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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Raiton:raikou tengai(lightning style:lighting dome)
    Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    description: user grabs is dual sword and stabs it in the ground and emitts lighting chakra throw it around a radius of 10.5 miles to trap the opponent inside a dome, the user can also pump more lighting chakra into the side of the dome to electricute the enemy inside paralizing him for one turn.

    (note:if used to attack it cost +10 chakra.)
    (note: can only be used 3 times per battle.)
    (note:must have lightning element.)
    (note:can only be used by Vergil.. and Mugen Ryukio.)
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    |Approved|
    But limit the radius to 50m


    Name:Ninpo:buraindo awai (Bliding light)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: none
    Description: this jutsu consists of using lightning chakra throw a metal object that he is using to blind the enemy momentarely.this light can be derected to only one side of the object.
    (note:must have lightning to use)
    (note: the object can be thrown)
    (note: only blinds for 1 turn)
    (note: can be used 3 times per battle)
    __________________________________________________ _____
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    |Declined|
    Jutsu already exist


    Name:Fuuton: Kaiten(Wind Release: Rotation)
    Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: This jutsu copies the hyuuga's kaiten(Rotation)using wind to replace the chakra control.By spinning and releasing wind chakra from his hands while moving them up and down the user is able to create a wind variation of the hyuuga's kaiten.
    (note:must have wind to use)
    (note:weak against fire)
    (note: if used with water around it becomes resistent to lower level fire)
    (note:can be used 6 times per battle)
    (note: this can be shaped from a replica of kaiten to a simple hurrican)
    __________________________________________________ ___________
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    |Pending|

    Name:Fujin sochi(Fujin step)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range: All ranges
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points: (+ 10 to any taijutsu do to high speed)
    Description: The user uses wind chakra on his feet to propell himself and get higher speed and jump higher at larger speed making him hard to see for normal eyes and byakugan users.
    (note:this jutsu as effect for 3 turns )
    (note:must have wind to use)
    (note:can only be used 3 times)

    _____________
    |Declined|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 01:56 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Oton: Oton tama) Sound style: Sound sphere
    Type: Attack
    Rank:S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40 (+5 if made disrupt)
    Damage: 80 (5 each turn ears bleed)
    Description: The user creates a sphere of unvisble and silent sound either by mouth or by palm and then sends it out towards the opponent if this jutsu is hit by a object it disrupts and sends out a ring towards every opponent except the user making the sound ring in their ears for over 3 turns if the opponent takes the hit this jutsu deals 80 plus five each turn the ears bleed.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle

    This is not a rasengan -_-
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    |Declined|

    (Oton: Oton anpurifaia) Sound Style: Sound amplifier
    Type: Supplimentary/Attack/ Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 0 (5 to the user when activated)
    Description: The user unlockz a seal that amplifies sound giving him better hearing. This jutsu allows the user to hear things from any point on the terrian. This jutsu amplifies sound by 20 damage but also adds chakra on by 10. This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound. Every turn this jutsu is active the user takes 5 damage. Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn
    Note: This jutsu only last for 3 turns
    Can only be used once.
    Only people who know sound the element and have been taught by nero can use this technique.

    _____________
    |Declined|
    Remove this,"This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound." and "Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn". Also make S rank. Resubmit next week.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:04 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kiba Inuzuka View Post
    (Futatsu Kashira Doragon Higyou) two head Dragon Strike
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack/Defense(can use both)
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: a 2 head dragons that can be controlled by the person who did it the dragons can shoot ice bullet and water from there mouth. they each have explosive tags throughout their bodies, which activate when the dragons are destroyed. This causes thier bodies to shatter and ice shards to be sent flying in all directions.

    *can use x2 in mach
    *this move can stay on the mach for 2 ture
    *cant use back to back
    *can be use by riku.. and kiba
    *need to know water and ice
    *when u use ice bullet or water bullet it count as a move
    ____________
    ~Pending~
    Need to speak to the others about this.



    (Aisu Waza) ice technique
    Rank D
    Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Range:Short-Mid
    Damage Points:20
    Description Creates small wall of ice,Small ice bolts,finger bullet that u can throw or block Shuriken,explosive kunai etc.
    ____________
    ~Approved~

    (Tentei Gogyou Kiru)-God Water kill
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:this use all Chakra
    Damage Points:90 Damage
    Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of water that make all the water form ever where come to this one spot and make a big water ball that can kill in one touch
    Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.

    *this is one hit k.o
    *cant be block
    ____________
    ~Declined~
    No one hit K.O.'s


    Sution: Gekiha Teikiatsu (Water Style: Water Crushing Cyclone)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user inserts their hands into the water after performing the seals, and then they make water rise up, and make a cyclone horizontally go towards the opponent. Can only be used in a deep source of water. If this technique makes contact with the opponent, the force will be enough to drag them down, like an undertow.

    Note: Must be used on a water source.
    Note: Can only be used twice in a battle, must wait a turn before the next use.

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Similar Jutsu Exist
    summoning(Futatsu Kashira Doragon Higyou) two head Dragon Strike
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack/Defense(can use both)
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: a 2 head dragon that can be controlled by the person who summoned the dragon can shoot ice bullet and water from their mouths.

    *can be use by riku.. and kiba
    *need to know water and ice
    *when u use ice bullet or water bullet it count as a move
    ______
    |Approved|


    (Tentei Gogyou Kiru)-God Water kill
    Type:Attack
    Rank:Forbidden
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:this use all Chakra
    Damage Points:90 Damage
    Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of water that make all the water form ever where come to this one spot and make a big water ball that can kill in one touch
    Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.

