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: /
    Description: the user spits out a large amount of liquid steel at a opponent that will weigh them down if a large amount of water is used on the steel it will harden quickly and encase the person inside
    -can only be used my steel bios
    -can only be taught by foamy

    ~Approved~ however I edited so that it's a supplementary attack

    (Kōton: Kōhara) steel release: steel field
    Type:Supplementry
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: user claps there hands together then slams them on the ground and makes a 2 inch thick layer of steel over the entire battleground the ground is extremly smooth (also note that this will render a lot of earth jutsu usless such as the underworld swamp because you cant turn the steel into a swamp and hiding like a mole tech because you cant trun the steel to sand)
    -can only be used by steel bios
    -can only be taught by foamy
    -Neither the opponent nor the user can use low ranked earth jutsu's

    ~Approved~ howeved I edited bits

    (Kōton: Kōteien) steel release: steel garden
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user slams there foot on the ground steel grass and flowers pop up from the ground the "grass" is steel blades that when your opponent steps on them the cut deep into his feet immobilizes the opponent then with a single handseal you can make the pedals from the "flowers" fall off and attack your opponent
    -can only be used with steel release: steel field
    -can only be used by steel bios
    -can only be taught by foamy

    ~Declined~ what, no usage restriction? Be real.

    (Kōton: doragon) steel release: dragon
    Type: Offensive/defence
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: after 5 handseals a giant steel dragon will come out of the ground the dragons claws and teeth are strong enough to rip through bone with ease and its body is sturdy enough to handle most attacks with ease
    -requires a large source of metal to make this dragon
    -A rank fire or lightning can melt him
    -immune to most earth attacks (this is not including forbidden ones of these elements)
    -immune to taijutsu
    -can only be used by steel bios
    -can only be taught by foamy

    ~Declined~ again no usage restriction? These are S-ranked jutsu's, those are ALWAYS limited in usage.

    Note: finished my training with thor

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=89958
    (Kōton: Bia Kansei) Steel Release: Bear Trap
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: the user stomps there foot on the ground then creates several bear traps that are just under the surface
    -Can only be used by steel bios
    -Can only be taught by heavens blade

    (Kōton: Kōteien) steel release: steel garden
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: the user slams there foot on the ground steel grass and flowers pop up from the ground the "grass" is steel blades that when your opponent steps on them the cut deep into his feet immobilizes the opponent then with a single handseal you can make the pedals from the "flowers" fall off and attack your opponent
    -can only be used twice per match
    -cannot use anyother steel jutsu this turn or next turn
    -can only be used with steel release: steel field
    -can only be used by steel bios
    -can only be taught by heavens blade
    Both Approved
    Note: i fixed the bear trap one and i added restrictions for the flower wont be doing the dragon since thor seems to have it already

    (Kōton: kage shrapnel) steel release: clone shrapnel
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: this is a more advance version of the shrapnel tech in which a steel clone blows themself up using the same principle as the shrapnel tech. this tech does far more damage to the opponent do to the fact that the more metal will be flying around. the opponent wont be able to see this coming without a doujutsu.
    -Can only be used by steel clones
    -Can only be used by steel bios
    -Can only be taught by heavens blade
    Declined, do not resubmit
    note: yes i know this could potentially damaged me

    (Kōton: bodi ken) steel release: body blades
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range: short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: steel blades come out from the users body that can be used to slash the opponent the user can choose where the blades come out from
    -can only be taught by heavens blade
    -can only be used by steel user bios
    Approved
    looks kinda like this



    (Komodo doragon Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Komodo dragon summoning
    Summoning Animal: komodo dragon
    Scroll Owner: heavens blade
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    NOTE: These are not actual dragons and they are real they are part of the monitor lizard family
    Declined, Lizard contract exists and is by riku
    Note:i will be changing my name to heavens blade during the name change event so the reason they say can only be taught by heavens blade is because that will be my new name im not stealing these from someone else
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Lightning Release: Wolf Fang Fist-(Raiton: Ookami kiba genkotsu)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60(-5 for each blast)
    Description: The user will gather a vast amount of chakra into their hand and palm they can then hit the opponent with stong lighnting blasts that can either be held into the fist for a devistating short range attack or they can be channeled out of the fist into a blast of lighnting. The lightning will get a tiny bit weaker with each hit but the first three hits have enough force to numb the part of the body hit for 1 turn. The lightning blast is about the size of a fist.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    ~Only HightimesHoward and who he teaches can use this~

    Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Wave(Raiton: Magunechikku nami)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points:
    Description: The user forms a wave of electricity that eminates from their body. It can then be release into a feild, any metal/metallic object that the feild touches becomes magnitised and is then pulled to the ground due to the magnetic feild the earth gives off. This jutsu works in the same way an electro magnet works it reorders the Positive and Negitive atoms so that the positive are on one side and the negitive are on the other both stacked in neat rows. This gives the metal object a magnetic pull that restranes it to the ground. It can magnitize most metals as it realigns the positive and negitive atoms. The wave of electricity has no effect on living beings
    ~This is not Magnitism release as that uses the magnatism to control an object this just magnitizes it~
    ~Magnitism lasts 3 turns~
    ~Can only be used 3 times in a battle~
    ~Only HightimesHoward and who he teaches can use this~
    Declined, do not resubmi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Senkou Ken (Flash Blade)

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user draws his/her/it's sword then dashes toward the target and unleashes a rapid series of slashes, cutting the opponent into pieces.

    NOTE: This technique due to the speed at which it is performed is undodgeable.Raiton chakra can be flown through the blade to make it almost unblockable.
    Declined, do not resubmi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Katon : bakuhatsuteki shitai )fire style: explosive body
    Type: Attack-Defense
    Rank: s
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: the user gather all his katon chakra and then he put it around his body and then as he is ready and the target is next to him he release all the chakra making a huge explosion that will kill any one at mid or short range
    -can only use twice per turn
    -can't use any fire jutsu at the same time
    -don't need any handseals

    (Katon : noudouteki funkazan )fire style: active volcano
    Type: Attack
    Rank: s
    Range: mid long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: the user put his doton chakra into the ground and then he shape the ground into a huge volcano and then he put a huge amount of his katon chakra into the volcano and by that he will throw a huge amount of lava into his opposite nad to protect him he make a wall from ground so the lava won't reach him
    -can only use twice per turn
    -can't use and katon jutsu at the same turn
    - the user must make the dragon +dog and the rat handseals

    (Raiton :shokkingu tsunami )lightning style: shocking tsunami
    Type: Attack
    Rank: s
    Range: mid- long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: the user release a huge amount of his suiton chakra creating a huge wave that like the tsunami that destroyed japan couple of times and then as he make the wave he put all his raiton chakra into the wave making it shocking wave that will kill the opposite if it touched him , also this wave can reach to the middle of the sky
    can only use twice per turn
    can't use any suiton jutsu at the same turn
    can't use any raiton jutsu at the same time

    ~All declined~ OP
    re submitting

    Type: Attack-Defense
    Rank: s
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: the user gather all his katon chakra and then he put it around his body and then as he is ready and the target is next to him he release all the chakra making a huge explosion that will kill any one at mid or short range
    -can only use twice per turn
    -can't use any fire jutsu at the same time
    -don't need any handseals
    -must mastered katon
    -must masteed aact katon
    -must know how to control his katon chakra by a battle training or something on it


    (Katon : noudouteki funkazan )fire style: active volcano
    Type: Attack
    Rank: s
    Range: mid long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: the user put his doton chakra into the ground and then he shape the ground into a huge volcano and then he put a huge amount of his katon chakra into the volcano and by that he will throw a huge amount of lava into his opposite nad to protect him he make a wall from ground so the lava won't reach him
    -can only use twice per turn
    -can't use and katon jutsu at the same turn
    - the user must make the dragon +dog and the rat handseals
    -must mastered katon
    -must masteed aact katon
    -must know how to control his katon chakra by a battle training or something on it


