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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Iwabi View Post
    Resubmitting the following:

    (Kuchiyose: Thor) - Summoning: Thor
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Thor is the King of the Red Panda. He is as tall as Ponta and he bears a large double headed war hammer that has been crafted from chakra metal which enables Thor to channel his elemental natures into the weapon for added power and he carries it on his back. he wields the hammer with his exceptionally large tail. He has an affinity for Lightning Element and can use the techniques up to what the user know's. He is capable of slamming his hammer onto the ground to activate the earth elemental techniques. He is capable of using the Killing Intent ninjutsu by simply inducing it by a roar. He is also the largest Red Panda summoning and due to his size he can travel across terrain quite quickly. He has thick fur that prevents him from being harmed by C rank and below Ice ninjutsu. He also has good hearing and a kean sense of smell allowing him to find hidden targets even when his field of vision is blocked.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per match
    Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns

    (I have removed the second element making it useable of lightning element, and made it S rank)

    ~Declined~ Elemental natures? I hate it when people just chop a part of their jutsu and don't take the time to re-read themselves. Take out the killing intent part, don't know why I didn't mention that before. Summons won't be allowed to use that jutsu, it's already a mess with normal shinobis.

    (Doton: Shukushō Shitsu no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Shrinking Chamber Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: A relatively simple technique where by performing the ram - tiger - horse hand seals the user is able to manipulate a chamber of earth and cause it to shrink thus reducing the space within so if an opponent is inside the chamber they could be forced into a tight enclosure and thus induce mental stress from the tightened space and could even cause the target to be crushed.
    Note: Can only be used every two turns.

    (Doton: Shitsu no kakudai no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Expanding Chamber Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is the opposite to the Earth Release: Shrinking Chamber in that it expands a surrounding chamber that is to small or enclosing on the user and forcibly pushing it outwards away from the user and thus creating space. For example techniques such as dessert burrial the user could use this technique to prevent being crushed.
    Note: can only be used every two turns.

    ~Both Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    (Kuchiyose: Thor) - Summoning: Thor
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Thor is the King of the Red Panda. He is as tall as Ponta and he bears a large double headed war hammer that has been crafted from chakra metal which enables Thor to channel his elemental nature into the weapon for added power and he carries it on his back. he wields the hammer with his exceptionally large tail. He has an affinity for Lightning Element and can use the techniques up to what the user know's. He is capable of slamming his hammer onto the ground to activate the earth elemental techniques. He is also the largest Red Panda summoning and due to his size he can travel across terrain quite quickly. He has thick fur that prevents him from being harmed by C rank and below Ice ninjutsu. He also has good hearing and a kean sense of smell allowing him to find hidden targets even when his field of vision is blocked.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times per match
    Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns

    (Edited the mistake and removed the killing intent as per requested)

    ~Approved~

    New submittion

    (Doton: Hisan'na Kanbatsu no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Disastrous Drought Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ram - Tiger - Dragon - Horse - Snake and then by manipulating their chakra and placing their hand on the ground the user will then cause the ground itself to begin drying up as water is then forced further down into the earth and causing the top layers of earth infront of the user to crack and cause the terrain to change with pieces of earth rising and falling a few meters which can be used for various strategic means such as causing the cracks to act as drainage for incoming water techniques that flow across the surface or cause the opponent to become unsturdy on their feet distracting them. This technique is also a perfect means to reveal and upturf any hidden underground dangers within a 2 meter depth.
    Note: The user can only be used every two turns and a maximum of three turns per battle.
    Note: The user cannot perform High Level Earth Techniques of A rank or above the following turn.

    ~Declined~ This technique is too similar to an existing one. The part where you dry the land from water is just a plain rip off, but the rest is ok. I suggest you re-work it and elaborate more on the ability to reveal hidden techniques/person underground.

    (Doton: Numachi Kengen no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Swamp Manifestation Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user makes the ram hand seal and then releases from their mouth the same substance that creates the swamp of the underworld but on a much smaller scale and they can use this to restrain their targets movements as it weights down on their body.


    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 12:59 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton:Kishou Tsumes)-Earth Release:Rising Claws
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description:The User Performs 3 quick handseals and releases his Doton chakra into the ground, he will then create two long Earth arms from the ground that can go to Mid and long range.They are still connected to the ground so they can bend and change direction,When one hits the Enemy it while crush him within his hand causing damage and binding the opponent.It can also be used to create Bridges e.g
    Notes;
    -Can be used 3 times per Battle
    -Must be taught by Daiki

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Don't resubmit.
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    (Suiton:Kanko Buryoku)-Water Release:Lagoon Force
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:25
    Damage Points:N/a
    Description:The user can swiftly and suddenly create a barrier of water centimeters away from their body, the user can manipulate it to cover a side, quarter a body part etc..
    It Protects from thrown projectiles and any attack B-rank and below, but it weak to earth only being able to protect from C-rank attacks.
    Once used the user can dispel it.
    Notes;
    -Can only be used Twice
    -Cannot protect against attacks B-rank and above, but weak to earth
    -Must be taught by Daiki

    ~Declined~ In what way is this technique to any common water wall that was submitted in the past?
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 01:01 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦


    Extending Sword is a custom weapon in which the sword absorbs the users chakra and uses it to extend and curve itself. It was made by the first swordsman of the hidden mist for the mitsuo family who used it for themselves.
    the blade is capable of reaching lengths equivalent to 80MPH. The mitsuo family passed it down to the first son of all the sons. Mitsuo himself perfected it to where it can travel 100MPH.

    Mitsuo refuses to give away his sword no matter what, even to digest into himself so that he would keep it to himself. ( he likes keeping things to himself for some reason >.>)

    ( Kakuchō ken )- extending sword

    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Cost: 80
    Description: The Blade absorbs the users chakra to allow it to etend to far and wide places. The Blade has a special kind of steel made into it wich allows it to absorbs someones chakra. Since it isn't real metal the blade can curve its selve as well.
    * can only be used 3 times a battle *
    * the blade can be broken if come in clashes with a forbidden weapon *
    * can be used as a regular katana to sword clash with a target...but it can't be extended once that happens*
    (Special Note: Once the blade is extended it can be countered by stronger ( forbidden) or equal strength ( S-rank) to stop it from piercing them.)








    ( Kakuchō ken: Gin no hikari )- : extending sword: silver rain
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The Blade Absorbs the User Chakra which then allows the blade to extend. The Blade Must be charged for it to take to its fullest affect. Once the blade is charged the user aims and extend it at the sky. From the heat and pressure it gets for going up the air the blade breaks into 5 pieces wich shine of the sun and falls down with great speed from the sky . In order to make sure the blade doesn't get to the user, the user can redirect it to go where ever the want it since it is part of blade that absorbed the chakra.
    *once used can't be used again since the blade is broke =/*
    * can only be used by those who posses extending blade/sword

    ( 1 Katana 100 burēdo )- : 1 sword 100 blades
    Rank: B
    Range: close
    Type: Offensive , defensive
    Chakra cost:25
    Damage cost: 40
    Description: This attack consists of a extremely quick, precise thrust of the extending blade to the opponent.The User thrust blade 100 times at the enemy. The user does this with extremley fast thrusts. it can;t be used if there are any injuries to the hand.

    ~All Declined~ I made the mistake of accepting a custom that reach further then mid-range once. It will not happen again. Keep it short range, and maybe mid-range if you restrict it well.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ~Custom Weapon~

    Buki: Gilgamesh
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A

    Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the elements of fire and lightning. When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Gilgamesh. They are very versatile.When not in use Gilgamesh can be holstered on the users back.
    Gilgamesh's most notable unique trait is it's ability to switch between two elemental states: slow but powerful fire claws, and nimbly weak electric claws. These two states also come with slightly different combo chains, effectively making Gilgamesh two weapons in one. Since Gilgamesh can be worn on both the arm and legs it can be worn however the user wants in battle and changed during battle also. Both pairs of Gauntlets can only use one elemental type of energy at a time so when in its fire mode the abilities of its lightning mode cannot be used unless it will cost more chakra to maintain, in this case one Gilgamesh gauntlet is in Fire mode and the other is lightning mode.

    Normal mode
    -In this mode Gilgamesh has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes


    Lightning Mode
    -When in its lightning Mode Gilgamesh has the ability to destroy on contact any earth element jutsu A rank or lower due to its elements nature
    -It has the ability in lightning mode to numb the opponent on contact
    -It can boost the users speed when worn on the legs in this mode causing the user to move so fast that it causes the user to suffer from slight motion sickness after its used.

    Fire Mode
    -Able to disperse wind element jutsu A rank or lower on contact due to its elemental nature
    -It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

    ~Restrictions~
    -Switching elemental modes during battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Switching between wearing Gilgamesh on arms and legs is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Holstering/drawing Durga in battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Speed boost allows the user to evade an attack or get close to the enemy and it can only be used twice in battle
    -Destroying either an earth element attack or wind element attack is equivalent to one jutsu used and can only be used thrice in battle
    -Jutsu that require hand signs and ninja weapons can't be used while wearing Gilgamesh on the arms
    -Cannot stand on water while wearing Gilgamesh on the legs
    -Must be a S-Class Ninja or above to wear
    -Once worn it drains 2 chakra every turn
    -If Durga comes in contact with B rank or above water jutsu while in lightning mode it will shock the user and if it comes in contact while in fire mode with B rank or above water jutsu it will be deactivated for one turn
    -When they are using both elements the user loses 40 chakra points each turn
    Durga can be worn on one arm and one leg but reduces the effects it has on jutsu only able to counter C rank and below jutsu of either earth or lightning
    -Can only be used by Swizzik or any person he gives permission to












    ~Declined~ Make it 1 element, and take out the part where you can dispel any element up to A-rank with it. Also, why in the world would you receive a speed boost? Please elaborate on the abilities and the power ups that it gives you (+5, +10...etc).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I'd like to remind everyone that every approved custom jutsu need to be posted in your personal thread.