    *this move can be use when user is almost at death
    *this move can be use by kiba
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-23-2009 at 01:06 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Sekando: Gear Second
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage cost: 80 (varies on attacks)
    Description: The user pumps his blood rapidly with his legs to kick start the process which in turn increases the speed of the users blood flow, thus providing more oxygen and nutrients to various parts of the body which makes the user faster and stronger. The user must concentrate to keep the blood flow steady allowing the blood to move at the increased speed without stressing any internal organs , if this doesn’t happen then there is risk that they may explode.

    Note: User Cant enter Gear Second until 3 turns after.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns

    _____________
    |Declined|Similar jutsu exist

    Katon: Higan (Fire Release: Fire gun)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage cost: 60
    Description: The user will turn the ends of his fingers into fire, allowing them to shoot fire bullets at the opponent, these fire bullets travel at an immense speed and do a considerable amount of damage.

    _____________
    |Approved|
    remove the immense speed part.


    Katon: Enkai (Fire Release: Blaze Commandment)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage cost: 80
    Description: The user will first turn their hand into fire and then swirl it around themselves, this then creates a 360 flame around the user. The user will then turn the flame into a massive fire pillar that will rise up and protect the user from every angle, this jutsu is effective against taijutsu attacks. (This fire pillar is Incredibly powerful, and can stop most attacks.)

    Note: Can only be used Twice per match.

    _____________
    |Approved|

    Katon: Shinka Shiranui (Fire Release: Holy Flame, Unknown Fire)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage cost: 80
    Description: The user will create to large flames in each of their hands, he/she will then throw each flame at the opponent and turn them into fire lances, these are powerful enough to break through most defences, and can easily kill the opponent if they hit a vital spot.

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per match.
    _____________
    |Declined|
    Remove the easily kill part
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:08 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Hazure View Post
    1. (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kisaki Neko Kuchiyose: Rinsei) Summoning Jutsu: Queen Cat Summon: Rinsei

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (Depends on the jutsu she performs)
    Description: Rinsei is the Queen of the Neko family (like Manda is the king of snakes). She is one of the most powerful of the Neko Family. Like the 3 tailed Demon she has 3 tails, this allows her to use her 3 Katanas. Her fur is soft like clouds and she has the Ying and Yang symbol printed on her forehead (the place where the summoner stands, if she allows it). She has the ability to manipulate all 5 elements to A-rank. Like all of the Neko family she is able to use a large amount of chakra, if needed. Her personality is that of a protective mother, if anything comes to hurt her young, or summoner, she will go all out against the person responsible. She is about 20 meters bigger than Gamabunta.
    Jutsu she can use are (some cases she might need help from her summoner):
    Katon Up to A-Rank
    Suiton - Up to A-Rank
    Fuuton - Up to A-Rank
    Doton - Up to A-Rank
    Raiton - Up to A-Rank
    Rinsei is very touchy when it comes to a summoner, she will only let a summoner stand on her forehead when they have done something to prove themselves to her. In order for a summoner to attempt to stand on her forehead the summoner must undergo a variety of tasks, which vary depending on her mood. The only exception is Kusari Uchiha (Hazure), who holds the Contract of the Neko Family.
    *Stays in battle for 5 turns.
    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *Must have signed the Contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)


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    ~Declined~
    Overpowered. 2 elements max.^^
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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kisaki Kuchiyose: Rinsei) Summoning Jutsu: Queen Summon: Rinsei
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (Depends on the jutsu she performs)
    Description: Rinsei is 1 of the Queens of the Neko family (like Manda is the king of snakes). She is one of the most powerful of the Neko Family. Like the 3 tailed Demon she has 3 tails, this allows her to use her 3 Katanas. Her fur is soft like clouds and she has the Ying and Yang symbol printed on her forehead (the place where the summoner stands, if she allows it). Like all of the Neko family she is able to use a large amount of chakra, if needed. Her personality is that of a protective mother, if anything comes to hurt her young, or summoner, she will go all out against the person responsible. She is about 20 meters bigger than Gamabunta.
    Jutsu she can use are (some cases she might need help from her summoner):
    Katon Up to A-Rank
    Fuuton - Up to A-Rank
    Rinsei is very touchy when it comes to a summoner, she will only let a summoner stand on her forehead when they have done something to prove themselves to her. In order for a summoner to attempt to stand on her forehead the summoner must undergo a variety of tasks, which vary depending on her mood. The only exception is Kusari Uchiha (Hazure), who holds the Contract of the Neko Family.
    *Stays in battle for 5 turns.
    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *Must have signed the Contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)


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    |Approved|
    remove that 20m bigger than gamabunta part though.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:10 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton Doragon Rasen) Water Dragon Spiral

    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user holds out their arm straight forward, then 2 water dragons spiral around the users arm (can use both arms with means a max of 4 dragons) , the user can then send the dragons toward the opponent. The user can also control the dragons with their chakra
    Note: can only be taught by Zaraki
    Note: 1 less dragon each time
    _____________
    |Declined|

    (Suiton Doragon bouei) Water Dragon Protection

    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user jumps in the air, water dragons sprout from the side of the users legs but they stay right there (2 on each leg) and block incoming attacks
    Note: can only be taught by Zaraki
    Note: can block 1 attack with each Dragon
    Note: 1 less dragon each time
    _____________
    |Declined|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:11 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by SinRival View Post
    Here is one:

    (Raiton:Ikazuchi Hibana Bakudan)-Lightning Style: Lightning Spark Bomb
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around him/her and then releases tiny sparks and after 2 turns, they are fully attached to the opponent and at anytime,The user can form tiger seal and make the sparks expload, the opponent would need to get out of range before this could happen or just use a jutsu that could burn away the sparks, if the opponent can't do that then the user could kill the opponent.
    Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Three Times A Battle
    Note: Can only be used by SinRival or any people taught this jutsu by her.

