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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Doton: Shish Kabob(Earth Release:Shish Kabob)
    Type: Attack
    Rank:C
    Range: Mid-long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user places both hands on the ground and uses his chakra to project spears(10) made of earth from behind him into the air which will then fall down in an arc towards the opponents area.

    Restrictions
    -Can only be used five times
    -Can only be taught by Swizzik

    ~Approved~ Made it 10.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 05:37 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Charaka Blade (charka ken)
    Type attack
    Rank C
    Range N/A
    Charka:20
    Damage:35
    Description The user takes out a kuni and by useing charka the user creates a blade and then the user can strike with the blade giving the user a longer reach and power

    Ninja Art Lock on (joumae o)
    Type: tracker
    Rank C
    range N/A
    Charka:30
    Damage N/A
    Description by grabing the enemey The user puts a tracking tag made up of the user own charka on the person kinda like a cures mark but if the enemey has this tag on him all charka base jutsu thats sent to the enemey by the user will fallow them till it hits the person with the tag

    charka disk(charka disuku)
    Type Attack
    Rank B
    Range:short:long
    Charka:35
    Damage:45
    Description: The user pulls out a round disk with small blades on it and by poring charka into the disk the user can throw the disk twords the enemey as it gets closer to its target its gets bigger


    Exploding clone(kibaku kuro-n)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:N/A
    Charka:30
    Damage:45
    Description The user makes a clone that has a exploding tag inside it the clone cant use jutsu but can grab the ninja and explode onley one clone can be made at a time useing this jutsu


    ~All Declined~ You are hereby banned from this thread for breaking the 3 submissions per weak rule. Your ban will be lifted on the 5th of December.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 05:38 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Unagi Senpuku-Fuu) Eel Hiding Method
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will replace themselves with Eels as an small Eel swims with grate speed deep into long range under the water. The Eel will then release the user out if it's mouth as the other Eels acting as the user on the surface distracts the opponent. Doujutsu can see through this as they will see the user's chakra change and the real user going deep the water
    Note:
    -Can only be use twice per battle
    -Requires a water source
    -Must sign Eel contract

    ~Declined~ Wait a minute O__O Is this a genjutsu, a ninjutsu or a summoning? Are you making a similar technique to Jiraiya's toad transportation technique? You really need to elaborate on that one. Also, how do you do the switch with the eel? Are you using Kawarimi no jutsu on top of all that ?

    (Unagi danmaku no Jutsu) Eel Barrage Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: the user will shoot a small Eel from their sleeve at the opponent, this Eel will grow massive in size as it heads at the opponent, it will then crush the opponent deep into the water before dispersing into hundreds of smaller Eels that attack and bite the opponent in a feeding frenzy.
    Note:
    -Can only be use twice per battle
    -Requires a water source
    -Must sign Eel contract

    ~Approved~

    (Ranton: Kiri Kumo No Jutsu) Storm Release: Electric Mist Jutsu
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 per turn)
    Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the battlefield. The small water partials that make up the mist are filled with Raiton chakra capable on shocking the opponent. If the opponent doesn't find a way out of the mist within 3 turns, they will be stun by the mist. because of the amount of water and electricity in the mist, fire and Earth Jutsu's are weakened by -5 while this jutsu is active.
    Note:
    -Can only be used by a Storm Bio
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle
    -Last 4 turns
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 05:42 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~The Norwegian~ View Post
    (Ka-Do Sensu)-Card style

    Card style is a special way of using cards. The basic explanation is that the user channel elementary/KG chakra into special made cards that’s called chakra cards and these cards can be thrown at opponents to hurt them, thrown at the ground to change the field or thrown around the user to create a defensive or offensive action. Cards have been shown in the Narutoverse as they have played cards at gambling houses (Tsunade), and these cards are just normal cards but infused with chakra.

    Restrictions to be able to use card style:
    *Must have mastered all 5 elements and genjutsu
    *Must be Sannin rank or higher
    *Must be tought by ~The Norwegian~, Xanthe or anyone that have mastered Card Style

    (Ka-Do Sensu: Kasai Ka-Do)-Card Style: Fire Cards
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    The user will spread 10 cards infront of him, channel fire into them and then create a fire out of the cards. The fire takes the shape of a spear that travels up to long-range very fast. The fire can also be used as a wall infront of a user to guard against incoming attacks.
    ~Note: Must have mastered Card-Style and be taught by a master of card style
    ~Note 2: Can only be used twice per battle


    (Ka-Do Sensu: Ketatamashii Kaze Ka-Do)-Card Style: Piercing wind cards
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    The user takes five cards into each of his hands and channel wind chakra into them. Once the wind chakra is in every card, the user throws the cards towards the opponent. Due to the wind chakra the cards fly fast and they are extremely sharp. The user can control the paths of the cards by using the chakra in them.
    ~Note: Must have mastered Card Style
    ~Note 2: Must be taught by ~The Norwegian~, Xanthe or a master of Card Style
    The card style already exist -Ace- has it and i believe that Izuna wont accept anything that has been made before.
     
         

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Genjutsu: Yokan) Illlusion Technique: Premonition
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user exerts their genjutsu chakra as they perform a physical task (ie. throwing a punch, kick, or kunai). This jutsu makes the opponent see the attack before it happens, making them defend before the attack reaches them, leaving them open for the attack.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used four (4) times per battle

    ~Declined~ No handseals, no physical contact, no eye contact? Fix that. Also, you're aware that since they're defending against your attack before you do it, you will most likely be the one being in danger lol.

    (Katon: Honō no Karada) Fire Style: Flame Body
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will focus their katon chakra just beneath the surface of their skin. With the chakra built, when the target attempts to make physical contact with the user, the heat from the user will transfer to whatever is in contact with the user, and it will begin to burn.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used three (3) times per battle
    ~Lasts for three (3) turns per use
    ~The user can only use katon jutsu while this jutsu is active

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Doton: Honō no Karada) Earth Style: Terra-Motion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will create two hands out of the ground, the wrists of said hands meeting the ground. The hands will then grab the users ankles, and move across any earth-based terrain as the user wishes. The hands move as fast as an average ninja can run, and allow the user to focus on weaving handseals while moving out of an oncomming attack.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used two (2) times per battle
    ~Lasts for up to three (3) turns per use
    ~The user can only use doton jutsu while the hands are in use
    ~The hands can only move across any earth-based terrain (ie. earth, dirt, non-chakra enfused mud, ect.)

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 07:11 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Suiton: Kankaku mizutamari)- Sensory Puddle
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Med-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will summon a razor thin layer of water from the ground below the opponent, infused with their chakra. Once the user’s shoe/coverings touch the water, the opponent can now be tracked over the expanse of the battlefield. The unique chakra signature that is injected into the puddle, allows the user to locate where the opponent is.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Lasts 3 turns

    ~Declined~ Unless you're a sensory ninja I will not accept this.

    (Doton: Chīsana Chikyū no Suringushotto)- Small Earth Slingshot
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform three handseals, and then smash their hands on the ground. A slingshot shaped piece of earth will rise from the ground, and is 3/4 the height of an average man. Using chakra threads as the straps, the user will load large (5ft. in diameter) rocks into the slingshot, and launch them across the battlefield. For two people operating the slingshot, it takes 4 seconds in between shots. For more than three, it take only 2 seconds.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Must be operated by two or more clones/people

    ~Declined~ Restrictions?

    (Futon: Fuyo)- Floating Leaf
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Med
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will perform shape manipulation on the air surrounding them, and shape it into the form of a leaf. The leaf is incredibly light, and floats like the wind. The user is then able to freely move the leaf as desired, in any direction, at any time. The user is able to ride the leaf in the air.
    *Note: Can only be taught/used by HereticPassage
    *Note: Lasts 3 turns
    *Note: Cannot use katon while on the leaf; unaffected by raiton when on the leaf
    *Note: Must use one hand to maintain the jutsu

    ~Declined~ I won't allow you to create a flying carpet in our RP -__-
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 07:14 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (magunetto denkou purasu) Magnet Style: Lightning Plus
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack/Suplamentary
    Range:Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Chakra Damage: None
    Description: The user does 2 hand seals. once they do the proper hand seals. they then shoot out a ball of magnetism from their hand that hits the opponent. once it hits the opponet they body reacts to thunder more harshly.
    -Note:All Thunder moves that hits you is double
    -Note:All water moves that hit me is double
    -Note:Can use 5times
    -Notenly taught by Abstract Mind/Teno/Sadoku

    ~Declined~ please tell me, what does a ball of magnetism looks like. As far as I know, magnetism can't take physical shape. Fix that.
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    (denkou-youshiki:raikou amimono) Lightning Style: Lightning Web
    Rank-A
    Type-Attack/Restrain
    Range-Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost-50
    Chakra Damage-50
    Description- The user Molds their saliva and lightning chakra together. once they mold it they do the tiger hand seal and spit out a lightning Web. once it contacts you it restrains you and shock you at the same time

    ~~NOTE~~
    .Can use 3times pr battle
    .Restrains you for 1 turn (My turn)
    .Cant use any other lightning move the same time as this attack
    .Only taught/use by Abstract Mind,Teno,Sadoku

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.
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    (uindo youshiki: seigyo) Wind Style: Suppression
    Rank-S
    Type-Attack/Defense
    Range-Short
    Chakra Cost-70
    Chakra Damage-90
    Description-The user stands perfectly still. he does one hand signn once he does that. a HUGE amount of air rise from the ground in a 360 degree angle of me about 4 feet away. and about 12feet high. it last for about 4 seconds. during them seconds only S rank fire can penetrate it. and incredibly sharp. sharp enough to cut cement with great force and speed. this is meant to use when an attack is coming your way or an oppenent is rushing in or in short range or coming from above you.