    You are forbidden from using your custom if it wasn't posted in your personal custom jutsu thread beforehand.

    For those who were unaware of such rule, the first post of this thread as now been updated with it.

    This rule will be applied starting now. Every member who does not updated his thread (or didn't create one), will be banned from this thread for a period of 1 week.


    Thank you all.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI View Post
    ](Kuchyose- kyojin makai hagetaka) Summoning- Giant Hell's VULTURE

    Description:
    After making few handseals the user summons a great,giant and badass VULTURE of all time named GAVA, which shows no mercy on his opponent, he looks like a big Raven with white eyes, which is extremely powerful and battle type, can use powerful attacks with his beak and his wings, it has sharp edge beak which is able to pass through the solid rock defense also has very strong claws, strong enough to carry away other summonings [depend on the weight/size of other summoning] user can ride on his back to use combos and also has very loud noise which can disturb/distract the opponent, it is able to fly high in the sky where opponent's jutsu's are unreachable.

    -Scroll Owner: -SUUI-
    -Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    -Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    -Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    -Must have signed Hells VULTURE contract
    -Can only be summoned once per battle


    Picture:

    ~Approved~

    Summoning Tech:

    (Omoi Noudo)- Mind Concentration

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementry
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:[After having special training with summoning] the user is able to control his summoning through his mind, talking through it and giving orders to move or attack,also with connecting through mind, user can combine its chakra while riding on his back to create powerful jutsus using their combine chakras.



    (Manako Hirameki)- Eyes Flash

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The summoning GAVA race toward its target emitting light rays from its eyes which blinds the target for one turn.


    (Sairento koku kaze)- Silent Cutting Wind

    Rank: S
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The summoning GAVA flies in the sky and reaches above the target without making any noise then by moving wings, it shoots powerful wind blade toward its target right above on his head which is powerful enough to make a curve-shaped scar on the ground.Target will be dead if get a direct hit.


    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 01:11 AM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Resubmiting:
    Name: (Koumorigasa)Umbrella
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The umbrella is a specially made umbrella,created to be used as a deadly weapon.It is a black Japanese fashioned umbrella made of bamboo which was reinforced with very resistant metal thus making it nearly unbreakable.It can be used for several purposes such as attacking or defending.It has a handle which is 1.5 metres long.Inside the umbrella's handle,a katana that is about 1 meter long is hidden which can be drawn when needed.The sword has no special abilities,though it can channel elemental chakras.Also,by spinning the umbrella the user can release a rain of about 100 senbon at the opponent.The umbrellas strongest ability is that it can absorb any water technique up to A rank (excluding A rank techs).This makes the umbrella a great tool for both offensive and defensive purposes.
    Note:Can only be used by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Senbon can be launched once per battle.
    Note:The user can defend from water techs 5 times per battle with a cool down period of 2 turns after every use of this ability.

    I removed the flight part and restricted the senbon launching to once per battle.

    ~Declined~ Still OP. A technique that can nullify all A-rank and under water 5 times a match, while not counting as one of the 3 moves in your turn is unacceptable. If I deem it OP in your next re-submission I'll decline it for good.
    Resubmiting:
    Name: (Koumorigasa)Umbrella
    Rank:S
    Typeffensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The umbrella is a specially made umbrella,created to be used as a deadly weapon.It is a black Japanese fashioned umbrella made of bamboo which was reinforced with very resistant metal thus making it nearly unbreakable,unless put under extreme pressure.It can be used for several purposes such as attacking or defending.It has a handle which is 1.5 metres long.Inside the umbrella's handle,a katana that is about 1 meter long is hidden which can be drawn when needed.The sword has no special abilities,though it can channel elemental chakras.Also,by spinning the umbrella the user can release a rain of about 100 senbon at the opponent.The umbrellas strongest ability is that it can absorb any water technique up to A rank (excluding B rank techs).This makes the umbrella a great tool for both offensive and defensive purposes.
    Note:Can only be used by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Senbon can be launched once per battle.
    Note:The user can defend from water techs 3 times per battle with a cool down period of 2 turns after every use of this ability.
    Note: Absorbing a water technique counts toward the user's 3 moves per turn.

    Changed the defending from A rank water from 5 times to 3 times.

    ~Approved~ Made the change for you -__-

    New ones:

    Name: (Mokuton:Kirikui Kyanon)Wood Release:Stump Canon
    Rank:B
    Range:Long
    Typeffensive
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description:The user channels Mokuton chakra into both his hands and by spreading them forward and changing them into wood the user can release stumps from them.The stumps travel at high speed.The user can release up to six stumps from each hand and doesn't have to shoot from both hands at the same time.
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    Note:Must have a Wood bio.
    Note:The user can shoot 6 stumps from each hand.

    ~Declined~ Please explain to me how your technique is any different than this one:http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wood_Re...rest_Technique

    Name: (Ninpou:Go Ishiki Kyousei Kouyou)Ninja Arts:Five Senses Great Enhancement
    Rank:S
    Range:Long
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user,by channeling chakra to certain parts of his brain gains the ability to enhance one of his 5 senses at a time (hear,smell,sight,taste and touch).
    Hearing:By channeling chakra into the users temporal lobe where hearing is enabled.The user gains the ability to hear even the slightest sound clearly as a bell in a radius of 2 kilometers.The users hearing decreases as he tries to hear further and the sounds get less sharper.When hearing is increased sight and smell are decreased.
    Smell:By channeling chakra into their nose and receptor neurons the user enhances his sense of smelling.This will give the user a high level of smells allowing him to even smell the chakra of beings over his nose.The users smell or olfaction is increased to the point where he can smell everything in a 5 kilometer radius.When smelling is increased hearing and sight are decreased.
    Sight:By channeling chakra into their eyes the user increases their sight.The users sight is increased to the point where the user can see the slightest detail and allowing the user to almost see the chakra trail of the opponent.The user is unable to see thermal images or through objects.When sight is increased smelling and hearing are decreased.
    Taste:By channeling chakra into the users taste buds the user increases his ability to taste.By inhaling air through the mouth the user can literally taste his surrounding and with that allowing him to track down his opponent.When taste is increased smell is decreased.
    Touch:By channeling chakra to the users skin the user increases their sense of touching.The users touch sensitivity is increased to the point where he can feel the slightest touch.By placing his hand on the ground the user can feel the movement on and under the ground allowing him to feel anything through his skin in a radius of 1 kilometer.When touch is increased all other senses of the user are decreased.
    Note:Every time the user changes his senses it counts as a move.
    Note:The user can enhance each sense twice per battle with a cool down period of 2 turns between each sense enhancement.
    Notence the user has enhanced a sense twice he is unable to use it correctly for the following 3 turns.After that period the sense works normally
    Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (I have a very similar one).
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦




    Summoning Animal: Phaze The Lesser bird of paradise
    Scroll Owner:Teno757
    Other Users who have signed contract: Nobody
    Summoning Boss if existing: Phaze The lesser bird of paradise
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None ATM

    ~Declined~ What is "Phaze The Lesser bird of paradise". Ain't any kind of animal I know. When submitting a new summon, you only mention the species, not the name of the animal.
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    Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi) Phaze The Black Palm
    Rank:S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 70
    Damage points: 70
    Description:The user Does 4 hand seals. and then bites his THUMB and slam his hands on the ground. once that happens. Phaze will appear in the air. soaring over me. it is as big as sauske hawk. so easy ridable. Phaze has a Mark on its back. that reacts to my chakra. allowing me to reverse summon on that mark on his back. only can do it once. all i have to do is the tiger hand seal. Phaze speaclizes in S rank water.. She is very fast. flys at the speed of 50Mph. Once she goes 20mph or less she focuses her chakra through her wings. once that happens she then spins around in circles real fast causing a tornado to form. once the tornado starts forming she sheds her feathers into the tornado.. once the tornado touches down the feathers inside the tornado starts to explode. causing a tornado explosion

    -Note:Can only stay for 4 turns
    -Note:Take 2 turns to Spin around to cause the tornado
    -Note:Cant use any B rank or higher jutsu once the summon is in play
    -Note:If the bird is hit while forming the tornado . the jutsu is cancelled
    -Notenly can use once
    -Notenced used it is automatically reversed summon

    ~Declined~ Summon wasn't approved.
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    (kasai-denkou :hirate senmetsu) Fire-Thunder Style: Palm Annihilation
    Rank:S
    Type:Attack
    Range:Long
    Chakra Cost:70
    Chakra Damage:90
    Description: The user does 4 hand signs once he does that. He spread both of his hands apart/ at a 180 degree angle from each other. as that occurs he channels his lightning chakra into his left hand to mold the lightning into a big HAND PALM. in the middle of body. while the left hand is molding the hand from lightning the right hand starts channeling his fire chakra into the Palm Hand. (Fire is inside the Lightning Palm). Once it is complete. it will look like

    . (Imagine the lightning is the outline. and its filled with fire.)