    (Raiton :shokkingu tsunami )lightning style: shocking tsunami
    Type: Attack
    Rank: s
    Range: mid- long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 70
    Description: the user release a huge amount of his suiton chakra creating a huge wave that like the tsunami that destroyed japan couple of times and then as he make the wave he put all his raiton chakra into the wave making it shocking wave that will kill the opposite if it touched him , also this wave can reach to the middle of the sky
    can only use twice per turn
    can't use any suiton jutsu at the same turn
    can't use any raiton jutsu at the same time
    -must mastered raiton
    -must masteed aact raiton
    -must know how to control his raiton chakra by a battle training or something on it
    -must know how to control his suiton chakraby a battle training or something on it
    All Declined, do not resubmi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Karasu Kawarimi no Jutsu (Crow Substitution Jutsu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/ Defence
    Range: Long-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: When attacked, the user disperses himself into a flock of crows and re-materializes into his original self anywhere in mid or long range to his previous evade the attack and he must re-materialize into his original self within 10 seconds.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    ~Can only be used by Itachi bios.
    ~Can only be taught by DeanMinatoNamikaze.
    ~User must re-materialize within 10 seconds or stay as a flock for 1 turn.
    ~Requires hand seal(half tiger).
    Approved

    Ninpō: Genso no Senbon no shawā(Ninja Arts: Elemental Senbon Shower)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60(30 if dodged half way)
    Description: The user streams any of his elemental chakra into an umbrella and hurls it into the sky then forms the half tiger seal to cause the senbons coated with anyone of his elemental chakra to rain on his opponent.
    ~The effect of each element varies(except water and earth).
    Fire Chakra: Burns the skin as well as pierces the skin of the opponent.
    Wind Chakra: Pierces right through the skin of the opponent.
    Lightning Chakra: Numbs and pierces the part of the opponent it touches.
    Earth and Water Chakra: Stuns the part of the opponent it hits.

    ~Only one elemental Chakra can be streamed at a time.
    ~Must have an umbrella and must know (Jouro Senbon: Sprinkling Needles).
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle and any element can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by DeanMinatonamikaze.
    ~User must also state which element he/she is using.
    [Please feel free to edit where needed and i used google translate].

    Declined, do not resubmi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    (Doton: Ōkuninushi no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Master of the Land Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (-15 to user from chakra strain)
    Description: The user will perform the following hand seals Boar - Tiger - Dragon and then by manipulating their chakra the user causes a massive amount of land to errupt upwards creating a stone figure of a man with long spikey hair bearing his arms to his sides where large platou rises with it. This is large enough to change the entire battlefield being one the most advanced earth techniques in existance. At its base bares riveens where water will flow into the base and into the deep earth beneath effectively draining the field of water. This technique has the symbolic nature of the earth titan beconing the water that drains into the earth as if hes welcoming it into his clutces. It also amplifies the nature of earth and water showing their enternal struggle to best each other. The total scale of this technique stretches outwards 100 meters and skywards 50 meters. However this technique demands great skill and chakra making it a technique that requires the user to be Kage Rank to use.
    Note: The user can only perform this technique only once
    Note: The user can only use B rank and below earth techniques the following turn.
    Note: Can only be used by a Kage rank or above ninja and be taught by Zenryoku.

    ____________
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Lightning Release: Light Staff(Raiton: Raitosutaffu)
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user makes both hands into fists and put them together at the thumbs, channeling Raiton into the hands. The user then separates his hands and creates a staff of Raiton capable of crushing rocks and dent steel.
    ~Can only be used three times per battle
    ~It is important that the user does the proper hand movements in order to shape the Raiton into a staff.
    ~Lasts for three turns
    Declined, define steel

    Lightning Release: Light Chain(Raiton: Kei Kusari)
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user does the same hand movements for the Light Staff, but instead of just separating them, they make a yanking motion to create a chain of Raiton capable of immobilizing the enemy and crushing rock
    ~Lasts for three turns
    Declined, similar jutsu exists
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Meiton:Akuma no tsubasa) Dark release: Devil's wings
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:The user performs a single hand-seal, and focuses dark chakra into his back. After doing this, the user creates two wings out of the chakra, which are fully flap-able and allow him to fly.