    ________
    ~Approved~

    (Raiton:Sutatikku)-Lightning Style: Static Robots
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The User creates huge lightning robots that can shock anything it touches. They can be destroyed by getting hit by a s-rank wind attack, If they touch a living being, they will automatically paralyze or even kill if combined with another attack. After 5 turns they will turn back into sparks that can be used with other attacks.
    Note: Can Only Be Used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be used by SinRival and people taught by her
    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Lightning Robots? Re work the jutsu. And remove that kill part^^ Robot-o is the jap word.



    No Japanese Word For Robots

    (Taijutsu:Hakabakashii Sochi)-Taijutsu Style: Rapid Step
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: When then user activates byakugan and uses this jutsu, the user will recieve double the accuracy and speed and so the user then appears behind the opponent and do multipal hits, then suddenly dissapear and quickly appear at the side and do multipal hits, then keeps on going and when using other attacks they'll be harder to dodge and be in a same match up to sharingan.
    Note: This lasts 2 turns
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Remove the sharingan part. Resubmit

    The new one:

    (Taijutsu:Hakabakashii Sochi)-Taijutsu Style: Rapid Step
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: When then user activates byakugan and uses this jutsu, the user will recieve double the accuracy and speed and so the user then appears behind the opponent and do multiple hits, then suddenly disappear and quickly appear at the side and do multiple hits, then keeps on going and when using other attacks they'll be harder to dodge.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival
    _____________
    |Approved|
    But remove that last 2 turns part


    (Suiton:Uzumaki Jiten)-Water Style: Whirlpool Rotation
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user uses the rotation on a bigger scale, on water, and when they start to spin for rotation, the water turns into a powerful and long whirlpool, if struck you'd be struck by a powerful force, and would very easily drown if you do not do anything.The user is required to know rotation for this to work.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival
    Note: Must Be on water source
    _____________
    |Approved|
    Add must be on a water source


    Thats me iv submitted 5 customs
     
         
    Last edited by Sin; 08-24-2009 at 04:23 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Moonlight tempest(gekkou arashi)
    Rank; A
    Range; Short-Long
    Type; Attack
    Chakra Cost; 30
    Damage; 60
    Description; A sword art in which the user collects energy or transfers energy into the sword and slashes which gives an highly amplified swing that creates a shock wave which moves forward and cuts through anything in its way.
    Note; The shock wave can cut anything in its way but moves straight forwards, which makes it difficult to hit the target, best used in short range.
    _____________
    |Approved|
    Remove that cuts through anything part, and add must be used with a sword.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:16 AM.

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    Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Kaito View Post
    (Katon : Kaen enban)- Fire style: Flame Disk

    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Desription: the user creates a spinning flame disk where they hold their hands appart and breath fire chakra inbetween and mold the chakra into a spinning disk.

    *Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
    ______
    ~Approved~

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    (Doujutsu: boushi kokudo) - Eye Technique: spinning realm

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Boushi kokudo is and advanced sharingun technique in which the user creates the illusion of the enemy spinning around and then prevents them from molding chakra and unable to create a move.

    *Note: the enemy cant create the maximum amount of moves in a turn
    *Note: lasts 1 turn

    ______
    ~Declined~
    How does spinning around prevent the opponent from molding chakra?


    (Ninpo: Shinku Kiji Ryuu)- Ninja art: Scarlet cloth dragon

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damaga cost: N/A (+10 for explosive tags)
    Description: the user opens a scroll and performs the following seals: tiger dog horse. mutliple cloths with spiked tastles on the ends traps the enermy by wrapping round the legs shoulders and arms and then ankers itself to the ground using the spiked tastles.

    Note: This jutsu can be used in conjunction with explosive tags to cause damage.
    Note: can only be taught by uchiha Kaito

    ______
    ~Declined~
    Explain this a bit more.
    (Ninpo: Shinku Kiji Ryuu)- Ninja art: Scarlet cloth dragon

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damaga cost: N/A (+10 for explosive tags)
    Description: the user opens a scroll and performs the following seals: tiger dog horse. this then releases mutliple cloths with spiked tastles on the ends that is infused with chakra and allowing the user to control its path of direction. The scarlet cloth dragons are then able to trap the enermy by wrapping round the legs shoulders and arms and restrains their movements. the spiked tastles are then thrust into the ground to act as ankers to hold the enemy down. This can also be used by applying explosive tags to the cloth to use as extra damage after holding the enemy still.

    Note: This jutsu can be used in conjunction with explosive tags to cause damage.
    Note: can only be taught by uchiha Kaito

    _____________
    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:17 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Riku.. View Post
    Calm down Ali lol.

    (Hyouten: Hando of Jakki Shimo) Ice Style: Hand of Jack Frost
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage:90
    Description:The user will place their hand on any object on the battle field and a blue, frozen hand of ice will appear anywhere throughout that object (Example: If the user places their hand on a tree then they can make the hand appear anywhere throughout the tree, on a branch, the top of the tree, anywhere). The hand has three, unique abilities. It can grab the opponent and make spikes all over its hand stabbing the opponent. It can also morph into either a giant ice sword to stab the opponent. And finally it can shoot an extremely cold blast from its hand freezing the opponent or the ground under and around the opponent. The user can also run their chakra through the something, and make it continue running to somewhere else. (Example: The user runs their chakra through the ground, and then runs it into a tree which is attached to the ground.) If a hand is destroyed, it shatters, leaving the enemy to deal with ice senbon that rain down upon them if they are within short-range.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    Note: Once this jutsu is used the user must wait 2 more turns to use it again.
    Note: If this is used more than once then it takes up 5 more chakra than the last time.
    Only useable by Riku..
    ____________
    ~Approved~
    But make it 3 times per battle.