    ~~NOTE~~
    .Can only use
    .Cant use any wind techs above C rank after using this move
    .Can get through with S rank fire or A rank Earth (Not mud)
    .Only taught by Me,Teno,Sadoku

    ~Declined~ Not only does a similar technique already exist, but your template is all messed up. S-rank has 40 chakra points and 80 damage points.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 07:17 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Kuchiyose: Batto: Rasputin)- Summoning: Bat: Rasputin
    Type: Supp
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: n/a
    Description: Rasputin is a small and quick bat, with razor sharp reflexes. The edges of his wings are sharppened like the blade of a sword, able to slice the opponent(s), into pieces. When summoned Rasputin will appear on the summoner's shoulder waiting for commands, Rasputiin has seals on his wings which allow him to carries many weapons (numbering to the same amount as TenTen carries) for his use or the summoners use. Rasputin is adept with using lightning jutsus able to use B-rank and down jutsus.
    - Must have signed the Bats contract.
    - Rasputin will stay on the field until he has recieved orders to return from the summoner.
    - Can only be summoned once per battle.
    - Any lightning jutsu Rasputin uses count for the summoners 3 jutsus.
    - Complete list of weapons in Rasputin's seals ~ kunai, shuriken, daggers, senbon
    - Summoning the weapons count as a move.

    ~Approved~ Added another restriction.

    (Meito: Kurokubo)- Dark Release: Black Hollow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will Release two halfs to form the attack, Half of all the chakra absorbed from battle, along with half of the users chakra, the user shall thrust their arm in front of themselves, aiming at their target. The user will then send all of the chakra at the opponent, creating a giant blast of black chakra. Even though it is powerful from long and mid-range, it's much more devestating when the user is inches from the opponent.
    - Can only be used twice in battle.
    - The user must absorb chakra in battle before they can use this jutsu.
    - Must have perrmission from -Tauburn- to use.


    ~Approved~

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Karyuu za Batto ) - Summoning Technique: Karyuu The Bat
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on the back of his hand and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary dracula bat, the fire bat is half the size of Gamahiro, what makes him special than other bats is the manipulation of the fire affinity, from his birth he was training to master the fire element and becomes more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the fire element up to S-rank techniques without the use of handseals in order to perform the fire techniques, he has very thick fur that makes him immune to fire techniques from A-rank and below,whenever this bat performs a fire technique the fir itself becomes black this is because he is so accustomed to, using fire techniques that he developed a new kind of fire but its the same as the original fire only thing is that it turns black when perfoming a fire technique.
    - Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    - Note: Stays on the field for 4 turns.
    - Note: Must have signed the bat contract.
    - Note: Can only be taught by -Tauburn-.
    - Note: The user can't have a second summoning on the field.
    - Note: The user must have mastered the fire element.

    ~Declined~ Make him resistant to B-rank and under and make sure you take out anything that slightly suggest he can manipulate fire at will. The first part of the description seemed to suggest this.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 07:21 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    My previous submissions were on Nov. 1st, so here I am.

    (Doton:Toriniti no kabe ) Earth Release: Walls of Trinity
    Rank:S-Rank
    Typeffense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: the user channels his chakra through the ground underneath the opponent, thus causing the earth to start lowering at high speeds, while four walls of really tall/high/thick earth start rising above the enemy, closing up on them, thus crushing the enemy.
    Note:
    -Can be used 3x
    -Can be taught by Dr. House
    -Doujutsu can see the chakra in the ground

    ~Approved~

    Re-submitting an approved CW.

    Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -15 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only that turn.
    Note:
    -5+ to every wind attack.
    -Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
    -Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
    -If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
    -Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
    -If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.

    Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (-10 each turn)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -10 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only that turn. Since the sword has an affinity for Wind, and as the sword's inbued abilities will travel onto the user's hand giving him a uniqueness of enabling him to seal a mere handseal for any wind jutsus. When the user performs any wind jutsus, the inbued chakra will add it's own inbued wind chakra from the sword (10 chakra which been sucked off from the user, every turn) into the technique completely, (transfering that sucked -10 chakra into the technique) having the sword lose its inbued wind chakra for that turn.
    Note:
    -Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
    -Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
    -If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
    -Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
    -If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.



    Note to checker:
    -I added this part: Since the sword has an affinity for Wind, and as the sword's inbued abilities will travel onto the user's hand giving him a uniqueness of enabling him to seal a mere handseal for any wind jutsus. When the user performs any wind jutsus, the inbued chakra will add it's own inbued wind chakra from the sword, the (15 chakra which been sucked off from the user, every turn) into the technique completely, (transfering that sucked -15 chakra into the technique) having the sword lose its inbued wind chakra for that turn.
    -I took out this part: 5+ to every wind attack.

    If you have any questions, please feel free to vm me, because it could be confusing, but I tried to explain it the most clear as possible.

    ~Approved~ Made it +10 and -10 everywhere.

    (Ten no sora no hakke chēn) Eight Trigrams Chains of The Heavenly Sky
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin creating a sharp dome shield, while dense/spiked chain/s made of chakra errupts from the dome all around with the same speed as the dome rotates, with the properties of having the first link on the chain being a long spike which may pierce through an obstacle, in order to keep on going. The chain will grab onto anything that the user desires to, and as it ensnares the desired subject/s, the spiked chain/s will pull the subject/s onto the razor sharp dome, ripping the subject into pieces, or if the user wishes, the spike on the first link on the chain will pierce through the enemy, and ensnares the subject.
    Note:
    -Must master Jyuuken
    -Can be used 3x
    -The dome leaves a crater in the ground
    -After this, the user won't be able to use S-ranked or higher Jyuuken in the same turn and the next one.
    -Only Dr. House can teach it.
    -Due to the difficulty of this jutsu, Byakugan must be active and you must be at least Sannin.

    ~Approved~ Added the bold part.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 07:26 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Yoton: Tsuyoi Yougan Ryuusei) - Lava Release: Mighty Lava Meteor
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 90
    Damage Points: 125
    Description: The user will focus a enormous amount, of chakra into the lava and earth surrounding battlefield pulling the whole battle field lava/earth with the opponent standing in the middle of the battlefield. And perform a single handseal the 'Serpent' handseal. After, the user has performed, the handseal he will pull the lava & earth up around the opponent in an instant making it a meteor and sending it into the sky with all his might and chakra focused in the meteor itself, with the opponent trapped in the meteor. When send, into the sky it will turn into a normal meteor/stone in a full turn and fall into the lava on the ground. And melt turning it to regulair lava again. Can, only be evaded if the opponent has the speed of the 5th inner gate.
    [This, is basically the same earthen technique that Madara performed against Õnoki when they battled. But then lava based.]

    .Note: This jutsu can only be used if the user has mastered Earth/Fire/Lava.
    .Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    .Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo.
    .Note: The user can not perform any Lava technique for the rest of the, battle.
    .Note: The user must be at Sage rank to use this jutsu.


    ~Declined~ You are hereby banned from this thread for a period of one week, your ban will be lifted on the 5th of November. I warned at least 5 members in the past days not to rip off cannon techniques. Since you stated yourself that it was the same, I see no reason in denying or arguing.

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    (Fuuton: Tenryuu no Houkou) - Wind Style: Swirling Wind Roar
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 65
    Description: After Performing the dragon, handseal the user takes in a deep breath, as they bring about the ideals of most wind exhaling jutsu into play. And as they inhale a large amount of air into there lungs and concentrating there fuuton chakra into the inhaled air and the lungs the user will then quickly form the dragon handseal and releases a Roar made out of wind and direct it at the opponent. It will take a swirling wind/vortex form with small wind blades in it roatating at high speed. It can slash up your opponent real bad and cause internal damages.

    .Note: Can only be used trice per battle.
    .Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Wind.
    .Note: The user must be at sage lvl.
    .Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo.
    .Note: The user can not peform any wind technique the next turn.