    Note: The user must keep the hand-seal formed the entire time he is in the air. Failure to do this will cause him to fall.
    Note: The user can't use this on the first turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Polemarch.
    Declined, do not resubmi

    (Meiton:Kami no dairiseki) Dark release: Divine marble
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user raises his palm to the sky, and gathers dark chakra into his palm. He then shapes the chakra into a giant sphere, the size of a tree. Afterwards, he condenses the massive ball into the size of a marble, giving it an extremely high chakra concentration. The user then flicks the marble at the opponent. On impact, the marble will create a explosion that, is capable of creating a 10 meter hole in the ground.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: If the opponent is hit by the marble directly, because of the speed at which the marble is going, it will enter their body and, he or she will die, and take the full blast of the explosion.
    Note: If the blast does not hit the opponent directly, the user will die from the explosion.
    Note: If the explosion is somehow defended against, and the user does not take the explosion, he or she will be drained of all of their chakra.
    Note: May only be taught by Polemarch.
    Declined, do not resubmi

    (Meiton:Akuma no te) Dark release: Devil's fists
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user focuses dark chakra into his arms. He then shapes the chakra into two massive, black fists that are capable of ripping a tree out of the ground.

    Note: The user uses his chakra to control the hands, he does not need to move his arms.
    Note: May only be taught by Polemarch
    Need better restrictions

    (Meiton:Akuma no dairiseki) Dark release: Devil's Marble.
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user focuses dark chakra in his throat, and exhales a fast moving ball of dark chakra. As it moves, it gradually gets larger. On impact, or when it reaches maximum size (about 5 meters high) it explodes.

    Note:Can only be used twice per battle
    Note:Can only be used by Polemarch
    Declined, need better restrictions

    (Meiton:Wakamono no haru) Dark release: Spring of Youth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 20 (to the user)
    Description: After using Dark release: Inhaling Maw, to absorb at least 5 attacks, the user can place his hand on any person, or himself, and release the amount of chakra accumulated by inhaling maw, into a person, effectively replenishing their chakra, but due to the strain it puts on the user, it causes them to take 20 damage.-

    Note:Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by Polemarch
    Declined, do not resubmi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Raiton: tenka kanshouki tate)- Lighting Style: Lighting Absorber Shield

    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user is able to create a shield of lighting by releasing out all of his Raiton chakra out around him in a second, which will then absorb and deactivate any Lighting techique up to rank S which comes in contact with the shield which is 3 meters around the user in every direction, this also means it will absorb Kirin and there will be no damage done to the user.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: The user is not able to use any lighting techniques for the rest of the battle.
    Note: Can only be thought by Madara Tobi
    Declined, do not resubmi

    (Raiton: tenka bakudan kouu)- Lighting Style: Lighting Bomb Rain

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user first has to use Dragon Flame Jutsu to heat up the clouds and and make it thundering, he then creates small versions of chidori in each hand and rises them up, then as lighting from chidori is sent into the clouds then Lighting balls start to fall out of the dark clouds which explode whenever they hit the surface or an object, there is almost no chance to escape this jutsu and if hit damages the oponent critically. The user can also direct the positions where the lighting bombs fall.

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: This is basically another version of Kirin but slower and multiple parts instead of one
    Note: Can only be thought by Madara Tobi
    Declined, do not resubmi
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My Custom Fire Mode.