    Once Its complete. i let it go. jump back. and do 2 hand seals. once i do that it goes towards the enemy. once it gets in range with the enemy. it explodes... looks likke



    -Note:Takes 1 turn to complete
    -Note:Cant use Fire/Thunder for 2 turns after use
    -Note:The explosion is as big and wide as Jariya King Toad. (i forgot its name)
    -Note:Can use it only once
    -Note:Taught by Teno757 only

    (Edit or take out anything if u pls)

    ~Declined~ A whole custom clan was made on this abilities, please make some research next time.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Ginryū) Silver Dragon
    Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Ginryū was forged on the Island of Nihon and is the family heirloom of the Yōo family. Created by the legendary Masamune and infused with his life force, Ginryū is a special blade. By responding to the wielder’s chakra manipulation the blade can accept the affinity of Water, Fire, or Lightning affinity. Once every 4 turns the sword can channel lightning, Fire, Or water chakra through the ground or air to electrocute, impale or burn the opponent (The chakra can travel up to mid range),
    Also this sword can absorb the opponets attack, if it contains the same chakra as the blade. This is possible with attacks up to C-rank.
    *Note- The user can only put an affinity around the blade 3 times per battle and the affinity last 5 turns.
    *Note- Usable only once per battle.
    *Note- Other elements of the user drops by 10 damage points when one is in use.
    *Note- Can only be taught by Anbu junior.

    ~Declined~ You need to be a lot more specific on the elemental abilities this sword can unleash. Also, make every jutsu you use with it count toward your 3 moves per turn. Lastly, no absorbing of attacks.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    This week's cjs

    (Yumiya) - Bow and Arrow
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+25 for each arrow)
    Damage Points: 80 (but dead, if hit on a body part which may lead to death)
    Description: The user creates a bow of pure chakra of length 2m. And then he can create an arrow of length 2m and radius 3cm from either pure chakra or from any basic 5 elements. And after releasing it, arrow moves at very fast speed.
    Note: ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Bow lasts untill destroyed.
    ~If bow is not destroyed then one arrow can be created each turn without using this jutsu again.
    ~The bow's speed is slightly less then the susanoo's arrow.
    ~Can't use any jutsu of S-rank in same turn.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
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    (Ketteiteki Benso) - Ultimate Defense
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (if someone tries to cross it)
    Description: User creates 3 shadow clones. One clone releases water chakra, second one releases lightning chakra and the third one releases pure chakra in it to create a shield of hollow sphere around themselves of 10m radius, whose small part is below the earh, so from above the surface it looks like a dome. This shield can block 1 forbidden jutsu completely.
    Note: ~User must have learnt the "Shadow Clone Justu" to perform this technique.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ~Declined~ You're basically using 4 jutsus in 1 move:
    -Clones
    -2 elemental techniques
    -1 chakra technique

    No.

    ____________
    If this mode gets approved, then i will be visiting all the nine current jinchuurikis one by one and will be eating their small amount of flesh by defeating them in a fight or however..

    (Bijuu Mo-do) - Tailed-Beast Mode
    Typre: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates on a bijuu's chakra which he has obtained by eating flesh of bijuus, then he spreads that chakra in his whole body to make his normal chakra dense and strong just like bijuu's chakra and transforms into a bijuu of his choice. The height of the bijuu in which the user has transformed is same as user's height and also the size of all the jutsus decreases accordingly, but it is exactly same as original bijuu. So now he gets the abilities of that bijuu and can use everything that particular bijuu can use.
    Note: ~Can only transform in 1 bijuu (out of 9) per battle.
    ~User gets the abilities at Sannin Rank but only when in bijuu mode, and gets bijuu's forms (incomplete and complete) at Kage rank.
    ~User can only use those jutsus which that particular bijuu can use and also gets his weaknesses.
    ~When this mode is over than user gets too fatigue and exhausted that he can't use any jutsu above B-rank for the whole battle. Unlike the original jinchuuriki the user dont die because of his very small size and chakra used.
    ~Cannot use any other mode in same battle.
    ~Cannot use any jutsu of S-rank or higher in same turn.
    ~Mode lasts for 6 turns, first 3 in incomplete form and another 3 in complete form.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Cannot be Used by anyone except Enzup. (i.e. Cannot be taught)

    Additional Note: ~If you want then you can take my battle test that if i am worthy of it or not, but i think defeating all nine jinchurikis would be the biggest test for me.
    ~If yes, then battle test cannot be retaken before 1 month.

    I got this idea from ginkaku and kinkaku, although there is difference in transformation, like he wasn't in complete form but i am reducing the size of my bijju to human size and also his attacks..

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    Edit any part of any cj for approval..

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ You have no idea how hard it was to simply get the gold and silver brothers approved, so there's no way this will ever be acceptable.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gama Samsara) – Civet Summoning Technique: Gama Samsara
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Gama is a relatively young and small civet who is part of the Samsara branch of the Civet kingdom; he is known to be one of the most gifted civets in his generation for having a peculiar resistance to genjutsu (except for S-rank and above genjutsu, and Mangekyō Sharingan). It is quite hard to control Gama as he only helps summoners he respects in battle. However, once on good ground, he becomes rather protective and close to the summoner. Gama is a dark brown civet who attaches to the user’s body (most of the time he wraps around the user’s neck) and has the ability to use all ninjutsu the user knows up to C-rank. When joined with the user’s body, Gama can help the user dispel him from any A-rank or lower genjutsu since he can release chakra into the user’s body.
    Note: Gama has a strong bond with the contract holder and/or creator, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he’s summoned. As for anyone else, he only stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once.
    Note: Each of Gama’s jutsu used count as a jutsu of the user.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel A-rank and under genjutsu.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel genjutsu (via releasing chakra) 5 times per battle.
    Note: Genjutsu performed by Mangekyō Sharingan cannot be overcome.
    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions are still way off IMO.
    (Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gama Samsara) – Civet Summoning Technique: Gama Samsara
    Rank: A
    Type: Summoning
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Gama is a relatively young and small civet who is part of the Samsara branch of the Civet kingdom; he is known to be one of the most gifted civets in his generation for having a peculiar resistance to genjutsu (except for S-rank and above genjutsu, and Mangekyō Sharingan). It is quite hard to control Gama as he only helps summoners he respects in battle. However, once on good ground, he becomes rather protective and close to the summoner. Gama is a dark brown civet who attaches to the user’s body (most of the time he wraps around the user’s neck) and has the ability to use all ninjutsu the user knows up to C-rank. When joined with the user’s body, Gama can help the user dispel him from any A-rank or lower genjutsu since he can release chakra into the user’s body.
    Note: Gama has a strong bond with the contract holder and/or creator, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he’s summoned. As for anyone else, he only stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once.
    Note: Each of Gama’s jutsu used count as a jutsu of the user.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel A-rank and under genjutsu.
    Note: Gama can only help the user dispel genjutsu (via releasing chakra) 3 times per battle.
    Note: Genjutsu performed by Mangekyō Sharingan cannot be overcome.
    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.

    ~Approved~

    New:
    (Hetto-neko no Jutsu: Kawa Kyouran) - Civet Style: Fur Fury
    Rank: C-B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20-25
    Damage Points: 30-40 (+5 damage to taijutsu)
    Description: This jutsu is the ability of Civets to temporarily rapidly grow and lengthen their fur and hence allowing them to manipulate it. This technique works by concentrating chakra into the Civet’s fur and manipulating it to lengthen as well as hardening it due to the constant flow of chakra. The enhanced fur acquires steel-like properties just like Civet Style: Hide Projectiles and can be further reinforced by wrapping the lengthened strands of fur into thicker bundles/cables. The Civets who use this technique are capable of manipulating their fur to become extensions of their body i.e. to form extra limbs which can be used to restrict opponents or to grasps objects. Smaller Civets are only capable of creating individually (unwrapped) enhanced strands of their fur equivalent to C-rank. While normal or larger Civets are capable of coiling/wrapping each individual strand of enhanced fur into thicker bundles equivalent to B-rank.
    Note: Only Civet summons can perform this jutsu.
    Note: Only the Civet summons of at least S-class Ninja can use this.
    Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
    Created by DopeyDwarf

    ~Declined~ This is basically a rip-off of Jiraiya's Wild Lion's Mane Technique.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Myoujou Fuhen Waikyoku) – Summoning Technique: Lucifer's Everlasting Torment
    Type: Supplmentary/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage cost: N/A
    Description: The user unfolds a scroll in front of him and quickly bites his thumb and wipes blood over a seal on the scroll - this allows the user to summon shiny metal chains (made of Platinum) to shoot/burst out from the ground below an opponent and wrap around him, at high speed, constricting/restricting his movement (e.g. handseals). These chains can not hurt the opponent (i.e. it doesnt have spikes that protrude from it) but are merely used to immobilize him - the chains are light-weight yet relatively strong and is resistant to lightning jutsus.
    Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle.
    Created by DopeyDwarf

    ~Pending~ This is touchy...it falls under the CE section IMO. Get Caliburn or Nexus's opinion on this, VM me with their responses and I'll re-check this one.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Kōton: rippoutai) steel release: cube
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementry
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: /
    Description: the user does a series of five handseals then two halves of a giant cube come up from the ground one half one each side of the opponent the cube is large enough to hold 30 people inside once the cube is close you can use a four pillar or sixteen pillar to turn the cube into a large oven
    -can only be used by a steel bio
    - can only be taught by heavens blade


    (Kōton: metaru sadou) steel release: metal movement
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementry
    Range: short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: /
    Description: the user is able to move through metal object at very high speeds can be used to dodge attacks of gain tactical advantage over opponent
    -can only be used three times per match
    -user cant use any other steel jutsu the turn this is used

    -can only be used by steel bio
    -can only travel through steel that is connected
    -can only be taught by heavens blade



    ~Both declined and don't resubmit the second one~ The first one needs restriction.