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    (Doton : Iwa no Tsubasa) - Earth Release : Earthen Wings
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short/Mid/Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (5 + Chakra Every Turn Has To Be Added Inorder To Keep Them Intact)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user simply concentrates his chakra into his shoulders en gathers some earth from the ground and form about 3 wings on each shoulders. So making it a total of six wings, and then form the 'dragon handseal' to make the edges of the wings razor sharp so it is able to cut your opponent if fighting a close ranged battle. These wings are like a extension of the user they have a very unique structure that makes it so the earth is very light but its still solid and so is able to allow the user to take flight in battle. It can also, block simple wepons like: Kunais, Shurikens, Giant Shurikens Etc.

    Appearance:
    .Note: Can only be used by Iwagakure ninja's.
    .Note: The user must have mastered earth and specialize in this element.
    .Note: The user must be Kage rank or above to use these wings.
    .Note: Can only be used trice per battle.
    .Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo.

    Note: to izuna i've checked many CJ threads and i haven't found any jutsu like this one.
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    Feel Free To Edit any restrictions or description to help.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ( Douka Hakkeshou Kaiten ) - Eight Trigrams Assimilation Heavenly Spin
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user highly compresses chakra and releases it out of all their tenketsus while spinning for offense and defense all in one . Unlike other variations of Kaiten , this variation of it is able to assimilate the chakra natures of the jutsu it blocks . Upon assimilating the chakra nature of the jutsu , the Kaiten will take on the colour of the chakra nature it absorbed and then a split second later , it'll explode outwards with properties of the said element with a spinning effect .

    -No S-rank Jyuuken the following turn
    -Usable only 3 times per battle
    -Can only be used by Hyuuga clan members
    -Can only be taught by Rokusho

    ~Declined~ The fact that you think you can "assimilate" elements with this technique is evidence that you didn't fully grasp how Kaiten works.

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    (Suiton:Toras Pate Torappu)-Water Release:Tiger's Putty Entrapment
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: The user releases a large amount of water from their mouth. This water will contain syrup like characteristics like the 'Syrup Capture Field' without the 'sticky' properties, and will have a much higher viscosity than ordinary water; however because of the high viscosity of the water, it will move and flow much slower than regular water. The user than manipulates this water, sending it towards the enemy in the form of a medium sized wave. If somehow caught in the water, the enemy will be encased in the thick liquid, unable to escape due to the sheer weight of the water slowly cascading over them (Like syrup slowly pouring over an overfilled spoon onto a square of butter on pancakes. Imagine a person like the butter, being covered by the thick liquid.) It is mainly used to absorb the blunt force of several harsh attacks-without breaking or crumbling like an earth barrier-and continuing onward. The speed of it however, makes it easier to avoid. If the need should arise, one could ride the wave by focusing chakra to their feet.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Can only be taught be Jakey


    (Kowaikao Hirame)-The Angry Flounder
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A (80 when using the offensive variant)
    Description: The user stands in the Chudan no Kamae stance, then the user focuses a rather large amount of chakra through their blade. The result of the large amount of chakra flowing through the blade, is a powerful, outward shock wave. The shock wave is capable of repelling/defending against incoming attacks, this is the defensive variation of the jutsu. However, this shock wave can also be channeled, and aimed in a single direction. If used offensively, the shock wave causes both concussive damage, as well as slashing damage delivering several powerful non-superficial cuts; this is the offensive variant of the jutsu. The jutsu itself is a representation of the even defensive and offensive capabilities that the Chudan no Kamae stance offers.
    ~Can only be used 3 times
    ~Can only be taught by Jakey
    ~The jutsu is capable of defending against a single technique of equal or lower rank.
    ~Can only use one of the variant in a turn (Either Offensive/Defensive)


    (Hanto_mei Wanda Gado)-Translucent Wonder Guard
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Upon unsheathing their blade, the user focuses chakra throughout their entire body and releases it through the pores on their skin. The user forms a translucent “blanket” of chakra which surrounds their body as well their sword. The user continues to pour chakra out of the pores on their skin, and condenses the chakra until it becomes as sturdy and tough as steel. This blanket of chakra is meant to protect against blunt attacks, as well as environmental factors (such as being burned by fire, being electrocuted by lightning, being cut by Wind, etc.). The chakra focused around the user’s sword serves to increase its cutting power. However, the barrier can only protect against a single attack per use. Because of the translucent nature of the chakra surrounding the body, an enemy will often go unaware that this technique is even in use, until attempting to attack the user.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~The barrier remains until "cancelled out" by an enemy's incoming attack
    ~While this jutsu is active, the user can only use Kenjutsu/Taijutsu techniques.
    ~Can only be taught by Jakey


    ~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way. I've been very clear on this and even if it's something as trivial as putting spoilers around your restriction, it would be unfair of me to let it pass while I declined other members's customs.
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Doton/Raiton: Sono Su-pa Akutibu Torikkusuta-Kinezumi | Earth/Lightning Release: The Super Active Trickster Squirrels
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100 (-10 to the user)
    Description:
    The user makes 2 hand seals (snake+monkey) and 9 normal sized squirrels made of rock and dense earth chakra rise from the ground within range. The squirrels are then infused with an enormous amount of lightning chakra, glowing in a bright blueish color. The lightning enables them to move (above ground or underneath) at enormous speeds that only 3T Sharingan and Byakugan can follow. The squirrels surround the enemy in a nonagon pattern facing him. They then link to each other and unleash the combined Earth and Lightning chakras into the nonagon. Within the nonagon, a mayhem of raging vortexes of electromagnetic and geoenergies starts to petrify, rip and shock everything caught in it, releasing heat, (the user can engulf the whole battleground but, if so, takes his own life also) and leaving only a crater behind. The squirrels can also surround the user short range from him and face outwards, using the combination of Earth and Lightning chakras to produce a perfect spherical shield that can protect the user against any Lightning, Earth, Fire or Water attack. If a squirrel is hit, a non-focused lightning burst is released around him, stunning whomever is near. However, as long as there is at least 3 squirrels, the technique can be used. Due to the massive amount of chakra and concentration needed, the user will experience great pain and exhaustion upon use of this technique.

    Note: User can't mold Lightning or Earth for 2 turns after this technique.
    Note2: In the turn its used, user can only cast one more jutsu
    Note3: Usable only once
    Note4: The severe exhaustion left by the amount of chakra spent to use this jutsu leaves the user unable to use ninjutsu (elemental or not) above S-Rank for 2 turns
    Note5: Can only be taught by Scorps

    ~Declined~ Some tuning is needed.

    -To avoid confusing, specify the range of attack of each squirrel if it's destroyed.
    -Protecting against anything but Wind is OP. Make it so it can defend against S-rank and F-rank depending on the element (keep in mind that some jutsu such as Kirin and Amaterasu are S-rank).
    -Make it so that each squirrel that is destroy weakens the final technique. While you can still perform it with 3 squirrel, it's bound to be weaker considering you lost 66% of the chakra you initially used to create them.

    Rest seemed fined.


    Genkotsu Namakemono: | Lazy Fist: The Dance of Decaying Flesh and Heavy Pride
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    A stance that can be used in both defensive/counter attack and in attack moves. Using either the basic stance of Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Lazy One or the defensive stance of Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Drunken Haze, the user will hit the opponent with a maximum of 10 quick punches, jabs or kicks (or block up to 10 Taijutsu hits from the opponent) with enormous speed. If used as an attack, each place the user hits will make the enemy feel as if its decaying and rotting away into a putrid liquid, giving off a horrible smell. Each affected area will begin to spread slowly and engulf the surrounding tissue, making the enemy suffer excruciating pain. If used as a defense, at contact, each of the enemy's attacking limbs (arm, leg, fist, head, knee, elbow, etc) will become impossible to move as the area touched will become heavy and numb. The weight will increase as more hits are done in the same area, but a single hit in one arm or leg will be enough to make it as heavy as needed to become impossible to move. Off course, as all Lazy Fist moves, these effects are nothing more than illusions produced by the S-Rank Genjutsu that results from the blows.

    Note: Requires Lazy Fist Training
    Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note3: Illusions will only work twice for each
    Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

    ~Declined~ The offensive side of your CJ is brilliant, but I find the defensive one to be a bit exaggerated and somewhat OP. However, my main concern is with the bold part. 4 times a match for a S-rank is too much. Make it twice a match and it's up to you to decide whether it'll be used offensively or defensively.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sanji~ View Post
    Updating all into:

    Name: Black Leg Taijutsu - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu)
    Description: Black Leg Style Taijutsu is a unique use of taijutsu developed by a taijutsu ninja who was also a great chef , this was developed to allow the cook to fight effectively without the possibility of damaging his hands , a cooks prized possession. Due to this practitioners of this style have been noted to give off a relaxed image during the fight by usually either putting their hands in their pockets or folding their arms , the only time a practitioner of this style will use their hands is to prop themselves to use a wider array of kicks. As a fighting style, the style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with super acrobatic skill make it a very versatile fighting technique, allowing the user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries , though the use of momentum they can use the continuous combos for a lesser cost of energy but must end the combos after a certain amount of time.