    Fire Mode: Kagutsuchi
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 120
    Damage: 60 (To User)
    Requirement: Uchiha Ace/Ali Bio.
    Description: User with continuous training and storing has stored large amount of Fire chakra in his body which he keeps stored in a seal (Similar to Tsunade). When Needed He releases the Seal which over comes all His Chakra types in the body and starts dominating. User can only use Fire Element from 5 Standard Elements. User is covered with a flaming Aura hot enough to evaporate water and consume wind jutsus at will. (Limits Mentioned Below)

    Consequences:
    1. User can’t use Wind, Water, Earth and Lighting for rest of the battle even after the mode ends.
    2. Lasts 4 turns after which user is left with 25% Chakra and all his abilities are gone.
    3. Manipulating of Opponents fire jutsus counts as a Move.
    4. No S rank in Fire or above in the turn of activation.
    5. User burns up his Body by introducing Moderate 3rd Degree Burns.
    6. User receives damage of 60 to himself.

    Abilities Gained:
    1. User can sense Heat presence from all distances with pin point accuracy.
    2. User can Manipulate Fire at his own will, even all his opponents fire jutsus(counts as 1 of 3 moves per turn).
    3. User can increase his movements by shooting jets of fire from his hands or legs(counts as 1 of 3 moves per turn).
    4. No Hand-seals required in performing of Fire jutsus.
    5. User becomes Immune to Wind jutsus and can consume Wind jutsus by burning them up.
    6. User becomes resistant to water as well (up to B rank) as they simple evaporate before coming in contact with user.
    7. User can withstand fire up to A-rank.
    Approved
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sealing Jutsu: Elemental Chakra Seal (Fuuinjutsu: Youso Chakra Inshou)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 0
    Description: The user places a seal on the opponent and performs one hand seal, causing the opponent to lose the ability to perform one type of elemental ninjutsu (Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, etc). The seal, embedding itself into the opponent's skin, turns into a sort of tattoo, which makes removal of the seal (until it naturally dissolves away by itself) extremely difficult.
    Note: The seal lasts for two turns (the turn in which it's placed and the following turn).
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Approved

    Summoning Jutsu: Infinite Seal Creation (Kuchiyose: Mugen Fuu Kurie-shon)
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After a quick succession of hand seals, the user slams their palm onto the ground, summoning forth a large quantity of seals (i.e. exploding tags, seals required for fuuinjutsu, etc.) which are scattered across the immediate area of the battlefield. If the user summons seals that must be triggered to activate (as in performing a hand seal), they are capable of making as few or as many of said seals activate.
    Note: Only one type of seal may be summoned using this technique (meaning the user can't summon multiple types of seals at once). However, if the user performs this technique again, they may summon a different type of seal then before.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    Sealing Jutsu: Seal Transfer (Fuuinjutsu: Inshou Isou)
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user claps their palms together which causes any seal of the user's choosing to appear on the palm of one of their hands. The user may touch a person or object with the palm that contains the seal, thus transferring it to said person or object. Once branded with the seal, it will become "tattooed" to the person, making it impossible for them to remove the seal without removing the part of their body that is branded with it.
    Note: Only one seal may be created at a time.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    Declined, do not resubmit

    NOTE: All of these jutsus were customs that I submitted last year, so if someone has made jutsus like these between then and now, I apologize in advance.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Fuuinjutsu: Hiraishin Yusou no Jutsu)- Flying Thunder God Conveyance Seal Technique
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 40-60
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user confines the jutsu of Flying Thunder God to the form of an easily transportable paper seal that the user carries on their person. This jutsu allows the user to "prime" the seal, meaning that the seal will teleport whatever it next touches to the location of a Flying Thunder God "destination" seal. The seal that this technique primes can be attached to a special Flying Thunder God kunai and then thrown. Upon contact with an object, the kunai will then teleport that object to a destination seal of the user's choosing. These seals can also be used to teleport previously-used jutsu (ie., a rock formation created by an an earth jutsu). Since this technique is simply a modification of a seal version of the Flying Thunder God technique, the number of its uses depends solely on the number of paper seals that the user has pre-prepared and on the user's chakra - there is no limit to the uses of the Flying Thunder God Technique. However, the larger the intended teleported object, the more chakra the user must put into "priming" the seal. The "primed" seals wear off after one turn; if the seal does not successfully come into an object within one turn of being primed, it must be primed again for further use.