    I hope these are ok now if not please feel free to adjust to make them acceptable

    (Kōton: mohaganedo) steel release: steel mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Mode
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40(+10 every turn in this mode)
    Damage Points: -
    Description: the user covers themself in a liquid steel and uses a huge amount of chakra to keep it in place however do to the weight of he steel the users speed is reduced but if the steel is knocked off the users body it will be replaced quickly while in this mode the user can only use steel jutsu, kenjutsu, and taijutsu also while in this mode all steel jutsu that require handseals can be done with a single handseal
    -user take -60 damage from taijutsu (meaning immune to anything A ranked or lower and S rank and above do less damage)
    -immune to A rank and below water
    -A ranked katon will heat the steel causing severe burns (+ 25 damage)
    -immune to wind and earth based attacks
    -vunerable to lightning based attacks (they do +40)
    --5 to users speed
    -can only be used once per match
    -last 4 turns
    -can only be taught by Heavens Blade

    ~Declined~ No offense, but there are so many things wrong with that one that I don't know where to start...First of all;

    -For steel to be liquid it needs to be greatly heated, meaning you'd die from the shear heat of it around you.
    -Only one hand seal fro all your steel jutsu? Make it "one less hand seal for all steel jutsu".
    - -60 to taijutsu? Please change that.
    -Immune to all earth and wind? Please change that.
    -You are forbidden to make references to the speed chart (as stated on the speed chart thread).
    -Last too long for all the abilities it grant you.

    Please not that I was tempted to write "Do not resubmit" on that one, so please make the proper changes.


    (Hyouton: yukidaruma)ice release: snowman
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: the user creates a large snowman above his opponent (its large enough to trap 10 people) after landing on its opponent it will trap them inside the snowman the opponent then become very vuneravle to lighting based jutsu
    -can only be used 3 time per match
    -+15 damage if opponent is hit with lighting based attack while trappened inside snowman
    -can only be used by ice release bios
    -can only be taught by Heavens Blade

    ~Approved~

    (genjutsu:kekkei genkai) illusion technique: bloodline limit
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: /
    Description: as your opponent looks at you, you put them in a genjutsu where they believe you have a KG you can disguise your attacks using this or make your opponent rethink there stratagy with this jutsu
    -can fake up to three kg
    -the more kg you fake the easier it will be to tell its a illusion (however mei does have two kg so its not impossible to have more then one)
    -can only fake KG (meaning no bugs not shadow manipulation just real KG)
    -can only be used once per match

    ~Declined~ You'll have to be a lot more descriptive on that jutsu to get it approved. Make it clear how it works.
    (Kōton: mohaganedo) steel release: steel mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Mode
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 40(+10 every turn in this mode)
    Damage Points: -
    Description: the user covers themself in steel armor which is created by releasing a huge amount of Kōton chakra and creating steal all around there body similar to the way impervious armor is done do to the weight of he steel the users speed is reduced while in this mode the user can only use steel jutsu, kenjutsu, and taijutsu also while in this mode all steel jutsu that require handseals can be done with a one less handseal
    -user can handle B ranked taijutsu (just like with impervious armor)
    -immune to A rank and below water
    -A ranked katon will heat the steel causing severe burns (+ 25 damage)
    -invunerable to A ranked and below fuuton and doton jutsu
    -vunerable to lightning based attacks (they do +40)
    -can only be used once per match
    -last 3 turns
    -can only be taught by Heavens Blade

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ First of all, you didn't mention the boost it would give you. Also, you're basically protected A-rank water,wind and earth -___- are you kidding me? The simple fact that you're covering yourself in steel was enough to make it unacceptable. I gave you a chance, but now it's enough.

    (to-chi) torch
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: torch is a large leoliguar (big enough to ride) he has a temper and is known to spit small fireballs at his summoner if he doesnt respect them torch can use all A ranked katon jutsu the summoner knows and is able to withstand C ranked and lower katon jutsu and has the special ability to light himself on fire blocking up to B ranked fuuton attacks trice per match(can charge the opponent while on fire and if he does its considered a B ranked attack)
    -all jutsu done by torch count as one of your moves
    -lighting himself on fire counts as a move
    -if your on him while he lights himself on fire you will be burned
    -can be out 3 turns
    -can only be summoned once
    -must have signed leoliguar
    -must swipe your blood on this tatoo to summon



    ~Approved~ Changed some ranks in your description and added the bold part.

    (doton: genkai no omori) earth release: limiting weights
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: /
    Description: (this jutsu is placed in the bio) the user wheres weights on there arms ankles and body as a form of physical training while the weights on the users speed is decreased and the user cant use any raiton jutsu the user preforms two handseals in order to make the weights crumble after the weights crumble the user gets a huge boost to there speed the speed boost seems even greater since it is being added on the fact that they where slowed down by the weights
    -if the user uses or is hit by a raiton tech the weights will crumble and they dont recieve the speed boost
    -user cant release the weights for the first 5 turns of the match
    -can only be placed in bios that are taijutsu specialist or taijutsu master
    -can only be taught be Heavens Blade

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ Clear rip off of Lee.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    Summoning Animal: Philippine Eagle
    Scroll Owner: battleandthebad
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

    [i checked and it doesnt look like anyone has this species of eagle]

    ~Declined~ Eagles already exist, you need to ask the owner of the contract if you can make a branch family.

    (hitofuki) gust
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: gust is large philippine eagle [two people can ride on him with ease] he can use all cannon A ranked and lower wind jutsu plus any wind custom jutsu A ranked or lower the user knows he is a gentle and kind eagle who is very protective of his summoner he is capable of creating a sphere of wind around him and anyone riding on him that will proctect from B-ranked attacks [C-rank fire will destroy it and takes A-ranked lightning]
    -sphere counts as one of your jutsu
    -shpere can be done once per summon
    -gust can stay out for 4 turns
    -gust can be summoned twice per match
    -must have signed the philippine eagle contract to use

    (Kuchiyose: kumo) summoning: clouds
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user summons clouds from the Philippine Eagle home village these clouds change the environment allowing the eagle summons to use a special techneque that normally they can only use in there village each tech is different depending on the personallity of the eagle
    -clouds stay on the field until destroyed
    -can only be used once per match
    -must have signed philippine eagle contract

    [before you decline this jutsu please keep this in mind when naruto went to the toads village he asked why he couldnt just keep some of the oil on him so he could go into SM anytime and grampa toad said that outside there environment it would evaporate so the basis of my jutsu is solid in my opion also when i say enviroment i dont mean the field will change more like a the air will change slightly not enough for people to notice except maybe the inuzuka clan cause they have super smell]

    this is my first time submitting please let me know if ive done anything wrong

    ~Both Declined~ Contract wasn't approved.
    (hitofuki) gust
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: gust is large cockatoo [two people can ride on her with ease] she can use all cannon A ranked and lower wind jutsu plus any wind custom jutsu A ranked or lower the user knows she is a gentle and kind bird who is very protective of her summoner she is capable of creating a sphere of wind around herself and anyone riding on her that will proctect from B-ranked attacks [C-rank fire will destroy it and takes A-ranked lightning]
    -sphere counts as one of your jutsu
    -sphere can be done once per summon
    -gust can stay out for 4 turns
    -gust can be summoned twice per match
    -must have signed the cockatoo contract to use

    [changed gust to a girl and changed it to a cockatoo]

    (Kuchiyose: kumo) summoning: clouds
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: the user summons clouds from the cockatoo home village these clouds change the environment allowing the cockatoo summons to use a special techneque that normally they can only use in there village each tech is different depending on the personallity of the bird
    -clouds stay on the field until destroyed
    -can only be used once per match
    -must have signed cockatoo contract

    (kitai kyou yukai) hope and happy
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: hope and happy are twin cockatoos that both girls they are friendly and caring they are pretty small too small to ride they can use all cannon A ranked and lower raiton jutsu plus any raiton custom jutsu A ranked or lower the user knows hope and happy have the ability to create a line of lightning connecting the two birds electrifying anything in between them (counts as a A ranked jutsu) hope and happy are connected on a very deep level and as long as your in contact with one you have preform handseals for the other (what i mean by this is if hope is perched on your shoulder and happy is flying around and happy wants to do (Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind you can preform the handseal for her since you are touching hope)
    -can only be summoned once
    -can stay on the field for four turns
    -all moves done by them count as one of your three moves
    -the lightning connecting them counts as one of your moves
    -must have signed the cockatoo contract
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    BRONTE

    Range: Mid
    Description: The Hammer is of unknown origins. The wielder of the Hammer feels as if the hammer weighs 10g to others it feels as if it weighs 3tonnes. Another thing to be noted the Hammer is made from an unknown metal and has been proven so far to be indestructible this created rumors that it was created in a dying star and it's power and energy was infused into the metal.
    Being struck by it is the equivalent to a punch of this weight. It can be thrown by the user and called back thanks to a seal on the hammer and the user. It has the ability to cast lightning from it that is similar to a chidori spear that reaches mid range and does not require handseals. The user can also direct the spear at the ground and cause the earth all around to mid range to crack protrude out the ground.
    If the user strikes the earth it will cause an earthquake that goes to Mid range causing nearby enemies to simply fall over and negates their current jutsu.
    If spun in the air it will also cause a hurricane that can go to mid range and throw opponents to long range and disperse any shadow clones.