    Black Leg Taijutsu - Neck Meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Collier)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: This attack that the user executes from standing , placing their hands in their pockets they will deliver a powerful kick directly to the opponents neck. This is achieved with very little back lift which is surprising , the users foot will come in a roundhouse fashion sweeping from the side to attempt to damage the opponents neck. This is all done from a casual standing position with no indication of an attack.


    Black Leg Taijutsu - Shoulder Meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Epoule)

    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: This attack is used for a standing position much like Collier , this though is a forceful kick directed straight down with the heel. This axe kick as given away by the name is intended to hit the enemy on top of their shoulder , the idea behind this is an attempt t either knock the opponent off balance , or send them crashing into the floor with the force driving them down on that side taking them off their feet.


    New Ones:

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Rib meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Cotellete)

    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: An attack as given away by the name is primarily focused on the ribs of the opponent, the user will fall down onto one of their hands and perform a one handed handstand. As they are falling they bring their legs over and deliver a straight kick to the ribs, this can be and usually is if the attack hits followed with Selle.

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Under Saddle Meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Selle)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: This is an attack which is commonly used in combination with Cotellete , the user using the momentum from the Cotellete attack. The user who is still in a handstand will use the momentum to spin back the other way, to deliver a fierce sweeping kick to the opponents lower back or lumbar region.


    Black Leg Taijutsu - Chest/Breast meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Poitrine)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description:This attack is different from a lot in the style as it is delivered as a straight stabbing kick , this attack is quicker than most in this style due to its directness. Although it is better in terms of speed it forfeits the large attack area of the sweeping kicks , thus making it a quite balanced attack.

    I have permission from Black-Leg To create these.

    ~All Approved~
    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sanji~ View Post
    Black Leg Taijutsu - Third Rate Mincemeat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Troisieme Hache )
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:his is the strongest attack in the dish washer rank,it compiles most of the attributes on would learn before progressing to a higher rank.The user will first turn their back,then they will begin a series of back flips toward the opponent and will use their hands for one final push towards the enemy,and attempt to hit a flurry of incredibly fast kicks to their face.

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Three Point Division Cut - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Santen Decoupage )
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:A very fast attack used by a black leg user , they will stand almost calm and will then launch three near simultaneous roundhouse kicks toward the enemy's throat , chest and stomach striking with as much of the leg they possibly can.

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Skewer - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Brochette)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:This is an attack primarily targeted towards enemies on the floor,the user will jump high in the air above the opponent and begin to spin rapidly. Once the required amount of momentum has been generated, they will deliver a devastating downwards kick. The spinning portion of this attack is intended to help drive the attack deeper.


    Black Leg Taijutsu - Party Table Kick Course - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Bien Sur Parti coup Table)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:This is one of the most useful attacks for a black leg user to learn,it focuses on dealing with multiple threats as opposed to the rest of the techniques. The user will run and jump formard and land in a two handed hand stand,they will then proceed to spin themselves at high speed with their legs outstretched delivering a near constant barrage of kicks.


    Black Leg Taijutsu - Sheep Meat Shot - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Mouton shot)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:This is one of the most powerful kicks in this style and commonly used as a finishing blow,the user will begin by either jumping or flipping into an aerial position. They will then channel as much power into the kick that they can,and proceed with a kick aimed at the face or the chest of the enemy with the intention of sending them flying.

    ~All Approved~ ^_^
    Been about a month since I last submitted jutsu.
    Revamping whole style.

    Black Leg Taijutsu - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu) 黒脚
    Breakdown and History


    As a fighting style, Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with superb acrobatic skill make it a very versatile fighting skill, allowing the user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries. Most of Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style attack names are French words referring to various dishes. An Ambition of a style in which started years ago within the past, before the time of war, before the time of the Hidden Villages. An ambition of a style created to ward off those who were considered to be savages, living life through the edge of life. Living through unspeakable acts. The Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style is a style formulated for those who wish to keep their hands in tact. A fighting style in which was created for those who were considered to be tradesmen, craftsmen, those who took pride in their art, but were needed to defend themselves in some style and way. The Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style is intended for the usage of legs and only the usage of the legs. Reasons why is because if the hands of a Craftsman gets damaged or becomes unusable they are unable to continue to perform in the art that they truly desire.

    Those who battle Primarily keep their hands within their pockets to ensure that they do not bring out their legs when it comes to the beginning as those who dabble into the style of Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style, but as those who progress learn that they are capable of keeping their hands out and about, as their feet and legs become stronger, faster, and more durable. Those who undergo into the Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style are known for their craft, or crafts. There is no set way of how one looks or what one does for there is multiple types of Craftsmen. Every user, every practitioner is different in their own way in which and how they dress and look. Each Practitioner is different in every way for there is multiple types of Craftsmen. The Kuro Ashi Taijutsu - 黒脚 - Black Leg Style has no set uniform for those to wear, for which is considered as a good thing for those that wish to just continue in their craft while knowing how one may defend themselves.

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Collier Coup - (Trachea Turnover Surprise)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user gets ready and quickly jumps up into the air. This jump could be considered as a high jump, or a low jump, but a jump must be made. Using gravity as a helper the user can either kick side ways towards the opponent's neck, or downwards against the neck area of the opponent, close to the collar bone. If used properly this technique is capable of pushing the opponent down making them off balance, or down to their knees for more powerful attacks.

    ~Approved~

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Parti Tableau - (Party Table)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description:The user quickly plants their hands down along the ground and begins to spin rapidly. The user's legs are spread out in the splits as they spin with great speed to slam into the opponents that may be surrounding the user. The user spins with such speed and strength the user is capable of hitting the opponents, or whatever is hit by this technique into the distance of sixteen meters. With this technique the user is capable of moving around with their hands while still spinning. Some users spin around in a small radius moving in a circle to ensure that they hit their targets if need be.

    ~Approved~

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Cours Parti Coup Tableau - (Party Table Kick Course)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:The user jumps up into the air as they slam their hands against an opponent's shoulders. Doing so stuns the opponent for one round as a brief moment to ensure the user is capable of using the opponent's body as a form of stand to kick all other opponents that may be near by. Some practitioners of this technique spin rapidly hitting all opponents around the user kicking them off into the distance of up to thirty two meters. Some practitioners somewhat juggle around the opponent's shoulders kicking in all directions in one fluent movement in a break dancing like form in that of a windmill. In a final movement the user quickly slams a final kick into the opponent. This could be used against the opponent's chest, across the opponent's face, or anywhere else that may have the opponent open capable of sending the opponent flying off into the distance of thirty two meters.

    ~Approved~

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    (Genjutsu: Konchuu Yuuku) – Illusion Technique: Entomophobia
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Entomophobia is the fear of insects or bugs and other similar arthropods. This genjutsu can be created as long as the opponent can see the user and vice versa. Unlike most genjutsu this one lays dormant in the opponent's body until activated later in the battle. The user places a mass of chakra into the opponent's body where it sits until they see, hear or even smell the presence of insects. Once the opponent experiences one of those things the genjutsu activates. When the opponent is caught in this genjutsu, he will immediately suffer the symptoms of this phobia. The opponent will enter in a panic state and will suffer from involuntary shaking, making it difficult for them to perform handseals and unable to stand on his feet. The damage of this genjutsu will be caused by the feeling of being pierced by countless needles which, as time passes, are pushed deeper and deeper into the target’s body causing excruciating pain. Due to this immense amount of pain, the target can not dispel this genjutsu by causing pain to themselves (e.g. stabbing themselves with a kunai, breaking a finger, etc.) unless they feel extreme physical pain.
    *Note: Can only be used once per battle, but may be used to affect multiple targets.
    *Note: Aburame and other insect users are immune.
    *Note: To dispel this genjutsu, the target must feel an extreme physical pain (not just stabbing himself or break a finger)
    *Note: No genjutsu for the next turn.
    *Note: No S-rank jutsus in the same turn (when the dormant genjutsu is placed in the target)
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ~Declined~ In order to get this genjutsu triggered as you described, you'd need to seal the chakra inside of him and create a complex seal that opens on visual contact, touch or smell (like Itachi did with Sasuke when he saw Madara). This is beyond your mastery of Fuuinjutsus and only Medical Senseis could possible get this kind of technique accepted.

    (Genjutsu: Mugen Senkou) – Illusion Technique: Continuous Flashbang
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: An illusion where the opponent is suddenly blinded by a flash (there is a bright burst of blinding light much like a flash bomb) that continues to detonate/flash over and over again. This causes the opponent to immediately stop what they were doing and futilely attempt to shield their eyes. But most importantly, this technique blinds the opponent making them unable to rely on their vision.
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    *Note: Blinding effects last for 1 turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ~Declined~ Too similar to existing technique.