    NOTE: This technique appears to not be restricted much. This is true; the usages of this technique are not restricted, partially because of the unrestricted nature of Flying Thunder God and of the relative simplicity of the idea behind this technique. However, the complexity behind successfully using this technique balances out its lack of usage restriction; the user must first mark a destination, then the user must prime the pre-prepared seal, then the user must make sure that the seal somehow comes into contact with something, then the user must teleport that object to the destination, and then the user must take advantage of the object's teleportation in battle. While easier to use jutsus - say, a big dragon-shaped fireball that burns up everything in sight - have restrictions on the number of their uses, this jutsu, due to the complexity of using it correctly and due to the technique on which it's based, does not and should not have a restriction on the number of its uses.

    ~Leaving for someone who knows more about sealing~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Takamagahara) ~ High Plain of Heaven
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn)
    Damage Points: -
    Description: This weapon consists solely on the hilt and guard of a katana. As soon as the user ''unsheaths'' it from the scabbard, he immediately flows his chakra trough the hilt and shapes it like a katana, making it seem the user is unsheathing a blade made of chakra. This weapon has two unique abilities:
    • The first is that it is intangible, meaning it can pass trough matter and won't be able to cut or do any kind of physical damage to the opponent, however, the opponent won't be able to know that just by looking at the sword (unless he possesses dojutsu).
    • The other one is that when when it passes trough a living organism, it disturbs its chakra flow by hitting the tenketsu points on the chakra pathway system.

    This sword was specifically made to do internal damage instead of physical damage in order to neutralize the opponent. This way the user could end a fight in a ''delicate'' manner, without spilling blood everywhere.


    ~Declined~ makes no sense as hurting the chakra points is still physical damage and it's contradictory to say it would pass through matter, but actually does such damage as you make a sword out of chakra, whick only possible if it's higely condensed and thus more or less physical. If it's not that the amount of chakra is just so low that it wouldn't damage anyone.

    (Takamagahara: Hiketsu) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Rejection
    Rank: A or S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: A-rank (30); S-rank (40)
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user will point Takamagahara towards an incoming technique. Then using the sword's ability to disturb chakra, will flow his chakra trough the sword in form of a pulse. As soon as the pulse reaches the tip of the sword, it will be sent forwards to collide with an incoming technique, dispersing its chakra and thus neutralizing it. It can defend from techniques up to S-rank and only one per usage.
    __________
    *A-rank is usable two times per battle on techniques up to S-rank
    *S-rank can only be used once per battle and can stop a forbidden rank technique.
    *Requires Takamagahara to use


    (Takamagahara: Heiwashugi) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Pacifism
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Using Takamagahara's ability to disrupt the chakra system, the user will perform a vertical slash with it, from the opponent's head to below it's stomach. This slash attacks directly the opponent's chakra flow, being able to stop it completely. If successful, it stops one's chakra flow two turns after being hit by this technique. An external source of chakra can re-activate the flow of chakra.
    __________
    *Usable three times per battle
    *Gap of one turn between usage
    *Requires Takamagahara to use
    *Based in (Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
    (Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.


    (Takamagahara Kinjutsu: Kaginoborizaka) ~ High Plain of Heaven Forbidden Technique: Key to Ascension
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user will first build up a great amount of chakra in Takamagahara and will stab it on the opponent or on himself, aiming for one of the Eight Inner Gates. By disturbing one's chakra flow on that point, the user and Takamagahara force the respective gate to open.
    One can either use this technique on himself or on the opponent. When done, whoever was forced to open a gate, will temporarily gain access to it during one turn, however there is a disadvantage to that: after the gates' effects wear off, on the next turn, their after-effects will be felt increased many times.
    The after-effect of the gate which was opened will be equal to the gate two levels above (4th Gate opened, after-effect will be the same as the 6th gate; 6th Gate opened, after-effect will be the same as if the 8th gate was opened: death.). If the 7th or 8th Gates were to be open with this method, one will have his Chakra Pathway System completely destroyed and will possibly die, without even being able to access it's powers, meaning it is completely useless for the user to try and open the last two gates if he doesn't know how to do it normally. Everything listed above will only happen if used on someone who can't control the Gates. If used on a Gates user, he will be able to control it normally, like if he had opened it himself.
    __________
    *Requires Takamagahara to use
    *Usable once per battle
    *No techniques based on Takamagahara next turn
    *If the user uses this on himself, he will get +5 per opened Gate


    ~All declined~ as the sword isn't approved.