    Restrictions:
    • Can only cast Hurricane once per battle
    • Can cause 3 Earthquakes
    • To us the chidori spear like ability from the hammer it charges and glows blue making it noticeable that its about to be fired. Although to charge it only takes 2-3s
    • Can only be wielded by Thor


    Elder Connor (Shōkan: Erudākonā)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Connor is thee oldest Orangutan and is an expert in Lightning Jutsu and can use all up to A rank. He cannot perform any Taijutsu as he is too old but is the same size as Gamabunta but much slower. Another advantage of having Connor on the field is he acts as a catalyst for Raiton chakra and if the user is within short range adds to the lightning damage by +15. He also increases the speed for all Lightning jutsu as the Raiton chakra is gathered faster the user requires less handseals. Like all Orangutan he can harden his hairs as a defense but due to repeatedly doing this and his age his hairs are constantly spiked and act as a constant defense.
    Restrictions
    • Can only be summoned once per battle
    • Will stay on the field for 3 turns
    • Can only be summoned if the Orangutan contract has been signed.


    Resubmitting - edited.

    Both Declined. Lack of propper template, and skilltype ( its Kuchiyose BTW)


    Elder Connor (Shōkan: Erudākonā)
    Type: Kuchiyose
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Connor is thee oldest Orangutan and is an expert in Lightning Jutsu and can use all up to A rank. He cannot perform any Taijutsu as he is too old but is the same size as Gamabunta but much slower. Another advantage of having Connor on the field is he acts as a catalyst for Raiton chakra so if the user is within short range to him their Raiton jutsus gain +5 damage. Also as the Raiton chakra is gathered faster the user requires 1 less handseal to perform them. Like all Orangutan he can harden his hairs as a defense but due to repeatedly doing this and his age his hairs are constantly spiked and act as a constant defense.
    Restrictions
    • Can only be summoned once per battle
    • Will stay on the field for 3 turns
    • All the jutsus used by the summon count toward the user's 3 moves per turn.
    • Can only be summoned if the Orangutan contract has been signed.

    ~Approved~ Added the bold part and changed it to +5.


    (Raitoninguhanmā) Lightning Hammer
    Type: Weapon - Hammer
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60

    Description: The Hammer is of unknown origins. The wielder of the Hammer feels as if the hammer weighs 10g to others it feels as if it weighs 3tonnes. Another thing to be noted the Hammer is made from an unknown metal and has been proven so far to be indestructible this created rumors that it was created in a dying star and it's power and energy was infused into the metal.
    Being struck by it is the equivalent to a punch of this weight. It can be thrown by the user and called back thanks to a seal on the hammer and the user. It has the ability to cast lightning from it that is similar to a chidori spear that reaches mid range and does not require handseals. The user can also direct the spear at the ground and cause the earth all around to mid range to crack protrude out the ground.
    If the user strikes the earth it will cause an earthquake that goes to Mid range causing nearby enemies to simply fall over and negates their current jutsu.
    If spun in the air it will also cause a hurricane that can go to mid range and throw opponents to long range and disperse any shadow clones.
    Restrictions:
    • Can only cast Hurricane once per battle
    • Can cause 3 Earthquakes
    • To us the chidori spear like ability from the hammer it charges and glows blue making it noticeable that its about to be fired. Although to charge it only takes 2-3s
    • Can only be wielded by Thor


    ~Declined~ A 3 ton punch...no. Called back by a seal? You really need to find a valid explanation for that. I feel as if you tried to rush this jutsu and stack as many abilities as possible in it. Take out most if not all the "jutsu abilities" (lightning, earthquake...etc), and submit them individually when the weapon gets approved.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Submissions starting on the 11/07/2011 ending on the 11/13/2011


    Note: Don't worry about the CJ stacking up, I'm done with my exams this Thursday so I'll be going on a CJ rampage after that :D!
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Swizzik View Post
    ~Custom Weapon~

    Buki: Durga
    Rank: S
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage: N/A

    Description:A set of black guantlet and greave-like weapons that use the elements of fire and lightning. When equipped they are attatched to the forearms or shins and at their ends channel the elemental claws of Durga. They are very versatile.When not in use Durga can be holstered on the users back.
    Durga's most notable unique trait is it's ability to switch between two elemental states: slow but powerful fire claws, and nimbly weak electric claws. These two states also come with slightly different combo chains, effectively making Durga two weapons in one. Since Durga can be worn on both the arm and legs it can be worn however the user wants in battle and changed during battle also. Both pairs of Gauntlets can only use one elemental type of energy at a time so when in its fire mode the abilities of its lightning mode cannot be used unless it will cost more chakra to maintain, in this case one Durga gauntlet is in Fire mode and the other is lightning mode.

    Normal mode
    -In this mode Durga has no special abilities and only used to add more effect to taijutsu attacks e.g. clawing an opponent with kicks and slashes


    Lightning Mode
    -When in its lightning Mode Durga has the ability to destroy on contact any earth element jutsu A rank or lower due to its elements nature
    -It has the ability in lightning mode to numb the opponent on contact
    -It boost the users speed when worn on the legs in this mode

    Fire Mode
    -Able to disperse wind element jutsu A rank or lower on contact due to its elemental nature
    -It has the ability to cause second degree burns to an opponent on contact

    ~Restrictions~
    -Switching elemental Nature during battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Switching between wearing Durga on arms and legs is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Holstering/drawing Durga in battle is equivalent to one jutsu used
    -Speed boost allows the user to evade an attack and it can only be used twice in battle
    -Destroying either an earth element attack or wind element attack is equivalent to one jutsu used and can only be used thrice in battle
    -Jutsu that require hand signs and ninja weapons can't be used while wearing Durga on the arms
    -Cannot stand on water while wearing Durga on the legs
    -Must be a S-Class Ninja or above to wear
    -Once worn it drains 2 chakra every turn
    -If Durga comes in contact with B rank or above water jutsu while in lightning mode it will shock the user and if it comes in contact while in fire mode with B rank or above water jutsu it will be deactivated for one turn
    -When they are using both elements the user loses 40 chakra points each turn
    Durga can be worn on one arm and one leg but reduces the effects it has on jutsu only able to counter C rank and below jutsu of either earth and lightning
    -Can only be used by Swizzik or any person he gives permission to










    Durga is the name of a Hindu goddess. I believe ( correct me if I'm wrong, I've been out of touch ) that the rule established by Hells was that jutsu/weapons cannot be named after gods of religions ( other than dead ones or the Japanese one itself. )
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    I'm dropping my custom weapon, Helm Splitter if Staff of Darkness and destrection is approved :
    Herumusupuritta: Helm Splitter
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short to Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for the special abilities)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    A giant Hammer made of a special metal that has the ability to conduct earth chakra. The hammer itself is almost indesctrutable and is a formidable weapon. When the user channels either his earth chakra or his normal chakra, he gains acess to some unique abilities:
    Abilities:
    -Channeling normal chakra through it and slamming it into the ground creates an A-Rank chakra shockwave up to mid range.
    -Slamming the ground with the hammer infused with doton chakra creates an B-Rank wave of earth capable of overturning the landscape up to mid range
    -User can channel doton chakra into the hammer and swirl it into a circular pattern in front of him to defend against up to 1 A-Rank technique (follows elemental table)

    Note: Each ability can only be used once.
    Note2: User can't use lightning for 1 turn after the hammers abilities
    Note3: When used to defend, user can't use earth in the same turn
    Note4: If used one of the hammers abilities the user can't use any A-Rank Doton jutsus for 2 turns.
    Note5: can only be wielded by The Norwegian





    (Buin no yami ken toukai)- Staff of darkness and destruction
    Type: Attack/ Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40 (for each jutsu)
    Damage Points: 80 (For each jutsu + 15% boost to all dark jutsus)
    The staff of darkness and destruction is a special weapon made just for Remy Etienne LeBeau. It looks just like a normal, long staff, but the eyes can trick you. The staff of darkness and destruction is infused with the kekkei genkai, dark release and can therefore absorb and release attacks. The staff can absorb lightning and fire attacks up to A-Rank when the user spins it around in front of him and the newly absorbed jutsu can be released at the opponent in a S-Ranked beam of darkness when the user wants too. (Absorbing B-Rank attacks will result in an A-Rank beam). This beam travel up to Mid-Range. The user can store up the absorbed energy as long as he wants too before releasing the beam.
    ~Note: Only the beam counts as one of the three moves per match, but both of the usages can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Note 2: Must have the Remy Etienne LeBeau bio
    ~Note 3: The absorbing and the beam can only be used 2 times per battle, after that the staff only boosts the dark jutsus.
    ~Note 4: No Dark-Release jutsu for 3 turns after the beam is used
    ~Note 5: Must have a Dark-Release bio
    ~Note 6: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~.

    ~Declined~ Enough with the absorption of elements and shooting beams from weapons @__@ find another ability. I know it's related to your KG, but seriously there's just too many weapon with that ability already.