    (Genjutsu: Kage Mane?) – Illusion Technique: Shadow Imitation?
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: An illusion where the opponent finds themselves trapped and paralysed as he sees his shadow combine with the user’s shadow (or the user’s ally e.g. a clone) exactly like Shadow Imitation. In reality, the opponent is paralysed and unable to move. This jutsu requires a single handseal to perform.
    *Note: Paralysing effects last for 1 turn.
    *Note: Can only use 3 times per battle.
    *Note: Must wait at least 1 turn to be used again.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

    ~Declined~ 1 hand seal and can be activated up to long range? You'll need to lower that and add some details on how you trap your opponent. Also, explain how it actually works. Do you need to extend your shadow in the genjutsu to trap him like the real shadow technique or is it immediately active as you put your opponent under your illusion?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Hyoton: Reitō no Tenshi)-Ice Release: Frozen Angel
    Type: Offensive, Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user makes three hand seals and an angel made of ice rises from the ground behind them. The angel is taller than humans, and stands out about three meters tall, and she also has large wings, which have a six meter span from tip to tip. She carries an elegant, one handed sword in her right hand. The angel is semi-transparent, thus, one is able to see through it, as well as easily make out the shape and position of it, although, when looking through the angel, the image may look distorted. She hovers a few inches above the ground, and is able to move up to a long range away from the user. (The user controls her movements.) Her movement speed is the same as the users, however, she doesn't receive the benefits of KG's/other special abilities that improve movement speed, should the user be using one. Her limbs and wings are fully pose-able, thus she is able to user her wings as defensive mechanisms, and is able to fight using her sword and body. The angel is able to flap her wings, and release a barrage of razor sharp feathers at the opponent, although this can only be done once.
    Note: Can only be used once per match.
    Note: The angel lasts for a maximum of three turns (Including the turn she was summoned.) or until she is destroyed.
    Note: Due to the amount of chakra this technique requires, the user can only perform one other jutsu on the turn this is activated.

    ~Declined~ We've got tons of similar techniques, the only difference is that yours is in the shape of an angel.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-27-2011 at 09:02 PM.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragonfly X View Post
    (Kami Uwakawa Jutsu) - Paper Skin Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 0
    Description: User creates paper surrounding their skin, a semi-thick layer that prevents lower level fire jutsu from affecting the user. This also lowers the damage of kunai and shuriken.
    Note: Can only be used by a Konan Bio
    Note: Only protects against fire techniques C rank and below.
    Note: Can only be taught by Dragonfly X.
    Note: Can only be used twice a battle.

    (Kami Shikakejirai Jutsu) - Paper Booby Trap Technique
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user spreads paper all over the ground, and when the opponent steps on it, it lifts up all together and traps the user, slightly damaging them.
    Note: Can only be used by a Konan bio.
    Note: Can only be taught by Dragonfly X.

    (Kami Hakuchou Jutsu) - Paper Swan Technique
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 0
    Description: User creates a huge origami swan, the size of a car. The swan can fly at fast speeds and can hold the user on top.
    Note: This technique takes time to form, so it can be easily stopped if interrupted.
    Note: Can only be used by a Konan bio.
    Note: Can only be taught by Dragonfly X.
    Can only be used once a battle.

    Feel free to make any changes you deem necessary, and a thanks in advance

    ~All pending~ If you don't link me to your Konan bio (since there's no link in your sig), then I can't approve those. Re-submit with a link.
    Konan bio in sig.

    (Kami Souken no Jutsu) Paper Creation Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Konan starts turning the local vegatation into paper slips. This happens by the trees, grass, and leaves by condensing and forming a thick paper that is harder to control than her regular paper. This paper is completely controllable and can be used for any of her techniques like her normal paper.
    *Note: Can only be used by a Konan bio
    *Note: Must be taught by Dragonfly X
    *Note: Konan must stand still for this to work
    *Note: Can only be used 1 time a battle

    ~Declined~ This is over simplistic. Paper isn't merely wood or grass. Even a log of wood is no where close to paper. Summon the paper from a seal and make it appear from thin air, but don't transform your surroundings into it.

    (Kami Tatsumaki no Jutsu) Paper Tornado Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage: 40
    Description: Konan uses her paper to create a tornado of razor sharp paper around her target. This tornado is relatively thick and circles fast. It cuts up the target with paper cuts, making them bleed profusely after a decent amount of time in the tornado.
    *Note: Can only be used by Konan
    *Note: Must be taught by Dragonfly X
    *Can only be used twice a battle

    Feel free to make changes you deem necessary. My Konan bio is in my sig. All you have to do is copy & paste the link. Thanks in advance

    ~Approved~ Altered the damage according to the template.

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Ice Release: Ice Age = (Hyouton: Aisu E-Ji)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offense
    Range: All
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 100 (and it results to the user’s death)
    Description: The user will concentrate a great amount of hyouton chakra through his body, up to the point where the user’s body temperature drops severely. Then the user will release the chakra at once from every chakra node in their chakra system. As the hyouton chakra is being released, the temperatures around drops around the level of the absolute zero, which is −269 °C. As a result every drop of water will immediately freze and if the opponent is covered in water, he will be frozen in seconds, altough if the user is also wet he will die too. Due to the low temperture, both the user and the opponent can not breathe because the cold air will burn their lungs.
    Note: When the temperature is this low, no fire technique can be produced.
    Note: Results in the user’s death and the fight will be declared as even because the cold air will burn his lungs and he/she will die after 2 turns.


    Here I am guessing a declined do not resubmit but worth the trying.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. It was worth a try

    Quote Originally Posted by Akisha View Post
    Ice Release: Ten Thousand Blades Dance = (Hyouton: Juuman Ha Odori)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user will begin by performing a single hand seal and then creates an opening within the sky that seems like 2 circles. The circles are extremely big, large enough to cover the whole battle field. The first one is representing the wind chakra and the second one the water chakra. Combining the 2 chakra natures the user makes the air around the opening extremely cold, making ice form into the atmosphere. Then by using shape manipulation the user forms thousands upon thousands of countless small thin but incredibly sharp blades of ice that almost look like light blue sakura petals. In a matter of seconds the blades will rain down through the opening piercing through the opponents’ body ripping them to shreds.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: The user will take 20 damage due to the large amount of chakra used for the technique.
    Note: The user needs to concentrate his chakra for 1 turn in order for the spikes to be fully formed.
    Note: No Ice for 2 turns after this technique is used.
    Note: No S rank or above water or wind for the following turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Akisha.


    ~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't have any restriction to justify it being forbidden. There are no physical drawbacks. Secondly, does this jutsu covers the whole field of simply the center of both superposed disk?
    Ice Release: Ten Thousand Blades Dance = (Hyouton: Juuman Ha Odori)
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: The user will begin by performing a single hand seal and then creates an opening within the sky that seems like 2 large circles. The first one is 15meters wide and is representing the wind chakra, while the second one is 10m wide and represents the water chakra. Combining the 2 chakra natures the user makes the air around the opening extremely cold, making ice form into the atmosphere. Then by using shape manipulation the user forms thousands upon thousands of countless small thin but incredibly sharp blades of ice that almost look like light blue sakura petals. In a matter of seconds the blades will rain down through the 2nd oppening (the smaller one, which is 10m wide) piercing through everyone that is in the 10m radius and ripping them to shreds.
    Note: If the user is in the 10m radius he will also be killed.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: The user will take 20 damage after use due to the large amount of chakra used for the technique.
    Note: The user needs to concentrate his chakra for 1 turn in order for the spikes to be fully formed.
    Note: No Ice for 2 turns after this technique is used.
    Note: No S rank or above water or wind for the following turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Akisha.
    Note: After the jutsu is over, the user's speed is dramaticly increased for 2 turns. The user can not run, though he can walk, it would be very slow and painful.
    Note: The user's reactions are also decreased for the following turn because of the large amount of chakra used.



    removed the part about that it can cover the whole field

    ~Approved~

    (Fuinjutsu: Kaminari Den) = Sealing Techniques: Thunder Palace
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: All
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates creates multiple orbs with a special tag on them, filled with enormous amounts of Lightning chakra and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. If anyone decides to pass by the orbs, the seal will activate and the one who passed will be immediately zapped by lightning and will be unable to move for 2 turns. If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, the attacker is instantly electrocuted and unable to move for 2 turns.
    Note: Can only be used once per bate
    Note: The orbs last for 4 turns.
    Note: The orbs can be placed around a whole village.


    This is how the technique looks.


    ~Pending~ Re-submit with clarification on the positioning of those orbs; I won't accept it if they can be summoned next to the opponent, hence electrocuting him on the spot. Also, 2 turns is overkill. Make it 1 turn and only a severe numbness (same as chidori).