    PS: if the sword is only a hilt and guard, how the hell are you going to place it in a scabbard as the only part of a sword that's in a scabbard is the blade?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Jiton: Gōrudenkunai) Magnetism Release: Golden Kunai
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The Fourth Kazekage will use his Magnetism Release to collect gold dust and form it into a kunai shape, which can then be used as a regular kunai. When this kunai is thrown, the user will form the Ram handseal, causing the gold dust to reverse it's magnetic effects on each other, making the kunai disperse into a cloud of gold dust surrounding the target. If any particle of the gold dust touches the target, they become magnetised.
    Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bio's
    ~Collecting the gold dust to form the kunai doesn't require handseals; like Gaara using sand
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    (Jishaku Ninpou: Ribingumagunetto) Magnetic Ninja Art: Living Magnet
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: (User)Short-Long (Target)Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After magnetising the target, the user will then form the required handseals, and all pre-existing magnetic material (kunai, shuriken, gold dust, iron sand, ect.) within range of the target will be drawn to them at great speeds, ninja weapons piercing the target, and sticking, and magnetic dust/sand forms puncture the skin at high speeds multiple times (as many grains of dust/sand are used for jutsu).
    Note: ~If the user is in the way of a magnitised object, they will be hit
    ~Only pre-existing objects will be drawn towards the target (ie. gold dust left from a jutsu, or a thrown shuriken)
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    ~Both declined~ gold dust and magnetizing are two independent skills, otherwise ever Jinton user in the manga would use Iron Sand, Gold Dust etc. So don't start saying you use gold dust to magnetize your opponent. So just magnetizing your opponent doesn't mean it's going to attract both Gold Dust and Iron Sand, not to mention unless you already collected some, it's not going to crawl out of the ground and you don't have a 3rd Kazekage bio, so you can't use Iron Sand either way.

    (Jiton: Ōgon no Zō) Magnetism Release: Golden Statue
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After magnitising the target, the user will form the required handseals and cause golden dust to collect on the surface of the target. The golden dust will then become denser and form a solid object (simmilar to Gaara`s Ultimately Hard Absolute Defence: Shield of Shukaku), making it so the target can`t move. While in this state, lightning can be conducted through the gold to make it more deadly, and A-rank and above fire can melt the gold, causing severe burns all over the targets body.
    Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bios
    ~If weapons are covered with the technique, they gain +10 attack
    ~Can only bind an opponent for 1 turn
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    (Jiton: Ōgon no Yoroi) Magnetism Release: Golden Armor
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+15 to physical attacks)
    Description: The user covers themselves with a layer of gold dust. This gold dust provides a defence against A-rank and below attacks, and thrown projectiles. However, this jutsu makes the user highly vunerable to lightning attacks (being conducted through the gold) and S-rank and above fire jutsu (melting the gold onto the user`s body). The user can send their gold dust in front of them at any point in the battle (while the armor is active), and create a shield to conduct up to A-rank lightning away from the user, or to defend against up to S-rank fire (melting the shield before reaching the user). The user can also reverse his magnetic field, sending the gold dust flying at high speeds in every direction (can harm the opponent if in short-range).
    Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bios
    ~The shield and reversing magnetic field counts as one of the three jutsu per turn
    ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

    ~Both declined~ these are practically Gaara's sand jutsu's, only changed into gold dust instead of sand.
     
         
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    (Hyouton: Gyouko Souhou)- Ice Release: Freezing Touch
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: A
    Tange: short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: -
    Description: With single handseal, the user is able to freeze any already existing water that is in contact with them, by infusing their ice chakra (mainly the wind part since water is already present).