    (Hyouten: Kyojin of Sono Tougen) Ice Style: Giants of the Tundra
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long (depends on the attack that they're using)
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:40 (drains 5 more chakra per turn, per giant)
    Damage:80
    Description:The user creates massive giant(s) made of ice. The giants basically are humongous, crystalized creatures that have some human features, such as hands and feet, but the features of their face are more gruesome than a normal humans. The giant is about as big as a two trees stacked atop each other. The user can make up to two giants. The giants are able to do simple attacks of course, swinging arms, kicking, etc. A hit by any of the ice giants’ attacks freezes the opponent as well as touching the giant (this doesn’t apply to the user). The giants are also able to make giant spears/javelins to throw at the enemy. An attack would be mid-range while a throw would be long range. When a giant is destroyed, he freezes a short range area around him.
    Note: The giants get slightly smaller after each turn and after 6 turns they melt into ice due to the user supporting two things at once.
    Note: If two giants are made then this time limit is cut in half and they melt in 3 turns due to the user needing to support 3 things at once: themselves, and the two giants.
    Note: Only useable 3 times in battle.
    Useable only by Riku..

    ____________
    ~Declined~
    Make forbidden, and limit to once per battle. Resubmit.
    Ok, edited.

    (Hyouten: Kyojin of Sono Tougen) Ice Style: Giants of the Tundra
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long (depends on the attack that they're using)
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:40 (drains 5 more chakra per turn, per giant)
    Damage:80
    Description:The user creates massive giant(s) made of ice. The giants basically are humongous, crystalized creatures that have some human features, such as hands and feet, but the features of their face are more gruesome than a normal humans. The giant is about as big as a two trees stacked atop each other. The user can make up to two giants. The giants are able to do simple attacks of course, swinging arms, kicking, etc. A hit by any of the ice giants’ attacks freezes the opponent as well as touching the giant (this doesn’t apply to the user). The giants are also able to make giant spears/javelins to throw at the enemy. An attack would be mid-range while a throw would be long range. When a giant is destroyed, he freezes a short range area around him.
    Note: The giants get slightly smaller after each turn and after 6 turns they melt into ice due to the user supporting two things at once.
    Note: If two giants are made then this time limit is cut in half and they melt in 3 turns due to the user needing to support 3 things at once: themselves, and the two giants.
    Note: Only useable 1 time in battle.
    Useable only by Riku..
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    |Approved|
    Add minus 10 damage to use per turn.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:18 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (katon:hakabakashii kasai butoukai)-Rapid fire balls
    Rank:A
    type:attack
    range:short to long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:700
    Description:User creates numerous rapid fireballs from the users palms and sends them flying on his opponent.Can cause the body of the opponent to be burned.
    _____________
    |Declined|
    Overpowered. I suggest you review the template.


    (doton:daichi yure jutsu)-Ground Vibration Jutsu
    Type:Supplement
    Rank:A
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:n/a
    Description:The user puts chakra in his/her feet making him/her able to sense the vibration in the ground when closing his/her eyes.And he/she can also sense the opponents movement even the slightest movement made by his/her opponent.
    *can only be use by hinaru*
    *can only be taught by hinaru*
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    Jutsu already exist


    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kokuou ookami summon:LOKI)king wolf summon:LOKI
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: short - long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60 depends on the jutsu
    Description: Loki is the king of all the wolve's and the strongest in the ookami family
    He is very hard headed and won't obey others but his summoner.he has 4 tails and each resemble the 4 basic elements earth water fire and wind.When he changes mood he also changes color (literally).He's personality is a spoiled bossy king and has 4 sons Freyja,Asgard,mead,Balto.Loki has a diamond crest on his forhead on which the user stands.
    Jutsu he can use are (some cases he might need help from her summoner):
    Katon – Up to A-Rank
    Raiton - Up to A-Rank
    Loki is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to Loki before he/she can summon him or even stand on his forehead(exception on hinaru the holder of the ookami family contract)
    *Stays in battle for 5 turns.
    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *Must have signed the Contract of the wolve's (held by Hinaru)
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    |Pending|
    Wolf contract exist. Speak to RokuNR


    (doton:koudo glove) Earth gloves
    Type:supplement
    Rank:B
    Rangen/a
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:n/a
    Description:userslams his hand in the ground and creates a glove out of ground covering his whole hands and gives the user +20 on taijutsu attack and +10 when guarding with his/her hands
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    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:21 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Katon:Tsuin Doragon)-Fire Style:Twin Dragon Fire
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user forms a series of hand signs then releases fire from his/her mouth making a double headed twin dragon. This dragon attacks the opponent an if it coillide with other fire jutsu it asborbs the jutsu an grows stronger.
    Note:Can only aborb S rank fire an down
    Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
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    |Approved|
    Make so it can only absorb a rank fire and down


    (Doton:Shishi Doton Hora)-Earth Style:Lion's Of The Earth Den
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user forms a series of hand signs then 3 Lion's form from the earth the lions have the ability to fuse with the earth an swim in the earth like a fish does in water. The Lion's also has the ability to fuse into one huge lion when the lions fuse they have to be fully destoryed or they can regenerate from the costing the user - 20 charka
    Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
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    |Approved|
    Edit to say if the lions combined it can only be used once per battle.