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    here is mine

    (Fuuton: Moumoutaru Oshi Tama) Wind Style: Dense Pressure Bullet
    Rank-C
    Type-Attack
    Range-Long
    Chakra-30
    Damage-45
    Description-The User concentrates dense wind chakra into his mouth, hold the breath, and blow it at the opponent. It's invisible and only made up of pressure and wind. So it's hard to see and dodge. This technique can only move straight and the lump of pressure fired is at about the size of a tennis ball.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Fuuton: Tenkuu Toku) Wind Style: Air Shield
    Rank-D
    Type-Defense, Supplementary
    Range-Short
    Chakra-10
    Damage-N/A
    Description-The user use the hand sign 'Tiger' and generate the wind chakra. By manipulating wind chakra, the user creates the 'chakra sphere' around himself. This sphere is a defensive shield which can defend the user from any tools such as shuriken and kunai. It can also deflect explosive kunai. This shield can blow away any fire jutsu in rank C or under but it can't deflect the opponent or shadow clone. The jutsu itself is not strong enough.

    ~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

    (Fuuton: Chikushou Tenkuu Shuuha) Wind Style: Beast Air Wave
    Rank-C
    Type-Attack
    Range-Long, Narrow
    Chakra-40
    Damage-60 (+5 when clashed with Rank B or under fire jutsu)
    Description- The user use the hand sign: 'Tiger', 'Snake', 'Monkey', 'Boar', 'Dog', and 'Tiger' to perform this technique. After user do the hand signs, he will gather his hands (opened) towards the target. Then, he focuses his wind chakra into the palm of his hands. Two narrow air beam will shoot out from each of his hands towards the target. This attack can be blocked easily by lava release, oil release, and water release. This technique is strong against fire release technique in rank B or under because when two technique is clashed together, Beast Air Wave can easily blow away rank B fire Technique and put additional damage to the opponent by blowing their jutsu back at them.
    After the jutsu is done, if the user's rank is chuunin or under, he will be stunned for extra turn because of excessive chakra usage on Rank C Jutsu.

    ~Declined~ Your description is incorrect, wind is weak to fire, not the other way around, and while the shape of a jutsu does impact on the final outcome of this elemental clash, a lower ranked wind will almost never defeat a higher ranked fire. Re-work it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    Resubmits
    In this one its only on chakra based attacks, not element (like you told me to say), the way I see it is the bugs are weak to every element (as you say in your weakness thread ) and they naturally eat chakra so they should naturally be strong against pure chakra techs, as they ate kunkuro’s chakra strings in the manga Here and here, they also were able to stop the chakra infused air blast by plugging up the holes (which one would assume that theses small bugs couldn’t stop such a powerful blast, so one would also assume that they ate some of the chakra out of the tech to be able to do so) Here . So please recheck it with this in mind


    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (of his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) effective up to S-rank. In doing this, the insects increase their power(+10 to bug attacks) & durability(+10 meaning they would be able to survive something they normally wouldn’t fire/lightning of the same rank as the bug tech used the next turn).
    -Non-elemental chakra only
    -Power-ups only work on the bugs that ate the chakra
    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    Declined. do not resubmit. your logic in that example is flawed. Do you think those bugs would be able to stand up against a rasengan? I dont think so. Chakra strings do not attack the bugs, they are supplementary. The bugs didnt absorb any of the chakra with the sound guy, they were just "hole corks".
    SY gave me permission to resubmit this cj
    Resubmits

    (Konchu sutairu: Chakura no ezuke) Insect Style: Chakra Feeding
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80 (if feed on directly)
    Description: The user has a selection (his choice) of his insects, to feed on/devour any available chakra effective up to A-rank (I.e. his chakra, chakra strings, chakra shields...etc) and also non aggressive S-rank chakra. In doing this, the insects cancel the wanted effect of the devoured chakra (I.e. shielding, puppet connection...etc).
    -Non-elemental chakra only
    -If used on chakra A-rank and below the bugs can continue to fight
    -If used on non aggressive S-rank chakra the bugs survive, but become static & can't move for 1 turn due to over feeding

    -Can only use 3 times per battle
    -No other S-rank bug techniques in the same move
    -Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    ~Leaving for SY~

    [/QUOTE]
    Declined. I told you the only way I'd let you resubmit is if you did a complete overhaul of the jutsu, which you didnt do. You still left the ability to devour any chakra and used non aggressive jutsu as the examples then stated that it could also devour non-agressive jutsu. your examples are misleading because I know you true purpose is to be able to devour fireballs and lightning blasts, like you originally intended, since that would fall under the blanket statement of "any chakra".



    Quote Originally Posted by black uchiha View Post
    Resubmits

    (Kadata sutoringusu) Kadata Strings
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This technique takes basic puppet strings and basic element infusion and puts them together. The user (without handseals) puts twice the amount of chakra needed to make normal chakra strings and infuse them with elemental chakra to make them stronger. These strings can be used to attach themselves to puppets and other objects under the user's control that are capable of moving of their own accord (weapons/like chiyo did with the kunai). The object/puppet gains that elemental affinity of the chakra string they are attached with. Each element gives the strings different abilities. The srings can be manipulated however the user sees fit.

    Water: gives them erosive property (not acid, more like water erosion)

    Wind: gives them more cutting property

    Lightning: gives them a paralyzing affect (2 turns if touched) and cutting (if stabbed)

    Fire: gives them a burning property

    Earth: makes them stronger (harder to break)

    -Elemental Affinities include basic 5/CE that the user owns
    -Natural Elemental Weaknesses still apply.
    -User can control 1 Elemental Affinity Chakra Strings at once (both hands)
    -User cannot use Forbidden Ranked Techniques of the Elemental affinity chakra strings that they are using.
    -User is limited to a total of three Elemental Chakra String Affinities per battle.
    -Can only use 5 times per battle (once per element).
    -Can only be used by Puppet Users.
    -Stays in effect for two turns
    -Must wait 3 turns to use again.
    -Lighting paralyzing last two turns.
    -Can be used on existing strings
    - Can control puppets while in effect
    - Can only be taught be Black Uchiha

    ||Both Declined|| As I said, similar techniques exist. Also, the second one was not really changed. It seems more like you tried to hide the exclusion of the restrictions by emphasizing smaller numbers. Either way, the second one is OP and has a duration that is far too great for it's level.

    (Seigi no kodai no amyuretto to gantoretto) Ancient Amulet and Gauntlet of the Righteous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This two part weapon consists of an amulet wore around the neck and a gauntlet that dons the right arm of the user. This combo was said to be forged from the Insect King’s right arm. As the story goes, the Insect King fell into a large river, and on the brink of death was saved by a righteous human (thought to be an Aburame member). Thereafter the Insect King had the weapon combo made and gave it to the man as a sign of his gratitude, his loyalty, and the loyalty of his family and all the insects under his rule. The Insect King told the man to pass these items throughout his bloodline and the insects would be there to help them. This was thought to be the first contract with insects, the Aburame’s insects to be more specific.

    Abilities: The Gauntlet can block and deflect normal weapons with ease, it has an extendable blade (kunai sized) above the wrist. It can also absorb 3 A-rank and below techniques of the opponent, and can have the user channel his chakra into it indefinitely. Upon absorption the gauntlet takes on the properties of the absorbed element (Claw of flame= Normal, Phoenix of light= Wind, Morning Jewel= Water, Susanou= Lightning, Abaddon= Earth, Hephaisto= Fire)

    The Amulet grants the insects that serve/help the wielder something called chakra sharing, where after absorbing an elemental chakra into the gauntlet, it then is transferred to the insects, that help the user, giving them and elemental coating and the properties of that element. The amulet also makes the user more in tune with his insects, letting him/her feel/know what they know.
    Photos: Amulet: http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l2...1/images-3.jpg
    Gauntlet: http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u.../Gauntlets.jpg

    Notes:
    -Can only absorb 3 techs per battle (A-rank & below)
    -Can only use chakra sharing 3 times per battle
    -Gauntlet change/absorption last 2 turns (infused gauntlet & blade)
    -Coating last 2 turns or 1 move
    -The coating doesn’t increase power just gives elemental properties
    -Absorbtion counts as one of the users 3 moves
    -Can only be used/lent by Black Uchiha

    Amulet:

    Gauntlet:


    ~Declined~ You stacked too many abilities. Take out the whole part about you absorbing attacks and replace it by you infusing a certain elemental chakra in the gauntlet, this way you can keep the rest of the abilities. Define in details what the coating and elemental properties do on the insects. Take out the bold part, this isn't the Rinnegan, you don't share a vision of your bugs and I don't want you to have thousands of insects as your personal eyes on the field. Where are the restrictions? There's no drawbacks whatsoever.

    (Kadata sutoringusu) Kadata Strings
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: short-long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: This technique takes basic puppet strings and basic element infusion and puts them together. The user (without handseals) puts twice the amount of chakra needed to make normal chakra strings and infuse them with elemental chakra to make them stronger. These strings can be used to attach themselves to puppets and other objects under the user's control that are capable of moving of their own accord (weapons/like chiyo did with the kunai). The object/puppet gains that elemental affinity of the chakra string they are attached with. Each element gives the strings different abilities. The srings can be manipulated however the user sees fit.