    (Buin no yami ken toukai: Houmen)- Staff of darkness and destruction: Release
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Remi LeBeau takes his Staff of darkness and destruction and starts to gather all of his Dark-Release chakra into it. The staff will have absorbed one A-Ranked attacked previously, but not release it as a beam. Once the user have sendt Dark-Chakra into it, he slams it down on the ground, and release all the Darkness chakra into the ground. All the way up to mid-range will blow away due to the pressure, and clear the part for the user.
    ~Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    ~Note 2: Must have the Remi Etiene LeBeau bio and be taght by ~The Norwegian~

    ~Declined~ Weapon wasn't approved.

    (Irui No Kurayami)-Clothes of Darness
    Type: Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 10 to all Dark Release jutsus)
    Clothes of Darkness are a special set of cloths made special for Remi Etiene LeBeau. All the way from the shoes to the neck the clothes are black, and infused with Dark-Release chakra. Only the head is not covered. On the back of these clothes there’s a long black cloak, that the user can use to fly, but only if there’s a wind source under him that lifts him up into the air. Since the clothes are infused with dark-release chakra it has the natural ability to absorb fire and lightning attacks that are C-Ranked and weaker. The whole stomack is made by a weak metal, so kunais won’t affect it if it hits. The one wearing these clothes also recive a +10 boost to all Dark Release jutsus.
    ~Note: The absorbing does not count towards the 3 moves per match, since it happens naturaly.
    ~Note 2: Only a Remi bio can use this, and must be taught by ~The Norwegian~.

    ~Declined~ Armors falls under CW so make your choice, what do you want to keep. The staff of this. Oh and by the way, this jutsu is unacceptable for the reasons I mentioned above and because you're basically canceling attacks without having it counts as a move. You do understand that for the cloths to react the way you said it would, it needs a chakra source; yours. It will count as a move.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Hayaton: Hayai Bushin no Jutsu) – Swift Release: Swift Clone Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user does a single hand seal and then creates a clone made from his Hayaton Chakra. Unbeknown to the opponent, this clone has explosion tags under his clothes. The clone then runs around on the battlefield with the speed of normal swift technique, while the user keeps the opponent busy. Then, when there’s an opening the clone will get close and let the explosion tags activate, blowing up near the opponent.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: The user can’t use any swift techniques in the same turn and for 2 turns after this clone is made.
    Note: The clone lasts 2 turns, if he has not exploded by then, he will automatically explode.
    Note: Clone have the same Hayaton speed boosts as any other Hayaton technique

    ||Declined|| A bit much with the explosive tags. He's pretty much a moving, supersonic/hypersonic bomb.

    (Hayaton: Senjigusuri Hayai) - Swift Release: Swift infusion
    Type: Supplementary/ Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user infuses a kunai with his Swift Chakra, letting it move much faster, as well as increasing its piercing power due to the sheer speed added.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: Can not use any swift techniques in the same turn


    Adauchi Naka no Yūkai tetsu: Vendetta of the Melting Iron
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user throws 3 kunai, one directly at the opponent and two to both his sides. Then, the user Focuses his Swift Chakra through his body. He then runs up to his kunai (one of the three, he can choose which), and intercepts it before the kunai hits his opponent (the two kunai that are thrown to the sides of the opponent however, aren't aimed at his main body but more in a 45° angle away from his body). As he intercepts it, he throws it again with full force, letting the kunai increase its speed even more.
    Note: can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: No swift techniques above B in the same turn, or 1 turn after this
    Note: Can also be used to intercept an incoming kunai.

    (Hayaton: Hayai Bushin no Jutsu) – Swift Release: Swift Clone Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user does a single hand seal and then creates a clone made from his Hayaton Chakra. The clone then runs around on the battlefield with the speed of normal swift technique, while the user keeps the opponent busy. Then, when there’s an opening the clone will get go into close encounter with the opponent as the user distracts him.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used three times.
    Note: The user can’t use any swift techniques in the same turn and for 2 turns after this clone is made.
    Note: Clone have the same Hayaton speed boosts as any other Hayaton technique.
    Note: The clone can only use ninja tools and taijutsu attacks, meaning no elemental/normal ninjutsu and genjutsu.

    Dropped the part about having bombs attached to it. Seemed a tad OP after all I guess.

    ~All Pending~ All Swift jutsus are on hold.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Fuuton- Kaze no Shōmetsu no Kabe no ōkina Bōru) Wind release- Great Balls of Wind Annihilation Wall
    Type: Attack-Defense
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will focus his wind chakra into his lungs while breathing in and releases multiple large spheres of wind that merge creating a wall of spheres of spinning wind. This jutsu covers a large range in width and height when the wall forms traveling towards the opponent.
    *Note: Can’t use A-rank wind and above next turn.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ~Declined~ Restrictions on the usage?
    (Fuuton- Kaze no Shōmetsu no Kabe no ōkina Bōru) Wind release- Great Balls of Wind Annihilation Wall
    Type: Attack-Defense
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will focus his wind chakra into his lungs while breathing in and releases multiple large spheres of wind that merge creating a wall of spheres of spinning wind. This jutsu covers a large range in width and height when the wall forms traveling towards the opponent.
    *Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: Can’t use A-rank wind and above next turn.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ~Approved~

    Quote Originally Posted by Toku View Post
    (Doton- Kyūkyoku no Jūden) Earth release- Ultimate Charge
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will raise a huge rhino’s head out of the ground made out of earth w/ its rock horn made of the densest minerals capable of protruding any earth defense made by an opponent.
    *Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ~Declined~ I don't really get how the Rhyno attacks your opponent. Can the head move around or is it created next to your opponent? Also, make it up to mid-range.
    (Doton- Kyūkyoku no Jūden) Earth release- Ultimate Charge
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will raise a huge rhino’s head out of the ground, in front of him, made out of earth w/ its rock horn made of the densest minerals capable of protruding any earth defense made by an opponent (S-rank and below). It moves in a straight line towards the target building up speed and momentum, while merged to the ground as it travels. Once it starts its foward charge its trajectory can not be changed.
    *Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ~Approved~ Made it 2 times per battle.

    (Doton- Chikyū no Baindo Hantei) Earth release- Earth Binding Judgment
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: the user will gather his earth chakra under the opponent and release a barrage of mud chains that explode out of the ground. The chains will bind the opponents arms and legs before blending in together binding the rest of his body. The chains keep contact deep within the ground grounding themselves making them able to withstand a-rank and below lightning.
    *Note: Can’t use S-rank earth next turn.
    *Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    *Note: Can only be used by Toku.

    ~Declined~ Where does the damage come from and take out the part where it can withstand A-rank lightning. Both would cancel each other out.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    This Week Submissions

    | Katon : Ame No Honoo |Fire Release : Rain Of Flame |

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user firstly gather great amount of his katon chakra,channeling it into his fingers ,as the chakra into his fingers he form the chakra into flame so his fingers will turn into flame ,then he points his fingers towards the sky ,shooting bullets of flames from his hand ,as it reach the sky it fall from the sky in form of rain but bigger than the rain droppings it's bigger than the rain ×3 times making all the air full of flame which fall from all around short to mid range
    -CAN only be used/taught by -Kamishiro-
    -must master Katon And AACT
    -can't use any katon jutsu at the same turn nor above S rank on the next turn
    - can only be used 3 times

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    | Meiton : Makai Nami No Jutsu | Dark Release :Hell Wave |


    Type: Attack
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user first gather great amount of his dark release chakra ,once he has the requested amount ,he channel the dark release chakra into his hand ,slamming his hand on the ground causing the dark release chakra to channel into the ground making great wave of dark release that go towards the opponent through the ground.
    -Can only be used/tough by -Kamishiro-.
    -Must Have Dark release biography .
    -can't use any dark release technique on the same turn.
    -can't use higher than A rank dark release technique on the next turn.
    __________________________________________


    Beowulf

    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 5 to any Kenjutsu/taijutsu (+10 To any Lightning)
    Description:Beowulf is a powerful weapon made of special metal ,It has white and silver color ,and the shoes has some paws on it,it was made by a lightning release user,he designed it to be able to use all lightning jutsus to it ,and due to that he made a special hole on it at secrets spot he made that when the user wears it , small amount of lightning appears around it which means it's surrounded by lightning all over it ,so by that the user earn 10 points to every lightning attack ,also due to being surrounded by lightning when the user hold a sword the lightning surround the sword which means it make the kenjutsu stronger however the user can't shoot anything he can just make lightning surround it to make it stronger ,also as it made of lightning the user can sense of any lightning jutsu he make or any one make.
    - can only be wielded by -Kamishiro-
    - must master lightning release
    -must enter the battle with it
    - can only sense lightning techniques 4 times

    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    [Katon: Kaen Karasu] - Fire Release: The Blazing Crow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 [-40 to the user]
    Description: This is an advanced fire technique that's taught to the user by Blaze the legendary crow of fire and the most experienced crow in the fire release, this technique is given to the user after proving skilled enough in the arts of fire release and showing a sufficient amount of respect towards the crows, After the user forms a set of handseals (Ram → Monkey → Horse → Bird → Tiger) The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra into his lungs as well as inhale a large amount of air and mixes both air and fire chakra to create fire which is shot out of his mouth in the shape of a huge fire stream the same size as the "Oil flame bullet technique", immediately the user using his shape manipulation to turn the fire stream as it's shot out of his mouth into the shape of a soaring crow of fire the same size of the fire stream that was shot by the user scorching the ground as it heads for the target and making a noise equivalent to 100 crows screaming as it's heading for the opponent, this technique becomes exceptionally powerful if used after a wind technique that's possible to merge with this technique making it a fire/wind combination, the crow of flames absorb the power of the wind as fuel and becomes larger than it already is, but after this technique is used the user's body becomes extremely exhausted due to chakra overuse.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user is unable to use fire techniques at all for the next 2 turns.
    ~This technique counts as 2 moves of the 3 moves allowed per turn.
    ~This technique puts a huge strain on the user's body in the following turns due to the chakra overuse the simplest movements puts a huge strain on the user's body and the speed of the user drastically decreases for the next 3 turns.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined~ @Your change: this couldn't get more vague lol. Give a fix size that's reasonable.