    (Fuuinjutsu: Kursai Olympia) - Sealing Technique: Chain's Of Olympia
    Rank :S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The User performs a series of handsigns then 4 Golden spots appear in the ground then 4 chain's shoot out of the ground an wrap around both arms an legs then restrain the opponent for one turn.An Seals the opponents charka for one turn
    Notenly Last one turn
    Note:can only be used 2 per battle
    Note: The Chains are unbreakable
    _____________
    |Declined|

    (Katon:Kouen Harumagedon)-Fire Style:Flaming Armageddon
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90
    Description:First the user focus pure fire charka into his/her hands then the user hands catch fire then while the user hands are on fire he/she performs some hand sign then releases a huge blast of fire from both hands.
    Note: Only usable once per battle
    Note:both blastes dont have to to be released at the same time nor do they have to be released in the same direction
    Note:This is a HUGE Release of fire both blasts are the size of the jutsu Kazuku used from his mask
    Note:No Fire Jutsu for 3 turns after use

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    make s rank and resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    This Is My Resubmit With Corrections

    (Sumi Youshiki: Chuusen Bakuyaku)- Ink Style: Drawing Explosive
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:30
    Description: The user can draw either small animals such as beatles or giant animals such as lions to match the explosive powers. these images must be drawn on some sort of canvas whether it be a scroll or a tag or even a fan. after giving the appropriate hand signs the animal will be summoned and at that point the user must perform one last handsign to make the animal explode. the user may control where the animal goes but depending on the size of the image he must put more chakra.
    NOTE: Can only be used by Ink Users.
    NOTE: Can only be used by Sai.
    NOTE: Must be drawn with chakra infused ink such as the kind that Sai uses.

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    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 02:24 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Next one in my series of sword jutsu !!!

    Kenjutsu no Kaito : Pegasus ( Sword Style of the Emperor : Pegasus )
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: To perform this technique, the user points their sword at the opponent. Almost immediately, the user dashes forward in a straight line at high speed ( much as if the user is on a conveyor belt, but faster - there is no movement of legs , only body as a whole ). The user is surrounded by wind travelling at high speeds to a distance of about two metres, in much the same shape as a comet ( with the user in the head of the comet shaped wind ) which slices any physical objects that touch it. Due to the wind travelling at high speeds, just beneath the wind is a layer of vacuum, though this has no offensive application whatsoever. Because of the wind surrounding the user, the impact of this technique does not leave a stab wound, but rather blows a large chunk of the object away, as if hit by a large beam of energy. The user, after the point of impact, continues on for another five or six metres before stopping due to the high speeds. Once the user stops, the wind dissipates into weak blades that spread out 360 degrees.
    This move does 15 damage to the user whether successful or not due to the strain caused on the user's body.

    And then

    Kinjutsu : Haikkekaku Fuuin ( Forbidden Technique : Consumption Seal )
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: On Self
    Chakra: 50
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user focuses all their life essence into one spot on their body, creating a seal there, which looks like three snakes in a circle with a six pronged star in the middle. This means that if the user is hit in any other place of their body, their body will regenerate its wounds and the user will not die. However, if the opponent so much as touchesthe seal, the user will die - even from a D ranked jutsu or a simple punch hitting the seal. Even if the user attempts to hide this seal by an armour, the seal will shine through the armor, and touching the armour at that point will kill the user. However, if suppose the seal is on the user's arm and the user cuts off their arm so that the seal is split in two, the user will not be vulnerable to the effects of the seal, but will lose their arm. Unfortunately, to prevent a person from being practically immortal by forming it on the arm and cutting their arm off, the seal always forms on the middle of the torso, because there is almost no way for the user to cut their torso into half without dying.This jutsu takes 25 chakra per turn, and the user loses 15 health per turn.
     
         
    Last edited by Emperor; 08-25-2009 at 02:21 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My version of swordfighting

    Kenjutsu no Ryoku : Akasou ( Sword Style of Power : Red Monk )
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user points at the opponent's body with a sword. Then, a huge figure of a monk made out of fire is visible behind the enemy. As this figure forms, a huge blast of hot chakra blows the opponent to the monk figure, who grabs the opponent between two burning hands, before collapsing in a huge wave of flame on the opponent. As the opponent is burning in the wave of fire, the user moves there at high speed and slashes the opponent repeatedly.
    -Does 20 damage to user
    -Can only be used thrice per battle
    -Can be used by Azaghast
    Co-creator: Emperor
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    here is the one i had to resubmit(it counts for the previous week, so i still have 5)


    (Futon:Kaze Se) - Wind Style: Wind Torrents
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range:N/A
    Chakra Cost:35
    Description:Suddenlly wind starts blowing softlly all around.A weak wind storm covers a whole area.It lowers the enemy visibilty. If the user moves quickly enough, to the enemy will seem like you are moving throught the air freely.
    *Note:It can only be used once per battle, and it lasts 4 turns.*


    ___________
    |Approved|


    and here are the new ones:


    (Hyouton:Aisu Funjin) - Ice Style: Ice Dust
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage:10 (+30 if used with Fuuton:Kaze Se)
    Description:User creates small pieces of ice, big like dust, from thin air.The area cools and the enemy is so easier to hit(he starts trembling a bit).IThe ice dust goes into the enemy polmons and he takes 10 damage from it.
    If used with Kaze Se, the dust melts with the wind and it cuts severly the skin.the enemy starts bleeding.
    *Note: Can only be used by Yugito Nadare bio's.*
    *Note:Can only be used 4 times per battle.*
    ___________
    |Declined|
    Stick to the template, located on first page.