    Water: gives them erosive property (not acid, more like water erosion)

    Wind: gives them more cutting property

    Lightning: gives them a paralyzing affect (1 turn if touched) and cutting (if stabbed)

    Fire: gives them a burning property

    Earth: makes them stronger (harder to break)

    -Elements include basic 5/CE
    -Can only use 1 element at a time (both hands)
    -Can only use 5 times per battle (once per element).
    -Can only be used by Puppet Users.
    -Stays in effect for two 1 turn
    -Must wait 2 turns after use to use again (3 turns total)
    -No S-rank puppet techniques in the same turn
    -Strings become visible when in use
    -User is drained -15 chakra each time used
    -User can be caught/affected by the technique (if applicable)
    -User suffers -3 damage to fingertips (if applicable...fire/lightning)

    -Lighting paralyzing last two 1 turn.
    -Can be used on existing strings
    - Can Can't control puppets while in effect (with the used hand)
    - Can only be taught be Black Uchiha

    ~Leaving for Roku~
    Edit:

    It seems I may have misinterperated Rokus last message so I will revaluate this technique.

    Declined. Even though you took its duration from 2 turns to 1, you still have 5 uses of the technique. A technique of this rank typically gets 1-3 uses even with a waiting period between each use.


    (Seigi no kodai no amyuretto to gantoretto) Ancient Amulet and Gauntlet of the Righteous
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Points: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This two part weapon consists of an amulet wore around the neck and a gauntlet that dons the right arm of the user. This combo was said to be forged from the Insect King’s right arm. As the story goes, the Insect King fell into a large river, and on the brink of death was saved by a righteous human (thought to be an Aburame member). Thereafter the Insect King had the indestructible weapon combo made and gave it to the man as a sign of his gratitude, his loyalty, and the loyalty of his family and all the insects under his rule. The Insect King told the man to pass these items throughout his bloodline and the insects would be there to help them. This was thought to be the first contract with insects, the Aburame’s insects to be more specific.

    Abilities: The Gauntlet being indestructible; can block and deflect normal and special weapons with ease, it also has an extendable blade (dagger sized) above the wrist. It can have the user channel his chakra into it indefinitely (equal to A-rank). Upon absorption the gauntlet takes on the properties of the absorbed element (Claw of flame= Normal, Phoenix of light= Wind, Morning Jewel= Water, Susanou= Lightning, Abaddon= Earth, Hephaisto= Fire).

    The Amulet grants the insects that serve the wielder something called chakra sharing, where after absorbing an elemental chakra into the gauntlet, it then is transferred to the insects that help the user giving them and elemental coating and the properties of that element. The coating doesn’t give the insects more power, it only coats/infuses them with the element (like one would do with a kunai). The amulet also makes the user more in tune with his insects, letting him feel their emotions as Shino does with his insects but up to mid-range unlike Shino’s short-range.

    Photos: Amulet: http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l2...1/images-3.jpg
    Gauntlet: http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u.../Gauntlets.jpg

    Notes:
    -Gauntlet change/absorption last 2 turns (infused gauntlet & blade)
    - Coating last 2 turns
    -The coating doesn’t increase power just gives elemental properties (wind=cutting, lightning=cutting/paralyzes, earth=strength, water=erosion)
    -While infused with an element if other elements are used the user must add +10 chakra to the non-infused element(s) for them to work.
    -After chakra sharing the user suffers -5 chakra drain for each turn the coating lasts
    -Can only feel the emotions of insects within mid range of the user

    -Can only be used/lent by Black Uchiha
    Amulet:

    Gauntlet:


    ~Declined~ First of all, define the strength of your "indestructible" gauntlet. You said it could block simple attack; what is a simple attack? C-rank? Secondly, I'm really not sure about the whole coating of insects. It'd be like giving your insects a lightning armor like the Raikage. Let's face it, your insects aren't like normal weapons/tools. What does "erosion" does? How strong do they become when they're infused with earth?

    My point is, a normal kunai can't perform jutsus, your insects can and hence infusing an elemental chakra in them is a simple way of giving them a boost in any element you desire and this is too much IMO. Don't VM to ask what to do with this jutsu, I don't know. It's up to you to find something when/if you resubmit it.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Divine Log (Kami no rogu)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The divine log is a powerful log and legendary weapon used in old ages. Renges Nara found this while he is on a mission. It looks heavy but the holder only know that it is lighter than a normal sword. The wielder is said to be chosen by the Log itself. The log is as hard as steel. It ordinary looks is just a log but inside, it has a humongous and massive chakra. Renges is the next chosen one. A blow from this can crack bones.
    Notes:
    - Can be only used under Renges's permission.
    - A slam to the ground with this log can create shock waves at short range and it is C-rank.
    - The shockwave slam can only be done 3 times
    - A blow to a chest can make a final blow.
    - It can float on water.
    - When carried by others, the log become very heavy for them.
    In case you might misunderstood of something:


    ~Declined~ While the medium is different (a log lol) the abilities are the same as any club or some gauntlet that enhance strength. The whole "hitting the ground creating a shockwave" was done dozens of time so it's a no go. Take out the part where you say you can kill your opponent with a blow to the chest, this is ridiculous.

    Divine Log: Divine blow(Kami no rogu: Kami no ichigeki)
    Type: Attack/Weapon move
    Rank: A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60(But very critical)
    Range: Long
    Description: Using the divine log, the user charge all of its chakra with it. Slamming the ground with it. It creates earthquakes and fissures, which then turn into powerful shockwaves which attack the target's feet, making the powerful chakra of log flows into the target and hit him hard.
    Notes:
    - A large area effect
    - The user cannot use any jutsu after using this jutsu
    - Can only be used with Divine log

    ~Declined~ Divine log wasn't approved.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 01:32 AM. Reason: remove a jutsus and will make a summoning

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    (Doton Chikyū no shitsuryō no sōsa) Earth style: Earth mass manipulation
    Type:Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: C - S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20\25\30\40
    Damage Points: 30\40\60\80
    Description:The user gathers their earth chakra carefully then slams their palms on the ground. The amount is what depends on the strength and range of the attack. The users their earth chakra their fullest then releases it into the ground. Either making it very soft to escape or else iron hard to use as a defense. The effect doesn't last forever but just two turns - three turns. It could be used to make the ground soft to suck the enemy in then change the earth again to make it hard so he can't escape or gets crushed.
    * C is only on the ground below you
    * B and A are up to short range
    * S is up to med range
    * Can only be used twice for C - A.
    * Can only be used once for S rank.
    * Can only be used on one person at a time.
    * Can only be taught by Alphonse Elric

    (Please edit this jutsu where you see fit. The S rank seems a bit OP and I'm not sure if it should be removed or not. So do so if you desire.)

    ~Declined~ This jutsu is a mess @__@ re-read yourself. Either make 1 for every rank or make it a fixed rank (no C-S rank will be accepted). Look around the thread for the customs that were accepted and try to follow that template.

    (Doro no same) Mud shark
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C - A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost:20\25\30
    Damage Points: 30\40\60
    Description: By doing several hand seals the users summons 1 - 3 sharks in a mud river. The mud sharks can be healed if they are still in the mud when they are hit unless it's by a lightning jutsu. Which then they can not regenerate where they got hit. They must be summoned in a mud source. If combined with water they can move faster with the current.
    * Can only be taught by Alphonse Elric

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

    (Moruaraiguma) Molecoon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Molecoon is slightly larger then little raccoon. He spent most of his time from birth until now underground. Becoming one with the earth. He is able to use up to B rank earth techniques that doesn't require hand seals. His fur is constantly covered in the earth's minerals making him slightly more vulnerable to lightning techniques. Due to being underground most of his life he has poor vision, can only see up to short range. He relies mostly on his advanced hearing skills to find his enemy.
    * Using one of his earth techniques counts as your own move.
    * If a C+rank fire technique goes towards him he is blinded.
    * Lasts for only 3 turns
    * Must have raccoon contract

    **Edit where you see fit.**

    ~Declined~ We only accept real animals, not fictional creation. If it so happens the "molecoon" exist, submit it as a new contract.
     
         
    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 01:36 AM. Reason: Corected spelling errors and editted jutsu slightly. x.x

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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Fuuton| Renkuudan - [Wind Release| Steroid Blanks]
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user collects chakra in his arm summoning wind in a "blank round," and then punches out directing the chakra through his arm and out his fist as powerful blasts of invisible swirling wind embedded with incredible amounts of chakra shoot foward that can clear whole stretches of forestry and blast straight through a fire technique of A-rank and below gathering the fire onto itself. Even the most powerful of ninjas can't create more then three blanks in a single battle without destroying their lungs.
    [Usable Twice]

    ~Declined~ Make it clear whether you can shoot more then one blank with each usage of the jutsu and re-submit.