    -Rebellion-
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 30 for blocking each fire attack)
    Damage: (20 base attack for normal use) (+15 damage to every fire based jutsu)
    Description: the Rebellion sword is made out of a special metal that is able to use the user's fire chakra , it has a large white blade with a silver skull shaped handle ,it's worn on the user's back like Kakashi's sword when he was young , when the user channels his fire chakra into the blade, a fire Aura surrounds the white blade making the sword more lighter and enhancing the user with faster reactions and turning the blades color into bloody red, as long as the user is wielding the blade he can perform any fire technique with the use of only a single handseal, also by adding the +30 fire chakra of the user to the blade , the blade can block fire techniques up to A-rank negating the fire and absorbing it but still receives a certain amount of damage from the attack.
    ~ Cannot be used without mastering the fire element.
    ~ User takes -10 damage when absorbing a fire technique.
    ~ Can only block fire techniques 3 times per battle.
    ~ Can only be weilded by ~Crow~

    Sword:

    ~Approved~
    [Katon: Kaen Karasu] - Fire Release: The Blazing Crow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 100 [-40 to the user]
    Description: This is an advanced fire technique that's taught to the user by Blaze the legendary crow of fire and the most experienced crow in the fire release, this technique is given to the user after proving skilled enough in the arts of fire release and showing a sufficient amount of respect towards the crows, After the user forms a set of handseals (Ram → Monkey → Horse → Bird → Tiger) The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra into his lungs as well as inhale a large amount of air and mixes both air and fire chakra to create fire which is shot out of his mouth in the shape of a huge fire stream the same size as the "Oil flame bullet technique", immediately the user using his shape manipulation to turn the fire stream as it's shot out of his mouth into the shape of a soaring crow of fire At the size of the Blaze ball Technique scorching the ground as it heads for the target and making a noise equivalent to 100 crows screaming as it's heading for the opponent, this technique becomes exceptionally powerful if used after a wind technique that's possible to merge with this technique making it a fire/wind combination, the crow of flames absorb the power of the wind as fuel and becomes larger than it already is, but after this technique is used the user's body becomes extremely exhausted due to chakra overuse.
    ~Can only be used once per battle.
    ~The user is unable to use fire techniques at all for the next 2 turns.
    ~This technique counts as 2 moves of the 3 moves allowed per turn.
    ~This technique puts a huge strain on the user's body in the following turns due to the chakra overuse the simplest movements puts a huge strain on the user's body and the speed of the user drastically decreases for the next 3 turns.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Approved~

    [Katon: Hōka Hiketsu] - Fire Release: Fire Absorption
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A [+15 If absorbed an A-rank fire technique, +25 if absorbed a S-ranked fire technique]
    Description: While the user is holding his sword Rebellion the user infuses a large amount of fire chakra into the blade of the sword causing fire aura to surround the blade as the color of the blade turns into bloody red, whenever a Fire technique is shot at the user with Rebellion in his hand the user slices through the fire technique using Rebellion's fire absorption ability to absorb the fire from the opponent's technique when it's within Short range from the user, when the fire technique is absorbed, a roar is released from the skull of the blade as the Skull's eyes ignite in flames and turn red as well as the blade, using the absorbed fire energy in the blade to the user's advantage, when using a fire technique the user releases the absorbed fire energy into the fire technique that he uses after the usage of this technique causing it to be more powerful adding [+15/+25] damage points to the next fire technique that the user uses, however when the user is absorbing the fire energy by the usage of rebellion's abilities he takes a fixed amount of damage from the fire technique that he absorbs.
    ~The absorbed Fire technique must be at least an A-ranked.
    ~Up to S-rank fire techniques can be absorbed.
    ~Can only be used once when absorbing an S-ranked fire technique.
    ~Can only be used twice when absorbing an A-ranked fire technique and can't absorb any S-ranked fire techniques anymore.
    ~Overall the technique can only be used twice [once abosrbing an S-ranked fire technique or twice absorbing an A-ranked fire technique]
    ~When absorbing an S-ranked fire technique the user can't use any fire technique the next two turns and suffers -40 damage from the absorbed technique.
    ~When absorbing an A-ranked fire technique the user can't use any fire techniques the next turn and suffers -20 damage points.
    ~Must be a gap of 2 turns between absorbing two A-ranked fire techniques.
    ~The user's fire technique that's to be enhanced by this technique must be done right after using this technique.
    ~Can only be used through Rebellion.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined do not resubmit~ I've been pretty clear on this in the last pages: no more jutsus absorption will be accepted, especially not when the technique doing it is that OP. +25?

    [Karasu Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Naraku] - Crow Summoning Technique: Hades
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A [+15 to The summoner's Fire techniques]
    Description: The user bites his thumb and gathers a large amount of chakra then afterwards he makes a handseal summoning "Hades" on the user's right shoulder, Hades is an elderly Crow at the same size of the elder Toad Fugasaku, he's all covered in black feathers from all over his body with two bright white lines across all of his body, Hades was born with the natural affinity of the fire release and used to master all of the fire techniques but due to his elderly age he can't perform any fire techniques anymore, but instead when he's staying on the user's shoulder or in other words having a physical contact with the user, he injects his fire chakra into the user's body accelerating the speed of the user's fire chakra when it's gathered by the user and increasing the amount, thus making less time for the user to perform fire techniques and allowing the user to perform fire techniques without any handseals required as well as boost their strength by +15 damage points, another special ability that Hades has is that he's Fire chakra sensor, meaning that he senses the heat waves signatures from the opponent(s) and when he channels his fire chakra and knows what technique the opponent is going to use, when Hades injects his fire elemental chakra into the user's body he also transfers this ability to the user but it only lasts when Hades is present on the field, the sensing ability that Hades has is based on charging the air particles with fire chakra and triggering heat waves through the battlefield that allows him to track the heat signature of the opponent(s) that's already present within their bodies.
    ~Can only be summoned once per battle.
    ~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
    ~The user can't use any Water based techniques when Hades is injecting his body with Fire chakra due to the negative chakra natures of Fire and Water.
    ~Must have Mastered the Fire release.
    ~Must have signed the Crows contract.
    ~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

    ~Declined~ Heat sensing already exist and yours is therefor a rip-off. +15 is ridiculous, it's more than the 7SM. No hand seals is just the cherry on top . Make it 1 less hand seal. Take out the whole part about heat sensing and transferring it to you.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Igneel View Post
    ~Resubmitting ~


    Kyōka Suigetsu

    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:50(-10 per turn as long as the user hold Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands )
    Damage:+5 to all raiton jutsu's
    Description: Kyōka Suigetsu is the ancient sword that was awarded to Igneel by the kage of kumogakure. Kyōka Suigetsu is said to be the Sword made from a thunderbolt and can only be wielded by True warriors.As long as the user holds Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands,Kyōka Suigetsu sucks the users raiton chakra(10 points per turn)and coats herself with this chakra,thereby making the sword much more sharper such that she could slice through anything except diamond hard substances.Kyōka Suigetsu has the ability to absorb raiton jutsu's of A-rank and below and gets coated with lightning chakra such that bolts of lightning could be seen surrounding the sword.The bolts last for 1 turn and if the user uses the sword to cut the opponent now,it will make the opponent numb.

    • Can only be wielded by Shisui and if anyone else touches the sword a 1000V current strikes the wielder
    • Can cut through all elemental jutsu's of B-rank and Below(except fuuton only C-rank fuuton jutsu's can be cut) and can absorb A-rank Lightning
    • Cutting through jutsu's and absorbing lightning jutsu's count as a move
    • Cannot use any Fuuton jutsu's of A-rank and above as long the user holds Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands.
    • Kyōka Suigetsu sucks the user chakra 10 points per turn
    • When the sword is unsheathed the user cannot use any jutsu of S-rank in the same turn
    • Absorbing opponents jutsu's count towards one of the users turns


    ~Declined~ Take out the part where you absorb an element, there's enough sword that does that already to call yours a rip-off. A 1000v discharge if your opponent touch it? That's an instant kill and it's OP, take it off. Define cutting through jutsu, can it cut through more than lightning jutsu? Cutting anything that isn't Diamond-like? What about other swords that coat themselves with lightning? Take out that part and replace it by something more trivial like: "Can cut through most materials as it's extremely resistant".
    completely changed the ability of the sword~

    Kyōka Suigetsu

    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40(+10 per turn as long as the user hold Kyōka Suigetsu in his hands )
    Damage:80
    Description:Kyōka Suigetsu is an ancient sword said to be made by tanuki a master of illusions.Kyōka Suigetsu is said to be wielded by true genjutsu specialists and can use all genjutsu without any handseal.The most significant ability of the sword is that,once some one has seen the sword,he/she is cast under a genjutsu that he/she doesn't even realize.The genjutsu makes the opponent's brain slow down such that when the user uses a jutsu the opponent will see the user use the same jutsu 5 sec after the user used the jutsu in reality and so the opponent will only react accordingly(both hearing and sensing are also slowed down).The Genjutsu cast on the opponent is of S-rank if the opponent is of lower rank and is of A-rank if they are of same or higher rank.