    *Only works on natural water and B-rank and below water techs and doesn't work on humans*

    ~Approved~ howeve added a restriction

    (Hyouton: Aisu Boketsu)- Ice Release: Ice Grave
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Tange: short-long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user does three handseals and place their palm on the ground charging ice chakra into it and rapidly lowering it's temperature, freezing anyone underground if they don't emerge from the ground.
    If the user continue channeling this until next turn the ground will be frozen so hard that it will not be possible to use the earth for Earth Style jutsus for next three turns.
    - 3 times per battle

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~ ice users control ice and snow, however this falls more under the category of the CE Temperature and Frost Release
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Sakin Nami no Jutsu) - Greater Gold Dust Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: 20
    Description: Use to create Medium to large sized objects made of gold for attacking or Defense. No handseals required.
    Note: Can only be used by the 4th Kazekage.
    Note:Can only be taught by BloodLust Loki

    ~Approved~

    (Sakin Nami no Jutsu - Kinjitou Bunshin) - Gold Dust Style - Gold Dust Clone
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: (+10 when using Taijutsu)
    Description: An identical clone formed by gold dust. The gold dust clones can recover by absorbing more iron sand.
    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: Maximum of 3 clones can be created.
    Note: Can only be taught by Loki

    ~Declined~ Iron sand?~

    (Sakin Nami no Jutsu - Kinjitou Aigo) – Gold Dust Style- Gold Pyramid Protection
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 0
    Description: User, after making one handseal, creates an octahedron made of dense gold to protect the user from attacks. The Pyramid structure is the same as the pyramids of Egypt. The bottom half of the triangle is underground. A thick layer of earth that the user is standing on separates the Pyramid into two sections. Above and below the layer, is a hollowed out section with air pockets.
    Note: While inside the pyramid, the User cannot use any attacks other than Gold and Earth.
    Note: Can only be used by the 4th Kazekage.
    Note: Only lasts for 2 turns.
    Note: Can only be taught by Loki/Joker/Mathias

    On the surface, the pyramid looks like this.

    Underground, it looks the same but a mirror image.


    ~Declined~ because, well, you're trapped. To attack you will need to have to destroy the pyramid first and you can't see the opponent either unless you're a sensor or have the Byakugan. Also earth jutsu won't really work well either as the earth is trapped too. You completely sealed yourself, unless you want to seal you and the opponent, however being in short range in a closed off space with your opponent doesn't seem very cosy.

    (Sakin Nami no Jutsu - Sukuro-ru Kogane Washi) Gold Dust Style- Scroll Summoning of the Golden Eagle
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: User takes out a scroll that summons a large Golden Golden Eagle with a wingspan of 20 feet. When Summoned, the Golden Eagle instantly shoots Gold Feathers at the enemy. No Handseals required.
    Note: Stays on the field for 3 turns, before bursting into Gold Dust the user can manipulate.
    Note: Immune to Lightning B Rank and Below
    Note: Can only be used by the 4th Kazekage.
    Note: Can only be taught by BloodLust Loki & Joker


    ~Declined, do not resubmit~ he controls gold dust, not gold.

    Katon: Gouen Ryuuga (Fire Stlye: Ultra Dragon Fang Flame)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user will make 4 handseals. A fiery red aura will surround the user, who then immediately slams their hands onto the ground, sending ALL of their Katon Chakra into the earth. The ground will shake violently causing a large tremor all over the battlefield as fire shoots from the ground and into the air in all directions including where the user is and behind them. Because it is the user’s chakra, will sustain some damage, but will not die. After the technique is finished, the ground will appear cracked as if an earthquake had occurred; the cracks will be lined and filled with lava.
    Note: No A Rank or Above fire for the rest of the battle by the user.
    Note: If used within Short Range, the User will take 60 damage
    Note: If used within Mid Range, the User will take 50 damage
    Note: If used within Long Range, the User will take 40 damage
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note:Can only be taught by BloodLust Loki

    ~Declined, do not resubmit~ I already submitted that once long time ago and got declined. I got several of Amagai's techniques btw.
     
         
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