    Doton| Monolith Spear [Earth Release| Yamayari
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first creates four hand signs Dog → Bird → Ox → Horse while interjecting chakra into the ground. When complete, a gigantic spear of rock about the size of one of the ones used for Earth Release| Mountain Smash will shoot from the earth, hitting the opponent, and causing damage as the spear sends them flying. It's massive size can also be used to give the user a vantage point in the sky.
    [No Earth Techniques next turn]

    ~Declined~ Restrictions on it's usage? Also, re-work it, I'm still unclear on what it does. You're basically creating a giant ass spike right?

    Doton| Monolith Cannon [Earth Release| Yamahou]
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After using Doton| Monolith Spear, the user will flash another three handseals Ox → Horse → Bird and slam his palm on the Spear. By doing this it opens up 6 holes in the monolith which will fire massive boulders at the opponent.
    [Usable Once]

    ~Declined~ Monolith Spear was declined.
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    Dimension Sword (Jigen no ken)
    Rank: S
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: Chakra Slice: 60
    Elemental Slice: 70
    Description: The blade is a special one. It was rumored to be founded in a strange land and even Hell itself. The blade has a special power where the user can pour chakra into it and launch the chakra in the form as a slice of energy. This move can also be used with elements, launching a blade of lightning, a strong wave of water, or a stream of fire. The user can also infuse it with chakra to repair any damage done by B rank or below jutsu. The blade can also emit chakra in the form of a red shield capable of blocking C-rank or below techniques.
    ~Can only be wielded by Rikerslade or those with his permission~
    ~Only one bio at a time can have this blade period unless summoned by another bio~
    ~After five turns, the blade loses its ability to repair damage for the remainder of the match~
    Looks:


    ~Declined~ No sword shooting blasts/crescent blasts or absorbing elements will be approved. You seriously need to work on the restrictions for this sword; how many times can you use an ability?
     
         
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    Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

    ("Tetsusaiga" Raikou Buzzard Shikon) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Buzzard Fang
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short (Mid-Long for special ability)
    Chakra Points: N/A (+30 for Wind Scar)
    Damage Points: N/A (+60 for Wind Scar)
    Description: Tetsusaiga is a special great sword carved with a special alloy making it as hard as cold steel and special feathers from the lightning buzzard, allowing it to channel lightning chakra for more cutting power. The fur at the end is a conductor, so the user is unaffected by Wind Scar. Due to its sheer size, it can over come smaller weapons such as Katanas, staffs, nunchucks etc. unless it has special properties. The weapon also has a special ability called "Wind Scar" where the user releases a blast/wave of yellow lightning that levels almost anything in its path. The weapon itself can absorb lightning of B-rank and lower to add to the power of Wind Scar.
    Notes:
    -Wind Scar is equal to A-rank Lightning
    -Wind scar can be used 4 times
    -Counts as one of the three used justu per turn
    -Can only absorb lightning of B-rank and lower
    -Can only absorb one lightning tech every 3 turns


    The sword itself and the move it uses


    Owned by Taiketsu and note that I had to take out the reference to the speed chart due to the CJ rules Approved

    (Tetsusaiga: Raikou gachin Ken) "Tetsusaiga" Lightning Clash Sword
    Type:Attack|defend
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage Points:80
    Description: When the user releases the yellow lightning of tetsusaiga, he will use advance chakra control to cause the lightning to surround the great sword completly. The sword will become three times the size it was before and take on a golden hue. It has the properties of lightning, making it sharper and because the yellow lightning was compressed, its much more powerful. One swing of this sword can over come almost all defenses and literaly cause a "scar" in the earth.
    Note: Counts as one of the times Wind Scar can be used

    Owned by Taiketsu approved
    Im dropping Tetsusaiga and jutsu for this new CW if approved. (I thought outside elemental blasts atleast xD)

    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: "Bakusaiga" the weapon of legend that gave the holder the supposed power of a tailed demon. Whoever held this weapon would get a very dense chakra so ominous that they were put into legends and folk tales. Taiketsu Yagami found this sword and the truth behind it came with a tablet only readable by those combatible with the chakra. The sword's abilities actually come from a monster known as "Yama" A artificial chakra monster with chakra levels so dense and high, it was considered a 0 tailed beast. The Sage of Six Path's decendent was able to kill off the monster and seal his chakra into the sword while engraving a seal that allowed the chakra to mix with the person who held it if compatable. When the user releases the seal, they become infused with the chakra making them a monster in a sense by giving them demonic chakra with very high chakra levels.

    ~Abilities:
    -This sword syncs with the user making the user's chakra become very dense and demonic while taking on a green hue, increasing the power of non-elemental ninjutsu[+5] aswell as making all chakra based techniques to be equal to an elemental technique of the same rank.
    -The amount of chakra being channeled causes the user's chakra levels to rise substantually. (They can be considered a tailed beast without a tail like Kisame)
    -When a foreign object touches the user's chakra, they get burned in a similar manner to Naruto in his incomplete form since the chakra is so demonic.
    -The sword itself is virtually indestructable due to alloy it is made from and can stand very high temperatures.

    ~Restrictions:
    -While using this sword, the user can only use techniques that require creating the jutsu or element itslef since this chakra can't be channled into foreign objects.
    -The sword's granted abilities last 5 turns after activation
    -The user suffers in a similar manner to Naruto while wielding it after activation. (After 5 turns of using this chakra, the user's body begins to shut down starting with right arm, next turn left arm, next turn legs, and then next turn body making them completely paralyzed and in need of medical attention.
    -The user is limited to only two moves a turn while this is active
    -Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Yagami (Anyone else, the chakra would severly injure as it can't mix with theirs.)



    ~Approved~ Well done.


    "Kei Seken"
    Also known as "Strong Worlds" taijutsu; This style of combat was invented by barbaric ice warriors who pillage villages taking down their mightiest warriors using this style. This style was later adopted by wise monks who were able to incorporate it into a even more deadly style of combat which would explain it's somewhat brutal and barbaric type of attacks. This style became known as "Kei Sekken" Strong World Taijutsu. Kei Seken is based off enduring blows to the body while performing one hit knockouts using all strength and energy into one specific blow rather than multiple ones. The user's stance is always having a fluid lower body while having a solid upper body (Opposite of gentle fists techniques that require fast paced with little damage) meaning that most techniques are slower but deal way more damage and this can be reversed to make kicks devestating. The fluid lower body is so that the user can move around freely and quickly while the solid upper body is to keep the muscles tense and clinched for powerful impacts(reverse if for legs). Some masters of this art were actually able to take it a step further and were able to incorporate their spirit and physical energy(chakra) into their body to increase it's reflexis, strength, and impacts to perform very powerful techniques that under normal circumstances, they can't perform (Nowhere near that of the 5th Hokage and Sakura although could be considered a water downed version). Most techniques of Kei Sekken involve enduring, countering, or dodging a technique and then performing a deathly blow to the opponent mostly through using a part of the body that can deal the most blunt damage such as the elbow, fist, knee, fore head, foot, etc. Its not the fastest style but it makes up for it in power

    (Learning Requirements and pluses to learning):
    -To learn this style, the user must already have a certain degree of strength and endurance(S-Class Ninja) and have trained in basic taijutsu as its not effective with people who are of weaker body or untrained.

    -Pluses to learning is the strength and durability development in both mind and body. The user would be able to match someone a rank higher than him in both strength and endurance (Does not apply with being a sage). Also, the user could now ignore his/her surroundings except the opponent if he/she wants to.


    ~Approved~

    Example:

    "Kei Sekken" Strong World Reversal Blow
    Rank:B
    Type:Attack|Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:40
    Description: One of the basic counters those who train in Kei Sekken learn after raising their endurance in battle. After being hit by the opponent in any location above the waist line that doesn't inflict great pain (such as being hit in the neck, jaw, or other very vital areas), the user counters by grabbing the opponent's arm/leg tight between their tricep and side so that they are locked in place for a moment (more effective with leg as they also lose balance). The user keeps hold of the arm/leg and channels chakra into their other elbow to increase impact and damage; Then performing a very powerful elbow drop into their stomach that is so pwerful, it knocks them out of the user's grip and sends them plummiting into the floor. This causes tremendous damage to the opponent's torso possibly fracturing the rib cage if aimed for the chest.
    Note:Can only be used after being hit by a technique up to D-rank or free form taijutsu. The user still takes damage from that technique but due to endurance, they can still pull this technique off.
    Note: Exceptions are being punched or hit in vital areas such as the neck, jaw, etc.
    Note: Does not work on opponents with higher durability/stamina/strength etc. if stated in bio (meaning they are stronger or more durable then the user is so this wouldn't work)
    Note:Must be S-Class or higher to use.


    ~Approved~

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    Last edited by Izuna Uchiha; 11-28-2011 at 02:07 AM. Reason: Cleared up "Kei Sekken" and Strong World Reversal Blow's description

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