    (Hyouton:Un-da-hi-to) - Ice Style: Underheat
    Type:Attack
    Rank: A
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:60
    Description:the user underheats the surrounding to the point of freezing near livings.If the enemy stays still for more time(hiding), he freezes.The jutsu cancles out all fire jutsus up to B-Rank.the area can reach -60 Degrees Celsius.
    *Note: Can only be used by Yugito Nadare bio's.*
    *Note:Can only be used 1 times per battle.*
    *Note:It does 20 damage to the user.*
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|




    (Futon: Kaze Seppaku Hirate) - Wind Style: Wind Pressure Palm
    Type:Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user slowly puts his palm on the wanted object and then gathers all his wind chakra in his palm.He then releases it all at once and there is som much pressure mad under his palm that he a make a hole in almost everything.(earth, iron, stone.....)
    Some things are exeptions(rubber, steel)
    The user can so create a hole where to hide, or crush down a door, or wall.It can also be used on a human being.
    *Note:Can only be used 3 times per battle.*
    *Note:It does 5 damage to the user palm, each time used.*
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|



    others will be added
     
         
    Last edited by Nadare; 08-25-2009 at 12:50 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
    Rank; S
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Self
    Chakra Cost; 40
    Damage; N/A
    Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
    Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
    --
    Increases all status for a short period of time.
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

    Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
    Rank; B
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Entire Feild
    Chakra cost; 25
    Damage points; N/A
    Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
    Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
    --
    Blood Port1/Chakra Port1=Blood Port2/Chakra port2, sumoning or reverse sumoning causes either blood port to arrive at the opposite blood port, if used the same method while a sumoning replacing the chakra ports sumoning can be easily countered. I explained the method.
    ----|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

    Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
    Rank; A
    Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range; Short-mid
    Chakra cost; 30
    Damage; -5 per turn
    Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the easo****us of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks uptill B ranks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
    Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu.
    --
    Made it uptill B rank, i'm now allowed to make A rank fuinjutsu
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
    Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
    Rank; S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Entire Ground in sight
    Chakra;45
    Damage; 85(10 to the users eyes)
    Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. The glyph moves with the users eyes, as long as the target is on the ground and in the users sights the attacks is really difficult to avoid, the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

    Lightning Style; Thunder Lance (Raiton; Rai-mori)
    Rank S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Short-Long
    Chakra; 45
    Damage; 85(10 to the user himself)
    Description; The user calls forth wide lightning in the form blades and structs the target. The lightning structs at a very fast speed and tilted angles from 60 degrees. 4 lightning blades struct the target but at different places the lightning never structs at the same place again. Each lightning struct is very powerful and forms a huge crater on the grounds where it hits.
    Note; Must form clouds before usage.
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (katon:hakabakashii kasai butoukai)-Rapid fire balls
    Rank:A
    type:attack
    range:short to long
    Chakra Cost:30 Chakra
    Damage Points:60
    Description:User creates numerous rapid fireballs from the users palms and sends them flying on his opponent.Can cause the body of the opponent to be burned.
    ___________
    |Declined|
    Similar Jutsu already exist
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Katon: Hotarubi (Fire Release: Firefly fire)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage cost: 80
    Description: The user will create a large amount of small fireballs that look like fireflies. These fireflies will surround the whole battlefield, when the user wishes he will make them all at once attack the opponent, and on contact they will explode, creating a massive explosion.

    Note: Can only be used Twice Per battle.
    Note: Cant use Fire Jutsu next turn.

    ___________
    |Declined|
    Similar Jutsu already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Za Ranpu Katana (The Light Blade)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: +10 each turn.
    Damage points: 80 (+15 damage to all sword attacks)
    Description: This blade is the only one of its kind in the world, wielded only by certain people, and can only be taught to those of great knowledge. The blade consists of a eye blinding light, the heat of the sword is immensely hot. When the sword is swung, it releases a heat wave of slicing fire.

    Note: Only Archie can weild this blade.











    Kenjutsu: Katanas Off Funkyuu (Sword Style: Blades of Confusion)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will gather a huge amount of chakra into their feet and legs, they will then charge at the opponent at such a high speed ( Even Doujutsu users have trouble following these movments) that the opponent won’t know what’s hit them, leaving them confused. While the user travels past them, then will slash them with their sword. But because of the extreme speed the opponent will think that they missed, only until a short time after will they realise that they were struck by the users sword.

    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: A katana is needed to perform this attack.
    Note: Attack happens 1 turn after.

    |Both Declined| You are over this week 5 post limit. Please Resubmit Next Week
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 07:05 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Hyouton Butoukai ) Dance Of Ice
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost : 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The User cast vast amounts of concentrated ice chakra down their wrists the chakra then leaks from the users nails and upper hand creating an icy wrist brace,from the wrist brace and down to the nails sprouts 5 ( 50cm ) ice nails these are vastly versatile and can be flexed and bent but aren't easily broken the nails are very sharp able to cut through rock.
    ( Melt After 6 Turns Unless Terrian Is Cold )

    |Approved|
    Limit to use twice per battle and change to last three turns.(irregardless of terrain)

    ( Doton Toku ) - Shield Of The Earth
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user smashes his left hand into the ground infront of himself leaving it there for a few minutes or so and then slowly lifts it up the ground then swamps up around the users forearm melding and moulding into a massive huge thick shield of mighty earth. The user can freely walk around with this earthen shield on his arm but unless the user has a full understanding on how to do jutsu's one handed then this jutsu might have a down effect also it is extremly heavy and will slow down your movement.
    |Declined| remove that one handed part, and resubmit.