    Working of the genjutsu:The genjutsu effects the the temporal lobe(controls hearing) and also the occipital lobe(controls vision) and the parietal lobe( mainly somatosensory cortex which control the body's senses).The genjutsu makes these parts of the brain slow down such that there ability to process information gets a time-lag of 5 sec.


    -can only be possessed by igneel
    -If anybody else touches Kyōka Suigetsu,that person will fall asleep aslong as he hold the sword in his hand
    -As long as the user holds the sword he is not able to use F-ranked ninjutsu and if does use them,the genjutsu will affect the user and he wouldn't even know
    -as long as the user holds the sword,he is not effected by genjutsu's

    ~Declined~ There's a CE doing something very similar and the whole time dilation concept was overused and banned in my book.

    Raiton:zappu Kyanon|Lightning Release:Zap cannon|
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:The user concentrates raiton chakra in his body and does a single handseal and then charges the air(from mid-range infront of him) with positive charge and this charging is instant and only doujutsu users can see the charging.Right after charging the air the user goes onto do 5 handseals and just after he does the handseals,he raises his hand and sends a blast of lightning into the sky and just the instant lightning reaches the sky,the lightning appears right above the are which was charged initially and strikes down instantly and strike everything mid-long range infront of him which was initially charged by the user.The lightning fires everything in its path.Since lightning is -vely charged the air is +vely charged the speed of the lightning striking is almost instantaneous and in most cases unavoidable except for space time ninjutsu

    -can only be used by igneel
    -must have mastery over lightning
    -user looses the ability to manipulate raiton chakra and cannot use any raiton jutsu's for the rest of the battle
    -must have an affinity towards lightning element

    ~Declined~ Re-read yourself. I wish I could point out something to alter/take off, but I didn't understand half of your description.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Chanpurū kendō: Supinburēka)Champloo Kendo: The Spin Breaker

    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will jump off the ground and using their arm the user will put his arm on their opponents head. after their hand is on thier opponents head the user will then use their body weight to do like a cartwheel and land behind the opponent then the user i deliever a very strong punch to their opponents spin.

    Requirements

    *Note:Can only be Taught by -Itachi- or Masters of Champloo Kendo that have -Itachi-'s Permission to to teach Champloo

    *Note:Must be trained up to this technique to use it



    ~Declined~ I'm sorry but you don't need a jutsu to do this. Also, you left the chakra point empty. If you're going to do a taijutsu, make it more complex than a mere punch.

    (Chanpurū kendō: Feisumasshā) Champloo Kendo: The Face Smasher

    Rank:
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The User will drop down onto the ground and then using his arms as support the user will wrap their legs around their opponents neck and then roll their body Backwards slamming their opponents head into the ground

    Requirements

    Note: Can only be taught by -Itachi- or Champloo Kendo Masters with -itachi-'s Permission to teach it

    Note: Must be taught up to this technique to learn it


    ~Declined~ Rank and restrictions?

    DON'T USE A FONT O__< NEXT TIME YOU DO, I'LL POST THIS UNDER ALL YOUR CUSTOMS:

    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
    Thank you.

     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Sogeki Geijutsu: Mohaya yu-bekarazu touhou, Mohaya yu-bekarazu!) - Sniper Arts: Now you see me, now you don't!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: Very much like kakashi when charging at his opponent when using raikiri, the user will start channeling great amounts of chakra into his feet for a 1.2x boost in speed, followed by charging forward at great speeds in a zig-zag manner. The user will make a full "Z", zig-zag side stepping left/right/left. From the boost in speed caused by the chakra in the users feet, the sheer pressure and force of Z-side stepping, will leave a small creator in the ground where the foot once was. Each Z-step travels the distance of 5 yards. So the user will go 5 yards forward/towards the left, 5 forward/towards the right, and so on. The user will be shooting a wind infused & explosively tagged arrow at great speeds in each side step he performs (so three) causing the arrows to reach the target from different angles 5 yards apart. Speed wise, the arrows are 1.5x faster than throwing a regular kunai, so it will reach the target within 1-2 seconds (short-mid) or 3-4 (short-long). The opponent will still be able to see the users but will get a tad bit confused from the zig-zaging. This whole process is performed in a fast and swift motion.

    Note: Requires the use of a Bow.
    Note: Can be used three times per battle.
    Note: The speed boost only lasts the turn that it is used.
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias.

    ~Declined~ I like the jutsu in itself, but I can't allow a technique that will multiply your speed by a factor of 1.2. If you already have speed enhancing techniques activated it would become plain OP. Fix it any way you want but keep it a fixed boost, independent of your speed (and be sure not to use the speed chart as a reference, it's against the rules).
    Resubmitting:

    (Sogeki Geijutsu: Mohaya yu-bekarazu touhou, Mohaya yu-bekarazu!) - Sniper Arts: Now you see me, now you don't!
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will channel his earth chakra into the ground through his feet. He then will cause the earth to start shifting at fast speeds in a zig-zag manner. The user will make a full "Z", zig-zag shifting left/right/left. Each shift travels the distance of 5 yards. So the user will go 5 yards forward/towards the left, 5 forward/towards the right, and so on. From the earth shifting a small cloud of dust will rise from the ground big enough to conceal the users body from the neck down as he shifts.(A means to confuse the opponent by blocking his view, but not entirely.) As the earth is shifting, the user will be shooting an explosively tagged arrow at great speeds in each shift he performs (so three) causing the arrows to reach the target from different angles 5 yards apart. Speed wise, the arrows are faster than throwing a regular kunai, so it will reach the target faster than normal, giving the target less time to react. Due to the dust cloud, the opponent won't be able to clearly see the user and will get confused from the zig-zag shifting the earth is causing. Due to the great field of vision and accuracy a sniper has, he will have no problem accurately hitting his desired target. This whole process is performed in a fast and swift motion.

    Note: Requires the use of a Bow.
    Note: Can be used three times per battle.
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias.

    ~Approved~

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    (Sogeki Geijutsu: Kanetsu Juuji Ya) - Sniper Arts: Heat Seeking Arrows
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will channel fire chakra throughout his bow. When an arrow is shot it will be coated with that fire chakra and have the capability to follow a selected heat signature, like a heat seeking missile.

    Note: Must wield a bow
    Note: Activation lasts three turns
    Note: Must have mastered Fire
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias

    ~Declined~ The heat sensing ability was already approved as a CJ and your submission is therefore a rip off.

    (Sogeki Geijutsu: Niji Danmaku) - Sniper Arts: Rainbow Barrage
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which manifests a web-like crosshair in front. The user will then pull back the string of the bow as if he were about to shoot. However he will keep his hand at a stand still pulling back the string as he channels elemental chakra into the crosshair.(Water,Wind,Fire,Lighting) Once the element is chosen, the user will release up to 100 arrow shaped blasts of the selected element. Once all 100 arrows are released the chakra that was used to create the web-like crosshair will combine together creating one big shaped arrow. This is when the user will actually let go of the string of his bow and release that last powerful elemental arrow.

    Note: Can only be used twice per battle
    Note: Requires the use of a bow
    Note: Pure chakra can also be used without having to choose an element
    Note: Earth chakra will not be able to be channeled into the crosshair due to the weight that it would cause to shoot the last arrow.
    Note: No S-Ranked or above of the selected element used for one turn after use
    Note: No Sniper Art techniques for the next turn
    Note: Must be taught by Mathias



    Feel free to edit anything to help its approval.

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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    (Fuuton: Su-pa Janpu) - Wind style: Super Jump
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: While bending the legs at an angle, user contrates a huge amount of wind chakra in his legs, and then releases it, resulting in a super jump upto 20m height in an instant in any direction the user wants.
    This technique can also be used to jump from short to mid or from mid to long range and vice versa.
    Note: Can only be taught by Bolt.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per match.
    (Fuuton: Haipa- Janpu) - Wind Style: Hyper Jump
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Advanced version of "Super Jump", in which user contrates a very huge amount of wind chakra in his legs, and then releases it, resulting in a hyper jump upto 30m height in an instant in any direction the user wants.
    This technique can also be used to jump from short to long or from long to short range as it is very advanced.
    Note: Must know "(Fuuton: Su-pa Janpu) - Wind style: Super Jump" to use this technique.
    Note: Can only be taught by Bolt.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times per match.

    ~Declined~ 30m in an instant? Not in a million years.

    (Raiton: Dendou Ame) - Lightning Release: Electric Rain
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After Using the technique "Rain at Will Tiger", user uses this technique to add raiton chakra in rain to make it electric infused with water, which gives small bolts to opponent when hit.
    Note: ~User is immune to this tech because it is his raiton chakra only.
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ What's the purpose of your technique if there's no damage? Also, be aware that there would be no lightning left in the water droplets as it hits the ground. Electricity quickly diffuses through the air or heats the water.

    (Suiton: Hazumi Netto) - Water Release: Rebounding Net
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User creates a net of jelly made of water in front of him so that when a earth or similar projectile technique hit it, the net rebounds that projectile in that same direction with same speed.
    Note: ~Can rebound upto one rank higher techniques.
    ~Can only be used 5 times per battle, as it requires dense water chakra.
    ~Can only be taught by Bolt.

    ~Declined~ Do you have a Jelly CE? Even if you do, this isn't the right place to submit it.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 05:36 PM.

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