    ( Oni Rajikon 1 ) The Demon Of The First Plane
    Rank: A
    Type: Offence/Defense/Support
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The users bind with hell takes hold and after the nessasary hand signs are completed the user opens a gate to the otherworld and makes a deal with the demon of the 1st plane. The demon is Tiamat ( most notably know to be the queen of dragons but i'll make her huminoid xD ) Wielding her battle armour and glaive she is fit for battle. Her cruel intentions and devious way of battling will make the enemy cower in fear.
    |Pending| I'll need to speak with the others...


    ( Genjutsu: - Kouzetsu Jigoku ) Illusion Technique: Tongue Of The Devil
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementry
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage: 10 - Each turn within The Illusion
    Description: The User First then covers their right eye with their hand then slowly slides down to reveal that their eye has become more demonic the eye then shudders and whoever is within this brief moment is sucked into a glimpse of hell ( Similar hell to Supernatural the TV Show :P ) the user is torn apart constantly in this illusion for aslong as they are still within the users view. In the real life the enemy is screaming in pain and is vurnable to free hits.
    |Approved| But add that the opponent is still able to defend themselves.
    Limit to twice per battle.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-24-2009 at 06:37 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaze Kuchiki View Post
    (Katon:Tsuin Doragon)-Fire Style:Twin Dragon Fire
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:The user forms a series of hand signs then releases fire from his/her mouth making a double headed twin dragon. This dragon attacks the opponent an if it coillide with other fire jutsu it asborbs the jutsu an grows stronger.
    Note:Can only aborb S rank fire an down
    Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
    _____________
    |Approved|
    Make so it can only absorb a rank fire and down


    (Doton:Shishi Doton Hora)-Earth Style:Lion's Of The Earth Den
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    RangeShort-Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user forms a series of hand signs then 3 Lion's form from the earth the lions have the ability to fuse with the earth an swim in the earth like a fish does in water. The Lion's also has the ability to fuse into one huge lion when the lions fuse they have to be fully destoryed or they can regenerate from the costing the user - 20 charka
    Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
    _____________
    |Approved|
    Edit to say if the lions combined it can only be used once per battle.



    (Fuuinjutsu: Kursai Olympia) - Sealing Technique: Chain's Of Olympia
    Rank :S
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The User performs a series of handsigns then 4 Golden spots appear in the ground then 4 chain's shoot out of the ground an wrap around both arms an legs then restrain the opponent for one turn.An Seals the opponents charka for one turn
    Notenly Last one turn
    Note:can only be used 2 per battle
    Note: The Chains are unbreakable
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    |Declined|

    (Katon:Kouen Harumagedon)-Fire Style:Flaming Armageddon
    Type:Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:90
    Description:First the user focus pure fire charka into his/her hands then the user hands catch fire then while the user hands are on fire he/she performs some hand sign then releases a huge blast of fire from both hands.
    Note: Only usable once per battle
    Note:both blastes dont have to to be released at the same time nor do they have to be released in the same direction
    Note:This is a HUGE Release of fire both blasts are the size of the jutsu Kazuku used from his mask
    Note:No Fire Jutsu for 3 turns after use


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    |Declined|
    make s rank and resubmit.

    (Katon:Kouen Harumagedon)-Fire Style:Flaming Armageddon
    Type:Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:First the user focus pure fire charka into his/her hands then the user hands catch fire then while the user hands are on fire he/she performs some hand sign then releases a huge blast of fire from both hands.
    Note: Only usable once per battle
    Note:both blastes dont have to to be released at the same time nor do they have to be released in the same direction
    Note:This is a HUGE Release of fire both blasts are the size of the jutsu Kazuku used from his mask
    Note:No Fire Jutsu for 3 turns after use

    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-25-2009 at 02:43 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chakra Tengai) - Chakra Dome

    Rank: C
    Range:N/A
    Type: Defense
    Range:Short
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: A more defensive version of the chakra shield. The user will make a whole dome of chakra rather than just a shield. this will in turn protect them all 360 degrees rather than just the front of them.
    NOTE:Can only be used by puppet users.
    NOTE:Can only be used three times per battle.

    |Declined|
    To similar to existing jutsu


    (Sumi Youshiki: Genkaku Kabe) - Ink Style: Illusionary Wall

    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Defense
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The user will summon a wall of black and white ink from a scroll. The wall has a hypnotic design on it causing the opponent to be caught in a trance of illusions and disbelief. during the time of confusion the opponent is only allowed one jutsu of D-Rank per turn.
    NOTE: This jutsu can only be used by Sai
    NOTE: This jutsu only lasts three turns.
    NOTE: This wall cannot defend against weapons or attacks, it only confuses the opponent.

    |Approved|

    (Fuuton: Hissori Shuriken) - Wind Style: Silent Shuriken

    Rank: C
    Range: Mid-Long
    Type: Attack
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage:30
    Description: The user will throw up to ten shuriken (five in each hand) exerting a mediocre amount of wind chakra into each before throwing them. while the shuriken are in mid-air the user will make one single hand sign allowing the shuriken to turn into wind particles(dust). the user can then manipulate the wind chakra in the particles to move them around anywhere they please and then will make another single hand sign allowing them to reform and continue to another target or the same one from a different direction. in turn this allows the user to manipulate the shuriken to a different location without the opponent's knowledge.
    NOTE: Can only be used by volcomguts/those who request it from him.
    NOTE: Can only be used twice per battle
    NOTE: The user cannot use any wind jutsu up to C-Rank for two turns after performing this technique.

    |Declined|

    (Fuuton: Kitai Mekakushi) - Wind Style: Gas Mask

    Rank: C
    Range: N/A
    Type: Defense
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: In cases of a smoke bomb or poison mist of some sort the user will create a small filter over his/her mouth/nose using a small orb of gathered wind chakra plus oxygen. the orb will cover the users mouth and nose allowing any mist or smoke that comes in contact with the orb to be filtered before entering the users air stream.

    |Approved|
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-25-2009 at 02:48 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Sage View Post
    Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
    Rank; S
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Self
    Chakra Cost; 40
    Damage; N/A
    Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
    Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
    --
    Increases all status for a short period of time.
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

    Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
    Rank; B
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Entire Feild
    Chakra cost; 25
    Damage points; N/A
    Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
    Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
    --
    Blood Port1/Chakra Port1=Blood Port2/Chakra port2, sumoning or reverse sumoning causes either blood port to arrive at the opposite blood port, if used the same method while a sumoning replacing the chakra ports sumoning can be easily countered. I explained the method.
    ----|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

    Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
    Rank; A
    Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range; Short-mid
    Chakra cost; 30
    Damage; -5 per turn
    Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the easo****us of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks uptill B ranks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
    Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu.
    --
    Made it uptill B rank, i'm now allowed to make A rank fuinjutsu
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
    Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
    Rank; S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Entire Ground in sight
    Chakra;45
    Damage; 85(10 to the users eyes)
    Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. The glyph moves with the users eyes, as long as the target is on the ground and in the users sights the attacks is really difficult to avoid, the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

    Lightning Style; Thunder Lance (Raiton; Rai-mori)
    Rank S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Short-Long
    Chakra; 45
    Damage; 85(10 to the user himself)
    Description; The user calls forth wide lightning in the form blades and structs the target. The lightning structs at a very fast speed and tilted angles from 60 degrees. 4 lightning blades struct the target but at different places the lightning never structs at the same place again. Each lightning struct is very powerful and forms a huge crater on the grounds where it hits.
    Note; Must form clouds before usage.
    |Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
    wtf? i submitted my last at sunday so it was technically new week to me as next day is monday o.O
    Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
    Rank; S
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Self
    Chakra Cost; 40
    Damage; N/A
    Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
    Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
    ____________
    |Declined|


    Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
    Rank; B
    Type; Supplementary
    Range; Entire Feild
    Chakra cost; 25
    Damage points; N/A
    Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
    Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
    ____________
    |Declined|
    Explain how the chakra ports a switched. If no direct contact with the scroll or medium inwhich the summon is summoned is made.


    Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
    Rank; A
    Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Range; Short-mid
    Chakra cost; 30
    Damage; -5 per turn
    Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the eso****us of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks up till B ranks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
    Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu.
    ____________
    |Declined|
    I told you i wont approve it if t can seal away all chakra based attacks. Pick one element.


    Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
    Rank; S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Entire Ground in sight
    Chakra;45
    Damage; 85(10 to the users eyes)
    Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. The glyph moves with the users eyes, as long as the target is on the ground and in the users sights the attacks is really difficult to avoid, the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
    ____________
    |Declined|
    Kind of Oped. Stick to the template and take out that eye bit. Resubmit.


    Lightning Style; Thunder Lance (Raiton; Rai-mori)
    Rank S
    Type; Attack
    Range; Short-Long
    Chakra; 45
    Damage; 85(10 to the user himself)
    Description; The user calls forth wide lightning in the form blades and structs the target. The lightning structs at a very fast speed and tilted angles from 60 degrees. 4 lightning blades struct the target but at different places the lightning never structs at the same place again. Each lightning struct is very powerful and forms a huge crater on the grounds where it hits.
    Note; Must form clouds before usage.
    ____________
    |Approved|
    Stick to the template! Change to 40/80 damage
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-30-2009 at 01:05 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    2. (Doujutsu: Genjutsu: Hari Oshi) Eye Technique: Illusion Technique: Needle Pressure
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user looks at the target with his/her activated Sharingan, and claps his/her hands together to create a fluctuating sound vibration that travels into the inner ear, causing the opponent to be ensnared by this Genjutsu. The Sharingan’s tomoe spin to activate the Genjutsu. The target is invisibly constrained in mid air, surrounded by needles that, 1 by 1, insert themselves slowly into each of the pressure points of the target. This paralyzes them for 2 turns.
    *Only the Uchiha Clan can perform this technique and can only be used by Hazure
    *Must have the Sharingan activated
    *Can only be used once per battle

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    |Approved|


    3. (Doujutsu: Genjutsu: Akumu) Eye Technique: Illusion Technique: Nightmare
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the Sharingan, the user looks into his/her target’s eyes and mutters a single word, Nightmare, which echoes throughout the battle field to activate the Genjutsu. The targets worst nightmare develops around the target and they are left stunned for one turn.
    *Must have the Sharingan
    *Only the Uchiha Clan can perform this technique and can only be used by Hazure
    * Can only be used twice per battle

    ____________
    |Declined|
    Existing Jutsu


    4. (Neko Mo-do) Cat Mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes on the characteristics of a cat. The user’s senses become 10X stronger. All taijutsu damage is increased by +20 and all ninjutsu damage is increased by +15. The user’s eyes become that of a cat and he is able to run as fast as Lee (when the 2nd gate was opened). The user’s nails grow longer and the user is able to telepathically talk with Cats.
    *Only lasts for 5 turns
    *Can only be used once per battle
    *Can only be used by Hazure
    *Must have signed the Contract with the Cats (held by Hazure)
    *After the mode has ended, the user becomes vulnerable to attack

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    |Declined|
    No mimicing the 8 gates. And remove that telepathic part. Resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Goro Kaguya; 08-30-2009 at 01:12 AM.

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